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Unit 3 Fascinating Parks主题公园
应用文写作精练(解析版)
写作主题
识
主题:主题公园
介绍主题公园,可以用总—分—总的结构来写:
第一部分:引出话题(介绍主题公园的总体情况);
第二部分:具体介绍主题公园的特色;
第三部分:总结全文(总体评价)。
写作词汇短语:
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1. attractive adj. 有吸引力的,引人入胜的
2. delighted/pleased adj. 高兴的
3. popular adj. 受欢迎的
4. various adj. 各种各样的
5. culture n. 文化
6. sight n. 景物
7. adorable adj. 可爱的;讨人喜爱的
8. wander v. 漫游;闲逛
9. amusement n. 娱乐活动
10. entrance/admission ticket 门票
11. tour agency 旅行社
12. natural scenery 自然风光
13. scenery spots/sites 景点
14. places of interest 名胜古迹
15. historic sites 历史古迹
16. cover an area of 占地……面积
17. have a population of 有……人口
18. be rich/wealthy in 盛产
19. be famous as 作为……而著名
20. roller coaster n. 过山车
写作句型:
1. 介绍某地所处的地理位置及以什么闻名等,常用语句:
①be located/situated in, lie in, in the north of/to the east of
②be just like, look like, as beautiful as a flower, be compared to
③be famous/well-known as/for
2. 介绍某地的面积、人口及气候等,常用语句:
①It covers an area of about...square kilometers.
②Its area is...square kilometers.
③It has a population of...
④Its population is...
⑤The average temperature is...
⑥The hottest months are...
3. 介绍某地的风景、名胜等,常用语句:
①It has many places of interest,such as...
②They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad...
③It’s a wonderful place with...
④It really deserves the name of...
4.介绍公园历史
①It has a long history of ...years.
②...with a history of ...years.
③...has witnessed too much ...in history.
④...dates back to/dates from ...
5.介绍交通方式
①You can reach the building/museum by ...
②You can get there a little more quickly by ...
模拟真题示例:
(24-25高三上·浙江杭州·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Henry要来中国游玩,请你给他写一封信,向他推荐一个文化特色主题公园。内容包括:
1.公园简介;
2.推荐理由;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I’m thrilled to hear you’re visiting China! I’d highly recommend the Splendid China Folk Village in Shenzhen. It showcases China’s rich culture and history with miniature replicas of famous landmarks and traditional performances. It’s a great way to experience China’s diversity in one place. The park’s unique combination of entertainment and education makes it an unforgettable experience.
I hope you enjoy your visit and look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写信给朋友Henry推荐一个文化特色的主题公园。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
惊奇的:thrilled→excited
展示:showcase→exhibit
传统的:traditional→conventional
出名的:famous→well-known
2.句式拓展:
同义句转换
原句:The park’s unique combination of entertainment and education makes it an unforgettable experience.
拓展句:It is the park’s unique combination of entertainment and education that makes it an unforgettable experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to hear you’re visiting China!(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s a great way to experience China’s diversity in one place.(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
举一反三:
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim对“国际范儿”的北京首钢园很感兴趣,发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文回复,内容包括:
1.介绍情况;
2.表达感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Beijing Shougang Park. This park used to be a steel mill and has now been transformed into a trendy place full of an international vibe. Along the walkways, you can see graffiti artworks that add a touch of youthful energy to the whole area.
There are lots of modern art installations, cool cafes and high-tech exhibition halls. It also hosted some events during the 2022 Winter Olympics.
Visiting the park is really an eye-opening experience. It combines the industrial heritage with modern fashion, showing the charm of Beijing’s transformation. I’m sure you’ll love it if you come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份,用英文回复外国好友Jim,介绍“国际范儿”的北京首钢园相关情况并表达个人感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad → pleased/happy
转变,改造:transform → convert/change
时髦的,潮流的:trendy → fashionable/stylish
结合,融合:combine → integrate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There are lots of modern art installations, cool cafes and high-tech exhibition halls.
拓展句:There are a large number of modern art installations, cool cafes and high-tech exhibition halls which attract numerous visitors every day.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Along the walkways, you can see graffiti artworks that add a touch of youthful energy to the whole area. (运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Visiting the park is really an eye opening experience. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
[高分句型3] It combines the industrial heritage with modern fashion, showing the charm of Beijing’s transformation. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
1.假定你是李华,学校英文报正在征集以“A Charming Park”为主题的稿件。请你写一篇英语文章投稿。内容包括:
1.公园的基本信息;
2.公园内景色的详细描写及你的感受;
3.推荐大家游览。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】A Charming Park
Near our school lies a charming park named Sunshine Park. It covers about 10 hectares and is famous for its beautiful scenery and peaceful environment.
Walking into the park, you’ll see colorful flowers blooming along the paths, and tall trees providing cool shade. A sparkling lake reflects the blue sky, where ducks swim happily. The fresh air and birds’ songs always make me feel relaxed and joyful.
I highly recommend visiting this park. It’s a perfect place to unwind and enjoy nature’s beauty.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报正在征集以“A Charming Park”为主题的稿件。请考生写一篇英语文章投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→well-known
平静的:peaceful→tranquil
绽放:blooming→flowering
放松:unwind→relax
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I highly recommend visiting this park.
拓展句:I highly recommend that you should visit this park.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Walking into the park, you’ll see colorful flowers blooming along the paths, and tall trees providing cool shade. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] A sparkling lake reflects the blue sky, where ducks swim happily. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.假设你是李华,参加武汉市中学生英语演讲比赛,话题为推荐家乡的一处公园。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 公园简介;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加相关细节。
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【答案】 Good morning, everyone. It’s my great pleasure to deliver a speech here. When it comes to the Parks in Wuhan, I’d like to introduce the Riverside Park, hoping you like it and pay a visit to it someday.
The reasons why I introduce it are varied. First of all, during the visit, you can have a better understanding of Yangtze River as well as gain exciting visual experience. In addition, the leisure and sport center provides you with great opportunities for relaxation in a completely new way. You can not only wander on the bank of the river but also enjoy comfortable atmosphere. With all the natural beauty, the Riverside Park has been gaining greater popularity among visitors from all over the country and even other parts of the world.
For those who want to pay a visit to Wuhan, there are many buses coming directly to the park. Do come and have fun with your friends during your holiday! Thank you for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于演讲稿,要求考生写一篇演讲稿,参加武汉市中学生英语演讲比赛,话题为推荐家乡的一处公园,简单介绍公园,并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
和、又:as well as→and
获得:gain→attain
此外:in addition→besides
提供:provide→offer
机会:opportunity→chance
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换:
原句:With all the natural beauty, the Riverside Park has been gaining greater popularity among visitors from all over the country and even other parts of the world.
拓展句:With all the natural beauty, the Riverside Park has been gaining greater popularity among visitors who are from all over the country and even other parts of the world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to the Parks in Wuhan, I’d like to introduce the Riverside Park, hoping you like it and pay a visit to it someday.(运用了以连词when引导的时间状语从句、现在分词作状语以及省略连词that的宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】For those who want to pay a visit to Wuhan, there are many buses coming directly to the park.(运用了以关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句。)
3.结合课文主题,使用本单元词汇与句型写一篇80词左右的短文。
请简要介绍迪士尼主题公园,注意使用本单元语法知识。
迪士尼的主题公园也许是最有名的,但是它们却不是最有趣的。去迪士尼公园旅游的确很令人兴奋。就我个人而言,看到孩子们玩得开心,打扮成他们最喜欢的角色时如此开心的样子,都会让我回想起曾经无忧无虑的童年。在你计划下一次去迪士尼乐园或环球影城旅行之前,考虑一下去参观某个生态友好的主题公园或许也是个好主意。
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【答案】Disney’s theme parks might be the best known, but they are far from the most interesting. Visiting Disney’s theme parks is really fascinating. Personally, seeing kids having fun, dressing up as their favorite characters and being so happy can make me recall the once carefree childhood. Before you plan your next trip to Disney parks or Universal Studios, taking visiting one of those ecologyfriendly theme parks into consideration may be a good idea, too.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合课文主题写一篇短文介绍迪士尼主题公园。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可能:might→ may
有吸引力的:fascinating→ attractive
开心的:happy→ glad
考虑:take … into consideration→ take into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Personally, seeing kids having fun, dressing up as their favorite characters and being so happy can make me recall the once carefree childhood.
拓展句:Personally, seeing kids having fun, dressing up as their favorite characters and being so happy can make me recall the childhood, which is once carefree.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Visiting Disney’s theme parks is really fascinating.(运用了动名词作主语)
【高分句型2】Before you plan your next trip to Disney parks or Universal Studios, taking visiting one of those ecologyfriendly theme parks into consideration may be a good idea, too.(运用了before引导的时间状语从句与动名词作主语)
4.请参考下表信息写一篇英文短文,推荐中国西北之行的亮点之一——张掖丹霞国家地质公园。
位置
靠近甘肃省张掖市,占地约536平方公里
亮点
1.有着五颜六色的风景和美妙的远足小径;
2. 数百万年形成的自然美景:红色砂岩经过风化和水的侵蚀,以及其他自然环境的影响;
3. 壮观多彩的神奇岩层。
游客
成千上万的人流量
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:张掖丹霞国家地质公园Zhangye Danxia National Geological Park 砂岩sandstone 侵蚀erosion 风化weathering
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【答案】参考范文:
If it is the colourful scenery and wonderful hiking trails that you are looking for, come to Zhangye Danxia National Geological Park! It is one of the highlights of the trip to the northwestern part of China.
Located near the city of Zhangye in Gansu Province, the Park covers about 536 square kilometers. It is famous for the spectacular and colourful mountain range of rock formations, with mixed colours of red, yellow, blue, white, green, etc. It took millions of years to form the splendid red sandstone, which went through weathering and water erosion, together with other influences of natural environment. The natural beauty of the rocks appeals to tens of thousands of people to come here each year. Therefore, visiting the colourful, magical rock formations in person will surely be an unforgettable experience.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生参考表格信息写一篇英文短文,推荐中国西北之行的亮点之一——张掖丹霞国家地质公园。
【详解】词汇积累
1.词汇积累
有名的:famous→well-known
经历:go through→undergo
吸引:appeal to→attract
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Located near the city of Zhangye in Gansu Province, the Park covers about 536 square kilometers.
拓展句:The Park which is located near the city of Zhangye in Gansu Province covers about 536 square kilometers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If it is the colourful scenery and wonderful hiking trails that you are looking for, come to Zhangye Danxia National Geological Park!(运用了if引导的状语从句和强调句)
【高分句型2】It took millions of years to form the splendid red sandstone, which went through weathering and water erosion, together with other influences of natural environment.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.假设你是李华,你校美籍学生Lily来信请你向她推荐中山市一座值得去的公园。请你给她回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 公园介绍;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lily,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Lily,
Having received your email asking me about a park worth a visit in Zhongshan City, I’m glad to recommend to you Cuiheng National Wetland Park.
Located in Cuiheng District, Cuiheng National Wetland Park combines city life, nature, and wetlands, making it a popular destination both for tourists and local residents. At the park, taking a boat tour, walking along paths, and experiencing local customs and traditions are at the top of the list of people’s favourite activities. It is a must-see place because the scenery is beyond description. Besides, this green, watery world is home to many birds and fishes.
I’m sure that you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给美籍学生Lily推荐中山市值得去的公园,需介绍公园,并陈述推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→happy, pleased
受欢迎的:popular→sought-after, hot
此外:besides→in addition, what’s more
玩得开心:have a good time→have fun, enjoy oneself
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Located in Cuiheng District, Cuiheng National Wetland Park combines city life, nature, and wetlands, making it a popular destination both for tourists and local residents.
拓展句:Located in Cuiheng District, Cuiheng National Wetland Park combines city life, nature, and wetlands, which makes it a popular destination both for tourists and local residents.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having received your email asking me about a park worth a visit in Zhongshan City, I’m glad to recommend to you Cuiheng National Wetland Park. (运用了现在分词的完成式作原因状语)
[高分句型2] It is a must-see place because the scenery is beyond description. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
6.假设你是李华,某外企拟在你市建造一个主题公园,现就相关情况征求市民的意见,请你给该项目负责人Mr. White写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的看法,内容包括:
1.公园的主题;
2.最佳位置及理由;
3.游乐项目。
注意:
1.试数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. White,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. White,
I’m glad to hear that a theme park will be built in our city. I’d like to give my opinions about it.
I would expect it to be a water park where we can see the interesting mysteries of the underwater world and do various exciting water activities. Then I suggest locating it in the west of the city, close to both the subway station and train station for convenient access. Moreover, there should also be relaxing shows and thrilling rides for all adventurous people to enjoy.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。某外企拟在市区建造一个主题公园,现就相关情况征求市民的意见。要求考生给该项目负责人Mr. White写一封电子邮件,谈谈自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → pleased/delighted
看法:opinion → view/perspective
各种各样的:various → a variety of
建议:suggest → suggest/propose
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, there should also be relaxing shows and thrilling rides for all adventurous people to enjoy.
拓展句:Moreover, there should also be relaxing shows and thrilling rides that all adventurous people can enjoy.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m glad to hear that a theme park will be built in our city. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I would expect it to be a water park where we can see the interesting mysteries of the underwater world and do various exciting water activities. (运用了关系副词where引导限制性定语从句)
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应用文写作精练(解析版)
写作主题
识
主题:主题公园
介绍主题公园,可以用总—分—总的结构来写:
第一部分:引出话题(介绍主题公园的总体情况);
第二部分:具体介绍主题公园的特色;
第三部分:总结全文(总体评价)。
写作词汇短语:
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1. attractive adj. 有吸引力的,引人入胜的
2. delighted/pleased adj. 高兴的
3. popular adj. 受欢迎的
4. various adj. 各种各样的
5. culture n. 文化
6. sight n. 景物
7. adorable adj. 可爱的;讨人喜爱的
8. wander v. 漫游;闲逛
9. amusement n. 娱乐活动
10. entrance/admission ticket 门票
11. tour agency 旅行社
12. natural scenery 自然风光
13. scenery spots/sites 景点
14. places of interest 名胜古迹
15. historic sites 历史古迹
16. cover an area of 占地……面积
17. have a population of 有……人口
18. be rich/wealthy in 盛产
19. be famous as 作为……而著名
20. roller coaster n. 过山车
写作句型:
1. 介绍某地所处的地理位置及以什么闻名等,常用语句:
①be located/situated in, lie in, in the north of/to the east of
②be just like, look like, as beautiful as a flower, be compared to
③be famous/well-known as/for
2. 介绍某地的面积、人口及气候等,常用语句:
①It covers an area of about...square kilometers.
②Its area is...square kilometers.
③It has a population of...
④Its population is...
⑤The average temperature is...
⑥The hottest months are...
3. 介绍某地的风景、名胜等,常用语句:
①It has many places of interest,such as...
②They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad...
③It’s a wonderful place with...
④It really deserves the name of...
4.介绍公园历史
①It has a long history of ...years.
②...with a history of ...years.
③...has witnessed too much ...in history.
④...dates back to/dates from ...
5.介绍交通方式
①You can reach the building/museum by ...
②You can get there a little more quickly by ...
模拟真题示例:
(24-25高三上·浙江杭州·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Henry要来中国游玩,请你给他写一封信,向他推荐一个文化特色主题公园。内容包括:
1.公园简介;
2.推荐理由;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
举一反三:
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim对“国际范儿”的北京首钢园很感兴趣,发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文回复,内容包括:
1.介绍情况;
2.表达感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1.假定你是李华,学校英文报正在征集以“A Charming Park”为主题的稿件。请你写一篇英语文章投稿。内容包括:
1.公园的基本信息;
2.公园内景色的详细描写及你的感受;
3.推荐大家游览。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.假设你是李华,参加武汉市中学生英语演讲比赛,话题为推荐家乡的一处公园。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 公园简介;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加相关细节。
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3.结合课文主题,使用本单元词汇与句型写一篇80词左右的短文。
请简要介绍迪士尼主题公园,注意使用本单元语法知识。
迪士尼的主题公园也许是最有名的,但是它们却不是最有趣的。去迪士尼公园旅游的确很令人兴奋。就我个人而言,看到孩子们玩得开心,打扮成他们最喜欢的角色时如此开心的样子,都会让我回想起曾经无忧无虑的童年。在你计划下一次去迪士尼乐园或环球影城旅行之前,考虑一下去参观某个生态友好的主题公园或许也是个好主意。
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4.请参考下表信息写一篇英文短文,推荐中国西北之行的亮点之一——张掖丹霞国家地质公园。
位置
靠近甘肃省张掖市,占地约536平方公里
亮点
1.有着五颜六色的风景和美妙的远足小径;
2. 数百万年形成的自然美景:红色砂岩经过风化和水的侵蚀,以及其他自然环境的影响;
3. 壮观多彩的神奇岩层。
游客
成千上万的人流量
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:张掖丹霞国家地质公园Zhangye Danxia National Geological Park 砂岩sandstone 侵蚀erosion 风化weathering
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5.假设你是李华,你校美籍学生Lily来信请你向她推荐中山市一座值得去的公园。请你给她回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 公园介绍;
2. 推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lily,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.假设你是李华,某外企拟在你市建造一个主题公园,现就相关情况征求市民的意见,请你给该项目负责人Mr. White写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的看法,内容包括:
1.公园的主题;
2.最佳位置及理由;
3.游乐项目。
注意:
1.试数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. White,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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