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阅读下面材料，标黑加粗艺术字，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 2025届天一联考模拟题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Nikki (人物1) Corbett was desperate (人物神态描写). The mother and small business owner (人物1的身份) had searched online and in stores near her home in Alaska' s Kenai Peninsula, but she could not find any books to teach her young children the Yup’ ik language. Growing up (现在分词做伴随动作), Corbett was more fluent in the language-because she lived largely in (主要生活在某地) the Yup’ ik Community of Bethel, Alaska. “And so obviously being immersed in that (现在分词短语做原因状语), you understand more and can speak more”, Corbett said. “ But being away from it (现在分词做原因状语)-the community that I live in, Yup’ik is not a language that’s normally spoken. More than 20% of the state’s population is native. Of the estimated 21 ,000 Alaskans who identify themselves as Yup ’ ik, nearly half speak the language. In fact, Yup' ik is the most commonly spoken native language in Alaska. Corbett might have been immersed in Yup' ik culture when she was growing up in Bethel. But that was not the case for every Alaska native. The control of native Americans and ignorance toward native language and culture had a lot to do with it. “The younger generations, like my generation, in some of those areas , don't know the language because their parents didn't teach them to speak Yup' ik,” Corbett said. “ And so I think it's because they wanted their children to follow suit, speaking the official language (现在分词做伴随动作), especially at school. ” There are immersion schools (后文可以衔接考虑) in Alaska that have Yup’ ik learning materials, but Corbett said it was nearly impossible to find those books outside the classroom. So Corbett - and her friend, Katie O’Connor (人物2), an illustrator and mother (插入语说明人物身份) - decided to create their own Yup'ik alphabet(字母表)coloring book (核心事件，alphabet可以在后续衔接使用). Katie O’Connor is an Inupiag artist based in Nome (过去分词做后置定语), Alaska. Growing up (现在分词做伴随动作), O’ Connor didn't learn much about her own lnupiag culture until after high school (也是可以考虑的 一个衔接点).“ There' s not a lot available out there. Most of the books related to any Alaska native culture (过去分词短语做后置定语) are written by non-native people," O’ Connor said. “ Most of them are written by people who aren't from Alaska, and some are written by people who’ve never been to our region. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Corbett and O’ Connor decided to team up with each other. Paragraph 2: Hardly had the 27-page coloring book appeared when it earned great popularity. 2025届天一联考模拟题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Nikki Corbett was desperate. The mother and small business owner had searched online and in stores near her home in Alaska' s Kenai Peninsula, but she could not find any books to teach her young children the Yup’ ik language. Growing up, Corbett was more fluent in the language-because she lived largely in the Yup’ ik Community of Bethel, Alaska. “And so obviously being immersed in that, you understand more and can speak more , Corbett said. “ But being away from it-the community that I live in, Yup’ik is not a language that’s normally spoken. More than 20% of the state’s population is native. Of the estimated 21 ,000 Alaskans who identify themselves as Yup ’ ik, nearly half speak the language. In fact, Yup' ik is the most commonly spoken native language in Alaska. Corbett might have been immersed in Yup' ik culture when she was growing up in Bethel. But that was not the case for every Alaska native. The control of native Americans and ignorance toward native language and culture had a lot to do with it. The younger generations, like my generation, in some of those areas, don't know the language because their parents didn't teach them to speak Yup' ik,” Corbett said. “ And so I think it's because they wanted their children to follow suit, speaking the official language, especially at school. ” There are immersion schools in Alaska that have Yup’ ik learning materials, but Corbett said it was nearly impossible to find those books outside the classroom. So Corbett-and her friend, Katie O’Connor, an illustrator and mother-decided to create their own Yup'ik alphabet(字母表)coloring book. Katie O’Connor is an Inupiag artist based in Nome, Alaska. Growing up, O’ Connor didn't learn much about her own lnupiag culture until after high school.“ There' s not a lot available out there. Most of the books related to any Alaska native culture are written by non-native people," O’ Connor said. “ Most of them are written by people who aren't from Alaska, and some are written by people who’ve never been to our region. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Corbett and O’ Connor decided to team up with each other. Paragraph 2: Hardly had the 27-page coloring book appeared when it earned great popularity. Scarcely .... when / no sooner .... than 一...就 upon doing sth/ The instant / moment / minute / second...The moment I stepped into / onto 1. 读后续写类型分析 该文章属于文化传承与个人奋斗类读后续写，主题围绕“保护土著语言和文化”展开，重点描写主人公如何克服困难、合作创作书籍的过程。 2. 读后续写构思与布局 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Nikki Corbett：决心传承母语的母亲；Katie O’Connor：艺术家，同样关注文化缺失问题 “Nikki Corbett was desperate.” / “Katie O’Connor is an Inupiag artist...” 情感层次 焦急→决心→合作→成就感 “desperate” / “decided to create their own” 关键情节点 找不到教材→决定合作→书籍出版→受欢迎 “could not find any books” / “decided to team up” 语言特色 口语化表达，突出真实情感（如“desperate”） “And so obviously being immersed in that...” 关键词分析 “desperate”“immersion”“coloring book”“team up” 贯穿全文的关键词 心理描写 对文化流失的担忧，对孩子的责任感 “wanted their children to follow suit...” 动作描写 搜索书籍、合作创作 “searched online and in stores” / “decided to create” 环境描写 阿拉斯加语言环境（Yup’ik使用率下降） “Yup’ik is not a language that’s normally spoken.” 隐含主题 文化传承的重要性，少数族裔的自我救赎 通过两位母亲的行动体现 情感转折 从无助到主动行动 “desperate” → “decided to create” 空间转换 家庭→社区→更广泛的读者群体 从个人需求扩展到社会影响 时间过渡 过去（童年）→现在（母亲身份）→未来（书籍出版） “Growing up...” / “The mother and small business owner...” 3. 故事山模式分析 阶段 内容 原文线索 背景 Yup’ik语言流失问题 “More than 20% of the state’s population is native...” 冲突 母亲找不到教材 “could not find any books” 上升行动 决定与朋友合作创作 “decided to create their own” 高潮 书籍出版并受欢迎 （续写部分需体现） 解决 文化传承的希望 （续写部分需体现） 伏笔与冲突点： 伏笔：Katie O’Connor的艺术家身份（暗示合作可行性）；“immersion schools”存在教材（但普通人无法获取）。 冲突：文化断层（父母不教孩子Yup’ik）、资源稀缺。 隐含线索：非土著作者写的书不准确（暗示需要土著自己创作）。 解决方案：合作出版本土化教材。 3. 推荐英文例句（动作/心理/环境描写）及翻译 动作描写（Action） 1. She flipped through the pages of the old dictionary, her fingers trembling with anticipation. Expectation （她翻动着旧字典的页边，手指因期待而颤抖。） 2. He scribbled down the Yup’ik words hastily, afraid he might forget them. （他匆忙写下尤皮克语单词，生怕忘记。）cre ate describe 3. The children eagerly traced the letters with their crayons, giggling at the funny shapes. （孩子们用蜡笔认真描摹字母，被奇怪的形状逗笑。） 4. She carefully arranged the handmade flashcards on the table, making sure each one was visible. （她小心翼翼地把自制闪卡摆在桌上，确保每一张都清晰可见。） 5. His hands shook as he held the first printed copy of their book, unable to believe their dream had come true. （他双手颤抖地捧着他们书籍的第一本印刷版，不敢相信梦想成真。） 6. They huddled together under the dim lamplight, brainstorming ideas late into the night. （他们在昏暗的灯光下挤在一起，深夜仍在头脑风暴。） 7. She gently pressed the stamp onto the envelope, sealing their manuscript for submission. （她轻轻地把印章按在信封上，封存他们的投稿手稿。） 8. The artist’s pencil glided smoothly across the paper, bringing the Yup’ik symbols to life. （艺术家的铅笔在纸上流畅滑动，让尤皮克符号栩栩如生。） 9. He nodded in approval as he reviewed the final draft, satisfied with their hard work. （他审阅最终稿时点头表示认可，对辛勤工作感到满意。） 10. The kids clapped their hands in excitement when they saw the colorful illustrations. （孩子们看到彩色插图时兴奋地拍手。） 心理描写（Emotion/Thoughts） 1. A wave of frustration washed over her as she realized how few resources were available. （当她意识到资源如此匮乏时，一阵沮丧感袭来。） 2. Doubt crept into his mind—would anyone even care about their project? （怀疑悄悄爬上心头——真的会有人在意他们的项目吗？） 3. Her heart swelled with pride when she saw her child speaking a Yup’ik word correctly. （当她听到孩子正确说出一个尤皮克语单词时，心中充满自豪。） 4. Anxiety gnawed at her as the publication date approached—what if nobody bought it? （随着出版日期临近，焦虑啃噬着她——如果没人买怎么办？） 5. A flicker of hope ignited in her chest when she received the first positive feedback. （当她收到第一个积极反馈时，心中燃起一丝希望。） 6. He wrestled with guilt—why hadn’t he learned his ancestral language sooner? （他内心挣扎着愧疚——为什么没有早点学习祖传语言？） 7. A sense of accomplishment settled over them as they held the finished book. （当他们拿着完成的书时，一种成就感油然而生。） 8. She bit her lip nervously, wondering if their efforts would make a difference. （她紧张地咬着嘴唇，不知道他们的努力是否会带来改变。） 9. His determination hardened—no matter what, he would preserve his culture. （他的决心更加坚定——无论如何，他都要保护自己的文化。） 10. Relief flooded through her when the first batch of books sold out instantly. （当第一批书瞬间售罄时，她如释重负。） 环境描写（Setting/Atmosphere） The small Alaskan village was blanketed in snow, its quiet streets echoing with distant laughter. （阿拉斯加小村庄被雪覆盖，寂静的街道回荡着远处的笑声。） The cozy workshop smelled of fresh paper and ink, a sanctuary for creativity. （温馨的工作室弥漫着纸张和墨水的气味，是创意的避风港。） Outside, the wind howled like a lonely wolf, but inside, the warmth of shared purpose kept them going. （外面，风像孤独的狼一样嚎叫，但屋内，共同的目标带来的温暖让他们坚持下去。） The dim glow of the computer screen illuminated their tired but determined faces. （电脑屏幕的微光照亮了他们疲惫但坚定的脸庞。） The community center buzzed with excitement as people gathered for the book launch. （社区中心因新书发布会而热闹非凡。） Frost coated the windows, but the children’s laughter melted the icy atmosphere. （冰霜覆盖窗户，但孩子们的笑声融化了冰冷的氛围。） The scent of burning cedar from a nearby stove mixed with the crisp winter air. （附近炉子里燃烧的雪松香气与清新的冬日空气交织。） The rhythmic sound of pages turning filled the quiet library. （翻页的节奏声充满了安静的图书馆。） Golden afternoon sunlight streamed through the curtains, casting a warm glow on the manuscript. （金色的午后阳光透过窗帘，洒在手稿上，映出温暖的光芒。） The distant call of a raven echoed across the tundra, a reminder of their ancestral stories. （远处渡鸦的叫声回荡在苔原上，提醒着他们祖先的故事。） 4. 高级替换词 & 场景分类 基础词 高级替换词 适用场景 happy elated (狂喜的) 成功时刻（如书籍出版时） sad despondent (沮丧的) 文化流失的悲伤 important paramount (至关重要的) 强调文化保护的重要性 difficult arduous (艰巨的) 描述保护语言的挑战 beautiful exquisite (精致的) 形容插画或书籍设计 5. 固定搭配 & 词法解析 固定搭配（Collocations） Preserve one’s heritage（保护文化遗产） They worked tirelessly to preserve their Yup’ik heritage. Bridge the gap（弥合差距） The book bridged the gap between generations. Gain traction（获得关注） Their project finally gained traction after media coverage. Strike a chord（引起共鸣） Her words struck a chord with indigenous communities. Breathe life into（赋予生命） The illustrations breathed life into the ancient language. 可积累语料（Words & Phrases） 单词/短语 词性 词义 近义词 反义词 例句 desperate adj. 绝望的 hopeless hopeful She was desperate to find a solution. immersion n. 沉浸 submersion detachment Language immersion helps fluency. illustrator n. 插画师 artist — Katie worked as a children’s book illustrator. heritage n. 遗产 legacy — They fought to protect their cultural heritage. flourish v. 繁荣 thrive decline The language began to flourish again. 6. 续写语料库总结 动作描写：翻页（flip through）、描摹（trace）、颤抖（tremble）、点头（nod）、拍手（clap） 心理描写：沮丧（frustration）、怀疑（doubt）、自豪（pride）、焦虑（anxiety）、希望（hope） 环境描写：雪覆盖（blanketed in snow）、工作室气味（smell of ink）、风声（wind howled）、阳光（sunlight streamed） 6. Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Corbett and O’Connor decided to team up with each other. Corbett reached out to O’Connor, sharing her frustration over the lack of authentic Yup’ik resources (现在分词做伴随动作). To her relief, O’Connor immediately agreed, her eyes lighting up at the idea of combining art with cultural preservation (独立主格刻画人物的心理). They spent nights brainstorming—Corbett drafting simple Yup’ik words and phrases (独立主格刻画人物动作), while O’Connor sketched playful illustrations (衔接原文人物身份) of Arctic animals and traditional tools. “This isn’t just a book,” O’Connor whispered, her pencil hovering over a drawing of a traditional item (独立主格刻画人物的创新). “It’s a bridge for our children to cross back to their roots.” Paragraph 2: Hardly had the 27-page coloring book appeared when it earned great popularity. The book, titled “Yup’ik Language” (过去分词做后置定语), sold out within days. Teachers from remote villages emailed requests for copies; grandparents tearfully thanked the duo for “bringing our words home.” Even non-native families embraced it, sparking (现在分词短语做结果状语) conversations about Alaska’s indigenous heritage. As Corbett watched her daughter color a sketch while correctly pronouncing a word in Yup’ik, she knew—this was more than success. It was healing. Version 1 Paragraph 1: Corbett and O’Connor decided to team up with each other. Recognizing (现在分词做原因状语) their shared passion for preserving Yup’ik culture, they immediately began brainstorming ideas. Corbett, with her deep understanding of the language (衔接 原文), drafted simple yet meaningful words and phrases, while O’Connor, her fingers dancing across the sketchpad (独立主格刻画人物的状态), brought them to life with vibrant illustrations of Arctic wildlife and traditional tools. Late into the night, they worked side by side, their determination unwavering despite the challenges (独立主格刻画人物的状态). “This isn’t just a book,” O’Connor murmured, her eyes fixed on a drawing of an illustration (独立主格刻画人物的神态). “It’s a way (递进句式) to reconnect our children with their roots.” Corbett nodded, her heart swelling with hope (独立主格刻画人物状态)—finally, they were doing something tangible to combat the erosion of their heritage (adj短语做后置定语). Paragraph 2: Hardly had the 27-page coloring book appeared when it earned great popularity. Requests poured in from local schools and indigenous communities (刻画书籍的火爆程度), each message brimming with gratitude (独立主格补充). Elders, their voices trembling with emotion (独立资格刻画人物), shared stories of how the book had sparked conversations about forgotten words. Even non-native families embraced it, their children eagerly pointing at the illustrations and repeating the Yup’ik terms (独立主格，描写孩子们的反应). Corbett’s own daughter, clutching the book tightly (现在分词短语做后置定语), proudly recited the words in the book at dinner, her mispronunciation met with laughter and gentle correction (独立主格). The book’s success wasn’t just measured in sales—it was (递进句式) in the way it bridged generations, turning cultural preservation into a shared joy (现在分词短语做结果状语). Version 2 Paragraph 1: Corbett and O’Connor decided to team up with each other. With Corbett’s linguistic expertise and O’Connor’s artistic flair (衔接原文), their collaboration was seamless (描写合作). They transformed Corbett’s kitchen table into a makeshift studio, scattered with drafts of alphabet pages and half-finished sketches of the traditional items (过去分词做后置定语). O’Connor’s pencil moved with precision, capturing the curves of Yup’ik symbols (现在分词做伴随动作), while Corbett cross-checked each word against her childhood memories (人物1/2的动作描写及衔接原文). “We’re not just teaching letters,” Corbett said, tracing a finger over O’Connor’s latest drawing. “We’re (递进句式) keeping stories alive.” The weight of their mission settled between them—this was more than a project; it was a lifeline for a fading language (递进句式). Paragraph 2: Hardly had the 27-page coloring book appeared when it earned great popularity. Social media buzzed with photos of children coloring its pages (现在分词做伴随动作), their parents marveling at how quickly they picked up the language (独立主格刻画人物状态 ). A teacher from local school emailed, asking for permission to use the book in her classroom (现在分词多伴随动作), calling it “the missing link” in her curriculum (现在分词做伴随动作). At a community activity, an elder clasped Corbett’s hands, tears glistening (独立主格描写人物神态) as she whispered“thank you” in Yup’ik. The book’s impact rippled far beyond their expectations (描写书本的影响深远), proving (现在分词做结果状语) that even small efforts could reignite pride in a culture many had feared was lost. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Corbett and O’Connor decided to team up with each other. Their first meeting was electric—O’Connor spread out her sketches of cats and sled dogs, while Corbett scribbled phonetic guides beside each Yup’ik word (衔接的人物特点). They debated colors (O’Connor insisted on earthy tones; Corbett wanted brighter hues for kids) (注意这种总分结构的写法)and laughed over mispronunciations. “Remember,” O’Connor said, erasing a line to perfect a sketch (现在分词做伴随动作), “this book has to feel like home.” Corbett agreed, recalling her youth-hood memories (现在分词做伴随动作，衔接原文). The project became a labor of love, each page infused with the warmth of shared memories and the urgency of preservation (独立主格刻画书籍创作). Paragraph 2: Hardly had the 27-page coloring book appeared when it earned great popularity. Local news featured it as “a triumph of indigenous creativity,” and libraries statewide added it to their collections. At a signing event, a shy boy approached Corbett, holding a well-worn copy (现在分词做伴随动作). “I taught my dad fish in Yup’ik,” he confessed, beaming (现在分词做伴随动作，刻画表情). O’Connor, overhearing, squeezed Corbett’s arm—this was why they’d done it. The book wasn’t just preserving language; it was rebuilding connections (递进句式), one colorful page at a time. 语料积累与亮点分析 地道搭配 & 替换词 原文词 升级替换 例句 Work together Team up / Collaborate They teamed up to tackle the project. Happy Elated / Overjoyed She was elated by the book’s reception. Important Crucial / Vital Preserving language is vital for identity. Draw Sketch / Illustrate O’Connor sketched Arctic animals. Teach Educate / Pass down They aimed to pass down Yup’ik traditions. 情绪描写亮点 Heart swelling with hope (充满希望) Voice trembling with emotion (声音因激动而颤抖) Weight of their mission settled between them (使命感沉重) 动作描写亮点 Fingers dancing across the sketchpad (手指在素描本上舞动) Clutching the book tightly (紧紧抓着书) Erasure to perfect a line (擦除以修正线条) 高级语法加分点 倒装句：Hardly had the book appeared when... 分词作状语：Her fingers trembling, she turned the page. 虚拟语气：If they hadn’t collaborated, the language might have faded. 联想词拓展 Cultural revival (文化复兴) → Their book sparked a cultural revival. Ancestral wisdom (祖先智慧) → The pages brimmed with ancestral wisdom. Linguistic bridge (语言桥梁) → It served as a linguistic bridge between generations. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $