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外研版2024英语
七年级下册
Unit 4 The art of having fun
Developing ideas - Read for writing ①
What activities do you usually do at home that take up a lot of your time and maybe affect your study?
Time-eating monsters
Look and think
Top 10 time-eating monsters among students
social chatting brushing mobile phone information reading novels online playing video games watching TV dramas and movies watching short drama watching short videos shopping online watching live streams writing blogs on moments 82 54 78 86 74 66 90 58 50 46
Lead in
Read and learn
How do you fight the monster?
What is the monster ?
Why is it a monster?
What is the monster ?
Read and learn
How does the writer lead in the topic?
Have you ever had something that eat away your time and you never notice it? Well, for me, it is ______.
I have a time-eating monster in my life, and it’s _______. It isn't big or scary, but it is dangerous.
The ____ is my personal time-eating monster. It doesn’t seem scary, but it’s a really problem.
Why is it a monster?
2 At first, we may all think, "I'll just have a little fun." We turn on the computer and start a game. But soon the monster takes over. It starts to eat away our time, minute by minute. But we just sit there and look at the screen without noticing it at all.
3 We often get lost in the monster's world like this. We become couch potatoes with sore necks and dry eyes. We miss out on sweet moments with loved ones. We are deaf to the real world.
cause
effect
How does the writer describe the process过程?
Read and learn
What is social media? [QQ,wechat,tiktok,rednotes]
There are two pic, whcih boy didin’t notice the monster?
sore neck means comfortable or not comfotable? What is counch potato? Is couch potato a person or thing?
What is the boy like? is he healthy? Will he be good at his study? he completely get lost in the monster’s world? miss out. Which pic shows the boy miss out the moments? deaf: What mean? can’t see or can’t hear me.
think ingroup: what will happen if we we keep doing this?[sore eyes, influence our study,bad for our health? no good friend ] is it bad?
How can we keep it away?[ by having fun in a balanced way] Here we can we , balace mean [pic]. So how to get a balance way? any other advice?
Can you think of other ways to keep it away and have fun in a balanced way? [try different clubs, take sports with family, make new frineds by join club, takepart in intereesting activity, listen to music, read book with..., climb mount]
the choice is ours!
At first, we want just a little fun.
But soon, the monster takes over
We didn't notice the monster.
The time-eating monster
We become couch potatoes.
We miss out our sweet moments.
We’re deaf to the real world.
Read and learn
Learning to learn
Using linking words for time order, like "at first" and "soon", makes your story easy to understand;
... without even noticing it at all.
Read and think
What other effects can you think of?
e.g. -----We get really weak because we don't exercise. We just sit there all the time, and our muscles get smaller and we get tired easily.
get weak;
too shy to talk with people;
have trouble sleeping;
forget things easily;
Word Bank
Learning to learn
Using the first person to give examples can make it seem real and help others understand how you feel.
Read and think
We get really weak because we don't exercise. We just sit there all the time, and our muscles get small and we get tired easily.
We're not good at talking to people face - to - face anymore. We're so used to the virtual world that talking in real life feels hard.
We have trouble sleeping. Too much screen time makes it hard to fall asleep, and then we're sleepy during the day.
We forget things easily. We always look things up on the computer, so our memory isn't very good.
We get bad backs and shoulders. We always bend over our bodies, and it hurts.
How do you fight the monster?
4 Just remember, too much fun also makes Jack a dull boy! The time - eating monster will always be there. But we can keep it away by having fun in a balanced way.
5 So, stand up and leave the screens! Go outside, feel the sun on your face, and jog in the fresh air. Play tennis or go hiking with your friends. Talk about your day with your family. There is so much for you to do. The choice is ours.
Suggestioin
Conclusion
Topic sentence
Example
in a balanced way
The choice is ours
stand up... Go ...
Play ... talk ...
What suggestions does the writer give ?
How does the writer give suggestions?
imperative sentences
Read and learn
But we can keep it away by having fun.
Stand up and leave the screens!
Go outside, feel the sun on your face, and jog in the fresh air.
Play tennis or go hiking with your friends.
Talk about your day with your family.
There is so much for you to do. .
Is it a good writing?
I should use my smart phone in a balanced way. Make a time plan. Make good use of TV. Enjoy nature with my family. Join clubs to learn new skills.
Linking words:
so / and / or / but
First, second, ...
Suggestion :
imperative sentences
Read and analyze
Why do people like “monster”?
The writer describe the problem as time eating monster, What other names canyou think of to describe the problem?
[it bring so much fun, ] All work no play make jack dull boy.What if we too much fun??
2[staand up and fight the monster\ dn’t waste time\ dangerous and hidden monster / please leave your phone/ much fun also a dull boy/ don’t be counch potato]
I have a big problem with the “time - eating monster” — the TV shows. They are so interesting that I often get lost in the monster’s world. I want to stop, but it's too hard.
At first I often think “I'll just have a little fun.” But soon, the monster takes over and starts to eat up all my time. I sit in front of the TV for hours and stay up late at night. As a result, I become a couch potato, missing a lot of sweet moments with my friends and family. What's more, I'm sleepy in class the next day and get an “F” on exams.
To fight this, I know I should have fun in a balanced way. First, make a time plan and give the TV remote to my parents. Enjoy nature with my family, like going jogging together. Join some clubs to learn new skills so I won’t feel bored. There are so many things to do. The choice is mine.
Read and learn
Tell us something about your “ monster ” .
Think and share
Here is my example of fight with the time eating monster.
What id yours? I really enjoy ______
Why is it a monster? (cause and influence)AS a result , _________
How can you fight it?(advice) I think ______
[go shoping,lost money. junk food, heavy] I hope you can balance
Homework
Homework
Homework
Must-do:
Choose one time- eating monster and write a passage about it.
Choose-to-do:
Search for more information about other time monster and make a list.
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