专题08 书面表达（期中真题汇编，河南专用）八年级英语上学期

专题08 书面表达 题材01 个人观点 （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州第三十九中学·期中） 随着“双减”政策的出台，同学们可以支配的课余时间越来越多。放学后除了写作业，你是如何安排自己的课余生活的呢？你会参加体育活动吗？你会看电视吗？你最喜欢的电视节目是什么呢？请以“After School”为题，介绍一下自己的课余生活。 After School _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市西峡县·期中） 青年是社会的中坚力量，肩负着祖国的未来，然而在当今快节奏的生活中，出现了一些因忙碌而缺乏锻炼、爱吃快餐和垃圾食品、习惯熬夜的“脆皮青年”。请你根据下面的表格内容以“Enjoy Healthy Living”为题，给他们提一些建议，让他们拥有更健康的生活。 Enjoy Healthy Living Sports habits Eating habits Sleeping habits …… run, play ping-pong... fast food, fruit and vegetables... stay up, get up early... …… 写作要求：1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3) 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Enjoy Healthy Living Youth (青年) is the future of our country. But today some of them have unhealthy living habits. To make them healthier, here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市淅川县·期中） 2024年巴黎奥运会给人们留下了许多难忘的瞬间，潘展乐、郑钦文、全红婵等优秀运动员也令人印象深刻。假如现在你有机会参加奥运会，你会选择哪项运动？请根据要点和要求写一篇短文。 要点： 1.你选择参加哪项运动？ 2.你为什么选择这项运动？ 3.你计划做些什么使自己成为更好的运动员？ 要求： 1.文章需包含上述要点信息，并适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 3.字数100左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市新野县·期中） 运动有益健康， 但是不好的运动习惯可能会导致身体损伤。我们该如何在运动时确保安全呢? 请你根据以下要点,以“Stay Safe while Doing Sports”为题写一篇英语短文，就这个话题谈谈你的看法。词数100左右。 要点： 1. 引出话题， 交代背景； 2. 你的建议； 3. 号召或祝愿。 Stay Safe while Doing Sports ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （24-25八年级上·河南省郑州实验外国语学校·期中） 升入初中以来，你在学业或生活上有过困难的时刻吗？你是怎么做到不言弃，克服困难取得进步的呢？请以“I didn’t give up”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1.你遇到的困难是什么； 2.你怎么克服困难的； 3.你有什么样的感受。 要求： 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数不少于80词。 I didn’t give up ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省商丘市·期中） 在生活中，你参加过或即将参加许多活动或组织，如体育比赛，读书俱乐部，健康讲座，志愿者活动等，请以“I’m a Member (成员) of ________”为题，写一篇英语短文。 1.要点： 1)你学到或将学到什么样的知识或道理； 2)你在这些活动或组织的感受或将要感受是什么； 3)它对你的学习或生活有什么启发和帮助? 2.要求： 1)补充题目； 2)文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3)词数90词左右。 I’m a Member of ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题材02 建议信 （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市·期中） 假如你是李华，你的朋友 Mike近期得了流感并发烧。请你给他写封邮件，告诉他一些应对流感的小妙招，并向他说明保持健康的重要性。 写作要求： 1)文中必须包含题目要求的内容，可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3) 词数100左右。 Dear Mike, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua （22-23八年级上·河南省郑州市经济技术开发区·期中） 为了配合教育部年度中小学视力监测工作，提升学生健康素养，学校将举办一场“Sight Day（爱眼日）”英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图文提示写一篇演讲稿，针对如何保护视力给出你的建议并倡导同学们一起来保护眼睛。 参考词汇：read in bed 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear friends, As we all know, eyes are very important to us. I would like to share my ideas about how to take care of our eyes. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your attention! （22-23八年级上·河南省濮阳市·期中） 俗话说：病从口入。很多同学平时不注意饮食卫生和习惯，结果生病了。我们应该如何做才能保持身体健康呢？请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示：1）饭前洗手；2）少喝冷饮；3)不吃变质的食物，如坏的牛奶；4）多做运动，一周至少两次；5）多吃蔬菜和水果；6）多喝水；7）有病立刻去就医。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题材03 演讲稿 （23-24八年级上·河南省周口市郸城县·期中） 中学生的行为习惯直接影响着自身的健康成长。下周的英语课上，老师打算让同学们介绍自己的行为习惯。请根据下表提示，准备一篇英语发言稿。 好习惯 坏习惯 1. 每天早起； 2. 一周锻炼三或四次； …… 1. 经常看电视时间太长； 2. 常吃垃圾食品； …… 要求： 1. 短文必须包含表格提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译）； 2. 词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名，校名和地名。   Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! （24-25八年级上·河南省郑州市第四初级中学·期中） 凡事预则立，不预则废。为了激励大家在新学期合理规划自己的学习和生活，你校英文广播站正在开展征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文谈谈你新学期的计划和打算，参加此次活动。 ......方面的计划 如何做 学习 ...... 个人提高 ...... 读书 ...... 要求： 1. 短文应包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语句通顺、连贯； 3. 词数不少于90，短文开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. As we all know, an hour of planning can save you 10 hours of doing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening! （24-25八年级上·河南省周口市沈丘县中英文学校·期中） 健康一直是全民关注的问题。我校英语俱乐部拟举办以“Be a Healthy Student”为题的演讲。假如你是李明，请根据以下提示，从身心健康两方面写一篇英语演讲稿。 要求： 1. 包括全部提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 3. 词数100 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Be a Healthy Student Hello, everyone. It’s a great honor to give a speech here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening. （23-24八年级上·河南省商丘市虞城县·期中） 你班被评为“体育活动先进班级”。假如你是班长 (monitor)，受学校广播“英语之声”栏目的邀请，介绍你班学生开展体育活动的情况，请你根据下面的要点和要求写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点： 1. 你班同学重视体育锻炼； 2. 你班的锻炼情况； 3. 你对未来的展望。 要求： 1. 可适当增加细节以使行文流畅； 2. 词数100左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题材04 人物介绍 （23-24八年级上·河南省驻马店市遂平县·期中） 请根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍一下你和你的好朋友琳达的相同和不同之处。 相同点 不同点 Linda （1）喜欢运动； （2）各门功课都学得好； （3）喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆。 （1）比我高，比我瘦； （2）喜欢看电视脱口秀节目； （3）每天锻炼。 I （1）比她更外向； （2）喜欢看电视； （3）每周锻炼三次。 要求： （1）条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范整洁，100词左右； （2）文中不要出现真实校名和姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州市管城外国语学校·期中） 假设你叫Jenny，以“My Friend”为题，请你根据下面提供的有关参考信息，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，介绍一下你的朋友Maria的日常活动情况。 写作要点： 1. 外貌性格：Maria跟我个子一样高，但是她比我聪明外向，她学习更努力； 2. 生活习惯：她很健康，每天坚持锻炼；一周吃4—5次蔬菜；从不吃垃圾食品； 3. 兴趣爱好和一些经历：喜欢旅游，爬山……去年夏天，去了北京，游览了天安门广场等。 写作要求： 1. 短文内容必须包含所提供信息点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。 My Friend _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省鹤壁市部分学校联考·期中） 假设你是李萍，最近收到英国笔友Linda的电子邮件，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。 To: LiPing@mail.com Subject: Friend Hi Li Ping, How is everything going? You told me your best friend Lily in the last e-mail. I’m really interested in her. Please tell me something more about her! How old is she? What does she look like? What kind of person is she and what happened between her and you? Hope to hear from you soon. Love, Linda Dear Linda, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping （23-24八年级上·河南省洛阳市·期中） 杭州 2022 年第 19 届亚运会(The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022)简称“杭州2022 年亚运会”于2023年9月23日至10月8日在中国浙江杭州举行。假如你是李明，你想成为杭州亚运会的志愿者。请根据以下内容提示，用英语给组委会写一封自荐信。内容包括： 1.个人信息；2.你自身的优势；3.你为此所要做的准备； 要求： (1)开头已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实的人名、校名； (2)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； (3)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； (4)词数80 词左右。 Dear Sir/Madam, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming （23-24八年级上·河南省平顶山市汝州市·期中） 每个人都有自己最喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么呢？请以 My Favorite Sport 为题，写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的运动。80 个词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 要点： 1. What’s your favorite sport? 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you do it? 要求: 1. 短文不少于80个词。 2. 短文应包含上述三项要点。 3. 语句通顺、条理清楚、意思连贯、标点正确、书写清晰、规范。 4. 请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 My Favorite Sport I like sports very much, such as running, skating ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （22-23八年级上·河南省开封市第十三中学·期中） 要求：你未来要从事什么工作呢？请以I’m going to be a (an) ________为题，将题目补充完整，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你未来想从事的工作。字数80左右。 提示：1.What are you going to be? 2.Why? 3.How are you going to do? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （22-23八年级上·河南省郑州外国语学校·期中） 假如你是李明，你的笔友Mike想了解一下你所在社区的情况，请你根据下面的情况，给他回一封电子邮件，向他简单介绍一下你所在社区的情况。 提示： 1. 社区(neighborhood)环境优美； 2. 世纪公园(Century Park)是社区最大的公园； 3. 思达超市(Star Supermarket)是社区最受欢迎的超市，那里的东西又好又便宜； 4. 社区最新的电影院是(Century Cinema)，有最大的银幕、最好的音效和最舒服的座位。 要求：词数不少于80，可适当发挥。邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, You want to know something about my neighborhood. Now let me tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 题材01 个人观点 （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州市中原区九校共同体·期中） “我运动，我健康，我快乐。”随着阳光体育运动的开展，校园里也出现了可喜的变化。请你结合如图的图示信息，以“Sports in our school”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述校园体育运动的情况。 写作要求： 1.文中必须包括上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 Sports in our school ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省三门峡市灵宝市·期中） 所谓青春，就是在每个明天，都要比今天前进一步。正值青春年少的我们，怎样才能成就更好的自己呢？请以“How to be better?”为题写一篇英语短文，从运动、饮食、学习等生活习惯谈一下自己的计划和打算。 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 4. 词数100左右。 How to be better? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （22-23八年级上·河南省驻马店市汝南县·期中） 良好的生活习惯，对于保持健康来说是很重要的，比如：按时吃饭、多吃蔬果、多参加户外运动、多与同学交往、不熬夜等等好习惯，对强健体魄都是非常必要的。请以Good Living Habits Make Me Healthy 为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的做法和看法。 1.要点：①健康的作息习惯； ②多做运动； ③健康的饮食习惯。 2.要求：①文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； ②词数100左右。 Good Living Habits Make Me Healthy ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题材02 人物介绍 （22-23八年级上·河南省洛阳市汝阳县·期中） 我们都有生病去医院看医生的经历。请以“My Experience of Seeing a Doctor”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你最近一次去医院就诊的经历。 1. 要点： 1)你是什么时候、因为什么病去的医院； 2) 医生是如何给你诊断的，结果是什么； 3)你是如何康复的。 2.要求： 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2)词数100左右。 My Experience of Seeing a Doctor ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省南阳市南召县·期中） 为了呼吁大家重视健康的生活方式，某英文杂志社开辟了“我身边的健康小达人”专栏，邀请大家介绍自己身边生活习惯良好、热爱体育锻炼的人，请以“A Healthy Person by My Side”为题，写一篇90词左右的文章来投稿。 要点： 1.介绍ta的基本情况； 2.哪些习惯让ta如此健康？ 3.你从ta身上学到了什么？ 要求： 1.文中不得出现真实的个人姓名和学校名称。 2.90词左右。 A Healthy Person by My Side Health is the most important thing in our life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州市第十一初级中学·期中） 旅游可以让人放松身心，增长见识。假如你是李华，暑假期间你外出旅游了。请你根据下面的要点提示用英文写一篇短文，讲述你的暑期之旅，然后在本周的英语角活动中和大家分享。 要点提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel? 要求： 1. 内容完整、层次清晰、表达清楚、书写规范； 2. 不要出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省实验中学·期中） 动画片是我们童年不可或缺的一部分，每个孩子心中都有一个记忆深刻的卡通人物，你最喜欢的卡通人物是谁呢？请以“My Favorite Cartoon Character”为题，并根据要点和要求写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1. 描述这个卡通人物的外貌和性格特点。 2. 写出你喜欢这个卡通人物的理由。 2. 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和班级。 2. 词数100词左右。 My Favorite Cartoon Character ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （23-24八年级上·河南省焦作市武陟县·期中） 很多学生选择在假期旅行。这让学生既放松了心情，又开阔了视野，学到了知识。你对旅行怎么看？你有最难忘的旅行经历吗？请你根据英文提示写一篇短文，要求不少于80词。 提示： （1）What’s your idea about traveling? （2）Tell us one of your traveling experiences. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题08 书面表达 题材01 个人观点 （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州第三十九中学·期中） 随着“双减”政策的出台，同学们可以支配的课余时间越来越多。放学后除了写作业，你是如何安排自己的课余生活的呢？你会参加体育活动吗？你会看电视吗？你最喜欢的电视节目是什么呢？请以“After School”为题，介绍一下自己的课余生活。 After School _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： After School It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. However, students have to think about how to get used to the new policy. Here are my suggestions. First of all, we should finish homework effectively, which means we should pay attention to what we are doing for a long time. Secondly, it’s also a good idea to ask for help whenever we have trouble in our study. For example, we can discuss the problems with our classmates or turn to our teachers after class. Thirdly, we are supposed to take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies to enrich our after-school life. Last but not least, we can make good use of our free time to try something new, such as doing some volunteer work to gain some useful life skills. As far as I am concerned, with the policy successfully carried out, we will enjoy a happier life and grow into a better person. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，引出本文主题；   第二步，分享自己的建议； 第三步，总结概括。   [亮点词汇]   ①get used to习惯 ②ask for help求助   ③take up开始从事 ④make good use of好好利用 [高分句型]   ①First of all, we should finish homework effectively, which means we should pay attention to what we are doing for a long time.（定语从句）   ②Thirdly, we are supposed to take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies to enrich our after-school life.（动词不定式作目的状语） （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市西峡县·期中） 青年是社会的中坚力量，肩负着祖国的未来，然而在当今快节奏的生活中，出现了一些因忙碌而缺乏锻炼、爱吃快餐和垃圾食品、习惯熬夜的“脆皮青年”。请你根据下面的表格内容以“Enjoy Healthy Living”为题，给他们提一些建议，让他们拥有更健康的生活。 Enjoy Healthy Living Sports habits Eating habits Sleeping habits …… run, play ping-pong... fast food, fruit and vegetables... stay up, get up early... …… 写作要求：1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3) 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Enjoy Healthy Living Youth (青年) is the future of our country. But today some of them have unhealthy living habits. To make them healthier, here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Enjoy Healthy Living Youth (青年) is the future of our country. But today some of them have unhealthy living habits. To make them healthier, here are some suggestions. First, they should have good sports habits. Running for thirty minutes every day is good for their hearts and lungs. Playing ping-pong is also a good way to keep fit. What’s more, it’s important for them to have healthy eating habits. Don’t eat too much junk food and fast food. They had better eat more fruit and vegetables every day. Third, it’s necessary that they should have regular sleeping habits. Staying up late is bad for their health, so they must go to bed and get up early. Finally, happiness is important for their health, so try to keep happy all the time. Be happy to be healthy. If they follow the advice, they will live a healthier and happier life and have a bright future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：根据表格提示完成写作内容，不要遗漏要点，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表明给青年提供如何健康生活的建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“运动习惯、饮食习惯、睡觉习惯、感受”几个方面提出建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望青年身体好，拥有美好的未来。 [亮点词汇] ① be good for 对……有好处 ② had better 最好 ③ regular 规律的 [高分句型] ① Running for thirty minutes every day is good for their hearts and lungs.（动名词作主语） ② Third, it’s necessary that they should have regular sleeping habits. （it作形式主语的句型） （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市淅川县·期中） 2024年巴黎奥运会给人们留下了许多难忘的瞬间，潘展乐、郑钦文、全红婵等优秀运动员也令人印象深刻。假如现在你有机会参加奥运会，你会选择哪项运动？请根据要点和要求写一篇短文。 要点： 1.你选择参加哪项运动？ 2.你为什么选择这项运动？ 3.你计划做些什么使自己成为更好的运动员？ 要求： 1.文章需包含上述要点信息，并适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 3.字数100左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 If I have a chance to take part in the Olympics, I will choose basketball. It is one of the most popular sports in the world. It’s also my favorite sport. I often play basketball when I’m free and I’m good at it. Basketball game is very exciting. I can relax myself when I play basketball. To be a better basketball player, I will do exercise every day. It is important to have a healthy body, so I will keep healthy eating habits and living habits to keep fit. I’m going to learn more basketball skills from my teammates. I’m sure I can win if I try my best. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明对篮球的热爱及常打篮球且擅长。 第二步，阐述篮球的魅力，如比赛很激动人心，能让人放松。 第三步，讲述为成为更优秀的篮球运动员将采取的行动，包括每天锻炼、保持健康习惯、向队友学习更多技能，并表示会全力以赴争取胜利。 [亮点词汇] ①popular受欢迎的；流行的 ②favorite最喜欢的 ③exciting令人兴奋的 [高分句型] ①I’m sure I can win if I try my best. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②I can relax myself when I play basketball. (when引导的时间状语从句) （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市新野县·期中） 运动有益健康， 但是不好的运动习惯可能会导致身体损伤。我们该如何在运动时确保安全呢? 请你根据以下要点,以“Stay Safe while Doing Sports”为题写一篇英语短文，就这个话题谈谈你的看法。词数100左右。 要点： 1. 引出话题， 交代背景； 2. 你的建议； 3. 号召或祝愿。 Stay Safe while Doing Sports ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Stay Safe while Doing Sports Doing sports is good for us because it helps us keep fit. But how can we stay safe while doing sports? Here are my suggestions. First, we need to spend a few minutes warming up before doing sports so that we won’t hurt ourselves easily. Second, it’s important for us to wear sports clothes and sports shoes while doing sports. That’s because we’re easy to move in them. Finally, when we’re not feeling well, we should stop doing sports at once and take a rest. I hope we can all stay safe while enjoying sports! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，总的阐述运动的好处，并引出下文“运动时保证安全”的建议； 第二步，详细阐述“如何在运动中保持安全”； 第三步，表达希望，并结束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be good for有益于 ②keep fit保持健康 ③warm up热身 ④at once立即 ⑤take a rest休息一下 [高分句型] ①Doing sports is good for us because it helps us keep fit. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②Finally, when we’re not feeling well, we should stop doing sports at once and take a rest. (when引导的时间状语从句) ③I hope we can all stay safe while enjoying sports!（宾语从句+while时间状语从句） （24-25八年级上·河南省郑州实验外国语学校·期中） 升入初中以来，你在学业或生活上有过困难的时刻吗？你是怎么做到不言弃，克服困难取得进步的呢？请以“I didn’t give up”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1.你遇到的困难是什么； 2.你怎么克服困难的； 3.你有什么样的感受。 要求： 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数不少于80词。 I didn’t give up ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I didn’t give up When I was in Grade 7, my English was poor and I nearly wanted to give it up. Luckily, my parents noticed that and advised me to ask my teacher for help. One afternoon, Miss Liu took me to the playground. She first told me how she solved her problem when she was in trouble. Pointing to the running track, she told me that if I stopped working hard, I would never reach the finish line. I was inspired then. I kept working hard and now my English is among the top ten in my class. I’m thankful to Miss Liu. She let me know the importance of keeping on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏其中的三点内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，介绍自己遇到的困难是什么——英语很差； ②第二步，讲述自己克服困难的经历； ③第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb for help 向某人求助 ②be in trouble 处于困难中 ③keep on 坚持 [高分句型] ①When I was in Grade 7, my English was poor and I nearly wanted to give it up.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Pointing to the running track, she told me that if I stopped working hard, I would never reach the finish line.（that引导的宾语从句+if引导的条件状语从句） （23-24八年级上·河南省商丘市·期中） 在生活中，你参加过或即将参加许多活动或组织，如体育比赛，读书俱乐部，健康讲座，志愿者活动等，请以“I’m a Member (成员) of ________”为题，写一篇英语短文。 1.要点： 1)你学到或将学到什么样的知识或道理； 2)你在这些活动或组织的感受或将要感受是什么； 3)它对你的学习或生活有什么启发和帮助? 2.要求： 1)补充题目； 2)文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 3)词数90词左右。 I’m a Member of ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m a Member of the Book Club Being a member of the book club has opened my mind to a world of knowledge and imagination. I’ve learned to appreciate different perspectives and to discuss topics critically. The club meetings are places where I feel inspired and motivated, surrounded by people who share a love for reading. This experience has not only improved my analytical skills but also encouraged a habit of regular reading. It’s enriched my academic life and broadened my understanding of various cultures and philosophies. Reading books has given me a way to understand great authors and the context of the times in which they lived. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己学到的知识； 第二步，介绍获得的感受； 第三步，介绍获得的启发和帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①a member of……一员 ②learn to do sth学习做某事 ③share a love for共同喜爱 [高分句型] ①Being a member of the book club has opened my mind to a world of knowledge and imagination.(动名词短语作主语) ②The club meetings are places where I feel inspired and motivated, surrounded by people who share a love for reading.(who引导的定语从句) 题材02 建议信 （24-25八年级上·河南省南阳市·期中） 假如你是李华，你的朋友 Mike近期得了流感并发烧。请你给他写封邮件，告诉他一些应对流感的小妙招，并向他说明保持健康的重要性。 写作要求： 1)文中必须包含题目要求的内容，可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3) 词数100左右。 Dear Mike, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you have the flu with a fever. Don’t worry. I have some advice for you. First of all, you’d better not go to school these days, just stay at home and have a good rest, do nothing else. Then, you should drink lots of boiled water. What’s more, you should also take some medicine to keep down the fever. Most importantly, if you don’t get better within a few days, I suggest you go to the hospital as soon as possible. As the saying goes, the first wealth is health. Please try to follow the advice and I hope you can get better soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、对于对方生病表示遗憾并引出话题； 第二步、结合常识及实际给出一些应对流感的小妙招； 第三步、说明保持健康的重要性并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①have a good rest好好休息 ②keep down控制 ③as soon as possible尽快 ④try to do sth.尽力做某事 [高分句型] Most importantly, if you don’t get better within a few days, I suggest you go to the hospital as soon as possible.(if引导条件状语从句；省略that的宾语从句) （22-23八年级上·河南省郑州市经济技术开发区·期中） 为了配合教育部年度中小学视力监测工作，提升学生健康素养，学校将举办一场“Sight Day（爱眼日）”英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图文提示写一篇演讲稿，针对如何保护视力给出你的建议并倡导同学们一起来保护眼睛。 参考词汇：read in bed 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear friends, As we all know, eyes are very important to us. I would like to share my ideas about how to take care of our eyes. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your attention! 【答案】例文 Dear friends, As we all know, eyes are very important to us. I would like to share my ideas about how to take care of our eyes. First of all, we should avoid some bad habits, such as getting too close to the computer when surfing the Internet, reading in bed and reading in the sun. They are harmful to our eyes. Secondly, we’d better develop some good habits, such as looking at more green trees and doing more outdoor activities, which can help to relax our eyes. In addition, it is necessary to eat more fruits and vegetables. They can provide the nutrients needed by the eyes. Last but not least, we need take regular breaks when using our eyes. Let’s take action to protect our eyes. Remember, healthy eyes lead to a better life. Thank you for your attention! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的； 第二步，结合要点提示，从用眼的坏习惯和好习惯入手，就如何保护眼睛，给出建议； 第三步，号召大家行动起来，一起爱护眼睛； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①take care of 照顾 ②be harmful to 对……有害 ③take action 采取行动 [高分句型] ①Secondly, we’d better develop some good habits, such as looking at more green trees and doing more outdoor activities, which can help to relax our eyes.（定语从句） ②Last but not least, we need take regular breaks when using our eyes.（when引导的时间状语从句） （22-23八年级上·河南省濮阳市·期中） 俗话说：病从口入。很多同学平时不注意饮食卫生和习惯，结果生病了。我们应该如何做才能保持身体健康呢？请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示：1）饭前洗手；2）少喝冷饮；3)不吃变质的食物，如坏的牛奶；4）多做运动，一周至少两次；5）多吃蔬菜和水果；6）多喝水；7）有病立刻去就医。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to keep healthy Everyone wants to keep healthy. In everyday life, we should have good habits. We should have less cold drink. Cold things are bad for our stomachs. We had better wash our hands before meals. We mustn’t eat bad food or drink bad milk. Vegetables and fruit are good for our health. We should eat more vegetables and fruit every day. We should also drink plenty of water every day. Doing sports is good for our health. We had better do sports at least twice a week. If we are ill, we should go to see the doctor at once. If we follow the advice, we can stay healthy. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求就“我们应该如何做才能保持身体健康”展开题目并进行拓展。提示内容比较全面。 2.写作指导：本文时态使用一般现在时，在写作时第一段引出主题；第二段详述保持健康的一些方法和建议；第三段总结。写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、语意完整。 题材03 演讲稿 （23-24八年级上·河南省周口市郸城县·期中） 中学生的行为习惯直接影响着自身的健康成长。下周的英语课上，老师打算让同学们介绍自己的行为习惯。请根据下表提示，准备一篇英语发言稿。 好习惯 坏习惯 1. 每天早起； 2. 一周锻炼三或四次； …… 1. 经常看电视时间太长； 2. 常吃垃圾食品； …… 要求： 1. 短文必须包含表格提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译）； 2. 词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名，校名和地名。   Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文： Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits. I have some good habits and bad habits. I get up early every day and I exercise three or four times a week. These habits are good for my health. However, I also have some bad habits. I often watch TV for too long. And I usually eat junk food because it tastes good. I know these habits are bad for me. Maybe it will make me fat and ugly. I’ll try my best to change my bad habits and keep my good ones for long. That’s all. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要逐字翻译要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“很高兴能站在这里和大家谈论我的习惯。”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“好习惯”以及“坏习惯”两个方面谈论。 第三步，书写结语。表明我将会改掉坏习惯，并保持好习惯。 [亮点词汇] ①three or four times a week一周3到4次。 ②be good for对……有好处 ③try my best尽我最大的努力 [高分句型] ①And I usually eat junk food because it tastes good. (because引导的原因状语从句) （24-25八年级上·河南省郑州市第四初级中学·期中） 凡事预则立，不预则废。为了激励大家在新学期合理规划自己的学习和生活，你校英文广播站正在开展征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文谈谈你新学期的计划和打算，参加此次活动。 ......方面的计划 如何做 学习 ...... 个人提高 ...... 读书 ...... 要求： 1. 短文应包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语句通顺、连贯； 3. 词数不少于90，短文开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. As we all know, an hour of planning can save you 10 hours of doing. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! As we all know, an hour of plan can save you 10 hours of doing. So I plan for my new term carefully. Now, I’d like to share my plans with you all. My plans are about study, personal improvement and reading. First of all, I’m going to work hard on my studies. I’m going to listen to my teachers more carefully and write down the important points in my notebook. I hope I can get better grades in the new term. Secondly, I’m going to improve myself. I’m going to learn a new foreign language, which can help me understand the culture of a different country. Last but not least, I’m going to do more reading. Through reading, I can not only learn about the outside world but also get to know how to be a better person. I’m going to try my best to keep to all my plans. That’s all. Thank you for listening! 【详解】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：介绍自己将分享计划； 第二步，从学习、个人提升、读书等方面具体阐述这些计划； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②work hard努力学习 ③write down 写下 ④try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力去做某事 [高分句型] ①I hope I can get better grades in the new term. (宾语从句) ②Through reading, I can not only learn about the outside world but also get to know how to be a better person. (not only…but also…结构) ③I’m going to learn a new foreign language, which can help me understand the culture of a different country. (which引导非限制性定语从句) （24-25八年级上·河南省周口市沈丘县中英文学校·期中） 健康一直是全民关注的问题。我校英语俱乐部拟举办以“Be a Healthy Student”为题的演讲。假如你是李明，请根据以下提示，从身心健康两方面写一篇英语演讲稿。 要求： 1. 包括全部提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 3. 词数100 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Be a Healthy Student Hello, everyone. It’s a great honor to give a speech here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening. 【答案】例文 Be a Healthy Student Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give a speech here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice on how to be a healthy student.    First, you need to have healthy eating habits. Always have your meals on time and remember to choose healthy food, like vegetables and fish. Second, never stay up late. You’d better go to bed early and get up early. Healthy living habits are of great importance. Third, it’s necessary to take some exercise. Choose a sport you like and stick to it. Fourth, we need to care for not only our bodies but also our minds. Make more friends so that you have someone to talk to when you feel upset. Remember to smile a lot. Smiling brings you a good mood and good luck. In short, if you pay attention to the health of both your body and your mind, you are sure to be a healthy student. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导图所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：健康很重要；引出话题：提供一些建议； 第二步，依据思维导图，从身体和心理方面逐一陈述，适当拓展； 第三步，书写总结。 [亮点词汇] ①in short 总之 ②care for 照顾 ③stick to 坚持 [高分句型] ①Third, it’s necessary to take some exercise. (it作形式主语) ②Make more friends so that you have someone to talk to when you feel upset. (so that引导目的状语从句) （23-24八年级上·河南省商丘市虞城县·期中） 你班被评为“体育活动先进班级”。假如你是班长 (monitor)，受学校广播“英语之声”栏目的邀请，介绍你班学生开展体育活动的情况，请你根据下面的要点和要求写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点： 1. 你班同学重视体育锻炼； 2. 你班的锻炼情况； 3. 你对未来的展望。 要求： 1. 可适当增加细节以使行文流畅； 2. 词数100左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Good morning, everyone! I’m the monitor of Class Three, Grade Eight. Now I will tell you how we do exercise. Everyone in our class take an active part in sports because we know exercising is important to our health. In the early morning, all of us run on the playground for half an hour. Doing exercise during the class breaks in the morning is a regular activity for us. We play more kinds of sports after school in the afternoon. The boys usually play basketball, and the girls play volleyball or badminton. Some do other sports like rope jumping, running, playing ping-pong and so on. Exercising not only keeps us healthy, but also makes us happy. We will keep on exercising in the future. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列3个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的身份，引出话题； 第二步，依据要点提示，介绍班级开展体育活动情况，逐一陈述，适当拓展； 第三步，书写总结，感谢大家的聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①take an active part in 积极参加 ②not only…but also… 不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①Now I will tell you how we do exercise.  (宾语从句) ②Doing exercise during the class breaks in the morning is a regular activity for us. (动名词作主语) 题材04 人物介绍 （23-24八年级上·河南省驻马店市遂平县·期中） 请根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍一下你和你的好朋友琳达的相同和不同之处。 相同点 不同点 Linda （1）喜欢运动； （2）各门功课都学得好； （3）喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆。 （1）比我高，比我瘦； （2）喜欢看电视脱口秀节目； （3）每天锻炼。 I （1）比她更外向； （2）喜欢看电视； （3）每周锻炼三次。 要求： （1）条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范整洁，100词左右； （2）文中不要出现真实校名和姓名。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Linda is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. Both of us like sports. We are both hard-working and good at our subjects. We both like reading and we usually go to the library together on weekends. But in some ways we are different. She is taller and thinner than me. She likes watching TV talk shows. She exercises every day. I’m more outgoing than she is. I like watching TV. I exercise three times a week. I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍好朋友是琳达； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，描述自己和琳达的异同； 第三步，点评自己与好友之间的异同，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②on weekends在周末 [高分句型] ①We both like reading and we usually go to the library together on weekends.（and表并列） ②She likes watching TV talk shows.（动名词作宾语） （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州市管城外国语学校·期中） 假设你叫Jenny，以“My Friend”为题，请你根据下面提供的有关参考信息，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，介绍一下你的朋友Maria的日常活动情况。 写作要点： 1. 外貌性格：Maria跟我个子一样高，但是她比我聪明外向，她学习更努力； 2. 生活习惯：她很健康，每天坚持锻炼；一周吃4—5次蔬菜；从不吃垃圾食品； 3. 兴趣爱好和一些经历：喜欢旅游，爬山……去年夏天，去了北京，游览了天安门广场等。 写作要求： 1. 短文内容必须包含所提供信息点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。 My Friend _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Friend I have a good friend. Her name is Maria. Maria is the same height as me, but she is smarter and more outgoing than me. She studies harder. She’s healthy. She keeps exercising every day. She eats vegetables four or five times a week. She never eats junk food. She likes travelling and climbing mountains. She likes playing basketball, too. If we have time, we often go to the park to play basketball on weekends. Last summer, she went to Beijing, visited Tian’anmen Square and so on. She had a good holiday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你的朋友Maria的日常活动情况，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍朋友的外貌性格和生活习惯； 第三步，介绍朋友的兴趣爱好和一些经历。 [亮点词汇] ①the same...as和……一样 ②keep doing sth.坚持做某事 ③on weekends在周末 [高分句型] ①Maria is the same height as me, but she is smarter and more outgoing than me. (but连接的并列句) ②If we have time, we often go to the park to play basketball on weekends. (if引导的条件状语从句) （23-24八年级上·河南省鹤壁市部分学校联考·期中） 假设你是李萍，最近收到英国笔友Linda的电子邮件，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。 To: LiPing@mail.com Subject: Friend Hi Li Ping, How is everything going? You told me your best friend Lily in the last e-mail. I’m really interested in her. Please tell me something more about her! How old is she? What does she look like? What kind of person is she and what happened between her and you? Hope to hear from you soon. Love, Linda Dear Linda, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Linda, How are you doing? I’m glad to receive your e-mail. And I’d like to tell you something about my best friend Lily. Lily is a 13-year-old girl with long hair, who is kind and patient with people around. Last week, I spent most of my time preparing for the tests. However, the math problems were so difficult that I couldn’t think clearly and solve them, which made me feel nervous and helpless. Luckily, my friend Lily is good at math. And she explained the difficulties to me and taught me how to work out those problems. With her help, I made great progress and did well in the tests. I’m thankful for the help which I got from Lily because she taught me a lot in both life and study. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件回信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括来信中所提内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍最好的朋友基本情况，从而引出话题； 第二步，叙述你与朋友之间发生的事情； 第三步，书写总结，表达对朋友的感激之情。 ［亮点词汇］ ①prepare for 准备 ②make great progress  取得巨大的进步 ［高分句型］ ①And she explained the difficulties to me and taught me how to work out those problems. (疑问词+动词不定式) ②However, the math problems were so difficult that I couldn’t think clearly and solve them, which made me feel nervous and helpless. (so…that…引导状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句) （23-24八年级上·河南省洛阳市·期中） 杭州 2022 年第 19 届亚运会(The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022)简称“杭州2022 年亚运会”于2023年9月23日至10月8日在中国浙江杭州举行。假如你是李明，你想成为杭州亚运会的志愿者。请根据以下内容提示，用英语给组委会写一封自荐信。内容包括： 1.个人信息；2.你自身的优势；3.你为此所要做的准备； 要求： (1)开头已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实的人名、校名； (2)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； (3)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； (4)词数80 词左右。 Dear Sir/Madam, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to you because I want to be a member of the volunteers for the 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022. Let me introduce myself. I’m a boy named Wei Hua, a middle school student in Hangzhou. I’ve been learning English for many years. So I can express myself clearly in English. Besides, I love sports and I also do well in sports. I prefer this kind of job and experience. Finally, I’m outgoing and good with people. In order to be an excellent volunteer, I am planning to find out more about the Asian Games so that I will be able to do a good job at the Games. I’m sure I am the right person you are looking for. I’m looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的个人信息； 第二步，介绍自身的优势； 第三步，最后介绍自己要做的准备； [亮点词汇] ① want to be 想成为 ② do well in 在……方面做得好 ③ in order to 为了 [高分句型] In order to be an excellent volunteer, I am planning to find out more about the Asian Games so that I will be able to do a good job at the Games（目的状语从句） （23-24八年级上·河南省平顶山市汝州市·期中） 每个人都有自己最喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么呢？请以 My Favorite Sport 为题，写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的运动。80 个词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 要点： 1. What’s your favorite sport? 2. Why do you like it? 3. How do you do it? 要求: 1. 短文不少于80个词。 2. 短文应包含上述三项要点。 3. 语句通顺、条理清楚、意思连贯、标点正确、书写清晰、规范。 4. 请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 My Favorite Sport I like sports very much, such as running, skating ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite I like very , such running, playing favorite is swimming. Swimming is a good kind of sport. Swimming is also very interesting. Swimming makes me healthy , you will look like a lovely fish. I’m sure you will feel very happy. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well and I go swimming three times one week. My favorite swimming player is Sun Yang. I hope I will be a swimming player like him when I grow up. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明自己有很多喜欢的活动，引出最喜欢的游泳。 第二步，具体喜欢游泳的原因和是如何喜欢这项运动的。 第三步，书写结语，表达希望长大后成为像孙杨一样的游泳运动员。 ［亮点词汇］ ①a good kind of一种好的 ②make sb. healthy使某人健康 ③begin to do sth开始做某事 ④grow up长大 ［高分句型］ I hope I will be a swimming player like him when I grow up.（定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句） （22-23八年级上·河南省开封市第十三中学·期中） 要求：你未来要从事什么工作呢？请以I’m going to be a (an) ________为题，将题目补充完整，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你未来想从事的工作。字数80左右。 提示：1.What are you going to be? 2.Why? 3.How are you going to do? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m going to be a teacher I am going to be a teacher in the future. Here are my reasons. First, I think teaching is a good job. I like children and I can enjoy happy days with them. Second, as you know, my parents are both teachers. I can learn how to be a good teacher with the help of them. Finally, if I become a teacher, my students will work everywhere. It will make me feel proud. Now I’m working hard at my lessons. I want to learn more knowledge so that I can give my knowledge to my students in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，说明你将来的打算是当一名老师； 第二步，具体阐述你想当老师的原因； 第三步，最后表达你现在要做的准备。 [亮点词汇] ①in the future在未来 ②with the help of在……的帮助下 ③work hard努力工作 [高分句型] ①I think teaching is a good job.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Finally, if I become a teacher, my students will work everywhere.（if引导的条件状语从句） （22-23八年级上·河南省郑州外国语学校·期中） 假如你是李明，你的笔友Mike想了解一下你所在社区的情况，请你根据下面的情况，给他回一封电子邮件，向他简单介绍一下你所在社区的情况。 提示： 1. 社区(neighborhood)环境优美； 2. 世纪公园(Century Park)是社区最大的公园； 3. 思达超市(Star Supermarket)是社区最受欢迎的超市，那里的东西又好又便宜； 4. 社区最新的电影院是(Century Cinema)，有最大的银幕、最好的音效和最舒服的座位。 要求：词数不少于80，可适当发挥。邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, You want to know something about my neighborhood. Now let me tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文： Dear Mike, You want to know something about my neighborhood. Now let me tell you. My neighborhood is pretty beautiful and people here are very friendly. Century Park is the biggest park and it is a good place to have fun. I often take a walk and get relaxed in the park. Shopping is also easy here. Star Supermarket is the most popular supermarket in the neighborhood. It has all kinds of things. They are good and cheap. If you want to see a movie, you can go to Century Cinema. It is the newest. It has the biggest screens, the best sound and the most comfortable seats. Come and visit my neighborhood when you are free. I’m sure you will have a great time here. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍所在的社区的情况，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍社区的情况，包括环境、购物、娱乐等方面； 第三步，书写结语，邀请对方来参观社区。 [亮点词汇] ①take a walk散步 ②all kinds of各种 ③have a great time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①Century Park is the biggest park and it is a good place to have fun.（and连接的并列句） ②If you want to see a movie, you can go to Century Cinema.（if引导的条件状语从句） 题材01 个人观点 （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州市中原区九校共同体·期中） “我运动，我健康，我快乐。”随着阳光体育运动的开展，校园里也出现了可喜的变化。请你结合如图的图示信息，以“Sports in our school”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述校园体育运动的情况。 写作要求： 1.文中必须包括上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80左右。 Sports in our school ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sports in our school Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than 20 minutes’ rest after the second class in the morning every day. And we have long time for sports in the afternoon. So we have at least one hour to exercise each day. Students get so excited at these changes. More sports lover take more kinds of sports, such as running, dancing, kicking shuttlecock; aerobics; skipping and jumping on the playground. Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. If we don’t take any sports, we may feel tired and get sick easily. What’s more, a healthy body can help us to study better and live a happier life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态： 时态应主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应围绕“更长的运动时间”、“更多的运动爱好者”以及“更多种类的运动”这三个方面展开，同时可适当添加细节以丰富文章内容，展现校园体育活动的生动与活力。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题。可以从“健康与运动”的普遍联系入手，简述运动对个人健康的重要性，进而引出校园内体育运动的积极变化，作为文章的开头； 第二步，具体阐述校园体育运动的新变化； 第三步，总结并升华主题。强调校园体育运动的蓬勃发展不仅提升了学生的身体素质，还增强了他们的团队协作能力和社交能力，营造了积极向上的校园文化氛围。最后，可以表达对未来校园体育运动持续繁荣的美好祝愿，或鼓励学生继续积极参与体育活动，享受运动带来的快乐与健康。 [亮点词汇] ①more than超过 ②take part in参与 ③such as例如 ④keep fit保持健康 ⑤easily容易地 [高分句型] ①We now have more than 20 minutes’ rest after the second class in the morning every day, allowing us ample time for leisure and refreshment. (现在分词短语作状语) ②The increased opportunities for sports have not only sparked enthusiasm among students but also enriched our school life significantly. (并列句) （23-24八年级上·河南省三门峡市灵宝市·期中） 所谓青春，就是在每个明天，都要比今天前进一步。正值青春年少的我们，怎样才能成就更好的自己呢？请以“How to be better?”为题写一篇英语短文，从运动、饮食、学习等生活习惯谈一下自己的计划和打算。 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 4. 词数100左右。 How to be better? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to be better For a teenager, every day is valuable and should be made good use of to make him a better person. Good living habits are important to our lives. Therefore, I plan to sleep and get up early. Besides, I’m going to eat more healthy food because eating healthily also plays an important role. As students, we should concentrate on learning. There are a lot of ways of getting knowledge. Reading books is the major and convenient way to knowledge. Another equally important way of getting knowledge is through practice, especially learning from others. So I will read more and ask more to gain knowledge. Live healthier, learn more, and be a better person. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，强调“青少年变得更好”的重要性； 第二步，从运动和饮食谈谈自己的计划； 第三步，谈谈自己的学习方法和计划。 [亮点词汇] ①make good use of充分利用 ②concentrate on专注于 ③learn from向……学习 [高分句型] ①I’m going to eat more healthy food because eating healthily also plays an important role. (because引导原因状语从句) ②Reading books is the major and convenient way to knowledge. (动名词作主语) （22-23八年级上·河南省驻马店市汝南县·期中） 良好的生活习惯，对于保持健康来说是很重要的，比如：按时吃饭、多吃蔬果、多参加户外运动、多与同学交往、不熬夜等等好习惯，对强健体魄都是非常必要的。请以Good Living Habits Make Me Healthy 为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的做法和看法。 1.要点：①健康的作息习惯； ②多做运动； ③健康的饮食习惯。 2.要求：①文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； ②词数100左右。 Good Living Habits Make Me Healthy ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Good Living Habits Make Me Healthy Good living habits are important in our lives. They influence us in many ways. I think good living habits make me healthy. I liked eating meat before. But now I try all kinds of food, eat more vegetables and fruit. What’s more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day. Exercise can keep me active all day. Everyone needs sleep. I have eight to ten hours’ sleep at night. With enough sleep at night, I can be ready for school activities. In my free time I’d like to do some reading. It makes me feel relaxed. My living habits are pretty healthy and they make me happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直奔主题。引出重点——保持健康很重要； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据要点内容，逐个描述即可； 第三步，书写结语。升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ① in many ways在很多方面 ② all kinds of各种各样的 ③ what’s more此外，另外 ④ would like to do想要做 ⑤ make sb. do sth.让某人做某事 [高分句型] ① I think good living habits make me healthy.（省略that的宾语从句） ② My living habits are pretty healthy and they make me happy.（and连接的并列句） 题材02 人物介绍 （22-23八年级上·河南省洛阳市汝阳县·期中） 我们都有生病去医院看医生的经历。请以“My Experience of Seeing a Doctor”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你最近一次去医院就诊的经历。 1. 要点： 1)你是什么时候、因为什么病去的医院； 2) 医生是如何给你诊断的，结果是什么； 3)你是如何康复的。 2.要求： 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2)词数100左右。 My Experience of Seeing a Doctor ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Experience of Seeing a Doctor Last Wednesday night, I suddenly had a high fever and a terrible headache. I didn’t sleep well that night. The next morning, I told my mother and she took me to the hospital. The doctor took my temperature and checked me carefully. He told me that I had the flu. Then he gave me some medicine and suggested that I should have a good rest at home. I was worried about my lessons, and didn’t want to ask for leave. My mother said health is the most important. So I followed the doctor’s advice and got well again in just two days. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你是什么时候、因为什么病去的医院； 第二步，具体阐述医生是如何给你诊断的，结果是什么； 第三步，最后介绍你是如何康复的。 [亮点词汇] ①have a high fever发高烧 ②have a good rest好好休息 ③be worried about担心 [高分句型] Then he gave me some medicine and suggested that I should have a good rest at home.（that引导的宾语从句） （23-24八年级上·河南省南阳市南召县·期中） 为了呼吁大家重视健康的生活方式，某英文杂志社开辟了“我身边的健康小达人”专栏，邀请大家介绍自己身边生活习惯良好、热爱体育锻炼的人，请以“A Healthy Person by My Side”为题，写一篇90词左右的文章来投稿。 要点： 1.介绍ta的基本情况； 2.哪些习惯让ta如此健康？ 3.你从ta身上学到了什么？ 要求： 1.文中不得出现真实的个人姓名和学校名称。 2.90词左右。 A Healthy Person by My Side Health is the most important thing in our life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Healthy Person by My Side Health is the most important thing in our life. There is a healthy person by my side, and that is my friend Lily. Lily is a 14-year-old girl. She is very active and loves sports. She plays basketball every day and goes for a run in the morning. She also has a balanced diet. She eats a lot of fruits and vegetables and avoids junk food. In addition, she gets enough sleep every night. These habits make her very healthy. I have learned a lot from her. I used to be lazy and didn’t like sports, but now I have started to exercise regularly and paid more attention to my diet. I also try to get enough sleep to keep my mind and body healthy. In conclusion, Lily is a great example of a healthy person. I hope more people can follow her example and lead a healthy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增加细节，并突出重点写作，注意行文连贯，无单词及语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点明主题，表达身边健康的人是谁； 第二步，介绍她的基本情况； 第三步，介绍自己从她身上学到的东西； 第四步，书写结语，号召更多人以她为榜样，过健康的生活。 [亮点词汇] ①go for a run去跑步 ②in addition此外 ③pay more attention to更加注意 ④in conclusion总之 [高分句型] ①I used to be lazy and didn’t like sports, but now I have started to exercise regularly and paid more attention to my diet. (but连接的并列句) ②I hope more people can follow her example and lead a healthy life. (宾语从句) （23-24八年级上·河南省郑州市第十一初级中学·期中） 旅游可以让人放松身心，增长见识。假如你是李华，暑假期间你外出旅游了。请你根据下面的要点提示用英文写一篇短文，讲述你的暑期之旅，然后在本周的英语角活动中和大家分享。 要点提示： 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel? 要求： 1. 内容完整、层次清晰、表达清楚、书写规范； 2. 不要出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Trip to Beijing I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer. On the first day, we went to Tian’anmen Square and I watched the flag-raising ceremony. How wonderful it was! Then, we visited the Great Wall. Like its name, it is great. The next day we visited the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven. We took lots of nice photos. We tasted some delicious food, like Beijing duck. I also bought some presents for my friends. I was tired but happy. I hope to visit Beijing again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己旅行的目的地； 第二步，介绍自己在那里进行的活动； 第三步，阐述自己的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①the flag-raising ceremony升旗仪式 ②wonderful精彩的 ③take photos拍照 ④taste品尝 ⑤present礼物 [高分句型] How wonderful it was!(感叹句) （23-24八年级上·河南省实验中学·期中） 动画片是我们童年不可或缺的一部分，每个孩子心中都有一个记忆深刻的卡通人物，你最喜欢的卡通人物是谁呢？请以“My Favorite Cartoon Character”为题，并根据要点和要求写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1. 描述这个卡通人物的外貌和性格特点。 2. 写出你喜欢这个卡通人物的理由。 2. 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和班级。 2. 词数100词左右。 My Favorite Cartoon Character ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite cartoon character When I was very young, I started to watch a lot of classic Disney cartoon films, the familiar names of Snow White, Peter Pan and others were just like my friends. I admired the heroes of these characters because they showed me the courage to defeat difficulties. Among all kinds of heroes, I like Belle best. In the cartoon film Beauty and the Beast, Belle is a different girl. She is smart and dares to fight against the traditional ideas. People around her regard a girl’s value is to marry a man and then take care of the house chores. Also, Belle is a brave girl. She likes reading and she has her own thoughts. I love Belle very much. What about you? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”及“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意大小写，适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，开篇点题，引出下文； ②第二步，具体阐述为什么喜欢这个卡通人物； ③第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①started to 开始去 ②dares to 敢于去做 [高分句型] I admired the heroes of these characters because they showed me the courage to defeat difficulties.(原因状语从句) （23-24八年级上·河南省焦作市武陟县·期中） 很多学生选择在假期旅行。这让学生既放松了心情，又开阔了视野，学到了知识。你对旅行怎么看？你有最难忘的旅行经历吗？请你根据英文提示写一篇短文，要求不少于80词。 提示： （1）What’s your idea about traveling? （2）Tell us one of your traveling experiences. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I like traveling because it makes me feel the beauty of nature. Last summer, I went to Beijing on vacation with my father. It was sunny and hot. First we visited the Great Wall. There were a lot of people on the Great Wall. It is really the longest wall in the world. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian’anmen Square. We took many photos there. We also visited some other places of interest in Beijing. We visited a Beijing hutong, too. We had a great time there. What a great trip! We liked the trip very much. I hope to go there again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述经历用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明自己对旅行的看法； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍自己的旅行经历； 第三步，书写结语。再次表达对旅行的看法或对自己旅行经历的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①the beauty of nature自然之美 ②on vacation度假 ③places of interest名胜古迹 [高分句型] ①I like traveling because it makes me feel the beauty of nature.（原因状语从句） ②It is really the longest wall in the world.（形容词最高级） 1 / 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $