高频话题 10 青少年问题（同步写作讲义）英语九年级英语通用版

高频话题10：青少年问题 九年级同步写作课讲义 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 这类作文通常要求你围绕一个具体问题（如学习压力、网络沉迷等），在文章中清晰地描述现象、分析原因、提出建议。 写作时，可以遵循“三段式”结构： 开头：用一两句话介绍普遍存在的问题，引出主题。 中间：这是核心部分，需要分析1-2个导致问题的原因，并提出2-3条具体可行的建议。 结尾：总结全文，并发出呼吁或表达期望。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) ( 任务1-邮件 ) 假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Mark向你陈述最近他沉迷电子游戏无法自拔，因此写邮件向你求助，请你给他回复一封邮件。 内容包括： （1）说明合理使用电子产品的重要性； （2）提出一些建议； （3）表达你的期待。 注意: （1）词数 80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校班级名称。 Dear, Mark, How’s it going?___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，李辉针对英国笔友Mark沉迷电子游戏的问题，回复邮件提供帮助； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，阐述合理使用电子产品的重要性；使用情态动词强调后果与可能性，语气亲切自然，时态运用符合逻辑，流畅连贯； ③提示：文章紧扣所有内容要点，包含“合理使用电子产品的重要性，补充了“游戏时长示例 ”等细节，内容完整，逻辑清晰，无真实信息，词数符合80-100词要求。 【写作框架】 第一步，开篇承接已给问候语，对Mark沉迷游戏的情况表达关切与理解，随即点明“合理使用电子产品很重要”，并具体分析过度玩游戏的负面影响，让Mark认识到问题的严重性，为下文建议做铺垫； 第二步，分点提出改善建议。首先建议设定每日游戏时长；其次提议重拾旧爱好；最后补充应急方法，从“控制时长、转移注意力、即时干预”三个角度给出方案，全面且实用； 第三步，表达对Mark的信任，并期待听到他的进步，用积极的鼓励收尾，既传递信心，又强化Mark改变的动力。 【参考范文】 Dear Mark, How’s it going? I’m sorry to hear you’re stuck in playing video games too much. It’s important to use electronics properly—spending too much time on games will make you tired, hurt your eyes, and even affect your studies and time with family. Here are some tips for you. First, set a daily time limit for gaming, like 30 minutes after finishing homework. Second, try other activities you used to love, such as playing basketball or reading books. When you feel like gaming, call a friend to hang out instead. I believe you can get rid of this bad habit soon. Looking forward to hearing about your progress! Yours, Li Hui ( 任务2-演讲稿 ) 科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。 要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业 伤害眼睛，不利健康 网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生 建议 适度使用智能手机 多花时间与家人、朋友交流 …… Boys and girls, With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. __________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【框架设计】 第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害； 第二步，提出远离手机的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 【参考范文】 Boys and girls, With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people. Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life! Thank you! ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 学习与压力 压力类: stress, pressure, be stressed out 学习问题: heavy homework, exam anxiety, academic burden 解决方案: time management, make a schedule, seek help 健康与生活 作息问题: stay up late, sleep deprivation 饮食问题: junk food, unhealthy diet 运动重要性: take exercise, keep fit, physical health 沉迷与习惯 主要问题: internet addiction, be addicted to, mobile phone 相关行为: play video games, online shopping, waste time 解决方案: set limits, self-control, develop hobbies 社交与情感 关系类: peer pressure, get along with, conflict 情感类: loneliness, self-confidence, mood swings 沟通: communicate with, share feelings 家庭与沟通 常见问题: generation gap, lack of communication 家庭关系: family environment, parental expectations 解决方案: spend quality time, understand each other ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 (Opening Sentences) 1.Nowadays, many teenagers are facing the problem of ...如今，许多青少年面临着……的问题。 2.In recent years, ... has become a serious problem among teenagers.近年来，……在青少年中已成为一个严重问题。 3.With the development of society, more and more teenagers are experiencing ...随着社会的发展，越来越多的青少年正在经历…… 4.In my opinion, ... is one of the biggest challenges for young people today.在我看来，……是当今年轻人面临的最大挑战之一。 5.I believe that we should pay more attention to the issue of ...我认为我们应该更加关注...的问题。 6.It is clear that ... has a great influence on teenagers' life.很明显，……对青少年的生活有很大的影响。 中间句 (Body Sentences) 1.One of the main reasons is that ...其中一个主要原因是... 2.Many teenagers do this because they want to ...许多青少年这样做是因为他们想…… 3.This problem is caused by a lack of ...这个问题是由缺乏...引起的。 4.This can lead to ... and have a bad influence on ...这可能导致……并对……产生不良影响。 5.If this problem is not solved, it will ...如果这个问题没有解决，那么…… 6.As a result, teenagers may feel ... and lose interest in ...因此，青少年可能会感到……并失去兴趣…… 7.I think we should ... to deal with this problem.我认为我们应该……来解决这个问题。 8.It is important for teenagers to ...青少年应该…… 9.Parents and teachers should help them by ...父母和老师应该通过……来帮助他们。 10We can solve this problem by ...我们可以解决这个问题通过... 结尾句 (Closing Sentences) 1.In conclusion, we must take action to solve the problem of ...总之，我们必须采取行动来解决这个...问题。 2.To sum up, it is everyone's responsibility to help teenagers ...总之，帮助青少年...是每个人的责任。 3.If we work together, we can make a difference.如果我们共同努力，我们可以产生影响。 4.I hope that in the future, teenagers will ...我希望将来青少年能够... 5.By solving this problem, we can help teenagers have a better future.通过解决这个问题，我们可以帮助青少年拥有更美好的未来。 6.Let's take action now to create a better life for them.让我们现在采取行动，为他们创造更好的生活。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1. An idle youth, a needy age. = A young idler, an old beggar.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。 2. There is no royal road to learning.学无坦途。 3. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。 4. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 5. It is never too late to mend.亡羊补牢，犹为未晚。 6. No pains, no gains.不劳则无获。 7. Action speaks louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。 8. A good medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。 9. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。 10. Time and tide wait for no man.时不我待。 ( 写作模板 )  Nowadays, many teenagers are facing the problem of_______________ . This can lead to ___ ______________________ . Therefore, it is important for us to find ways to solve it.   There are several reasons for this problem. First, ____________________________________ . Second, ___________________________________________________ .  To solve this problem, I have three suggestions. First, ________________________________. Second, ________________________________ . Third, ________________________________ .   In conclusion, ______________________________ is a serious problem for teenagers. If we work together, we can __________________________ .  ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024年 内蒙古 你的英国笔友 Mike饱受肥胖的困扰，他向你求助，询问如何保持健康。 应用文 2023年 辽宁鞍山 眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。 应用文 2023年 湖北恩施 越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。 材料作文 2023年 江苏无锡 假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 应用文 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions?”的英语短文。 内容要点：1.明确表明你是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定?” 2.优点：培养青少年的独立性 (independence)，培养青少年责任感 (develop a sense of responsibility) 3.缺点：青少年缺乏经验易出错，引发家庭矛盾。 4.优缺点只能选择一种写。 要求：1.字迹工整，段落层次清晰； 2.不必逐字逐句翻译； 3.词数80词以上。 Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） Jack的妈妈对青春期的Jack在成长中面临的诸多问题感到十分担忧。假如你是Dr. Lin，受Jack妈妈之托，请你根据思维导图内容提示给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议。 作文要求: （1）包含题干中的要点； （2）逻辑流畅，行文完整，不少于80词； （3）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 Dear Jack, Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dr. Lin （3） 假如你是李华，你的外国好友Alex即将面临期末考试，因压力过大给你发来了下面这封邮件。请阅读他的邮件内容，并写一封回信为他提供建议。 TO: LIHUA@mail.com SUBJECT: Exam Stress Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going? I’m really stressed about my final exams. There’s too much to remember, but I always forget most things right away. I keep worrying about failing, even though I work hard. I can’t sleep well either. What should I do? Can you help me? Thank you! Alex 请你回复以上邮件，内容包括： 1.make a study plan; 2.relax and get enough sleep; 3. ... 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Alex, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. ________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams! Best wishes.                                                              Li Hua （4） 为响应国家提出的“体重管理年”三年行动号召，学校广播站准备就“体重管理”这一热议话题展开征文活动。请你作为班级学生代表，以“How to manage weight”为题，根据以下提示词，适当发挥，写一篇英文短文向广播站投稿。 写作要点：1. Why should teenagers keep a healthy weight? 2. What are your suggestions? （1）Eat a balanced diet. （2）Exercise regularly. （3）… 写作要求：1. 文中需包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to manage weight Weight management is very important for our health. ___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 中考在即，在紧张备考的同时，睡眠健康同样不容忽视。假设你是初中生李华，你校英语社为了解学生的睡眠情况，帮助同学们进一步关注睡眠健康，开展了“Sleep Well, Live Better”的主题活动，并进行了问卷调查。请基于以下调查表，撰写一篇英文投稿，反馈你的睡眠情况，分享你对睡眠健康的看法，并谈一谈你的下一步计划。 注意： (1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 (2) 词数80左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, I took part in the school survey about sleeping habits. ___________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） 不少毕业班同学因为最近学习紧张而导致睡眠质量不佳。假设你们班英语课开展了主题为“Sleep Smart”的小组讨论。请你根据以下所给讨论信息，结合自己的体会和感受，撰写一篇以此为题的英语发言稿。 Terrible Sleep Advice 1. influence one’s schoolwork 1. listen to light music 2. make sb. feel sad     2. take a warm shower 3. become sick 3. communicate with parents 4…. 4…. 注意： （1）发言稿必须包括图表中所有要点，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）词数：100个左右； （4）发言稿首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Sleep Smart Are you short on sleep today? According to our group’s discussion, _________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） “双减”之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。“某校英语角就”如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1.你的课余时间都做了些什么？ 2.你做这些事的原因或者好处是什么？ 3.你的建议或者看法是什么？ 要求：1. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频话题10：青少年问题 九年级同步写作课讲义 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 这类作文通常要求你围绕一个具体问题（如学习压力、网络沉迷等），在文章中清晰地描述现象、分析原因、提出建议。 写作时，可以遵循“三段式”结构： 开头：用一两句话介绍普遍存在的问题，引出主题。 中间：这是核心部分，需要分析1-2个导致问题的原因，并提出2-3条具体可行的建议。 结尾：总结全文，并发出呼吁或表达期望。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) ( 任务1-邮件 ) 假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Mark向你陈述最近他沉迷电子游戏无法自拔，因此写邮件向你求助，请你给他回复一封邮件。 内容包括： （1）说明合理使用电子产品的重要性； （2）提出一些建议； （3）表达你的期待。 注意: （1）词数 80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校班级名称。 Dear, Mark, How’s it going?___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，李辉针对英国笔友Mark沉迷电子游戏的问题，回复邮件提供帮助； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，阐述合理使用电子产品的重要性；使用情态动词强调后果与可能性，语气亲切自然，时态运用符合逻辑，流畅连贯； ③提示：文章紧扣所有内容要点，包含“合理使用电子产品的重要性，补充了“游戏时长示例 ”等细节，内容完整，逻辑清晰，无真实信息，词数符合80-100词要求。 【写作框架】 第一步，开篇承接已给问候语，对Mark沉迷游戏的情况表达关切与理解，随即点明“合理使用电子产品很重要”，并具体分析过度玩游戏的负面影响，让Mark认识到问题的严重性，为下文建议做铺垫； 第二步，分点提出改善建议。首先建议设定每日游戏时长；其次提议重拾旧爱好；最后补充应急方法，从“控制时长、转移注意力、即时干预”三个角度给出方案，全面且实用； 第三步，表达对Mark的信任，并期待听到他的进步，用积极的鼓励收尾，既传递信心，又强化Mark改变的动力。 【参考范文】 Dear Mark, How’s it going? I’m sorry to hear you’re stuck in playing video games too much. It’s important to use electronics properly—spending too much time on games will make you tired, hurt your eyes, and even affect your studies and time with family. Here are some tips for you. First, set a daily time limit for gaming, like 30 minutes after finishing homework. Second, try other activities you used to love, such as playing basketball or reading books. When you feel like gaming, call a friend to hang out instead. I believe you can get rid of this bad habit soon. Looking forward to hearing about your progress! Yours, Li Hui ( 任务2-演讲稿 ) 科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。 要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业 伤害眼睛，不利健康 网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生 建议 适度使用智能手机 多花时间与家人、朋友交流 …… Boys and girls, With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. __________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【框架设计】 第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害； 第二步，提出远离手机的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 【参考范文】 Boys and girls, With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people. Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life! Thank you! ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 学习与压力 压力类: stress, pressure, be stressed out 学习问题: heavy homework, exam anxiety, academic burden 解决方案: time management, make a schedule, seek help 健康与生活 作息问题: stay up late, sleep deprivation 饮食问题: junk food, unhealthy diet 运动重要性: take exercise, keep fit, physical health 沉迷与习惯 主要问题: internet addiction, be addicted to, mobile phone 相关行为: play video games, online shopping, waste time 解决方案: set limits, self-control, develop hobbies 社交与情感 关系类: peer pressure, get along with, conflict 情感类: loneliness, self-confidence, mood swings 沟通: communicate with, share feelings 家庭与沟通 常见问题: generation gap, lack of communication 家庭关系: family environment, parental expectations 解决方案: spend quality time, understand each other ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 (Opening Sentences) 1.Nowadays, many teenagers are facing the problem of ...如今，许多青少年面临着……的问题。 2.In recent years, ... has become a serious problem among teenagers.近年来，……在青少年中已成为一个严重问题。 3.With the development of society, more and more teenagers are experiencing ...随着社会的发展，越来越多的青少年正在经历…… 4.In my opinion, ... is one of the biggest challenges for young people today.在我看来，……是当今年轻人面临的最大挑战之一。 5.I believe that we should pay more attention to the issue of ...我认为我们应该更加关注...的问题。 6.It is clear that ... has a great influence on teenagers' life.很明显，……对青少年的生活有很大的影响。 中间句 (Body Sentences) 1.One of the main reasons is that ...其中一个主要原因是... 2.Many teenagers do this because they want to ...许多青少年这样做是因为他们想…… 3.This problem is caused by a lack of ...这个问题是由缺乏...引起的。 4.This can lead to ... and have a bad influence on ...这可能导致……并对……产生不良影响。 5.If this problem is not solved, it will ...如果这个问题没有解决，那么…… 6.As a result, teenagers may feel ... and lose interest in ...因此，青少年可能会感到……并失去兴趣…… 7.I think we should ... to deal with this problem.我认为我们应该……来解决这个问题。 8.It is important for teenagers to ...青少年应该…… 9.Parents and teachers should help them by ...父母和老师应该通过……来帮助他们。 10We can solve this problem by ...我们可以解决这个问题通过... 结尾句 (Closing Sentences) 1.In conclusion, we must take action to solve the problem of ...总之，我们必须采取行动来解决这个...问题。 2.To sum up, it is everyone's responsibility to help teenagers ...总之，帮助青少年...是每个人的责任。 3.If we work together, we can make a difference.如果我们共同努力，我们可以产生影响。 4.I hope that in the future, teenagers will ...我希望将来青少年能够... 5.By solving this problem, we can help teenagers have a better future.通过解决这个问题，我们可以帮助青少年拥有更美好的未来。 6.Let's take action now to create a better life for them.让我们现在采取行动，为他们创造更好的生活。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1. An idle youth, a needy age. = A young idler, an old beggar.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。 2. There is no royal road to learning.学无坦途。 3. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。 4. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 5. It is never too late to mend.亡羊补牢，犹为未晚。 6. No pains, no gains.不劳则无获。 7. Action speaks louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。 8. A good medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。 9. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。 10. Time and tide wait for no man.时不我待。 ( 写作模板 )  Nowadays, many teenagers are facing the problem of_______________ . This can lead to ___ ______________________ . Therefore, it is important for us to find ways to solve it.   There are several reasons for this problem. First, ____________________________________ . Second, ___________________________________________________ .  To solve this problem, I have three suggestions. First, ________________________________. Second, ________________________________ . Third, ________________________________ .   In conclusion, ______________________________ is a serious problem for teenagers. If we work together, we can __________________________ .  ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024年 内蒙古 你的英国笔友 Mike饱受肥胖的困扰，他向你求助，询问如何保持健康。 应用文 2023年 辽宁鞍山 眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。 应用文 2023年 湖北恩施 越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。 材料作文 2023年 江苏无锡 假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 应用文 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions?”的英语短文。 内容要点：1.明确表明你是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定?” 2.优点：培养青少年的独立性 (independence)，培养青少年责任感 (develop a sense of responsibility) 3.缺点：青少年缺乏经验易出错，引发家庭矛盾。 4.优缺点只能选择一种写。 要求：1.字迹工整，段落层次清晰； 2.不必逐字逐句翻译； 3.词数80词以上。 Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions? In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions. Allowing teenagers to make decisions can bring many benefits. Firstly, it helps cultivate their independence. When they face choices and solve problems on their own, they gradually learn to rely on themselves. Secondly, it enables them to develop a sense of responsibility. Since they make the decisions, they will be more willing to take responsibility for the consequences. In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，探讨是否应允许青少年自主做决定； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应围绕是否支持青少年自主做决定，选择阐述优点或缺点，注意突出写作重点，不必逐字逐句翻译。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接提出是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定”的观点； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。若选择支持，则从培养青少年的独立性、责任感等优点方面进行论述；若选择反对，则从青少年缺乏经验易出错、引发家庭矛盾等缺点方面进行论述； 第三步，书写结语。总结自己的观点，强调其重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①on one’s own独自地 ②be willing to愿意 ③take responsibility for对……负责 ④in conclusion总之 [高分句型] In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth.（动名词短语作主语） （2） Jack的妈妈对青春期的Jack在成长中面临的诸多问题感到十分担忧。假如你是Dr. Lin，受Jack妈妈之托，请你根据思维导图内容提示给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议。 作文要求: （1）包含题干中的要点； （2）逻辑流畅，行文完整，不少于80词； （3）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 Dear Jack, Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dr. Lin 【答案】 Dear Jack,   Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much. You spend too much time on computer games and phones. Besides, you hardly communicate with your family and friends. I have some advice for you. Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. In addition, more communication also works. All in all, it is necessary for you to think about your parents’ feelings and try your best to deal with the problems. Try to share the housework with them. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Wishing you a happy and successful junior high school life! Yours, Dr. Lin 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点需根据思维导图提示，给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己知道对方有一些问题，谈论对方的问题并给出建议； 第二步，表达对对方的期望； 第三步，书写结尾，祝愿对方有一个开心且成功的初中生活。 [亮点词汇] ①be worried about对……担忧 ②spend time on sth在某事上花时间 ③communicate with sb.与某人交流 [高分句型] ①I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much.（that引导宾语从句） ②Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. （so that引导状语从句） （3） 假如你是李华，你的外国好友Alex即将面临期末考试，因压力过大给你发来了下面这封邮件。请阅读他的邮件内容，并写一封回信为他提供建议。 TO: LIHUA@mail.com SUBJECT: Exam Stress Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going? I’m really stressed about my final exams. There’s too much to remember, but I always forget most things right away. I keep worrying about failing, even though I work hard. I can’t sleep well either. What should I do? Can you help me? Thank you! Alex 请你回复以上邮件，内容包括： 1.make a study plan; 2.relax and get enough sleep; 3. ... 写作要求： 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Alex, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. ________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams! Best wishes.                                                              Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Alex, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. Don’t worry. It’s normal to feel this way before exams. Here are some suggestions that might help. First, make a study plan. Break down your subjects into smaller parts and study them one by one. This way, you will feel less stressed. Second, try to relax. You can listen to some soft music or take a short walk outside to feel calmer. Also, don’t forget to get enough sleep. A good night’s sleep can help your brain work better. Lastly, believe in yourself. You’ve already done a lot of preparation, so you can make it! If you are still nervous, talk to your teachers or friends. They may give you some useful advice. I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据邮件内容进行回复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接上文，给出建议； 第二步，从学习计划、放松、睡眠和相信自己方面给出具体的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①one by one一个接一个地 ②believe in oneself相信某人自己 ③talk to sb和某人交流 [高分句型] ①Here are some suggestions that might help. (that引导的定语从句) ②If you are still nervous, talk to your teachers or friends. (if引导的条件状语从句) （4） 为响应国家提出的“体重管理年”三年行动号召，学校广播站准备就“体重管理”这一热议话题展开征文活动。请你作为班级学生代表，以“How to manage weight”为题，根据以下提示词，适当发挥，写一篇英文短文向广播站投稿。 写作要点：1. Why should teenagers keep a healthy weight? 2. What are your suggestions? （1）Eat a balanced diet. （2）Exercise regularly. （3）… 写作要求：1. 文中需包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to manage weight Weight management is very important for our health. ___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to manage weight Weight management is very important for our health. Being too fat can cause serious problems like heart diseases. Teenagers easily lose confidence because of overweight. How can we keep a healthy weight? Here are some useful tips. First, eat a balanced diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food like hamburgers and sweets. Second, exercise regularly. Doing sports such as running, swimming, or playing basketball helps burn fat. Even walking for 30 minutes every day can make a difference. Third, get enough sleep. Staying up late can lead to weight gain, so we should sleep for at least 8 hours each night. In my opinion, small daily changes can make a big difference. If everyone takes action, we can surely succeed in managing our weight. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述为什么青少年应该保持健康的体重并从均衡饮食、定期锻炼等方面提出你的建议。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①make a difference起作用 ②lead to导致 ③take action采取行动 ④stay up熬夜 [高分句型] ①If everyone takes action, we can surely succeed in managing our weight. (If引导的条件状语从句) ②Staying up late can lead to weight gain, so we should sleep for at least 8 hours each night. (并列句) （5） 中考在即，在紧张备考的同时，睡眠健康同样不容忽视。假设你是初中生李华，你校英语社为了解学生的睡眠情况，帮助同学们进一步关注睡眠健康，开展了“Sleep Well, Live Better”的主题活动，并进行了问卷调查。请基于以下调查表，撰写一篇英文投稿，反馈你的睡眠情况，分享你对睡眠健康的看法，并谈一谈你的下一步计划。 注意： (1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 (2) 词数80左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, I took part in the school survey about sleeping habits. ___________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Recently, I took part in the school survey about sleeping habits. I hardly ever sleep for more than 8 hours because of heavy study tasks. I always take naps at noon to feel refreshed. And I usually go to sleep before 10:30 p.m. What’s more, I never drink coffee or tea before bed, as they might affect my sleep.     Good sleep is really important for us students. It helps our brains work better and makes us more energetic during the day.     Next, I plan to manage my time more wisely. I’ll finish homework earlier and avoid staying up late. Also, I’ll keep the habit of taking noon naps. I believe these efforts will let me sleep better and live a more wonderful life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：需依据调查表反馈睡眠情况，分享对睡眠健康看法及下一步计划，涵盖了相应要点并补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明参与学校睡眠习惯调查这一写作由头，引出后续内容； 第二步，从睡眠时长、午睡、晚睡时间、睡前习惯等方面详细反馈自身睡眠情况，接着阐述良好睡眠对学生的重要性，最后说明为改善睡眠的下一步时间管理及习惯保持计划； 第三步，表达相信努力能改善睡眠、让生活更美好，对计划进行积极展望 。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②feel refreshed感到精神焕发 ③manage time管理时间 [高分句型] ①I believe these efforts will let me sleep better and live a more wonderful life. (宾语从句) （6） 不少毕业班同学因为最近学习紧张而导致睡眠质量不佳。假设你们班英语课开展了主题为“Sleep Smart”的小组讨论。请你根据以下所给讨论信息，结合自己的体会和感受，撰写一篇以此为题的英语发言稿。 Terrible Sleep Advice 1. influence one’s schoolwork 1. listen to light music 2. make sb. feel sad     2. take a warm shower 3. become sick 3. communicate with parents 4…. 4…. 注意： （1）发言稿必须包括图表中所有要点，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （3）词数：100个左右； （4）发言稿首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Sleep Smart Are you short on sleep today? According to our group’s discussion, _________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Sleep Smart Are you short on sleep today? According to our group’s discussion, here are some suggestions to give you. If you can’t sleep well, maybe you will have many worries. Firstly, you may think it can influence your schoolwork. This will make you nervous. I think you’d better listen to light music. It can make you relaxed. Secondly, sleeping badly may make you feel sad. You can take a warm shower before going to bed and shut off your brain. Thirdly, maybe sleeping less will make you become sick. I think you should communicate with your parents. Maybe they can help you. Fourthly, sleeping badly can make you get angry easily. So it is easy for you to argue with your friends. I think you should talk about it with them. They may understand you. Don’t be too nervous about your study and sleep. Regard every weekday as a common day. Success belongs to you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要给出关于改善睡眠的建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了睡眠不佳的影响以及对应的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达对同学们的鼓励和祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①have many worries 有许多担忧 ②shut off your brain 关闭大脑 (放松) ③argue with 与……争吵 ④belong to 属于 [高分句型] ① If you can’t sleep well, maybe you will have many worries. (if引导的条件状语从句) ② I think you’d better listen to light music. (had better do sth. 最好做某事) ③ So it is easy for you to argue with your friends. (it is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是……的) （7） “双减”之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。“某校英语角就”如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1.你的课余时间都做了些什么？ 2.你做这些事的原因或者好处是什么？ 3.你的建议或者看法是什么？ 要求：1. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? Here are what we can do. First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. They are busy and tired every day, we should share some housework with them. Second, we can know more about the world by reading. Not only is reading a good habit, but also it can broaden our horizons. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature, which is a good way to relax ourselves. In addition, we can do some sports to get stronger and healthier.   In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and improve our quality, we will be better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful”为题； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“课余时间的活动、活动的好处以及建议”展开，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过“Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before”引出话题，说明讨论的背景； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课余时间的活动、活动的好处以及建议”三个方面展开，详细介绍自己在课余时间做的事情，说明这些活动的好处，并给出自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语。总结观点，强调让课余生活更有意义的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①be busy and tired 又忙又累 ②share...with... 和……分享…… ③not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… ④broaden one’s horizons 拓宽某人的视野 ⑤get close to 接近 ⑥in a word 总之 ⑦make full use of 充分利用 [高分句型] ①Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature, which is a good way to relax ourselves. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $