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Unit 3 The art of painting
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写作主题
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)应用文写作精练(解析版)
主题:说明文(介绍制作一件作品的步骤)
写作框架:
第一段
开门见山,引出话题。点明制作作品的步骤。
第二段
具体介绍制作作品的材料和步骤。
第三段
给出处理制作的作品的建议。
写作词汇短语:
(1)制作工具及材料
tool 工具
material 材料, 原料
knife 刀子
brush 刷子
(2)步骤及过程
procedure 步骤
a piece of 一片, 一块
firstly/to begin with/to start with 首先
the next step 下一步
finally/lastly/in the end 最后
a variety of 各种各样的
写作句型:
【开头句】
①Have you ever tried to make art out of wood?
你试过用木头创造艺术品吗?
②What plays an important role in finding inspiration for your art from nature?
在你从自然中寻找艺术灵感的过程中, 什么起着重要的作用?
③Follow the steps below to make it.
按照下面的步骤来做。
【中间句】
①There are endless possibilities for the works you create.
你创作的作品有无限的可能。
②Red peppers can be used to make the mouth.
红辣椒可以用来做嘴巴。
③Decide what image you want to create.
决定你想创作的图像。
④To begin with, lay the butter on the bread and then arrange some vegetables on it.
首先, 把黄油涂在面包上, 然后在上面放一些蔬菜。
【结尾句】
①In the end, a fine artwork is produced.
最后, 一件精美的艺术品就诞生了。
②If so, you can enjoy your work later.
这样以后你就可以欣赏自己的作品了。
写作模板:
How to Make Fruit Salad
… is many people’s favourite because it is not only easy to make but also tastes delicious.
Things you need
◆________________________
◆________________________
◆________________________
◆________________________
◆________________________
Procedures
Step 1: ________________________
Step 2: ________________________
Step 3: ________________________
Step 4: ________________________
I hope you can see it someday and tell me what you think.
举一反三:
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris对艺术创作很感兴趣。请你给他写一封电子邮件分享你近期在艺术课上完成的一件作品,内容包括:
1.作品介绍;
2.创作感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you the work I’ve recently finished in my art class.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you the work I’ve recently finished in my art class.
It’s a painting of a serene village, which is exactly the kind of place that I’ve long yearned to explore. In the painting, you can observe tiny houses with red roofs nestled among lush green trees. What sets it apart is that I’ve incorporated a rainbow in the sky, which symbolizes hope and optimism. While I was painting it, I felt extremely calm and I realized that art is what truly allows me to convey my deepest emotions.
I hope you can see it someday and tell me what you think.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件,分享近期在艺术课上完成的一件作品,包括作品介绍和创作感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
宁静的:serene → peaceful
渴望:yearn → hope
茂密的:lush → dense
表达:convey→ express
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:It’s a painting of a serene village, which is exactly the kind of place that I’ve long yearned to explore.
拓展句:It’s a painting of a serene village, the kind of place that I’ve long yearned to explore.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It’s a painting of a serene village, which is exactly the kind of place that I’ve long yearned to explore.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句、that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What sets it apart is that I’ve incorporated a rainbow in the sky, which symbolizes hope and optimism. (运用了What引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 1
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校准备制作一本毕业纪念册,现向所有高三学生征集一张有关自己高中生活的照片,并附上一篇短文,内容包括:
1.对照片内容的描述;
2.选择该照片的理由;
3.对未来的展望。
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【答案】
A Moment That Ignites the Spirit of Teamwork
I’m Li Hua, and I’d like to share a photo taken on the school sports day last year. In the picture, my classmates and I are cheering for our relay team members, who are running fiercely on the track with sweat on their faces.
I chose this photo because it reminds me of the power of teamwork. When our relay team fell behind, none of us gave up. We shouted loudly to encourage each other, and finally, we won the third place. This experience taught me that success comes from trust and support, which I’ll never forget.
Looking ahead, I hope to carry this spirit into university. I believe I can overcome challenges by working with others, just as we did in high school. Whether in study groups or club activities, I’ll always value every partnership. I’m excited about the new journey and ready to create more meaningful memories.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为高三学生李华,为学校毕业纪念册提供一张高中生活照片并附上短文,描述照片内容、选择理由及对未来的展望。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
使想起:remind → recall
鼓励:encourage→ inspire
克服:overcome → conquer
激动的:excited → thrilled
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, and I’d like to share a photo taken on the school sports day last year.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, and I’d like to share a photo which was taken on the school sports day last year.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In the picture, my classmates and I are cheering for our relay team members, who are running fiercely on the track with sweat on their faces.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This experience taught me that success comes from trust and support, which I’ll never forget.(运用了that引导的宾语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是李华,刚从美国参加完夏令营归来。为表达对你的寄宿家庭的主人 Steven的谢意,你打算给他寄一套关于齐白石作品的明信片。请给Steven写一封信,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 介绍齐白石及其作品;
3. 邀请对方来中国。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Steven,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Steven,
It has been a week since I came back from the US. I’m writing to express my gratitude for your wonderful arrangement during my stay in the US.
To show my gratitude, I enclose a series of postcards featuring the works of the famous Chinese painter Qi Baishi, who is most well-known for his paintings of shrimps. When looking at his works of shrimps, it seems those shrimps are actually alive. I hope you will like this gift.
If time permits, please do come to China for a visit and we can have more fun enjoying various forms of Chinese art.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国夏令营寄宿家庭的主人Steven写一封感谢信,表达对其照顾的感谢,介绍齐白石及其作品,并邀请对方来中国。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感谢:gratitude → appreciation
随信附上:enclose → include
著名的:famous → renowned
允许:permit → allow
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to express my gratitude for your wonderful arrangement during my stay in the US.
拓展句:I’m writing this letter to express my appreciation for the wonderful arrangement that you made during my stay in the US.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To show my gratitude, I enclose a series of postcards featuring the works of the famous Chinese painter Qi Baishi , who is mostly well-known for his painting of shrimps.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语,现在分词作后置定语和who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If time permits, please do come to China for a visit and we can have more fun enjoying various forms of Chinese art.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 3
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你的英国笔友Henry目前作为交换生在天津大学学习。你最近参观了一场“中国艺术展”(Exhibition of Chinese Art),收获颇丰。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍参观的时间、地点及同行人员;
2. 描述展览中的艺术形式(如绘画、书法、雕塑等)并分享参展收获;
3. 推荐Henry去观展。
参考词汇:书法calligraphy;雕塑sculpture
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you my recent visit with my friends to the Exhibition of Chinese Art, held at the Tianjin Art Museum last weekend.
The exhibition displayed various forms of traditional art, including landscape paintings, calligraphy, and clay sculptures, which helped me gain a deep insight into the abundant Chinese culture. I was particularly amazed by a delicate porcelain vase from the Ming Dynasty, whose patterns were impressive! Not only did this visit enrich my life and broaden my horizons, but also it helped me better appreciate China’s artistic heritage.
Since you have a great passion for the profound Chinese culture, I highly recommend you to visit it.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Henry写封电子邮件,跟他分享你最近参观的一场“中国艺术展”的相关情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
各种各样的:various→a variety of
帮助:help→assist
热情:passion→enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to share with you my recent visit with my friends to the Exhibition of Chinese Art, held at the Tianjin Art Museum last weekend.
拓展句:I’m writing to share with you my recent visit with my friends to the Exhibition of Chinese Art, which was held at the Tianjin Art Museum last weekend.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The exhibition displayed various forms of traditional art, including landscape paintings, calligraphy, and clay sculptures, which helped me gain a deep insight into the abundant Chinese culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I was particularly amazed by a delicate porcelain vase from the Ming Dynasty, whose patterns were impressive! (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 4
假如你是李华,最近参观了博物馆举办的绘画展,你的外国朋友Daniel对此很感兴趣,写信向你咨询细节,请你写一封回信。内容包括:
1. 活动亮点;
2. 观展感受。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
Pleased to know that you are interested in the painting exhibition at the National Museum, I’m writing to share some details about my recent visit, which featured a collection of traditional Chinese paintings.
One of the highlights was Tang Yin’s masterpiece Clearing After Snow on a Mountain Pass, immersing viewers in a Ming Dynasty winter landscape. Renowned for its masterful brushwork, this artwork vividly depicts snow-covered mountains, trees, and houses with strokes so fluid and natural that the snow appears freshly fallen.
I was deeply moved by the artist’s ability to capture nature’s serene beauty. This experience has deepened my appreciation for the timeless elegance of Chinese art.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的外国朋友Daniel写信告诉他关于你参观的博物馆举办绘画展的详细情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in → take interest in
分享:share → have a share in
有名的:renowned → famous
感动:move → touch
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:One of the highlights was Tang Yin’s masterpiece Clearing After Snow on a Mountain Pass, immersing viewers in a Ming Dynasty winter landscape.
拓展句:One of the highlights was Tang Yin’s masterpiece Clearing After Snow on a Mountain Pass, which immersed viewers in a Ming Dynasty winter landscape.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to share some details about my recent visit, which featured a collection of traditional Chinese paintings.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Renowned for its masterful brushwork, this artwork vividly depicts snow-covered mountains, trees, and houses with strokes so fluid and natural that the snow appears freshly fallen.(运用了so…that…连接的结果状语从句)
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你市美术馆(art gallery)将举办中国国画展(Chinese Painting Exhibition),但你因故不能前往,想把入场券转赠给好友Eric。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.画展简介,包括时间,地点等; 2.转赠入场券的原因; 3.希望尽早回复。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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【答案】
Dear Eric,
I hope this message finds you well. I have a ticket for the upcoming Chinese Painting Exhibition at our city’s art gallery, but unfortunately, I won’t be able to attend due to my grandma’s illness. So I’d like to offer you the ticket as I believe you’d love it.
The exhibition is scheduled for this Saturday from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm. It will show Chinese paintings by famous artists like Xu Beihong and Zhang Daqian. I’m sure you’ll find it fascinating.
If you want the ticket, please let me know as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给好友Eric写一封邮件,告知其市美术馆将举办中国国画展,因自身原因无法前往,想把入场券转赠给他,邮件内容需包含画展简介、转赠原因和希望尽早回复。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
不幸地:unfortunately→unluckily
参加:attend→present
由于:due to→because of
著名的:famous→renowned
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The exhibition is scheduled for this Saturday from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm. It will show Chinese paintings by famous artists like Xu Beihong and Zhang Daqian.
拓展句:The exhibition is scheduled for this Saturday from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm. which will show Chinese paintings by famous artists like Xu Beihong and Zhang Daqian.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】So I’d like to offer you the ticket as I believe you’d love it.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want the ticket, please let me know as soon as possible.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
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Unit 3 The art of painting
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写作主题
识
)应用文写作精练(原卷版)
主题:说明文(介绍制作一件作品的步骤)
写作框架:
第一段
开门见山,引出话题。点明制作作品的步骤。
第二段
具体介绍制作作品的材料和步骤。
第三段
给出处理制作的作品的建议。
写作词汇短语:
(1)制作工具及材料
tool 工具
material 材料, 原料
knife 刀子
brush 刷子
(2)步骤及过程
procedure 步骤
a piece of 一片, 一块
firstly/to begin with/to start with 首先
the next step 下一步
finally/lastly/in the end 最后
a variety of 各种各样的
写作句型:
【开头句】
①Have you ever tried to make art out of wood?
你试过用木头创造艺术品吗?
②What plays an important role in finding inspiration for your art from nature?
在你从自然中寻找艺术灵感的过程中, 什么起着重要的作用?
③Follow the steps below to make it.
按照下面的步骤来做。
【中间句】
①There are endless possibilities for the works you create.
你创作的作品有无限的可能。
②Red peppers can be used to make the mouth.
红辣椒可以用来做嘴巴。
③Decide what image you want to create.
决定你想创作的图像。
④To begin with, lay the butter on the bread and then arrange some vegetables on it.
首先, 把黄油涂在面包上, 然后在上面放一些蔬菜。
【结尾句】
①In the end, a fine artwork is produced.
最后, 一件精美的艺术品就诞生了。
②If so, you can enjoy your work later.
这样以后你就可以欣赏自己的作品了。
写作模板:
How to Make Fruit Salad
… is many people’s favourite because it is not only easy to make but also tastes delicious.
Things you need
◆________________________
◆________________________
◆________________________
◆________________________
◆________________________
Procedures
Step 1: ________________________
Step 2: ________________________
Step 3: ________________________
Step 4: ________________________
I hope you can see it someday and tell me what you think.
举一反三:
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris对艺术创作很感兴趣。请你给他写一封电子邮件分享你近期在艺术课上完成的一件作品,内容包括:
1.作品介绍;
2.创作感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you the work I’ve recently finished in my art class.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校准备制作一本毕业纪念册,现向所有高三学生征集一张有关自己高中生活的照片,并附上一篇短文,内容包括:
1.对照片内容的描述;
2.选择该照片的理由;
3.对未来的展望。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
假设你是李华,刚从美国参加完夏令营归来。为表达对你的寄宿家庭的主人 Steven的谢意,你打算给他寄一套关于齐白石作品的明信片。请给Steven写一封信,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 介绍齐白石及其作品;
3. 邀请对方来中国。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Steven,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你的英国笔友Henry目前作为交换生在天津大学学习。你最近参观了一场“中国艺术展”(Exhibition of Chinese Art),收获颇丰。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍参观的时间、地点及同行人员;
2. 描述展览中的艺术形式(如绘画、书法、雕塑等)并分享参展收获;
3. 推荐Henry去观展。
参考词汇:书法calligraphy;雕塑sculpture
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
假如你是李华,最近参观了博物馆举办的绘画展,你的外国朋友Daniel对此很感兴趣,写信向你咨询细节,请你写一封回信。内容包括:
1. 活动亮点;
2. 观展感受。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你市美术馆(art gallery)将举办中国国画展(Chinese Painting Exhibition),但你因故不能前往,想把入场券转赠给好友Eric。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.画展简介,包括时间,地点等; 2.转赠入场券的原因; 3.希望尽早回复。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
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