内容正文:
高频话题07:礼仪风俗
九年级同步写作课讲义
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⭐话题解读⭐
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本单元的话题是“风俗习惯”。围绕这一话题主要学习各国的不同礼仪,如见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪等,谈论在不同的场合应该做什么,了解不同国家的习俗。最能体现本单元话题以及语言运用能力的作文为介绍不同国家礼仪的短文、书信或邮件等。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
①You are supposed /expected to ...
②You should...
③You are not supposed to ...
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⭐写作任务⭐
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任务1-邮件
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假如你是李明,你的美国笔友 Ben要来中国度假。他发电子邮件向你询问中国的礼仪习惯。请你根据以下提示,用英语给Ben回一封电子邮件,告诉他需要注意的问题。
提示:
1. 初次见面要握手;
2. 进别人家时一定要敲门;
3. 在公共场合不要大声喧哗;
4. ……
写作要求:
1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:customs 礼仪习惯 public places 公共场合
Dear Ben,
I’m glad you’ll come to China for your holiday.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【审题指导】
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括初次见面的礼仪、进别人家的礼仪、在公共场所的行为规范,以及其他需要注意的礼仪习惯。考生需确保所有要点都被涵盖,并适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
【写作框架】
第一步:表明写作意图。说明邮件的目的是介绍中国的礼仪习惯。
第二步:按照要点提示具体阐述写作内容。
第三步:书写结语。表达希望这些礼仪提示能帮助Ben在中国度过愉快的假期,并送上祝福。
【参考范文】
Dear Ben,
I’m glad you’ll come to China for your holiday.
Here are some Chinese customs you should know. First, shake hands when meeting someone for the first time. Second, always knock on the door before entering others’ homes. Third, avoid making loud noise in public places to show respect. Additionally, when receiving gifts, accept them with both hands and open them later. Lastly, try to use chopsticks properly and don’t point at others with them.
I hope these tips will help you enjoy your stay in China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
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任务2-说明文
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校园是我们学习和成长的地方,良好的文明礼仪是构建和谐校园的重要因素。校园文明礼仪不仅能让我们拥有和谐的学习氛围,还能塑造良好的个人品格。请根据以下内容提示,以“How to Behave Politely at School”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:
1. How can we get along well with classmates?
2. What should we do to respect teachers?
3. What manners should we follow in the classroom and at school?
参考词汇:greet, polite, impolite, kind, respect, offer, be on time,…
要求:
1. 包含内容提示和参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何的真实信息;
4. 词数:不少于70词。
How to Behave Politely at School
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【框架设计】
第一步,点明主题。引出在学校保持礼貌的建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从与同学、老师相处,及课堂和校园礼仪三方面阐述如何保持礼貌;
第三步,书写结语。
【参考范文】
How to Behave Politely at School
Being polite at school helps create a harmonious environment. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, getting along with classmates requires kindness. We should offer help when someone is in trouble. Listening patiently to others’ ideas and avoiding impolite words like “You’re wrong” are also important. Secondly, respecting teachers means greeting them when we meet. Being on time for class and listening carefully show respect. We should always say “please” when asking questions and “thank you” after getting help. Finally, in the classroom, keep desks tidy and raise hands before speaking. In public areas, don’t shout or run. Always remember to say “excuse me” when passing through crowds.
If everyone follows these rules, our school will be a better place.
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⭐素材宝库⭐
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词汇积累
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1. shake hands 握手
2. bow to 向……鞠躬
3. kiss sb. on... 亲吻某人的……
4. table manners 餐桌礼仪
5. traditional custom 传统习俗
6. folk custom 民间习俗
7. local custom 当地习俗
8. be supposed to 应该
9. be expected to 被期望
10. introduce...to... 把……介绍给……
11. lay chopsticks on the plate or bowl 把筷子放在盘子或碗上
12. not stick chopsticks into food 不要把筷子插进食物里
13. not point at anyone with chopsticks 不要用筷子指着任何人
14. not make noise when eating soup 喝汤时不要发出声音
15. serve some fruit 端上一些水果
16. offer some tea 提供一些茶
17. receive the gift with two hands 用双手接过礼物
18. knock on the door 敲门
19. follow the customs 遵循习俗
20. good manners 有礼貌
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句型积累
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开头句:
1. Every country has its own customs and manners.
每个国家都有自己的风俗和礼仪。
2. It is important to learn about table manners in different cultures.
了解不同文化中的餐桌礼仪很重要。
3. When you visit a new place, you should follow the local customs.
当你去一个新地方时,应该遵循当地的习俗。
4. Good manners play an important role in our daily life.
礼貌在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要角色。
5. In China, there are many traditional customs for festivals.
在中国,有许多传统的节日习俗。
中间句 :
1. For example, people usually shake hands when they meet for the first time.
例如,人们第一次见面时通常会握手。
2. We are supposed to knock on the door before entering a room.
在进入房间之前,我们应该先敲门。
3. It is polite to say "please" and "thank you".
说“请”和“谢谢”是有礼貌的。
4. When eating, we should not point at others with our chopsticks.
吃饭时,我们不应该用筷子指着别人。
5. We should receive gifts with both hands to show respect.
我们应该用双手接过礼物以示尊重。
6. During the Spring Festival, people visit relatives and friends.
在春节期间,人们会走亲访友。
结尾句 :
1. In short, following local customs shows our respect for others.
总之,遵循当地习俗体现了我们对他人的尊重。
2. By learning about different customs, we can understand each other better.
通过了解不同的习俗,我们可以更好地理解彼此。
3. I think it is very important to teach children good manners from an early age.
我认为从小教育孩子有礼貌非常重要。
4. In conclusion, good manners can make our life more harmonious.
总之,良好的礼仪能让我们的生活更加和谐。
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谚语积累
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1. “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”——入乡随俗。
2. “Courtesy costs nothing, but it's worth more than anything.”——礼貌不花钱,却比什么都值钱。
3. “Respect others, and you will be respected.”——敬人者,人恒敬之。
4. “Do as you would be done by.”——己所不欲,勿施于人。
5. “A man's courtesy is a mirror that reflects his image.”——一个人的礼貌,是一面照出他肖像的镜子。
6. “The use of courtesy, harmony is precious.”——礼之用,和为贵。
7. “No etiquette, no standing.”——不学礼,无以立。
8. “Politeness often replaces the noblest emotions.”——礼貌经常可以替代最高贵的情感。
9. “Custom is a second nature.”——习惯是后天养成的。
10. “Let's give it away. It's a matter of courtesy.”——让者,礼之实也。
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写作模板
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模板一:介绍单一礼仪或习俗
第一段:开头 (Introduction)
主题句: Every country has its own customs and manners, and 礼仪/习俗名称is a very important one in 国家/地区.
补充说明: People usually do this to 目的/原因.
第二段:主体 (Main Body)
场景一: People usually 具体做法 1 when .
场景二: They also 具体做法 2 when .
注意事项: It is important to remember that people should not 禁忌/错误做法 because it is considered 不礼貌/原因.
第三段:结尾 (Conclusion)
总结感受: I think 礼仪/习俗名称 is a good custom because it 表达你的看法/好处.
升华主题: By following it, we can 带来的积极影响.
模板二:比较中西方礼仪差异
第一段:开头 (Introduction)
主题句: There are many differences between Chinese and Western customs, especially in 具体场合,如:table manners.
过渡句: Learning about them can help us understand each other better.
第二段:主体 (Main Body)
中国做法: In China, people usually 中国人的做法 when .
西方做法: However, in Western countries, people often 西方人的做法 in the same situation.
举例说明: For example, 举一个具体的例子.
第三段:结尾 (Conclusion)
总结观点: In short, even though the customs are different, the idea behind them is the same:共同的核心,如:to show respect.
表达态度: We should respect these differences when we communicate with people from other cultures.
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考情分析
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近几年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2025年
江苏常州
写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
材料作文
2022年
山东枣庄
假如你是李华,你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客,向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。
书信作文
2024年
黑龙江
假如你是李华, 你的一位笔友约翰发来一封邮件, 说他下星期来中国,他向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。
材料作文
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变式提升训练
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(1)
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信说他和他的同学们在中文学习上遇到了一些困难。他调查了同学们的学习状况,绘制了如下图表。现请你根据调查情况,提供相关建议。与此同时,你得知Mike从未体验过中国年,于是向他介绍中国春节习俗,并邀他来你所在的城市过年。请你根据以上信息给Mike写一封回信。
要求:
1. 字数80~130词;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在的学校名称。
参考信息:
1. 根据图表信息提供促进中文学习的建议;
2. 向Mike介绍中国春节习俗并邀请他来你所在的城市过年;
3. ……
Dear Mike,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:
1. Why shouldn’t we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. ___________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(3)
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Linda打算来中国度假,请你根据下面表格提示,给她写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的风俗和餐桌礼仪。
事项
内容
拜访朋友
先电话预约
时间
准时
见面
面带微笑;握手
宴席
吃饭时,不大声说话;不用筷子指着别人
其他方面
……(至少补充1点)
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现任何真实信息;
(3)词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Linda,
How are you doing? I miss you very much. I know that you will come to China for vacation.______________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(4)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mark给你发了一封求助邮件。请你阅读邮件内容并进行回复。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going? My Chinese teacher invited me to have dinner at her house next Sunday. I really want to behave properly, but I know nothing about Chinese table manners. Could you help me?
Yours,
Mark
要求:
1.词数100左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.包括至少三条建议,并可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(5)
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Tom 对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的春节。
内容要点:
1. 春节是中国最重要的传统节日;
2. 春节前人们通常打扫房间、购物、贴春联(put up Spring Festival couplets)等;
3. 春节期间人们走亲访友、吃团圆饭、收红包(get red envelopes)等;
4. 你对春节的感受。
要求:
5. 词数:80 - 100 词;
6. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
7. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China._______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
(6)
向世界传递中国文化,让世界倾听中国声音。假如你是李华,是汉文化宣传俱乐部的成员,你们学校即将有外国青少年来体验中国文化。请你从社交礼仪、餐桌礼仪、节日传统等方面向外国小伙伴介绍我们中国的文化习俗,以帮助他们更快更好地适应在中国的生活。
You’re supposed to
You’d better not
Social customs
shake hands
kiss; bow
Table manners
the old start eating first;
talk with a full mouth;
point at others with chopsticks...
Festival traditions
get together;
share special food...
say unlucky things;
get angry...
…
…
…
要求:
1. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Hello, everyone! Welcome to China! I’m Li Hua. Now let me introduce you some customs and manners in China.
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(7)
假如你是李华,你们学校的美国交换生Tim要到一位中国朋友家吃晚饭,他不懂中国的做客礼仪,向你寻求建议;请你根据下面内容提示,给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 见面礼仪:准时到朋友家,第一次见面时微笑、握手;
2. 餐桌礼仪:用筷子就餐,就餐时不能用筷子指着别人,就餐时不可以多说话,当吃饱时有礼貌的回绝等。
3. 离开时要对主人表示感谢。
参考词汇:握手shake hands;筷子chopsticks;指向point at
要求:
1. 词数80—100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Tim,
I’m glad to hear that you’ve been invited to a Chinese friend’s house for dinner. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs._______________________________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
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高频话题07:礼仪风俗
九年级同步写作课讲义
(
⭐话题解读⭐
)
本单元的话题是“风俗习惯”。围绕这一话题主要学习各国的不同礼仪,如见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪等,谈论在不同的场合应该做什么,了解不同国家的习俗。最能体现本单元话题以及语言运用能力的作文为介绍不同国家礼仪的短文、书信或邮件等。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
①You are supposed /expected to ...
②You should...
③You are not supposed to ...
(
⭐写作任务⭐
)
(
任务1-邮件
)
假如你是李明,你的美国笔友 Ben要来中国度假。他发电子邮件向你询问中国的礼仪习惯。请你根据以下提示,用英语给Ben回一封电子邮件,告诉他需要注意的问题。
提示:
1. 初次见面要握手;
2. 进别人家时一定要敲门;
3. 在公共场合不要大声喧哗;
4. ……
写作要求:
1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:customs 礼仪习惯 public places 公共场合
Dear Ben,
I’m glad you’ll come to China for your holiday.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【审题指导】
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括初次见面的礼仪、进别人家的礼仪、在公共场所的行为规范,以及其他需要注意的礼仪习惯。考生需确保所有要点都被涵盖,并适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
【写作框架】
第一步:表明写作意图。说明邮件的目的是介绍中国的礼仪习惯。
第二步:按照要点提示具体阐述写作内容。
第三步:书写结语。表达希望这些礼仪提示能帮助Ben在中国度过愉快的假期,并送上祝福。
【参考范文】
Dear Ben,
I’m glad you’ll come to China for your holiday.
Here are some Chinese customs you should know. First, shake hands when meeting someone for the first time. Second, always knock on the door before entering others’ homes. Third, avoid making loud noise in public places to show respect. Additionally, when receiving gifts, accept them with both hands and open them later. Lastly, try to use chopsticks properly and don’t point at others with them.
I hope these tips will help you enjoy your stay in China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
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任务2-说明文
)
校园是我们学习和成长的地方,良好的文明礼仪是构建和谐校园的重要因素。校园文明礼仪不仅能让我们拥有和谐的学习氛围,还能塑造良好的个人品格。请根据以下内容提示,以“How to Behave Politely at School”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:
1. How can we get along well with classmates?
2. What should we do to respect teachers?
3. What manners should we follow in the classroom and at school?
参考词汇:greet, polite, impolite, kind, respect, offer, be on time,…
要求:
1. 包含内容提示和参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何的真实信息;
4. 词数:不少于70词。
How to Behave Politely at School
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【框架设计】
第一步,点明主题。引出在学校保持礼貌的建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从与同学、老师相处,及课堂和校园礼仪三方面阐述如何保持礼貌;
第三步,书写结语。
【参考范文】
How to Behave Politely at School
Being polite at school helps create a harmonious environment. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, getting along with classmates requires kindness. We should offer help when someone is in trouble. Listening patiently to others’ ideas and avoiding impolite words like “You’re wrong” are also important. Secondly, respecting teachers means greeting them when we meet. Being on time for class and listening carefully show respect. We should always say “please” when asking questions and “thank you” after getting help. Finally, in the classroom, keep desks tidy and raise hands before speaking. In public areas, don’t shout or run. Always remember to say “excuse me” when passing through crowds.
If everyone follows these rules, our school will be a better place.
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词汇积累
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1. shake hands 握手
2. bow to 向……鞠躬
3. kiss sb. on... 亲吻某人的……
4. table manners 餐桌礼仪
5. traditional custom 传统习俗
6. folk custom 民间习俗
7. local custom 当地习俗
8. be supposed to 应该
9. be expected to 被期望
10. introduce...to... 把……介绍给……
11. lay chopsticks on the plate or bowl 把筷子放在盘子或碗上
12. not stick chopsticks into food 不要把筷子插进食物里
13. not point at anyone with chopsticks 不要用筷子指着任何人
14. not make noise when eating soup 喝汤时不要发出声音
15. serve some fruit 端上一些水果
16. offer some tea 提供一些茶
17. receive the gift with two hands 用双手接过礼物
18. knock on the door 敲门
19. follow the customs 遵循习俗
20. good manners 有礼貌
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句型积累
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开头句:
1. Every country has its own customs and manners.
每个国家都有自己的风俗和礼仪。
2. It is important to learn about table manners in different cultures.
了解不同文化中的餐桌礼仪很重要。
3. When you visit a new place, you should follow the local customs.
当你去一个新地方时,应该遵循当地的习俗。
4. Good manners play an important role in our daily life.
礼貌在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要角色。
5. In China, there are many traditional customs for festivals.
在中国,有许多传统的节日习俗。
中间句 :
1. For example, people usually shake hands when they meet for the first time.
例如,人们第一次见面时通常会握手。
2. We are supposed to knock on the door before entering a room.
在进入房间之前,我们应该先敲门。
3. It is polite to say "please" and "thank you".
说“请”和“谢谢”是有礼貌的。
4. When eating, we should not point at others with our chopsticks.
吃饭时,我们不应该用筷子指着别人。
5. We should receive gifts with both hands to show respect.
我们应该用双手接过礼物以示尊重。
6. During the Spring Festival, people visit relatives and friends.
在春节期间,人们会走亲访友。
结尾句 :
1. In short, following local customs shows our respect for others.
总之,遵循当地习俗体现了我们对他人的尊重。
2. By learning about different customs, we can understand each other better.
通过了解不同的习俗,我们可以更好地理解彼此。
3. I think it is very important to teach children good manners from an early age.
我认为从小教育孩子有礼貌非常重要。
4. In conclusion, good manners can make our life more harmonious.
总之,良好的礼仪能让我们的生活更加和谐。
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谚语积累
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1. “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”——入乡随俗。
2. “Courtesy costs nothing, but it's worth more than anything.”——礼貌不花钱,却比什么都值钱。
3. “Respect others, and you will be respected.”——敬人者,人恒敬之。
4. “Do as you would be done by.”——己所不欲,勿施于人。
5. “A man's courtesy is a mirror that reflects his image.”——一个人的礼貌,是一面照出他肖像的镜子。
6. “The use of courtesy, harmony is precious.”——礼之用,和为贵。
7. “No etiquette, no standing.”——不学礼,无以立。
8. “Politeness often replaces the noblest emotions.”——礼貌经常可以替代最高贵的情感。
9. “Custom is a second nature.”——习惯是后天养成的。
10. “Let's give it away. It's a matter of courtesy.”——让者,礼之实也。
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写作模板
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模板一:介绍单一礼仪或习俗
第一段:开头 (Introduction)
主题句: Every country has its own customs and manners, and 礼仪/习俗名称is a very important one in 国家/地区.
补充说明: People usually do this to 目的/原因.
第二段:主体 (Main Body)
场景一: People usually 具体做法 1 when .
场景二: They also 具体做法 2 when .
注意事项: It is important to remember that people should not 禁忌/错误做法 because it is considered 不礼貌/原因.
第三段:结尾 (Conclusion)
总结感受: I think 礼仪/习俗名称 is a good custom because it 表达你的看法/好处.
升华主题: By following it, we can 带来的积极影响.
模板二:比较中西方礼仪差异
第一段:开头 (Introduction)
主题句: There are many differences between Chinese and Western customs, especially in 具体场合,如:table manners.
过渡句: Learning about them can help us understand each other better.
第二段:主体 (Main Body)
中国做法: In China, people usually 中国人的做法 when .
西方做法: However, in Western countries, people often 西方人的做法 in the same situation.
举例说明: For example, 举一个具体的例子.
第三段:结尾 (Conclusion)
总结观点: In short, even though the customs are different, the idea behind them is the same:共同的核心,如:to show respect.
表达态度: We should respect these differences when we communicate with people from other cultures.
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考情分析
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近几年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2025年
江苏常州
写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
材料作文
2022年
山东枣庄
假如你是李华,你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客,向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。
书信作文
2024年
黑龙江
假如你是李华, 你的一位笔友约翰发来一封邮件, 说他下星期来中国,他向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。
材料作文
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变式提升训练
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(1)
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信说他和他的同学们在中文学习上遇到了一些困难。他调查了同学们的学习状况,绘制了如下图表。现请你根据调查情况,提供相关建议。与此同时,你得知Mike从未体验过中国年,于是向他介绍中国春节习俗,并邀他来你所在的城市过年。请你根据以上信息给Mike写一封回信。
要求:
1. 字数80~130词;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在的学校名称。
参考信息:
1. 根据图表信息提供促进中文学习的建议;
2. 向Mike介绍中国春节习俗并邀请他来你所在的城市过年;
3. ……
Dear Mike,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Sorry to hear you and your classmates have trouble learning Chinese. From your chart: 36% often make mistakes in grammar, 26% find it hard to understand spoken Chinese, 21% read very slowly, and 17% have poor pronunciation. I have some advice for you.
For grammar, do targeted exercises and take notes. To follow spoken Chinese, watch short Chinese videos or chat with Chinese friends. Read easy Chinese stories daily to speed up. For pronunciation, listen to Chinese songs and repeat.
The Spring Festival is “Chinese New Year”. Families gather to make dumplings and have a reunion dinner. We also set off fireworks and get red envelopes. Come to celebrate with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③ 提示:材料所给表格和文字内容需完整表达,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明文章主旨,提出给对方提供解决问题的建议;
第二步,详细阐述自己的建议并介绍春节;
第三步,欢迎对方来中国过年,结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble learning Chinese学汉语有困难
②do targeted exercises做针对性的练习
③speed up加速
④have a reunion dinner吃团圆饭
[高分句型]
①Sorry to hear you and your classmates have trouble learning Chinese. (动名词作宾语)
②To follow spoken Chinese, watch short Chinese videos or chat with Chinese friends. (动词不定式作目的状语)
(2)
假如你校英文报发起了关于学生说脏话现象的讨论,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈你对他人说脏话的观点和建议。
提示:
1. Why shouldn’t we say dirty words?
2. How can we help others stop saying dirty words?
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. ___________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I really don’t think it’s right for students to say dirty words. Dirty words are harmful to both the speakers and listeners. Listeners will feel uncomfortable while speakers will surely leave a bad impression on others. Nobody is willing to make friends with those impolite students.
To help dirty words speakers stop this bad habit, we have much to do. First of all, family members and teachers can have a talk with them, making them realize their problem and the harm. What’s more, we can make rules to help them. When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them. By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍为什么我们不能说脏话;
第二步,介绍怎样才能帮助他人不再说脏话。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to 对……有害
②leave a bad impression on others 给他人留下不好的印象
③make friends with 和……交朋友
④What’s more 此外
[高分句型]
①When they say dirty words, we remind them. When they use clean words, we praise them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②By doing these, I am sure dirty words will be stopped!(省略that的宾语从句)
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假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Linda打算来中国度假,请你根据下面表格提示,给她写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的风俗和餐桌礼仪。
事项
内容
拜访朋友
先电话预约
时间
准时
见面
面带微笑;握手
宴席
吃饭时,不大声说话;不用筷子指着别人
其他方面
……(至少补充1点)
要求:
(1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现任何真实信息;
(3)词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Linda,
How are you doing? I miss you very much. I know that you will come to China for vacation.______________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Linda,
How are you doing? I miss you very much. I know that you will come to China for vacation. Now let me tell you some Chinese customs and table manners.
When you want to visit friends, you should call them first to make an appointment. And you must arrive on time. When meeting friends, smile and shake hands.
At dinner, don’t talk loudly. Also, never point at others with chopsticks. Another thing is that we usually use chopsticks to eat. It’s not polite to stick chopsticks into the rice, as it’s like the way for funerals in China.
Following these customs will help you have a great time in China. I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图——为对方介绍中国的风俗和餐桌礼仪;
第二步,具体介绍中国的风俗和餐桌礼仪;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make an appointment预约
②on time按时
③point at指向
[高分句型]
①When you want to visit friends, you should call them first to make an appointment. (时间状语从句)
②It’s not polite to stick chopsticks into the rice, as it’s like the way for funerals in China. (原因状语从句)
(4)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mark给你发了一封求助邮件。请你阅读邮件内容并进行回复。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going? My Chinese teacher invited me to have dinner at her house next Sunday. I really want to behave properly, but I know nothing about Chinese table manners. Could you help me?
Yours,
Mark
要求:
1.词数100左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.包括至少三条建议,并可适当补充,以使语句通顺,行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear from you. And it’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions on Chinese table manners.
First, don’t start eating until the host gives a sign. In Chinese culture, the host or the eldest person at the table lifts their chopsticks first after the dishes are served. Since the use of chopsticks is a must when eating Chinese food, there are some basic manners you should know. You’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food. And it’s impolite to play or point at people with them. Besides, you’d better choose dishes that are close to you.
I hope you can enjoy the dinner and have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文主要是介绍一些中国的餐桌礼仪,考生注意不要遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍中国的一些餐桌礼仪;
第三步,书写结尾,表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该做某事
②have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①Since the use of chopsticks is a must when eating Chinese food, there are some basic manners you should know.(since引导的原因状语从句)
②Besides, you’d better choose dishes that are close to you.(that引导的定语从句)
(5)
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Tom 对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。请你给他写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的春节。
内容要点:
1. 春节是中国最重要的传统节日;
2. 春节前人们通常打扫房间、购物、贴春联(put up Spring Festival couplets)等;
3. 春节期间人们走亲访友、吃团圆饭、收红包(get red envelopes)等;
4. 你对春节的感受。
要求:
5. 词数:80 - 100 词;
6. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
7. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China._______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China. The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China. It’s a time for family reunions and joy.
Before the Spring Festival, people usually clean their houses thoroughly to sweep away bad luck. They also go shopping for new clothes, delicious food and other necessities. And it’s a tradition to put up Spring Festival couplets on the doors.
During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends. They have big family dinners together, enjoying all kinds of delicious dishes. Children are especially excited because they can get red envelopes with lucky money in them.
I love the Spring Festival because it makes me feel the warmth of family and the happiness of the festival atmosphere.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件,向美国笔友介绍中国春节的文化内涵与习俗;
②时态:主要以一般现在时为主;
③提示:涵盖所有要点,结合“扫走霉运、压岁钱寓意”等细节拓展文化背景,逻辑连贯。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开篇直接指出春节是中国“最重要的传统节日”,并以“家庭团聚与欢乐时刻”补充其文化意义。
第二步,描述节前各种准备与习俗,介绍节中社交礼仪及饮食文化等;
第三步,表达个人情感与认知,总结感受,将个人体验与文化认同相结合。
【亮点词汇】
①thoroughly彻底地
②necessities必需品
③lucky money压岁钱
【高分句型】
①Children are especially excited because they can get red envelopes with lucky money in them.(原因状语从句)
②I love the Spring Festival because it makes me feel the warmth of family and the happiness of the festival atmosphere.(原因状语从句)
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向世界传递中国文化,让世界倾听中国声音。假如你是李华,是汉文化宣传俱乐部的成员,你们学校即将有外国青少年来体验中国文化。请你从社交礼仪、餐桌礼仪、节日传统等方面向外国小伙伴介绍我们中国的文化习俗,以帮助他们更快更好地适应在中国的生活。
You’re supposed to
You’d better not
Social customs
shake hands
kiss; bow
Table manners
the old start eating first;
talk with a full mouth;
point at others with chopsticks...
Festival traditions
get together;
share special food...
say unlucky things;
get angry...
…
…
…
要求:
1. 词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Hello, everyone! Welcome to China! I’m Li Hua. Now let me introduce you some customs and manners in China.
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【答案】
Hello, everyone! Welcome to China! I’m Li Hua. Now let me introduce you some customs and manners in China.
In terms of social customs, we greet each other with a friendly handshake. While kisses or bows might be common in other cultures, here, a firm handshake is the norm. When it comes to table manners, it’s considered respectful to wait until the elders start eating. Please avoid talking with a full mouth or pointing at others with chopsticks.
During our traditional festivals, families and friends get together to celebrate. We share special foods. It’s important to avoid saying unlucky things or getting angry.
These are some key cultural customs. I hope you’ll enjoy your stay in China!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示,介绍社交礼仪、餐桌礼仪和节日传统;
第三步,书写结语,希望对方在中国玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of…在……方面
②when it comes to说到
③avoid doing sth.避免做某事
④point at指向
[高分句型]
①When it comes to table manners, it’s considered respectful to wait until the elders start eating.(时间状语从句)
(7)
假如你是李华,你们学校的美国交换生Tim要到一位中国朋友家吃晚饭,他不懂中国的做客礼仪,向你寻求建议;请你根据下面内容提示,给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 见面礼仪:准时到朋友家,第一次见面时微笑、握手;
2. 餐桌礼仪:用筷子就餐,就餐时不能用筷子指着别人,就餐时不可以多说话,当吃饱时有礼貌的回绝等。
3. 离开时要对主人表示感谢。
参考词汇:握手shake hands;筷子chopsticks;指向point at
要求:
1. 词数80—100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Tim,
I’m glad to hear that you’ve been invited to a Chinese friend’s house for dinner. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs._______________________________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tim,
I’m glad to hear that you’ve been invited to a Chinese friend’s house for dinner. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs. Firstly, it’s important to arrive on time. When you first meet your friend’s family, smile and shake hands as a sign of respect and friendliness.
At the dinner table, you’ll be expected to use chopsticks. Remember, never point at anyone with your chopsticks as it’s considered rude. Also, try not to talk too much while eating. If you’ve had enough food, politely refuse more by saying something like, “Thank you, but I’m full.”
Before you leave, be sure to thank your host for the wonderful meal and their hospitality.
I hope these tips will help you have a pleasant dinner. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封回信;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所有提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山:引出要向他提供关于中国做客习俗的建议,为下文具体内容做铺垫;
第二步,介绍见面礼仪;
第三步,介绍餐桌礼仪;
第四步,介绍离开时需要注意的事项;
第三步,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①point at 指着
②be expected to do sth. 被期望做某事
[高分句型]
①I hope these tips will help you have a pleasant dinner. (宾语从句)
②If you have any other questions, feel free to ask. (if引导的条件状语从句)
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