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2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Teenage problems 单元话题（青少年问题）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．每年的5月25日是全国心理健康日。为促进学生们快乐学习、健康成长，我校英语俱乐部近期开展了以Less Stress, Better Life为题的征文比赛。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，简要阐述中学生压力大的原因、提出恰当的解压方法并谈谈你对压力的看法。 压力起因 课业繁重，经常熬夜，…… 父母严格，期望高，…… 解压方法 （1）向老师求助……； （2）运动锻炼，听音乐放松身心； （3）…… 你的观点 （1）压力不总是糟糕的，是生活的一部分。 （2）…… 注意事项： 1．根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥； 2．要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3．文中不得出现真实人名或学校信息； 4．词数不少于90词，标题及开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Less Stress, Better Life Nowadays, we teenagers have a lot of stress while growing up. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Less Stress, Better Life Nowadays, we teenagers have a lot of stress while growing up. We have heavy schoolwork and often stay up late to finish it. Our parents are strict with us and expect too much, which adds more pressure. To reduce stress, we can ask teachers for help when facing difficulties. Exercising regularly and listening to music are also good ways to relax. Besides, talking with friends or sharing feelings with family can make us feel better. In my opinion, stress isn’t always bad. It’s a part of life and can push us to work harder. However, we should learn to manage it properly. By finding the right balance, we can study happily and grow up healthily. Let’s embrace a less stressful life! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主。 ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括压力的起因、解压方法以及个人对压力的看法。考生需注意围绕这些要点展开，适当补充细节，使文章内容丰富、逻辑连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点明中学生面临压力的现状，引出下文对压力起因、解压方法及个人看法的讨论。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先分析中学生压力大的原因，如课业繁重、父母期望高等；接着提出有效的解压方法，例如向老师求助、运动锻炼、听音乐等；最后阐述自己对压力的看法，指出压力并非总是负面的，而是生活的一部分。 第三步，书写结语。总结全文，重申压力管理的重要性，呼吁同学们积极应对压力，追求快乐生活。 [亮点词汇] ① a lot of 许多 ② Exercising regularly 定期锻炼 ③ expect too much 期望过高 ④ add more pressure 增加更多压力 ⑤ To reduce stress 为了减轻压力 ⑥ a part of life 生活的一部分 ⑦ face difficulties 面对困难 [高分句型] ①However, we should learn to manage it properly. (省略that的宾语从句) ②By finding the right balance, we can study happily and grow up healthily. (介词短语作方式状语) 2．九年级的学习生活紧张又忙碌，掌握科学学习方法对同学们至关重要。为此，你校英文校报针对九年级学生开展了相关调查，以下是调查结果，请据此为校报撰写一篇英文报道。 要求： 1. 报道内容须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Recently, our school English newspaper did a survey on the learning methods of Grade 9 students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Recently, our school English newspaper did a survey on the learning methods of Grade 9 students. Among them, 90 students prefer doing exercises to improve their grades. However, doing too many exercises can stop them from doing deeper thinking. 20 students enjoy watching educational videos. While these videos help with difficult points, they can also make it challenging to stay focused. 25 students think learning apps are useful. These apps allow them to study freely. But spending too much time looking at screens can hurt their eyes. 60 students find reviewing their notes helpful for organizing their knowledge, but how useful it is depends on how good their notes are. What’s more, 30 students reported using other learning methods like joining study groups. In a word, it’s important for Grade 9 students to choose the right learning methods to manage their busy school life. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：说明文，基于调研结果的报道，客观总结并分析学生的学习方法； ② 时态：以一般现在时为主（描述事实和习惯），也使用一般过去时（表述调查行为）； ③ 结构：逻辑清晰，按调查结果逐条列出，最后做出总结。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出背景，说明调查目的和对象（九年级学生学习方法）； 第二步：按照数据分类描述四种主要学习方法的优缺点（做题、看视频、学习App、复习笔记）及其他方法； 第三步：总结观点，强调选择合适方法的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ① prefer doing sth. 更喜欢做某事 ② stop sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事 ③ help with 帮忙做…… ④ spend...doing 花……做…… ⑤ depend on 取决于…… ⑥ what’s more 另外 ⑦ in a word 总之 [高分句型] ① Among them, 90 students prefer doing exercises to improve their grades.（介词短语+动词不定式表目的） ② While these videos help with difficult points, they can also make it challenging to stay focused.（while引导让步状语从句） ③ 25 students think learning apps are useful. （宾语从句） ④ It’s important for Grade 9 students to choose the right learning methods.（It作形式主语结构） 3．人工智能（AI）技术的飞速发展使我们的学习和生活更为高效和便捷，同时，也带来了一定的挑战和问题。学校校刊为此展开了问卷调查，请根据下页表格内容简要描述部分调查结果，并阐述你自己的观点。 Advantages Disadvantages ◇find information quickly ◇make students less creative ◇make learning more interesting ◇have trouble communicating with others … … 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 With the development of science, AI is now widely used. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of science, AI is now widely used. But every coin has two sides. AI helps us a lot in our life, but it brings us some problems. In general, AI is very useful. It can help us find information quickly. With the wide use of AI, learning is becoming more and more interesting. However, students may become less creative because they can always get answers easily with the help of AI. What’s worse, they may have trouble communicating with others gradually if they pay more attention to computers and their smart phones. In my opinion, I think AI is helpful. But we should use it wisely and carefully. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：先指出 AI 广泛应用且利弊并存，再分别阐述优缺点，最后总结应合理使用 AI，逻辑清晰，贴近实际。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明 AI 应用广泛且利弊皆有，引出话题。 第二步，先讲 AI 能快速获取信息、让学习更有趣等优点，再指出其导致学生创造力下降、影响沟通等问题。 第三步，结尾表明认可 AI 价值，强调需合理使用。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of随着……发展 ②in general一般来说 ③have trouble doing sth做某事有困难 [高分句型] ①AI helps us a lot in our life, but it brings us some problems. （but 连接的并列句） ②students may become less creative because they can always get answers easily with the help of AI. （because引导的原因状语从句） 4．智能手机已成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分，它们给我们的生活带来了极大的便捷，同时也带来了一些挑战。请根据以下三个问题提示，以“Smartphones in our life”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈你对智能手机的看法? 提示问题： 1. How important are smartphones? 2. What do you usually do with a smartphone? 3. How should we use smartphones? 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Smartphones in our lives Smartphones are now an important part of our lives. They bring not only great convenience but also some challenges. As for me, a smartphone is helpful in many ways. I often use it to communicate with others, search information and listen to music. With my smartphone, I can easily find useful study materials online. This helps me do better in my schoolwork. To make smartphones better serve us, we should be mindful of our screen time to protect our eyes. Also, we need to make sure that our personal information is safe. All in all, using a smartphone wisely is the key to a joyful life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍手机的重要性； 第二步，介绍自己使用手机的用途； 第三步，介绍我们应该如何使用手机。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②be mindful of注意 ③all in all总而言之 ④not only...but also...不仅……而且…… [高分句型] Also, we need to make sure that our personal information is safe. (that引导宾语从句) 5．最近，你对学生的健康做了问卷调查，下面是调查中发现的主要问题及成因，请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，并提出一些建议。 问题 成因 建议 心理健康 感到紧张 (75%) 作业太多； 没有足够时间做自己喜欢的事情。 找时间放松 …… …… …… 身体健康 眼睛近视 (65%) 不好的学习习惯； 看电视太多。 …… 变胖 (8%) …… …… …… …… …… 要求： (1)文章必须包括表格中的全部内容，可适当增加细节； (2)文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)词数70左右。 参考词汇：mental health心理健康；physical health身体健康；stressed out非常焦虑不安的；get near-sighted眼睛近视 Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems on mental and physical health.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems on mental and physical health. About mental health, 75 percent of the students feel stressed out. They have too much homework to do and don’t have enough time to do what they enjoy doing. I think they need to find time to relax and try to make a balance between work and play. As for physical health, 65 percent of the students don’t have good study habits and they watch TV too much, so they get near-sighted. They should do homework or read in a correct way. Some students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly take exercise. It’s better for them to have more healthy food and do some exercise every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对调查的介绍； 第二步，针对心理和身体两方面介绍调查结果并给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①stressed out 紧张的 ②make a balance 保持平衡 ③in a correct way 用一种正确的方式 [高分句型] ①They have too much homework to do and don’t have enough time to do what they enjoy doing.（并列结构和宾语从句） ②Some students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly take exercise. （原因状语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．近年来，出国留学越来越普及，并且开始出现留学低龄化现象。不少家庭在孩子的初中阶段就要面临选择。请你根据下表提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的立场、观点和选择。 Advantages ◆learn English in a native environment ◆know about western cultures ◆… Disadvantages ◆not independent enough ◆miss family so much ◆cost a lot of money ◆… 要求： （1）短文中必须包括表格中的相应要点，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； （3）词数：100词左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Studying Abroad, Yes or No? Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among middle school students. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Studying Abroad, Yes or No? Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among middle school students. There are many advantages. Studying abroad is more helpful to foreign language learning. Students can learn English in a native environment. Besides, students can know more about western cultures. What’s more, they can learn more modern technology. But there are also some disadvantages of going abroad. For example, teenagers are not independent enough. They miss their family so much. They can’t take good care of themselves because of lacking of life experience, and they feel lonely. And most importantly, it costs a lot of money for them to study abroad. In my opinion, the key to one’s future development is not where you study but how and what you study. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍出国留学的优势； 第二步，描述出国留学的劣势； 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more popular 越来越受欢迎 ②foreign language learning 外语学习 ③native environment 母语环境 ④western cultures 西方文化 ⑤modern technology 现代技术 [高分句型] ①Studying abroad is more helpful to foreign language learning.（动名词短语作主语） ②In my opinion, the key to one’s future development is not where you study but how and what you study.（not...but...连接两个表语从句） 7．你生活中有烦恼，学习有压力吗？我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据下图提示以“How to Solve our Stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 注意： 1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息； 3. 不少于80个单词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Solve our Stress We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Solve our Stress We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them? First, I think we should take some exercise, so we can keep healthy. Second, we should often communicate with our parents, teachers and friends by telling them about our problems or stress. Third, we should try to get along well with people around us. Fourth, we need to relax ourselves. For example, we can listen to music, do some reading and so on. What’s more, we must try our best to study hard and be brave to face our grades. Finally, do something that interests us. It will make us feel much better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：围绕如何解决压力给出建议，清晰呈现多个解决办法 。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明生活有压力和问题，引出如何解决的话题。 第二步，依次阐述解决压力的多种方式，如锻炼、沟通、相处、放松、学习、做感兴趣之事等 。 [亮点词汇] ①take some exercise 做些运动   ②communicate with 和……交流   ③get along well with 和……友好相处   [高分句型] ①How should we solve them? (特殊疑问句，“how”引导，用于提出问题 ) ②we can listen to music, do some reading and so on. (and并列多个动词短语作谓语 ) 8．《中国青少年屏幕使用报告》显示：初中生的日均手机使用时间超3小时，68%的学生因此减少了体育运动和书籍阅读时间。我校英语社团因此发起“Less Screen Time, Brighter Future”的征文活动，请你根据自己的生活体验和日常观察，从个人、家庭或社会角度，分析和描述上述现象背后可能的原因，并提出1—2条具体建议。 要求： 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： ▶personal needs (have fun and relax, too tired to read/exercise, a feeling of satisfaction...) ▶life pressure (a sense of belonging, pressure from study...) ▶family environment (kids will follow...) ▶social environment (many interesting things online, too busy to take care of...) ▶advice (in my opinion, non-screen activities, join the reading/sports club, set app limits, spend more time with kids...) A recent survey shows that 68% of students spend too much time on their phones. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A recent survey shows that 68% of students spend too much time on their phones. There are several reasons for this. For personal needs, students use phones to have fun and relax after tiring studies, so they are too tired to read or exercise. Socially, there are many interesting things online, attracting them a lot. To solve this, we can join reading or sports clubs to replace phone time. Families can also set app limits together and spend more time doing activities like hiking. Less screen time will bring us a brighter future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章的写作要点已在题目中给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引用数据点明话题。 第二步，说明这种现象产生的原因。 第三步，提出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time on在……上花费时间 ②attract吸引 ③replace替代 [高分句型] ①To solve this, we can join reading or sports clubs to replace phone time.(不定式表目的) 9．请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 Jack的妈妈对青春期的Jack在成长中面临的诸多问题感到十分担忧。假如你是Dr. Lin，受Jack妈妈之托，请你根据思维导图内容提示给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议。 作文要求: （1）包含题干中的要点； （2）逻辑流畅，行文完整，不少于80词； （3）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 Dear Jack, Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dr. Lin 【答案】例文: Dear Jack,   Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much. You spend too much time on computer games and phones. Besides, you hardly communicate with your family and friends. I have some advice for you. Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. In addition, more communication also works. All in all, it is necessary for you to think about your parents’ feelings and try your best to deal with the problems. Try to share the housework with them. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Wishing you a happy and successful junior high school life! Yours, Dr. Lin 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点需根据思维导图提示，给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己知道对方有一些问题，谈论对方的问题并给出建议； 第二步，表达对对方的期望； 第三步，书写结尾，祝愿对方有一个开心且成功的初中生活。 [亮点词汇] ①be worried about对……担忧 ②spend time on sth在某事上花时间 ③communicate with sb.与某人交流 [高分句型] ①I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much.（that引导宾语从句） ②Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. （so that引导状语从句） 10．请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions?”的英语短文。 内容要点：1.明确表明你是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定?” 2.优点：培养青少年的独立性 (independence)，培养青少年责任感 (develop a sense of responsibility) 3.缺点：青少年缺乏经验易出错，引发家庭矛盾。 4.优缺点只能选择一种写。 要求：1.字迹工整，段落层次清晰； 2.不必逐字逐句翻译； 3.词数80词以上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions? In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions. Allowing teenagers to make decisions can bring many benefits. Firstly, it helps cultivate their independence. When they face choices and solve problems on their own, they gradually learn to rely on themselves. Secondly, it enables them to develop a sense of responsibility. Since they make the decisions, they will be more willing to take responsibility for the consequences. In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，探讨是否应允许青少年自主做决定； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应围绕是否支持青少年自主做决定，选择阐述优点或缺点，注意突出写作重点，不必逐字逐句翻译。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接提出是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定”的观点； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。若选择支持，则从培养青少年的独立性、责任感等优点方面进行论述；若选择反对，则从青少年缺乏经验易出错、引发家庭矛盾等缺点方面进行论述； 第三步，书写结语。总结自己的观点，强调其重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①on one’s own独自地 ②be willing to愿意 ③take responsibility for对……负责 ④in conclusion总之 [高分句型] In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth.（动名词短语作主语） 能力综合实践5篇 11．科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。 要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业 伤害眼睛，不利健康 网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生 建议 适度使用智能手机 多花时间与家人、朋友交流 …… Boys and girls, With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Boys and girls, With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people. Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害； 第二步，提出远离手机的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 ②as a result结果 ③switch off关闭 [高分句型] ①As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. (so...that引导的结果状语从句) ②Switch them off when we study. (祈使句，when引导的时间状语从句) 12．青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 注意事项： 1.邮件内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合原意； 2.词数在100个左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents? Can you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己遇到了问题； 第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议； 第三步，书写结尾，期待得到回信。 [亮点词汇] ①argue with sb.和某人争吵 ②care about关心 ③take painting lessons上绘画课 [高分句型] ①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作) ②I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式) 13．中考在即，在紧张备考的同时，睡眠健康同样不容忽视。假设你是初中生李华，你校英语社为了解学生的睡眠情况，帮助同学们进一步关注睡眠健康，开展了“Sleep Well, Live Better”的主题活动，并进行了问卷调查。请基于以下调查表，撰写一篇英文投稿，反馈你的睡眠情况，分享你对睡眠健康的看法，并谈一谈你的下一步计划。 注意： (1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 (2) 词数80左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, I took part in the school survey about sleeping habits. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Recently, I took part in the school survey about sleeping habits. I hardly ever sleep for more than 8 hours because of heavy study tasks. I always take naps at noon to feel refreshed. And I usually go to sleep before 10:30 p.m. What’s more, I never drink coffee or tea before bed, as they might affect my sleep.     Good sleep is really important for us students. It helps our brains work better and makes us more energetic during the day.     Next, I plan to manage my time more wisely. I’ll finish homework earlier and avoid staying up late. Also, I’ll keep the habit of taking noon naps. I believe these efforts will let me sleep better and live a more wonderful life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：需依据调查表反馈睡眠情况，分享对睡眠健康看法及下一步计划，涵盖了相应要点并补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明参与学校睡眠习惯调查这一写作由头，引出后续内容； 第二步，从睡眠时长、午睡、晚睡时间、睡前习惯等方面详细反馈自身睡眠情况，接着阐述良好睡眠对学生的重要性，最后说明为改善睡眠的下一步时间管理及习惯保持计划； 第三步，表达相信努力能改善睡眠、让生活更美好，对计划进行积极展望 。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②feel refreshed感到精神焕发 ③manage time管理时间 [高分句型] ①I believe these efforts will let me sleep better and live a more wonderful life. (宾语从句) 14．为响应国家提出的“体重管理年”三年行动号召，学校广播站准备就“体重管理”这一热议话题展开征文活动。请你作为班级学生代表，以“How to manage weight”为题，根据以下提示词，适当发挥，写一篇英文短文向广播站投稿。 写作要点：1. Why should teenagers keep a healthy weight? 2. What are your suggestions? （1）Eat a balanced diet. （2）Exercise regularly. （3）… 写作要求：1. 文中需包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to manage weight Weight management is very important for our health. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: How to manage weight Weight management is very important for our health. Being too fat can cause serious problems like heart diseases. Teenagers easily lose confidence because of overweight. How can we keep a healthy weight? Here are some useful tips. First, eat a balanced diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food like hamburgers and sweets. Second, exercise regularly. Doing sports such as running, swimming, or playing basketball helps burn fat. Even walking for 30 minutes every day can make a difference. Third, get enough sleep. Staying up late can lead to weight gain, so we should sleep for at least 8 hours each night. In my opinion, small daily changes can make a big difference. If everyone takes action, we can surely succeed in managing our weight. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述为什么青少年应该保持健康的体重并从均衡饮食、定期锻炼等方面提出你的建议。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①make a difference起作用 ②lead to导致 ③take action采取行动 ④stay up熬夜 [高分句型] ①If everyone takes action, we can surely succeed in managing our weight. (If引导的条件状语从句) ②Staying up late can lead to weight gain, so we should sleep for at least 8 hours each night. (并列句) 15．英语课上，同学们针对大部分学校要求学生住校的现状,就“Would you like to live in school?”这一话题展开讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，表达你的意愿并阐述理由。 大部分学生 愿意 1.方便与同学交流； 2.学会照顾自己 一些学生 不愿意 1.在家能休息得更好； 2.与家人相处时间更长 你 …… …… 注意： 1.词数 80～100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Would you like to live in school? We had a discussion about it and here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Would you like to live in school? We had a discussion about it and here are the results. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates. Also, they can learn how to look after themselves in this way. However, some students think living at home is a better choice. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. Besides, they can spend more time with their family members and get on better with them. As for me, I’d like to live in school. That's because I can spend more time on my study. What’s more, it’s a wonderful experience to live with other classmates. 【详解】[总体分析] 1.题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 2.时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 3.提示：根据表格进行阐述，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明文章主旨，引出讨论结果。提出愿意住校学生观点并阐明理由； 第二步，展示想要走读学生观点并陈述理由； 第三步，点明自己观点并给出理由。 [亮点词汇] 1.communicate with sb.与某人交流 2.look after照顾 3.as for至于 4.what’s more此外 [高分句型] 1. Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates.(it作形式宾语，不定式作真正的宾语) 2. The main reason is that they can relax better at home. (表语从句) 18 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 23 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit3 Teenage problems 单元话题（青少年问题）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．每年的5月25日是全国心理健康日。为促进学生们快乐学习、健康成长，我校英语俱乐部近期开展了以Less Stress, Better Life为题的征文比赛。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，简要阐述中学生压力大的原因、提出恰当的解压方法并谈谈你对压力的看法。 压力起因 课业繁重，经常熬夜，…… 父母严格，期望高，…… 解压方法 （1）向老师求助……； （2）运动锻炼，听音乐放松身心； （3）…… 你的观点 （1）压力不总是糟糕的，是生活的一部分。 （2）…… 注意事项： 1．根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥； 2．要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3．文中不得出现真实人名或学校信息； 4．词数不少于90词，标题及开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Less Stress, Better Life Nowadays, we teenagers have a lot of stress while growing up. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．九年级的学习生活紧张又忙碌，掌握科学学习方法对同学们至关重要。为此，你校英文校报针对九年级学生开展了相关调查，以下是调查结果，请据此为校报撰写一篇英文报道。 要求： 1. 报道内容须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Recently, our school English newspaper did a survey on the learning methods of Grade 9 students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．人工智能（AI）技术的飞速发展使我们的学习和生活更为高效和便捷，同时，也带来了一定的挑战和问题。学校校刊为此展开了问卷调查，请根据下页表格内容简要描述部分调查结果，并阐述你自己的观点。 Advantages Disadvantages ◇find information quickly ◇make students less creative ◇make learning more interesting ◇have trouble communicating with others … … 写作要求： 1.文中须包含以上要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 With the development of science, AI is now widely used. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．智能手机已成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分，它们给我们的生活带来了极大的便捷，同时也带来了一些挑战。请根据以下三个问题提示，以“Smartphones in our life”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈你对智能手机的看法? 提示问题： 1. How important are smartphones? 2. What do you usually do with a smartphone? 3. How should we use smartphones? 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．最近，你对学生的健康做了问卷调查，下面是调查中发现的主要问题及成因，请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，并提出一些建议。 问题 成因 建议 心理健康 感到紧张 (75%) 作业太多； 没有足够时间做自己喜欢的事情。 找时间放松 …… …… …… 身体健康 眼睛近视 (65%) 不好的学习习惯； 看电视太多。 …… 变胖 (8%) …… …… …… …… …… 要求： (1)文章必须包括表格中的全部内容，可适当增加细节； (2)文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)词数70左右。 参考词汇：mental health心理健康；physical health身体健康；stressed out非常焦虑不安的；get near-sighted眼睛近视 Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems on mental and physical health.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．近年来，出国留学越来越普及，并且开始出现留学低龄化现象。不少家庭在孩子的初中阶段就要面临选择。请你根据下表提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的立场、观点和选择。 Advantages ◆learn English in a native environment ◆know about western cultures ◆… Disadvantages ◆not independent enough ◆miss family so much ◆cost a lot of money ◆… 要求： （1）短文中必须包括表格中的相应要点，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； （3）词数：100词左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Studying Abroad, Yes or No? Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among middle school students. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你生活中有烦恼，学习有压力吗？我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据下图提示以“How to Solve our Stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 注意： 1. 结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 2. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息； 3. 不少于80个单词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Solve our Stress We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．《中国青少年屏幕使用报告》显示：初中生的日均手机使用时间超3小时，68%的学生因此减少了体育运动和书籍阅读时间。我校英语社团因此发起“Less Screen Time, Brighter Future”的征文活动，请你根据自己的生活体验和日常观察，从个人、家庭或社会角度，分析和描述上述现象背后可能的原因，并提出1—2条具体建议。 要求： 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： ▶personal needs (have fun and relax, too tired to read/exercise, a feeling of satisfaction...) ▶life pressure (a sense of belonging, pressure from study...) ▶family environment (kids will follow...) ▶social environment (many interesting things online, too busy to take care of...) ▶advice (in my opinion, non-screen activities, join the reading/sports club, set app limits, spend more time with kids...) A recent survey shows that 68% of students spend too much time on their phones. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。 Jack的妈妈对青春期的Jack在成长中面临的诸多问题感到十分担忧。假如你是Dr. Lin，受Jack妈妈之托，请你根据思维导图内容提示给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议。 作文要求: （1）包含题干中的要点； （2）逻辑流畅，行文完整，不少于80词； （3）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 Dear Jack, Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Dr. Lin 10．请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions?”的英语短文。 内容要点：1.明确表明你是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定?” 2.优点：培养青少年的独立性 (independence)，培养青少年责任感 (develop a sense of responsibility) 3.缺点：青少年缺乏经验易出错，引发家庭矛盾。 4.优缺点只能选择一种写。 要求：1.字迹工整，段落层次清晰； 2.不必逐字逐句翻译； 3.词数80词以上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。 要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业 伤害眼睛，不利健康 网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生 建议 适度使用智能手机 多花时间与家人、朋友交流 …… Boys and girls, With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。 注意事项： 1.邮件内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合原意； 2.词数在100个左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Mr. Friend, I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 13．中考在即，在紧张备考的同时，睡眠健康同样不容忽视。假设你是初中生李华，你校英语社为了解学生的睡眠情况，帮助同学们进一步关注睡眠健康，开展了“Sleep Well, Live Better”的主题活动，并进行了问卷调查。请基于以下调查表，撰写一篇英文投稿，反馈你的睡眠情况，分享你对睡眠健康的看法，并谈一谈你的下一步计划。 注意： (1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 (2) 词数80左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Recently, I took part in the school survey about sleeping habits. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．为响应国家提出的“体重管理年”三年行动号召，学校广播站准备就“体重管理”这一热议话题展开征文活动。请你作为班级学生代表，以“How to manage weight”为题，根据以下提示词，适当发挥，写一篇英文短文向广播站投稿。 写作要点：1. Why should teenagers keep a healthy weight? 2. What are your suggestions? （1）Eat a balanced diet. （2）Exercise regularly. （3）… 写作要求：1. 文中需包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to manage weight Weight management is very important for our health. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．英语课上，同学们针对大部分学校要求学生住校的现状,就“Would you like to live in school?”这一话题展开讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，表达你的意愿并阐述理由。 大部分学生 愿意 1.方便与同学交流； 2.学会照顾自己 一些学生 不愿意 1.在家能休息得更好； 2.与家人相处时间更长 你 …… …… 注意： 1.词数 80～100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Would you like to live in school? We had a discussion about it and here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $