专题11 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用）高二英语上学期

专题11 书面表达 一、建议信 (24-25高二上·上海同济大学二附中·期中) 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的高中生张华，在本期学校英语报的“TROUBLESHOOTER (排忧解难)”专栏读到James的来信(内容如下)。你通过该专栏给James写一封回信，提供建议，帮助他改变父母的看法，你的回信须包括： (1)你的建议； (2)你的理由。 TroubleshooterI’ve been feeling quite frustrated lately because my parents don’t support me in participating in volunteer activities. They believe that my time should be fully dedicated to studying and preparing for college entrance exams. How can I change their mind? —James ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (24-25高二上·上海奉贤区景秀中学·期中) 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李明，你收到了初中好友约翰的来信，在信中他向你诉说接连的考试，尤其是上次考试的失利让他压力倍增，他最近都在熬夜学习，可是感觉效率不佳，因此向你写信求援。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 结合你的亲身经历给约翰提供一些学习方面的建议缓解约翰的焦虑。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (24-25高二上·上海浦东新区·期中) 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高二学生王磊，刚刚收到你的好朋友李华的邮件。信中提到他和家人计划在即将到来的公共假期来上海旅游，但他对于自驾游还是使用公共交通犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。请你回复邮件，内容需包括： 1.你的建议；2.你建议的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、申请信 (24-25高二上·上海嘉定区·期中) 4．假设你是明启中学的高二学生李华。你家所在的社区图书馆正在招募暑期志愿者。你对此很感兴趣，希望能在高二寒假里有一份难忘的经历。写一封申请信给图书馆的负责人，内容包括： 1.你希望申请这份工作： 2.你申请的理由(可以从能力，经验，个性等方面阐述) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、投稿征文 (24-25高二上·上海吴淞中学·期中) 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生王伟，学校科创社将联合文学社共同举办主题为“科技与生活”的征文活动，要求大家围绕这一主题，介绍能够体现科技进步让生活变得更美好的一件物品或一项技术。你的写作内容须包括： 1.介绍其功能或用途。 2.说说其对生活的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、倡议信 (24-25高二上·上海敬业中学·期中) 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着移动网络的发展，各种手机APP应运而生，给我们的生活带来了极大便利，但许多同学也因此沉迷网络。现学生会发起一项清理手机APP的倡议，如果你只能从以下四个APPs：Wechat，Taobao，E-dictionary，Glory of Kings (mobile game)中保留两个，你会如何选择，并说明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、其他应用文 (24-25高二上·上海松江二中·期中) 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 中国进口博览会 (China International Import Expo，简称CIIE或进博会) 吸引了世界各国的企业来到上海。你是明启中学的学生李明，想代表学校在进博会假期中组织一支学生志愿者服务队。请起草一份策划案，内容包括： 1.你为什么要组建服务队？ 2.你的队伍能够提供哪些志愿者服务？ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (24-25高二上·上海青浦高级中学·期中) 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是高中生李明，你非常喜欢小动物，很想领养一只小狗。可你的父母认为养狗会影响你的学习，坚决不同意，为此你们已经争执过几次。你很想说服你的父母，又不想再次冲突，于是给他们写了一封信。你在信中提到了： 父母的顾虑有哪些? 你坚持的理由是什么? 如果能如愿，你会怎么做? (信中不要提及真实姓名及个人信息) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 六、开放性写作 (24-25高二上·上海建平中学·期中) 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学高二学生李磊，你所在的学校公益社团打算开展慰问特殊学校孩子的新年活动。目前社团正向全体社员征集对于两个备选方案的意见。你很感兴趣，写了封邮件给社长表达你的看法。 你的邮件须包含以下内容： 1.说明你的选择。 2.通过比较下表中的信息说明你选择的理由。 请你以此为题，写一篇150字左右的英语作文。 内容 方案一 方案二 活动时间 某个周日上午 某个周三下午4S课 活动地点 特殊学校 明启中学 活动参与者 公益社团成员特殊学校学生家长 公益社团成员部分明启中学教师 活动内容 举行小型趣味运动会 参观明启中学和参加学校社团活动 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (24-25高二上·上海卢湾中学·期中) 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学的李华，本学期你参加了英美文学选修课，老师提供了两种考核方式供大家选择。请给老师写一封邮件，说说你的选择。 你的邮件需包括： 1.你所选择的考核方式： 2.通过比较， 说明你选择的理由。 考核方式 课堂考试 学期论文(term paper) 完成时间 2小时 2周 内容 老师限定 可任选一个你感兴趣的课题 地点 课堂上 课外 完成方式 独立完成，不得带参考书 可讨论，并可查阅相关资料 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题11 书面表达 一、建议信 (24-25高二上·上海同济大学二附中·期中) 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的高中生张华，在本期学校英语报的“TROUBLESHOOTER (排忧解难)”专栏读到James的来信(内容如下)。你通过该专栏给James写一封回信，提供建议，帮助他改变父母的看法，你的回信须包括： (1)你的建议； (2)你的理由。 TroubleshooterI’ve been feeling quite frustrated lately because my parents don’t support me in participating in volunteer activities. They believe that my time should be fully dedicated to studying and preparing for college entrance exams. How can I change their mind? —James ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear James, I understand the frustration you’re feeling about your parents not supporting your participation in volunteer activities. It’s a common challenge for many students to balance their academic responsibilities with extracurricular interests. My suggestion is to approach your parents with a well-thought-out plan. Explain to them how volunteering can actually complement your studies. For instance, through volunteer work, you can develop important life skills such as time management, problem-solving, and teamwork, which are all valuable both academically and in later life. Moreover, you could propose a compromise. Offer to dedicate specific times to volunteering, while ensuring that your study schedule remains a priority. Show them through your actions that you can manage both effectively. Remember to be respectful and understanding of their concerns. With patience and a clear plan, you might be able to change their perspective. Best regards, Zhang Hua Mingqi High School 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于在本期学校英语报的“TROUBLESHOOTER (排忧解难)”专栏读到James的来信情况，通过该专栏给James写一封回信，提供建议，帮助他改变父母的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：Moreover → What’s more 提出：propose→ put forward 观点：perspective→ viewpoint 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With patience and a clear plan, you might be able to change their perspective. 拓展句：If you are patient and have a clear plan, you might be able to change their perspective. 【点睛】【高分句型1】For instance, through volunteer work, you can develop important life skills such as time management, problem-solving, and teamwork, which are all valuable both academically and in later life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】It’s a common challenge for many students to balance their academic responsibilities with extracurricular interests.（运用了It作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正主语的固定句型。） (24-25高二上·上海奉贤区景秀中学·期中) 2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李明，你收到了初中好友约翰的来信，在信中他向你诉说接连的考试，尤其是上次考试的失利让他压力倍增，他最近都在熬夜学习，可是感觉效率不佳，因此向你写信求援。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 结合你的亲身经历给约翰提供一些学习方面的建议缓解约翰的焦虑。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear John,    I’m sorry to hear about the stress you’re experiencing due to the recent exams. I’ve been through similar situations, and I understand how overwhelming it can be. Here are a few suggestions that might help you.     Firstly, create a study schedule with specific goals for each session. This helps manage time better and reduce the feeling of being overwhelmed. Secondly, try to identify the areas where you struggle the most and focus on them. Break down your study sessions into manageable chunks and take regular breaks to keep your mind fresh. Additionally, practice relaxation techniques such as deep breathing or meditation to help manage anxiety. Lastly, remember that it’s okay to seek help from teachers or friends if you’re struggling with certain topics.     I hope these tips help you feel more at ease. Take care and keep me updated.     Yours,    Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李明的身份，给好友约翰写信，提供学习建议并帮助他缓解考试压力。 【详解】1.词汇积累 压力：stress → pressure 建议：suggestion → recommendation 专注于：focus on → concentrate on 此外：additionally → furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, create a study schedule with specific goals for each session. This helps manage time better and reduce the feeling of being overwhelmed. 拓展句：Firstly, create a study schedule with specific goals for each session, which helps manage time better and reduce the feeling of being overwhelmed. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are a few suggestions that might help you.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I hope these tips help you feel more at ease.(hope后运用了省略that的宾语从句) (24-25高二上·上海浦东新区·期中) 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高二学生王磊，刚刚收到你的好朋友李华的邮件。信中提到他和家人计划在即将到来的公共假期来上海旅游，但他对于自驾游还是使用公共交通犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。请你回复邮件，内容需包括： 1.你的建议；2.你建议的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Li Hua, I am so glad to hear that your family has planned a visit to Shanghai during the next public holiday! Welcome! Since you are hesitant about traveling by car or using public transportation, I am writing to give you some advice. In my opinion, compared with using public transportations, driving a car here is a good choice, On one hand, traffic rules in Shanghai are not friendly at all to cars from other cities. You might be politely refused by a policeman when entering the inner-ring areas if you drive a car. On the other hand, the public transportation in Shanghai can meet all your needs. Boasting the longest underground railways in the world, the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience. Besides, it is economical and convenient to take the city buses to tour around. Hopefully, you can have a good time in Shanghai. Yours, Wang Lei 【导语】本文是一篇应用文。你的好朋友李华给你发来邮件，信中提到他和家人计划在即将到来的公共假期来上海旅游，但他对于自驾游还是使用公共交通犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。要求考生就此进行回复。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 建议：advice→suggestions 在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned 满足：meet→satisfy 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Boasting the longest underground railways in the world, the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience. 拓展句：Boasting the longest underground railways in the world, the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience which can give you an unforgettable memory. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You might be politely refused by a policeman when entering the inner-ring areas if you drive a car.(运用了when引导的状语从句的省略和if引导的状语从句) 【高分句型2】Boasting the longest underground railways in the world, the metro service is bound to provide you with a satisfactory travel experience. (运用了非谓语动词作状语) 二、申请信 (24-25高二上·上海嘉定区·期中) 4．假设你是明启中学的高二学生李华。你家所在的社区图书馆正在招募暑期志愿者。你对此很感兴趣，希望能在高二寒假里有一份难忘的经历。写一封申请信给图书馆的负责人，内容包括： 1.你希望申请这份工作： 2.你申请的理由(可以从能力，经验，个性等方面阐述) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, a second-year student at Ming Qi High School. I am writing to apply for the summer volunteer position at our community library, as I am keen on having a memorable experience during my vacation. I believe I am a suitable candidate due to my strong organizational skills and previous volunteer experience. I have worked as a volunteer at a school library, where I enhanced my ability to manage books systematically and assist readers patiently. Additionally, I am enthusiastic about reading and sharing knowledge with others. I would be grateful if you could consider my application. I look forward to contributing positively to the library. Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向社区图书馆的负责人申请暑期志愿者岗位，并阐述申请理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 合适的：suitable→appropriate 提高：enhance→improve 系统地：systematically→methodically 感激的：grateful→appreciative 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am Li Hua, a second-year student at Ming Qi High School. 拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is a second-year student at Ming Qi High School. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to apply for the summer volunteer position at our community library, as I am keen on having a memorable experience during my vacation. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】I have worked as a volunteer at a school library, where I enhanced my ability to manage books systematically and assist readers patiently. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) 三、投稿征文 (24-25高二上·上海吴淞中学·期中) 5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生王伟，学校科创社将联合文学社共同举办主题为“科技与生活”的征文活动，要求大家围绕这一主题，介绍能够体现科技进步让生活变得更美好的一件物品或一项技术。你的写作内容须包括： 1.介绍其功能或用途。 2.说说其对生活的影响。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Wonders of Smart Home Systems My name is Wang Wei, a student from Mingqi High School. I am thrilled to participate in the essay competition jointly organized by our school’s Science and Innovation Club and Literature Society, with the theme “Technology and Life.” In my essay, I would like to introduce smart home systems, which have revolutionized our daily lives. These systems integrate various household appliances, allowing for remote control through smartphones or voice commands. From adjusting the lighting and temperature to securing the home with smart locks, these systems offer unparalleled convenience. The impact of smart home technology on our lives is profound. They not only enhance our comfort but also contribute to energy efficiency and security. By automating routine tasks, they free up our time, enabling us to focus on more meaningful activities. In conclusion, smart home systems embody the essence of how technological advancements make life better. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。学校科创社将联合文学社共同举办主题为“科技与生活”的征文活动，要求考生围绕写一篇征文，介绍能够体现科技进步让生活变得更美好的一件物品或一项技术。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→exhilarated 举办：organize →hold 主题：theme→topic 无与伦比的：unparalleled→incomparable 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am thrilled to participate in the essay competition jointly organized by our school’s Science and Innovation Club and Literature Society, with the theme “Technology and Life.” 拓展句：I am thrilled to participate in the essay competition , which is jointly organized by our school’s Science and Innovation Club and Literature Society, with the theme “Technology and Life.” 【点睛】【高分句型1】In my essay, I would like to introduce smart home systems, which have revolutionized our daily lives.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】These systems integrate various household appliances, allowing for remote control through smartphones or voice commands. （运用了现在分词作状语的结构） 四、倡议信 (24-25高二上·上海敬业中学·期中) 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 随着移动网络的发展，各种手机APP应运而生，给我们的生活带来了极大便利，但许多同学也因此沉迷网络。现学生会发起一项清理手机APP的倡议，如果你只能从以下四个APPs：Wechat，Taobao，E-dictionary，Glory of Kings (mobile game)中保留两个，你会如何选择，并说明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】With the development of mobile network, various kinds of mobile apps come into being, which brings great convenience to our life, but many students are addicted to the network, for example, some students are keen to use mobile Taobao for online shopping, while others are addicted to an online game called Glory of Kings. As for me, I think app should not only let us contact with others, but also serve as a learning tool, so I choose Wechat, which allows me  to communicate with my family and friends. In addition, I also think E-dictionary is a useful app, through which I can look up unfamiliar new words and increase my English vocabulary. In view of the reasons above, I think Wechat and E-dictionary are the two kinds of apps that do good to us students. 【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求选择两个APP并说明理由。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求选择两个APP并说明理由：随着移动网络的发展，各种手机APP应运而生，给我们的生活带来了极大便利，但许多同学也因此沉迷网络。现学生会发起一项清理手机APP的倡议，如果你只能从以下四个APPs：Wechat，Taobao，E-dictionary，Glory of Kings (mobile game)中保留两个，你会如何选择，并说明理由。时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； mobile network（移动网络），development（发展），convenience（便利），useful（有用的）， unfamiliar（不熟悉的）及various（不同的）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有come into being（应运而生），be addicted to（沉溺于），serve as（充当），contact with (与……联系)，look up（查阅），be keen to（热衷于）以及do good to(有利于），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“With the development of mobile network, various kinds of mobile apps come into being, which brings great convenience to our life”，“so I choose Wechat, which allows me  to communicate with my family and friends.”及“I also think E-dictionary is a useful app, through which I can look up unfamiliar new words and increase my English vocabulary.”，定语从句“In view of the reasons above, I think Wechat and E-dictionary are the two kinds of apps that do good to us students.”，宾语从句“As for me, I think app should not only let us contact with others, but also serve as a learning tool”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 五、其他应用文 (24-25高二上·上海松江二中·期中) 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 中国进口博览会 (China International Import Expo，简称CIIE或进博会) 吸引了世界各国的企业来到上海。你是明启中学的学生李明，想代表学校在进博会假期中组织一支学生志愿者服务队。请起草一份策划案，内容包括： 1.你为什么要组建服务队？ 2.你的队伍能够提供哪些志愿者服务？ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Concerning the reasons why I want to build up this service team, I’d like to list some as follows. Above all, China International Import Expo attracts many businesses from all over the world, which is our honor. So it is our duty to offer considerate service to it. In addition, it is a good chance for us to strengthen our ability and widen our eyes. What can we do? On the one hand, we can give volunteer guide to foreigners. It will be a necessity because the site is too big and complex for foreigners. On the other hand, to help organize various activities is also a good idea. 【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生起草一份策划案，对代表学校在进博会假期中组织一支学生志愿者服务队进行一次策划。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.介绍你为什么要组建服务队? 2.介绍你的队伍能够提供哪些志愿者服务? 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） build up this service team; attracts many businesses; from all over the world; offer considerate service to it; strengthen our ability; widen our eyes; give volunteer guide; too big and complex; help organize various activities 第三步：连词成句 1. Concerning the reasons why I want to build up this service team, I’d like to list some as follows. 2. Above all, China International Import Expo attracts many businesses from all over the world, which is our honor. 3. So it is our duty to offer considerate service to it. 4. In addition, it is a good chance for us to strengthen our ability and widen our eyes. 5. On the one hand, we can give volunteer guide to foreigners. 6. It will be a necessity because the site is too big and complex for foreigners. 7. On the other hand, to help organize various activities is also a good idea. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：Above all 2.表并列补充关系：In addition 3.表转折对比关系： On the one hand…,On the other hand… 4.表因果关系：Because, So 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Concerning the reasons why I want to build up this service team, I’d like to list some as follows.（why引导的定语从句） [高分句型2]. So it is our duty to offer considerate service to it.（it作形式主语） [高分句型3]. On the other hand, to help organize various activities is also a good idea.（to do不定式作主语） (24-25高二上·上海青浦高级中学·期中) 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是高中生李明，你非常喜欢小动物，很想领养一只小狗。可你的父母认为养狗会影响你的学习，坚决不同意，为此你们已经争执过几次。你很想说服你的父母，又不想再次冲突，于是给他们写了一封信。你在信中提到了： 父母的顾虑有哪些? 你坚持的理由是什么? 如果能如愿，你会怎么做? (信中不要提及真实姓名及个人信息) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear parents,       I know you oppose my idea of adopting a puppy, and I understand your concerns. You think that having a dog will distract me from my study, and you’re afraid that I’ll spend too much time on it instead of focusing on schoolwork.       But I love animals deeply. A dog can bring so much joy and comfort to my life. When I feel stressed during my study, playing with it can be a great relaxation. Also, having a dog will teach me how to be responsible.       If you allow me to have a dog, I will make a strict schedule. I’ll ensure that I finish all my study tasks first and then take care of the dog. I’ll make sure that having a dog will not have a negative impact on my study. I hope you can understand me. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就自己想领养一只小狗这件事给父母写了一封信，其内容包括：父母的顾虑、你坚持的理由和如果能如愿，你会怎么做。 【详解】1.词汇积累 反对： oppose → be against 专注于：focus on → concentrate on 快乐：joy → happiness 完成：finish → accomplish 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： A dog can bring so much joy and comfort to my life. 拓展句：It is obvious that a dog can bring so much joy and comfort to my life. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When I feel stressed during my study, playing with it can be a great relaxation. （运用when引导的时间状语从句以及动名词短语作主语） 【高分句型2】 I’ll ensure that I finish all my study tasks first and then take care of the dog. （运用了that引导的宾语从句） 六、开放性写作 (24-25高二上·上海建平中学·期中) 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学高二学生李磊，你所在的学校公益社团打算开展慰问特殊学校孩子的新年活动。目前社团正向全体社员征集对于两个备选方案的意见。你很感兴趣，写了封邮件给社长表达你的看法。 你的邮件须包含以下内容： 1.说明你的选择。 2.通过比较下表中的信息说明你选择的理由。 请你以此为题，写一篇150字左右的英语作文。 内容 方案一 方案二 活动时间 某个周日上午 某个周三下午4S课 活动地点 特殊学校 明启中学 活动参与者 公益社团成员特殊学校学生家长 公益社团成员部分明启中学教师 活动内容 举行小型趣味运动会 参观明启中学和参加学校社团活动 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Chairman, I am Li Lei, a sophomore in Mingqi High School and a member of our Community Service Club. I am writing to express my preference for the options to visit the special school kids for the New Year activity. I have carefully considered both options and decided to support Plan One. Firstly, Plan One takes place on a Sunday morning which allows more flexibility for both students and parents to participate without the pressures of weekday commitments. Additionally, holding the event at the special school rather than at our own school will provide a more inclusive environment, making it easier for the special school students to join in. Furthermore, a small-scale fun sports event will encourage interaction between our club members and the children, promoting a sense of community and empathy. I believe choosing Plan One will best serve our purpose of giving joy and inclusivity. Best regards, Li Lei 【导语】本篇是开放性作文。你所在的学校公益社团打算开展慰问特殊学校孩子的新年活动。目前社团正向全体社员征集对于两个备选方案的意见，要求考生写了封邮件给社长表达你的看法，说明你的选择以及通过比较表中的信息说明你选择的理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 表达：express→show 参加：participate→engage in 另外：additionally→furthermore 活动：event→activity 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Additionally, holding the event at the special school rather than at our own school will provide a more inclusive environment, making it easier for the special school students to join in. 拓展句：Additionally, because holding the event at the special school rather than at our own school provides a more inclusive environment, it will make it easier for the special school students to join in. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstly, Plan One takes place on a Sunday morning which allows more flexibility for both students and parents to participate without the pressures of weekday commitments.(which引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]I believe choosing Plan One will best serve our purpose of giving joy and inclusivity.(省略that的宾语从句) (24-25高二上·上海卢湾中学·期中) 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学的李华，本学期你参加了英美文学选修课，老师提供了两种考核方式供大家选择。请给老师写一封邮件，说说你的选择。 你的邮件需包括： 1.你所选择的考核方式： 2.通过比较， 说明你选择的理由。 考核方式 课堂考试 学期论文(term paper) 完成时间 2小时 2周 内容 老师限定 可任选一个你感兴趣的课题 地点 课堂上 课外 完成方式 独立完成，不得带参考书 可讨论，并可查阅相关资料 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear teacher, I am writing to inform you that I have decided to choose the term paper as my assessment method for this semester’s British and American literature course. The reason why I choose the term paper over the in- class examination is that I believe the term paper offers me more flexibility and opportunities to explore the subject in depth. Firstly, the term paper allows me to choose a topic that I am interested in, which I believe will make the learning process more enjoyable and effective. On the other hand, the in - class examination is limited to the content specified by the teacher, which may not be as engaging for me. Secondly, the term paper gives me two weeks to complete it, during which I can discuss with others and consult relevant materials. This will enable me to gain a deeper understanding of the topic and produce a more comprehensive paper. In contrast, the in - class examination only allows two hours for completion and prohibits the use of reference books, which may limit my ability to demonstrate my full understanding of the subject. In conclusion, I believe the term paper is a more suitable assessment method for me as it allows me to explore the subject in depth and at my own pace. Thank you for your understanding and support. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于本学期你参加了英美文学选修课，老师提供了两种考核方式供大家选择这一情况，给老师写一封邮件，说说你的选择。 【详解】1.词汇积累 方法，方式：method→ way 提供：offers→ provides 获得：gain→ obtain 禁止：prohibit→ forbid 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Secondly, the term paper gives me two weeks to complete it, during which I can discuss with others and consult relevant materials. This will enable me to gain a deeper understanding of the topic and produce a more comprehensive paper. 拓展句：Secondly, the term paper gives me two weeks to complete it, during which I can discuss with others and consult relevant materials, which will enable me to gain a deeper understanding of the topic and produce a more comprehensive paper. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason why I choose the term paper over the in- class examination is that I believe the term paper offers me more flexibility and opportunities to explore the subject in depth.（运用了why引导的定语从句以及that引导的表语从句。） 【高分句型2】On the other hand, the in - class examination is limited to the content specified by the teacher, which may not be as engaging for me.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $