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专题08书信写作
基础
必练
主题01人与自然一环境保护与生态环境
Passage 1
(2425高一上·湖南娄底期中)
假设你是学生会主席李华,请你围绕“protect animals,respect life(保护动物,尊重生命)”的主题,写一封英语
倡议书,内容包括:
1.保护动物的重要性;
2.如何保护动物:
3.发出倡议。
注意:1开头己给出,词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students.
I'm writing to call on everyone to take an active part in protecting animals.
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25高一上·江苏扬州期中)题目要求:假如你是学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为“Let's go green now”
的环保活动。请你用英文写一封倡议信,要点包括:
1.倡导绿色生活的原因。
2.你的建议(至少三点)。
注意:词数80词左右;可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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Boys and girls,
Students'Union
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25高一上·广西南宁期中)
广西即将迎来广西壮族自治区成立60周年庆典,许多外国友人将到南宁旅游参观。请用英语简要介绍南宁,
内容需包括以下:
1.地理位置,面积:6500平方公里,人口:约740万;2.气候及环境;3.旅游及交通等。
字数:100字左右。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
主题02人与自我一人际关系中的自我城长
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·重庆·期中)假如你是某高中生李华,你的朋友Ryan来信说,进入高中以来,学习和心
理压力日益加大,请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
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2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.书写工整(卷面5分)。
Dear Ryan,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(24-25高一上重庆期中)
假定你是李华,你的笔友To最近沉迷于网络游戏,无法专注于学习,导致成绩下降,倍感焦虑,于是向
你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解:
2.阐释危害;
3.提供建议及陈述理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 3
(2425高一上·山东淄博·期中)
假设你是校英文报“HEART-TO-HEART”?栏目的编辑李华,近期收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该
同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,严重影响自己的学习和生活。请写一封回信。内容要点如
下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰:
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
Hi,Worried,
Yours
LiHua
主题03人与社会一社会公益与人际关怀
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·广东湛江期中)
假定你是李华,国庆节假期期间你到一所山区初中做了两天志愿者(volunteer)。请给你的外教M.Brown
写一封邮件,介绍这次活动。主要内容如下:
1.活动月的:
2.活动过程(带礼物,演节目,帮助学习等);
3.你的收获。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
注意:词数100左右(开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Mr.Brown,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·湖北黄冈期中)假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Frk写信询问你在第十九届杭州亚运会上
的志愿者经历。请你给他写一封回信。要点如下:
1.介绍服务内容;
2.分享感受:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
亚运会Asian Game
Dear Frank,
Yours,
LiHua
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Passage 3
(24-25高一上·辽宁.期中)
假定你是李华,今年暑假你在北京颐和园做志愿者,为外国朋友做向导。请给你的朋友Amanda写一封邮
件分享你的经历,内容包括:
1.志愿活动;
2.你的感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda.
I hope this email finds you well.
Yours.
LiHua
进阶提升
主题01人与社会一社会参与人际关系
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·四川内江·期中)
假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过中秋节(Md-Autumn Festival)。请给外教Lucy
写封邮件,邀请她一同前往,内容包括:
1.出发及返回时间。
2.活动内容:吃月饼,赏月等。
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注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
(24-25高一上山东聊城期中)
假如你是高一学生李华,近日你的英国好友Fioa发来邮件说她与母亲之间发生了一点不愉快,因为她最近
加入了校舞蹈社团,经常回家很晚,她母亲对此很生气,希望她退出社团。请你用英语给她回一封邮件,
宽慰她并为她提供一些改善母女关系的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Fiona,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 3
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(24-25高一上·湖南邵阳·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英语报正在举办以“如何处理亲子紧张关系”为主题的征文比赛活动。请你写一篇文章
参加比赛,内容包括:
1亲子紧张关系产生的原因:
2.处理亲子紧张关系具体做法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
主题02人与自我一个人成长与经验反思
Passage 1
(2425高一上·湖北武汉·期中)
你校英文报Wise Words栏目正以How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow为题征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投
稿,内容包括:
1.你曾遇到的困难或挑战;
2.你寻求建议的经历和收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow
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Passage 2
(2425高一上·江苏常州期中)
假定你是John Li,刚结束了为期一年的英国交换生项目。学校英语报邀请你写一篇英语文章,分享你的见
闻。内容包括:
1.你的经历:
2.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Exchange Experience
My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was
Passage 3
(2425高一上·山东德州期中)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mk®来信询问你刚刚开启的高中生活,请回邮件,内容包括:
1.个人经历
2.收获与感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
I hope you're doing well!There's so much to share about my high school life I just started.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua
主题03人与自然—自然体验与生态感知
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·山东临沂期中)
假定你是李华,上周日你和家人去了森林公园露营。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,分享此次经历,内容
包括:
1.露营的时间和地点;2.露营的过程;3.你的感受。
注意:写作词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:演练:dril训
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·海南期中)
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Hey来信说自己家乡灾害频发,前不久又遭受龙卷风袭击,他向你询问中
国的自然灾害情况。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
专题08 书信写作
主题01 人与自然——环境保护与生态环境
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·湖南娄底·期中)
假设你是学生会主席李华,请你围绕“protect animals, respect life (保护动物, 尊重生命)”的主题,写一封英语倡议书,内容包括:
1. 保护动物的重要性;
2. 如何保护动物;
3. 发出倡议。
注意:1.开头已给出,词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in protecting animals.
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in protecting animals.
Animals are an important part of our ecosystem. They maintain the ecological balance and provide various resources for us. Protecting them means protecting our own living environment.
There are many ways to protect animals. Firstly, we should raise our awareness and oppose any form of animal abuse. Secondly, we can support animal protection organizations and participate in volunteer activities. Thirdly, we can advocate for the establishment and improvement of relevant laws.
Let’s start from now on and do our bit to protect animals and respect life. Every small action counts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于倡议书。要求考生围绕“保护动物,尊重生命”这一主题,阐述保护动物的重要性、保护动物的方法,并发出倡议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要部分:an important part → a significant component
维持:maintain → keep/sustain
反对:oppose → object to
参加:participate in → take part in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Animals are an important part of our ecosystem.
拓展句:Animals, which play a crucial role in our daily lives, are an important part of our ecosystem.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Protecting them means protecting our own living environment. (运用了动名词作主语和宾语)
[高分句型2] Let’s start from now on and do our bit to protect animals and respect life.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)。
Passage 2
(24-25高一上·江苏扬州·期中)题目要求:假如你是学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为“Let’s go green now”的环保活动。请你用英文写一封倡议信,要点包括:
1. 倡导绿色生活的原因。
2. 你的建议 (至少三点)。
注意:词数80词左右;可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
Li Hua
【答案】
Boys and girls,
With the development of economy, the global climate is worsening. In order to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection, our school will hold a program “Let’s go green now”. I’m writing to call on everyone to participate in it .
Firstly, we can use public transportation or ride bicycles instead of driving private cars, which can make a great difference to our environment. Secondly, we should take full advantage of water, electricity, paper and so on. Last but not least, it is a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in daily life.
Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
Students’ Union
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书,介绍学校即将举办的环保活动,号召大家绿色低碳生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意识:awareness→consciousness
参加:participate in→join in
利用:take full advantage of→make full use of
和谐的:harmonious→peaceful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:With the development of economy, the global climate is worsening.
拓展句:As the economy develops, the global climate is getting worse.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] In order to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection, our school will hold a program “Let’s go green now”. (运用了in order to引导目的状语)
[高分句型 2] Firstly, we can use public transportation or ride bicycles instead of driving private cars, which can make a great difference to our environment. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)。
Passage 3
(24-25高一上·广西南宁·期中)
广西即将迎来广西壮族自治区成立60周年庆典,许多外国友人将到南宁旅游参观。请用英语简要介绍南宁,内容需包括以下:
1.地理位置,面积:6500平方公里,人口:约740万;2.气候及环境;3.旅游及交通等。
字数:100字左右。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Nanning, capital of Guangxi, is a city with a long history. It is located in the south of Guangdong province, with Beihai to its south and Guilin to its north. It covers a total area of 6500 square kilometers with a population of about 7.4 million.
The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter and it is rich in natural resources such as bananas, tea leaves sugarcane and so on. Nanning enjoys many tourist attractions, among which Qingshan Mountain and the Nanhu Lake are the most popular.
With the convenient transportation, Nanning attracts a large number of tourists at home and abroad every year.
【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一篇地方简介。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文是一篇地方简介:广西即将迎来广西壮族自治区成立60周年庆典,许多外国友人将到南宁旅游参观。请用英语简要介绍南宁,内容需包括以下:1.地理位置,面积:6500平方公里,人口:约740万;2.气候及环境;3.旅游及交通等。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:capital of Guangxi,(广西省会);located in the south of Guangdong province(坐落在广东省南边);rich in natural resources(有丰富的自然资源);With the convenient transportation,(有方便的交通)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一篇地方简介,内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Nanning, capital of Guangxi, is a city with a long history.句中介词短语作后置定语;Nanning enjoys many tourist attractions, among which Qingshan Mountain and the Nanhu Lake are the most popular.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句。
主题02 人与自我——人际关系中的自我成长
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·重庆·期中)假如你是某高中生李华,你的朋友Ryan来信说,进入高中以来,学习和心理压力日益加大,请你用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1. 词数100词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 书写工整(卷面5分)。
Dear Ryan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I am awfully sorry to hear that since entering high school, the pressure of study and psychology has been increasing. Here are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.
To begin with, keep a balance between study and rest. You should take regular exercise to keep fit and energetic. Besides, it’s highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends, from whom you can get confidence and comfort. Most importantly, you should make a good study schedule and stick to it, which can make you devote yourself to studies and realize your potential.
I hope my suggestions will be of help and I’m sure you will have a happy high school life!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以高中生李华的身份,给朋友Ryan写一封回信,对他遇到的困境表示理解,给予安慰,并就他的问题提出建议,需给出支撑建议的理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
减轻:relieve→alleviate, reduce
首先:to begin with→in the first place, above all
致力于:devote oneself to→dedicate oneself to
实现:realize→achieve, fulfill
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Besides, it’s highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends, from whom you can get confidence and comfort.
拓展句:Besides, it’s highly recommended that you (should) have brief conversations with close friends, from whom you can get confidence and comfort.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am awfully sorry to hear that since entering high school, the pressure of study and psychology has been increasing. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, it’s highly recommended to have brief conversations with close friends, from whom you can get confidence and comfort. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句)。
Passage 2
(24-25高一上·重庆·期中)
假定你是李华,你的笔友Tom最近沉迷于网络游戏,无法专注于学习,导致成绩下降,倍感焦虑,于是向你求助。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 阐释危害;
3. 提供建议及陈述理由。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Tom,
I understand your anxiety about being addicted to online games and its impact on your studies.
Excessive gaming can lead to poor academic performance and increase stress. To overcome this, I suggest setting a strict schedule to balance gaming and study time. Additionally, try engaging in physical activities or hobbies to divert your attention. These can help improve your focus and reduce stress. Remember, moderation is key.
I hope these suggestions are helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。笔友Tom最近沉迷于网络游戏,无法专注于学习,导致成绩下降,倍感焦虑,于是向考生求助,要求考生按照要求给他回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
理解:understand → comprehend
忧虑:anxiety → worry
影响:impact → influence
压力:stress → pressure
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Excessive gaming can lead to poor academic performance and increased stress.
拓展句:Not only can excessive gaming lead to poor academic performance, but also it can increase stress.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand your anxiety about being addicted to online games and its impact on your studies.(运用了动名词being作宾语)
【高分句型2】I hope these suggestions are helpful.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)。
Passage 3
(24-25高一上·山东淄博·期中)
假设你是校英文报“HEART-TO-HEART”栏目的编辑李华,近期收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,严重影响自己的学习和生活。请写一封回信。内容要点如下:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
Hi, Worried,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Hi, Worried,
Learning that you tend to lose your temper recently and it has had a bad influence on your study and daily life, I understand your trouble and would like to offer you some suggestions.
It’s normal for you to feel annoyed and upset when you are in trouble. Try taking a deep breath to calm down, which can help you think more clearly and react more calmly. Additionally, you’d better have a chat with someone you trust, which is a good way of letting your anger out. Sometimes, just sharing your feelings with someone else can make a big difference. Last but not least, going outdoors and playing team games with your friends are good approaches to getting rid of anger keep in mind that a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
Please let me know how things are going. Remember, I’m always here to support you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生近期收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向考生诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,严重影响自己的学习和生活,要求考生按照要求写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently → lately
影响:influence → impact
困难:trouble → difficulty
建议:suggestion → proposal
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Learning that you tend to lose your temper recently and it has had a bad influence on your study and daily life, I understand your trouble and would like to offer you some suggestions.
拓展句:After learning that you tend to lose your temper recently and it has had a bad influence on your study and daily life, I understand your trouble and would like to offer you some suggestions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you tend to lose your temper recently and it has had a bad influence on your study and daily life, I understand your trouble and would like to offer you some suggestions.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s normal for you to feel annoyed and upset when you are in trouble.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)。
主题03 人与社会——社会公益与人际关怀
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·广东湛江·期中)
假定你是李华,国庆节假期期间你到一所山区初中做了两天志愿者(volunteer)。请给你的外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件,介绍这次活动。主要内容如下:
1.活动目的;
2.活动过程(带礼物,演节目,帮助学习等);
3.你的收获。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
注意:词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Mr. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to tell you about my voluntary experience during the National Day holiday to help the junior middle students in the mountain area.
During the holiday, I took part in a two-day voluntary activity. Not only did we bring them some gifts, including notebooks, coats and other daily necessities, but we also had a party where we performed a number of interesting programs on the first day. On the second day, we helped them with their study, especially English. I feel it my duty to make contributions to helping those in need.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给外教Mr. Brown写一封邮件,介绍自己国庆节假期期间到一所山区初中做了两天志愿者(volunteer)的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
参加:take part in→get involved in
尤其/特别是:especially→particularly
责任/义务:duty→responsibility
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to tell you about my voluntary experience during the National Day holiday to help the junior middle students in the mountain area.
拓展句:I am writing to tell you about my voluntary experience during the National Day holiday, whose aim is to help the junior middle students in the mountain area.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only did we bring them some gifts, including notebooks, coats and other daily necessities, but we also had a party where we performed a number of interesting programs on the first day.(运用了not only位于句首的部分倒装,where引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I feel it my duty to make contributions to helping those in need.(运用了it作形式宾语,动词不定式作真正的宾语)。
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·湖北黄冈·期中)假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Frank写信询问你在第十九届杭州亚运会上的志愿者经历。请你给他写一封回信。要点如下:
1. 介绍服务内容;
2. 分享感受;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
亚运会 Asian Game
Dear Frank,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Frank,
This September, I was lucky to be a volunteer for the19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, which will be the most unforgettable experience in my life.
My job as a volunteer was to organize the audience to enter the stadium and guide them to watch the game in a civilized way. Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
This volunteer activity made me more responsible and benefited me a lot. Not only has it improved my spoken English, but it has also enhanced my ability to deal with foreigners. I will always be grateful for this experience.
How are you doing? I hope you had a good winter holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复笔友Frank的信,分享自己在第十九届杭州亚运会上的志愿者经历,需介绍服务内容,分享感受,并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
幸运的:lucky→fortunate
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable, impressive
提高:improve→sharpen, enhance
感激的:grateful→thankful
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
拓展句:Very simple as the task was, I was very proud of it because of its important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This September, I was lucky to be a volunteer for the19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, which will be the most unforgettable experience in my life. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene. (运用了从属连词although引导让步状语从句、从属连词because引导原因状语从句)。
Passage 3
(24-25高一上·辽宁·期中)
假定你是李华,今年暑假你在北京颐和园做志愿者,为外国朋友做向导。请给你的朋友Amanda写一封邮件分享你的经历,内容包括:
1. 志愿活动;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda,
I hope this email finds you well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Amanda,
I hope this email finds you well. This summer, I’ve been volunteering as a guide at the Summer Palace in Beijing. It’s been an amazing experience! I’ve been helping foreign friends explore this beautiful historical site, sharing stories and culture. Every day is filled with new encounters and fascinating conversations. The smiles and thanks I receive make it all worthwhile. I’ve also improved my English and gained a deeper understanding of different cultures. This opportunity has truly been enriching and rewarding. Wish you were here to join me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给朋友Amanda写一封邮件,分享自己在北京颐和园做志愿者,为外国朋友做向导的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了不起的:amazing → marvelous
帮助:help → assist
充满:be filled with → be full of
机会:opportunity → chance
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I’ve been volunteering as a guide at the Summer Palace in Beijing. It’s been an amazing experience!
拓展句:I’ve been volunteering as a guide at the Summer Palace in Beijing, which has been an amazing experience!
【点睛】[高分句型1] The smiles and thanks I receive make it all worthwhile. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Wish you were here to join me!(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)。
主题01 人与社会——社会参与人际关系
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·四川内江·期中)
假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home) 陪老人过中秋节(Mid-Autumn Festival)。请给外教Lucy写封邮件,邀请她一同前往,内容包括:
1. 出发及返回时间。
2. 活动内容:吃月饼,赏月等。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’m writing to invite you to join my classmates in visiting a nursing home to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival. We plan to bring joy and companionship to the elderly there.
The outing will commence at 9:00 am and we expect to return by 5:00 pm. During our visit, we’ll engage in various activities such as sharing delicious mooncakes and admiring the full moon together. It will be a meaningful opportunity to experience traditional Chinese culture while giving back to the community.
Your participation would be greatly appreciated and please let me know if you can join us.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home) 陪老人过中秋节(Mid-Autumn Festival)。要求考生给外教Lucy写封邮件,邀请她一同前往。
【详解】1.词汇积累
快乐:joy→cheer/happiness
参与:engage in → participate in
开始:commence→start
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We plan to bring joy and companionship to the elderly there.
拓展句:We plan to bring joy and companionship to the elderly there, which is extremely significative, in my opinion.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During our visit, we’ll engage in various activities such as sharing delicious mooncakes and admiring the full moon together. (运用了动名词短语的并列结构)
【高分句型2】 Your participation would be greatly appreciated and please let me know if you can join us.(运用了if引导条件状语从句以及情态动词的被动语态结构)。
Passage 2
(24-25高一上·山东聊城·期中)
假如你是高一学生李华,近日你的英国好友Fiona发来邮件说她与母亲之间发生了一点不愉快,因为她最近加入了校舞蹈社团,经常回家很晚,她母亲对此很生气,希望她退出社团。请你用英语给她回一封邮件,宽慰她并为她提供一些改善母女关系的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Fiona,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Fiona,
I’m sorry to hear that your relationship with your mother has been difficult recently. But I can totally understand your feelings. Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, it would be wise of you not to quarrel with your mother, as it won’t improve things, but only make things worse. You’d better have a face-to-face talk with your mother, which will enable both of you to understand each other better. In addition, I recommend that you go home with two or three reliable friends from the dancing club who live close to you. If necessary, give your mother a phone call before you are about to leave school to let her know you are safe.
I hope the above will be of help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Fiona写一封回信,宽慰她并为她提供一些改善母女关系的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难的:difficult→tough
建议:suggestion→recommendation
安全的:safe→secure
对……有帮助:be of help→be beneficial to
2.句式拓展
复合句变成非谓语
原句:You’d better have a face-to-face talk with your mother, which will enable both of you to understand each other better.
拓展句:You’d better have a face-to-face talk with your mother, enabling both of you to understand each other better.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, it would be wise of you not to quarrel with your mother, as it won’t improve things, but only make things worse.(运用了it作形式主语,不定式作真正主语结构和as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, I recommend that you go home with two or three reliable friends from the dancing club who live close to you. (运用了that引导的宾语从句包含虚拟语气省略should结构和who引导的限制性定语从句)。
Passage 3
(24-25高一上·湖南邵阳·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英语报正在举办以“如何处理亲子紧张关系”为主题的征文比赛活动。请你写一篇文章参加比赛,内容包括:
1.亲子紧张关系产生的原因;
2.处理亲子紧张关系具体做法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How Can Teenagers deal with Parent-child Tension?
Nowadays, there is more and more disagreement between teenagers and parents. In my opinion, parent-child tension often arises from a lack of understanding and communication. Teenagers may feel misunderstood by their parents, leading to conflicts.
To handle this tension, teenagers should communicate openly with their parents, expressing their feelings calmly and listening actively. It is also important for teenagers to try to understand their parents’ perspectives and show empathy. Additionally, setting aside quality time for family activities can help strengthen the bond and reduce misunderstandings.
I hope that children and parents can get along well with each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文参加校英文报正在举办的主题为“如何处理亲子紧张关系”的征文比赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
导致:lead to→ result in
表达:express → convey
同情:empathy → compassion
增强:strengthen → enhance
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变成复杂句
原句:In my opinion, parent-child tension often arises from a lack of understanding and communication.
拓展句:I hold the belief that parent-child tension often arises from a lack of understanding and communication.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Teenagers may feel misunderstood by their parents, leading to conflicts. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】I hope that children and parents can get along well with each other. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)。
主题02 人与自我——个人成长与经验反思
Passage 1
(24-25高一上·湖北武汉·期中)
你校英文报Wise Words栏目正以 How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow为题征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你曾遇到的困难或挑战;
2.你寻求建议的经历和收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________
【答案】
How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow
During my high school years, I struggled with math, finding it difficult to keep up with the class. Frustrated, I sought advice from my teacher. She suggested I practice daily and focus on understanding concepts rather than just memorizing. Following her advice, I gradually improved and gained confidence. Not only did my math scores soar, but I also developed a deeper appreciation for the subject. This experience taught me the value of seeking help and the power of perseverance, reinforcing the idea that with the right guidance and effort, any obstacle can be overcome.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生围绕“How Taking Advice Helped Me Grow”这一主题,叙述自己曾遇到的困难或挑战,以及寻求建议的经历和收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
挣扎,努力:struggle → wrestle/endeavor
沮丧的:frustrated → disappointed/depressed
建议:advice → suggestion/proposal
坚持不懈:perseverance → persistence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During my high school years, I struggled with math, finding it difficult to keep up with the class.
拓展句:During my high school years, as I was struggling with math, I found it increasingly difficult to keep pace with my classmates.
【点睛】[高分句型1] She suggested I practice daily and focus on understanding concepts rather than just memorizing. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] Following her advice, I gradually improved and gained confidence. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型3] This experience taught me the value of seeking help and the power of perseverance, reinforcing the idea that with the right guidance and effort, any obstacle can be overcome. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和连词that引导的同位语从句)。
Passage 2
(24-25高一上·江苏常州·期中)
假定你是John Li,刚结束了为期一年的英国交换生项目。学校英语报邀请你写一篇英语文章,分享你的见闻。内容包括:
1.你的经历:
2.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Exchange Experience
My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________
【答案】
My Exchange Experience
My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was truly a life-changing experience. I attended lectures, participated in seminars, and engaged in group discussions, all of which enriched my academic knowledge. Besides, I visited various historical landmarks, which deepened my understanding of British culture.
Living in a different country, I faced challenges like language barriers and cultural differences. However, these difficulties also brought me a sense of achievement as I gradually adapted. The program not only broadened my horizons but also made me more independent and confident. I am grateful for this opportunity and will cherish the memories forever.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生刚结束了为期一年的英国交换生项目。学校英语报邀请考生写一篇英语文章,分享自己的见闻。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
各种各样的:various → a variety of
困难:challenge→difficulty
感激的:grateful→ appreciative
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was truly a life-changing experience.
拓展句:My recent one-year exchange program in the UK was truly a life-changing experience, which leaves me deep impression.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I attended lectures, participated in seminars, and engaged in group discussions, all of which enriched my academic knowledge.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Living in a different country, I faced challenges like language barriers and cultural differences.(运用了现在分词作状语的结构)。
Passage 3
(24-25高一上·山东德州·期中)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike来信询问你刚刚开启的高中生活,请回邮件,内容包括:
1. 个人经历;
2. 收获与感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
I hope you’re doing well! There’s so much to share about my high school life I just started.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I hope you’re doing well! There’s so much to share about my high school life I just started.
I’ve joined the school’s debate team and signed up for the basketball club, which has been a great way to make new friends. The classes are more challenging than before, especially math and chemistry. The teachers are very supportive, which helps a lot.
I feel that high school is both exciting and demanding. Through these experiences, I’ve learned the importance of balancing studies and after-school activities. It’s been a great start, and I’m looking forward to more adventures.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mike回信,告知他你的高中生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
报名参加:sign up for→enter for
令人激动的:exciting→thrilling
重要性:importance→significance
开始:start→beginning
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The classes are more challenging than before, especially math and chemistry.
拓展句:The classes are more challenging than before, especially math and chemistry, which require a lot of effort and practice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve joined the school’s debate team and signed up for the basketball club, which has been a great way to make new friends. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The teachers are very supportive, which helps a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)。
主题03 人与自然——自然体验与生态感知
Passage 1
(23-24高一上·山东临沂·期中)
假定你是李华,上周日你和家人去了森林公园露营。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,分享此次经历,内容包括:
1. 露营的时间和地点;2. 露营的过程;3. 你的感受。
注意:写作词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:演练:drill
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________
【答案】One possible version:
My Camping Experience
Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share my camping experience last Sunday.
My family and I went camping in the forest park. Upon arrival, we set up our tents and prepared a delicious picnic with the food we brought. The park was incredibly beautiful, with fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere. We enjoyed a relaxing picnic surrounded by nature. In the afternoon, we explored the park, discovering various plants and fascinating creatures along the way. As night fell, we built a bonfire and shared stories under the starry sky.
It was a truly magical experience. This camping trip was a fantastic opportunity to connect with nature and create lasting memories with my family.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。上周日你和家人去了森林公园露营,要求考生为班级英语角写一篇短文,分享此次经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
美味的:delicious→tasty
极其:incredibly→extremely
各种各样的:various→diverse
机会:opportunity→chance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In the afternoon, we explored the park, discovering various plants and fascinating creatures along the way.
拓展句:In the afternoon, while we were exploring the park, we discovered various plants and fascinating creatures.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Upon arrival, we set up our tents and prepared a delicious picnic with the food we brought.(省略that的定语从句)
[高分句型2]As night fell, we built a bonfire and shared stories under the starry sky.(as引导的时间状语从句)。
Passage 2
(23-24高一上·海南·期中)
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Henry来信说自己家乡灾害频发,前不久又遭受龙卷风袭击,他向你询问中国的自然灾害情况。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 中国的自然灾害情况。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:龙卷风tornado
Dear Henry,
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Best regards,
【答案】Dear Henry,
I was deeply saddened to hear about the recent tornado that struck your hometown, along with the frequent disasters you’ve been experiencing. Please know that my thoughts are with you and your community during this difficult time.
Regarding China, we also face various natural disasters, including floods, earthquakes, and occasionally tornadoes, and their frequency and severity vary across regions. The government and people work tirelessly to mitigate their impacts and provide relief. I believe that as long as we work together, we can definitely reduce the negative impacts caused by natural disasters.
Take care and stay safe.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Henry写一封电子邮件,对于他来信说自己家乡灾害频发表示安慰,并介绍中国的自然灾害情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
悲伤的:saddened→grieved
各种各样的:various→a variety of
缓解:mitigate→ease off
肯定地:definitely→surely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The government and people work tirelessly to mitigate their impacts and provide relief.
拓展句:The government and people work tirelessly to mitigate their impacts and provide relief, which are greatly meaningful for all the people.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was deeply saddened to hear about the recent tornado that struck your hometown, along with the frequent disasters you’ve been experiencing. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Regarding China, we also face various natural disasters, including floods, earthquakes, and occasionally tornadoes, and their frequency and severity vary across regions. (运用了介词短语作状语)。
Passage 3
(24-25高一上·云南临沧·期中)
假定你是李华,你校为加强同学们对自然灾害的防护意识,在上周三进行了一次地震演习。请你为你校英文报写一份报道,内容包括:
1. 演习目的;
2. 演习过程;
3. 同学们的收获。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:地震演习 earthquake drill
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【答案】
Last Wednesday, our school organized an earthquake drill to enhance students’ awareness of natural disaster preparations.
The drill started with a loud alarm signaling the beginning of the earthquake. Teachers and students quickly hid under their desks, covering their heads with their hands. After the alarm stopped, we were guided to escape from the building in an orderly manner, gathering in appointed safe areas outside.
Through this practice, many students realized the importance of staying calm and following safety procedures during emergencies. It was a valuable learning experience for all of us.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,为校英文报撰写一篇关于上周三学校进行的地震演习的报道,内容需涵盖演习的目的、过程以及同学们的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演习:drill → exercise/rehearsal
提高:enhance → improve/boost
开始:start → begin
聚集:gather → assemble/get together
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The drill started with a loud alarm signaling the beginning of the earthquake.
拓展句:The drill commenced with the sounding of a loud alarm, which served as a signal for the simulated earthquake to begin.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last Wednesday, our school organized an earthquake drill to enhance students’ awareness of natural disaster preparations.(运用了动词不定式短语作目的状语)
[高分句型2] After the alarm stopped, we were guided to escape from the building in an orderly manner, gathering in appointed safe areas outside.(运用了从属连词after引导时间状语从句)。
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