考前押题05 书面表达专练（期中专项训练）九年级英语上学期外研版

专题 书面表达专项训练 话题1 环境 话题4 日常活动 话题2 人际交往 话题5 家庭朋友 话题3 个人情况 话题6 旅游 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 话题1 环境 Passage 1 1．（24-25九年级上·天津河西·期末）为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，学校开展了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 注意：（1）词数80-100； （2）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 主题 绿色城市，健康生活 做法 骑车出行，减少空气污染； 垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁； 多种树木，保护自然环境。 你的观点 ……（至少2条） The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 2．（23-24九年级上·天津河西·期末）假如你班要开展一次以“环境保护”为主题的英语班会，请你以班长的身份准备一份发言稿，倡导大家作为一名中学生，从身边小事做起，在日常生活中注意环境保护。 要点提示： （1）绿色上学：尽量以步代车或骑自行车。 （2）杜绝浪费：节约用水、电等。 （3）减少垃圾：应该尽量使用水杯、饭盒等。 （4）爱护花草树木，积极参加绿化植树活动。 （5）你的做法（至少写一条） 要求： （1）词数：80~100个； （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to protect our environment The environmental problem is attracting more and more attention. As students, we can do a lot to protect our environment. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 3．（23-24九年级上·天津西青·期末）作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该怎样做，才能保护我们的环境呢？请你根据下面的要点提示，以“How to Protect Our Environment”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括以下几点： 1. 禁止乱扔垃圾，扔前进行垃圾分类； 2. 尽量步行或骑自行车出行，而不是乘车； 3. 购物时，带着我们自己的袋子，不使用塑料袋； 4. 不过多点餐，减少浪费； 5. 随手关灯，节约能源。 参考词汇：塑料的 plastic 点餐 order food (1) 不得使用真实的姓名和校名。 (2) 短文包含以上所有信息，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3) 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4) 词数不少于80 词。 (短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) How to Protect Our Environment As a student, what can we do to protect our environment? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe if everyone takes these simply steps, our world will become better and better. 话题2 人际交往 Passage 1 4．（23-24九年级上·天津西青·期中）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to get on well with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。 （1）父母规矩太多，不允许自己晚上和朋友出去……。 （2）父母过于关注分数，给自己太多压力，不理解自己。 （3）你应该尽力理解父母，他们是爱孩子的，希望孩子前程似锦。 （4）为了与父母保持良好关系，你应该努力学习，与父母多交流。 （5）……（至少一条）。 参考词汇：过多关注 pay too much attention to    压力 pressure    前程似锦 have a brighter future 要求： （1）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 （2）词数：80~100个。 （3）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to get on well with parents In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 5．（23-24九年级上·天津北辰·期中）英语课上，老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论，请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 (1) 要尊重他人，学会理解他人； (2)要诚实，要礼貌待人； (3)当他人处于困境时，要主动帮助； (4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉； (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：尊重respect 要求： (1)词数： 80～100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 How to get on well with others As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题3 个人情况 Passage 1 6．（2025·天津·中考真题）请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Special Experience of Li Hua”为题，为校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。 （1）去年暑假，李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。 （2）李华为孩子们讲解科学知识，让他们对科学更感兴趣。 （3）当孩子们提出问题时，李华认真解答。 （4）李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：天津科学技术馆Tianjin Science and Technology Museum  小讲解员little guide 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Special Experience of Li Hua Last summer holiday, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 7．（24-25九年级上·天津河北·期末）假如你是李华，本期你校校园网站以“A Meaningful Photo”为主题开展网络英文征稿活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文进行投稿，讲述一张有意义的照片。 (1) 照片中，妈妈看着你在游泳池中练习游泳。 (2) 那时你八岁，照片由爸爸在体育中心拍摄。 (3) 你六岁时开始练习游泳，一开始学习游泳很难。 (4) 你想过放弃，父母鼓励你坚持练习。 (5) 你开始喜欢游泳，三年后在比赛中获得冠军。 (6) 你认为这张照片…… 参考词汇：游泳池 pool 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Meaningful Photo I have a meaningful photo to share with you. In the photo, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题4 日常活动 Passage 1 8．（24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 9．（23-24九年级上·天津南开·期中）假设你是李平，要在本周班会课上发言，主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。 安全 在家和外出要锁好房门用火和用电时注意安全 饮食 学习做简单的饭菜 多喝水，吃新鲜的蔬菜水果 时间管理 按时起床，上学不迟到放学回家后先完成作业 其他 ……(补充一点) 参考词汇：electricity 电 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题5 家庭朋友 Passage 1 10．（24-25九年级上·天津和平·期中）节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 11．（23-24九年级上·天津滨海新·期末）当前，我国已经进入了老龄化社会，尊敬老人，是中华民族的传统美德，关爱老人应该从我们身边的小事做起。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文。（1）李奶奶是一位独居老人，她很善良，深受邻居尊重； （2）上周六，李奶奶生病住院了，没有人照顾； （3）李津和社区志愿者买了鲜花和水果去医院看望老人； （4）他们帮助老人洗衣服，和老人聊天； （5）李奶奶很开心，感觉好多了； （6）你认为…… 参考词汇：社区志愿者community volunteer    和……聊天chat with 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Grandma Li is an old woman, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 12．（23-24九年级上·天津和平·期中）每个时代都有自己的偶像，青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄杨利伟，奥运冠军苏炳添，抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实，只要用心观察，平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长，指引我们前行，给予我们力量。 请根据以下提示，以“My hero”为题，讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。 (1)偶像：妈妈   年龄：40多岁   职业： 医生   爱好：读书 (2) 生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议； (3)经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人； (4)两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院； (5) 我认为……。 写作要求： (1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。) My hero My hero is my mother and ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题6 旅游 Passage 1 13．（24-25九年级上·第一次月考练习）董宇辉曾说我们低估了四川，低估了它隐藏在熊猫、火锅、麻将之下的魅力，云海之上的峨眉金顶，冠绝蜀地的贡嘎雪山……四川在48.6万平方公里间，为我们埋藏点点惊喜。假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Maria正在收集有关中国著名景点的素材，刚好国庆假期你去了四川峨眉山（Mount Emei），请给她写一封信介绍有关信息。 提示： 1. 位于四川西南部； 2. 每年前来参观的游客络绎不绝； 3. 是中国四大佛教名山（the Four Sacred Buddhist Mountains）之一； 4. 以自然美景和历史文化而闻名； 5. 有郁郁葱葱的森林，多样化的野生动物和古老的寺庙（temple）…… 要求： 1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含上述全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称； 3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。 Dear Maria, How’s it going? You know, I went to Mount Emei during the National Holiday. I’d like to share it with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 14．（22-23九年级上·天津红桥·阶段练习）假设某报社正在征集介绍天津的稿件。根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。 春季 第五大道the Five Major Avenues 街道漫步；赏花拍照。 夏季 水上公园Water Park 体验水上运动，如划皮划艇。 秋季 蓟州Ji Zhou 爬长城；看红叶。 冬季 天塔Tianjin TV Tower 在天塔湖滑冰；在空中餐厅享用美食。 补充 介绍一个你喜欢的地方并说说理由或在这个地方可以做什么。 注意：不要重复表格中已出现的地方。 参考词汇：go kayaking划皮划艇 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Tianjin is my home town. Visitors come here every year. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 15．（22-23九年级上·天津河东·期末）假设你是李华，十一假期你邀请来自英国的朋友Tom一起参观故宫，故宫博物院是中国最大的博物馆。它成立于1925年，是世界上著名的旅游地之一，它有各种各样的收藏。每天有成千上万的人来参观。故宫博物院禁止吸烟和携带宠物，通常星期一不开放，日常参观时间8: 30-17: 30。你为Tom拍摄了很多照片，你们玩得非常开心，Tom期待下次的中国之旅。你的感受……(至少1条) The Palace Museum Opening hours:                      Please note: 8: 30—17: 30  Tuesday—Sunday      No smoking. Charge(票价) :                      No pets. ￥60                               No littering. What is in:                          No shouting. All kinds of different palaces            No food. Lots of collections(收藏) 要求：请根据以上提示写一篇文章，表述准确，次序合理，80词左右。 I invited Tom to visit the Palace Museum during the National holiday. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $专题 书面表达专项训练 话题1 环境 话题4 日常活动 话题2 人际交往 话题5 家庭朋友 话题3 个人情况 话题6 旅游 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 话题1 环境 Passage 1 1．（24-25九年级上·天津河西·期末）为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，学校开展了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。 注意：（1）词数80-100； （2）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 主题 绿色城市，健康生活 做法 骑车出行，减少空气污染； 垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁； 多种树木，保护自然环境。 你的观点 ……（至少2条） The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment. In my opinion, I will try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone should play a part in protecting the environment. I hope our city will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题：说明建设绿色城市的重要性及必要性； 第二步，描述做法：骑车出行减少污染；垃圾入箱保持整洁；多种树木保护环境； 第三步，个人观点：附加2条以上建议，如节约用水，使用节能电器等。 [亮点词汇] ①had better do最好做某事 ②turn off关闭 [高分句型] ①I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope our city will become better and better.（宾语从句） Passage 2 2．（23-24九年级上·天津河西·期末）假如你班要开展一次以“环境保护”为主题的英语班会，请你以班长的身份准备一份发言稿，倡导大家作为一名中学生，从身边小事做起，在日常生活中注意环境保护。 要点提示： （1）绿色上学：尽量以步代车或骑自行车。 （2）杜绝浪费：节约用水、电等。 （3）减少垃圾：应该尽量使用水杯、饭盒等。 （4）爱护花草树木，积极参加绿化植树活动。 （5）你的做法（至少写一条） 要求： （1）词数：80~100个； （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to protect our environment The environmental problem is attracting more and more attention. As students, we can do a lot to protect our environment. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to protect our environment The environmental problem is attracting more and more attention. As students, we can do a lot to protect our environment. We should walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a taxi or driving a car, because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution. We’d better not waste water or electricity. We can turn off the lights in time when we leave the classroom. It’s also a good idea to use reusable cups and lunch boxes at school so that we can reduce waste. Besides, we should care for flowers and trees and take part in tree planting activities. What’s more, we can use both sides of the paper. We can’t throw away rubbish here and there. It’s our duty to protect the environment. I believe that if everyone does a little, the world will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，日常生活中保护环境的做法及自己的做法； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①attracting more and more attention吸引越来越多的关注 ②instead of而不是 ③turn off关掉 [高分句型] I believe that if everyone does a little, the world will become better and better.(that引导宾语从句；if 引导条件状语从句) Passage 3 3．（23-24九年级上·天津西青·期末）作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该怎样做，才能保护我们的环境呢？请你根据下面的要点提示，以“How to Protect Our Environment”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括以下几点： 1. 禁止乱扔垃圾，扔前进行垃圾分类； 2. 尽量步行或骑自行车出行，而不是乘车； 3. 购物时，带着我们自己的袋子，不使用塑料袋； 4. 不过多点餐，减少浪费； 5. 随手关灯，节约能源。 参考词汇：塑料的 plastic 点餐 order food (1) 不得使用真实的姓名和校名。 (2) 短文包含以上所有信息，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3) 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4) 词数不少于80 词。 (短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) How to Protect Our Environment As a student, what can we do to protect our environment? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe if everyone takes these simply steps, our world will become better and better. 【答案】例文 How to Protect Our Environment As a student, what can we do to protect our environment? First of all, we mustn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. It is harmful for our environment. Let’s divide the rubbish into different kinds before throwing. If possible, try to walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car when you go out, because cars make a lot of pollution. What’s more, we’d better take our own bag when shopping and not use plastic bag. In addition, don’t order more food than we can finish so that we can reduce the waste. At last, we should turn off the lights when we leave the room in order to save the energy. I believe if everyone takes these simple steps, our world will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出作为学生我们应该如何保护环境； 第二步，具体阐述我们保护环境应该采取的行动； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②throw away rubbish everywhere到处扔垃圾 ③instead of代替 ④What’s more而且 [高分句型] ①don’t order more food than we can finish so that we can reduce the waste. (so that引导目的状语从句) ②we should turn off the lights when we leave the room in order to save the energy. (when引导时间状语从句) 话题2 人际交往 Passage 1 4．（23-24九年级上·天津西青·期中）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to get on well with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。 （1）父母规矩太多，不允许自己晚上和朋友出去……。 （2）父母过于关注分数，给自己太多压力，不理解自己。 （3）你应该尽力理解父母，他们是爱孩子的，希望孩子前程似锦。 （4）为了与父母保持良好关系，你应该努力学习，与父母多交流。 （5）……（至少一条）。 参考词汇：过多关注 pay too much attention to    压力 pressure    前程似锦 have a brighter future 要求： （1）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 （2）词数：80~100个。 （3）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to get on well with parents In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to get on well with parents In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my marks and give me too much pressure. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. However, I try my best to understand them. Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future. In order to get on well with my parents, I study hard and try to talk with them more. I think the most important thing for children is caring about their parents. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍父母对待我的态度； 第二步，介绍我对待父母的态度； 第三步，介绍应该怎么做。 [亮点词汇] ①go out 外出 ②pay too much attention to过于关注 ③too much pressure压力太大 ④have a brighter future前程似锦 ⑤get on well with与……相处融洽 [高分句型] ①I think my parents don’t quite understand me.（宾语从句） ②Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.（because引导的原因状语从句） ③I think the most important thing for children is caring about their parents.（宾语从句） Passage 2 5．（23-24九年级上·天津北辰·期中）英语课上，老师要求学生就“如何与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论，请你根据以下你们小组讨论的结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。 (1) 要尊重他人，学会理解他人； (2)要诚实，要礼貌待人； (3)当他人处于困境时，要主动帮助； (4)当你犯错误时要主动道歉； (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：尊重respect 要求： (1)词数： 80～100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 How to get on well with others As we know, good relationship (关系) can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to get on well with others As we know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? First, we should respect others and try to understand them. Everyone has their own ideas and feelings, so we need to be considerate. Second, honesty is very important. We should always be honest and treat others politely. Third, we should offer to help others when they are in trouble. Helping others can not only make them feel good, but also make us feel happy. Fourth, when we make mistakes, we should take the initiative to apologize. This shows that we are responsible and can earn the trust of others. In addition, I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others. We should learn to listen to others and try to see things from their perspective. Also, we should be willing to compromise and find solutions that are beneficial to everyone. In a word, getting on well with others requires our efforts and sincerity. Only by treating others with kindness and respect can we build good relationships and live a happy life. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点要明确，需要按照题目要求，围绕“如何与人相处”展开论述，包括尊重他人、理解他人、诚实礼貌、帮助他人、主动道歉等方面，并适当添加自己的观点，不要遗漏相关内容。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明良好的人际关系能让人快乐舒适，进而引出如何与人相处的话题。 第二步，具体阐述与人相处的方法，如尊重他人、诚实礼貌、帮助有困难的人、犯错误时主动道歉等。 第三步，书写结语，总结与人相处需要努力和真诚，只有善待他人才能建立良好关系，过上幸福生活。 ［亮点词汇］ ①offer to help 主动帮助 ②take the initiative 主动 ③in a word 总之 ［高分句型］ ①We should offer to help others when they are in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I think that being patient and understanding is key to getting along with others.（that引导的宾语从句） 话题3 个人情况 Passage 1 6．（2025·天津·中考真题）请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Special Experience of Li Hua”为题，为校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。 （1）去年暑假，李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。 （2）李华为孩子们讲解科学知识，让他们对科学更感兴趣。 （3）当孩子们提出问题时，李华认真解答。 （4）李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：天津科学技术馆Tianjin Science and Technology Museum  小讲解员little guide 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Special Experience of Li Hua Last summer holiday, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Special Experience of Li Hua Last summer holiday, Li Hua had a special experience as a little guide at Tianjin Science and Technology Museum. First of all, he explained science knowledge to children in simple English, making them become more interested in science. Also, when children asked questions, he answered them patiently with a smile. He even reminded everyone to watch their step and stay safe while visiting. I think Li Hua really did a great job. This experience not only helped others but also made him more confident. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍这次经历； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①answer them patiently 耐心回答它们 ②remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事 ③stay safe 保证安全 [高分句型] ①Also, when children asked questions, he answered them patiently with a smile.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②This experience not only helped others but also made him more confident.（not only...but also...并列结构） Passage 2 7．（24-25九年级上·天津河北·期末）假如你是李华，本期你校校园网站以“A Meaningful Photo”为主题开展网络英文征稿活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文进行投稿，讲述一张有意义的照片。 (1) 照片中，妈妈看着你在游泳池中练习游泳。 (2) 那时你八岁，照片由爸爸在体育中心拍摄。 (3) 你六岁时开始练习游泳，一开始学习游泳很难。 (4) 你想过放弃，父母鼓励你坚持练习。 (5) 你开始喜欢游泳，三年后在比赛中获得冠军。 (6) 你认为这张照片…… 参考词汇：游泳池 pool 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Meaningful Photo I have a meaningful photo to share with you. In the photo, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Meaningful Photo I have a meaningful photo to share with you. In the photo, my mother is watching me practice swimming in the pool. I was eight years old then. It was taken by my father at the sports center. I started to practice swimming when I was six. At first, it was really difficult for me to learn to swim. I even thought about giving up, but my parents encouraged me to keep practicing. Gradually, I began to like swimming and three years later, I won the champion in a competition. I think this photo records an important moment in my growth and it always reminds me of the value of perseverance. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍照片内容和这张照片背后的故事； 第二步，介绍这张照片的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①at first最初 ②give up放弃 ③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ④remind sb of sth让某人想起某事 [高分句型] ①I started to practice swimming when I was six.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I think this photo records an important moment in my growth and it always reminds me of the value of perseverance.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） 话题4 日常活动 Passage 1 8．（24-25九年级上·天津·期中）假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last Saturday evening, I was doing my homework in my room. I used my phone to search for some English words. When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry. I explained to her what I was doing. She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well. I think she is right and I will follow her advice in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。点明事情发生的时间。（开头已给出） 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，结合参考词汇，描述事情发生的经过。 第三步，书写结语。表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在做某事 ② come in 进来 ③ get angry 生气 ④ in the future 将来 [高分句型] ① When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry.（when引导时间状语从句） ② She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well.（that引导宾语从句） Passage 2 9．（23-24九年级上·天津南开·期中）假设你是李平，要在本周班会课上发言，主题为“独自在家注意事项”。根据下面表格的内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。 安全 在家和外出要锁好房门用火和用电时注意安全 饮食 学习做简单的饭菜 多喝水，吃新鲜的蔬菜水果 时间管理 按时起床，上学不迟到放学回家后先完成作业 其他 ……(补充一点) 参考词汇：electricity 电 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear classmates, When we are home alone, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear classmates，      When we are home alone, we need to pay attention to many things.      First of all, we should pay attention to the safety. Don’t forget to lock the door when we go out. Pay attention to safety when using fire and electricity. Second, we also need to learn how to cook simple meals. We need to drink more water and eat fresh vegetables and fruit. Last but not least, we need to get up on time and can’t be late for school. After school, we need to finish our homework first. What’s more, when a stranger knocks at the door, we cannot open it. We need to know how to call the police.     In a word, we should keep ourselves healthy and safe when we are alone at home. 【详解】［总体分析］ ① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ② 时态：用一般现在时； ③ 提示：阐述独自在家时的注意事项，需要遵照所给要求，要点涵盖全面，适当补充细节。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，概括独自在家时的整体原则，为文章确定基调； 第二步，分条陈述需要注意的具体事项，要注意理由充分合理，价值观正确； 第三步，总结观点，得出结论。 ［亮点调汇］ ①pay attention to 注意 ②last but not least 最后但并不是最不重要的 ③in a word 总而言之 ［高分句型］ ①When we are home alone, we need to pay attention to many things.（时间状语从句） ②Don’t forget to lock the door when we go out.（祈使句） 话题5 家庭朋友 Passage 1 10．（24-25九年级上·天津和平·期中）节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Zhang Jian is a policeman. He is 50 years old and he likes reading very much. We all respect him because he has dedicated over half of his life to serving and protecting others as a police officer.     For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays. Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman. On one occasion, he had to work for 20 hours without break.       I think that Officer Zhang Jian is a shining example in our everyday lives. His actions remind us of the importance of serving others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：介绍一位我们身边的榜样，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍张健的职业，年龄，爱好，引出下文； 第二步，具体描述张健警官在假日的生活和工作，注意遵照所给提示，细节充分，三观正确； 第三步，表达自己对于张健警官的感情，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①dedicate 奉献 ②on one occasion 有一次 ③remind…of… 让某人想起某事 [高分句型] ①For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays.（原因状语从句） ②Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman.（让步状语从句） Passage 2 11．（23-24九年级上·天津滨海新·期末）当前，我国已经进入了老龄化社会，尊敬老人，是中华民族的传统美德，关爱老人应该从我们身边的小事做起。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文。（1）李奶奶是一位独居老人，她很善良，深受邻居尊重； （2）上周六，李奶奶生病住院了，没有人照顾； （3）李津和社区志愿者买了鲜花和水果去医院看望老人； （4）他们帮助老人洗衣服，和老人聊天； （5）李奶奶很开心，感觉好多了； （6）你认为…… 参考词汇：社区志愿者community volunteer    和……聊天chat with 要求： （1）词数：80~100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Grandma Li is an old woman, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone. She is kind to others, so she is greatly respected by neighbors. Last Saturday, Grandma Li was ill in hospital. There was no one around taking care of her. So Li Jin and community volunteers went to the hospital to visit her with some flowers and fruit. In the hospital, some helped the old woman wash clothes, the others chatted with her. Grandma Li was very happy and felt much better. From my point of view, if everyone gives a hand to someone who is in trouble, the world will be more beautiful and nicer. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍李奶奶是一位独居老人，她很善良，深受邻居尊重； 第二步，具体阐述要点提示内容。重点写上周六，李奶奶生病住院了，没有人照顾；李津和社区志愿者买了鲜花和水果去医院看望老人；他们帮助老人洗衣服，和老人聊天；李奶奶很开心，感觉好多了； 第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己对老龄化现象的见解。 [亮点词汇] ①be ill生病的 ②take care of照顾 ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ④chat with sb与某人聊天 ⑤From my point of view就我而言 ⑥give a hand to sb帮助某人 ⑦be in trouble处于困境中 [高分句型] ①Grandma Li is an old woman, who lives alone.(who引导的定语从句) ②There was no one around taking care of her.(there be句型) ③From my point of view, if everyone gives a hand to someone who is in trouble, the world will be more beautiful and nicer.(if引导的条件状语从句和who引导的定语从句) Passage 3 12．（23-24九年级上·天津和平·期中）每个时代都有自己的偶像，青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄杨利伟，奥运冠军苏炳添，抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实，只要用心观察，平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长，指引我们前行，给予我们力量。 请根据以下提示，以“My hero”为题，讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。 (1)偶像：妈妈   年龄：40多岁   职业： 医生   爱好：读书 (2) 生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议； (3)经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人； (4)两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院； (5) 我认为……。 写作要求： (1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。) My hero My hero is my mother and ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My hero My hero is my mother and she is forty years old. She is a doctor and enjoys reading. My mother takes care of me in life and gives me some advice whenever I meet difficulties. She often spends a lot of time working to help more people. Two years ago, she volunteered in poor areas, trained young doctors, and helped found hospitals. I believe that my mother is great. When I grow up, I also want to become someone like my mother and make contributions to the country and people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头提示，介绍妈妈的年龄、职业和爱好； 第二步，介绍妈妈在生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议； 第三步，介绍妈妈经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人； 第四步，介绍两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院； 第五步，发表观点。 [亮点词汇] ①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②take care of 关心 ③grow up长大 ④make contributions to为……作出贡献   [高分句型] ①My mother takes care of me in life and gives me some advice whenever I meet difficulties.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②She often spends a lot of time working to help more people.（spend time／money (in) doing sth. 花费时间(金钱)做某事） ③I believe that my mother is great.（that引导的宾语从句） ④When I grow up, I also want to become someone like my mother and make contributions to the country and people.（when引导的时间状语从句） 话题6 旅游 Passage 1 13．（24-25九年级上·第一次月考练习）董宇辉曾说我们低估了四川，低估了它隐藏在熊猫、火锅、麻将之下的魅力，云海之上的峨眉金顶，冠绝蜀地的贡嘎雪山……四川在48.6万平方公里间，为我们埋藏点点惊喜。假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Maria正在收集有关中国著名景点的素材，刚好国庆假期你去了四川峨眉山（Mount Emei），请给她写一封信介绍有关信息。 提示： 1. 位于四川西南部； 2. 每年前来参观的游客络绎不绝； 3. 是中国四大佛教名山（the Four Sacred Buddhist Mountains）之一； 4. 以自然美景和历史文化而闻名； 5. 有郁郁葱葱的森林，多样化的野生动物和古老的寺庙（temple）…… 要求： 1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含上述全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称； 3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。 Dear Maria, How’s it going? You know, I went to Mount Emei during the National Holiday. I’d like to share it with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Maria, How’s it going? You know, I went to Mount Emei during the National Holiday. I’d like to share it with you. Mount Emei is located in the southwest of Sichuan Province. Because Mount Emei is one of the Four Sacred Buddhist Mountains in China, many tourists come here to travel every year. Mount Emei is famous for its natural beauty and historical culture. There are thick forests, kinds of wildlife and lots of ancient temples here. I like the monkeys on Mount Emei the most because they are lively and cute. If you have a chance to come to China, please make sure to visit Mount Emei. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“峨眉山的概况，景物以及出名的原因”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“近况如何？你知道吗，国庆节期间我去了峨眉山。我想和你分享一下。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“峨眉山概况，景物以及出名原因”重点介绍峨眉山； 第三步，书写结语。表达“如果你有机会来中国，一定要去峨眉山。” [亮点词汇] ① be located in位于 ② be famous for因……而出名 [高分句型] ① Because Mount Emei is one of the Four Sacred Buddhist Mountains in China, many tourists come here to travel every year. (because引导的原因状语从句) ② If you have a chance to come to China, please make sure to visit Mount Emei. (if引导的条件状语从句) Passage 2 14．（22-23九年级上·天津红桥·阶段练习）假设某报社正在征集介绍天津的稿件。根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。 春季 第五大道the Five Major Avenues 街道漫步；赏花拍照。 夏季 水上公园Water Park 体验水上运动，如划皮划艇。 秋季 蓟州Ji Zhou 爬长城；看红叶。 冬季 天塔Tianjin TV Tower 在天塔湖滑冰；在空中餐厅享用美食。 补充 介绍一个你喜欢的地方并说说理由或在这个地方可以做什么。 注意：不要重复表格中已出现的地方。 参考词汇：go kayaking划皮划艇 要求： (1) 词数：80—100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Tianjin is my home town. Visitors come here every year. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Tianjin is my home town. Visitors come here every year. They can do lots of things here. In spring you can enjoy flowers, take photos and walk along the streets at the Five Major Avenues. When summer comes, you can go to Water Park to experience water sports, such as going kayaking. As for the autumn, you can see red leaves. If you like, you can enjoy them when you visit the Great Wall in Ji Zhou. It is cold in winter. But you can also do outdoor activities. Many people skate on the lake of Tianjin TV Tower. At same time, you can enjoy a meal in the sky restaurant. For me, I like the Culture Street most because I can experience the tradition and culture of Tianjin. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是说明文，是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，介绍天津是自己的家乡，并说出每年有许多游客来； ②第二步，根据表格介绍一年四季可以去的地方和做的活动； ③第三部，说说自己最喜欢的地方以及理由。 [亮点词汇] ①walk along沿着……走 ②water sports水上运动 ③as for至于 ④do outdoor activities做户外活动 ⑤sky restaurant天空餐厅 [高分句型] ①When summer comes, you can go to Water Park to experience water sports, such as going kayaking. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If you like, you can enjoy them when you visit the Great Wall in Ji Zhou. (if引导的条件状语从句) ③I like the Culture Street most because I can experience the tradition and culture of Tianjin. (because引导的原因状语从句) Passage 3 15．（22-23九年级上·天津河东·期末）假设你是李华，十一假期你邀请来自英国的朋友Tom一起参观故宫，故宫博物院是中国最大的博物馆。它成立于1925年，是世界上著名的旅游地之一，它有各种各样的收藏。每天有成千上万的人来参观。故宫博物院禁止吸烟和携带宠物，通常星期一不开放，日常参观时间8: 30-17: 30。你为Tom拍摄了很多照片，你们玩得非常开心，Tom期待下次的中国之旅。你的感受……(至少1条) The Palace Museum Opening hours:                      Please note: 8: 30—17: 30  Tuesday—Sunday      No smoking. Charge(票价) :                      No pets. ￥60                               No littering. What is in:                          No shouting. All kinds of different palaces            No food. Lots of collections(收藏) 要求：请根据以上提示写一篇文章，表述准确，次序合理，80词左右。 I invited Tom to visit the Palace Museum during the National holiday. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I invited Tom to visit the Palace Museum during the National holiday. The Palace Museum is the biggest museum in China. It was founded in 1925. It was also one of the most famous places of interest in the world. It has lots of collections and all kinds of different palaces. Thousands of visitors come to visit it every year. There are some rules that you should remember. For example, no smoking, no pets, no littering, no shouting and no food. It is usually closed on Monday. The opening hours are from 8:30 am to 5:30 pm. The price of ticket is 60 yuan. We took a lot of photos and we had a good time. We were tired but happy. Tom hopes he can come again one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍故宫的情况； 第二步，介绍故宫的规则； 第三步，介绍旅行中做的事情以及感受。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②for example例如 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①It was also one of the most famous places of interest in the world.（“one of the+形容词最高级+复数名词”的结构） ②There are some rules that you should remember.（there be句型） $