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2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 第一次月考总复习 Units 1-2 写作满分必背范文15篇（紧贴新教材押题预测） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．家是我们心灵的港湾，成长的摇篮，为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆，红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动，希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事（如分担家务，陪伴家人等）并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示，写文章参与此征文活动。 要求：1．80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2．书写规范，内容连贯，文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。 参考要点： Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired… Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills… Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy… Love Family, Be Helpful Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Love Family, Be Helpful Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. Last month, I decided to help my parents more. I started by sweeping the floor and cleaning the house. At first, it was tiring, but I soon got used to it. Later, I also tried cooking dinner. Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied. I realized that helping my family is not only our duty but also a great way to show love. It brings us closer and makes everyone happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰合理。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，介绍自己为家庭做贡献的一次经历； 第三步，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①get used to习惯于 ②decide to do sth决定做某事 ③at first起初 [高分句型] ①Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. (although引导让步状语从句) ②When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied. (when引导时间状语从句) 2．中国的传统节日有很多，比如春节、端午节和中秋节等，每个都有丰富的文化内涵，意义深远。 假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter想要了解关于中国传统节日的内容，请你给他写一封信，向他介绍一个你最喜欢的节日以及此节日期间你的活动和你喜欢这个节日的理由。 提示词语：traditional festival, important, delicious food 提示问题：1. What is your favorite festival? 2. How do you celebrate this festival? 3. Why do you like it? Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China. During the Spring Festival, my family and I do many things. We clean our house to sweep away bad luck and welcome the new year. We also make delicious food like dumplings and have a big family dinner on New Year’s Eve. After dinner, we watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV and set off fireworks. I like the Spring Festival because it’s a time for family reunion. I can spend time with my loved ones and enjoy the warm atmosphere. It’s also a chance to relax and have fun after a year of hard work. Best wishes to you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封回信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点明确，要围绕“最喜欢的节日、庆祝节日的方式、喜欢该节日的理由”这三个方面展开，同时要合理运用提示词语。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。引出下文要介绍的中国传统节日内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。明确指出最喜欢的节日，并强调其重要性，详细描述庆祝节日的方式。 第三步：书写结语。表达对朋友的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①sweep away bad luck扫除厄运 ②set off fireworks放烟花 ③have fun玩得开心 [高分句型] ①My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, which is the most important traditional festival in China. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②I like the Spring Festival because it’s a time for family reunion. (原因状语从句) 3．暑假不仅仅是假期，更是学生们成长(growth)，探索(exploration)，和放松(relaxation)的宝贵机会。学校公众号正在征集以“My Colorful Summer”为主题的文章。请结合你最近的暑期经历，谈一谈你都做了些什么让假期生活变得多姿多彩，并阐述这些丰富的活动给你带来了怎样的感受，变化与成长。 要求：1. 80—100词； 2. 不出现本人的真实姓名和学校信息； 参考信息： Colorful activities in Summer Growth areas成长方面 outdoor activities volunteering (志愿者活动) share housework learn how to cook teach myself… Physical (taller, stronger…) Mental (more confident/more understanding/independent (独立的…) Study (study more efficiently (高效地)…) Sports (become better at…) … My Colorful Summer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                                   My Colorful Summer     This summer was full of fun and growth. I did outdoor activities like cycling every morning, which made me stronger. On weekends, I volunteered at a community library, helping kids read—this taught me to be more patient. At home, I shared housework and even learned to cook tomato eggs, making my parents proud. I also taught myself basic painting, and now I can draw simple landscapes! These activities made me more independent and confident. I’m sure this colorful summer will help me start the new term better. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为一般过去时态； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，点明这个暑假充满乐趣与成长； 第二步：具体阐述暑期的多彩活动，按照“户外、志愿、家庭、自学”的逻辑展开，每个活动简要说明过程及初步影响； 第三步：书写结语，总结活动带来的整体变化，强调暑期对后续学习生活的积极作用。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of充满…… ②on weekends在周末 ③teach oneself自学 ④be sure确信、确保 [高分句型]   ①I did outdoor activities like cycling every morning, which made me stronger. (定语从句) ②I’m sure this colorful summer will help me start the new term better. (宾语从句) 4．暑假生活已经结束，相信同学们都度过了一个愉快的假期。假设你是李明，现在请将你的假期生活写成邮件告诉你的笔友Mary。内容需要包括以下信息： 1.Where did you go? 2.What did you do? 3.How was your summer holiday? ... 要求：1.内容需包括所给信息，并可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，时态恰当，书写工整； 3.不少于70词，不得出现真实信息。 Dear Mary, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mary, How are you? I hope you had a great summer holiday, too! Mine was wonderful.   During the holiday, I went to Qingdao with my parents. It’s a beautiful coastal city. We spent most of our time by the sea. I swam in the clear blue water, built sandcastles on the beach, and enjoyed delicious seafood. I also visited the Qingdao Aquarium and saw many interesting sea creatures. At home, I read some interesting books and practiced playing the piano.   I really enjoyed my summer holiday. It was relaxing, fun, and I learned new things. I felt refreshed and ready for the new school term.   How about your holiday? Where did you go and what did you do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.   Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题——愉快的暑假生活； 第二步，描述并评价你的暑假生活； 第三步，询问Mary的假期过得如何。 [亮点词汇] ①wonderful精彩的 ②relaxing令人放松的 ③practice练习 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I hope you had a great summer holiday, too!（省略that的宾语从句） 5．假如你是李华，请你根据你的外国笔友Mike的来信内容给他写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How time flies! The new term is coming. I learned from your WeChat that you went somewhere interesting. I am sure you have a nice summer vacation. Would you like to tell me something about your travel? Where did you go? What did you do there? Who did you go with? If I want to go there next summer vacation, can you give me some advice (建议)? Yours, Mike 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 字数不少于80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike,         How are you doing? I’m glad to hear from you!     This summer vacation, I went to Sanya with my parents. It’s a beautiful coastal city in southern China. We enjoyed the golden beaches, clear blue sea, and delicious seafood. I also tried surfing for the first time—it was so exciting! If you plan to visit Sanya next summer, I suggest going between June and August for the best weather. Don’t forget sunscreen and a hat, as it’s very sunny. The night market is a must-visit for local snacks!         Hope to hear about your summer, too!     Yours, Li Hua 【详解】【总体分析】    ①题材：本文是一封书信（回信）；    ②时态：一般过去时（描述旅行经历）和一般现在时（给出建议）；    ③提示：需回答Mike的问题（地点、活动、同伴、建议），并适当扩展细节，突出写作重点。     【写作步骤】    第一步：问候并回应来信，简要介绍旅行地点；    第二步：描述旅行活动，增加趣味性；    第三步：针对Mike的提问给出具体建议。     【亮点词汇】    ①coastal city滨海城市    ②golden beaches金沙滩 ③for the first time第一次 【高分句型】    ①If you plan to visit Sanya next summer, I suggest going between June and August for the best weather.（条件状语从句）    ②Don’t forget sunscreen and a hat, as it’s very sunny.（原因状语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．去年暑假，你肯定去过许多有趣的地方，请你以“I went to ________ for summer vacation”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1. 你去了什么地方； 2. 进行了哪些活动。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数100左右，可适当增加细节内容。 I went to _______ for summer vacation _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 I went to Beijing for summer vacation Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We went there by plane. It took us two hours to get there. On the first day, we visited the Great Wall, which is considered as one of the seven wonders in the world. It’s so wonderful. There were many people there. We were very tired but happy. On the second day, we went to the Summer Palace in the morning and visited the Water Cube in the afternoon. On the third day, we went to Beijing Hutong. We learnt a lot about the culture of old Beijing and also tasted lots of delicious food like Beijing Roast Duck. We had a great time! In a word, this trip was really interesting, and I hope to visit Beijing again! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中给出的活动要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的暑假经历； 第二步，介绍自己去的地方和参与的活动； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be considered as被认为是 ②a lot of许多 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] On the first day, we visited the Great Wall, which is considered as one of the seven wonders in the world. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 7．你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“Family life”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示，选择不少于四个方面，写一篇短文，介绍你的家庭生活。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My family life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My family life I feel that my family is very happy. I love my family because it gives me a lot of warmth. There are five people in my family: my parents, my grandparents and me. My mom loves to sing, especially every weekend when she fills our home with beautiful tunes. My dad enjoys telling stories and helping us solve problems using his wisdom and experience. My favorite family activity is climbing. It’s healthy for us, and we also have fun doing sports on the mountain. Sometimes I feel sad or confused. But when I communicate with my family, they always give me good advice. Their support makes me feel strong, even when I’m facing difficulties. I am very proud of my family, and I hope we will continue to be happy and warm together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍在家中的感受； 第二步，详细介绍自己的家庭成员、最喜欢的家庭活动等； 第三步，介绍自己遇到问题时的解决方法及对家人未来的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②have fun玩得开心 ③communicate with sb.与某人交流 ④be proud of为……感到自豪 [高分句型] ①But when I communicate with my family, they always give me good advice.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope we will continue to be happy and warm together.（省略that的宾语从句） 8．英文中有句谚语“There’s no place like home (没有地方比得上家).”。假如你是Sandy， 请你以“Home, Sweet Home”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。 写作要点： （1）你家的环境； （2）你的家庭成员之间是如何相处的； （3）为了让你的家更加美好，你打算…… 注意： （1）词数不少于80； （2）短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。 Home, Sweet Home _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Home, Sweet Home There is an old saying, “East or west, home is the best.” I live in a house in the countryside. There’s a big living room, three bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom in it. There’re some trees and flowers around my house. The air is really clean. And I often hear birds sing. There are four people in my family. They’re my parents, my sister and me. We’re helpful and friendly. And we always help and get on well with each other. I’m happy I have a good family. I will try my best to do more housework and farm work. And I’ll study harder so that I can make more money in the future. I’m sure my home will be better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态是一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“你家的环境”“你的家庭成员之间是如何相处的”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，表达你让家更加美好的打算。 [亮点词汇] ①live in住在 ②living room客厅 ③get on well with相处得好 ④each other相互 ⑤try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事 ⑥in the future在未来 [高分句型] ①There’s a big living room, three bedrooms, a kitchen and a bathroom in it. (There be句型) ②I’m happy I have a good family. (宾语从句) ③And I’ll study harder so that I can make more money in the future. (so that引导的目的状语从句) 9．请根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文，以“Family Cleaning”为题，描述一次家庭大扫除活动。 要点如下： （1）时间：周六上午；地点：家里；人物：全家人。 （2）具体分工：爸爸负责打扫地板和清理窗户，妈妈整理房间和洗衣服，我和弟弟收拾玩具和书籍。 （3）感受：我们都很有成就感，希望以后多进行这样的活动。 （4）80词左右。 Family Cleaning __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Family Cleaning Last Saturday morning, my family had a big cleanup at home. Everyone took part in it. First, we divided the tasks. My father was in charge of sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. My mother tidied up the rooms and did the laundry. My little brother and I were responsible for putting away toys and books. During the cleaning, though we were a bit tired, there was laughter all the time. Finally, our home became clean and tidy. We all felt a strong sense of achievement. I hope we can have more such meaningful activities in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：讲述上周六早上家里进行大扫除的经历。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头点明时间和事件，即上周六早上全家进行大扫除，每个人都参与其中。 第二步，中间详细描述大扫除的过程，包括任务分配、每个人负责的工作以及打扫时的氛围。 第三步，结尾说明大扫除后的结果和大家的感受，并表达对未来有更多此类活动的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①clean up清扫 ②divided分配 ③responsible负责的 ④achievement成就 [高分句型] During the cleaning, though we were a bit tired, there was laughter all the time.（运用“though”引导的让步状语从句） 10．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。 要求： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to share a heartwarming memory. Last Mid-Autumn Festival, my whole family gathered on our balcony to admire the full moon. My grandmother told the legend of Chang’e, while my father played the guitar softly. My younger brother and I helped mother arrange mooncakes and fruits on the table. The silver moonlight mixed with the golden lantern light created a magical atmosphere. This memory includes my parents, grandmother, brother and me. Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift. The shared laughter and stories under the moonlight will forever warm my heart. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头点名主题；   第二步，分享一件家里发生的有意义的事情； 第三步，表达自己的感受。   [亮点词汇]   ①admire the full moon 赏月 ②silver moonlight 银色月光 ③be happy to do sth开心做某事 [高分句型]   ①Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift.（though引导让步状语从句）   能力综合实践5篇 11．在你校“劳动教育月”期间，校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动，请结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。 内容要点提示如下： 1在家经常做的家务劳动： ◆ fold clothes        ◆ wash the dishes         ◆ look after pets      ◆ take out the rubbish     ◆ … 2.你做家务劳动后的收获： ◆ life skills (技能)  ◆ take care of ourselves  ◆ understand parents 要求： 1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents. I often help with housework at home. I usually fold clothes and take out the rubbish. I also enjoy looking after pets. I feed them and play with them. I often wash the dishes after dinner. When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden. I learn a lot from doing these chores. I learn some important life skills and I am able to take better care of myself. I also understand my parents more. They work hard every day and still manage to keep the house clean and comfortable. I am proud to help them with housework. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）； 第二步，介绍自己经常做的家务内容； 第三步，介绍从做家务中取得的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①help with sth帮忙做某事 ②learn a lot from从……中学到很多 ③manage to do sth设法做成某事 ④be proud do sth做某事很骄傲 [高分句型] When I am free, I like to help water flowers and grow some vegetables in the garden.（when引导时间状语从句） 12．“人生在勤，不劳何获”。果戈里说过，“如果儿童不去劳动，他们就既学不会文学，也学不会音乐，也学不会体育，也学不会那些保证道德达到最高峰的礼仪。” 某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话题进行征文，请你试着投稿。请先谈一谈你对于孩子做家务的看法。再说一说你在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务以及你的收获。 提示词语：learn to do, help, parents, independent... 提示问题： 1．What do you think of doing housework? 2．What housework do you usually do at home? 3．What do you learn from doing housework? I think doing housework is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. It’s not just about helping parents but also a valuable way to learn and grow. At home, I usually do several kinds of housework. I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. Also, I like to help with cooking. Sometimes I wash vegetables and learn to make simple dishes. Additionally, I take care of watering the plants. From doing these housework tasks, I’ve learned a lot. I’ve learned how to be more independent. It also makes me understand my parents’ hard work. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先表达对于孩子做家务的看法； 第二步，介绍自己在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务，例如扫地、做饭、洗菜、给植物浇水等； 第三步，表达做家务的收获，比如学会独立、理解父母的辛苦等。 [亮点词汇] ①a way to do sth. 做某事的方法 ②valuable 宝贵的 ③sweep the floor 扫地 ④help with cooking 帮忙做饭 ⑤additionally 另外 ⑥take care of 照顾 ⑦water the plants 给植物浇水 [高分句型] ①I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. (省略that的宾语从句) ②I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. (动词不定式表目的) 13．置身大自然的怀抱，不仅能放松身体，还能滋养精神。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇去公园游玩的日记。 内容包括： （1）Who did you go to the park with? （2）What was in the park? （3）What did you do in the park? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sunday, 20th May, Sunny Beihai Park is one of the most popular places to visit in Beijing. I went there with my classmates this May and we had a great time. We arrived there early in the morning. There were many trees and flowers in the park. There was also a hill. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercise and dancing. We also took lots of pictures of the beautiful flowers in the gardens. Then we crossed the bridge and climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we took a boat tour on the lake and we sang happily together. It was a wonderful trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I’m looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in Beijing. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇日记； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”（叙述旅行经历）和“一般现在时”（介绍公园基本情况、表达期待）； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。以日记开头点明时间、天气，引出北京北海公园这一游览地点，说明与同学同行且玩得很开心； 第二步，具体描述旅行过程。先讲述清晨到达公园后的环境感受及所见，再按“沿湖散步拍照——过桥爬山赏景——下午乘船唱歌”的顺序，详细叙述游览活动； 第三步，书写结语。总结这次旅行的美好体验，表达放松愉悦的心情，并提出对游览更多北京美丽地方的期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ①popular places to visit 热门游览地 ②cool and fresh 凉爽清新 ③take lots of pictures 拍很多照片 ④enjoy the views 欣赏风景 ⑤boat tour 乘船游览 ⑥look forward to 期待 ［高分句型］ ①As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercise and dancing.（as引导的时间状语从句） ②It was great to enjoy the views from the top.（it作形式主语） 14．假如你校微信公众号正在开展“假期游记”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行经历。 要求： （1）内容要点齐全，可适当发挥； （2）语言表达要准确，语篇要连贯； （3）词数80～100（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My summer vacation trip My family and I went on vacation this summer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My summer vacation trip My family and I went on vacation this summer. We went to Beijing with my parents by plane on August 1st. Beijing is really a big city. We were very tired when we got there, so the first day we rested in the hotel. On the second day, we visited many places, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Beijing Museum and so on. We also tasted Beijing roast duck. It’s more delicious than we thought. We also bought a lot of presents in Beijing. We stayed in Beijing for seven days in total. Although we were very tired these days, we were very happy. If there is a chance in the future, I would like to travel to Beijing again. I hope my dream will come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据图示信息介绍自己和家人的暑假旅行经历，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍旅行的时间、地点、人物及交通方式； 第二步，介绍具体的活动； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①by plane乘飞机 ②such as例如 ③in total总共 ④come true实现 [高分句型] ①We were very tired when we got there, so the first day we rested in the hotel. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Although we were very tired these days, we were very happy. (although引导让步状语从句) 15．常言道：家是心灵的港湾。请以“My sweet home”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你的家庭活动以及你对家的感受。 注意： 1.语言表达准确，语法正确，语意通顺、连贯； 2.词数80左右。 My sweet home _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My sweet home Home is not just a building, but also a place full of love and warmth. I’m lucky to have a sweet home that brings me great happiness. My home is a comfortable house with a small garden. In spring, colorful flowers bloom, filling the air with their sweet taste. Inside the house, the living room is always full of laughter. We often sit on the soft sofa, chatting and sharing our daily lives. I have many wonderful memories at home. One Christmas, we decorated the Christmas tree together, and the twinkling lights made the room full of joy. I love my home. It’s not only a shelter but also a place where I can always feel safe and loved. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，围绕“我的温馨家庭”展开，描述家庭环境、家庭活动以及对家的感受； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述家庭的常规状态、活动等；使用一般过去时讲述过去在家庭中的经历（如圣诞节的回忆）； ③提示：文章符合题目要求，包含家庭环境、家庭活动、家庭回忆以及对家的感受，内容完整，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明家是充满爱与温暖的地方，表明自己拥有温馨的家并带来幸福，介绍家的整体属性（如房子带小花园）； 第二步，描述家庭环境，包括房子外小花园春天的景象，以及客厅常有的欢乐氛围、家人日常活动（坐在沙发聊天分享）； 第三步，讲述在家的美好回忆（如圣诞节一起装饰圣诞树）； 第四步，阐述对家的感受，说明家不仅是住所，更是能感受安全与爱的地方。 [亮点词汇] ①not just...but also... 不仅......而且 ②be full of充满 ③share分享 ④decorate装饰 ⑤shelter住所 [高分句型] ①Home is not just a building, but also a place full of love and warmth.（not just...but also...连接并列成分） ②When we decorated the Christmas tree together, the twinkling lights made the room full of joy.（when引导时间状语从句 ） ③It’s not only a shelter but also a place where I can always feel safe and loved.（not only...but also...连接并列成分，“where”引导定语从句） 22 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 23 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 第一次月考总复习 Units 1-2 写作满分必背范文15篇（紧贴新教材押题预测） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．家是我们心灵的港湾，成长的摇篮，为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆，红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动，希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事（如分担家务，陪伴家人等）并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示，写文章参与此征文活动。 要求：1．80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2．书写规范，内容连贯，文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。 参考要点： Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired… Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills… Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy… Love Family, Be Helpful Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．中国的传统节日有很多，比如春节、端午节和中秋节等，每个都有丰富的文化内涵，意义深远。 假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter想要了解关于中国传统节日的内容，请你给他写一封信，向他介绍一个你最喜欢的节日以及此节日期间你的活动和你喜欢这个节日的理由。 提示词语：traditional festival, important, delicious food 提示问题：1. What is your favorite festival? 2. How do you celebrate this festival? 3. Why do you like it? Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you. Yours, Li Hua 3．暑假不仅仅是假期，更是学生们成长(growth)，探索(exploration)，和放松(relaxation)的宝贵机会。学校公众号正在征集以“My Colorful Summer”为主题的文章。请结合你最近的暑期经历，谈一谈你都做了些什么让假期生活变得多姿多彩，并阐述这些丰富的活动给你带来了怎样的感受，变化与成长。 要求：1. 80—100词； 2. 不出现本人的真实姓名和学校信息； 参考信息： Colorful activities in Summer Growth areas成长方面 outdoor activities volunteering (志愿者活动) share housework learn how to cook teach myself… Physical (taller, stronger…) Mental (more confident/more understanding/independent (独立的…) Study (study more efficiently (高效地)…) Sports (become better at…) … My Colorful Summer ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．暑假生活已经结束，相信同学们都度过了一个愉快的假期。假设你是李明，现在请将你的假期生活写成邮件告诉你的笔友Mary。内容需要包括以下信息： 1.Where did you go? 2.What did you do? 3.How was your summer holiday? ... 要求：1.内容需包括所给信息，并可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，时态恰当，书写工整； 3.不少于70词，不得出现真实信息。 Dear Mary, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是李华，请你根据你的外国笔友Mike的来信内容给他写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How time flies! The new term is coming. I learned from your WeChat that you went somewhere interesting. I am sure you have a nice summer vacation. Would you like to tell me something about your travel? Where did you go? What did you do there? Who did you go with? If I want to go there next summer vacation, can you give me some advice (建议)? Yours, Mike 写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。 4. 字数不少于80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．去年暑假，你肯定去过许多有趣的地方，请你以“I went to ________ for summer vacation”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1. 你去了什么地方； 2. 进行了哪些活动。 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 词数100左右，可适当增加细节内容。 I went to _______ for summer vacation _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“Family life”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示，选择不少于四个方面，写一篇短文，介绍你的家庭生活。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My family life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．英文中有句谚语“There’s no place like home (没有地方比得上家).”。假如你是Sandy， 请你以“Home, Sweet Home”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。 写作要点： （1）你家的环境； （2）你的家庭成员之间是如何相处的； （3）为了让你的家更加美好，你打算…… 注意： （1）词数不少于80； （2）短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。 Home, Sweet Home _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．请根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文，以“Family Cleaning”为题，描述一次家庭大扫除活动。 要点如下： （1）时间：周六上午；地点：家里；人物：全家人。 （2）具体分工：爸爸负责打扫地板和清理窗户，妈妈整理房间和洗衣服，我和弟弟收拾玩具和书籍。 （3）感受：我们都很有成就感，希望以后多进行这样的活动。 （4）80词左右。 Family Cleaning __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。 要求： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．在你校“劳动教育月”期间，校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动，请结合自身情况，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。 内容要点提示如下： 1在家经常做的家务劳动： ◆ fold clothes        ◆ wash the dishes         ◆ look after pets      ◆ take out the rubbish     ◆ … 2.你做家务劳动后的收获： ◆ life skills (技能)  ◆ take care of ourselves  ◆ understand parents 要求： 1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 These days, here is a topic about doing housework. As the family member, we should take part in it to help our parents. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．“人生在勤，不劳何获”。果戈里说过，“如果儿童不去劳动，他们就既学不会文学，也学不会音乐，也学不会体育，也学不会那些保证道德达到最高峰的礼仪。” 某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话题进行征文，请你试着投稿。请先谈一谈你对于孩子做家务的看法。再说一说你在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务以及你的收获。 提示词语：learn to do, help, parents, independent... 提示问题： 1．What do you think of doing housework? 2．What housework do you usually do at home? 3．What do you learn from doing housework? I think doing housework is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．置身大自然的怀抱，不仅能放松身体，还能滋养精神。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇去公园游玩的日记。 内容包括： （1）Who did you go to the park with? （2）What was in the park? （3）What did you do in the park? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假如你校微信公众号正在开展“假期游记”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你和家人的暑假旅行经历。 要求： （1）内容要点齐全，可适当发挥； （2）语言表达要准确，语篇要连贯； （3）词数80～100（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My summer vacation trip My family and I went on vacation this summer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．常言道：家是心灵的港湾。请以“My sweet home”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你的家庭活动以及你对家的感受。 注意： 1.语言表达准确，语法正确，语意通顺、连贯； 2.词数80左右。 My sweet home _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 5 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $