【人与人互助类读后续写】Mia心怀梦想励志摆摊，50美分的柠檬水，无价的品格 讲义-石家庄市2025届高三二模英语试题

阅读下面材料，标黑加粗黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 石家庄市2025届高三二模英语试题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The July sun was burning over Oakwood Avenue(环境描写). Twelve-year-old Mia felt sweat dropping down her back(刻画天气及人物状态) as she arranged the freshly made lemonade (柠檬水) on her folding table. She'd made the chalk drawings that morning: pink hearts and blue skateboards(可能得衔接点). Her big poster swung desperately in the hot wind(环境描写): Lemonade 50 cents - Save for Skateboard!“Business slow, eh?" Mr, Rossi's voice carried flour-dusted kindness from his grocery store doorway(无灵主语句，描写人的声音特征). And the smell of freshly baked bread followed him(无灵主语句，其实也就是拟人). Mia nodded, smoothing seven sweaty coins on the table(现在分词做伴随动作).(交代背景信息) As they were talking, a silver car stopped by. A businessman in a nice suit stepped out, phone glued to his ear(独立主格刻画人物的形象). “I said I would be there soon!" He seemed to be in a hurry. Grabbing a bottle of lemonade(现在分词做伴随动作), he put a $20 bill onto the table. “Keep the change!” Mia was surprised(情绪描写). “No, sir. But..." Hurriedly, she counted out $19.50. "Here's your change, sir." "Keep it. Consider it a tip.(购买商品的语境词汇)" The businessman said with a gentle smile.“No, I can't. The lemonade's fifty cents." Mia insisted. The car door was closed, with only tire marks left on the dirt road(with复合结构). Mia stared at the bill. Twenty dollars. Enough for skateboard wheels! Her fingers brushed through the cash box(细节描写，动作反应冲突的内心).“Wow, good luck."’ Mr. Rossi said and went back to his grocery store.“But my mom used to say, money weighs heavy in dishonest pockets(某个人说的话是衔接的重点内容).” Mia whispered. As she was about to put away the money, she spotted something under the maple tree - a black leather wallet sticking out through dead leaves(独立主格，交代遗落的钱包). Mia's fingers shook as she opened it(刻画心理). Credit cards. A driver's license. And a hundred-dollar bill(交代钱包的物品). Her skateboard fund screamed in her ears(独立主格刻画心理), but Mom's voice shouted louder.(冲突刻画) Mia could feel the wallet was heavy and realized the owner would be very worried. Without any hesitation, Mia went to Mr, Rossi for help. Looking through the contents of the wallet(现在分词做伴随动作), Mr. Rossi said the owner would surely return and look for it, So maybe the best choice was to wait. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. Paragraph 2: The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. 石家庄市2025届高三二模英语试题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The July sun was burning over Oakwood Avenue. Twelve-year-old Mia felt sweat dropping down her back as she arranged the freshly made lemonade (柠檬水) on her folding table. She'd made the chalk drawings that morning: pink hearts and blue skateboards. Her big poster swung desperately in the hot wind: Lemonade 50 cents - Save for Skateboard!“Business slow, eh?" Mr, Rossi's voice carried flour-dusted kindness from his grocery store doorway. And the smell of freshly baked bread followed him. Mia nodded, smoothing seven sweaty coins on the table. As they were talking, a silver car stopped by. A businessman in a nice suit stepped out, phone glued to his ear. “I said I would be there soon!" He seemed to be in a hurry, Grabbing a bottle of lemonade, he put a $20 bill onto the table. “Keep the change!”Mia was surprised. “No, sir. But..." Hurriedly, she counted out $19.50. “Here's your change, sir."“Keep it. Consider it a tip." The businessman said with a gentle smile.“No, I can't. The lemonade's fifty cents." Mia insisted. The car door was closed, with onlytire (轮胎)marks left on the dirt road. Mia stared at the bill. Twenty dollars. Enough for skateboard wheels! Her fingers brushed through the cash box.“Wow, good luck."’ Mr. Rossi said and went back to his grocery store.“But my mom used to say, money weighs heavy in dishonest pockets.” Mia whispered. As shewas about to put away the money, she spotted something under the maple tree - a black leather wallet sticking out through dead leaves.Mia's fingers shook as she opened it. Credit cards. A driver's license. And a hundred-dollar bill. Her skateboard fund screamed in her ears, but Mom's voice shouted louder, Mia could feel the wallet was heavy and realized the owner would be very worried.Without any hesitation, Mia went to Mr, Rossi for help. Looking through the contents of the wallet, Mr. Rossi said the owner would surely return and look for it, So maybe the best choice was to wait. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. Paragraph 2: The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. 1. 文章分类与续写思路分析 文章类型：人与自我类/道德选择类（Mia面临金钱诱惑与诚信的抉择） 续写构思方向： 冲突核心：诚实 vs. 物质诱惑（20美元和捡到的钱包） 主题升华：诚信的价值、善良的回报 情感走向：从犹豫→坚定→获得意外回报 框架布局： 段落 内容设计 衔接要点 第一段 Mia坚持等待失主，体现她的诚信和耐心 承接"waited at her lemonade stand"，需描写等待时的心理和环境变化 第二段 商人返回，被Mia的诚实感动，兑现奖励 衔接"promised to buy a skateboard"，需呼应前文的"skateboard fund" 注意事项： 承接原文：保持Mia的善良性格（如引用妈妈的话）延续商人的匆忙形象（如"phone glued to ear"）环境细节（如"maple tree", "dirt road"） 伏笔利用："skateboard fund" → 商人最终资助"Mr. Rossi's kindness" → 协助Mia 设计技巧：通过环境描写（如夜幕降临）强化等待的漫长 用对话揭示商人身份（如"我是 skateboard 店主"） 0. 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 故事山模式： 开端：Mia卖柠檬汁攒钱买滑板 发展：商人多付钱，Mia发现钱包 高潮：道德抉择（留下钱 vs. 归还钱包） 回落：等待失主，商人返回 结局：诚信获得回报 关键分析表： 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Mia：善良固执；商人：匆忙但慷慨 “No, I can’t. The lemonade’s fifty cents.” / “phone glued to his ear” 情感层次 从兴奋（20美元）→挣扎（钱包）→坚定 “skateboard fund screamed... Mom’s voice shouted louder” 关键情节点 发现钱包、决定归还 “spotted something under the maple tree” 语言特色 短句制造紧张感，比喻强化心理 “money weighs heavy in dishonest pockets” 心理描写 内心挣扎生动 “Her fingers shook as she opened it” 动作描写 细节动作体现情绪 “smoothed seven sweaty coins” / “tire marks left” 环境描写 炎热天气烘托疲惫感 “July sun was burning” / “poster swung desperately” 隐含主题 诚信的价值 反复提及妈妈的话 伏笔/冲突点 滑板基金（伏笔） vs. 钱包诱惑（冲突） “Save for Skateboard!” / “a hundred-dollar bill” 3. 动作、心理、环境描写推荐例句及翻译 动作描写 His polished shoes crunched on the gravel as he rushed toward her. （他锃亮的鞋子踩在碎石上嘎吱作响，匆忙朝她走去。） She extended the wallet toward him, her fingers trembling slightly. （她把钱包递给他，手指微微颤抖。） The car screeched to a halt, tires kicking up dust. （汽车急刹停下，轮胎扬起尘土。） He clutched the wallet tightly, his knuckles turning white. （他紧紧攥着钱包，指节发白。） Mia smoothed the crumpled bill on the table, her brow furrowed. （米娅把皱巴巴的钞票在桌上抚平，眉头紧锁。） The businessman dashed out of the car, his tie flapping in the wind. （商人冲出车子，领带在风中飘动。） She poured the lemonade carefully, making sure not to spill a drop. （她小心翼翼地倒柠檬水，确保一滴不洒。） He fumbled with his phone, nearly dropping it in his haste. （他手忙脚乱地摆弄手机，差点因匆忙而掉在地上。） Mia’s hand hovered over the cash box, hesitating for a moment. （米娅的手在钱箱上方悬停，犹豫了一下。） The man slipped an extra bill into the tip jar when she wasn’t looking. （趁她不注意，男人往小费罐里多塞了一张钞票。） 心理描写 A warm sense of fulfillment washed over her. （一种温暖的满足感涌上心头。） Her heart leapt at the offer, but she quickly composed herself. （听到这个提议，她的心猛地一跳，但她很快镇定下来。） Doubt gnawed at her as she stared at the twenty-dollar bill. （她盯着那张20美元钞票，疑虑啃噬着她的心。） She felt a quiet pride settle in her chest. （她感到一种平静的自豪感在胸中沉淀。） His words echoed in her mind, making her reconsider. （他的话在她脑海中回荡，让她重新思考。） A flicker of guilt crossed her face before she made her decision. （在她做出决定之前，一丝愧疚从她脸上闪过。） Her resolve hardened as she remembered her mother’s words. （想起母亲的话，她的决心更加坚定。） Relief flooded through her when she saw the man return. （看到男人回来，她如释重负。） She bit her lip, torn between temptation and honesty. （她咬着嘴唇，在诱惑和诚实之间挣扎。） A surge of determination pushed her to do the right thing. （一股坚定的决心促使她做了正确的事。） 环境描写 The streetlights flickered to life, casting long shadows. （街灯闪烁亮起，投下长长的影子。） The July sun blazed overhead, baking the pavement. （七月的太阳高悬，炙烤着人行道。） A hot wind rustled the leaves of the maple tree. （热风吹拂枫叶，沙沙作响。） The air grew cooler as twilight settled in. （暮色降临，空气渐渐凉爽。） The scent of freshly baked bread drifted from the grocery store. （面包店飘来新鲜出炉的面包香气。） The once-bustling street was now silent, save for the chirp of crickets. （原本熙熙攘攘的街道此刻一片寂静，只有蟋蟀的鸣叫。） Headlights cut through the dim street like twin beams of hope. （车头灯像两束希望之光划破昏暗的街道。） The chalk drawings on the pavement had faded under the scorching sun. （人行道上的粉笔画在烈日下已经褪色。） Tire marks were left on the dirt road as the car sped away. （汽车疾驰而去，在土路上留下轮胎印。） The folding table wobbled slightly in the breeze. （折叠桌在微风中轻轻摇晃。） 4. 高级替换词分类总结（5个场景） 1. 金钱/交易相关Money → cash, funds, earnings Pay → compensate, reimburse;Tip → gratuity, bonus;Change → remaining balance, coins;Save (money) → accumulate, set aside; 2. 情感/心理状态 Happy → content, elated;Sad → disheartened, crestfallen;Worried → anxious, apprehensive;Surprised → astonished, taken aback;Determined → resolute, steadfast 3. 动作/行为Run → dash, sprint;Give → hand over, present;Take → grab, snatch (负面);Look → glance, peer;Say → murmur, exclaim 4. 环境/天气 Hot → scorching, sweltering; Cold → chilly, frigid;Wind → breeze, gust;Quiet → silent, hushed; Bright → gleaming, radiant 5. 道德/品质 Honest → upright, trustworthy;Dishonest → deceitful, fraudulent; Kind → compassionate, benevolent;Selfish → greedy, egocentric;Brave → courageous, valiant 5. 固定搭配 & 词法解析固定搭配 Glued to his ear (紧贴在耳边) – The phone was glued to his ear. Swing desperately (拼命摇晃) – The poster swung desperately in the wind. Etched with worry (布满忧虑) – His face was etched with worry. Melt into disbelief (转为难以置信) – His panic melted into disbelief. Cut through the darkness (划破黑暗) – The headlights cut through the darkness. 词法解析 Screech to a halt (急刹停下) – The car screeched to a halt. 近义词： come to a sudden stop反义词： accelerate Clutch tightly (紧紧抓住) – She clutched the wallet tightly.近义词： grip, grasp 反义词： release Wash over (sb.) (涌上心头) – Relief washed over her.近义词： flood, overwhelm 反义词： recede Flicker to life (闪烁亮起) – The streetlights flickered to life.近义词： blink on, illuminate反义词： fade out Slip into (sth.) (悄悄放入) – He slipped an extra bill into the jar.近义词： sneak, tuck反义词： remove 6. 可积累的生词短语 单词/短语 词性 词义 近义词 反义词 例句 Desperately adv. 拼命地 frantically calmly She waved desperately for help. Sag v. 下垂 slump straighten His shoulders sagged in exhaustion. Frantic adj. 疯狂的 hectic calm He made a frantic search for his keys. Composure n. 镇定 calmness agitation She regained her composure quickly. Gratitude n. 感激 thankfulness ingratitude His eyes shone with gratitude. 这些语料适用于 高考读后续写，尤其适合 诚信、成长、道德选择 类主题。通过 动作、心理、环境描写 增强画面感，使用 高级替换词 提升语言质量，并掌握 固定搭配 让表达更地道。 7. Possible Versions(3) Version 1 Paragraph 1: Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. The street grew quiet, and the last rays of sunlight faded behind the maple tree(环境描写). Just as she was about to pack up, headlights appeared(无灵主语句)—the silver car returned(与原文衔接). The businessman stepped out trying to find his wallet, his earlier hurried demeanor replaced with visible relief(独立主格刻画人物) when he spotted his wallet in Mia’s hands. "I found it under the tree," she explained, pointing to where the leaves had partially hidden it(现在分词做伴随动作). As he checked the contents, his eyes flickered to her chalk sign: Save for Skateboard!(衔接原文) "You’ve been saving up?" he asked. Mia nodded, suddenly remembering her mother’s words about honesty(现在分词做伴随动作). Paragraph 2: The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. "Let me buy you that skateboard," he offered firmly. Mia hesitated(情绪变化), torn between her dream and her principles. But seeing his genuine insistence(现在分词做伴随动作), she finally agreed—on one condition. "Only if I can pay you back with free lemonade all summer(刻画人物，衔接原文)," she countered with a small smile. The businessman laughed, shaking her hand(现在分词做伴随动作). Weeks later, he became a regular customer, often leaving extra tips(现在分词做伴随动作). By summer’s end, Mia had not only earned her skateboard but also gained a valuable lesson: kindness, like honesty, always finds its way back. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. The Save for Skateboard! sign now barely was visible in the dim light(环境描写，变化). When the businessman rushed back, his relief at seeing his wallet was palpable(无灵主语句). "It was by the tree roots," Mia said, handing it over(现在分词做伴随动作). As he thumbed through the bills, his gaze lingered on her worn-out sneakers and the poster(刻画人物). "You’re saving for a skateboard?" he asked softly. Mia’s fingers tightened around her cash box, her mother’s warning echoing in her mind(独立主格，衔接原文). Paragraph 2: The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. "Take this," he said, pressing a crisp $100 bill into her palm(现在分词做伴随动作). Mia’s protest died on her lips when he added, "Call it an investment in good character." The next day, a brand-new skateboard leaned against her stand with a note(无灵主语句): For the most honest entrepreneur on Oakwood Ave(衔接原文). Mia later learned he owned a sports shop—and by summer’s end, her lemonade profits had doubled thanks to his referrals. Sometimes, she realized, accepting help wasn’t weakness; it was the start of something better. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Mia waited at her lemonade stand until darkness fell. Her feet tapped nervously(动作描写刻画人物) as the sun set and lights turned on. When the businessman returned, his sharp eyes immediately noticed her Save for Skateboard! sign(人物刻画). "You found this?" he asked, taking the wallet Mia held out(现在分词做伴随动作). She explained how the maple tree’s roots had snagged it. As he checked the content, he studied her determined face and sun-bleached poster. "How much have you saved?" he inquired. Mia hesitated, torn(过去分词短语做补语) between pride and her mother’s advice about refusing undue rewards. Paragraph 2: The businessman promised to buy Mia a skateboard. A week later, the man reappeared—not with cash, but with a gently used skateboard. "My son outgrew it," he said. "Think of it as a trade for your honesty." This time, Mia accepted, though she insisted he take a gallon of her special mint lemonade. To her surprise(心理描写), he returned every Friday, becoming her first loyal customer(现在分词做结果状语). Their arrangement taught Mia that integrity could build bridges—and that some rewards, like cold lemonade on a hot day, were priceless(升华主旨与原文衔接). 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $