专题08 书面表达（期中真题汇编，吉林专用）九年级英语上学期

专题08 书面表达 主题01 如何改变自我 Passage 1 （23-24九年级上·吉林·期中）根据表格中的内容，以“Peter’s Changes”为题，谈论Peter三年来的变化，并写出他提高英语水平的两个方法。 Peter’s Changes 3 years ago now shy, quiet outgoing, friendly be weak in English be good at English, have many good ways to learn English 要求： 1.短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名； 3.词数90—100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Peter’s Changes It seems that Peter has changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Peter’s Changes It seems that Peter has changed a lot. He used to be a shy and quiet boy three years ago. He was weak in English and often felt nervous when speaking in class. However, now he is outgoing and friendly. He is good at English and has many good ways to learn English. For example, he often watches English movies and listens to English songs at home to improve his listening skills. Additionally, he practices speaking English with his good friends every day. These methods have greatly helped him improve his English proficiency. Peter’s changes are truly impressive. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明Peter变化很大； 第二步，具体阐述Peter三年前的情况和现在的变化； 第三步，最后再次总结。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去是 ②be good at擅长 ③practice doing练习做某事 [高分句型] ①For example, he often watches English movies and listens to English songs at home to improve his listening skills.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②Additionally, he practices speaking English with his good friends every day.（动名词作宾语） Passage2 （23-24九年级上·吉林松原·期中）中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。 要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. First of all, it is really important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges anymore and try my best to solve problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people. By doing these, I will make myself better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点以思维导图的方式给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，引出如何成为更好的自己的话题； ②第二步，从生活方式、学习和人际关系等不同方面来介绍如何成为更好的自己； ③第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all 首先 ②be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事 ③try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力做某事 ④take care of照顾 [高分句型] ①First of all, it is really important to live healthily. (it固定句型) ②I’ll also do what I can to help other people. (what引导宾语从句) Passage3 （24-25九年级上·吉林松原·期中）在我们的成长过程中，时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真思考。假如你叫李华，你的父母为了能让你更好地学习，制订了些规则，其中包括周末不能出去和朋友玩。你对此规则不是很赞同。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文表达你的观点和想法。 要点提示： 1. 青少年应该和同龄人多交流； 2. 周末适当出去玩，放松一下； 3. 朋友可以相互鼓励，努力学习，共同进步； 4. 我认为这个规则应该适当改变。 写作要求： 1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2. 词数90-100； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁； 4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 In order to let me study better, my parents make some rules for me. I don’t agree with one of them, which doesn’t allow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends, because they think it’s a waste of time. However, I think teenagers should be allowed to go out with their friends because teenagers should communicate more with their peers. Moreover, going out to play at the weekend for a proper time can make me feel relaxed. I can also learn the advantages of my friends, and this is helpful to my studies. In addition, friends can encourage each other to study hard and make progress together. As far as I am concerned, this rule should be changed properly. If I’m allowed to go out to play with my friends on weekends, I can do even better in my studies. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为议论文； ②时态：主要是一般现在时； ③提示：基于父母制定的规则，阐述自己不同意该规则的理由，包括青少年需要与同龄人交流、适当放松有利于学习、朋友间能相互鼓励共同进步等，最后呼吁规则应适当改变。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头提出父母为了让自己学习更好制定了一些规则，其中周末不许和朋友出去玩这一规则自己不同意； 第二步，详细阐述不同意该规则的理由。一是青少年应该与同龄人多交流；二是周末适当出去玩能让自己放松，还能学习朋友的优点，有助于学习；三是朋友之间能相互鼓励共同进步； 第三步，表明自己的观点，即这个规则应该适当改变，若允许周末和朋友出去玩，自己学习会更好。 [亮点词汇] ①be allowed to被允许做…… ②communicate交流 ③make progress取得进步 ④as far as I am concerned在我看来 ⑤properly适当地 [高分句型] ①I don’t agree with one of them, which doesn’t allow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends, because they think it’s a waste of time. (which 引导非限定性定语从句；because 引导原因状语从句) ②If I’m allowed to go out to play with my friends on weekends, I can do even better in my studies. (if 引导条件状语从句) 主题02 历史文化 Passage1 （23-24九年级上·吉林四平·期中）我国的传统节日源远流长，越来越多的外国友人也开始热衷于了解中华传统节日。假如你是李华，你的学校正在举办“一起向未来，用英语讲好中华传统节日”的活动，请你以“My Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival”为题， 向外国友人介绍你最喜欢的个传统节日，并描述节日当天可以做哪些活动，你的感受如何。 提示词语：celebrate, lantern, interesting, mooncake, couplets (对联) 要求： (1) 词数不少于80； (2) 不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 There are some traditional festivals in China. My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone. The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it’s the beginning of a new year. I’m always happy at the Spring Festival. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Festival”为题，介绍一个你最喜欢的传统节日，内容中要包含节日里的活动以及你的感受，注意要点齐全。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出想要介绍的自己最喜欢的节日； 第二步，具体详细描述节日期间的活动； 第三步，表达个人感受，喜欢该节日的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①have lots of fun玩得开心 ②get together相聚一起 ③go shopping购物 ④buy...for...为某人买某物 [高分句型] ①My favourite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.（because引导的原因状语从句） Passage2 （23-24九年级上·吉林四平·期中）假设你叫王静，是山东潍坊人，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍一下潍坊风筝。90-100词可适当发挥。 提示：1．潍坊以风筝闻名于世； 2．潍坊有各种各样的风筝； 3．风筝由竹子、纸或丝绸制成。制造者主要是农民和手工艺人(craftsman)； 4．潍坊国际风筝节在每年的四月份举行。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I am a girl. My name is Wang Jing. I come from Weifang, Shandong Province. Weifang is famous for its kites. It is known all over the world. There are all kinds of kites in Weifang. Some are like birds, some are like dragons, some are like persons. They are made of bamboo, paper or silk. They are often made by farmers and craftsmen. The Weifang International Kite Festival is held in April every year. The kites in our hometown are very beautiful and they can fly very high. I hope that they can become better and better and bring people more happiness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍潍坊风筝，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据提示信息详细介绍潍坊风筝的相关信息； 第二步，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①all over the world全世界 ②all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①The kites in our hometown are very beautiful and they can fly very high.(and连接的并列句) ②I hope that they can become better and better and bring people more happiness.(that引导的宾语从句) Passage3 （23-24九年级上·吉林松原·期中）春节是中国的传统节日之一， 代表着团圆和喜庆。扫房子、挂灯笼、贴春联、包饺子等，这些都已成为固定的风俗习惯。假如你是李然，你的好友Alice今年要到你家过年，体验中国的春节。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文。 the Spring Festival hanging lanterns, pasting Spring Festival couplets（对联） setting off firecrackers cleaning the house making dumplings 要求: （1）书写规范，卷面整洁; （2）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥; （3）文中不能出现真实姓名; （4）词数90左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Of all the festivals in China, I like Chinese New Year most. Chinese New Year falls on the first day of the first lunar month. The celebrations last 15 days, with fireworks, dragon and lion dances, family and friends gathering, lantern festivals, and of course lots of great food!You can see happy faces and big celebrations everywhere. Before the start of the festival, Chinese people clean their houses to sweep away any bad luck. Then, on New Year’s Eve, all brushes are put away so that good luck cannot be swept away. People pasting Spring Festival couplets and hang red lanterns. On New Year’s Eve, all of us will make dumplings and eat group meals together. After dinner, adults will set off firecrackers. In short, I like Chinese New Year better than any other festival. It gives me more pleasure than I can imagine. 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。介绍春节是传统节日，有很多事情要做； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍现在人们的庆祝方式； 第四步，书写结语。表达跟其它节日比，我更喜欢春节。 [亮点词汇] ① last持续 ② of course当然 ③ In short总之 [高分句型] ① Of all the festivals in China, I like Chinese New Year most. （Of all+名词复数，I like…best.） ② It gives me more pleasure than I can imagine.（比较级句型） 主题03 其他 Passage1 （24-25九年级上·吉林四平·期中）假如你是李军，你打算和父母去北京旅游，红星旅行社将为你们提供全程服务。请你根据以下提示给红星旅行社的主管张先生( Mr.Zhang) 写一封电子邮件，咨询一下有关情况。 提示： 1.旅行车上游客的数量； 2.宾馆是否有带大窗户的三人间； 3.宾馆附近是否有游泳池； 4.饭菜是否可口、种类多样。 要求：词数90-100词 (电子邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Mr. Zhang, As a visitor, I’d like to ask you some questions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Jun 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Zhang, As a visitor, I’d like to ask you some questions. Could you please tell me how many visitors there will be on the bus? Will it be crowded? Then I wonder if we can stay in a room with a big window for three people. We can enjoy the scenery through the window. And is there a swimming pool near the hotel where we can swim to keep cool? Finally, could you please tell me if the hotel will serve many kinds of delicious food? I would like to thank you for telling me. Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Jun 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为一个访客，我想问你一些问题。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——游客数量、宾馆情况及周边、饭菜等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“请尽快给我回信。”的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①keep cool保持凉爽 ②would like to do sth.想要做某事 ③thank you for doing sth.谢谢你做某事 [高分句型] ①And is there a swimming pool near the hotel where we can swim to keep cool?(定语从句） ②Could you please tell me how many visitors there will be on the bus? (宾语从句) Passage2 （24-25九年级上·吉林松原·期中）假如你就读于一所国际学校，你酷爱发明，在你们学校的科技周活动中你想向同学们“推销”你的一项新发明。请你根据提示写一篇90—100词的英语发言稿。 提示： 1. What’s it and when was it invented? 2. What’s it used for? 3. What’s it like? 4. How does it work? 5. How much is it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 May I have your attention, please? I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is an alarm on your glasses. It was invented three months ago. It is used for finding your glasses in your home or at school. The alarm is controlled by a remote control with a button on it. First, press the button, and the alarm will make a sound. Then, follow the sound to look for your glasses. You must want to know how much it is. It’s 20 yuan. It’s cheap and good. You can afford one. Don’t you hate it when you can’t find your glasses? If so, please come to me and buy one. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你的一项新发明，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的发明是什么以及是什么时候发明的； 第二步，介绍自己的发明可以用来做什么、它是什么样子、它是如何工作的以及它的价格； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be used for被用来 ②look for寻找 ③want to do sth.想要做某事 [高分句型] ①First, press the button, and the alarm will make a sound. (祈使句，and+陈述句) ②Don’t you hate it when you can’t find your glasses? (时间状语从句) Passage3 （23-24九年级上·吉林·期中）两年前，Peter随着父母的工作变动来到长春。如今，他给祖父母写了一封信，介绍他来到中国后的各种变化，请你根据表格提示内容，代替 Peter完成这封信。 In England In China 常和祖父母聊天；有很多朋友 父母忙，没人聊天；朋友不多 早餐：吃面包，喝牛奶 习惯了面条和鸡蛋；更加强壮 不喜欢运动，喜欢摇滚音乐 对篮球、中国文化更感兴趣 写作要求：1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2. 词数90—100，书信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁； 4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Dear grandparents, How is it going? I hope you are both healthy. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mom and Dad send their love. Wish you happy and healthy. Yours, Peter 【答案】例文 Dear grandparents, How is it going? I hope you are both healthy. I came to Changchun with my parents two years ago. My life has changed a lot. In England, I often chatted with you and I had many friends. But now my parents are very busy and I have no one to talk to. I don’t have many friends here, either. In England, I had bread and milk for breakfast. But now I am used to having noodles and eggs. And I am much stronger. In the past, I didn’t like sports and I liked rock music. Now I am more interested in basketball and Chinese culture. Mom and Dad send their love. Wish you happy and healthy. Yours, Peter 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己来到中国后的各种变化，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据表格内容，介绍在英国和在中国的各种变化； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①chat with sb.和某人聊天 ②be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] But now my parents are very busy and I have no one to talk to. (and连接的并列句) Passage4 （23-24九年级上·吉林松原·期中）假定你是某中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车很感兴趣,并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信。内容包括: 1. 这种单车的使用方法(如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等)； 2. 这种单车的优势； 3. 你对这种单车的看法。 注意: 1.80-100词； 2. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词: 智能手机smartphone, 扫二维码scan the QR code Dear Jim, I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mentioned in your latest letter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                                         Yours,                                                                     Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Jim, I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mentioned in your latest letter. It’s very convenient to use if you have a smart phone. What you need to do is to find a nearest sharing bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike and enjoy your trip. Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of sharing bike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a sharing bike with you in China. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电邮。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“共享单车的使用方法”；“共享单车的优势”以及“自己对共享单车的看法”等要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍如何使用共享单车。 第二步，介绍共享单车的优势有哪些。 第三步，收尾，表示自己期待与Jim一起骑共享单车。 [亮点词汇] ①convenient方便的 ②advantage优势 ③transportation运输 [高分句型] ①Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of sharing bike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it.（运用了表语从句） ②It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.（运用了定语从句） Passage5 （23-24九年级上·吉林白城·期中）假如你是张华，在这几年中，你的生活在各个方面都发生了一些变化。请你根据下面表格里的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你过去与现在的生活发生的变化。 过去 现在 外表 矮，瘦 高，强壮 性格 安静，害羞 外向，活泼 生活习惯 每天打游戏一小时 每天锻炼一小时 业余爱好 在家看电视 和朋友下棋，踢足球 写作要求： （1）文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； （2）词数：90-100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：used to I’m Zhang Hua. In the past few years, I have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I’m Zhang Hua. In the past few years, I have changed a lot. In the past, I used to be short and thin, but now I am tall and strong. I used to be quiet and shy, but I am outgoing and active now and I have made lots of friends. I used to play games at home for an hour a day. But now I enjoy an hour’s exercise every day. What’s more, my hobbies have also changed. I have fun playing chess and football now. However, I used to like watching TV at home. I am proud of my changes and I hope to be better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给信息提示，写一篇作文介绍自己过去与现在的变化。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇已给出，总体指出生活有了很大的改变； 第二步，具体介绍自己的过去及现在的情况； 第三步，最后介绍自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth过去常常做某事 ②make lots of friends交朋友 ③an hour a day一天一小时 ④be proud of为……骄傲 [高分句型] I am proud of my changes and I hope to be better in the future.（and表并列） Passage 1 （24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中）我们人生中总会因为遇到某些事而改变自己，可能是与朋友，父母，陌生人等之间发生某些事，也可能是因为遇到某个人，他（她）的行为或者话语使你改变了。请从自己的实际出发，写一篇以 How I’ve changed 为题，写写你自己改变的经历吧！ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 How I’ve changed Last year, I was a shy student who was afraid to speak in class. One day, our teacher, Mr. Smith, encouraged me by saying, “You have great ideas. Share them!” His words made me more confident. Slowly, I started raising my hand and participating more. I even joined the debate club, which I never imagined before. Now, I am more open and enjoy expressing my thoughts. This change has helped me make new friends and perform better in school. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给话题提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己过去是什么样的； 第二步，介绍是谁让自己发生了改变； 第三步，最后描述自己改变后的情况。 [亮点词汇] ① be afraid to do害怕做 ② start doing开始做 ③ help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Last year, I was a shy student who was afraid to speak in class.（who引导的定语从句） ②I even joined the debate club, which I never imagined before. （which引导的定语从句） Passage2 （24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中）迈克（Mike）过去英语成绩不太好，课堂上听不懂老师讲的内容、不会发音、不会语法、爱睡觉、不交作业……，他甚至想放弃英语。但在老师和同学的帮助下，他决心努力学习。现在他变化了许多，并且成了班上英语成绩优秀的学生。请以Never give up为题写一篇短文，号召大家不要轻言放弃，要变问题为挑战，勇敢面对。 提示词：used to，be poor in，hand in，learn by，with the help of，top student 要求：1. 语言流畅，规范  2. 包含提示内容，并作适当发挥  3. 内容完整，书写规范。 Never give up ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Never give up Mike used to be a poor in his English. He couldn’t understand what the teacher said. He couldn’t pronounce well, and he often felt sleepy in class. Sometimes he didn’t hand in his homework. He even wanted to give up. But with the help of his teachers and classmates, he has improved a lot and he find learning English by joining the English club is a good way to study English. Now he does well in all his subjects, and he has become one of the top students in his class. So when we have problems, we should never give up easily. Instead, we should change the problems into challenges, and face them bravely. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍Mike过去的学习情况；   第二步，介绍Mike现在的改变； 第三步，总结概括。   [亮点词汇]   ①used to过去常常   ②feel sleepy感到困倦   ③hand in上交 ④give up放弃 ⑤with the help of在……的帮助下   [高分句型]   ①He couldn’t understand what the teacher said.（what引导宾语从句） ②So when we have problems, we should never give up easily.（when引导的时间状语从句） Passage3 （24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中）有效控制愤怒能帮助我们正确地解决问题。你校英语角将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇短文，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。不少于 80 词。 要求： （1）讲述一个自己的故事； （2）你的感悟； （3）适当增加细节，行文连贯； （4）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience. Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger. From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，讲述关于自己控制愤怒的故事，怎样成功解决问题，感悟是什么，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点题，引出内容； 第二步，根据所给要点，描述发生在自己和Tom间不愉快的经历，自己控制情绪，并最终成功解决矛盾。 第三步，总结从这个故事中得出的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①calm down冷静下来 ②think of想起 ③in trouble有麻烦 ④have a talk with sb.和某人谈一谈 ⑤communicate with sb.与某人交流 ⑥on time按时，准时 [高分句型] ①Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. (that引导的定语从句) ②I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. (so … that引导结果状语从句) ③When I found it, I was very angry. (when引导的时间状语从句) Passage4 （24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中）假如你是李华，请根据下面表格中的信息，用英语介绍一下你过去和现在的情况。   过去 现在 几乎没有朋友， 沉默寡言 有很多朋友， 性格开朗 花很多时间玩电子游戏 多数时间用在功课上 对功课没有兴趣，成绩很差 变得爱学习了，成绩大幅度提高 要求： 1. 短文必须包括表格中的信息，条理清晰、观点明确、意思连贯； 2. 书写规范整洁，80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have changed a lot in the last few years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I have changed a lot in the last few years. Now let me share my changes. I used to have few friends and was very quiet, but now I have many friends and have become outgoing. I used to spend a lot of time playing computer games, but now I dedicate most of my time to my schoolwork. I used to have no interest in my lessons, so I usually got poor grades. However, now I have become more interested in my studies, and my grades are improving significantly. I am proud of my changes. I am sure I will be better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：分享你的变化； 第二步，依据表格所列要点，逐一陈述发生的变化，适当拓展； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be proud of 为……感到自豪 ②dedicate to 致力于 [高分句型] ①I used to have no interest in my lessons, so I usually got poor grades. (含so的并列复合句) ②I am sure I will be better and better. (宾语从句) Passage5 （24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中）春节是中国的传统节日之一，代表着团圆和幸福。扫房子、挂灯笼、贴春联、包饺子等，这些都已成为固定的风俗习惯。请根据以上提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍这个中国的传统节日。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，书写规范，卷面整洁； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Of all the festivals in China, I like Chinese New Year most. Chinese New Year falls on the first day of the first lunar month. The celebrations last 15 days. Before the start of the festival, Chinese people clean their houses to sweep away any bad luck. Then, on New Year’s Eve, all brushes are put away so that good luck cannot be swept away. People put up Spring Festival couplets and hang red lanterns. On New Year’s Eve, all of us will make dumplings and eat group meals together. After dinner, adults will set off firecrackers. In short, I like Chinese New Year better than any other festival. It gives me more pleasure than I can imagine. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：本文主要是介绍春节，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，具体介绍春节的信息； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①sweep away扫除 ②put up张贴 ③In short总之 [高分句型] Then, on New Year’s Eve, all brushes are put away so that good luck cannot be swept away. （so that引导的目的状语从句） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 专题08书面表达 基础必练 主题01如何改变自我 Passage 1 (23-24九年级上·吉林期中)根据表格中的内容，以“Peter's Changes”为题，谈论Peter三年来的变化， 并写出他提高英语水平的两个方法。 Peter's Changes 3 years ago now shy,quiet outgoing,friendly be weak in English be good at English,have many good ways to learn English 要求： 1短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名； 3.词数90一100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Peter's Changes It seems that Peter has changed a lot. Passage2 (23-24九年级上·吉林松原·期中)中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员， 未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何 塑造更好的自己。 要求： (1)语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； (2)词数90一100： 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (3)书写规范，卷面整洁； (4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 lifestyle relationship Make myself better study Passage3 (24-25九年级上吉林松原期中)在我们的成长过程中，时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的 同学不理解，如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真思考。假如你叫李华，你的父母为了能让你 更好地学习，制订了些规则，其中包括周末不能出去和朋友玩。你对此规则不是很赞同。请你根据以下要 点提示，写一篇英语短文表达你的观点和想法。 要点提示： 1.青少年应该和同龄人多交流； 2.周末适当出去玩，放松一下； 3.朋友可以相互鼓励，努力学习，共同进步； 4.我认为这个规则应该适当改变。 写作要求： 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2.词数90-100： 3.书写规范，卷面整洁： 4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 厨学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 主题02历史文化 Passagel (23-24九年级上·吉林四平，期中)我国的传统节日源远流长，越来越多的外国友人也开始热衷于了解中华 传统节日。假如你是李华，你的学校正在举办一起向未来，用英语讲好中华传统节日”的活动，请你以“y Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival”为题，向外国友人介绍你最喜欢的个传统节日，并描述节日当天可以做 哪些活动，你的感受如何。 提示词语：celebrate,lantern,interesting,.mooncake,.couplets(对联) 要求： (1)词数不少于80： (2)不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 Passage2 (23-24九年级上·吉林四平.期中)假设你叫王静，是山东潍坊人，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍一下 潍坊风筝。90-100词可适当发挥。 提示：1.潍坊以风筝闻名于世； 2.潍坊有各种各样的风筝； 3.风筝由竹子、纸或丝绸制成。制造者主要是农民和手工艺人(craftsman): 4.潍坊国际风筝节在每年的四月份举行。 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 Passage3 (23-24九年级上·吉林松原期中)春节是中国的传统节日之一，代表着团圆和喜庆。扫房子、挂灯笼、贴 春联、包饺子等，这些都已成为固定的风俗习惯。假如你是李然，你的好友Alic今年要到你家过年，体验 中国的春节。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文。 hanging lanterns,pasting Spring Festival couplets ( setting off firecrackers the Spring Festival cleaning the house making dumplings 要求： (1)书写规范，卷面整洁， (2)语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名： (4)词数90左右。 主题03其他 Passagel (2425九年级上·吉林四平.期中)假如你是李军，你打算和父母去北京旅游，红星旅行社将为你们提供全 程服务。请你根据以下提示给红星旅行社的主管张先生(Mr.Zhang)写一封电子邮件，咨询一下有关情况。 提示： 1.旅行车上游客的数量： 2.宾馆是否有带大窗户的三人间； 3宾馆附近是否有游泳池； 4.饭菜是否可口、种类多样。 要求：词数90-100词（电子邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 Dear Mr.Zhang, As a visitor,I'd like to ask you some questions. Yours, Li Jun Passage2 (24-25九年级上·吉林松原·期中)假如你就读于一所国际学校，你酷爱发明，在你们学校的科技周活动中 你想向同学们“推销”你的一项新发明。请你根据提示写一篇90一100词的英语发言稿。 提示： 1.What's it and when was it invented? 2.What's it used for? 3.What's it like? 4.How does it work? 5.How much is it? Passage3 (23-24九年级上·吉林期中)两年前，Peter随着父母的工作变动来到长春。如今，他给祖父母写了一封信， 介绍他来到中国后的各种变化，请你根据表格提示内容，代替Peter完成这封信。 In England In China 常和祖父母聊天；有很多朋友 父母忙，没人聊天；朋友不多 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 早餐：吃面包，喝牛奶 习惯了面条和鸡蛋；更加强壮 不喜欢运动，喜欢摇滚音乐 对篮球、中国文化更感兴趣 写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2.词数90一100，书信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3.书写规范，卷面整洁； 4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Dear grandparents, How is it going?I hope you are both healthy. Mom and Dad send their love.Wish you happy and healthy Yours, Peter Passage4 (23-24九年级上·吉林松原·期中)假定你是某中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jm在给你的邮件中提到 他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jm回信。内容包括： 1.这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）； 2.这种单车的优势： 3.你对这种单车的看法。 注意：1.80-100词： 2.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：智能手机smartphone,扫二维码scan the QR code Dear Jim, I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mentioned in your latest letter. 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 Yours, LiHua Passage5 (23-24九年级上·吉林白城期中)假如你是张华，在这几年中，你的生活在各个方面都发生了一些变化。 请你根据下面表格里的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你过去与现在的生活发生的变化。 过去 现在 外表 矮，瘦 高，强壮 性格 安静，害羞 外向，活泼 生活习惯 每天打游戏一小时 每天锻炼一小时 业余爱好 在家看电视 和朋友下棋，踢足球 写作要求： (1)文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； (2)词数：90-100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数： (3)书写规范，卷面整洁： (4)文中不得出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：used to I'm Zhang Hua.In the past few years,I have changed a lot. 进阶提升 Passage 1 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (2425九年级上·吉林长春期中)我们人生中总会因为遇到某些事而改变自己，可能是与朋友，父母，陌 生人等之间发生某些事，也可能是因为遇到某个人，他（她)的行为或者话语使你改变了。请从自己的实 际出发，写一篇以HowI've changed为题，写写你自己改变的经历吧！ Passage2 (24-25九年级上·吉林长春.期中)迈克(Mk)过去英语成绩不太好，课堂上听不懂老师讲的内容、不会 发音、不会语法、爱睡觉、不交作业，他甚至想放弃英语。但在老师和同学的帮助下，他决心努力学习。 现在他变化了许多，并且成了班上英语成绩优秀的学生。请以Never give up为题写一篇短文，号召大家不 要轻言放弃，要变问题为挑战，勇敢面对。 提示词：used to,be poor in,,hand in,learn by,with the help of,top student 要求：1.语言流畅，规范2.包含提示内容，并作适当发挥3.内容完整，书写规范。 Never give up Passage3 (24-25九年级上·吉林长春期中)有效控制愤怒能帮助我们正确地解决问题。你校英语角将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem"的成长分享。请你写一篇短文，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某 一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。不少于80词。 要求： (1)讲述一个自己的故事； (2)你的感悟； 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 (3)适当增加细节，行文连贯； (4)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Passage4 (24-25九年级上·吉林长春期中)假如你是李华，请根据下面表格中的信息，用英语介绍一下你过去和现 在的情况。 过去 现在 几乎没有朋友，沉默寡言 有很多朋友，性格开朗 花很多时间玩电子游戏 多数时间用在功课上 对功课没有兴趣，成绩很差 变得爱学习了，成绩大幅度提高 要求： 1.短文必须包括表格中的信息，条理清晰、观点明确、意思连贯； 2.书写规范整洁，80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I have changed a lot in the last few years. Passage5 (24-25九年级上·吉林长春期中)春节是中国的传统节日之一，代表着团圆和幸福。扫房子、挂灯笼、贴 春联、包饺子等，这些都已成为固定的风俗习惯。请根据以上提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍 这个中国的传统节日。 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让教与学更高效 要求： 1.语句通顺，条理清晰，书写规范，卷面整洁： 2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名。