【家庭温情类读后续写】圣诞回老家过年！冬天小木屋解锁冰雪副本，直接氛围感拉满讲义-浙江省名校联盟新高考研究2025届高三下学期新高考研究卷(三)英语试题

阅读下面材料，标黑加粗黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 浙江省名校联盟新高考研究2025届高三下学期新高考研究卷（三）英语试题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Christmas was coming(交代时间). This year, my dad suggested that our family pack up and drive 500 miles north to celebrate the New Year's holiday at our 600-square-foot lake cabin(小木屋) in northern Michigan. At first, I was hesitant(情绪刻画). The cabin was awesome in the summer. It was our favorite spot for boating, fishing, swimming, water skiing, and tubing(动名词并列). Hanging out there in the dead of winter(动名词短语做主语) sounded boring and bleak(阴冷的).(情绪刻画，交代作者的感受) I wrinkled my nose in disgust(表情情绪刻画) and asked, “What will we do?” “There's tons of stuff to do(非谓语做后置定语),” Dad replied. “We can spend the week skiing, snowshoeing, ice skating, and sledding(动名词做并列)! We can play games, sleep in, and explore northern Michigan in a different season. We can build a giant bonfire down by the lake and have a barbecue, then come inside and drink hot cocoa.” Okay, I was in. My brother, Dan, was also interested. A few days after Christmas, Mom, Dad, Dan, and I piled into our car and hit the road. Five hours into our trip, my eyes fluttered shut(人物刻画). In my mind's eye, I imagined the scene that would welcome us(无灵主语句) when we arrived at the cabin. The bare tree limbs would be covered in snow and ice crystals(环境描写). I suspected the lake might look larger in the absence of docks and boats(主动表被动). The one thing that I hoped would be like summer was that the sky would be a bright blue. Several hours later, just as the sun was setting(环境描写), we turned onto the cabin's gravel (碎石) lane and were greeted by the familiar sound of crackling rocks beneath the tires(无灵主语句), though slightly softened from the snow on the ground(过去分词做后置定语). Before long, the cabin came into view, with long icicles(冰锥) hanging from its eaves(屋檐)and window frames(with复合结构). Anyway, it felt good to be grounded and at our happy place. As the car stopped, we all jumped out and ran to the cabin doorway(动作反应心理). 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Eagerly, Dad put the key in the cabin's door lock, but it wouldn't turn.  Paragraph 2: Although our first day of winter vacation was more adventurous than expected, we made plenty of wonderful memories that week. 浙江省名校联盟新高考研究2025届高三下学期新高考研究卷（三）英语试题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Christmas was coming. This year, my dad suggested that our family pack up and drive 500 miles north to celebrate the New Year's holiday at our 600-square-foot lake cabin(小木屋) in northern Michigan. At first, I was hesitant. The cabin was awesome in the summer. It was our favorite spot for boating, fishing, swimming, water skiing, and tubing. Hanging out there in the dead of winter sounded boring and bleak(阴冷的). I wrinkled my nose in disgust and asked, “What will we do?” “There's tons of stuff to do,” Dad replied. “We can spend the week skiing, snowshoeing, ice skating, and sledding! We can play games, sleep in, and explore northern Michigan in a different season. We can build a giant bonfire down by the lake and have a barbecue, then come inside and drink hot cocoa.” Okay, I was in. My brother, Dan, was also interested. A few days after Christmas, Mom, Dad, Dan, and I piled into our car and hit the road. Five hours into our trip, my eyes fluttered shut. In my mind's eye, I imagined the scene that would welcome us when we arrived at the cabin. The bare tree limbs would be covered in snow and ice crystals. I suspected the lake might look larger in the absence of docks and boats. The one thing that I hoped would be like summer was that the sky would be a bright blue. Several hours later, just as the sun was setting, we turned onto the cabin's gravel (碎石) lane and were greeted by the familiar sound of crackling rocks beneath the tires, though slightly softened from the snow on the ground. Before long, the cabin came into view, with long icicles(冰锥) hanging from its eaves(屋檐)and window frames. Anyway, it felt good to be grounded and at our happy place. As the car stopped, we all jumped out and ran to the cabin doorway. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Eagerly, Dad put the key in the cabin's door lock, but it wouldn't turn.   Paragraph 2: Although our first day of winter vacation was more adventurous than expected, we made plenty of wonderful memories that week. 一、读后续写任务分类与构思分析 分析维度 内容 续写类型 生活体验类 + 情节发展类 原文情节概述 讲述一家人冬季前往湖边小木屋过新年，作者从最初的抗拒到最终接受，路途中对冬季景色充满想象。最终到达小木屋，正准备开启度假生活。 构思思路 续写需围绕“打不开门”这一突发状况展开，制造“意料之外又情理之中”的冲突，最后顺利解决并回归温馨氛围，强调家庭温情和冬季度假体验。 布局框架提炼 1）冲突引入：打不开门引发紧张； 2）尝试解决：用不同方法尝试打开门； 3）意外转机：可能通过窗户、备用钥匙等进入； 4）情感升温：在克服困难后享受温馨假期； 5）升华总结：呼应“wonderful memories” 实施要点 保持第一人称语态和温暖家庭语调，适当加入心理和环境描写，体现成长和转变。语言要连贯、自然，情节有转折但积极向上。 承接原文要点 - 场景：冬季、湖边、积雪、小木屋； - 情绪：期待中带有些许忐忑； - 人物关系：一家四口，亲密互动； - 语气：温暖、轻松、有幽默感 注意事项 - 避免生硬突兀的剧情跳跃； - 衔接段首句逻辑连贯； - 体现角色性格和互动（如 Dad 的乐观，Dan 的活泼）； - 注意语法、时态、用词准确。 巧妙设计续写内容 - 以“打不开门”制造小危机，引出家庭合作； - 加入温馨细节如笑话、互动、自然景色； - 转折处设计巧妙，例如备用钥匙藏在花盆下等，增强真实感与温馨感。 二、故事山（Story Mountain）模式分析 Story Mountain结构与原文衔接 故事阶段 内容说明 原文衔接句 开端 设定人物、背景和假期计划 “Christmas was coming…” “My dad suggested that our family…” 上升 描述期待与想象，旅途中的心理变化 “In my mind's eye, I imagined…” 高潮/冲突 到达目的地——打不开门造成突发问题 段首句：Eagerly, Dad put the key in the cabin’s door lock, but… 下降 设法解决问题，出现转机或幽默情节 需在续写中体现，如“found spare key, or climbed through window”等 结尾 问题解决后享受假期，总结本次独特经历 段首句：Although our first day of winter vacation… 三、文中描写与关键点分析表 分析角度 内容说明 原文反映句 人物刻画 Dad 乐观开朗；I 开始犹豫后接受挑战；Dan 活泼；全家氛围亲密温馨 “Dad replied, ‘There’s tons of stuff to do…’” “My brother, Dan, was also interested.” 情感层次 从抵触到接受，再到期待和投入；情感逐层递进 “At first, I was hesitant.” → “Okay, I was in.” → “In my mind’s eye, I imagined…” 关键情节点 1. 爸爸提议去小木屋； 2. 我接受建议并开始期待； 3. 抵达小木屋； 4. 续写中的“打不开门”冲突 “Dad suggested…” “Okay, I was in.” “Before long, the cabin came into view…” 语言特色 生动具体的感官描写，情感自然流露，时态一致（一般过去时） “Crackling rocks beneath the tires…” “Icicles hanging from its eaves…” 关键词分析 lake cabin, winter vacation, skiing, snow, icicles, gravel lane “our 600-square-foot lake cabin” “we can build a bonfire…” 心理描写 起初厌烦→被吸引→旅途中幻想→期待温馨场景 “I wrinkled my nose in disgust.” “In my mind’s eye, I imagined…” 动作描写 收拾行李、上车、想象景象、跳下车奔向木屋 “we piled into our car and hit the road” “we all jumped out and ran to the cabin doorway” 环境描写 雪地、树林、冬天湖景、冰锥装饰的小屋，冬季视觉美感 “bare tree limbs… snow and ice crystals” “long icicles hanging from its eaves” 隐含主题 家庭温情、接受新体验、适应变化、欣赏冬季美 通过家庭互动与景物描写体现 情感转折 从不情愿到接受，从幻想到现实，从突发状况（打不开门）到解决问题 “I wrinkled my nose…” → “Okay, I was in.” → “my eyes fluttered shut…” 空间转换 从家到路上，再到湖边小木屋 “we piled into our car…” → “we turned onto the cabin’s gravel lane…” 时间过渡 从圣诞节前到数日后（假期期间），从白天行车到傍晚抵达 “A few days after Christmas…” “just as the sun was setting…” 3. 动作 / 心理 / 环境描写推荐例句 动作描写 英文例句 翻译 He jiggled the key and tried again, his brows furrowed in confusion. 他晃动着钥匙又试了一次，眉头紧锁，满脸困惑。 We took turns pushing the door, but it wouldn’t budge. 我们轮流推门，但它纹丝不动。 I stomped my feet to keep them warm. 我跺着脚让自己暖和起来。 Dad reached above the doorframe, feeling for a spare key. 爸爸伸手摸门框上方，寻找备用钥匙。 Dan started digging around the porch with a stick. 丹拿根棍子在门廊附近乱扒拉着。 I climbed onto the icy windowsill, trying to peek inside. 我爬上结冰的窗台，试图往里偷看。 Mom was rummaging through her bag, hoping to find another key. 妈妈翻着包，希望能找到另一把钥匙。 We all huddled together for warmth. 我们都挤在一起取暖。 I knocked on the frosted window, listening for any echo inside. 我敲了敲结霜的窗户，试图听到屋内有什么回应。 He kicked at the frozen doormat in frustration. 他沮丧地踢了踢结冰的门垫。 心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 A wave of disappointment washed over me. 一股失望的情绪涌上心头。 I felt a flicker of worry deep in my chest. 我心中泛起一丝担忧。 Dan's excitement began to fade into frustration. 丹的兴奋逐渐转为沮丧。 My heart sank as Dad shook his head. 爸爸摇头时，我的心一下子沉了下来。 I couldn't help but feel a bit foolish for thinking everything would be perfect. 我忍不住觉得自己太天真，以为一切都会顺利。 A sense of adventure started to grow inside me. 一种探险的感觉在我心中悄然滋长。 I held my breath, hoping for a miracle. 我屏住呼吸，希望奇迹出现。 For a moment, I felt like crying, but I quickly pulled myself together. 有一刻我想哭，但我很快镇定下来。 I could sense the tension rising among us. 我感觉我们之间的气氛越来越紧张。 Relief flooded through me as the door finally clicked open. 门终于开了，一种如释重负的感觉涌上心头。 环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 Snow blanketed the ground in a thick, untouched layer. 地面覆盖着厚厚一层未经踩踏的积雪。 The trees stood silent, their branches weighed down by snow. 树木静静矗立，枝头压着沉甸甸的雪。 Frost clung to the windowpanes like silver lace. 霜附在窗户玻璃上，如同银色花边。 The sky was painted with hues of purple and orange as the sun set. 夕阳西下，天空被紫色与橘色染上。 Our footprints crunched in the snow as we approached the cabin. 当我们靠近小屋时，脚印在雪地里发出咯吱声。 A soft wind blew, carrying the scent of pine and cold air. 微风拂过，带来松树与寒气的味道。 Icicles shimmered under the fading sunlight. 冰锥在渐暗的阳光下闪闪发光。 The lake was frozen, reflecting the dim glow of the evening sky. 湖面已结冰，映着傍晚的微光。 The cabin looked like a postcard picture under the snow. 小屋在雪中宛如明信片上的画面。 Cold air nipped at our noses the moment we stepped outside. 我们一出门，冷空气便刺痛了鼻子。 高级词替换整理 常用词 高级替换词 场景示例 cold freezing / frigid / icy “The air was freezing as we stepped onto the porch.” happy joyful / delighted / thrilled “We were thrilled when the key finally worked.” tired exhausted / drained / worn out “We were exhausted after the long drive.” big enormous / massive / spacious “We built a massive snowman by the lake.” look glance / gaze / peer / observe “I peered through the window, searching for light.” 4. 搭配现象可积累语料（生词短语） 常见搭配搭配现象 + 用法解析 短语/搭配 解释与搭配结构 示例句 pile into (a car/room...) 挤进（车/房间等）【动词短语】 We piled into the car and set off. flutter shut （眼睛）渐渐闭上【固定表达】 My eyes fluttered shut during the long drive. wrinkled one's nose 皱鼻子，表示嫌弃【表情动作描写】 I wrinkled my nose in disgust. be greeted by (a sound...) 被某种声音或情景迎接【被动结构】 We were greeted by the sound of crunching snow. feel like doing sth 想要做某事【动词短语】 I felt like crying when the door wouldn’t open. 生词/短语词汇讲解 单词 / 短语 词性 词义 近义词 反义词 例句1 例句2 hesitant adj. 犹豫的，不情愿的 uncertain, reluctant confident I was hesitant at first about going to the cabin. She gave a hesitant smile. crackle v./n. 发出噼啪声；噼啪声 snap, pop silence The fire crackled warmly in the fireplace. The snow crackled under our boots. icicle n. 冰锥 - - Long icicles hung from the cabin roof. I broke off a small icicle from the gutter. flicker v./n. 闪烁，摇曳；一丝（情感） glimmer, flash steady light A flicker of worry crossed his face. The candle flickered in the wind. shiver v./n. 颤抖，发抖；打冷战 tremble, quake remain still I shivered as the wind howled through the trees. A sudden shiver ran down my spine. 5. Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Eagerly, Dad put the key in the cabin's door lock, but it wouldn't turn. He tried again, frowning(现在分词做伴随动作，或情绪刻画), but the lock remained stuck. “Must be frozen,” he muttered. I could feel the cold seeping into my boots(表示冷的描写) as we watched him jiggle the key. Dan stomped his feet to stay warm, while Mom suggested trying the back door. Rushing around(现在分词做伴随动作), we found the back entrance equally jammed(过去分词或adj做补语). As the snow thickened(环境描写), panic rose in my chest. But Dad, ever the problem-solver(同位语解释说明), grabbed a lighter from the glovebox and carefully heated the key. After several tense moments, the lock finally clicked open. We burst inside(动作刻画着急的心情), our breath hanging in the air(独立主格，刻画环境). The cabin was freezing, but somehow familiar(环境描写). I helped Dad start a fire, and the flames crackled to life(环境描写), filling the room with warmth(现在分词做结果状语). Though exhausted(让步状语从句的省略), seeing the darkness outside our window, I felt a flicker of excitement(情绪描写)—our adventure had truly begun(与后文衔接). · 省略句: “Rushing around, we found…”（= While we were rushing） · 现在分词短语作状语: “watching him jiggle the key”；“grabbing a lighter…” · 倒装：“Only after several tense moments did the lock finally click open.” Paragraph 2: Although our first day of winter vacation was more adventurous than expected, we made plenty of wonderful memories that week. Each day brought something new: sledding down powdery hills, skating across the frozen lake, and laughing over card games by the fire(动名词短语并列，衔接原文). At night, the cabin turned into a cozy retreat with the smell of pinewood smoke and hot chocolate in the air(环境描写温馨). One evening, we built a bonfire by the lake. As we huddled close, I glanced at the vast, star-speckled sky and felt a calm I hadn’t known I needed. Dan and I shared stories and jokes, our breath forming clouds in the frigid air(独立主格刻画环境和人物). I realized that winter, despite its stillness and cold, offered a unique kind of beauty, especiall in our lake cabin. What began as reluctant acceptance(主从) turned into genuine joy. That trip, frozen fingers and all(过去分词做), became one of my favorite Christmas memories(点题，衔接原文). Version 2： Paragraph 1: Eagerly, Dad put the key in the cabin's door lock, but it wouldn't turn. The cold air bit at our cheeks(环境描写，无灵主语) as he tried again, twisting the key with more force(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Frozen lock,” he grumbled(情绪刻画), kneeling to examine it(现在分词做伴随动作，你是不是也这样做呢？). I stood shivering, watching my breath cloud the air(现在分词做伴随动作). Dan offered his water bottle, but Dad shook his head. “Let’s warm it up.” We grabbed a towel from the car, heated it with the car heater, and pressed it gently against the lock(动作串). Moments later, with a click that sounded like victory(无灵主语), the door opened. Inside, everything was just as we’d left it in summer(表语从句)—only now coated with a thin film of frost(现在分词做后置定语). My fingers tingled as I helped unpack sleeping bags. As the fireplace roared to life(无灵主语), the tension in my shoulders melted(无灵主语句). Despite the rocky start, I felt a smile tug at my lips(情绪刻画). This winter trip might turn out to be more magical than I’d imagined. · 非谓语动词作结果状语：“pressed it...against the lock, moments later...the door opened.” · 主语从句：“What surprised me was…”（略写于下段） · It 引导形式主语句型：“It felt like victory.” Paragraph 2: Although our first day of winter vacation was more adventurous than expected, we made plenty of wonderful memories that week.One of my favorites was when we built a snow fort together. Dad gave instructions while Dan and I packed snow into blocks, laughing(现在分词做伴随动作) when one side collapsed. That night, we roasted marshmallows by the fire and listened to Dad’s childhood stories. The frozen lake glowed under the moonlight(环境描写) as we skated hand in hand, our laughter echoing across the ice(独立主格刻画人物). In that silence, I realized that family warmth could melt any winter chill(点题). Even small things—like waking up to frosted windows or hearing the wind howl outside—felt special(主动表被动) because we were together here enjoying Christmas vacation(现在分词做伴随动作). I wouldn’t trade that week for anything, not even the warmest beach vacation(点题，与原文衔接). Northern Michigan had gifted us a new kind of holiday: one merged with cold, laughter, and love(过去分词短语做补语，或者整个独立主格). Version 3 Paragraph 1: Eagerly, Dad put the key in the cabin's door lock, but it wouldn't turn. He frowned, pulling off his gloves to get a better grip(现在分词做伴随动作). I watched as he tried again, this time with a grunt of frustration(情绪描写). “It’s probably frozen shut,” Mom said, her voice calm(独立主格刻画人物情绪). “Let’s pour some warm water on it.” We got some from the car’s heater vent and trickled the water around the lock. After a few minutes, with one final twist, the door creaked open. Cold air poured out like a wave(环境描写), but I felt a strange excitement. Inside, the furniture was covered in sheets, the fireplace empty and cold(可以理解成独立主格或 adj做补语). Yet it felt like we’d rediscovered a hidden treasure. We hustled to light a fire, and gradually, warmth returned(无灵主语句). I caught Dan smiling as he tossed a pillow onto the couch. We were finally got it—and ready for the Christmas ahead. · 强调句型：“It was probably the silence and stillness that made me feel we’d found a hidden treasure.” · with复合结构：“with one final twist, the door creaked open” · 现在完成时：“We’ve rediscovered a hidden treasure.” Paragraph 2: Although our first day of winter vacation was more adventurous than expected, we made plenty of wonderful memories that week. We tried snowshoeing for the first time and tumbled over ourselves like penguins. One afternoon, we went exploring in the nearby woods, our boots crunching in the snow(独立主格刻画雪地玩耍). At night, we curled up in blankets, playing board games(现在分词做伴随动作) as the wind howled outside. The best part? Our family was closer than ever. Dan, usually glued to his phone(过去分词后置定语), laughed more than I’d seen in months. Even Dad, always busy at work(adj做补语), spent hours helping us build an ice sculpture. Looking out over the frozen lake(现在分词做伴随动作), I felt grateful for this trip. It reminded me that sometimes, the best moments come from the most unexpected challenges. 语言点总结 高中语法加分点搭配&替换 语法点 示例句 近义表达 搭配短语 强调句 It was the silence that moved me. What really moved me was… It is/was … that … 非谓语 Rushing around, we found… While we rushed… doing sth.作状语 倒装句 Only after the sun set did we rest. We rested only after sunset. only + 状语置前引起倒装 情绪与动作描写亮点词汇（各选词组搭配） 情绪描写： a flicker of excitement, a smile tugged at my lips, tension melted away, panic rose in my chest, I felt a calm I hadn’t known I needed 动作描写： jiggled the key, stomped his feet, burst inside, helped unpack, huddled close, curled up in blankets 词汇升级与积累语料 场景 常见词 升级替换词 同义词 联想词 例句 冷 cold freezing/chilly/numbing icy frostbitten The freezing wind cut through my coat. 累 tired exhausted/drained fatigued weary We were drained after the hike. 笑 laugh giggle/chuckle grin burst into laughter She giggled as Dan fell into the snow. 看 look glance/peer gaze glance sideways I glanced at Dan and smiled. 跑 run dash/rush race sprint We dashed to the cabin door. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $