Unit 1 Science Fiction Reading for Writing 写作课件-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第四册

该高中英语课件聚焦高考读后续写，系统讲解七三法则（原文一致、曲折性、正能量原则）、七二四法则（四个步骤）及审题谋篇、遣词造句等核心知识，从“Satisfaction Guaranteed”续写任务导入，连接法则理论与审题、谋篇、造句步骤，构建从理论到实践的学习支架。 其亮点在于结合科幻故事续写实例，分步骤指导审题（文体、时态）、谋篇（段落脉络）、遣词造句，通过核心词汇和句式练习提升语言能力，通过情节设计（曲折性、正能量）培养思维品质，帮助学生掌握写作方法，教师教学更具系统性。

Unit 1 Science Fiction Reading for Writing Learning aims: 1.To review the rules of continuation 2.To write a continuation 重温高考读后续写法则 重温高考读后续写法则 时态一致、人物一致、事件一致及语言表达风格一致。如样题中通篇短文基本都在用一般过去时，那续写也应使用一般过去时。 情节设计不能过于复杂或离奇，否则阅卷老师便不能快速读懂你想表达的内容。 故事内容一定要传递正能量，围绕 “真善美”和社会原则 的大主题去设计情节，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。 重温高考读后续写法则 两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量。 第一段大意：两段首句决定框架。 第二段大意：第二个首句与正能量结局，来确定框架。 In the text “Satisfaction Guaranteed”，Larry who worked for a robot company made a robot Tony for his wife Claire,and Tony helped Claire in every aspect,especially when facing the richest and most powerful woman Gladys envied by Claire.So Claire fell in love with Tony,which led to Tony being rebuilt.What would happen when Tony was taken away？What would happen next time when Claire met Tony again？Continue the story according to the given sentences. Writing Para.1　After Tony was taken away，________________________ _______________________________________________________ Para.2　Claire was so surprised when seeing Tony in Gladys’ house.____________________________________________________ 第一步　审题谋篇 审题 文体： 第三人称 一般过去时 时态： 人称： 科幻故事，记叙文 谋篇 para1： para2： sad weep absurd couldn’t stop （why） guilty （why） see? Glady invited introduced (proud) greeted politely didn’t recognize sad but relieved understood 脉络： 核心词汇 1.荒唐的 _______________ 2.哭泣 _____ 3.内疚的 _____ 4.然而 _______ ridiculous/absurd weep guilty whereas 5.爱上 ______________ 6.重新组装 _______ fall in love with rebuild 第二步　遣词造句 连词成句 1.她知道恋上一个机器人是荒谬至极的，但她还是忍不住流泪。 She knew it was absurd to become attached to a robot；________ _________________________. 2.当她面对Larry时，她感到很内疚。 When she faced Larry，________________. she just couldn’t hold back her tears she felt very guilty While she knew it was absurd to become attached to a robot，she just couldn’t hold back her tears. When facing Larry，she felt very guilty. 3.毕竟，她的丈夫是Larry 而不是Tony。 After all，her husband was Larry________________. 4.Tony和以前大不相同了。 ________________________________________ 5.Tony礼貌的向Claire问好。 ——————————————————————————————— 6.不论机器人有多好，人类不能爱上机器人。 _______________________________________________________ rather than Tony Tony greeted Claire politely Tony was quite different from what he used to be. After all,it was Larry rather than Tony that was her husband. No matter how fine a robot is,a human being can’t fall in love with it. with a bow/handshake After Tony was taken away,Claire wept and wept until Larry came back.While she knew it was absurd to become attached to a robot,she just couldn’t hold back her tears.Tony was so sweet and understanding. Everything he did for her made her feel better about herself. However,when facing Larry,she felt very guilty.After all,it was Larry rather than Tony who was her husband. But she couldn’t help wondering what would happen if they met again.One day,she received an invitation from Gladys，which made her quite confused. 参考范文 Claire was so surprised when seeing Tony in Gladys’ house. “Look！This is the newest household robot in the world！” Gladys had a strong urge to introduce it to her guests,proudly.Claire had a mixed feeling when Tony greeted her politely with a bow.His voice was still deep and pleasant,but he didn’t recognize Claire. He was quite different from what he used to be.Claire suddenly felt relieved.Let bygones be bygones.Yes,no matter how fine a robot is,a human being can’t fall in love with it. Homework：Finish the continuation and submit in the evening. Homework： $