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2025-2026学年上学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(北师大版2024)
Unit 4 Interests and Abilities书面表达
必备知识清单
单元写作指导
一、写作话题
本次书面表达主题的核心是让学生以书信形式向学校相关负责人申请成为体育节志愿者,通过阐述自身优势与服务意愿,展现语言表达能力与逻辑思维能力,同时传递对志愿服务的热情与责任感。
1.主题内涵
该话题属于申请信体裁,融合 “志愿服务” 与 “体育活动” 两大核心元素。其内涵不仅是完成一封书信的写作,更在于引导学生清晰表达个人与志愿岗位的匹配度 —— 包括对体育节的认知、自身具备的体育相关能力或服务技能,以及参与志愿工作的动机(如锻炼能力、服务同学等),最终达成 “说服对方认可自身资格” 的沟通目的。
2.审题要点
体裁明确:必须采用书信格式,包含称呼、正文、祝福语、署名等要素,不可写成短文。
人称与时态:以第一人称(I/My)为主,时态以一般现在时(介绍自身优势)和一般将来时(表达服务设想)为主。
内容核心:需涵盖 “自我介绍”“申请理由(个人优势)”“服务承诺 / 设想” 三大必备要点,缺一不可。
场景限定:聚焦 “学校体育节”,内容需贴合运动会场景(如场地引导、器材协助、秩序维护等),避免脱离主题谈论其他志愿服务。
二、写作框架
(一)整体结构框架
称呼 (Salutation) → 开头 (Opening) → 主体 (Body) → 结尾 (Closing) → 署名 (Signature)
(二)分项示例叙述
1.称呼 (Salutation)
用于明确书信接收对象(如体育节负责人、老师),需使用礼貌表达。
例:Dear Sir or Madam, / Dear Mr. Wang,
2.开头 (Opening)
核心功能:自我介绍、说明申请意图、提及信息来源(可选)。
例 1:I’m Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 7. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position for our school sports festival .
例 2:I learned that our school needs volunteers for the sports festival. I’d like to recommend myself for this role .
3.主体 (Body)
核心功能:分点阐述自身优势(能力、经验、性格),补充服务设想,体现匹配度。
优势阐述(2-3 点,用连接词衔接):
例 1:First of all, I love sports and know much about track and field events, like running and jumping .
例 2:What’s more, I’m outgoing and work well with others, so I can help guide students easily .
例 3:Last but not least, I volunteered at the class sports meeting last year, so I have some experience .
服务设想(简要说明能做的工作):
例:If I become a volunteer, I can help carry sports equipment or keep order at the finish line .
4.结尾 (Closing)
核心功能:表达期待、请求机会、礼貌致谢。
例 1:I would be very grateful if you could give me this opportunity .
例 2:I’m looking forward to your early reply .
5.署名 (Signature)
位于结尾下方,写清申请人姓名。
例:Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、词汇句式
1. 相关词汇
(1)体育活动类
volunteer(志愿者)、sports festival(体育节)、track and field(田径)、event(项目)、running(跑步)、jumping(跳跃)、relay race(接力赛)、hurdles(跨栏)、finish line(终点线)、sports equipment(体育器材)、gym(体育馆)、court(球场)、field(场地)、referee(裁判)、score(得分)、cheer(欢呼)。
例:Our school sports festival will have many events, including relay races and hurdles.(我们学校的体育节将有很多项目,包括接力赛和跨栏。)
(2)能力与性格类
qualified(合格的)、experienced(有经验的)、outgoing(外向的)、patient(耐心的)、responsible(负责的)、helpful(乐于助人的)、cooperative(合作的)、organized(有条理的)、skilled(熟练的)、active(积极的)、careful(细心的)、energetic(精力充沛的)、communicate(沟通)、cooperate(合作)、assist(协助)。
例:I think I’m qualified for the volunteer job because I’m responsible and careful .(我认为我能胜任这份志愿工作,因为我既负责又细心。)
(3)申请信专用类
apply for(申请)、position(职位)、recommend(推荐)、reason(原因)、advantage(优势)、experience(经验)、opportunity(机会)、grateful(感激的)、consider(考虑)、reply(回复)、contact(联系)、serve(服务)、contribute(贡献)、participate(参与)、intend(打算)。
例:I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position because I want to serve my classmates .(我写信申请志愿者职位,因为我想为同学们服务。)
(4)动作与场景类
guide(引导)、carry(搬运)、organize(组织)、keep order(维持秩序)、hand out(分发)、set up(布置)、clean up(清理)、support(支持)、assist(协助)、cheer on(为…… 加油)、record(记录)、help out(帮忙)。
例:I can help hand out water to athletes or keep order around the field .(我可以帮忙给运动员递水,或者维持场地周围的秩序。)
2. 相关句式
(1)开头句式(表明意图)
I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position for our school sports festival.(我写信申请学校体育节的志愿者职位。)
I’m eager to be a volunteer for the coming school sports festival.(我渴望成为即将到来的学校体育节的志愿者。)
Having learned that we need volunteers for the sports festival, I want to join in.(得知我们需要体育节志愿者,我想加入。)
I’m writing to recommend myself as a volunteer for the school sports festival .(我写信推荐自己成为学校体育节的志愿者。)
With great enthusiasm, I apply to be a volunteer for our school sports festival.(我怀着极大的热情,申请成为学校体育节的志愿者。)
My name is Tom, and I’d like to apply for the volunteer job for the sports festival.(我叫汤姆,想申请体育节的志愿者工作。)
I’m interested in the volunteer position for the school sports festival, so I write to you.(我对学校体育节的志愿者职位很感兴趣,所以给您写信。)
It’s my pleasure to apply to be a volunteer for our school’s sports festival.(申请成为学校体育节的志愿者是我的荣幸。)
I heard that the school is looking for sports festival volunteers, so I want to try.(我听说学校在招募体育节志愿者,所以想尝试一下。)
I’m writing this letter to ask for the opportunity to be a sports festival volunteer .(我写这封信是为了请求成为体育节志愿者的机会。)
(2)主体句式(阐述优势)
First of all, I have a good knowledge of different sports events .(首先,我对各种体育项目很了解。)
What’s more, I’m good at communicating with others, so I can guide students well .(此外,我擅长与人沟通,所以能很好地引导学生。)
Last but not least, I volunteered at the community sports meeting last year .(最后,我去年在社区运动会做过志愿者。)
I’m outgoing and energetic, which makes me suitable for the volunteer work .(我外向又精力充沛,这使我适合这份志愿工作。)
I can work hard and follow the rules during the sports festival.(我会努力工作,并在体育节期间遵守规则。)
My PE teacher often says I’m responsible, so I can take good care of the equipment.(我的体育老师常说我很负责,所以我能照看好器材。)
I have experience in organizing small sports activities for my class.(我有过为班级组织小型体育活动的经验。)
I’m patient enough to help athletes and spectators when they need help.(我足够有耐心,在运动员和观众需要帮助时提供支持。)
Being good at sports myself, I can understand the needs of the athletes .(我自己擅长运动,能理解运动员的需求。)
I can cooperate with other volunteers to finish our tasks well.(我能和其他志愿者合作,很好地完成任务。)
I’m careful, so I won’t make mistakes when recording scores.(我很细心,记录得分时不会出错。)
I can speak English a little, so I might help foreign teachers at the festival.(我会一点英语,或许能在体育节帮助外教。)
I’m always ready to help others, which is important for a volunteer .(我总是乐于助人,这对志愿者来说很重要。)
I have strong physical strength, so I can carry heavy equipment.(我体力很好,可以搬运重物器材。)
I know the school gym well, so I can guide people to different areas.(我很熟悉学校体育馆,可以引导人们到不同区域。)
(3)结尾句式(表达期待)
I would be very grateful if you could give me this opportunity .(如果您能给我这个机会,我会非常感激。)
I hope you can consider my application and accept me .(希望您能考虑我的申请并接纳我。)
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon .(期待早日收到您的回复。)
I promise I will do my best if I become a volunteer .(如果我成为志愿者,我保证会尽最大努力。)
If you need more information about me, please contact me at 138xxxx5678.(如果您需要更多关于我的信息,请拨打 138xxxx5678 联系我。)
I really want to contribute to the sports festival as a volunteer.(我真的很想以志愿者的身份为体育节做贡献。)
I believe I can be a good volunteer for the sports festival.(我相信我能成为一名优秀的体育节志愿者。)
Thank you for your time and consideration .(感谢您的时间和考虑。)
I hope I can get the chance to serve everyone at the sports festival.(我希望能有机会在体育节为大家服务。)
I’m sure I won’t let you down if I’m chosen.(如果我被选中,我肯定不会让您失望。)
四、范文例析
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position for our school sports festival .
I have many advantages for this job. First of all, I love sports and know lots of track and field events, like relay races and long jumps . What’s more, I’m outgoing and patient, so I can get along well with athletes and classmates . Last year, I helped organize the class sports meeting, so I have some experience . If I become a volunteer, I can guide students or carry sports equipment.
I would be grateful if you give me the chance. I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文分析】
结构完整:严格遵循申请信格式,包含称呼、开头(自我介绍 + 申请意图)、主体(优势 + 服务设想)、结尾(请求机会 + 期待回复)、署名,逻辑清晰。
内容达标:覆盖审题要点中的 “自我介绍”“优势”“服务设想” 三大核心,且优势结合体育节场景(体育知识、性格、相关经验),贴合主题 。
语言规范:使用 “First of all... What’s more...” 等连接词衔接内容,句式丰富(如条件状语从句 “If I become...”),词汇准确(如 “apply for”“track and field”),符合七年级英语水平 。
五、优化策略
1.内容匹配:紧扣 “体育节” 场景,拒绝泛泛而谈
避免只说 “我很负责” 这类笼统优势,要结合体育节需求补充细节。例如将 “I’m helpful.” 优化为 “I’m helpful—I can hand out water to runners at the finish line.”,让优势更具体可信 。
2.语言升级:用连接词与高级词汇提升流畅度
基础表达:I have experience. I’m outgoing.
优化表达:Besides having volunteer experience at the class sports meeting, I’m outgoing enough to guide visitors .
可多用 “First of all... What’s more... Last but not least...”“besides”“however” 等连接词,替换 “good” 为 “excellent”“qualified” 等词汇 。
3.细节补充:增加 “服务设想”,体现主动性
主体部分可补充 1-2 句具体工作规划,如 “If I’m chosen, I plan to check the sports equipment before the events start to make sure it’s safe.”,展现对志愿工作的思考,更易获得认可 。
4.格式规范:规避书信常见错误
注意称呼后加逗号,结尾祝福语首字母大写(如 “Yours sincerely,”),署名位于祝福语正下方。同时避免时态混乱,介绍优势用一般现在时,设想工作用一般将来时 。
5.个性加分:结合自身真实经历,增强感染力
若有具体体育相关经历(如参加过校运会、学习过急救知识),可简要提及,例如 “I learned basic first aid in PE class, so I can help if athletes get hurt.”,让申请更具说服力 。
综合实战演练
1.心中的星光,前行的力量。在我们的成长过程中,有很多值得我们学习的榜样。假如你是班长李华,学校正在进行“闪亮之星” (Shining Stars) 的评选,你将推荐同学Tom参加评选。请根据以下提示,完成这篇英语推荐信。
注意:
(1)词数80 词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
姓名
Tom
外貌
高高瘦瘦,戴眼镜……
爱好
打篮球,阅读……
性格
友善……
优秀事例
上个月去敬老院,给老人讲故事……
你对他的评价
……
参考词汇:recommend v. 推荐 the Old People’s Home 敬老院
Dear Sir,
I’d like to recommend my classmate Tom to be a Shining Star in our school.
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Thank you for considering my recommendation. (感谢您考虑我的推荐)
Yours,
Li Hua
2.同学们,假设你是Amy,请以“This is me”为题写一篇英语短文,向其他同学介绍自己。
要求:①词数不少于80个单词;②语句通顺,条理清晰,书写工整。
基本信息
姓名:Amy;年龄:12岁;班级:阳光中学七年级一班;外貌:短发,不戴眼镜
学校生活
老师……,同学……
兴趣爱好
1. 最喜欢……学科,因为……
2. 业余爱好是……,因为……
周末活动
周末常做……
理想
想要……,希望……
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3.《学英语报》正举办以“My new friend”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是 Kitty,请根据下图所提示的要点,用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你的新朋友Kate。
注意事项:
1.演讲稿须包含所有要点,省略号部分须作适当发挥,要求语句通顺、符合题意;
2.词数在60个左右,演讲稿的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.演讲稿内容必须写在答题卡指定位置。
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I’m Kitty. Let me tell you something about my new friend Kate.
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That’s all. Thank you.
4.Jack是你的好朋友,新学期他转学到你班上就读,请你根据以下问题,用英文向全班介绍他。
(1) How old is he?
(2) Does he have a room? Please describe (描述) it.
(3) What’s his hobby (爱好)?
写作要求:词数60—80词;书写规范,做到整洁、整齐、清晰。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. Let me introduce my good friend Jack here.
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5.请根据以下提示,以“My Hobbies”为题,写一篇60词左右的短文。
提示:1. 你的名字叫李华;
2. 你的爱好是读书、画画和听音乐;
3. 你经常在周末和朋友一起做这些事。
My Hobbies
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6.假如你是李华,新华中学七年级一班的一名学生。本周英语主题班会上,每个人需要向大家介绍一下自己以及自己的一位外国笔友 (penfriend)。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文在班会上发言。
Name
Age
Country
Personality
Hobbies
李华
12
中国
友好、可爱
阅读、绘画
Tom
13
美国
文静、善良
游泳、打网球 (play tennis)
写作要求:
1.内容完整,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写规范;
2.字数70词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.不能使用真实的姓名和校名。
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all, thanks for listening.
7.不同的人有不同的爱好。爱好能给人带来快乐、友谊和知识,使人们在紧张的学习和工作之余有所放松。但是随着环境的变化和阅历的增加,同一个人在不同的时期也会有不同的爱好。请根据下表提示的内容,写一篇不少于60词的短文。
Name
Age
Hobby
In the past (在过去)
Now
Brian
12
Play football
Listen to
music
Tony
13
Jog
Keep pets
Lucy
14
Dance
Swim
Different Hobbies
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8.假设你是田华,请根据表格内容,以“This is me!”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范,要点齐全,发挥想象,适当拓展。
2. 不少于50个词,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总字数。
3. 文章中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名等相关信息。
姓名
田华
年龄
14
来自
Dongtai
学校
阳光中学
年级,班级
七(2)
外表
高且瘦,短发,戴眼镜
业余爱好
打篮球和画画
擅长
跑步
不擅长
语文
同学
都很友好,最好的朋友是Nancy
This is me!
Hi, everyone. My name is Tian Hua.
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9.假如你是班主任李老师,请你根据下表所提示的内容,为你班(七年级四班)学生汤姆写一份关于他个人的综合评语给学校。
学习
努力学习,所有学科都学得很好。
能力
篮球打得好,他想下学期进入校篮球队。
爱好
喜爱动物,他在家养兔子当宠物并把它照顾得很好。
品德
1. 在公共汽车上,他有礼貌地把座位让给需要的人。
2. 前几天,他足够勇敢地把邻居从大火中救出来。我们想推荐他获取今年的最勇敢学生奖(this year’s Bravest Student Award)。
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)要点必须包含所有相关信息;
(3)词数100字左右。
Name: Tom Class: 4 Grade: 7 Grade Teacher: Mr Li
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10. 来到初中已有一个多月的时间了,想必你对你的同学都有了一定的了解。然而, 你的同学们有没有很好的了解你呢? 本期英语角活动的主题是“Let you know me”,请你写一篇自我介绍的稿件,为英语角活动做准备。
内容提示:
1. 介绍自己 (可包括性格,爱好,喜欢的科目或其他方面)。
2. 表达与大家成为好朋友的愿望。
注意:
1. 词数 80 —100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 (姓名用 Liu Hui 和 Li Ling代替)。
(学校和班级用 Hong Xing Middle School 和 Class 1 Grade 7 代替。 )
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参考答案
1.
Dear Sir,
I’d like to recommend my classmate Tom to be a Shining Star in our school. Tom is a tall and slim boy with glasses. He is not only good at playing basketball but also enjoys reading. His friendly personality (性格) makes him popular among his classmates.
Tom likes helping others. Last month, he visited the Old People’s Home and spent time with the elderly. He shared stories and made them laugh. His kindness was truly inspiring (鼓舞人心的,激励的).
In my opinion, Tom is clever, kind, and always ready to help others. I believe he will be an excellent choice (选择).
Thank you for considering my recommendation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇推荐信;
② 时态:以一般现在时为主;
③ 提示:内容包括Tom的外貌、爱好、性格、优秀事例和对他的评价等内容,展现Tom的亮点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头写推荐的目的,引出推荐人Tom;
第二步:描述Tom的外貌、爱好和性格;
第三步:给出优秀事例,说明他为何值得推荐;
第四步:总结评价,并表达对Tom的信任和支持。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also... 不但……而且……
② spend time with sb. 与……共度时光
③ in one’s opinion 据某人的观点
④ be ready to help sb. 乐于帮助他人
[高分句型]
① He is not only good at playing basketball but also enjoys reading. (not only...but also...引导的并列句)
② I believe he will be an excellent choice.(宾语从句)
2.
This is me
Hello! I’m Amy. I’m 12 years old and I’m in Class One, Grade Seven at Sunshine Middle School. I have short hair and I don’t wear glasses.
My teachers are very kind and helpful. My classmates are friendly and we get along well. I like English best because it’s very interesting. My hobby is reading books because it can broaden my knowledge.
On weekends, I often go to the park with my family or do my homework.
My ideal is to become a doctor in the future. I hope I can help many people and make them healthy. That’s me! What about you?
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍基本信息,包括姓名、年龄、学校信息、外貌;
第二步,介绍老师、同学和兴趣爱好;
第三步,介绍自己的周末活动;
第四步,介绍自己的理想。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well相处融洽
②in the future将来,未来
[高分句型]
①I like English best because it’s very interesting. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I hope I can help many people and make them healthy. (宾语从句)
3.
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I’m Kitty. Let me tell you something about my new friend Kate. She is thirteen years old and is in Class Ten, Grade Seven. She is tall and slim. She is good at drawing. In her free time, she likes reading books. She is also crazy about running and runs every morning. Her future dream is to be an artist because she loves drawing so much.
That’s all. Thank you.
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作开头以及要点已给出,考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题:打招呼后直接说明演讲目的 —— 介绍 Kate;
第二步,分层介绍:按 “基本信息→能力爱好→梦想” 顺序展开,逻辑清晰;
第三步,简洁收尾:以 “That’s all. Thank you.” 礼貌结束。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②be crazy about热衷
[高分句型]
Her future dream is to be an artist because she loves drawing so much.(原因状语从句)
4.
Hello, everyone. Let me introduce my good friend Jack here.
He’s 13 this year. He has a happy family. There are four people in his family: his parents, his little brother and Jack. His parents are both teachers and they teach in the same school. His room is tidy, but his brother’s things are everywhere. He likes playing basketball. He is a nice boy. Do you want to make friends with him?
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,不要遗漏信息,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题——向大家介绍自己的好朋友杰克;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从年龄、家庭、房间、爱好等方面介绍杰克的基本信息。
[亮点词汇]
①tidy整洁的;整齐的
②like doing sth.喜欢做某事
③make friends with sb.与某人交朋友
[高分句型]
There are four people in his family: his parents, his little brother and Jack.(there be句型)
5.
My Hobbies
My name is Li Hua. I have many hobbies that make my life colorful.
First, I enjoy reading books. It helps me learn new things and relax. Second, drawing lets me express my creativity. Finally, I like listening to music, which makes me feel happy and calm. On weekends, I often invite friends to my home, where we enjoy these activities together. These hobbies bring me joy and help me grow.
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示介绍自己的爱好,注意语句通顺,单词和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,说明自己有很多爱好;
第二步,具体介绍自己的三个爱好;
第三步,总结爱好对自己的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy reading books喜欢读书
②express表达
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①Second, drawing lets me express my creativity. (动名词作主语)
②Finally, I like listening to music, which makes me feel happy and calm.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6.
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old and come from China. I am very friendly and lovely. I enjoy reading and painting in my free time.
Let me introduce my penfriend, Tom. He is 13 years old and he is from the USA. Tom is quiet and kind. His hobbies are swimming and playing tennis. We often write to each other and share our experiences. I am happy to have such a great penfriend.
That’s all, thanks for listening.
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:全文以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点清晰明确,无遗漏核心要点,且语言简洁自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先进行自我介绍;
第二步,再转入介绍笔友Tom;
第三步,最后描述双方的互动情况与个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
①come from 来自
②in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①I am 12 years old and come from China.(and并列两个谓语动词)
②I am happy to have such a great penfriend.(不定式作原因状语)
7.
Different Hobbies
Different people have different hobbies. Now let me tell you about some people’s hobbies.
Brian is 12 years old. He used to play football, but now he likes listening to music. Tony is 13 years old. He used to jog, but now he doesn’t like it. He enjoys keeping pets. Lucy is 14 years old. She used to dance, but now she doesn’t like it. She likes swimming now.
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、根据提示,分别介绍表格中三位人物在不同的时期的不同爱好。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②play football踢足球
③enjoy doing sth.享受做某事
[高分句型]
He used to play football, but now he likes listening to music.(并列句)
8.
This is me!
Hi, everyone. My name is Tian Hua. I am 14 years old. I come from Dongtai. I study at Sunshine Middle School. I’m in Class 2, Grade 7. I am tall and thin. I have short hair. I wear glasses.
My hobbies are playing basketball and drawing. I often play basketball with my friends in my spare time. I am good at running. I don’t do well in Chinese because it is difficult for me. All my classmates are friendly. My best friend is Nancy. How happy I am!
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍个人基本信息,如姓名、年龄、来自哪里、就读的班级和年级、外貌等;
第二步,介绍个人的爱好、擅长和不擅长的东西以及同学等;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come from 来自
②play basketball 打篮球
③be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
I don’t do well in Chinese because it is difficult for me.(because引导的原因状语从句)
9.
Name: Tom Class: 4 Grade: 7 Grade Teacher: Mr Li
Tom is thirteen years old. He is in Class Four, Grade Seven. He studies very hard and does well in all his lessons. He is good at playing basketball too. He wants to join the school basketball team next term. He loves animals very much. He keeps a rabbit as a pet at home and takes good care of it. He is friendly and helpful. He always gives his seat to people in need on the bus politely. Several days ago, he was brave enough to help his neighbour out of the big fire. We would like to recommend him for this year’s Bravest Student Award.
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍汤姆的基本信息;
第二步,从“学习、能力、爱好、品德”等方面评价汤姆;
第三步,表明想推荐汤姆获取今年的最勇敢学生奖。
[亮点词汇]
①do well in擅长
②be good at擅长
③take good care of照顾得很好
④recommend推荐
[高分句型]
①He always gives his seat to people in need on the bus politely.(介词短语作后置定语修饰名词)
10.
I’m Li Hua, a boy of sixteen. Now I’m glad to introduce myself to you.
When it comes to my personality, I’m confident and outgoing, so I’m popular with my friends. Besides, I am hardworking and can always concentrate on my lessons. To be honest, my favorite subject is English because I think the language is very interesting, and it allows me to connect with people from all over the world. I have many interests, but my main passion is for movies. I love watching English original movies, which I think is one of the most effective ways of English learning. In the future, I plan to study English in university and pursue a career in English interpretation. I hope my dream can come true.
I want to make friends with everyone.
【写作解析】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:本文用一般现在时;
③提示:向朋友介绍自己,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的整体情况,引出下文;
第二步,具体介绍自己的性格,爱好,喜欢的科目等,注意细节充分;
第三步,总结全文,表达与大家成为好朋友的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be popular with 受……欢迎
②to be honest 实话实说
③come true 成真,实现
[高分句型]
①I love watching English original movies, which I think is one of the most effective ways of English learning. (定语从句)
②To be honest, my favorite subject is English, because I think the language is very interesting, and it allows me to connect with people from all over the world.(原因状语从句,宾语从句)
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Unit 4 Interests and Abilities书面表达
必备知识清单
单元写作指导
一、写作话题
本次书面表达主题的核心是让学生以书信形式向学校相关负责人申请成为体育节志愿者,通过阐述自身优势与服务意愿,展现语言表达能力与逻辑思维能力,同时传递对志愿服务的热情与责任感。
1.主题内涵
该话题属于申请信体裁,融合 “志愿服务” 与 “体育活动” 两大核心元素。其内涵不仅是完成一封书信的写作,更在于引导学生清晰表达个人与志愿岗位的匹配度 —— 包括对体育节的认知、自身具备的体育相关能力或服务技能,以及参与志愿工作的动机(如锻炼能力、服务同学等),最终达成 “说服对方认可自身资格” 的沟通目的。
2.审题要点
体裁明确:必须采用书信格式,包含称呼、正文、祝福语、署名等要素,不可写成短文。
人称与时态:以第一人称(I/My)为主,时态以一般现在时(介绍自身优势)和一般将来时(表达服务设想)为主。
内容核心:需涵盖 “自我介绍”“申请理由(个人优势)”“服务承诺 / 设想” 三大必备要点,缺一不可。
场景限定:聚焦 “学校体育节”,内容需贴合运动会场景(如场地引导、器材协助、秩序维护等),避免脱离主题谈论其他志愿服务。
二、写作框架
(一)整体结构框架
称呼 (Salutation) → 开头 (Opening) → 主体 (Body) → 结尾 (Closing) → 署名 (Signature)
(二)分项示例叙述
1.称呼 (Salutation)
用于明确书信接收对象(如体育节负责人、老师),需使用礼貌表达。
例:Dear Sir or Madam, / Dear Mr. Wang,
2.开头 (Opening)
核心功能:自我介绍、说明申请意图、提及信息来源(可选)。
例 1:I’m Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 7. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position for our school sports festival .
例 2:I learned that our school needs volunteers for the sports festival. I’d like to recommend myself for this role .
3.主体 (Body)
核心功能:分点阐述自身优势(能力、经验、性格),补充服务设想,体现匹配度。
优势阐述(2-3 点,用连接词衔接):
例 1:First of all, I love sports and know much about track and field events, like running and jumping .
例 2:What’s more, I’m outgoing and work well with others, so I can help guide students easily .
例 3:Last but not least, I volunteered at the class sports meeting last year, so I have some experience .
服务设想(简要说明能做的工作):
例:If I become a volunteer, I can help carry sports equipment or keep order at the finish line .
4.结尾 (Closing)
核心功能:表达期待、请求机会、礼貌致谢。
例 1:I would be very grateful if you could give me this opportunity .
例 2:I’m looking forward to your early reply .
5.署名 (Signature)
位于结尾下方,写清申请人姓名。
例:Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、词汇句式
1. 相关词汇
(1)体育活动类
volunteer(志愿者)、sports festival(体育节)、track and field(田径)、event(项目)、running(跑步)、jumping(跳跃)、relay race(接力赛)、hurdles(跨栏)、finish line(终点线)、sports equipment(体育器材)、gym(体育馆)、court(球场)、field(场地)、referee(裁判)、score(得分)、cheer(欢呼)。
例:Our school sports festival will have many events, including relay races and hurdles.(我们学校的体育节将有很多项目,包括接力赛和跨栏。)
(2)能力与性格类
qualified(合格的)、experienced(有经验的)、outgoing(外向的)、patient(耐心的)、responsible(负责的)、helpful(乐于助人的)、cooperative(合作的)、organized(有条理的)、skilled(熟练的)、active(积极的)、careful(细心的)、energetic(精力充沛的)、communicate(沟通)、cooperate(合作)、assist(协助)。
例:I think I’m qualified for the volunteer job because I’m responsible and careful .(我认为我能胜任这份志愿工作,因为我既负责又细心。)
(3)申请信专用类
apply for(申请)、position(职位)、recommend(推荐)、reason(原因)、advantage(优势)、experience(经验)、opportunity(机会)、grateful(感激的)、consider(考虑)、reply(回复)、contact(联系)、serve(服务)、contribute(贡献)、participate(参与)、intend(打算)。
例:I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position because I want to serve my classmates .(我写信申请志愿者职位,因为我想为同学们服务。)
(4)动作与场景类
guide(引导)、carry(搬运)、organize(组织)、keep order(维持秩序)、hand out(分发)、set up(布置)、clean up(清理)、support(支持)、assist(协助)、cheer on(为…… 加油)、record(记录)、help out(帮忙)。
例:I can help hand out water to athletes or keep order around the field .(我可以帮忙给运动员递水,或者维持场地周围的秩序。)
2. 相关句式
(1)开头句式(表明意图)
I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position for our school sports festival.(我写信申请学校体育节的志愿者职位。)
I’m eager to be a volunteer for the coming school sports festival.(我渴望成为即将到来的学校体育节的志愿者。)
Having learned that we need volunteers for the sports festival, I want to join in.(得知我们需要体育节志愿者,我想加入。)
I’m writing to recommend myself as a volunteer for the school sports festival .(我写信推荐自己成为学校体育节的志愿者。)
With great enthusiasm, I apply to be a volunteer for our school sports festival.(我怀着极大的热情,申请成为学校体育节的志愿者。)
My name is Tom, and I’d like to apply for the volunteer job for the sports festival.(我叫汤姆,想申请体育节的志愿者工作。)
I’m interested in the volunteer position for the school sports festival, so I write to you.(我对学校体育节的志愿者职位很感兴趣,所以给您写信。)
It’s my pleasure to apply to be a volunteer for our school’s sports festival.(申请成为学校体育节的志愿者是我的荣幸。)
I heard that the school is looking for sports festival volunteers, so I want to try.(我听说学校在招募体育节志愿者,所以想尝试一下。)
I’m writing this letter to ask for the opportunity to be a sports festival volunteer .(我写这封信是为了请求成为体育节志愿者的机会。)
(2)主体句式(阐述优势)
First of all, I have a good knowledge of different sports events .(首先,我对各种体育项目很了解。)
What’s more, I’m good at communicating with others, so I can guide students well .(此外,我擅长与人沟通,所以能很好地引导学生。)
Last but not least, I volunteered at the community sports meeting last year .(最后,我去年在社区运动会做过志愿者。)
I’m outgoing and energetic, which makes me suitable for the volunteer work .(我外向又精力充沛,这使我适合这份志愿工作。)
I can work hard and follow the rules during the sports festival.(我会努力工作,并在体育节期间遵守规则。)
My PE teacher often says I’m responsible, so I can take good care of the equipment.(我的体育老师常说我很负责,所以我能照看好器材。)
I have experience in organizing small sports activities for my class.(我有过为班级组织小型体育活动的经验。)
I’m patient enough to help athletes and spectators when they need help.(我足够有耐心,在运动员和观众需要帮助时提供支持。)
Being good at sports myself, I can understand the needs of the athletes .(我自己擅长运动,能理解运动员的需求。)
I can cooperate with other volunteers to finish our tasks well.(我能和其他志愿者合作,很好地完成任务。)
I’m careful, so I won’t make mistakes when recording scores.(我很细心,记录得分时不会出错。)
I can speak English a little, so I might help foreign teachers at the festival.(我会一点英语,或许能在体育节帮助外教。)
I’m always ready to help others, which is important for a volunteer .(我总是乐于助人,这对志愿者来说很重要。)
I have strong physical strength, so I can carry heavy equipment.(我体力很好,可以搬运重物器材。)
I know the school gym well, so I can guide people to different areas.(我很熟悉学校体育馆,可以引导人们到不同区域。)
(3)结尾句式(表达期待)
I would be very grateful if you could give me this opportunity .(如果您能给我这个机会,我会非常感激。)
I hope you can consider my application and accept me .(希望您能考虑我的申请并接纳我。)
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon .(期待早日收到您的回复。)
I promise I will do my best if I become a volunteer .(如果我成为志愿者,我保证会尽最大努力。)
If you need more information about me, please contact me at 138xxxx5678.(如果您需要更多关于我的信息,请拨打 138xxxx5678 联系我。)
I really want to contribute to the sports festival as a volunteer.(我真的很想以志愿者的身份为体育节做贡献。)
I believe I can be a good volunteer for the sports festival.(我相信我能成为一名优秀的体育节志愿者。)
Thank you for your time and consideration .(感谢您的时间和考虑。)
I hope I can get the chance to serve everyone at the sports festival.(我希望能有机会在体育节为大家服务。)
I’m sure I won’t let you down if I’m chosen.(如果我被选中,我肯定不会让您失望。)
四、范文例析
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position for our school sports festival .
I have many advantages for this job. First of all, I love sports and know lots of track and field events, like relay races and long jumps . What’s more, I’m outgoing and patient, so I can get along well with athletes and classmates . Last year, I helped organize the class sports meeting, so I have some experience . If I become a volunteer, I can guide students or carry sports equipment.
I would be grateful if you give me the chance. I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文分析】
结构完整:严格遵循申请信格式,包含称呼、开头(自我介绍 + 申请意图)、主体(优势 + 服务设想)、结尾(请求机会 + 期待回复)、署名,逻辑清晰。
内容达标:覆盖审题要点中的 “自我介绍”“优势”“服务设想” 三大核心,且优势结合体育节场景(体育知识、性格、相关经验),贴合主题 。
语言规范:使用 “First of all... What’s more...” 等连接词衔接内容,句式丰富(如条件状语从句 “If I become...”),词汇准确(如 “apply for”“track and field”),符合七年级英语水平 。
五、优化策略
1.内容匹配:紧扣 “体育节” 场景,拒绝泛泛而谈
避免只说 “我很负责” 这类笼统优势,要结合体育节需求补充细节。例如将 “I’m helpful.” 优化为 “I’m helpful—I can hand out water to runners at the finish line.”,让优势更具体可信 。
2.语言升级:用连接词与高级词汇提升流畅度
基础表达:I have experience. I’m outgoing.
优化表达:Besides having volunteer experience at the class sports meeting, I’m outgoing enough to guide visitors .
可多用 “First of all... What’s more... Last but not least...”“besides”“however” 等连接词,替换 “good” 为 “excellent”“qualified” 等词汇 。
3.细节补充:增加 “服务设想”,体现主动性
主体部分可补充 1-2 句具体工作规划,如 “If I’m chosen, I plan to check the sports equipment before the events start to make sure it’s safe.”,展现对志愿工作的思考,更易获得认可 。
4.格式规范:规避书信常见错误
注意称呼后加逗号,结尾祝福语首字母大写(如 “Yours sincerely,”),署名位于祝福语正下方。同时避免时态混乱,介绍优势用一般现在时,设想工作用一般将来时 。
5.个性加分:结合自身真实经历,增强感染力
若有具体体育相关经历(如参加过校运会、学习过急救知识),可简要提及,例如 “I learned basic first aid in PE class, so I can help if athletes get hurt.”,让申请更具说服力 。
综合实战演练
1.心中的星光,前行的力量。在我们的成长过程中,有很多值得我们学习的榜样。假如你是班长李华,学校正在进行“闪亮之星” (Shining Stars) 的评选,你将推荐同学Tom参加评选。请根据以下提示,完成这篇英语推荐信。
注意:
(1)词数80 词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
姓名
Tom
外貌
高高瘦瘦,戴眼镜……
爱好
打篮球,阅读……
性格
友善……
优秀事例
上个月去敬老院,给老人讲故事……
你对他的评价
……
参考词汇:recommend v. 推荐 the Old People’s Home 敬老院
Dear Sir,
I’d like to recommend my classmate Tom to be a Shining Star in our school.
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Thank you for considering my recommendation. (感谢您考虑我的推荐)
Yours,
Li Hua
2.同学们,假设你是Amy,请以“This is me”为题写一篇英语短文,向其他同学介绍自己。
要求:①词数不少于80个单词;②语句通顺,条理清晰,书写工整。
基本信息
姓名:Amy;年龄:12岁;班级:阳光中学七年级一班;外貌:短发,不戴眼镜
学校生活
老师……,同学……
兴趣爱好
1. 最喜欢……学科,因为……
2. 业余爱好是……,因为……
周末活动
周末常做……
理想
想要……,希望……
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3.《学英语报》正举办以“My new friend”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是 Kitty,请根据下图所提示的要点,用英语写一篇演讲稿,介绍你的新朋友Kate。
注意事项:
1.演讲稿须包含所有要点,省略号部分须作适当发挥,要求语句通顺、符合题意;
2.词数在60个左右,演讲稿的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.演讲稿内容必须写在答题卡指定位置。
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I’m Kitty. Let me tell you something about my new friend Kate.
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That’s all. Thank you.
4.Jack是你的好朋友,新学期他转学到你班上就读,请你根据以下问题,用英文向全班介绍他。
(1) How old is he?
(2) Does he have a room? Please describe (描述) it.
(3) What’s his hobby (爱好)?
写作要求:词数60—80词;书写规范,做到整洁、整齐、清晰。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. Let me introduce my good friend Jack here.
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5.请根据以下提示,以“My Hobbies”为题,写一篇60词左右的短文。
提示:1. 你的名字叫李华;
2. 你的爱好是读书、画画和听音乐;
3. 你经常在周末和朋友一起做这些事。
My Hobbies
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6.假如你是李华,新华中学七年级一班的一名学生。本周英语主题班会上,每个人需要向大家介绍一下自己以及自己的一位外国笔友 (penfriend)。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文在班会上发言。
Name
Age
Country
Personality
Hobbies
李华
12
中国
友好、可爱
阅读、绘画
Tom
13
美国
文静、善良
游泳、打网球 (play tennis)
写作要求:
1.内容完整,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写规范;
2.字数70词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.不能使用真实的姓名和校名。
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all, thanks for listening.
7.不同的人有不同的爱好。爱好能给人带来快乐、友谊和知识,使人们在紧张的学习和工作之余有所放松。但是随着环境的变化和阅历的增加,同一个人在不同的时期也会有不同的爱好。请根据下表提示的内容,写一篇不少于60词的短文。
Name
Age
Hobby
In the past (在过去)
Now
Brian
12
Play football
Listen to
music
Tony
13
Jog
Keep pets
Lucy
14
Dance
Swim
Different Hobbies
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8.假设你是田华,请根据表格内容,以“This is me!”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范,要点齐全,发挥想象,适当拓展。
2. 不少于50个词,开头和结尾已写好,不计入总字数。
3. 文章中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名等相关信息。
姓名
田华
年龄
14
来自
Dongtai
学校
阳光中学
年级,班级
七(2)
外表
高且瘦,短发,戴眼镜
业余爱好
打篮球和画画
擅长
跑步
不擅长
语文
同学
都很友好,最好的朋友是Nancy
This is me!
Hi, everyone. My name is Tian Hua.
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9.假如你是班主任李老师,请你根据下表所提示的内容,为你班(七年级四班)学生汤姆写一份关于他个人的综合评语给学校。
学习
努力学习,所有学科都学得很好。
能力
篮球打得好,他想下学期进入校篮球队。
爱好
喜爱动物,他在家养兔子当宠物并把它照顾得很好。
品德
1. 在公共汽车上,他有礼貌地把座位让给需要的人。
2. 前几天,他足够勇敢地把邻居从大火中救出来。我们想推荐他获取今年的最勇敢学生奖(this year’s Bravest Student Award)。
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)要点必须包含所有相关信息;
(3)词数100字左右。
Name: Tom Class: 4 Grade: 7 Grade Teacher: Mr Li
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10. 来到初中已有一个多月的时间了,想必你对你的同学都有了一定的了解。然而, 你的同学们有没有很好的了解你呢? 本期英语角活动的主题是“Let you know me”,请你写一篇自我介绍的稿件,为英语角活动做准备。
内容提示:
1. 介绍自己 (可包括性格,爱好,喜欢的科目或其他方面)。
2. 表达与大家成为好朋友的愿望。
注意:
1. 词数 80 —100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 (姓名用 Liu Hui 和 Li Ling代替)。
(学校和班级用 Hong Xing Middle School 和 Class 1 Grade 7 代替。 )
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