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专题08 书面表达
主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·吉林长白·期中)
1.你校英语报正组织英语作文比赛,请以你最尊敬的一位科学家为话题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹:
2.你的感悟。
注意:1. 字数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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【答案】The Scientist I Admire Most: Marie Curie
The scientist I admire most is Marie Curie. Born in Poland in 1867, she was a pioneer in the field of radioactivity. Despite facing gender discrimination and lack of funding, she persevered and discovered two new elements, which revolutionized the understanding of atomic structure and laid the foundation for modern physics and medicine.
Marie Curie’s story teaches me the power of determination and courage in the pursuit of knowledge. Her relentless spirit in the face of adversity motivates me to strive for my goals, no matter how challenging they may be. She is a true role model and an inspiration to all aspiring scientists.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英语报正组织英语作文比赛,要求考生以最尊敬的一位科学家为话题,写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管:despite→in spite of
基础:foundation→basis
追逐:pursuit→chase
逆境:adversity→adverse situation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Marie Curie’s story teaches me the power of determination and courage in the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句:Marie Curie’s story teaches me the power of determination and courage when I am in the pursuit of knowledge.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Despite facing gender discrimination and lack of funding, she persevered and discovered two new elements, which revolutionized the understanding of atomic structure and laid the foundation for modern physics and medicine. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Her relentless spirit in the face of adversity motivates me to strive for my goals, no matter how challenging they may be. (运用了no matter how引导让步状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·辽宁锦州·期中)
2.假定你是树人中学高中生李华,最近你校英文网站在进行征文活动,主题是“Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits”。你打算写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.孩子形成好的行为习惯很重要;
2.父母对孩子行为习惯负责的原因;
3.给父母一些培养孩子良好习惯的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.短文标题已经为你写好。
Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits
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【答案】Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits
Forming good behaviour habits is crucial for children’s growth and future success. Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits because they are the primary role models and educators in a child’s life.
To cultivate good habits in children, parents should lead by example, demonstrating respect, honesty, and responsibility in their daily lives. Additionally, setting clear rules and consistent rewards and punishments can effectively reinforce positive behaviour. Encouraging participation in extracurricular activities and fostering a love for learning will also contribute to their overall development.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是树人中学高中生李华,最近学校英文网站在进行征文活动,主题是“Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits”。要求考生写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:crucial→essential
展示:demonstrate→ showcase
此外:additionally→in addition
增强:reinforce→ strengthen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Additionally, setting clear rules and consistent rewards and punishments can effectively reinforce positive behaviour.
拓展句: Additionally, setting clear rules and consistent rewards and punishments can effectively reinforce positive behavior, which is greatly important for children.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Forming good behaviour habits is crucial for children’s growth and future success. (运用了动名词作主语的结构)
【高分句型2】To cultivate good habits in children, parents should lead by example, demonstrating respect, honesty, and responsibility in their daily lives. (运用了to do不定式作状语以及现在分词作状语的结构)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·辽宁沈阳·期中)
3.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞,并打算最近来中国学习民族舞,想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她写一封信,推荐一位老师。
要点:
1. 写信目的;
2. 推荐该老师的原因;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Emily,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Emily,
Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China. I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.
Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. You know, I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.
I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen’s student.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Emily写一封信,向她推荐一位舞蹈老师。
【详解】1.词汇积累
优秀的:excellent → superb
给某人留下印象:impress somebody → make an impression on somebody
狂热的:enthusiastic → crazy
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful.
拓展句:And I have seen almost all of the performances given by Miss Chen in our school, whose peacock dance is wonderful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
主题02 人与社会
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·黑龙江哈尔滨·期中)
1.假定你是学生李华,上周你校在人民广场组织了为贫困地区学生献爱心的闲置物品义卖活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 活动感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
A Love Charity Sale
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【答案】A Love Charity Sale
Last Saturday witnessed a love charity sale of our school which was held at People Square at 9 am. All the students interested presented their well-prepared items.
At every stand lay a wide range of books, school supplies, sports equipment, or whatever. The whole school wandered from stand to stand, listening to the passionate owners’ introduction and choosing their favorites. Within an hour and a half, all the items were sold out. The money raised for charity was donated to the needy children in the nearby poverty-stricken area.
Not only did this sale enhance the awareness of all teachers and students to give love, it also cultivated the students’ good quality of caring for others as well as helping others.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇报道,介绍学校上周组织的为贫困地区学生献爱心的闲置物品义卖活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的:a wide range of→a variety of
选择:choose→pick out
捐赠:donate→give away
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All the students interested presented their well-prepared items.
拓展句:All the students who were interested presented their well-prepared items.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Last Saturday witnessed a love charity sale of our school which was held at People Square at 9 am.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Not only did this sale enhance the awareness of all teachers and students to give love, it also cultivated the students’ good quality of caring for others as well as helping others.(运用了部分倒装)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·辽宁大连·期中)
2.假如你是高中学生李华,是学校志愿者协会的负责人,急需招募环保志愿者。请你用英语写一则招聘启事。内容包括以下要点:
(1)工作内容要求;
(2)对志愿者的要求。
注意:
(1)词数80词左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
New Volunteers Wanted
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【答案】One possible version:
New Volunteers Wanted
The Volunteer Association of our school is in urgent need of environmental protection volunteers.
The main tasks include organizing and participating in various activities such as garbage sorting, tree planting, and the promotion of environmental awareness. Volunteers are expected to actively engage in these activities and inspire others to care for the environment.
We have the following requirements for volunteers. Firstly, you should be passionate about environmental protection and have a strong sense of responsibility. Secondly, good communication skills are necessary as you may need to interact with different people. Moreover, you should be available to work at weekends or during holidays.
Looking forward to your participation!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校志愿者协会写一则招聘启事,招募环保志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in → take part in
各种各样的:various → a variety of
首先:firstly → first of all
有必要的:necessary → essential
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The main tasks include organizing and participating in various activities such as garbage sorting, tree planting, and the promotion of environmental awareness.
拓展句:The main tasks include organizing and participating in various activities, which ranges from garbage sorting, tree planting to the promotion of environmental awareness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Volunteers are expected to actively engage in these activities and inspire others to care for the environment.(运用了动词不定式作补语)
【高分句型2】Secondly, good communication skills are necessary as you may need to interact with different people.(运用了as引导的状语从句)。
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·辽宁·期中)
3.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jackson得知在国庆节期间你和家人一起去当地植物园游玩。他对此很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 游玩经历;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jackson,
I was thrilled to hear that you are interested in my National Day trip to the local botanical garden with my family. We explored various themed gardens and saw a wide variety of plants, from lush tropical ferns to colorful flowers. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made it a delightful experience. I found it fascinating how each plant had its own story and purpose in the ecosystem.
This visit deepened my appreciation for nature and how important it is to preserve our natural world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友Jackson得知在国庆节期间你和家人一起去当地植物园游玩。他对此很感兴趣,请考生给他写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
探索:explore→probe into
各种各样的:various→a variety of
令人愉快的:delightful→pleasant
重要的:important→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We explored various themed gardens and saw a wide variety of plants, from lush tropical ferns to colorful flowers.
拓展句:We explored various themed gardens and saw a wide variety of plants, which are from lush tropical ferns to colorful flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was thrilled to hear that you are interested in my National Day trip to the local botanical garden with my family. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I found it fascinating how each plant had its own story and purpose in the ecosystem. (运用了it作形式宾语,how引导宾语从句)
主题03 人与自然
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·吉林四平·期中)
1.近年来,越来越多的科学技术被应用于现代农业生产中。科学技术的进步促进了农业发展,但同时也引发了一系列问题。你所在的学校校报正开展以“Farming and New Technologies”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 分析新科技的优势和问题;
2. 阐述你的观点,并说明原因。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Farming and New Technologies
In recent years, an increasing number of new technologies have been applied in farming.
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【答案】
Farming and New Technologies
In recent years, an increasing number of new technologies have been applied in farming. Despite all inevitable risks, these breakthroughs in technologies do promote agricultural development.
On the one hand, with the application of various advanced technologies, varying from automatic systems to AI integration in agricultural field, the farming efficiency and productivity are shooting up, enabling farmers to break away from tedious physical workloads. On the other hand, what concerns the public is that the long-term effects of new technologies may do harm to the environment and human health. Furthermore, the escalating unemployment level and population migration issues due to the automatic farming process should be fully taken into consideration.
As far as I’m concerned, while we are embracing new technologies in farming, it is crucial to strike a balance between their benefits and risks to fulfill the sustainable farming development.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文,要求考生用英语写一篇短文来参加学校校报正开展的以“Farming and the new technologies”为主题的征文活动,内容包括分析新科技的优势和问题、阐述个人的观点并说明原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
将……考虑在内:take into... consideration→take... into account
关键的:crucial→critical
而且:furthermore→moreover
实现:fulfill→accomplish
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Despite all inevitable risks, these breakthroughs in technologies do promote agricultural development.
拓展句:While there are inevitable risks, these breakthroughs in technologies do promote agricultural development.
【点睛】[高分句型1]On the other hand, what concerns the public is that the long-term effects of new technologies may do harm to the environment and human health.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2]As far as I’m concerned, while we are embracing new technologies in farming, it is crucial to strike a balance between their benefits and risks to fulfill the sustainable farming development.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句和it作形式主语不定式作真正主语的结构)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·辽宁鞍山·期中)
2.假设你是某高中的学生李华,你在网上看到你所居住的城市动物园正在搞有关动物保护的街头宣传活动,正在招募宣传志愿者,你对此很感兴趣,请你用英文写一份申请邮件。
内容包括:1.自我介绍 2.个人优势 3.表达期待
参考词汇:recruitment招募
Dear Sir/ Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student, aged 17. Attracted by your zoo’s online recruitment, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.
First, I am an animal lover and know a lot about wild animals. Second, being out-going and brave, I have both abilities to communicate with others and confidence to speak in public. Third, equipped with a strong sense of responsibility and determination, I will apply myself to arousing the public’s awareness of the worrying situation of wildlife and the importance of protecting them. I’d appreciate it if I could be accepted! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours, sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就城市动物园正在搞有关动物保护的街头宣传活动用英文写一份申请邮件。内容包括:自我介绍、个人优势和表达期待
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先: first→to begin with
责任: responsibility→duty
重要性:importance→ significance
回复:reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Attracted by your zoo’s online recruitment, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.
拓展句:As I am attracted by your zoo’s online recruitment, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, being out-going and brave, I have both abilities to communicate with others and confidence to speak in public.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】 I’d appreciate it if I could be accepted! (运用了if引导的宾语从句)。
主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·黑龙江虎林·期中)
1.假定你是李华,你计划寒假期间去海南旅游,留学生朋友Jack得知消息后想和你一起去。请你根据下面的要点提示,给他写一封电子邮件:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 旅游安排;
3. 你的期待。
注意:
1. 词数80字左右。
2. 书写清晰、工整
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m excited to know that you are willing to spend the winter vacation in Hainan with me.
I’d like to share my travel plan with you. First, I will go there by train. Besides, I am planning to stay there for five days to fully enjoy myself. It won’t be so hot there then, so playing beach volleyball is still able to be done. Above all, I will attend a few traditional festivals there. Such is my plan. If you’d like to join me, please tell me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生留学生朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,介绍海南旅游安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动:excited→thrilled
玩得高兴:enjoy oneself→have fun
打算:plan to→intend to
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:It won’t be so hot there then, so playing beach volleyball is still able to be done.
拓展句:Playing beach volleyball is still able to be done because it won’t be so hot there then.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m excited to know that you are willing to spend the winter vacation in Hainan with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you’d like to join me, please tell me. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·吉林长春·期中)
2.你校英语报现开设心理健康专栏,请你以“Smile for Your Life”为题,进行投稿。
写作要求:1.简要介绍微笑的力量。
2. 呼吁大家在生活中多微笑,传递正能量。
3. 衡水体书写,字迹工整,80词左右。
Smile for Your Life
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【答案】 Smile for Your Life
A smile is a powerful tool that can brighten anyone's day. It's a simple yet effective way to spread joy . When you smile, you not only lift your own spirits but also make others feel happy and appreciated. In the hustle and bustle of life, we often forget to take a moment and smile. But remember, a genuine smile can turn a bad day into a good one. So, don't forget to smile for your life and for the lives of those around you. Let's make the world a happier place, one smile at a time.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校英语报现开设心理健康专栏,请你以“Smile for Your Life”为题,进行投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐的:happy→pleased
强大的:powerful→potent
微笑:smile→beam
但是:yet→but
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:A smile is a powerful tool that can brighten anyone's day. It's a simple yet effective way to spread joy.
拓展句:A smile is a powerful tool that can brighten anyone's day, which is a simple yet effective way to spread joy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When you smile, you not only lift your own spirits but also make others feel happy and appreciated. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] In the hustle and bustle of life, we often forget to take a moment and smile. (运用了不定式作宾语)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·辽宁大连·期中)
3.假如你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目正在为上周学校运动会征集稿件,请你就你参加的一个项目或令你印象最深的一个项目,写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点包括:1. 比赛过程;2. 赛后感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 Last week, I participated in our school sports meeting, competing in the 400-meter race - a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing around me. My attempts to match the pace of fellow runners proved challenging, but I didn’t give up. I pushed myself to the limit and crossed the finishing line with all my strength.
Through the race, I learned that doing sports contributes to our health both physically and mentally. Sports and health are inseparable!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,写一写上周参加学校运动会的比赛过程和赛后感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
冲:dash→charge
证明:prove→turn out
尽全力:with all my strength→with all my might
有助于:contribute to→conduce to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, competing in the 400-meter race - a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
拓展句:Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, where I competed in the 400-meter race - a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing around me.(运用了独立主格结构)
【高分句型2】Through the race, I learned that doing sports contributes to our health both physically and mentally.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,动名词作主语)
主题02 人与社会
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·吉林长春·期中)
1.假定你是李华,你校下周五将举办一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.讲座的时间和地点;
2.讲座的内容;
3.发出邀请。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alex,
I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday. It will be held in the school hall at 2 p.m.
The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life. We will learn how to interpret different body language and use it effectively in various situations, such as in interviews, business meetings and social gatherings.
I sincerely invite you to attend it. I believe you will find it very interesting and beneficial. It will surely broaden your knowledge and help you better understand people’s true intentions.
Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Alex写一封邮件,邀请他参加学校举办的一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→ well-known
专注于:focus on→ concentrate on
影响:affect→ influence
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
2.句式转换
原句:The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
拓展句:The lecture will be given by a famous professor, which will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·吉林长春·期中)
2.假定你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Smith想了解中国的传统节日端午节,请你写一封电子邮件向他简要介绍。要点如下:
1. 时间:农历五月初五;
2. 起源:源于屈原的故事;
3. 风俗:赛龙舟、吃粽子、悬挂艾草等。
参考词汇:wormwood 艾草
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Sample:
Dear Smith,
How is everything going? Delighted to know you take an interest in the Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival. I am writing to introduce it to you.
The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the lunar calendar, commemorating the death of Qu Yuan, an upright and loyal poet and statesman. What should be stressed is the dragon boat racing, which symbolizes people’s attempts to rescue Qu Yuan. Moreover, the festival has also been marked by eating zongzi made of glutinous rice and bamboo leaves. Besides, people will also hang wormwood on the front door to repel insects and evil spirits.
I hope you’ll find my sharing beneficial to your understanding of the festival. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的加拿大笔友Smith想了解中国的传统节日端午节,请考生写一封电子邮件向他简要介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→pleased
庆祝:celebrate→observe
驱除:repel→ dislodge
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Delighted to know you take an interest in the Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival. I am writing to introduce it to you.
拓展句:When I am delighted to know you take an interest in the Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, I am writing to introduce it to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What should be stressed is the dragon boat racing, which symbolizes people’s attempts to rescue Qu Yuan. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope you’ll find my sharing beneficial to your understanding of the festival. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·辽宁大连·期中)
3.假定你是李晴, 国庆节期间你回了趟老家, 感慨于农村的机械化发展。请你给留学生朋友Jack写一封邮件, 邀请他下月底放假期间到你家做客。内容包括:
1. 介绍你的家乡;
2. 发出邀请。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Qing
【答案】Dear Jack,
How have you been recently? I recently returned to my hometown during the National Day holiday and was amazed by the rapid mechanization development in the rural areas. My hometown, located in the countryside, has transformed significantly. Modern agricultural machinery is now the norm, making farming more efficient and less labor-intensive. I’d like to invite you to visit my hometown at the end of next month when you have your break. It would be a great opportunity for you to experience the charm of rural China .
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Jack写一封邮件,邀请他下月底放假期间到自己家做客,并介绍自己的家乡以及家乡的机械化发展。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
惊讶:amazed→astonished
迅速的:rapid→fast
显著地:significantly→remarkably
机会:opportunity→chance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My hometown, located in the countryside, has transformed significantly.
拓展句:My hometown, which is located in the countryside, has transformed significantly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My hometown, located in the countryside, has transformed significantly.(运用了过去分词作定语)
【高分句型2】It would be a great opportunity for you to experience the charm of rural China.(运用了it作形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式短语)
主题03 人与自然
Passage 1
(24-25高二上·吉林长春·期中)
1.假如你是李华,学校论坛英文版想邀请你写一篇文章刊登在论坛上,介绍生态农业(organic farming)的情况和人们对此不同的看法。
1.生态农业的现状;
2.生态农业的利弊。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Nowadays, more and more people are switching to organic farming. Some advocate choosing it while others feel it lacks sustainability.
Organic farming has its own advantages. Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food rich in nutrition. Besides, some oppose it, because it is nowhere near able to meet the high demand.
In my view, I am in favor of it since it keeps the soil rich and free of disease as well as makes our life healthier.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。要求考生写一篇文章刊登在学校论坛上,介绍生态农业的情况和人们对此不同的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose → select
优势:advantage → strength
提供:offer → provide
此外:besides → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food rich in nutrition.
拓展句:Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food which are rich in nutrition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food rich in nutrition.(运用了not only置于句首的部分倒装结构)
【高分句型2】Besides, some oppose it, because it is nowhere near able to meet the high demand.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二上·吉林延边·期中)
你校英文报正在举办以“人与自然和谐共生”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一个你熟悉的公园,阐述它如何体现人与自然的和谐共生。
要求:1. 80词左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】范文
In my city, there lies a magnificent park named Central Park.
In the middle of it is a vast lake whose clear water shimmers under the sunlight. Surrounding the lake are numerous tall trees, forming a green shelter. People enjoy strolling along the paths, taking in the fresh air. Here, birds construct their cozy nests among the branches while ducks swim gracefully on the lake’s surface.
It vividly illustrates that humans and nature can coexist in harmony and create such a beautiful scene.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿,介绍一个熟悉的公园,阐述它如何体现人与自然的和谐共生。
【详解】1.词汇积累
说明:illustrate→explain
舒适的:cozy→comfortable
喜爱:enjoy→be fond of
美丽的:beautiful→gorgeous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Surrounding the lake are numerous tall trees, forming a green shelter.
拓展句:Surrounding the lake are numerous tall trees, which form a green shelter.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the middle of it is a vast lake whose clear water shimmers under the sunlight. (运用了whose引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] It vividly illustrates that humans and nature can coexist in harmony and create such a beautiful scene. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
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高二上书面表达08
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、书信写作
1.假如你是李华,学校论坛英文版想邀请你写一篇文章刊登在论坛上,介绍生态农业(organic farming)的情况和人们对此不同的看法。
1.生态农业的现状;
2.生态农业的利弊。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Nowadays, more and more people are switching to organic farming. Some advocate choosing it while others feel it lacks sustainability.
Organic farming has its own advantages. Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food rich in nutrition. Besides, some oppose it, because it is nowhere near able to meet the high demand.
In my view, I am in favor of it since it keeps the soil rich and free of disease as well as makes our life healthier.
【来源】吉林省长春市朝阳区吉林省实验中学2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。要求考生写一篇文章刊登在学校论坛上,介绍生态农业的情况和人们对此不同的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose → select
优势:advantage → strength
提供:offer → provide
此外:besides → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food rich in nutrition.
拓展句:Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food which are rich in nutrition.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only does it keep the soil rich and free of disease but it also offers food rich in nutrition.(运用了not only置于句首的部分倒装结构)
【高分句型2】Besides, some oppose it, because it is nowhere near able to meet the high demand.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
2.你校英语报正组织英语作文比赛,请以你最尊敬的一位科学家为话题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹:
2.你的感悟。
注意:1. 字数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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【答案】The Scientist I Admire Most: Marie Curie
The scientist I admire most is Marie Curie. Born in Poland in 1867, she was a pioneer in the field of radioactivity. Despite facing gender discrimination and lack of funding, she persevered and discovered two new elements, which revolutionized the understanding of atomic structure and laid the foundation for modern physics and medicine.
Marie Curie’s story teaches me the power of determination and courage in the pursuit of knowledge. Her relentless spirit in the face of adversity motivates me to strive for my goals, no matter how challenging they may be. She is a true role model and an inspiration to all aspiring scientists.
【来源】吉林省长白朝鲜族自治县实验中学2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英语报正组织英语作文比赛,要求考生以最尊敬的一位科学家为话题,写一篇短文参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管:despite→in spite of
基础:foundation→basis
追逐:pursuit→chase
逆境:adversity→adverse situation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Marie Curie’s story teaches me the power of determination and courage in the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句:Marie Curie’s story teaches me the power of determination and courage when I am in the pursuit of knowledge.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Despite facing gender discrimination and lack of funding, she persevered and discovered two new elements, which revolutionized the understanding of atomic structure and laid the foundation for modern physics and medicine. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Her relentless spirit in the face of adversity motivates me to strive for my goals, no matter how challenging they may be. (运用了no matter how引导让步状语从句)
3.假定你是李华,你计划寒假期间去海南旅游,留学生朋友Jack得知消息后想和你一起去。请你根据下面的要点提示,给他写一封电子邮件:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 旅游安排;
3. 你的期待。
注意:
1. 词数80字左右。
2. 书写清晰、工整
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m excited to know that you are willing to spend the winter vacation in Hainan with me.
I’d like to share my travel plan with you. First, I will go there by train. Besides, I am planning to stay there for five days to fully enjoy myself. It won’t be so hot there then, so playing beach volleyball is still able to be done. Above all, I will attend a few traditional festivals there. Such is my plan. If you’d like to join me, please tell me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【来源】黑龙江省虎林市高级中学、鸡东县第二中学三校联考2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试英语试卷
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生留学生朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,介绍海南旅游安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动:excited→thrilled
玩得高兴:enjoy oneself→have fun
打算:plan to→intend to
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:It won’t be so hot there then, so playing beach volleyball is still able to be done.
拓展句:Playing beach volleyball is still able to be done because it won’t be so hot there then.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m excited to know that you are willing to spend the winter vacation in Hainan with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you’d like to join me, please tell me. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
4.你校英语报现开设心理健康专栏,请你以“Smile for Your Life”为题,进行投稿。
写作要求:1.简要介绍微笑的力量。
2. 呼吁大家在生活中多微笑,传递正能量。
3. 衡水体书写,字迹工整,80词左右。
Smile for Your Life
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【答案】 Smile for Your Life
A smile is a powerful tool that can brighten anyone's day. It's a simple yet effective way to spread joy . When you smile, you not only lift your own spirits but also make others feel happy and appreciated. In the hustle and bustle of life, we often forget to take a moment and smile. But remember, a genuine smile can turn a bad day into a good one. So, don't forget to smile for your life and for the lives of those around you. Let's make the world a happier place, one smile at a time.
【来源】吉林省长春市博硕学校2024-2025学年高二上学期期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校英语报现开设心理健康专栏,请你以“Smile for Your Life”为题,进行投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐的:happy→pleased
强大的:powerful→potent
微笑:smile→beam
但是:yet→but
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:A smile is a powerful tool that can brighten anyone's day. It's a simple yet effective way to spread joy.
拓展句:A smile is a powerful tool that can brighten anyone's day, which is a simple yet effective way to spread joy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When you smile, you not only lift your own spirits but also make others feel happy and appreciated. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] In the hustle and bustle of life, we often forget to take a moment and smile. (运用了不定式作宾语)
5.假定你是李华,你校下周五将举办一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件,邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.讲座的时间和地点;
2.讲座的内容;
3.发出邀请。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alex,
I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday. It will be held in the school hall at 2 p.m.
The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life. We will learn how to interpret different body language and use it effectively in various situations, such as in interviews, business meetings and social gatherings.
I sincerely invite you to attend it. I believe you will find it very interesting and beneficial. It will surely broaden your knowledge and help you better understand people’s true intentions.
Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【来源】吉林省长春市汽车经济开发区第六中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Alex写一封邮件,邀请他参加学校举办的一场主题为“The importance of body language”的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→ well-known
专注于:focus on→ concentrate on
影响:affect→ influence
各种各样的:various→ a variety of
2.句式转换
原句:The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
拓展句:The lecture will be given by a famous professor, which will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
6.假定你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Smith想了解中国的传统节日端午节,请你写一封电子邮件向他简要介绍。要点如下:
1. 时间:农历五月初五;
2. 起源:源于屈原的故事;
3. 风俗:赛龙舟、吃粽子、悬挂艾草等。
参考词汇:wormwood 艾草
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Sample:
Dear Smith,
How is everything going? Delighted to know you take an interest in the Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival. I am writing to introduce it to you.
The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the lunar calendar, commemorating the death of Qu Yuan, an upright and loyal poet and statesman. What should be stressed is the dragon boat racing, which symbolizes people’s attempts to rescue Qu Yuan. Moreover, the festival has also been marked by eating zongzi made of glutinous rice and bamboo leaves. Besides, people will also hang wormwood on the front door to repel insects and evil spirits.
I hope you’ll find my sharing beneficial to your understanding of the festival. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【来源】吉林省长春市朝阳区长春外国语学校2024-2025学年高二上学期10月期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的加拿大笔友Smith想了解中国的传统节日端午节,请考生写一封电子邮件向他简要介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→pleased
庆祝:celebrate→observe
驱除:repel→ dislodge
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Delighted to know you take an interest in the Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival. I am writing to introduce it to you.
拓展句:When I am delighted to know you take an interest in the Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, I am writing to introduce it to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What should be stressed is the dragon boat racing, which symbolizes people’s attempts to rescue Qu Yuan. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope you’ll find my sharing beneficial to your understanding of the festival. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
7.你校英文报正在举办以“人与自然和谐共生”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一个你熟悉的公园,阐述它如何体现人与自然的和谐共生。
要求:1. 80词左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】范文
In my city, there lies a magnificent park named Central Park.
In the middle of it is a vast lake whose clear water shimmers under the sunlight. Surrounding the lake are numerous tall trees, forming a green shelter. People enjoy strolling along the paths, taking in the fresh air. Here, birds construct their cozy nests among the branches while ducks swim gracefully on the lake’s surface.
It vividly illustrates that humans and nature can coexist in harmony and create such a beautiful scene.
【来源】吉林省延边朝鲜族自治州延吉市延边第二中学2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿,介绍一个熟悉的公园,阐述它如何体现人与自然的和谐共生。
【详解】1.词汇积累
说明:illustrate→explain
舒适的:cozy→comfortable
喜爱:enjoy→be fond of
美丽的:beautiful→gorgeous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Surrounding the lake are numerous tall trees, forming a green shelter.
拓展句:Surrounding the lake are numerous tall trees, which form a green shelter.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the middle of it is a vast lake whose clear water shimmers under the sunlight. (运用了whose引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] It vividly illustrates that humans and nature can coexist in harmony and create such a beautiful scene. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
8.假定你是学生李华,上周你校在人民广场组织了为贫困地区学生献爱心的闲置物品义卖活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2. 活动感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
A Love Charity Sale
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【答案】A Love Charity Sale
Last Saturday witnessed a love charity sale of our school which was held at People Square at 9 am. All the students interested presented their well-prepared items.
At every stand lay a wide range of books, school supplies, sports equipment, or whatever. The whole school wandered from stand to stand, listening to the passionate owners’ introduction and choosing their favorites. Within an hour and a half, all the items were sold out. The money raised for charity was donated to the needy children in the nearby poverty-stricken area.
Not only did this sale enhance the awareness of all teachers and students to give love, it also cultivated the students’ good quality of caring for others as well as helping others.
【来源】黑龙江省哈尔滨市哈尔滨师范大学附属中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇报道,介绍学校上周组织的为贫困地区学生献爱心的闲置物品义卖活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的:a wide range of→a variety of
选择:choose→pick out
捐赠:donate→give away
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All the students interested presented their well-prepared items.
拓展句:All the students who were interested presented their well-prepared items.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Last Saturday witnessed a love charity sale of our school which was held at People Square at 9 am.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Not only did this sale enhance the awareness of all teachers and students to give love, it also cultivated the students’ good quality of caring for others as well as helping others.(运用了部分倒装)
9.近年来,越来越多的科学技术被应用于现代农业生产中。科学技术的进步促进了农业发展,但同时也引发了一系列问题。你所在的学校校报正开展以“Farming and New Technologies”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 分析新科技的优势和问题;
2. 阐述你的观点,并说明原因。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Farming and New Technologies
In recent years, an increasing number of new technologies have been applied in farming.
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【答案】
Farming and New Technologies
In recent years, an increasing number of new technologies have been applied in farming. Despite all inevitable risks, these breakthroughs in technologies do promote agricultural development.
On the one hand, with the application of various advanced technologies, varying from automatic systems to AI integration in agricultural field, the farming efficiency and productivity are shooting up, enabling farmers to break away from tedious physical workloads. On the other hand, what concerns the public is that the long-term effects of new technologies may do harm to the environment and human health. Furthermore, the escalating unemployment level and population migration issues due to the automatic farming process should be fully taken into consideration.
As far as I’m concerned, while we are embracing new technologies in farming, it is crucial to strike a balance between their benefits and risks to fulfill the sustainable farming development.
【来源】吉林省四平市普通高中2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试三校联考英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文,要求考生用英语写一篇短文来参加学校校报正开展的以“Farming and the new technologies”为主题的征文活动,内容包括分析新科技的优势和问题、阐述个人的观点并说明原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
将……考虑在内:take into... consideration→take... into account
关键的:crucial→critical
而且:furthermore→moreover
实现:fulfill→accomplish
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Despite all inevitable risks, these breakthroughs in technologies do promote agricultural development.
拓展句:While there are inevitable risks, these breakthroughs in technologies do promote agricultural development.
【点睛】[高分句型1]On the other hand, what concerns the public is that the long-term effects of new technologies may do harm to the environment and human health.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2]As far as I’m concerned, while we are embracing new technologies in farming, it is crucial to strike a balance between their benefits and risks to fulfill the sustainable farming development.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句和it作形式主语不定式作真正主语的结构)
10.假设你是某高中的学生李华,你在网上看到你所居住的城市动物园正在搞有关动物保护的街头宣传活动,正在招募宣传志愿者,你对此很感兴趣,请你用英文写一份申请邮件。
内容包括:1.自我介绍 2.个人优势 3.表达期待
参考词汇:recruitment招募
Dear Sir/ Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a high school student, aged 17. Attracted by your zoo’s online recruitment, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.
First, I am an animal lover and know a lot about wild animals. Second, being out-going and brave, I have both abilities to communicate with others and confidence to speak in public. Third, equipped with a strong sense of responsibility and determination, I will apply myself to arousing the public’s awareness of the worrying situation of wildlife and the importance of protecting them. I’d appreciate it if I could be accepted! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours, sincerely,
Li Hua
【来源】辽宁省鞍山市第一中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期中英语试卷
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就城市动物园正在搞有关动物保护的街头宣传活动用英文写一份申请邮件。内容包括:自我介绍、个人优势和表达期待
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先: first→to begin with
责任: responsibility→duty
重要性:importance→ significance
回复:reply→response
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Attracted by your zoo’s online recruitment, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.
拓展句:As I am attracted by your zoo’s online recruitment, I’d like to apply to be a volunteer.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, being out-going and brave, I have both abilities to communicate with others and confidence to speak in public.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】 I’d appreciate it if I could be accepted! (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
11.假定你是李晴, 国庆节期间你回了趟老家, 感慨于农村的机械化发展。请你给留学生朋友Jack写一封邮件, 邀请他下月底放假期间到你家做客。内容包括:
1. 介绍你的家乡;
2. 发出邀请。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Qing
【答案】Dear Jack,
How have you been recently? I recently returned to my hometown during the National Day holiday and was amazed by the rapid mechanization development in the rural areas. My hometown, located in the countryside, has transformed significantly. Modern agricultural machinery is now the norm, making farming more efficient and less labor-intensive. I’d like to invite you to visit my hometown at the end of next month when you have your break. It would be a great opportunity for you to experience the charm of rural China .
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Qing
【来源】辽宁省大连王府高级中学2024-2025学年高二上学期第二学段考试英语试卷
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Jack写一封邮件,邀请他下月底放假期间到自己家做客,并介绍自己的家乡以及家乡的机械化发展。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
惊讶:amazed→astonished
迅速的:rapid→fast
显著地:significantly→remarkably
机会:opportunity→chance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My hometown, located in the countryside, has transformed significantly.
拓展句:My hometown, which is located in the countryside, has transformed significantly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My hometown, located in the countryside, has transformed significantly.(运用了过去分词作定语)
【高分句型2】It would be a great opportunity for you to experience the charm of rural China.(运用了it作形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式短语)
12.假如你是高中学生李华,是学校志愿者协会的负责人,急需招募环保志愿者。请你用英语写一则招聘启事。内容包括以下要点:
(1)工作内容要求;
(2)对志愿者的要求。
注意:
(1)词数80词左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
New Volunteers Wanted
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【答案】One possible version:
New Volunteers Wanted
The Volunteer Association of our school is in urgent need of environmental protection volunteers.
The main tasks include organizing and participating in various activities such as garbage sorting, tree planting, and the promotion of environmental awareness. Volunteers are expected to actively engage in these activities and inspire others to care for the environment.
We have the following requirements for volunteers. Firstly, you should be passionate about environmental protection and have a strong sense of responsibility. Secondly, good communication skills are necessary as you may need to interact with different people. Moreover, you should be available to work at weekends or during holidays.
Looking forward to your participation!
【来源】辽宁省大连市滨城高中联盟2024-2025学年高二上学期期中联考英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校志愿者协会写一则招聘启事,招募环保志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in → take part in
各种各样的:various → a variety of
首先:firstly → first of all
有必要的:necessary → essential
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The main tasks include organizing and participating in various activities such as garbage sorting, tree planting, and the promotion of environmental awareness.
拓展句:The main tasks include organizing and participating in various activities, which ranges from garbage sorting, tree planting to the promotion of environmental awareness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Volunteers are expected to actively engage in these activities and inspire others to care for the environment.(运用了动词不定式作补语)
【高分句型2】Secondly, good communication skills are necessary as you may need to interact with different people.(运用了as引导的状语从句)
13.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jackson得知在国庆节期间你和家人一起去当地植物园游玩。他对此很感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 游玩经历;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jackson,
I was thrilled to hear that you are interested in my National Day trip to the local botanical garden with my family. We explored various themed gardens and saw a wide variety of plants, from lush tropical ferns to colorful flowers. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made it a delightful experience. I found it fascinating how each plant had its own story and purpose in the ecosystem.
This visit deepened my appreciation for nature and how important it is to preserve our natural world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【来源】辽宁省普通高中2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友Jackson得知在国庆节期间你和家人一起去当地植物园游玩。他对此很感兴趣,请考生给他写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
探索:explore→probe into
各种各样的:various→a variety of
令人愉快的:delightful→pleasant
重要的:important→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We explored various themed gardens and saw a wide variety of plants, from lush tropical ferns to colorful flowers.
拓展句:We explored various themed gardens and saw a wide variety of plants, which are from lush tropical ferns to colorful flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was thrilled to hear that you are interested in my National Day trip to the local botanical garden with my family. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I found it fascinating how each plant had its own story and purpose in the ecosystem. (运用了it作形式宾语,how引导宾语从句)
14.假定你是树人中学高中生李华,最近你校英文网站在进行征文活动,主题是“Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits”。你打算写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.孩子形成好的行为习惯很重要;
2.父母对孩子行为习惯负责的原因;
3.给父母一些培养孩子良好习惯的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.短文标题已经为你写好。
Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits
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【答案】Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits
Forming good behaviour habits is crucial for children’s growth and future success. Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits because they are the primary role models and educators in a child’s life.
To cultivate good habits in children, parents should lead by example, demonstrating respect, honesty, and responsibility in their daily lives. Additionally, setting clear rules and consistent rewards and punishments can effectively reinforce positive behaviour. Encouraging participation in extracurricular activities and fostering a love for learning will also contribute to their overall development.
【来源】辽宁省锦州市某校2024-2025学年高二上学期期中质量检测英语试卷
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是树人中学高中生李华,最近学校英文网站在进行征文活动,主题是“Parents should be responsible for their children’s behaviour habits”。要求考生写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:crucial→essential
展示:demonstrate→ showcase
此外:additionally→in addition
增强:reinforce→ strengthen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Additionally, setting clear rules and consistent rewards and punishments can effectively reinforce positive behaviour.
拓展句: Additionally, setting clear rules and consistent rewards and punishments can effectively reinforce positive behavior, which is greatly important for children.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Forming good behaviour habits is crucial for children’s growth and future success. (运用了动名词作主语的结构)
【高分句型2】To cultivate good habits in children, parents should lead by example, demonstrating respect, honesty, and responsibility in their daily lives. (运用了to do不定式作状语以及现在分词作状语的结构)
15.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Emily来信说她非常喜欢中国的民族舞,并打算最近来中国学习民族舞,想请你帮她推荐一位舞蹈老师。请你根据以下要点给她写一封信,推荐一位老师。
要点:
1. 写信目的;
2. 推荐该老师的原因;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Emily,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Emily,
Glad to hear that you are going to learn Chinese folk dance in China. I’m more than happy to recommend an excellent teacher, Miss Chen, to you.
Miss Chen is the best dance teacher in our school. You know, I love folk dance. I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me. And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful. She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me. Besides this, Miss Chen is patient and enthusiastic about teaching. I believe you will achieve a lot with her help.
I sincerely wish you good luck to be Miss Chen’s student.
Yours,
Li Hua
【来源】辽宁省沈阳市沈阳市郊联体2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中英语试题
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Emily写一封信,向她推荐一位舞蹈老师。
【详解】1.词汇积累
优秀的:excellent → superb
给某人留下印象:impress somebody → make an impression on somebody
狂热的:enthusiastic → crazy
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:And I have seen almost all of her performances in our school. Her peacock dance is wonderful.
拓展句:And I have seen almost all of the performances given by Miss Chen in our school, whose peacock dance is wonderful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I used to watch Miss Chen’s performances of Chinese folk dance, which really impressed me.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】She has helped many students who want to learn folk dance, including me.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
16.假如你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目正在为上周学校运动会征集稿件,请你就你参加的一个项目或令你印象最深的一个项目,写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点包括:1. 比赛过程;2. 赛后感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 Last week, I participated in our school sports meeting, competing in the 400-meter race - a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing around me. My attempts to match the pace of fellow runners proved challenging, but I didn’t give up. I pushed myself to the limit and crossed the finishing line with all my strength.
Through the race, I learned that doing sports contributes to our health both physically and mentally. Sports and health are inseparable!
【来源】辽宁省大连市第二十四中学2024-2025学年度高二上学期英语期中考试试卷
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,写一写上周参加学校运动会的比赛过程和赛后感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
冲:dash→charge
证明:prove→turn out
尽全力:with all my strength→with all my might
有助于:contribute to→conduce to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, competing in the 400-meter race - a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
拓展句:Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, where I competed in the 400-meter race - a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing around me.(运用了独立主格结构)
【高分句型2】Through the race, I learned that doing sports contributes to our health both physically and mentally.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,动名词作主语)
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