第37讲 道歉信（复习讲义）（北京专用） 2026年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

第37讲 道歉信 目录 01 考情解码·命题预警 2 02 体系构建·思维可视 3 03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 4 智能解码 4 知识点1 写作技巧 4 知识点2 经典必背 4 考向破译 8 【思路点拨】 04真题溯源·考向感知 10 01 考情解码·命题预警 考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年 道歉信 选择题 非选择题 / / / 考情分析： 1. 体裁稳定，建议信为核心 绝对主导：建议信 是出现频率最高的体裁。近五年高考真题中，2023、2024、2025年均为建议信。模拟题中也大量出现，如推荐拍摄主题、活动方案、学习方法和课程设计等。 其他常见类型：邀请信（2022）、道歉信（2021）、感谢信、求助信、投稿征文等也有考查，需全面复习。 2. 命题形式固定，提纲式为主 所有题目均采用“提纲式”命题，给出2-3个明确的内容要点。 写作情境完整，通常包括：作者身份（李华）、读者对象（主要是Jim）、写作目的、具体内容要点。 3. 题材贴近生活，彰显时代与文化 校园生活：社团活动、课程设计、毕业季、征文比赛、科技创意大赛等。 中国文化：向国际友人介绍中国成就（发展、遗产、文学、戏曲）、家风传统等，具有鲜明的“讲好中国故事”的特色。 社会热点：环境保护、科技应用（AI、自媒体）、心理健康、志愿服务等，紧扣时代脉搏。 复习目标： 1.掌握不同体裁格式：学生要牢记书信类应用文的基本格式，包括称呼、正文、结束语、署名等。对于不同体裁，如建议信、邀请信、道歉信等，要明确各自的语气和表达特点。建议信语气委婉、有建设性；邀请信热情诚恳；道歉信态度诚恳、愧疚 。通过专项练习，让学生能熟练准确地写出规范格式，避免因格式错误导致扣分。 2. 积累丰富词汇和句型：词汇上，积累与各类话题相关的常用词汇，如环保主题的 “environmental protection”“raise awareness”；文化交流主题的 “cultural exchange”“harmonious global community” 等。同时，掌握常见的高级同义替换词汇，如 “glad - delighted”“suggest - advise” 等，丰富语言表达。句型方面，学会运用各种从句，如定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等，提升文章的复杂度和准确性。通过背诵、仿写包含这些词汇和句型的例句，让学生能在写作中灵活运用。 3. 提升逻辑思维能力：训练学生在写作时条理清晰地组织内容。以建议信为例，学会先明确提出建议，再分点阐述理由，使建议和理由之间逻辑紧密。在道歉信中，合理安排道歉、解释原因、提出弥补措施的顺序，增强文章的逻辑性和说服力。可以通过分析优秀范文的逻辑结构，让学生进行模仿写作，逐渐形成自己的逻辑思维模式。 02 体系构建·思维可视 03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 智能解码 知识点1 写作技巧 1 命题规律 道歉信通常是在因自己的爽约、过失或疏忽给他人带来麻烦、不便、损失或造成伤害并在自己发觉或他人指出的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。 这类信件往往具有明确的写作目的，即修复受损的关系，表达真诚的歉意，并可能提出弥补措施或解决方案。在命题时，会注重考察考生对于道歉情境的理解，以及能否恰当地运用英语表达歉意、解释原因，并展现出积极解决问题的态度。同时，命题也会关注考生是否能根据具体情境，灵活运用语言技巧，如选择合适的语气、使用恰当的礼貌用语等，以使道歉信更加真诚、得体。 2 写作思路点拨 一般来说，此类题目的题干对需要道歉的某事都说得比较清楚，但是其他部分则表述得非常笼统，所以考生在写作时要特别注意扩充题干增加具体内容，以达到题目所规定的字数要求。 第一段：开门见山，表明写信目的，表达歉意。 第二段：说明道歉的具体原因，并提出补救措施。 第三段：再次道歉，请求原谅，并希望得到原谅。语言诚挚，理由真实充分。 知识点2 经典必背 1 常用词汇 1.keep promise 信守诺言 2.be absent/present from 缺席/出席 3.apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 4.show an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 5.make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 6.say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉 7.beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅 8.cause inconvenience 造成不便 9.miss/cancel the appointment 错过/取消约会 10.make up for.… 弥补 11.express my regret 表达我的道歉 12.be considerate of 体谅 13.accept my apology 接受我的道歉 14.conflict with... 与……冲突 15.have no choice/option but to do sth.除了做某事别无选择 16.make a choice 选择 2 必背开头段 1.I'm writing to make an apology to you for not being able to see you off at the airport as planned. 我写信为没能按计划去机场送你向你道歉 2.I would like to take this opportunity to offer an apology to you for failing to keep you company to the museum as scheduled. 我想为我没能按计划陪你去博物馆向你道歉。 3.I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to attend your birthday party next saturday evening.我写这封信是要 表达我最深的歉意，因为不能参加你下星期六的生日聚会 4.I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to pick you up at the airport. 我写这封信是要表达我最深的歉意，因为没能到机场接你 5.I am very sorry that I can not go on a trip to BeiJing with you next weekend，which I have promised you.我很抱歉下周我不能和你一起去北京旅游了，这是我答应你的 6. It is a pity I'll miss such as a valuable opportunity to share my thoughts with you about Steve Jobs，who has changed the way we live.很遗憾我将错过和你分享有关Steve Jobs的宝贵的机会，他改变了我们的生活方式 3 必背主题句 To my regret, I was unable to meet you at the airport because something unexpected came up. 令人遗憾的是，我无法在机场接你，因为发生了一些意外的事情。 The reason for my mistake was...我犯错的原因是…… So important is the activity that I couldn't miss it. 这个活动是如此重要，所以我不能错过它。 Hardly had I left my home, when it began to rain, leading to my catching a cold. 我刚离开家，天就开始下雨了，导致我感冒了。 What is the pity is that I couldn't attend your lecture in this case. 令人遗憾的是我因此无法参加你的讲座了。 My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to the hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I'm afraid that I'll have to take care of her these days. 我妈妈昨天突然病倒了,被带去了医院,并且我的爸爸现在在北京出差,恐怕我这几天都要去照顾她 I'm afraid that I'll have to cancel our meeting, as something unexpected has come up. 对不起我不得不取消会议,因为临时发生了点意外情况 The reason for my absence was that I had to take my father to the hospital. 我缺席的原因是我不得不送我父亲去医院 I know my mistake has caused a lot of inconvenience for you.So to make up for my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? 非常抱歉我的错误给您带来诸多不便，为了弥补这一过错，可以把截止日期延长到下周五吗？ I wonder if we could put off the meeting until next Monday if that's OK with you. 我们可以把这个会议推迟到下周一再开吗？ I’m really sorry, but I have no choice but to ... 非常抱歉，但是我除了.....毫无选择。 You know I have no intention to break our appointment, so shall we make it next Sunday if you’re available? 您知道我并非有意爽约，如果您有空的话，我们下周日再约如何? To make up for it, I am wondering whether it is convenient for you to ... 为了弥补这一点，我想知道你是否方便......... 4 必背结尾句 1. I do apologize again for any inconvenience the changes might bring to you. 再次为这些变动可能给您带来的不便表示抱歉 2. Please allow me to say sorry again. I do hope you will understand and excuse me for cancelling our appointment temporarily. 请允许我再次说声抱歉，希望您能理解并原谅我临时取消了约定 3. I'm truly sorry for my absence,and I hope you will accept my apology. 我真诚的为我的缺席道歉，希望您能接受我的道歉 4. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for... Will you be available this Sunday morning? 无论如何，我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗？ 5. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence/this unexpected change and all the best wishes to you. 再次为我的缺席/意外的变化给您带来的任何不便表示歉意，并向你致以最美好的祝愿。 6. I’m in the sincere hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology. 我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并且接受我的道歉。 7. Once again, I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by this unexpected change. 对于这一意外变化给您带来的不便，我再次表示诚挚的歉意。 5 满分模版必背 Dear （道歉对象）, I would like to express my deepest apology for ___________________________（道歉的事由） The reason why I will fail to do so/can't make it is that___________________________（说明原因）.Would you mind if I suggest___________________________（弥补措施）？ Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused（再次道歉）.Hope you can accept my sincere apology. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 考向破译 例1 (2021·北京·高考) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【解题思路】 一、审题立意 核心任务： ①为取消约会真诚道歉并给出合理解释； ②提出替代性建议以弥补对方，并说明新建议的优点。 身份与关系：你是李华，收信人是英国好友Jim。语气应诚恳、自然、友善，既要表达歉意，又要维护友谊。 关键：原因要具体但无需过度细节（保护隐私）；新建议要体现出诚意和用心，让收信人感到被重视。 二、内容构思 道歉与原因：原因应是不可控的、正当的，如重要的学校活动（模拟考试、班级会议）、家庭事务或突发健康状况。避免说“我有其他事”这种模糊的理由。 新建议与理由：新建议应与原计划有一定关联性或更具吸引力。理由应围绕“对新建议的期待”和“对双方的好处”展开。 三、结构规划 首段：直接表达歉意，提及取消的约会，并简要说明原因。 主体段：提出新的约会建议，并详细阐述该建议的亮点和理由，以激发对方的兴趣。 结尾段：再次致歉，请求理解，并期待对方对新建议的回复。 【变式训练1】（24-25高三上·北京·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。本学期你校开展了“健康一起来”体育活动，请你用英文写一篇倡议书，题为“Sports and Fitness”。内容包括： 1.同学们参与运动的情况； 2.你的倡议。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank you! Li Hua 【变式训练2·变考法】假定你是李华，在学校组织的国际文化交流活动筹备中，你负责制作展示各国文化特色的PowerPoint。但由于电脑故障，你未能在规定日期前完成任务。请你给负责此次活动的外教Mr Johnson 写一封道歉信，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.补救措施和预计完成时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr Johnson, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 04真题溯源·考向感知 1．（2016·全国·高考真题） 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. （2014·北京卷） 你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游； 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往； 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 注意： 1.词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. （2014·山东卷） 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因； 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等） 注意： 1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第37讲 道歉信 目录 01 考情解码·命题预警 2 02 体系构建·思维可视 5 03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 5 智能解码 5 知识点1 写作技巧 5 知识点2 经典必背 6 考向破译 9 【思路点拨】 04真题溯源·考向感知 14 01 考情解码·命题预警 考点要求 考察形式 2025年 2024年 2023年 道歉信 选择题 非选择题 / / / 考情分析： 1. 体裁稳定，建议信为核心 绝对主导：建议信 是出现频率最高的体裁。近五年高考真题中，2023、2024、2025年均为建议信。模拟题中也大量出现，如推荐拍摄主题、活动方案、学习方法和课程设计等。 其他常见类型：邀请信（2022）、道歉信（2021）、感谢信、求助信、投稿征文等也有考查，需全面复习。 2. 命题形式固定，提纲式为主 所有题目均采用“提纲式”命题，给出2-3个明确的内容要点。 写作情境完整，通常包括：作者身份（李华）、读者对象（主要是Jim）、写作目的、具体内容要点。 3. 题材贴近生活，彰显时代与文化 校园生活：社团活动、课程设计、毕业季、征文比赛、科技创意大赛等。 中国文化：向国际友人介绍中国成就（发展、遗产、文学、戏曲）、家风传统等，具有鲜明的“讲好中国故事”的特色。 社会热点：环境保护、科技应用（AI、自媒体）、心理健康、志愿服务等，紧扣时代脉搏。 复习目标： 1.掌握不同体裁格式：学生要牢记书信类应用文的基本格式，包括称呼、正文、结束语、署名等。对于不同体裁，如建议信、邀请信、道歉信等，要明确各自的语气和表达特点。建议信语气委婉、有建设性；邀请信热情诚恳；道歉信态度诚恳、愧疚 。通过专项练习，让学生能熟练准确地写出规范格式，避免因格式错误导致扣分。 2. 积累丰富词汇和句型：词汇上，积累与各类话题相关的常用词汇，如环保主题的 “environmental protection”“raise awareness”；文化交流主题的 “cultural exchange”“harmonious global community” 等。同时，掌握常见的高级同义替换词汇，如 “glad - delighted”“suggest - advise” 等，丰富语言表达。句型方面，学会运用各种从句，如定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等，提升文章的复杂度和准确性。通过背诵、仿写包含这些词汇和句型的例句，让学生能在写作中灵活运用。 3. 提升逻辑思维能力：训练学生在写作时条理清晰地组织内容。以建议信为例，学会先明确提出建议，再分点阐述理由，使建议和理由之间逻辑紧密。在道歉信中，合理安排道歉、解释原因、提出弥补措施的顺序，增强文章的逻辑性和说服力。可以通过分析优秀范文的逻辑结构，让学生进行模仿写作，逐渐形成自己的逻辑思维模式。 02 体系构建·思维可视 03 核心突破·靶向攻坚 智能解码 知识点1 写作技巧 1 命题规律 道歉信通常是在因自己的爽约、过失或疏忽给他人带来麻烦、不便、损失或造成伤害并在自己发觉或他人指出的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。 这类信件往往具有明确的写作目的，即修复受损的关系，表达真诚的歉意，并可能提出弥补措施或解决方案。在命题时，会注重考察考生对于道歉情境的理解，以及能否恰当地运用英语表达歉意、解释原因，并展现出积极解决问题的态度。同时，命题也会关注考生是否能根据具体情境，灵活运用语言技巧，如选择合适的语气、使用恰当的礼貌用语等，以使道歉信更加真诚、得体。 2 写作思路点拨 一般来说，此类题目的题干对需要道歉的某事都说得比较清楚，但是其他部分则表述得非常笼统，所以考生在写作时要特别注意扩充题干增加具体内容，以达到题目所规定的字数要求。 第一段：开门见山，表明写信目的，表达歉意。 第二段：说明道歉的具体原因，并提出补救措施。 第三段：再次道歉，请求原谅，并希望得到原谅。语言诚挚，理由真实充分。 知识点2 经典必背 1 常用词汇 1.keep promise 信守诺言 2.be absent/present from 缺席/出席 3.apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 4.show an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 5.make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 6.say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉 7.beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅 8.cause inconvenience 造成不便 9.miss/cancel the appointment 错过/取消约会 10.make up for.… 弥补 11.express my regret 表达我的道歉 12.be considerate of 体谅 13.accept my apology 接受我的道歉 14.conflict with... 与……冲突 15.have no choice/option but to do sth.除了做某事别无选择 16.make a choice 选择 2 必背开头段 1.I'm writing to make an apology to you for not being able to see you off at the airport as planned. 我写信为没能按计划去机场送你向你道歉 2.I would like to take this opportunity to offer an apology to you for failing to keep you company to the museum as scheduled. 我想为我没能按计划陪你去博物馆向你道歉。 3.I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to attend your birthday party next saturday evening.我写这封信是要 表达我最深的歉意，因为不能参加你下星期六的生日聚会 4.I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to pick you up at the airport. 我写这封信是要表达我最深的歉意，因为没能到机场接你 5.I am very sorry that I can not go on a trip to BeiJing with you next weekend，which I have promised you.我很抱歉下周我不能和你一起去北京旅游了，这是我答应你的 6. It is a pity I'll miss such as a valuable opportunity to share my thoughts with you about Steve Jobs，who has changed the way we live.很遗憾我将错过和你分享有关Steve Jobs的宝贵的机会，他改变了我们的生活方式 3 必背主题句 To my regret, I was unable to meet you at the airport because something unexpected came up. 令人遗憾的是，我无法在机场接你，因为发生了一些意外的事情。 The reason for my mistake was...我犯错的原因是…… So important is the activity that I couldn't miss it. 这个活动是如此重要，所以我不能错过它。 Hardly had I left my home, when it began to rain, leading to my catching a cold. 我刚离开家，天就开始下雨了，导致我感冒了。 What is the pity is that I couldn't attend your lecture in this case. 令人遗憾的是我因此无法参加你的讲座了。 My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to the hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I'm afraid that I'll have to take care of her these days. 我妈妈昨天突然病倒了,被带去了医院,并且我的爸爸现在在北京出差,恐怕我这几天都要去照顾她 I'm afraid that I'll have to cancel our meeting, as something unexpected has come up. 对不起我不得不取消会议,因为临时发生了点意外情况 The reason for my absence was that I had to take my father to the hospital. 我缺席的原因是我不得不送我父亲去医院 I know my mistake has caused a lot of inconvenience for you.So to make up for my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? 非常抱歉我的错误给您带来诸多不便，为了弥补这一过错，可以把截止日期延长到下周五吗？ I wonder if we could put off the meeting until next Monday if that's OK with you. 我们可以把这个会议推迟到下周一再开吗？ I’m really sorry, but I have no choice but to ... 非常抱歉，但是我除了.....毫无选择。 You know I have no intention to break our appointment, so shall we make it next Sunday if you’re available? 您知道我并非有意爽约，如果您有空的话，我们下周日再约如何? To make up for it, I am wondering whether it is convenient for you to ... 为了弥补这一点，我想知道你是否方便......... 4 必背结尾句 1. I do apologize again for any inconvenience the changes might bring to you. 再次为这些变动可能给您带来的不便表示抱歉 2. Please allow me to say sorry again. I do hope you will understand and excuse me for cancelling our appointment temporarily. 请允许我再次说声抱歉，希望您能理解并原谅我临时取消了约定 3. I'm truly sorry for my absence,and I hope you will accept my apology. 我真诚的为我的缺席道歉，希望您能接受我的道歉 4. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for... Will you be available this Sunday morning? 无论如何，我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗？ 5. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence/this unexpected change and all the best wishes to you. 再次为我的缺席/意外的变化给您带来的任何不便表示歉意，并向你致以最美好的祝愿。 6. I’m in the sincere hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology. 我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并且接受我的道歉。 7. Once again, I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by this unexpected change. 对于这一意外变化给您带来的不便，我再次表示诚挚的歉意。 5 满分模版必背 Dear （道歉对象）, I would like to express my deepest apology for ___________________________（道歉的事由） The reason why I will fail to do so/can't make it is that___________________________（说明原因）.Would you mind if I suggest___________________________（弥补措施）？ Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused（再次道歉）.Hope you can accept my sincere apology. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 考向破译 例1 (2021·北京·高考) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【解题思路】 一、审题立意 核心任务： ①为取消约会真诚道歉并给出合理解释； ②提出替代性建议以弥补对方，并说明新建议的优点。 身份与关系：你是李华，收信人是英国好友Jim。语气应诚恳、自然、友善，既要表达歉意，又要维护友谊。 关键：原因要具体但无需过度细节（保护隐私）；新建议要体现出诚意和用心，让收信人感到被重视。 二、内容构思 道歉与原因：原因应是不可控的、正当的，如重要的学校活动（模拟考试、班级会议）、家庭事务或突发健康状况。避免说“我有其他事”这种模糊的理由。 新建议与理由：新建议应与原计划有一定关联性或更具吸引力。理由应围绕“对新建议的期待”和“对双方的好处”展开。 三、结构规划 首段：直接表达歉意，提及取消的约会，并简要说明原因。 主体段：提出新的约会建议，并详细阐述该建议的亮点和理由，以激发对方的兴趣。 结尾段：再次致歉，请求理解，并期待对方对新建议的回复。 【参考范文1】 Dear Jim, I'm writing to sincerely apologize that I won't be able to go out with you this weekend as we had planned. I feel terribly sorry for this last-minute cancellation. The reason is that an unavoidable mock exam, which is crucial for my university application, has been suddenly scheduled for this Saturday by my school. To make up for it, how about we visit the newly opened National Art Museum next Sunday afternoon? I've heard it's currently hosting a fantastic exhibition of British landscape paintings. I believe it will not only be a visual treat but also provide us with a wonderful topic for conversation, connecting your heritage with my interests. Moreover, it's much quieter than the shopping mall we originally planned to go to, allowing us to catch up properly. Again, please accept my deepest apologies for this change. I genuinely hope you understand and that the new plan sounds appealing to you. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文2】 Dear Jim, I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble. How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend. In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。 1.词汇积累 通知：tell→inform 麻烦：problem→trouble 怎么样：what about→how about 适合：fit→suit 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I should be available anytime next weekend. 拓展句：I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time. [高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型3] Please let me know what time suits you best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 【变式训练1】 （24-25高三上·北京·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。本学期你校开展了“健康一起来”体育活动，请你用英文写一篇倡议书，题为“Sports and Fitness”。内容包括： 1.同学们参与运动的情况； 2.你的倡议。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank you! Li Hua 【答案】Possible version 1： Dear fellow students, This semester, our school’s “Let’s Be Healthy Together” sports initiative has seen a fair share of participation. Many students have been hitting the gym, joining team sports, or jogging around the campus, which is great. However, some issues have emerged. Some students are too occupied with studies to make time for sports, while others lack the motivation to start. Here, I’d like to advocate for a more active lifestyle. We should view sports as an essential part of our daily routine, not an added burden. For those short on time, even a 15-minute brisk walk or a quick stretching session can make a difference. Let’s encourage each other to step out of our comfort zones and onto the field or court. Let’s overcome these obstacles and fully embrace the benefits of sports and fitness. Together, we can build a healthier and more energetic body. Possible versions 2： Dear fellow students, Our school has launched the remarkable “Let’s Be Healthy Together” sports activity this term, which has been wholeheartedly embraced by all of us. Since its start, the campus has witnessed a series of vibrant activities. Every morning, after the second period, all the students gather on the playground and run 3laps together. Students are also encouraged to take part in team sports like football or basketball. In addition to these team sports, many students choose to practice badminton, table tennis or gymnastics. These activities not only enhance physical fitness but also cultivate concentration and coordination. To make the sports activities more fruitful and beneficial, I advocate the school organize more professional coaching sessions to help students improve their skills and avoid injuries. Besides, it would be great if more fun is added, such as relays or obstacle races. I believe through continued efforts we can ensure that every student can get full rewards of sports and fitness. That’s all! Thank you! Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文写一篇倡议书，题为“Sports and Fitness”。内容包括：1.同学们参与运动的情况；2.你的倡议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 然而：however→nevertheless 出现：emerge→appear 鼓励：encourage→inspire 精力充沛的：energetic→dynamic 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For those short on time, even a 15-minute brisk walk or a quick stretching session can make a difference. 拓展句：For those who are short on time, even a 15-minute brisk walk or a quick stretching session can make a difference. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Many students have been hitting the gym, joining team sports, or jogging around the campus, which is great. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Some students are too occupied with studies to make time for sports, while others lack the motivation to start. (运用了while连接的并列句) 【变式训练2·变考法】假定你是李华，在学校组织的国际文化交流活动筹备中，你负责制作展示各国文化特色的PowerPoint。但由于电脑故障，你未能在规定日期前完成任务。请你给负责此次活动的外教Mr Johnson 写一封道歉信，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.补救措施和预计完成时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr Johnson, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr Johnson, I’m writing to offer my sincere apology for not being able to complete the PowerPoint for the international cultural exchange activity on time. The delay was caused by an unexpected computer problem. My computer suddenly crashed while I was working on the presentation. To make matters worse, I didn’t save the file, so I had to start over. However, please rest assured that I am working hard to make up for the lost time. I’m confident that I can finish the PowerPoint within two days. I’ll double-check every slide to ensure there are no errors. Once again, I’m truly sorry for the inconvenience caused. Thank you for your understanding. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给负责此次活动的外教Mr Johnson 写一封道歉信，因为学校组织的国际文化交流活动筹备中，由于电脑故障，未能在规定日期前完成制作展示各国文化特色的PowerPoint的任务。 【详解】1.词汇积累 给予：offer→give/express/show 自信的：confident→self-assured 延期：delay→postponement 确保：ensure→assure/make sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The delay was caused by an unexpected computer problem. 拓展句：The delay was caused by the computer problem which was unexpected. 【点睛】【高分句型1】My computer suddenly crashed while I was working on the presentation.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句。) 【高分句型2】I’m confident that I can finish the PowerPoint within two days. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 04真题溯源·考向感知 1．（2016·全国·高考真题） 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week. I am writing to apologize for breaking my promise. Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you. Since the final exam is just around the corner, I decide to stay at home to go over my lessons. You know, I didn’t do well in the last exam. So I want to devote all my spare time to working on my lessons in order to get good scores in the final exam. I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January. Sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的书信体裁，是李华因无法按约定与Bob在周日上午去书店而写的道歉信，需涵盖道歉缘由、解释原因、提出新的解决方案等内容，体现真诚的歉意。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 道歉：apologize→say sorry 即将来临：just around the corner→approaching 复习：go over→review 致力于：devote...to→focus...on 2. 句式拓展 原句：Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you. 拓展句：The following is the reason that accounts for why I am unable to go to the bookstore with you. 原句：I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January. 拓展句：I was thinking whether it would be possible for us to visit the bookstore on the second Sunday of January. 【点睛】 [高分句型一] Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you.（why引导定语从句，修饰先行词reason，直接点明下文是解释不能赴约的原因，使文章逻辑清晰，过渡自然） [高分句型二] Since the final exam is just around the corner, I decide to stay at home to go over my lessons.（since引导原因状语从句，明确阐述不能去书店的原因是期末考试临近，因果关系表达直接且合理 ） [高分句型三] I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January.（用 “I am wondering if...” 的委婉句式提出新的时间建议，语气柔和，既体现了对对方的尊重，又表达了自己希望重新约定的意愿 ） 2. （2014·北京卷） 你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游； 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往； 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。 注意： 1.词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, How’s it going? I can hardly contain my enthusiasm for our trip to Yunnan in July.I was really looking forward to exploring the beautiful scenery and experiencing the local culture with you. However, I have some bad news. Recently, I accidentally injured my foot while playing basketball. The doctor told me that I need to rest for at least a month to fully recover. As a result, I’m afraid I won’t be able to make our planned trip in July. I feel terribly sorry for letting you down. I was wondering if it would be possible to postpone our trip to August. By then, I should have recovered completely, and we can enjoy our journey without any worries. I promise I’ll make it up to you. Once again, I’m really sorry for the inconvenience. I hope you can understand my situation. Let me know what you think. Best wishes, Li Hua 【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的书信体裁，是李华写给英国朋友Chris的道歉信，围绕无法按原计划7月同去云南旅游的事件，包含计划说明、无法成行原因、歉意表达及新提议等内容，体现真诚沟通的意图。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 兴奋：enthusiasm→excitement 探索：exploring→discovering 受伤：injured→hurt 推迟：postpone→put off 2. 句式拓展 原句：I can hardly contain my enthusiasm for our trip to Yunnan in July. 拓展句：My excitement for our upcoming trip to Yunnan in July is overwhelming, and I simply can't hold it back. 原句：As a result, I’m afraid I won’t be able to make our planned trip in July. 拓展句：Consequently, I'm filled with regret to say that I won't be able to join you on the trip to Yunnan as we initially planned in July. 【点睛】 [高分句型一] I can hardly contain my enthusiasm for our trip to Yunnan in July.（“hardly” 加强语气，突出对旅行的热切期待，“contain one's enthusiasm” 短语使用自然，展现语言运用能力 ） [高分句型二] The doctor told me that I need to rest for at least a month to fully recover.（that引导宾语从句，清晰阐述医生的建议，为后文无法出行提供有力依据，使文章逻辑紧密 ） [高分句型三] I was wondering if it would be possible to postpone our trip to August.（“I was wondering if...” 委婉提出建议的经典句式，语气礼貌且恰当，既表达想法又尊重对方意愿 ） 3. （2014·山东卷） 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因； 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等） 注意： 1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的电子邮件体裁，是新华中学学生李华回复美国朋友 Tom 的邮件，需解释未及时回信的原因，并详细阐述暑假计划，同时体现朋友间交流的亲切与真诚。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 错过：missing→failing to seize 打算：plans→arrangements 兼职：part-time job→side job 开阔视野：broaden my horizons→widen my outlook 2.句式拓展 原句：You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. 拓展句：As you may understand, I've been fully occupied with the preparations for the final exams recently, which led to my oversight of writing you back. 原句：Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. 拓展句：Not only will I have the opportunity to earn money independently, but I will also be able to expand my knowledge and understanding of the world. 【点睛】 [高分句型一] You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back.（使用 “现在完成进行时” 强调一直以来的备考状态，合理地解释未及时回信原因，使逻辑清晰 ） [高分句型二] Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.（运用 “not only...but also...” 的倒装结构，强调做兼职的双重好处，增强句子的表现力和说服力 ） [高分句型三] What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.（“I think” 作为插入语，使表达更自然；which 引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明做志愿工作对自己生活的积极影响，丰富句子内容 ） 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $