第一次月考复习 Modules 1-3 写作必背满分范文12篇（押题预测）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（外研版）

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 第一次月考复习 Modules 1-3 写作必背满分范文12篇（押题预测） 目录 一、M1单元话题热点预测 1 二、M2单元话题热点预测 7 三、M3单元话题热点预测 14 一、M1单元话题热点预测 1．你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇英语短文向专栏投稿。 提示内容： What did you do during the nature trip? How did you feel about the trip? What do you think of getting close to nature? Something more about the topic. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校：词数 100 词左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Getting Close to Nature ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．中国实行的240小时过境免签政策使得 “中国游” 广为流行。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris及其家人对中国文化很感兴趣，他们打算九月份来中国旅游，他发邮件向你寻求旅游建议。请你根据以下要点提示，用英文写一封邮件回复他。 要点提示： (1) Where do you advise Chris and his family to visit? (For example, Beijing ...) (2) Why do you give the advice to them? (Experience the rich history and culture ...) 要求： ⑴ 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，使行文连贯、通顺； ⑵ 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； ⑶ 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re coming to China for a trip. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．假如你是李华，去年暑假参观了三星堆博物馆。请你用英语给笔友大卫写一封邮件，向他讲述你的所见所闻。 （1）你和父母一起去了三星堆博物馆。 （2）博物馆位于四川，你们乘飞机到达。 （3）博物馆8: 30开馆，当天有许多的参观者。 （4）你看到了不同种类的展品，最喜欢的是青铜雕像。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：Sanxingdui Museum三星堆博物馆      bronze figure statue 青铜雕像 要求： （1）词数：80~100个； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. Last summer holiday, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 4．假如《21世纪报》正在举行以“最难忘的旅行经历” 为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给该报写一篇征文，介绍你的雁荡之旅。 Activities ◆climb the Yandang Mountain ◆enjoy the local dishes ◆… Special experience ◆get wet in the rain ◆catch a cold Traveling advice … 要求: （1）短文必须包含表格所有信息, 并可适当扩展; （2）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息; （3）词数110左右。 An Unforgettable Travel Experience I have traveled a lot, but the trip to Yandang Mountain is one of the most unforgettable. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、M2单元话题热点预测 5．同学们，两个月的暑假过得开心吗？暑假中有没有一个地方让你流连忘返，或者有没有一件事让你难以忘怀呢？请你以“My ________ Summer Vacation”为题目（请在横线上填入适合你自己的形容词），用英语写一篇短文，分享你的暑假经历和感受。 要求： 1. 100词左右； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： What to do: go to a summer resort (去避暑地), go to the beach, visit relatives, volunteer as, travel to… How to do it: take a high-speed train, the beauty of nature, experience the hottest temperature, post pictures on WeChat moments (发朋友圈)… How do I feel: enjoy oneself during the journey, be excited about, be satisfied with… My ________ Summer Vacation ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日。请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。 the Spring Festival Time: in January or February Activities: welcome the New Year, visit relatives, get together; ... Meaning: the biggest day of year, a new start, ... the Mid-Autumn Festival Time: in September or October Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon, ... Meaning: symbol of being together, missing family members far away, ... ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是中学生王丹，你的英国笔友Laura一月份要来哈尔滨看2025年亚冬会。在此期间正赶上中国最重要的传统节日——春节。你得知此事，给她写一封电子邮件向她介绍这一节日并邀请她与你一起共度春节。要点如下： 1. 介绍春节； 2. 邀请她与你一起共度春节。 写作要求：1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名及人称； 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇: Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games (哈尔滨亚洲冬季运动会) Dear Laura, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your coming! Yours, Wang Dan 8．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣，尤其是中国的四大传统节日。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你最喜欢的一个传统节日。 内容包括：时间，活动，美食，节日的故事或节日的意义。 要求：1.字数100左右。注意邮件格式。必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.请勿在文中使用真实的人名、校名和班级。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、M3单元话题热点预测 9．假如你心目中的英雄是世界著名科学家钱学森。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇介绍钱学森的短文。可适当加入自己的感想和评论。题目自拟。80个词左右。 1.1911年出生于上海，中国著名的物理学家，被称为“中国导弹之父(The Father of Chinese Missile) ”。 2. 1938年在美国得到博士学位(doctor's degree)。1950年争取回国，遭到美国政府的阻挠。1955年终于回到祖国的怀抱。 3. 他把自己的一切都奉献给了祖国的航天事业。 4. 自己的感想是…… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80~100。 习近平总书记在多次讲话中强调“新时代，呼唤英雄”。其实，英雄就在我们身边。这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、同学、朋友、老师……请介绍一下你心中的“小人物，大英雄”。 提示：①你心中的英雄是谁。 ②记述你印象深刻的一件事。 ③对你的影响。 要求：①语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚。 ②文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 ③文章开头已开出，不计入总词数。 A Hero in My Heart Everybody has a hero in his heart. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的文章介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平。内容包括： 1. 1930年9月7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭； 2. 1953年毕业于西南农学院，之后被分配到湘西农校任教； 3. 1964年开始从事杂交水稻研究，1981年荣获我国第一个国家特等发明奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”； 4. 生活简朴，不计名利。 参考词汇：杂交水稻Hybrid Rice； 农学院Agricultural College __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．在下周的英语班会课上，老师打算让大家谈论自己心目中的英雄。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文，以备班会上发言用。 内容包括： 1.你心目中的英雄是谁； 2.他/她为什么会成为你心目中的英雄（至少两方面）； 3. 你的愿望。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 第一次月考复习 Modules 1-3 写作必背满分范文12篇（押题预测） 目录 一、M1单元话题热点预测 1 二、M2单元话题热点预测 7 三、M3单元话题热点预测 14 一、M1单元话题热点预测 1．你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Getting Close to Nature”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇英语短文向专栏投稿。 提示内容： What did you do during the nature trip? How did you feel about the trip? What do you think of getting close to nature? Something more about the topic. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校：词数 100 词左右；标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Getting Close to Nature ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Getting Close to Nature Last summer, I had a chance to go hiking in the mountains near my hometown. It was an unforgettable experience getting close to nature. The fresh air, green trees, and the sound of birds singing all around made me feel relaxed and happy. As I climbed higher, I saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. It was like a painting that I could step into. This trip taught me that nature is our best friend. It heals our minds and gives us strength. I learned to appreciate the beauty of nature more and to protect it for future generations. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容描写一次亲近大自然的旅行经历，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，写明去了哪里； 第二步，详细介绍旅行的过程； 第三步，介绍自己的感受和看法。 [亮点词汇] ①had a chance to do 有机会做某事 ②go hiking 去远足 ③made me feel relaxed and happy 使我感到放松和开心 ④appreciate the beauty of 欣赏……的美丽 [高分句型] ①As I climbed higher, I saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. (As引导的时间状语从句) ②It was like a painting that I could step into. (that引导的定语从句) ③This trip taught me that nature is our best friend. (that引导的宾语从句) 2．中国实行的240小时过境免签政策使得 “中国游” 广为流行。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris及其家人对中国文化很感兴趣，他们打算九月份来中国旅游，他发邮件向你寻求旅游建议。请你根据以下要点提示，用英文写一封邮件回复他。 要点提示： (1) Where do you advise Chris and his family to visit? (For example, Beijing ...) (2) Why do you give the advice to them? (Experience the rich history and culture ...) 要求： ⑴ 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，使行文连贯、通顺； ⑵ 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； ⑶ 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re coming to China for a trip. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Chris,      I’m glad to know that you’re coming to China for a trip. I’d like to give you some advice. Beijing is a good choice. It is the capital of China and has a long history. You can visit the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. They are wonderful places to learn about Chinese culture. You may also try Beijing Duck, which is very delicious. I’m sure you and your family will enjoy the trip a lot. Yours,                                                                                                                   Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件。 ②时态：一般现在时为主。 ③提示：注意包含地点推荐和理由，语言简洁，符合书信格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表达对朋友来华旅行的高兴心情； 第二步：推荐旅游地点，并说明原因； 第三步：提出饮食或文化体验的建议，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to 想要 ②learn about 了解 ③the Great Wall 长城 [高分句型] ①You may also try Beijing Duck, which is very delicious.（非限制性定语从句） ② I’m sure you and your family will enjoy the trip a lot.（宾语从句） 3．假如你是李华，去年暑假参观了三星堆博物馆。请你用英语给笔友大卫写一封邮件，向他讲述你的所见所闻。 （1）你和父母一起去了三星堆博物馆。 （2）博物馆位于四川，你们乘飞机到达。 （3）博物馆8: 30开馆，当天有许多的参观者。 （4）你看到了不同种类的展品，最喜欢的是青铜雕像。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：Sanxingdui Museum三星堆博物馆      bronze figure statue 青铜雕像 要求： （1）词数：80~100个； （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. Last summer holiday, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear David, How is everything going? I’d like to tell you my travelling experience. Last summer holiday, I visited the Sanxingdui Museum with my parents. It is located in Sichuan, and we took a plane to get there. The museum opens at 8:30 in the morning, and there were many visitors that day. We saw different kinds of exhibits. My favorite was the bronze statues which were really amazing and made me feel like I was in ancient times. I think the Sanxingdui Museum is a great place to learn about Chinese history and culture. I hope you can visit it one day too. Do you have anything to share? Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己参观三星堆博物馆的经历，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己参观三星堆博物馆的经历； 第三步，介绍自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in坐落于 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] ①My favorite was the bronze statues which were really amazing and made me feel like I was in ancient times. (定语从句) ②I think the Sanxingdui Museum is a great place to learn about Chinese history and culture. (宾语从句) 4．假如《21世纪报》正在举行以“最难忘的旅行经历” 为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给该报写一篇征文，介绍你的雁荡之旅。 Activities ◆climb the Yandang Mountain ◆enjoy the local dishes ◆… Special experience ◆get wet in the rain ◆catch a cold Traveling advice … 要求: （1）短文必须包含表格所有信息, 并可适当扩展; （2）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息; （3）词数110左右。 An Unforgettable Travel Experience I have traveled a lot, but the trip to Yandang Mountain is one of the most unforgettable. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Travel Experience I have traveled a lot, but the trip to Yandang Mountain is one of the most unforgettable. First, I climbed the Yandang Mountain, tired but happy. Then I enjoyed the local famous dishes. It is worth having a try. What delicious food! Because of the various weather, I got wet in the heavy rain. What is worse, I suddenly caught a cold and felt bad. Last but not least, I think we should have enough preparation when we travel. First of all, it is important for us to know the weather forecast. Second, we should plan for a travel route in advance. What is more, we should keep our phones on outside all the time. It is an unforgettable travel experience that I always think of and I learn a lot from it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己在雁荡山的一次难忘的旅行经历。 第二步，具体介绍旅行中的体验及旅行中的经验教训。 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① catch a cold感冒 ②weather forecast天气预报 ③First of all首先 [高分句型] ①Last but not least, I think we should have enough preparation when we travel. (省略that的宾语从句) ②It is an unforgettable travel experience that I always think of and I learn a lot from it. (定语从句) 二、M2单元话题热点预测 5．同学们，两个月的暑假过得开心吗？暑假中有没有一个地方让你流连忘返，或者有没有一件事让你难以忘怀呢？请你以“My ________ Summer Vacation”为题目（请在横线上填入适合你自己的形容词），用英语写一篇短文，分享你的暑假经历和感受。 要求： 1. 100词左右； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： What to do: go to a summer resort (去避暑地), go to the beach, visit relatives, volunteer as, travel to… How to do it: take a high-speed train, the beauty of nature, experience the hottest temperature, post pictures on WeChat moments (发朋友圈)… How do I feel: enjoy oneself during the journey, be excited about, be satisfied with… My ________ Summer Vacation ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Unforgettable Summer Vacation This summer vacation was really unforgettable. I went to a quiet mountain village as a volunteer with my parents by high-speed train. There, I helped kids practice English and told them interesting stories. The village was full of the beauty of nature—green mountains, clear streams and fresh air. Every evening, I sat with the villagers to listen to their life stories. I also posted many photos of the village on WeChat moments. Though I didn’t go to a summer resort, I felt very happy and satisfied. This experience taught me the joy of giving. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ② 时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：需补充形容词完成标题，结合参考信息中的活动、方式和感受展开，避免泄露个人信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇总起，直接点明暑假的“难忘”属性； 第二步，具体阐述暑假经历； 第三步，结尾表达感受与收获。 [亮点词汇] ① as a volunteer 作为志愿者 ② the beauty of nature 自然之美 ③ post...on WeChat moments 在朋友圈发布…… ④ be satisfied with 对……满意 ⑤ the joy of giving 付出的快乐 [高分句型] Though I didn’t go to a summer resort, I felt very happy and satisfied.（though引导让步状语从句） 6．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日。请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。 the Spring Festival Time: in January or February Activities: welcome the New Year, visit relatives, get together; ... Meaning: the biggest day of year, a new start, ... the Mid-Autumn Festival Time: in September or October Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon, ... Meaning: symbol of being together, missing family members far away, ... ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Hello, everyone, It is my great honor to introduce one of China’s most beloved traditional festivals—the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month, which is in September or October. On that day, we will get together with our families, eat moon cakes and enjoy the moon, expressing our wishes and hopes. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a symbol of being together and missing family members far away. Thank you for listening, and I wish you all could experience this warm and meaningful festival one day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“中秋节的庆祝时间、风俗和意义等”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达感谢和期待。 [亮点词汇] ①one of………其中之一 ②beloved深受喜爱的 ③the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节 ④Thank you for…因……而感谢 [高分句型] ① It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month, which is in September or October.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Thank you for listening, and I wish you all could experience this warm and meaningful festival one day! (并列句和省略that的宾语从句) 7．假如你是中学生王丹，你的英国笔友Laura一月份要来哈尔滨看2025年亚冬会。在此期间正赶上中国最重要的传统节日——春节。你得知此事，给她写一封电子邮件向她介绍这一节日并邀请她与你一起共度春节。要点如下： 1. 介绍春节； 2. 邀请她与你一起共度春节。 写作要求：1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名及人称； 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇: Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games (哈尔滨亚洲冬季运动会) Dear Laura, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your coming! Yours, Wang Dan 【答案】例文： Dear Laura, How is everything going? I’m so excited to hear that you are coming to Harbin for the 2025 Asian Winter Games in January! What makes it even more special is that your visit will coincide with the Spring Festival, the most important traditional holiday in China. The Spring Festival, also known as Chinese New Year, is a time for family reunions and joyful celebrations. We enjoy delicious food like dumplings, set off fireworks, and decorate our homes with red lanterns and couplets. It symbolizes new beginnings and good luck for the coming year. I would be delighted to invite you to celebrate the Spring Festival with my family. You can experience our customs firsthand, taste homemade dumplings, and feel the warm festival atmosphere together. It will be a wonderful chance for you to learn about Chinese culture. Looking forward to your coming! Yours, Wang Dan 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态是一般现在时、一般将来时和过去将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作开头已给出，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“春节介绍”、以及“邀请她与你一起共度春节”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①be excited to do sth 对做某事感到兴奋 ②the 2025 Asian Winter Games2025年亚冬会 ③the Spring Festival春节 ④set off燃放 ⑤be delighted to do 很高兴做某事 ⑥invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事 ⑦look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①What makes it even more special is that your visit will coincide with the Spring Festival, the most important traditional holiday in China. (what引导的主语从句和that引导的宾语从句) ②It will be a wonderful chance for you to learn about Chinese culture. (it作形式主语的固定句型) 8．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣，尤其是中国的四大传统节日。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你最喜欢的一个传统节日。 内容包括：时间，活动，美食，节日的故事或节日的意义。 要求：1.字数100左右。注意邮件格式。必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.请勿在文中使用真实的人名、校名和班级。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, How are you? I’m very glad to know you’re interested in Chinese festivals. Among the four major traditional ones, the Spring Festival is my favorite.   It falls on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar, usually between late January and mid-February. We celebrate it in many exciting ways. We set off firecrackers and fireworks to scare away bad luck. Children love getting red envelopes with money inside. Families gather for a big reunion dinner on New Year’s Eve. The most popular food is dumplings. They look like ancient Chinese money, symbolizing wealth for the new year. The Spring Festival celebrates the new beginning. According to an old story, people used firecrackers and red decorations to scare away a monster called “Nian”. If you have a chance to experience the Spring Festival in China, you’ll surely love this wonderful festival.   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达对Tom的问候，并说明你最喜欢的传统节日是春节； 第二步，介绍春节的时间、庆祝活动、美食以及关于春节的故事； 第三步，表达对他人体验春节的期待，说明其会让人喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②celebrate庆祝 ③set off燃放 ④symbolize象征 [高分句型] ①If you have a chance to experience the Spring Festival in China, you’ll surely love this wonderful festival.  （if引导的条件状语从句） 三、M3单元话题热点预测 9．假如你心目中的英雄是世界著名科学家钱学森。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇介绍钱学森的短文。可适当加入自己的感想和评论。题目自拟。80个词左右。 1.1911年出生于上海，中国著名的物理学家，被称为“中国导弹之父(The Father of Chinese Missile) ”。 2. 1938年在美国得到博士学位(doctor's degree)。1950年争取回国，遭到美国政府的阻挠。1955年终于回到祖国的怀抱。 3. 他把自己的一切都奉献给了祖国的航天事业。 4. 自己的感想是…… ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Qian Xuesen is a famous scientist in the world. He was named “The Father of Chinese Missile”. He is the hero in my heart. And he is also the hero of all Chinese people. Qian Xuesen was born in Shanghai in 1911. He completed his doctor's degree in 1938 in America. He tried to come back to China in 1950, but the American government stopped him. He didn't come back until 1955. He gave his life to Chinese space flight technology. I will learn from him, and study hard for our country. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要求按照提示信息第一段介绍钱学森；第二段介绍钱学森取得的成就以及自己的感想。 2.写作指导：本文第一段对人物客观事实的陈述，主要采用一般现在时态；第二段对人物所取得成就进行陈述，主要采用一般过去时，最后写出自己的感想，需要把握好时态，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 10．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80~100。 习近平总书记在多次讲话中强调“新时代，呼唤英雄”。其实，英雄就在我们身边。这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、同学、朋友、老师……请介绍一下你心中的“小人物，大英雄”。 提示：①你心中的英雄是谁。 ②记述你印象深刻的一件事。 ③对你的影响。 要求：①语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚。 ②文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 ③文章开头已开出，不计入总词数。 A Hero in My Heart Everybody has a hero in his heart. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version： A Hero in My Heart Everybody has a hero in his heart. My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up. Once she would have a difficult exam. To pass it, she must read four books. But my mother did not have so much time because she had to take care of me. One night, when I woke up suddenly at 2 o’clock, I found her staying up late to read her books. I was shocked by my mother. My mother always sets a goal and manages to finish it. She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard. 【详解】这是一篇命题作文。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点、跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上。此篇作文需要用一般过去时态进行叙述心目中英雄的事情，人称为第三人称。注意动词过去式的形式要正确。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，可以使用大量的固定句式和短语，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】这篇短文使用的主从复合句比较多，比如“when I woke up suddenly at 2 o'clock, I found her staying up late to read her books”，按照动作发生的先后顺序，使得句子更加有层次感，文章避免单纯的重复，使短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对作者的母亲有了比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。 【高分案例一】My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up.（我的英雄是我的母亲，因为她一直努力工作，从不放弃。）because引导的原因状语从句引出我的英雄是我妈妈的原因。【高分案例二】She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard.（她是我心中的英雄，鼓励我努力工作。）鼓励某人做某事的结构encourage sb. to do sth.用不定式结构使得句子结构更加清晰，表达更加明了。 11．请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的文章介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平。内容包括： 1. 1930年9月7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭； 2. 1953年毕业于西南农学院，之后被分配到湘西农校任教； 3. 1964年开始从事杂交水稻研究，1981年荣获我国第一个国家特等发明奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”； 4. 生活简朴，不计名利。 参考词汇：杂交水稻Hybrid Rice； 农学院Agricultural College __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Yuan Longping was born on 7th September, 1930 in Chongqing. He was from a poor farmer’s family. He graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, and then he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agricultural College in the west of Hunan. He began his research in hybrid rice in 1964 and got the first National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据题干中内容介绍我国的“杂交水稻之父”——袁隆平。内容需包括：出生、学习及任教经历、研究及获奖经历、生活态度。写作过程中注意事件发生的时间和内容相匹配。 2.写作指导：本文主题为“写人”；以第三人称he作主语，介绍袁隆平的经历；以一般过去时叙述袁隆平早年的学习及科研经历，以一般现在时介绍其生活态度及获得的终生成就，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意要点齐全，语句通顺，使读者一目了然。 12．在下周的英语班会课上，老师打算让大家谈论自己心目中的英雄。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文，以备班会上发言用。 内容包括： 1.你心目中的英雄是谁； 2.他/她为什么会成为你心目中的英雄（至少两方面）； 3. 你的愿望。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My father is the hero in my heart. He is friendly and hard-working. Whenever I have trouble, he always gives me some good advice. He often teaches me how to be a good boy. He takes good care of me.What’s more, he looks after my grandparents well. And he is happy to do this. As for his job, he works very hard and he has won many prizes. That’s my dad——the hero in my mind. I hope to be a person like him when I grow up. 【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要写一篇自己心目中英雄的作文，需要包含以下内容：谁是你心目中的英雄，他/她是你心目中英雄的原因（至少两方面），你的愿望。 写作指导：本文人称上以第三人称为主，第一人称为辅；时态上使用一般现在时。内容上包含谁是你心目中的英雄、原因（至少2点）和愿望。结构上可以采用三段式，第一段撰写谁是你心目中的英雄，第二段撰写原因，第三段撰写愿望。注意在描写心目中的英雄时需要采用第三人称，在描写自己愿望时需采用第一人称。同时，注意段与段之间的衔接，保证行文的逻辑性。 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $