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专题05 书信写作-应用文写作6大常考话题
话题1 建议信-学校生活
话题4 运动与健康
话题2 告知信-旅游
话题5 自然生态
话题3 做人与做事
话题6 语言学习
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话题1 建议信-学校生活
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市江津中学·期中)
Passage 1
1.假定你是李华。你的美国笔友John刚刚就读高中,目前正在选择加入社团,在Literature Club和Computer Science Club之间犹豫不决。他发邮件向你求助。请用英语给他回一封电子邮件,提供建议。
内容包括:1. 表达理解;2. 分析情况;3. 给出建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·湖南省部分学校·期中)
Passage 2
2.假定你是李华,你的英国好友James因和同学发生争吵而感到非常困扰,写邮件向你求助。请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 提出与人交往的建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市多校·期中)
Passage 3
3.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mary给你写了一封电子邮件,诉说她对高中生活的不适应。请你给她回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.你的建议;
3.表达愿望。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·陕西省西安雁南中学·期中)
Passage 4
4.假如你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(24-25学年高一上·安徽省固镇县联考·期中)
Passage 5
5.为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jessica,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:高中学习压力较大,导致自己近期比较焦虑且容易发脾气,从而影响了正常的学习和生活。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Worried,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jessica
话题2 告知信-旅游
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市南开中学·期中)
Passage 1
1.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter最近打算到你的家乡旅游,请写一封建议信为他提供旅行指南。
要点如下:1. 介绍你的家乡;2. 推荐特色目的地;3. 告知旅行注意事项。
注意:1. 写作词数应为120左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·福建省福州三状元高级中学·期中)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封信,告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。内容包括:
1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行;
2.计划在伦敦停留5天;
3.旅行计划:
(1)第一天参观伦敦塔桥(Tower Bridge)和海德公园(Hyde Park);
(2)第二天参观大本钟(Big Ben)和白金汉宫(Buckingham Palace);
(3)第三天参观大英博物馆(British Museum);
(4)去购物。
4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(24-25学年高一上·山西省大同市·期中)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,今年暑假你和家人去了北岳恒山旅游。请你给英国的朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1. 旅游经历;
2. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you my family travel to Hengshan Mountain this summer vacation.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
话题3 做人与做事
(24-25学年高一上·河北省沧州市·期中)
Passage 1
1.假定你是李华,你校文化节即将到来,届时将有各种各样的艺术竞赛。请你给交换生同学Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍文化节情况;
2.发出邀请;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·江苏省扬州市江都区·期中)
Passage 2
2.假定你是李华,你的朋友 Jack 沉迷于网络游戏而不能自拔,导致学习成绩下降,与父母关系恶化,身体和精神状况也下降,现写信向你寻求帮助,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解和关心;
2.提出具体建议;
3.希望与祝福。
注意:
1.词数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:沉溺于 be addicted to; 沉溺 addiction
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市巴蜀教育集团·期中)
Passage 3
3.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alice来信向你倾诉她深受体重问题的困扰,希望你能给她一些健康减肥的建议。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信:
1. 表示理解和关心;
2. 给出具体的减肥建议(如合理饮食、适量运动、保持良好作息等);
3. 鼓励她保持积极心态,相信自己能够成功。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Alice,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·山西省太原市·期中)
Passage 4
4.假定你是李华,因你近期复习备考,不能按时收看英国笔友Penny本周末进行的网络演讲直播。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达歉意;
(2)说明原因;
(3)询问对方回看方式。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hi Penny!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·湖南省名校联考联合体·期中)
Passage 5
5.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris在新学校与新同学相处不愉快,很烦恼。他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.表明目的;
2.表示理解;
3.提出建议(至少三条)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you have difficulty getting along well with your new classmates,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
话题4 运动与健康
(24-25学年高一上·北京市延庆区·期中)
Passage 1
1.根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
1. What was held in your school last Friday? (a sports meet)
2. When did the sports meet start? (at eight o’clock in the morning)
3. How many events were there in the sports meet? (nearly twenty)
4. What event did you take part in? (the 800-metre race)
5. What did your classmates do while you were running? (rise from their seats, cheer for me)
6. Did you win the race?
7. How did you feel?
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(24-25学年高一上·浙江省金华十校·期中)
Passage 2
2.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack在社交媒体上看到了你参加运动会的照片,写信向你了解相关情况,请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 时间地点;
2. 你的项目;
3. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25学年高一上·山西省晋城市多校·期中)
Passage 3
3.假定你是李华,你校国际部下周举行体育运动会,请你给负责人Smith写一封信报名参加。内容包括:
1. 参赛项目;
2. 你的优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
话题5 自然生态
(24-25高一上·云南昭通·阶段练习)
Passage 1
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友汤姆从电视新闻上得知你所在的城市发生了地震,十分担心。请你给汤姆写一封信,告知其相关情况,内容包括:
1.你的家人平安地逃过一劫;
2.该地震的影响:6人死亡,500多人受伤,200多所房子成为废墟;
3.地震后的救援情况;
4.地震发生后你的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
假设你是学生会主席李华,你校邀请地震专家李教授来校做了有关地震防灾知识方面的讲座,请你写一封邮件,把讲座的情况告诉请假未听讲座的交换生Tom,内容包括以下要点:
1. 讲座的时间、地点;
2. 讲座内容;
3. 你的看法。
注意:1. 词数100词左右;
2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25高一上·江西南昌·阶段练习)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Joe的家乡遭遇了严重地震,他的家受损严重,他本人也受伤了。请你给他写一封信,要点包括:
1.安慰和鼓励; 2.为他提供帮助(如募捐等)。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(24-25高一上·海南·期中)
Passage 4
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Henry来信说自己家乡灾害频发,前不久又遭受龙卷风袭击,他向你询问中国的自然灾害情况。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 中国的自然灾害情况。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:龙卷风tornado
Dear Henry,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你的外国网友Joe的家乡遭遇了洪涝灾害。请你给他写一封电子邮件,要点包括:
(1)给予安慰和鼓励;
(2)提供帮助。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
话题6 语言学习
(2025高一上·湖南岳阳·专题练习)
Passage 1
假定你是李华,来自英国的交换生 Tom 即将来你校交流学习。他想提前了解一下你的学校以及学习中文的方法,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍你们学校的校规;
2. 给他一些如何学习中文的建议;
3. 欢迎他来你家做客并送上你的祝福。
注意:
1. 不少于80词;
2. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
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Passage 2
假定你校英文论坛正在就“How to learn English words”进行讨论。请用英文回帖,表明自己对此问题的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 3
假定你是李华。你的英语笔友Alex给你发来邮件,抱怨说背英语单词表既困难又枯燥。你认为这种学习方法并不合适。请你给Alex回复邮件,提出你的看法和建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
假定你是李华,现准备参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛,你在语言运用、发音(pronunciation)和语调(intonation)方面遇到了困难。请给你的外籍教师Mr. Smith写封信,请他帮忙提出建议。
内容包括:1. 求助事由;2. 希望指导;3. 感谢帮助。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你叫李华,你的美国朋友John来信,说他正在学习中文,他希望暑假来中国旅游能用中文和中国朋友交流,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给John写封回信,提几点建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
How is everything going?
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mary对汉语学习很感兴趣,写信向你咨询怎样才能学好汉语。请你给她回一封信,解答她的疑问。回信应包含以下内容:
1. 多阅读汉语方面的经典书籍;
2. 多听多看汉语节目;
3. 结交一些中国朋友。
注意:
1. 文章应包括以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右。
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$专题05 书信写作-应用文写作6大常考话题
话题1 建议信-学校生活
话题4 运动与健康
话题2 告知信-旅游
话题5 自然生态
话题3 做人与做事
话题6 语言学习
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话题1 建议信-学校生活
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市江津中学·期中)
Passage 1
1.假定你是李华。你的美国笔友John刚刚就读高中,目前正在选择加入社团,在Literature Club和Computer Science Club之间犹豫不决。他发邮件向你求助。请用英语给他回一封电子邮件,提供建议。
内容包括:1. 表达理解;2. 分析情况;3. 给出建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
You have asked me for advice as to whether you should join the Literature Club or the Computer Science Club. I totally understand your situation as I have once been there too. Now I’m writing to provide some useful suggestions.
You must keep in mind that, above all, your extra-curricular activity is a preparation for your high school study and future career. Absolutely, computer science will best equip you to earn a better career. Besides, since we are now in the age of the high-technology revolution, it is necessary for everyone to be equipped with computer skills. Therefore, Computer Science Club is of priority for your choice.
Of course, you don’t have to devote all your time to studying computers. On the contrary, it is highly recommend that you maintain your reading habit in your spare time, which will also enrich your leisure hours.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,就选择加入社团Literature Club还是Computer Science Club的事进行分析,并表达理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice → suggest
有用的:useful → serviceable
绝对地:absolutely → entirely
致力于:devote to → dedicate to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Absolutely, computer science will best equip you to earn a better career.
拓展句:Entirely, studying computer science will best prepare you for a more successful career.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I totally understand your situation as I have once been there too.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】On the contrary, it is highly recommend that you maintain your reading habit in your spare time, which will also enrich your leisure hours. (运用了that引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·湖南省部分学校·期中)
Passage 2
2.假定你是李华,你的英国好友James因和同学发生争吵而感到非常困扰,写邮件向你求助。请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 提出与人交往的建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I’m sorry to hear that you are troubled by a quarrel with your classmate. It’s common to face disagreements, but what matters is how you handle them.
Here’s my advice: Firstly, try to stay calm and listen to their point of view — it shows respect and understanding. Secondly, communicate your feelings honestly, but do it politely. If needed, suggest a break to cool down and think things over. These steps might help in rebuilding your relationship.
Hope you find this helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国好友James因和同学发生争吵而感到非常困扰,写邮件向你求助,要求考生给他回封邮件表示安慰并提出与人交往的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困扰:troubled → bothered
处理:handle → manage
不同意见:disagreement → difference in opinions
意见:advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Try to stay calm and listen to their point of view — it shows respect and understanding.
拓展句:It’s important to try to stay calm and listen to their point of view, as it shows respect and understanding.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s common to face disagreements, but what matters is how you handle them.(运用了what引导的主语从句和how引导表语从句)
[高分句型2] If needed, suggest a break to cool down and think things over.(运用了状语从句的省略)
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市多校·期中)
Passage 3
3.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mary给你写了一封电子邮件,诉说她对高中生活的不适应。请你给她回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.你的建议;
3.表达愿望。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to learn from your email that you have trouble in getting used to your senior high school life. I’m writing to to share my advice.
Firstly, I think you can make friends with your classmates and share your feelings with someone you trust, which is a good way to help you out and seek for support. Besides, a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in cheering you up. It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to stay in a good mood.
Hopefully, my advice will be of benefit to you. I hope you can get used to your new school life soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国笔友 Mary给你写了一封电子邮件,诉说她对高中生活的不适应,要求考生给她回一封电子邮件给他。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestion
首先:firstly→to begin with
寻找:seek for→look for
另外:besides→in addition
2. 句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to stay in a good mood.
拓展句:It is not only a good idea to maintain a positive attitude, but also to go outdoors and play team games with your friends, because physical exercise is an effective way to stay in a good mood.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m sorry to learn from your email that you have trouble in getting used to your senior high school life. I’m writing to to share my advice.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Firstly, I think you can make friends with your classmates and share your feelings with someone you trust, which is a good way to help you out and seek for support.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·陕西省西安雁南中学·期中)
Passage 4
4.假如你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I understand how challenging it can be to adjust to the increased pressures of high school life. It's normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you're not alone. Many students experience similar struggles when transitioning into a new academic environment.
To help manage your stress and improve your sleep, I recommend incorporating some relaxation techniques into your daily routine. Deep breathing exercises or meditation before bed can work wonders for calming the mind. Additionally, establishing a consistent sleep schedule by going to bed and waking up at the same time every day can greatly benefit your overall well-being.
Don't hesitate to reach out to teachers, friends, or family members if you need someone to talk to. You've got this!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信,要求作为学校英文报 “Advice” 栏目的编辑给署名 Jack 的同学回信,针对他进入高中后压力大、睡不好的困扰给予理解、安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
压力:pressure → stress
感到不知所措:feel overwhelmed → feel out of one's depth
调整:adjust to → adapt to
改善睡眠:improve your sleep → enhance your sleep quality
2. 句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I understand how challenging it can be to adjust to the increased pressures of high school life.
拓展句:I am fully aware of the challenges that come with adapting to the heightened stress of high school, which many students find difficult.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】It's normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you're not alone.(使用了it作形式主语以及连接代词that连接的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】Deep breathing exercises or meditation before bed can work wonders for calming the mind.(使用了动名词短语作主语)
(24-25学年高一上·安徽省固镇县联考·期中)
Passage 5
5.为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jessica,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:高中学习压力较大,导致自己近期比较焦虑且容易发脾气,从而影响了正常的学习和生活。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Worried,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jessica
【答案】例文
Dear worried,
Learning that you’re feeling anxious and losing your temper due to high school pressures, I completely understand what you’re going through and want to offer some advice.
Firstly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anxiety and anger out without hurting others or yourself. Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of negative emotions. Finally, keep in mind that you should always concentrate yourself on some positive and relaxing things when you feel fed up with academic stress, since it can be helpful in lifting your spirits and gathering up your courage to face those difficulties again.
I hope what I say will be a comfort to you and help you out.
Yours,
Jessica
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给Worried同学写封回信,对他觉得高中学习压力较大,导致自己近期比较焦虑且容易发脾气,从而影响了正常的学习和生活这一情况表示理解并给予安慰,提出建议并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:pressure→stress
由于:due to→because of
最后:finally→lastly
记住:keep in mind→bear in mind
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of negative emotions.
拓展句:Secondly, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way in which you can get rid of negative emotions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anxiety and anger out without hurting others or yourself. (运用了how引导的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Finally, keep in mind that you should always concentrate yourself on some positive and relaxing things when you feel fed up with academic stress, since it can be helpful in lifting your spirits and gathering up your courage to face those difficulties again. (运用了that引导的宾语从句,when引导的时间状语从句和since引导的原因状语从句)
话题2 告知信-旅游
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市南开中学·期中)
Passage 1
1.假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter最近打算到你的家乡旅游,请写一封建议信为他提供旅行指南。
要点如下:1. 介绍你的家乡;2. 推荐特色目的地;3. 告知旅行注意事项。
注意:1. 写作词数应为120左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m thrilled to hear that you are planning to visit Chongqing. As a passionate ambassador of my hometown, I’m writing to share some insights about the enchanting city.
Chongqing, nestled in the mountainous region of Southwest China, is renowned for its stunning landscapes, rich history and mouth-watering cuisine. From my perspective, a must-visit is the Three Gorges, where you can take a cruise and marvel at the breathtaking scenery. Additionally, the Chongqing Zoo is home to the adorable giant pandas, a delightful tourist spot for all ages. Of course, the Hongya Dong, offering a unique cultural experience, is also recommended.
Then here come my tips about your trip. The climate in November can be humid, so pack accordingly. What’s more, consider staying near the city center for easy access to attractions and dining. Lastly, be cautious about the hilly terrain, as it can be quite a workout.
I hope my advice can be of help and you can have a fantastic time exploring the wonders of Chongqing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。美国笔友Peter最近打算到考生的家乡旅游,要求考生写一封建议信为他提供旅行指南。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
迷人的:enchanting→fascinating
令人垂涎的:mouth-watering→delicious
建议:advice→suggestion
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Chongqing, nestled in the mountainous region of Southwest China, is renowned for its stunning landscapes, rich history and mouth-watering cuisine.
拓展句:Chongqing, which is nestled in the mountainous region of Southwest China, is renowned for its stunning landscapes, rich history, and mouth-watering cuisine.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m thrilled to hear that you are planning to visit Chongqing.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]From my perspective, a must-visit is the Three Gorges, where you can take a cruise and marvel at the breathtaking scenery.(where引导的非限制性定语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·福建省福州三状元高级中学·期中)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封信,告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。内容包括:
1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行;
2.计划在伦敦停留5天;
3.旅行计划:
(1)第一天参观伦敦塔桥(Tower Bridge)和海德公园(Hyde Park);
(2)第二天参观大本钟(Big Ben)和白金汉宫(Buckingham Palace);
(3)第三天参观大英博物馆(British Museum);
(4)去购物。
4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Harry,
How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We plan to stay in London for about five days. During the trip, we will visit Tower Bridge and Hyde Park on the first day. On the second day, we will see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places I am crazy about. On the third day, we will enjoy ourselves at British Museum. And then we will go shopping.
Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Harry写一封信,告诉他自己去英国旅行的计划并就相关问题向他询问。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完成:finish→complete
计划:plan →intend
参观:visit → pay a visit to
期待:look forward to → expect
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England.
拓展句:Because we will go there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England.
【点睛】[高分句型1] On the second day, we will see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places I am crazy about.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·山西省大同市·期中)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,今年暑假你和家人去了北岳恒山旅游。请你给英国的朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1. 旅游经历;
2. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you my family travel to Hengshan Mountain this summer vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you my family travel to Hengshan Mountain this summer vacation. Hengshan Mountain, located in the southeast of Datong City in Shanxi Province, is a famous historical tourist destination with beautiful natural scenery.
It was a sunny day when I went hiking with my parents in Hengshan Mountain. The air in the mountains was fresh and clean. We walked through forests, crossed streams, and climbed rocky paths.
Being in nature made me feel very happy and relaxed. I realized how important it is to take a break from the busy city life and enjoy the peacefulness of nature.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于今年暑假你和家人去了北岳恒山旅游这一情况,给英国的朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→ celebrated
高兴的:happy→ pleased
意识到:realized→ was aware of
平静:peacefulness→ calmness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hengshan Mountain, located in the southeast of Datong City in Shanxi Province, is a famous historical tourist destination with beautiful natural scenery.
拓展句:Hengshan Mountain, which is located in the southeast of Datong City in Shanxi Province, is a famous historical tourist destination with beautiful natural scenery.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was a sunny day when I went hiking with my parents in Hengshan Mountain.(运用了关系副词when引导的定语从句。)
【高分句型2】I realized how important it is to take a break from the busy city life and enjoy the peacefulness of nature.(运用了连接副词how引导的宾语从句。)
话题3 做人与做事
(24-25学年高一上·河北省沧州市·期中)
Passage 1
1.假定你是李华,你校文化节即将到来,届时将有各种各样的艺术竞赛。请你给交换生同学Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.介绍文化节情况;
2.发出邀请;
3.期待回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m excited to tell you about the upcoming Cultural Festival at our school. Designed to celebrate cultural diversity and foster a sense of community through the arts, the festival will feature a range of artistic competitions, from music and dance to visual arts. It’s a great chance for us to engage with different cultures and talents.
I hope you will join me at this vibrant event. It’s a wonderful opportunity for us to participate in the competitions, enjoy the performances, and maybe even learn something new about each other’s cultures.
Please let me know if you can make it. I’m really looking forward to your response and the prospect of sharing this enriching experience with you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生同学Chris写一封邮件,邀请他参加你校即将举办的校文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
参加:participate in→take part in
比赛:competition→contest
欣赏:enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m excited to tell you about the upcoming Cultural Festival at our school.
拓展句:I’m excited that I can tell you about the upcoming Cultural Festival at our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope you will join me at this vibrant event. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Please let me know if you can make it. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·江苏省扬州市江都区·期中)
Passage 2
2.假定你是李华,你的朋友 Jack 沉迷于网络游戏而不能自拔,导致学习成绩下降,与父母关系恶化,身体和精神状况也下降,现写信向你寻求帮助,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解和关心;
2.提出具体建议;
3.希望与祝福。
注意:
1.词数100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:沉溺于 be addicted to; 沉溺 addiction
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I was deeply concerned when I learned that you’ve been addicted to online games, which has affected your studies, relationships with your parents, and even your physical and mental health. I fully understand the allure of these games, but it’s crucial to find a balance.
Here are some suggestions: firstly, try to limit your gaming time and set a specific schedule. Secondly, engage in more outdoor activities or hobbies you enjoy to distract yourself. Lastly, communicate openly with your parents about your feelings and struggles; they’ll surely understand and support you.
Remember, you have the strength to overcome this addiction. I believe in you and hope you’ll soon regain control of your life. Take care!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就朋友Jack沉迷于网络游戏的问题,给他写一封回信,表达理解和关心,提出具体建议,并给予希望与祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
沉溺于:be addicted to → be hooked on/be obsessed with
影响:affect → influence
建议:suggestion → advice/proposal
战胜:overcome → defeat
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:I fully understand the allure of these games, but it’s crucial to find a balance.
拓展句:I fully understand the allure of these games, but it’s crucial that you find a balance between gaming and other aspects of your life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was deeply concerned when I learned that you’ve been addicted to online games, which has affected your studies, relationships with your parents, and even your physical and mental health. (运用了从属连词when引导的时间状语从句、连词that引导的宾语从句和关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, engage in more outdoor activities or hobbies you enjoy to distract yourself.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·重庆市巴蜀教育集团·期中)
Passage 3
3.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Alice来信向你倾诉她深受体重问题的困扰,希望你能给她一些健康减肥的建议。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信:
1. 表示理解和关心;
2. 给出具体的减肥建议(如合理饮食、适量运动、保持良好作息等);
3. 鼓励她保持积极心态,相信自己能够成功。
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I was sorry to hear about your struggles with weight. Please know that I fully understand how difficult it can be to deal with such a sensitive matter, and let me share some advice that might help.
Firstly, focus on a balanced diet. Try to eat more fruits and vegetables, and reduce your intake of sugary foods and drinks. Secondly, regular exercise is crucial. Find an activity you enjoy, such as walking, jogging, or yoga. Aim for at least 30 minutes each time you exercise. Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. Try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
Please remember that weight loss is a gradual process that requires patience and persistence. I believe in you and your ability to make positive changes in your life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给英国朋友Alice写一封回信,为深受体重问题困扰的她提供一些健康减肥的建议,需首先对她的情况表示理解和关心,然后可从饮食、运动及作息方面给出具体的建议,最后给予她鼓励。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
困难的:difficult→hard, tough
应对:deal with→handle, tackle
专心于:focus on→concentrate on
关键的:crucial→essential, significant, vital
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. Try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
拓展句:Additionally, as getting enough sleep is important for weight management, try to maintain a regular sleep schedule to reduce stress.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Please know that I fully understand how difficult it can be to deal with such a sensitive matter, and let me share some advice that might help. (运用了第一个that引导宾语从句、how引导宾语从句、第二个that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Additionally, getting enough sleep is important for weight management. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
(24-25学年高一上·山西省太原市·期中)
Passage 4
4.假定你是李华,因你近期复习备考,不能按时收看英国笔友Penny本周末进行的网络演讲直播。请你写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达歉意;
(2)说明原因;
(3)询问对方回看方式。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hi Penny!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Hua
【答案】Hi Penny!
I hope this message finds you well. I’m writing to apologize for not being able to watch the live broadcast of your speech this weekend as planned.
I am really looking forward to your speech, knowing it’s going to be informative and inspiring. But you know, I am busy studying for my upcoming exams, and it’s a pity that I am not available to watch it live.
Again, I’m sorry for not being there. Could you please let me know if there will be a way to watch the replay later? That would be wonderful if I could get to see it. Thank you for your understanding!
Love,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就由于近期复习备考,不能按时收看英国笔友Penny本周末进行的网络演讲直播写一封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
道歉:apologize → make an apology
按计划:as planned → as scheduled
忙碌的:busy → occupied
方法:way → approach
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I am really looking forward to your speech, knowing it’s going to be informative and inspiring.
拓展句:I am really looking forward to your speech, because I know it’s going to be informative and inspiring.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But you know, I am busy studying for my upcoming exams, and it’s a pity that I am not available to watch it live.(运用了that引导的主语从句,it作形式主语)
【高分句型2】Could you please let me know if there will be a way to watch the replay later?(运用了if引导的宾语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·湖南省名校联考联合体·期中)
Passage 5
5.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris在新学校与新同学相处不愉快,很烦恼。他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.表明目的;
2.表示理解;
3.提出建议(至少三条)。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you have difficulty getting along well with your new classmates,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
Hearing that you have difficulty getting along well with your new classmates, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I definitely understand your feelings, but cheer up. It’s time to find an opportunity to have a full and frank talk with them face to face and be sure to explain how you feel. Friendships are like flowers which need to be taken good care of, so you should be friendlier and always be a good listener. It’s natural that you sometimes disagree with your new classmates, but you need to respect different opinions. Last but not least, it might be a good idea to always support your new classmates through thick and thin.
Hopefully you’ll find these ideas helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris就与新同学相处不愉快的问题写一份建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供某人某物:offer sb sth→provide sb with sth
建议:suggestion→advice
不同的:different→various
解释:explain→account for
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Last but not least, it might be a good idea to always support your new classmates through thick and thin.
同义句:Last but not least, it might be a good idea that you always support your new classmates through thick and thin.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Friendships are like flowers which need to be taken good care of, so you should be friendlier and always be a good listener. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s natural that you sometimes disagree with your new classmates, but you need to respect different opinions. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
话题4 运动与健康
(24-25学年高一上·北京市延庆区·期中)
Passage 1
1.根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
1. What was held in your school last Friday? (a sports meet)
2. When did the sports meet start? (at eight o’clock in the morning)
3. How many events were there in the sports meet? (nearly twenty)
4. What event did you take part in? (the 800-metre race)
5. What did your classmates do while you were running? (rise from their seats, cheer for me)
6. Did you win the race?
7. How did you feel?
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Last Friday a sports meet was held in our school. It started at eight o’clock in the morning. There were nearly twenty events in the meet. I took part in the 800-metre race. At the gunshot, I rushed out from the starting line. All my classmates rose from their seats and cheered for me. I felt extremely excited and went all out to run. I aimed at winning honor for my class. Unfortunately, I wasn’t among the top three. But I didn’t feel disappointed, because I tried my best and won the respect of my classmates.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据给定的问题,描述上周五在学校举行的运动会的情况,包括运动会的时间、项目、个人参与的赛事、同学的支持以及比赛结果和个人感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
开始:start → begin
参加:take part in → participate in
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
不幸地:unfortunately → unluckily
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At the gunshot, I rushed out from the starting line.
拓展句:As soon as I heard the gunshot, I rushed out from the starting line.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I aimed at winning honor for my class.(运用了动名词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】But I didn’t feel disappointed, because I tried my best and won the respect of my classmates.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
(24-25学年高一上·浙江省金华十校·期中)
Passage 2
2.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack在社交媒体上看到了你参加运动会的照片,写信向你了解相关情况,请给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 时间地点;
2. 你的项目;
3. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
Knowing you’re keen on the photos I posted on the WeChat Moments last week, I’m writing to share some relevant details.
This year, the three-day sports meeting started last Friday in the playground, involving almost 20 events. Among them, what I participated in was the 100-meter dash, which required me to speed up to the extreme in a short time. Unfortunately, I ultimately failed to perform well in the race, making me determined to grasp the opportunity next time through continuing efforts.
That’s all my experience of this event. Would you please share your school life with me? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jack就参加运动会的照片写一封回信,介绍运动会的情况,自己参加的项目,以及感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热衷于:be keen on→be enthusiastic about
开始:start →kick off
不幸地,遗憾地:unfortunately→unluckily
最终:ultimately→finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This year, the three-day sports meeting started last Friday in the playground, involving almost 20 events.
拓展句:This year, the three-day sports meeting started last Friday in the playground, which involved almost 20 events.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you’re keen on the photos I posted on the WeChat Moments last week, I’m writing to share some relevant details. (运用了现在分词作状语,省略关系代词的限制性定语从句,动词不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】Among them, what I participated in was the 100-meter dash, which required me to speed up to the extreme in a short time.(运用了what引导的主语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句,动词不定式作补语)
(24-25学年高一上·山西省晋城市多校·期中)
Passage 3
3.假定你是李华,你校国际部下周举行体育运动会,请你给负责人Smith写一封信报名参加。内容包括:
1. 参赛项目;
2. 你的优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I am Li Hua from the international department, writing to sign up for the upcoming sports meeting.
I would like to participate in the 100-meter race and the long jump, which I have been training for over two years and have won several awards in previous competitions. My speed and agility are my strengths. I believe it will contribute to my performance.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校国际部下周举行体育运动会,要求考生给该活动的负责人Smith写一封邮件报名参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
即将到来的:upcoming→forthcoming
优势:strength→advantage
比赛:competition→match
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:My speed and agility are my strengths. I believe it will contribute to my performance.
拓展句:My speed and agility are my strengths, which I believe will contribute to my performance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am Li Hua from the international department, writing to sign up for the upcoming sports meeting.(运用了现在分词writing作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】I would like to participate in the 100-meter race and the long jump, which I have been training for for over two years and have won several awards in previous competitions.(运用了which引导非限定性定语从句)
话题5 自然生态
(24-25高一上·云南昭通·阶段练习)
Passage 1
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友汤姆从电视新闻上得知你所在的城市发生了地震,十分担心。请你给汤姆写一封信,告知其相关情况,内容包括:
1.你的家人平安地逃过一劫;
2.该地震的影响:6人死亡,500多人受伤,200多所房子成为废墟;
3.地震后的救援情况;
4.地震发生后你的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Knowing you are very worried about the earthquake which happened in my city recently, I am writing to tell you some details.
Luckily, my family and I survived the quake safe and sound. However, the earthquake did do some damage to our city, in which six people were killed and more than five hundred were seriously injured. Besides, it also made over two hundred houses lie in ruins. Fortunately, our government and rescue workers came to our rescue in time, with a number of medical workers and volunteers providing help to us.
Not only did I feel the warmth of humanity but I also realized that we can certainly get over the disaster if we can unify.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国朋友汤姆从电视新闻上得知考生所在的城市发生了地震,十分担心,要求考生按照要求给汤姆写一封信,告知其相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心:be worried about → be anxious about
严重地:seriously → severely
及时:in time → timely
肯定:certainly → undoubtedly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing you are very worried about the earthquake which happened in my city recently, I am writing to tell you some details.
拓展句:Since I know you are very worried about the earthquake which happened in my city recently, I am writing to tell you some details.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you are very worried about the earthquake which happened in my city recently, I am writing to tell you some details.(省略引导词that的宾语从句、运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】However, the earthquake did do some damage to our city, in which six people were killed and more than five hundred were seriously injured.(运用了“介词in+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是学生会主席李华,你校邀请地震专家李教授来校做了有关地震防灾知识方面的讲座,请你写一封邮件,把讲座的情况告诉请假未听讲座的交换生Tom,内容包括以下要点:
1. 讲座的时间、地点;
2. 讲座内容;
3. 你的看法。
注意:1. 词数100词左右;
2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
How are you today? I’m writing to share with you the information about the speech given by Professor Li.
Professor Li, a famous expert on earthquakes, delivered a speech on how to survive during an earthquake in the school hall on Friday afternoon. From his speech, we have recognized that if one knows how to behave when an earthquake strikes, the chance to survive will be greatly improved. He taught us a lot of self-rescue skills. For example, the most important is to stay calm and quickly move to a safe place. If trapped indoors, stay there and hide under a strong desk or table as a protecting shelter. If outdoors, move into the open air where falling objects are unlikely to strike us.
In summary, the speech is of great help and all of us need to know what to do during an earthquake.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给请假未听讲座的交换生Tom写一封邮件,告知他有关地震防灾知识方面的讲座的情况,需简要说明讲座的时间、地点,详细介绍讲座的内容,并分享自己的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
有名的:famous→well-known, renowned
意识到:recognize→realize
例如:for example→for instance
总之:in summary→to sum up, in conclusion
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In summary, the speech is of great help and all of us need to know what to do during an earthquake.
拓展句:In summary, the speech is of great help and all of us need to know what we should do during an earthquake.
【点睛】[高分句型1] From his speech, we have recognized that if one knows how to behave when an earthquake strikes, the chance to survive will be greatly improved. (运用了that引导宾语从句、if引导条件状语从句、when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] If outdoors, move into the open air where falling objects are unlikely to strike us. (运用了If 引导的条件状语从句的省略以及where引导限制性定语从句)
(24-25高一上·江西南昌·阶段练习)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Joe的家乡遭遇了严重地震,他的家受损严重,他本人也受伤了。请你给他写一封信,要点包括:
1.安慰和鼓励; 2.为他提供帮助(如募捐等)。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Joe,
I’m deeply sorry to hear about the severe earthquake that struck your hometown, causing significant damage to your home and injuring you. Please know that you’re not alone in this difficult time. Stay strong and brave, and remember that every cloud has a silver lining.
I want to do something to help you and your community. I plan to initiate a fund-raising campaign among our friends to support the reconstruction efforts. Let’s work together to overcome this challenge. Take care and get well soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外国笔友Joe的家乡遭遇严重地震,其家受损严重且他本人也受伤的情况,写一封信给予安慰、鼓励,并提供帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
引起:cause → lead to/result in
困难的:difficult → hard
帮助:help → assist/aid
克服:overcome → conquer/surmount
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I want to do something to help you and your community.
拓展句:I want to do something that can help you and your community get through this difficult time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m deeply sorry to hear about the severe earthquake that struck your hometown, causing significant damage to your home and injuring you. (运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句和现在分词短语作结果状语)
[高分句型2] Please know that you’re not alone in this difficult time. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
(24-25高一上·海南·期中)
Passage 4
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Henry来信说自己家乡灾害频发,前不久又遭受龙卷风袭击,他向你询问中国的自然灾害情况。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 中国的自然灾害情况。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:龙卷风tornado
Dear Henry,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I was deeply saddened to hear about the recent tornado that struck your hometown, along with the frequent disasters you’ve been experiencing. Please know that my thoughts are with you and your community during this difficult time.
Regarding China, we also face various natural disasters, including floods, earthquakes, and occasionally tornadoes, and their frequency and severity vary across regions. The government and people work tirelessly to mitigate their impacts and provide relief. I believe that as long as we work together, we can definitely reduce the negative impacts caused by natural disasters.
Take care and stay safe.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Henry写一封电子邮件,对于他来信说自己家乡灾害频发表示安慰,并介绍中国的自然灾害情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
悲伤的:saddened→grieved
各种各样的:various→a variety of
缓解:mitigate→ease off
肯定地:definitely→surely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The government and people work tirelessly to mitigate their impacts and provide relief.
拓展句:The government and people work tirelessly to mitigate their impacts and provide relief, which are greatly meaningful for all the people.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was deeply saddened to hear about the recent tornado that struck your hometown, along with the frequent disasters you’ve been experiencing. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Regarding China, we also face various natural disasters, including floods, earthquakes, and occasionally tornadoes, and their frequency and severity vary across regions. (运用了介词短语作状语)
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你的外国网友Joe的家乡遭遇了洪涝灾害。请你给他写一封电子邮件,要点包括:
(1)给予安慰和鼓励;
(2)提供帮助。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Joe,
I’m so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day. I’m writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
I know that you are physically hurt. I do feel bad about this and I hope you can fully recover soon. Meanwhile, never lose heart and don’t forget I am always by your side. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.
Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给家乡遭遇洪涝灾害的外国网友Joe写一封电子邮件,给予安慰和鼓励。
【详解】1.词汇积累
袭击:strike→hit
提供:offer→afford
支援:backup→support
完全地:fully→entirely
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
拓展句:The reason why I’m writing is that I want to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
话题6 语言学习
(2025高一上·湖南岳阳·专题练习)
Passage 1
假定你是李华,来自英国的交换生 Tom 即将来你校交流学习。他想提前了解一下你的学校以及学习中文的方法,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍你们学校的校规;
2. 给他一些如何学习中文的建议;
3. 欢迎他来你家做客并送上你的祝福。
注意:
1. 不少于80词;
2. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m thrilled you’ll be coming to our school for exchange study! Let me share some details. We must arrive on time, keep quiet in class, and wear uniforms daily, which will ensure an orderly school life.
To improve your Chinese, I suggest reading aloud each morning to memorize vocabulary. Don’t be afraid to speak — practice makes perfect. Watching Chinese movies or listening to songs can also make learning enjoyable and boost your writing skills.
When you arrive, I can teach you how to cook simple Chinese dishes and share stories about our culture. I hope you have a wonderful experience and learn a lot. Take care — I can’t wait to see you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给即将来校交流学习的英国交换生Tom写一封邮件,内容包括介绍学校校规、给出学习中文的建议、欢迎他来家里做客并送上祝福。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
准时:on time→punctually
保持安静:keep quiet→remain silent
提高:improve→enhance
建议:suggest→advise
2. 句式拓展
并列句拓展为复合句
原句:To improve your Chinese, I suggest reading aloud each morning to memorize vocabulary.
拓展句:To improve your Chinese, I suggest that you should read aloud each morning to memorize vocabulary.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We must arrive on time, keep quiet in class, and wear uniforms daily, which will ensure an orderly school life.(运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When you arrive, I can teach you how to cook simple Chinese dishes and share stories about our culture.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句以及“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语)
Passage 2
假定你校英文论坛正在就“How to learn English words”进行讨论。请用英文回帖,表明自己对此问题的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
How to learn English words
As we know, memorising enough words plays an important role in English learning. However, to some students, it is quite difficult and boring sometimes.
As for me, I find it an effective way to make vocabulary cards, which are convenient for me to review the words I’ve learnt at any time. In addition, I prefer memorising words by putting them in sentences. What’s more, don’t just remember the Chinese meanings of the words. Instead, try to remember the words’ meanings in English. This will help you use those words correctly.
Do remember methods make a difference in your English learning. If you have mastered some, you will certainly not regard it boring.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生在校英文论坛上回帖,表明自己对“How to learn English words”问题的看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
困难的:difficult→hard, demanding
有效的:effective→productive, fruitful
掌握:master→command
肯定地:certainly→unquestionably, definitely
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Instead, try to remember the words’ meanings in English. This will help you use those words correctly.
拓展句:Instead, try to remember the words’ meanings in English, which will help you use those words correctly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we know, memorising enough words plays an important role in English learning. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句、动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] Do remember methods make a difference in your English learning. (运用了Do强调谓语动词、that引导宾语从句并被省略)
Passage 3
假定你是李华。你的英语笔友Alex给你发来邮件,抱怨说背英语单词表既困难又枯燥。你认为这种学习方法并不合适。请你给Alex回复邮件,提出你的看法和建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alex,
I’m sorry to hear that you find memorizing word lists difficult and boring. I agree that it might not be the best way to learn. Words come alive when used in context.
Here are some suggestions. First, try reading stories or articles you enjoy. You’ll naturally learn new words as you meet them repeatedly. Second, watching English movies or shows with subtitles is fun and helps you pick up words used in real situations. Finally, make sentences using new words yourself. This helps you remember them better and understand how they are used.
Give these methods a try! Learning vocabulary should be more engaging. Good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给笔友Alex写一封回信,针对其背单词表困难的问题,提出自己的看法和学习建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
困难的:difficult → hard
反复地:repeatedly→again and again
帮助:help → assist
有趣的:engaging →entertaining
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, watching English movies or shows with subtitles is fun and helps you pick up words used in real situations.
拓展句:Second, watching English movies or shows with subtitles is fun and helps you pick up words that are used in real situations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you find memorizing word lists difficult and boring.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】First, try reading stories or articles you enjoy.(运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句)
Passage 4
假定你是李华,现准备参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛,你在语言运用、发音(pronunciation)和语调(intonation)方面遇到了困难。请给你的外籍教师Mr. Smith写封信,请他帮忙提出建议。
内容包括:1. 求助事由;2. 希望指导;3. 感谢帮助。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’m currently gearing up for the upcoming Summer English Speech Contest for middle school students. However, I’ve encountered some challenges in language use, pronunciation, and intonation, which I believe are crucial for delivering an effective speech.
I’m writing to ask if you could kindly offer me some guidance on these aspects. Perhaps we could arrange a time for a one-on-one session where you could provide me with some personalized feedback and suggestions.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I’m looking forward to your positive response and the opportunity to learn from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外籍教师Mr. Smith写一封信,就自己在准备暑期中学生英语演讲比赛时遇到的语言运用、发音和语调方面的困难寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
准备:gear up for → prepare for
遇到:encounter → meet with
挑战:challenge → difficulty
重要的:crucial → vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m currently gearing up for the upcoming Summer English Speech Contest for middle school students..
拓展句:I’m currently gearing up for the upcoming Summer English Speech Contest which is aimed at middle school students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, I’ve encountered some challenges in language use, pronunciation, and intonation, which I believe are crucial for delivering an effective speech.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Perhaps we could arrange a time for a one-on-one session where you could provide me with some personalized feedback and suggestions.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
Passage 5
假定你叫李华,你的美国朋友John来信,说他正在学习中文,他希望暑假来中国旅游能用中文和中国朋友交流,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给John写封回信,提几点建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
How is everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear John,
How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer holiday. Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well. You should not be shy and speak Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. You’d better speak slowly, and repeat the words if necessary. If others can’t understand you, you can use pictures or body language to help you.
I hope these advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友John写信,针对他用中文交流时可能遇到的困难给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→happy
害羞的:shy→timid
重要的:important→significant
建议:advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer holiday.
同义句:I’m extremely delighted to hear that you will be visiting China this summer vacation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer holiday. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. (运用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”的句型)
Passage 6
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Mary对汉语学习很感兴趣,写信向你咨询怎样才能学好汉语。请你给她回一封信,解答她的疑问。回信应包含以下内容:
1. 多阅读汉语方面的经典书籍;
2. 多听多看汉语节目;
3. 结交一些中国朋友。
注意:
1. 文章应包括以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右。
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【答案】Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in learning Chinese. Here are some tips to help you learn it well.
First, read more classic Chinese books. They can improve your language sense and vocabulary. Second, listen to and watch Chinese programs, like Chinese movies and radio shows, which helps you get familiar with the language environment. Finally, make some Chinese friends. You can practice speaking with them and learn more about Chinese culture.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Keep up your enthusiasm and you'll make great progress.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生的英国朋友Mary对汉语学习很感兴趣,写信向你咨询怎样才能学好汉语。请你给她回一封信,解答她的疑问。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
对…… 感兴趣:be interested in→show interest in
建议:tip→proposal
提高:improve→enhance
熟悉的:familiar→acquainted
2. 句式拓展:
同义句
原句:I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in learning Chinese.
拓展句:It delights me to hear that you show interest in learning Chinese.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in learning Chinese.(运用了 that 引导的宾语从句,作 hear 的宾语)
【高分句型 2】Second, listen to and watch Chinese programs, like Chinese movies and radio shows, which helps you get familiar with the language environment.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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