Unit 3 Fit for life 医疗健康（单元应用文写作精练）英语译林版2020选择性必修第二册

Unit 3 Fit for life 医疗健康 ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(原卷版) 主题：应用文(求助医疗健康遇到的问题) 写作框架： 第一段 开门见山，引出话题。表明写信目的。 第二段 具体介绍医疗健康遇到的问题。 第三段 表达感谢。 写作词汇短语： short-sighted　　　　 adj. 近视的 uncomfortable adj.不舒服的 pressure/stress n. 压力 tired adj. 疲劳的 dim adj. 昏暗的 recognize vt. 辨认;认可 tip/advice/suggestion n. 忠告,建议 protect vt. 保护 relax vt. 使放松 regularly adv. 定期,有规律地 aware adj. 意识到的 grateful adj. 感激的 appreciate vt. 感激;欣赏 eye exercises 眼保健操 do sb. a favor 帮某人忙 in the distance 在远方 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. I’m writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me. 我写信是想告诉你困扰我的问题。 2. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. 现在我想知道你能否帮我个忙。 3. I sincerely hope that you can give me some advice on. . . 我真诚地希望你能给我一些关于……的建议。 【中间句】 4. Recently it’s a bit difficult for me to see things in the distance clearly. 最近,看清楚远处的东西对我来说有点困难。 5. I think it may be because I use my eyes too much that my eyes have become short-sighted. 我想,可能是因为我用眼太多,我的眼睛变近视了。 6. Would you please give me some tips on how to use my eyes scientifically? 你能给我一些科学使用眼睛的建议吗? 【结尾句】 7. I would be grateful if you could offer me some practical advice. 如果你能给我一些实用的建议,我将不胜感激。 8. Your advice will be highly appreciated. 非常感谢您的建议。 写作模板： I’d like to recommend the method of … to you. … is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which…. What’s more,…... 举一反三： 假定你是李华，得知外教Tom最近经常头痛，吃药后效果不佳。请你给他写一封电子邮件，推荐他尝试中医(traditional Chinese medicine)治疗。要点如下： 1. 中医的优点(advantages)：比如中医师根据患者个人情况提供个性化处方(For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions)。可再列举1~2个中医优点。 2. 期待他早日康复。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headaches and cannot recover after taking the medicine. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua Passage 1 假定你是李华，你的国外朋友Mike对中国的中医感兴趣，请你给Mike写一封信，介绍一下中国的中医。内容包括： 1.中医是一种传统的医学体系，拥有2000多年的历史。 2.中医包括针灸、中药和推拿等疗法。这些方法是自然的，副作用少。 3.中医在全球越来越受欢迎。它展现了中国文化的智慧，帮助人们更健康地生活。 注意: 1. 词数90左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：1.Traditional Chinese Medicine中医 2.medical system医学体系 3.acupuncture针灸 4.herbal medicine中药 5.massage推拿 6.side effects副作用 7. wisdom智慧 Dear Mike, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 假定你是李华，你校将举办以Should Traditional Chinese Medicine Be Promoted Globally?为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1.你的观点； 2.说明理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Should Traditional Chinese Medicine Be Promoted Globally? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom通过网络了解了中医的有关信息，但他对中医的治疗效果持怀疑态度。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 中医的价值和作用; 2. 推荐进一步了解中医的渠道。 参考词汇：中医 traditional Chinese medicine(TCM); 针灸 acupuncture; 《黄帝内经》 Huang Di Nei Jing 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了一场急救知识大赛。请你为你校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.比赛目的；    2.比赛内容；       3.比赛反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 A First-Aid Knowledge Competition ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 当你得知美国外教Jack用西医治疗自己的头痛效果不佳时，你给他写了一封电子邮件，推荐中医治疗。 内容包括：①中医的特点；②祝愿他早日康复。 注意： 1. 词数80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 参考词汇：按摩 massage 针灸 acupuncture 处方 prescription Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua ( 5 / 5 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 Fit for life 医疗健康 ( 写作主题 识 )应用文写作精练(解析版) 主题：应用文(求助医疗健康遇到的问题) 写作框架： 第一段 开门见山，引出话题。表明写信目的。 第二段 具体介绍医疗健康遇到的问题。 第三段 表达感谢。 写作词汇短语： short-sighted　　　　 adj. 近视的 uncomfortable adj.不舒服的 pressure/stress n. 压力 tired adj. 疲劳的 dim adj. 昏暗的 recognize vt. 辨认;认可 tip/advice/suggestion n. 忠告,建议 protect vt. 保护 relax vt. 使放松 regularly adv. 定期,有规律地 aware adj. 意识到的 grateful adj. 感激的 appreciate vt. 感激;欣赏 eye exercises 眼保健操 do sb. a favor 帮某人忙 in the distance 在远方 写作句型： 【开头句】 1. I’m writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me. 我写信是想告诉你困扰我的问题。 2. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. 现在我想知道你能否帮我个忙。 3. I sincerely hope that you can give me some advice on. . . 我真诚地希望你能给我一些关于……的建议。 【中间句】 4. Recently it’s a bit difficult for me to see things in the distance clearly. 最近,看清楚远处的东西对我来说有点困难。 5. I think it may be because I use my eyes too much that my eyes have become short-sighted. 我想,可能是因为我用眼太多,我的眼睛变近视了。 6. Would you please give me some tips on how to use my eyes scientifically? 你能给我一些科学使用眼睛的建议吗? 【结尾句】 7. I would be grateful if you could offer me some practical advice. 如果你能给我一些实用的建议,我将不胜感激。 8. Your advice will be highly appreciated. 非常感谢您的建议。 写作模板： I’d like to recommend the method of … to you. … is a key component of traditional Chinese medicine, which…. What’s more,…... 举一反三： 假定你是李华，得知外教Tom最近经常头痛，吃药后效果不佳。请你给他写一封电子邮件，推荐他尝试中医(traditional Chinese medicine)治疗。要点如下： 1. 中医的优点(advantages)：比如中医师根据患者个人情况提供个性化处方(For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions)。可再列举1~2个中医优点。 2. 期待他早日康复。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headaches and cannot recover after taking the medicine. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headaches and cannot recover after taking the medicine. Therefore, I am writing to recommend you to have a try on traditional Chinese medicine. Compared with Western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine possesses many advantages. For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment. Additionally, traditional Chinese medicine also relieves the patients of their suffering by acupuncture, which has minor side effects on them. As a result, I strongly advise you to try it, hoping that you will be free of the headache and that your health will pick up so that all of us can enjoy your inspiring lessons soon. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的推荐信。要求考生给外教Tom写封信，就其最近经常头痛，吃药后效果不佳一事，向其推荐尝试中医治疗。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 很多：many → a great many 倾向于：tend to → have a tendency to 此外：additionally → in addition 影响：effect → influence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment. 拓展句：For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription which is based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Additionally, traditional Chinese medicine also relieves the patients of their suffering by acupuncture, which has minor side effects on them.(运用了which引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】As a result, I strongly advise you to try it, hoping that you will be free of the headache and that your health will pick up so that all of us can enjoy your inspiring lessons soon.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句) Passage 1 假定你是李华，你的国外朋友Mike对中国的中医感兴趣，请你给Mike写一封信，介绍一下中国的中医。内容包括： 1.中医是一种传统的医学体系，拥有2000多年的历史。 2.中医包括针灸、中药和推拿等疗法。这些方法是自然的，副作用少。 3.中医在全球越来越受欢迎。它展现了中国文化的智慧，帮助人们更健康地生活。 注意: 1. 词数90左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：1.Traditional Chinese Medicine中医 2.medical system医学体系 3.acupuncture针灸 4.herbal medicine中药 5.massage推拿 6.side effects副作用 7. wisdom智慧 Dear Mike, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Traditional Chinese Medicine. Now, let me introduce it to you. Traditional Chinese Medicine is a traditional medical system with a history of over 2000 years. It includes various therapies such as acupuncture, herbal medicine and massage. These methods are natural and have few side effects. In recent years, TCM has become increasingly popular around the world. It shows the wisdom of Chinese culture and helps people live healthier lives. Whether it’s for treating diseases or maintaining good health, TCM plays an important role. I hope you can have a better understanding of TCM through my introduction. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。国外朋友Mike对中医感兴趣，要求考生给Mike写一封信介绍一下中医。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 对……感兴趣：be interested in → be keen to 各种各样的：various → all kinds of 高兴的：glad → delighted 重要的：important → vital 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：In recent years, TCM has become increasingly popular around the world. It shows the wisdom of Chinese culture and helps people live healthier lives. 拓展句：In recent years, TCM, which shows the wisdom of Chinese culture and helps people live healthier lives, has become increasingly popular around the world. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Whether it’s for treating diseases or maintaining good health, TCM plays an important role.(运用了Whether…or…引导的让步状语从句) 【高分句型2】I hope you can have a better understanding of TCM through my introduction.(运用了省略从属连词that引导的宾语从句) Passage 2 假定你是李华，你校将举办以Should Traditional Chinese Medicine Be Promoted Globally?为题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1.你的观点； 2.说明理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Should Traditional Chinese Medicine Be Promoted Globally? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Should Traditional Chinese Medicine Be Promoted Globally? Good morning, everyone! I firmly believe that traditional Chinese medicine (TCM) should be promoted globally. TCM has a long history and has been proven effective in treating various diseases. It focuses on the balance of the body and uses natural herbs, which have fewer side effects. In addition, TCM also emphasizes the prevention of diseases, helping people maintain good health. Therefore, promoting TCM globally can provide more health options for people around the world and contribute to global health. Thank you! 【导语】这篇写作属于应用文，是一篇演讲稿，要求考生就中医是否应该走向世界进行主题演讲。考生应该注意包含题目要求的要点，同时补充合理细节。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累： ①坚定地：firmly→steadily ②有效的：effective →significant ③强调：emphasize → stresse →highlight ④促进：promote → advance →propagate 2. 句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：TCM has a long history and has been proven effective in treating various diseases. 拓展句：TCM has a long history, which has been proven effective in treating various diseases. 【点睛】 【高级句型1】It focuses on the balance of the body and uses natural herbs, which have fewer side effects. (which引导的定语从句) 【高级句型2】In addition, TCM also emphasizes the prevention of diseases, helping people maintain good health. (现在分词作结果状语) Passage 3 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom通过网络了解了中医的有关信息，但他对中医的治疗效果持怀疑态度。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 中医的价值和作用; 2. 推荐进一步了解中医的渠道。 参考词汇：中医 traditional Chinese medicine(TCM); 针灸 acupuncture; 《黄帝内经》 Huang Di Nei Jing 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear that you’ve been exploring traditional Chinese medicine(TCM). I understand your skepticism, but TCM has been practiced for thousands of years and is deeply rooted in Chinese culture. It focuses on balancing the body’s energy and uses natural methods like herbal medicine, and acupuncture to promote health and treat illnesses. Many people find it effective, especially for chronic conditions or overall wellness. If you’d like to explore further, I recommend reading Huang Di Nei Jing, a foundational TCM text. You can also watch documentaries or visit reputable TCM hospitals to see how it works in practice. I hope this helps you gain a better understanding of TCM. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的外国朋友Tom通过网络了解了中医的有关信息，但他对中医的治疗效果持怀疑态度。请你给他写一封邮件 【详解】 1.词汇积累 怀疑：skepticism→doubt 集中：focus on→concentrate on 尤其是：especially→particularly 建议：recommend→suggest 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Many people find it effective, especially for chronic conditions or overall wellness. 拓展句： Many people find it effective, especially for those who have chronic conditions or overall wellness. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】If you’d like to explore further, I recommend reading Huang Di Nei Jing, a foundational TCM text.(运用了if引导条件状语从句) 【高分句型2】You can also watch documentaries or visit reputable TCM hospitals to see how it works in practice.(运用了how引导宾语从句) Passage 4 假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了一场急救知识大赛。请你为你校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1.比赛目的；    2.比赛内容；       3.比赛反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 A First-Aid Knowledge Competition ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A First-Aid Knowledge Competition Last Friday, a first-aid knowledge competition was held in our school. The purpose of this competition was to equip our students with basic knowledge about first aid. At the beginning, the competitors had to answer many questions about first aid. Then, they were required to perform first aid on the spot in given situations. We all considered that the activity was meaningful and rewarding. We not only gained knowledge of first aid, but also realized how important it is to keep a cool head when medical emergencies happen. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“上周五你校举办了一场急救知识大赛”一事，为你校英文报写一篇报道，描述其比赛目的、比赛内容和比赛反响。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 比赛：competition→contest 举办：hold→conduct 获得：gain→obtain 重要的：important→significant 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last Friday, a first-aid knowledge competition was held in our school. The purpose of this competition was to equip our students with basic knowledge about first aid. 拓展句：Last Friday, a first-aid knowledge competition was held in our school, whose purpose was to equip our students with basic knowledge about first aid. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】We all considered that the activity was meaningful and rewarding. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】We not only gained knowledge of first aid, but also realized how important it is to keep a cool head when medical emergencies happen. (运用了how引导的宾语从句，when引导引导的时间状语从句) Passage 5 当你得知美国外教Jack用西医治疗自己的头痛效果不佳时，你给他写了一封电子邮件，推荐中医治疗。 内容包括：①中医的特点；②祝愿他早日康复。 注意： 1. 词数80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 参考词汇：按摩 massage 针灸 acupuncture 处方 prescription Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jack , I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headache but cannot recover after taking the medicine.Therefore, I am writing to recommend you to have a try on traditional Chinese treatment. Compared with western medicine, traditional Chinese treatment possesses many advantages. For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment. Additionally, traditional Chinese medicine also relieves the patients of their suffering by acupuncture or massage , which exerts minor side effects on them. As a result, I strongly advise you to try it, hoping that you will be free of the headache and your health will pick up so that all of us can enjoy your inspiring lessons soon. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。考生得知美国外教Jack用西医治疗自己的头痛效果不佳，要求考生给他写了一封电子邮件，推荐中医治疗。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 因此：therefore →thus 提供：offer → provide 特别的：particular → especial 另外：additionally → furthermore 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment. 拓展句：For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine often prescribe a specific treatment plan for patients, which is tailored to their individual conditions, in order to achieve a more effective cure. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headache but cannot recover after taking the medicine.(省略that的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Additionally, traditional Chinese medicine also relieves the patients of their suffering by acupuncture or massage , which exerts minor side effects on them.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ( 1 / 10 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $