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专题08 综合技能 写作
主题01 人与自我——人物介绍
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省常德市·期中)
假如你是来自于英国的Linda,现在在湖南学习,请你给在英国的妈妈写一封信,介绍一下你在中国新结交的好朋友Li Hua。
内容包括:
1. Li Hua比我文静,头发比我长,她对我很友善,常常帮助我学汉语。
2. 我们俩都喜欢打篮球,她比我打得好,我们至少一周打两次。
3. 上周末,天气晴朗,上午我们去爬山了。晚上,我们去看了电影《花木兰》。我对这部电影的感受是……
要求:
1. 字迹工整,书写规范,语句通顺,注意单词的大小写和标点符号等;
2. 70词左右,可适当增加细节和要点,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear mother,
How is everything going? Now I am having fun studying in Hunan. Here I make a good friend.
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Yours,
Linda
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省长沙市湖南师大附中博才实验中学附中集团·期中)
古往今来,朋友一直是人们生活中重要的组成部分,吟诵友情的佳篇更是不胜枚举。那么你的生活中有没有这样一位朋友呢?他/她在你生活中扮演什么样的角色呢?请你以“My Best Friend”为题,介绍一位你的好朋友。要点包括朋友的外貌特征、个性品质、生活习惯以及你们的相同或不同之处。
注意:
1. 80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My Best Friend
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Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省永州市新田县·期中)
亲爱的同学们,时间过得真快,转眼大家已经初二了。相信大家都已经适应了初中生活,也结识了不少好朋友吧。假设你叫Greg,以下是你的好友Helen发给你的一封电子邮件,请你根据邮件内容,给Helen写一封邮件。
要求:(1) 请回复邮件中所提及的问题,可适当发挥,70词左右;
(2)语言流畅、规范。文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等相关信息。
Dear Greg,
How time flies! You have been in the middle school for a whole year. I hope everything is OK with you. In your last letter, you said you made a new friend at school. What is he/she like? Can he/she play basketball as well as you? What kind of TV shows does he/she like and why? How often does he/she watch TV? Look forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Helen
Dear Helen,
I’m glad to introduce my good friend ________ to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Greg
主题02 人与自我——生活 / 活动记录
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省长沙市华益中学·期中)11月15日,你的学校组织了大围山秋季研学活动,请根据下图内容,写一篇日记,记录你的研学之旅,并用形容词最高级介绍你最喜欢的活动,食物及原因。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语法正确,行文连贯;
2. 书写工整 ,卷面整洁;
3. 须包含所给提示内容,可适当发挥;
4. 不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Wednesday, November 15th.
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip to Dawei Mountain.
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Passage 2
(22-23八年级上·湖南省永州市蓝山县·期中)
良好的习惯对我们的学习、生活都有益处。你是否拥有良好的生活习惯?请根据下列提示,以“How to keep healthy?”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,开头已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。
1.健康的饮食
多蔬菜水果,少垃圾食品
2.适当的运动
一星期至少三、四次运动
3.足够的睡眠
8—9小时
4.保持微笑(smile)
开心、乐观
提示词:good healthy habits, be happy and optimistic (乐观)
How to keep healthy?
What can we do to keep healthy? Here are some good ways for you.
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Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省湘潭市岳塘区·期中)Tim和Tom是双胞胎兄弟。他们有一些相同点,也有不同点。
相同点:长相相同;学习刻苦;喜欢看比赛节目。
不同点:Tim更外向,更擅长体育。
Tom更安静,喜欢去城市电影院(City Cinema)看电影,那儿离家最近,座位最舒服。
Tim and Tom are twin brothers. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题03 人与社会——现实生活与事件记录
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省衡阳市衡南县·期中)假如你是某国际学校的美国交换生Lisa。昨天是周日,你同桌周强约你出去游玩了一天, 晚上你收到了他的微信。
Places
Like it or not?
Why?
City Park
large, relaxing. . .
Noodle House
cheap, delicious. . .
Xinhua Library
small, uncomfortable seats. . .
要求:
(1)微信回复内容需包含表格中的提示信息,可适当发挥。
(2)语言表达要准确,语义通顺、连贯。
(3)70 词左右。
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Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市一中教育集团·期中)
长沙,中国最具幸福感的城市之一,拥有着独特的人文风情和历史底蕴,吸引着越来越多的人来此打卡。假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Lucy来信说下个月将要来长沙旅游。请你向她简单介绍长沙这座热门城市,并根据表格内容推荐3个长沙必去的地方并说明原因。
写作要求:
1. 包含图表中所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名等相关信息。
Must-go places
Reasons
Orange Isle (橘子洲)
* the biggest statue (雕塑) of Chairman Mao
* a popular place for boating and bike riding
Taiping Street (太平街)
* the most delicious local snacks (当地小吃)
* …
…
* …
* …
参考词汇:
the hottest city热门城市;Yuelu Mountain岳麓山;Yuelu Academy岳麓书院;Hunan Museum湖南博物院;Changsha IFS长沙国金中心
Dear Lucy,
I’m happy to hear that you will come to Changsha for a visit.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省衡阳市八中教育集团·期中)
11月4日,第二届衡阳旅游发展大会正式开幕。作为衡阳的小小旅游推荐官,请你推介衡阳不可错过的以下三个好地方。
Mount Heng
the highest mountain;
the most famous mountain in Hengyang;
bring people good luck;
enjoy the sunrise (日出);
...
Dongzhou Island (岛)
the largest island in Hengyang,
the most beautiful place;
spend time with friends and families;
take photos and enjoy flowers;
...
Wanda Plaza (广场)
the most popular plaza in Hengyang;
the biggest shopping center;
the best movie theater;
different kinds of special food;
...
要求:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右, 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和班级。
Hengyang is a beautiful city. As a student from Hengyang, I want to introduce three good places to you.
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主题04 人与自我——人际交往
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省衡阳实验中学·期中)
学校举办英语演讲比赛,主题是介绍自己最好的朋友。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇演讲稿介绍你的好朋友Jeff。
内容要点:
1.个子比你高,比你更外向。他总是给你讲有意思的故事。
2.喜欢运动,每周锻炼四次。放学后,你们还一起打篮球。
3.喜欢听音乐,看动作片,还喜欢看新闻,因为……
4.上周末,你们去Town Cinema看了电影,你觉得这家影院是最好的一家影院,因为它有最舒适的座位和最好的音效。
要求:
1.内容必须包含以上信息,并可根据需要适当添加;
2.书写规范,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
3.词数80词左右,所给开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my best friend Jeff to you.
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That’s all. Thank you.
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市雅礼教育集团·期中)
假如你是Jane,请给你的朋友Vera写信介绍自己从美国来长沙后的生活。
内容包括:
(1)你游览过的地方;
(2)结交的新朋友(至少写三点你和朋友的异同);
(3)你的择友观。
要求:
(1)短文必须包括以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Vera,
I miss you very much. I have been in Changsha for one year. Let me tell you something about my life there._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jane
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市湘阴县城南区·期中)
假如Mike是你最好的朋友,请以“My best friend”为题,从以下五个方面向大家介绍他:
1.是一个帅气的男孩,在班上他个子最高,性格最外向;
2.每天起得最早,喜欢做运动,每周锻炼三四次,身体很健康;
3.喜欢吃蔬菜和水果,有一个好的饮食习惯;
4.在班上学习最努力,最喜欢英语学科,平时爱看英语书,认为英语比数学有趣;
5.不能忍受访谈节目,认为它们很无聊。
要求:可适当发挥,但必须包含所给信息,80词左右。
My best friend
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主题01 人与社会——经历记录
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市临湘市·期中)
5.2023年中秋节、国庆节国内旅游大复苏,累计出游8026亿人次。请以“My trip to ______”为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文,记叙你的一次中秋国庆之旅。
提示:1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel about the trip?
要求:1. 请在题目空格处填入你的旅行地点,如:Beijing, Changsha或Qingdao等;
2. 表达通顺,书写规范,可适当发挥;
3. 不少于80词;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省邵阳市隆回县·期中)假如你校英文报Travel专栏正面向全校学生征稿,恰好你们班上周五组织了一次红色研学旅行。请你根据以下表格提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你的旅行经历并投稿。
时间
上周五
天气
晴
交通方式
公共汽车
参加人员
全班学生
目的地
隆回县向家村 (Xiangjia Village, Longhui County)
活动
参观向家村村史馆 (the Xiangjia Village History Museum)、在村民家做饭、观看电影、唱红歌(red songs)……
你的感想
……
要求:1.包含提示中的所有要点,语言表达准确,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右;
3.不得使用真实姓名和校名。
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Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省长沙市长郡教育集团联考·期中)
十月份杭州亚运会如火如荼地进行。假如你是李明,国庆假你去了杭州观看亚运会并游览了杭州。请根据表格中所提供的信息写一篇短文,记录自己的杭州之行。
要点提示:
Time
October 1st~3rd
Place
Hangzhou
Weather
Sunny and cool
People
My friend and I
Transportation
Plane
Things we did
1. watch games;
2. visit the West Lake and take quite a few photos;
3. eat delicious food such as Dongpo meat;
4. buy some special things such as ...
5. ...
Feelings
...
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
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主题02 人与社会——现实建议
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·湖南省岳阳市湘阴县·期中)
假如你是Jerry,你的朋友Jack和父母在沟通方面存在问题,请你用英语写一封信给Jack,给予他一些建议。内容包括:
1. 讲述你与父母的一次沟通经历(包括时间、地点、事件、结果);
2. 对如何与父母沟通提出至少2点建议;
要求:不少于80词
Dear Jack,
I know that you have trouble communicating with your parents. And I had the same experience.
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Yours,
Jerry
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省怀化市新晃侗族自治县·期中)
假如你是李华。请你根据下面表格中提示的信息,给你的英国朋友Jim 写一封信告诉她你对不同的电视节目的看法。
Programs
Attitudes
Reasons
soap operas
can’t stand
boring
game shows
love
exciting and enjoyable
news
don’t mind
educational
要求:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2. 包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:80 词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
There are many programs on TV.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市弘毅新华中学·期中)
为了加深中英两国的文化理解和交流,第一中学组织了一次中英学生对比的调查活动。请你据以下调查结果,适当将内容补充完整,写一篇调查结果的报告。
中国学生
英国学生
性格
更外向
更严肃
校园生活
学习更努力,作业更多
更擅长交朋友,喜欢参加各种聚会
饮食习惯
……
兴趣爱好
……
要求:
1. 要点齐全,可适当增加自己的看法;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名;
3. 80词左右,报告的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:take part in 参与
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to talk about the differences between Chinese students and English students._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题03 人与自我——旅游
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市明德教育集团·期中)
14.假如你是李华,在Amazing Travelling论坛上认识了美国中学生Kevin。上周末他来信询问你国庆期间去了哪里,并计划元旦来长沙旅游,想让你推荐几个景点。请你根据以下要点,给Kevin回信。
城市
观光地
活动
感受
三亚
海边
吃到了海鲜(seafood),……
非常开心
长沙
橘子洲(Orange Island)
最受欢迎的地方之一
拍照,……
……
五一广场(Wuyi Square)
最大的广场
看电影,……
注意:
1.80词左右;开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和学校。
Dear Kevin,
I’m glad to hear from you. I went to Sanya with my parents during the National Day holiday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省花垣县华鑫学校·期中)
研学旅行 (study trip) 是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动,深受学生的喜爱。为了丰富学校课程,今年11月1日至2日,华鑫学校开展了研学旅行。为此,请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,80词左右,介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。内容包括:
1. 学习蜡染手工制作,体验生活;
2. 观察大熊猫,亲近自然;
3. 参观博物馆,了解历史文化;
4. 观看有意义的电影,感受国家变化。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4. 参考词汇:meaningful adj. 有意义的;nature n. 自然;history n. 历史;culture n. 文化;batik skill 蜡染技术;changes of our nation 国家变化;experience life 体验生活
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school also held a study trip last week. Here are my experiences.
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Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市岳阳县·期中)
My Last Weekend
上周末,你度过了很有意义的两天,以下是活动内容,请根据以下提示,介绍你的上个周末。
时间
活动
周六
1. 上午去敬老院看望老人:帮他们打扫房间;和他们聊天;听他们讲故事……
2. 下午志愿清扫街道和城市公园:打扫并倒垃圾;张贴标语;分发通知……
周日
1. 上午做家务:打扫客厅、房间;洗碗;倒垃圾……
2. 下午做作业;准备考试……
感受
繁忙但很快乐;应该帮助别人;帮助爸妈分担家务
要求:词数不少于80个,内容完整,可适当发挥。
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主题04 人与自我——健康生活
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市湖南师大附中集团思沁·期中)
在 “双减” 政策背景下,同学们的周末不再是在课外班中度过,而是有了更多的空闲时间去参加课外活动,丰富课余生活,拉近亲子关系。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇文章介绍你的周末活动及你对周末活动的看法。
活动
频率
地点及选择的理由
最爱类型
看电影
一个月两次
万达电影院,屏幕最大……
最喜欢纪录片(documentaries), 因为……
做运动
……
……
……
要求:
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校及班级名称;
(2) 注意书写工整、语句通顺、句意连贯;
(3) 80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more free time to do something I like on weekends. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省郴州市第五中学·期中)
中学生的行为习惯直接影响着他们的健康成长,下周英语课上,老师让同学们介绍个人的行为习惯。请根据下表提示,准备一篇英语发言稿,介绍你的习惯,并谈谈你的感受。
好习惯
坏习惯
感受
1.早睡早起;
2.坚持锻炼;
3.每天阅读;
……
1.看电视或玩游戏时间太长;
2.常吃垃圾食品;
……
好习惯使我健康,帮我学习得更好
要求:
1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
2.词数:80左右 (短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省邵阳市洞口县·期中)
假设你叫Jenny,请你很据下面提供的有关参考信息,写一篇80词左右的英文报道,介绍一下你的朋友Maria的日常活动情况。
要点:
1. 外貌性格:Maria跟我个子一样高,但是她比我聪明外向,她学习更努力;……
2. 生活习惯:她很健康,每天坚持锻炼;一周吃4—5次蔬菜;从不吃垃圾食品;
3. 兴趣爱好和一些经历:喜欢旅游,爬山。去年夏天,Maria去了一个农场;她看到了多动物,喂养了小鸡,摘了一些苹果,她玩得很开心。
My name is Jenny. I have a good friend, Maria.
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专题08 综合技能 写作
主题01 人与自我——人物介绍
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省常德市·期中)
假如你是来自于英国的Linda,现在在湖南学习,请你给在英国的妈妈写一封信,介绍一下你在中国新结交的好朋友Li Hua。
内容包括:
1. Li Hua比我文静,头发比我长,她对我很友善,常常帮助我学汉语。
2. 我们俩都喜欢打篮球,她比我打得好,我们至少一周打两次。
3. 上周末,天气晴朗,上午我们去爬山了。晚上,我们去看了电影《花木兰》。我对这部电影的感受是……
要求:
1. 字迹工整,书写规范,语句通顺,注意单词的大小写和标点符号等;
2. 70词左右,可适当增加细节和要点,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear mother,
How is everything going? Now I am having fun studying in Hunan. Here I make a good friend.
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Yours,
Linda
【答案】例文
Dear mother,
How is everything going? Now I am having fun studying in Hunan. Here I make a good friend, Li Hua. She is quieter than me and has longer hair. She is very kind to me and often helps me with my Chinese.
We both like playing basketball, but she plays better than me. We play at least twice a week. Last weekend, the weather was sunny. In the morning, we went climbing. In the evening, we watched the movie “Mulan”. I think it’s an exciting and inspiring movie. It tells us that girls can also be brave and strong.
I miss you very much and hope everything is fine with you.
Yours,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:主要使用“一般现在时”,描述上周末的活动时使用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括Li Hua的外貌特征、性格、对我的帮助、共同爱好、上周末的活动等,考生需围绕这些要点进行描述,注意适当增加细节,使内容更加丰富和连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头简短问候母亲并介绍自己现在的学习情况,引出新朋友Li Hua;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。详细描述Li Hua的外貌特征,性格,她对我的帮助,我们的共同爱好,以及上周末我们一起做的活动,并表达自己对电影的感受;
第三步,书写结语。表达对母亲的思念和希望她一切安好的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①quieter than 比……更安静
②be kind to 对……友好
③play better 玩得更好
④exciting and inspiring 激动人心且鼓舞人心的
⑤miss 思念
[高分句型]
①She is very kind to me and often helps me with my Chinese.(and连接两个并列的句子,结构清晰)
②I think it’s an exciting and inspiring movie.(宾语从句)
③It tells us that girls can also be brave and strong.(宾语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省长沙市湖南师大附中博才实验中学附中集团·期中)
古往今来,朋友一直是人们生活中重要的组成部分,吟诵友情的佳篇更是不胜枚举。那么你的生活中有没有这样一位朋友呢?他/她在你生活中扮演什么样的角色呢?请你以“My Best Friend”为题,介绍一位你的好朋友。要点包括朋友的外貌特征、个性品质、生活习惯以及你们的相同或不同之处。
注意:
1. 80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My Best Friend
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【答案】例文:
My Best Friend
I have a best friend. Her name is Lucy. In some ways we look the same and in some ways we look different. We have some things in common.
We both have black eyes and black hair, although my hair is longer than hers. We are both outgoing. We are both funny. And we both like music.
But she is more beautiful than me. I think I’m smarter than her. My favorite subject is science, and her favorite subject is Chinese. However, we both enjoy going shopping.
I am happy to have such a friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,主题为介绍作者最好的朋友;
②时态:主要使用一般现在时,描述朋友的外貌特征、个性品质、生活习惯以及彼此的关系;
③提示:根据题目要求,需要包含朋友的外貌特征、个性品质、生活习惯以及你们的相同或不同之处,并注意适当添加细节,使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题。直接引出主题,说明自己有一位最好的朋友;
第二步,具体描述。从外貌特征、个性品质、生活习惯以及相同或不同之处等方面详细介绍这位朋友;
第三步,总结升华。表达对这位朋友的珍视和感激之情。
[亮点词汇]
①in some ways在某些方面
②have something in common有共同之处
③more beautiful than比……更漂亮
④enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is science, and her favorite subject is Chinese.(and表并列)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省永州市新田县·期中)
亲爱的同学们,时间过得真快,转眼大家已经初二了。相信大家都已经适应了初中生活,也结识了不少好朋友吧。假设你叫Greg,以下是你的好友Helen发给你的一封电子邮件,请你根据邮件内容,给Helen写一封邮件。
要求:(1) 请回复邮件中所提及的问题,可适当发挥,70词左右;
(2)语言流畅、规范。文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等相关信息。
Dear Greg,
How time flies! You have been in the middle school for a whole year. I hope everything is OK with you. In your last letter, you said you made a new friend at school. What is he/she like? Can he/she play basketball as well as you? What kind of TV shows does he/she like and why? How often does he/she watch TV? Look forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Helen
Dear Helen,
I’m glad to introduce my good friend ________ to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Greg
【答案】例文
Dear Helen,
I’m glad to introduce my new friend Li Fang to you.
She is tall with long straight hair. She likes to do the same things as I do. We both like sports. She can play basketball as well as me. We always play together after school. But in some ways she is different from me. She is very outgoing and funny, so she makes more friends than me. I like reading but she likes watching TV. She watches TV twice a week. Talent shows and game shows are her favorite programs. She thinks she can learn a lot from them.
I like my friend because she is a good listener.
Yours,
Greg
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍朋友的外貌特点,以及描述朋友的篮球水平和共同活动;
第二步,介绍朋友的性格特点,以及详述朋友观看电视节目的喜好及频率;
第三步,最后表达对于这个朋友的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①the same一样的
②be different from与……不同
③like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①She is very outgoing and funny, so she makes more friends than me.(so连接的因果并列句)
②She thinks she can learn a lot from them.(宾语从句)
主题02 人与自我——生活 / 活动记录
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省长沙市华益中学·期中)
11月15日,你的学校组织了大围山秋季研学活动,请根据下图内容,写一篇日记,记录你的研学之旅,并用形容词最高级介绍你最喜欢的活动,食物及原因。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语法正确,行文连贯;
2. 书写工整 ,卷面整洁;
3. 须包含所给提示内容,可适当发挥;
4. 不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Wednesday, November 15th.
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip to Dawei Mountain.
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【答案】例文
Wednesday, November 15th.
It was sunny today. We went on a school trip to Dawei Mountain. We mainly had two activities. Climbing the mountains was the most exciting activity because the views from the top were breathtaking. After that, we visited the museum, which was the most informative part of our trip. For lunch, we had some mouth-watering local dishes, and the spicy noodles were the tastiest food I’ve ever had. The people we met were warm-hearted, sharing stories and local culture with us.
I felt the happiest today, learning so much and making unforgettable memories with my friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为日记;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头文章已给出;
第二步,研学活动中最喜欢的活动、食物以及原因、当地人们的热情等;
第三步,最后表达对于这次研学之旅的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①mainly主要地
②mouth-watering令人垂涎的
③unforgettable难忘的
[高分句型]
①Climbing the mountains was the most exciting activity because the views from the top were breathtaking.(原因状语从句)
②After that, we visited the museum, which was the most informative part of our trip.(定语从句)
Passage 2
(22-23八年级上·湖南省永州市蓝山县·期中)
良好的习惯对我们的学习、生活都有益处。你是否拥有良好的生活习惯?请根据下列提示,以“How to keep healthy?”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,开头已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。
1.健康的饮食
多蔬菜水果,少垃圾食品
2.适当的运动
一星期至少三、四次运动
3.足够的睡眠
8—9小时
4.保持微笑(smile)
开心、乐观
提示词:good healthy habits, be happy and optimistic (乐观)
How to keep healthy?
What can we do to keep healthy? Here are some good ways for you.
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【答案】One possible version:
How to keep healthy?
What can we do to keep healthy? Here are some good ways for you.
First, we should have healthy eating habits. We need to eat more vegetables and fruits. They are good for our health, and eat less junk food. Second, we should do more exercise every day. It’s good for our mind and body. We can do it at least three or four times a week. Third, enough sleep is important, too. We need 8—9 hours a day, so don’t stay up late. And we should go to bed early and get up early. Fourth, keep smile. We should be happy and optimistic every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏表格中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍保持健康要有健康的饮食和适当的运动;
第二步,介绍应该要有足够的睡眠,同时要保持微笑。
[亮点词汇]
① eating habit饮食习惯
② be good for对……有好处
③ at least至少
[高分句型]
We need 8—9 hours a day, so don’t stay up late. (so连接因果句)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省湘潭市岳塘区·期中)
Tim和Tom是双胞胎兄弟。他们有一些相同点,也有不同点。
相同点:长相相同;学习刻苦;喜欢看比赛节目。
不同点:Tim更外向,更擅长体育。
Tom更安静,喜欢去城市电影院(City Cinema)看电影,那儿离家最近,座位最舒服。
Tim and Tom are twin brothers. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Tim and Tom are twin brothers. They look the same and they both study hard. They enjoy watching sports shows. However, they also have differences. Tim is more outgoing and is better at sports. On the other hand, Tom is quieter and loves to watch movies at the City Cinema, which is the closest to their home with the most comfortable seats.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
根据提示内容介绍双胞胎兄弟Tim和Tom的相同点和不同点。
[亮点词汇]
①look the same 长相相同
②study hard 学习刻苦
③On the other hand 另一方面
[高分句型]
On the other hand, Tom is quieter and loves to watch movies at the City Cinema, which is the closest to their home with the most comfortable seats.(定语从句)
主题03 人与社会——现实生活与事件记录
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省衡阳市衡南县·期中)
假如你是某国际学校的美国交换生Lisa。昨天是周日,你同桌周强约你出去游玩了一天, 晚上你收到了他的微信。
Places
Like it or not?
Why?
City Park
large, relaxing. . .
Noodle House
cheap, delicious. . .
Xinhua Library
small, uncomfortable seats. . .
要求:
(1)微信回复内容需包含表格中的提示信息,可适当发挥。
(2)语言表达要准确,语义通顺、连贯。
(3)70 词左右。
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【答案】例文:
I had a good day with my friend Zhou Qiang today. I really enjoyed myself. I think City Park was a good place to go to on the weekend. It was very large and has beautiful flowers in it. Also, it was relaxing to take walks there. As for Noodle House, I liked it very much because I had the cheapest and the most delicious noodles in the city. We also went to Xinhua Library, but I didn’t think it was good. It’s much smaller than the library near our school and it doesn’t have comfortable seats, either. In a word, it was an enjoyable day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,今天我和朋友周强度过了愉快的一天;
第二步,具体介绍你们游玩的景点。
第三步,总结全文(这是愉快的一天。)。
[亮点词汇]
① enjoyed oneself 玩得很开心
②a good place to go to on the weekend 周末去的好地方
③ as for 至于
④ in a word 总而言之
[高分句型]
①I think City Park was a good place to go to on the weekend.(宾语从句)
②We also went to Xinhua Library, but I didn’t think it was good.(but连接的并列句)
③ It’s much smaller than the library near our school and it doesn’t have comfortable seats, either.(比较级句型,and连接的并列句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市一中教育集团·期中)
长沙,中国最具幸福感的城市之一,拥有着独特的人文风情和历史底蕴,吸引着越来越多的人来此打卡。假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Lucy来信说下个月将要来长沙旅游。请你向她简单介绍长沙这座热门城市,并根据表格内容推荐3个长沙必去的地方并说明原因。
写作要求:
1. 包含图表中所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名等相关信息。
Must-go places
Reasons
Orange Isle (橘子洲)
* the biggest statue (雕塑) of Chairman Mao
* a popular place for boating and bike riding
Taiping Street (太平街)
* the most delicious local snacks (当地小吃)
* …
…
* …
* …
参考词汇:
the hottest city热门城市;Yuelu Mountain岳麓山;Yuelu Academy岳麓书院;Hunan Museum湖南博物院;Changsha IFS长沙国金中心
Dear Lucy,
I’m happy to hear that you will come to Changsha for a visit.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m happy to hear that you will come to Changsha for a visit.
Changsha is one of the happiest cities in China. It has unique culture and history, which attract a large number of tourists every year. There are three must-go places. Orange Isle has the biggest Chairman Mao’s statue. You can boat and ride bikes there. Standing in front of the statue, you will be filled with respect. Taiping Street has the most delicious local snacks and traditional houses. You can taste various snacks like stinky tofu and sugar-oil cake while enjoying the ancient charm of the street. Yuelu Mountain is famous for its beautiful scenery and Yuelu Academy with a long history. Climbing the mountain, you can overlook the whole city, and the academy shows you the depth of Chinese traditional culture.
You’ll have great fun.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇向朋友介绍旅游城市长沙的说明文;
②时态:主要为一般现在时;
③提示:内容围绕介绍长沙这座城市,重点是推荐三个必去之地,包括景点特色。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表达听到朋友要来长沙旅游的开心之情,引出对长沙的介绍;
第二步:详细介绍长沙的特色,重点阐述三个必去景点。介绍橘子洲有毛主席最大雕像,可划船骑车及站在雕像前的感受;太平街有美味小吃和传统房屋,描述在品尝小吃同时能享受古街韵味;岳麓山因美丽风景和有悠久历史的岳麓书院而出名,讲述登山可俯瞰全城,书院展示传统文化深度;
第三步:告知朋友在长沙会玩得很开心。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with充满……
②a large number of大量的
③be famous for因……而出名
④overlook俯瞰
[高分句型]
①Changsha is one of the happiest cities in China. It has unique culture and history, which attract a large number of tourists every year. (which 引导非限定性定语从句,对先行词 culture and history 进行补充说明)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省衡阳市八中教育集团·期中)
11月4日,第二届衡阳旅游发展大会正式开幕。作为衡阳的小小旅游推荐官,请你推介衡阳不可错过的以下三个好地方。
Mount Heng
the highest mountain;
the most famous mountain in Hengyang;
bring people good luck;
enjoy the sunrise (日出);
...
Dongzhou Island (岛)
the largest island in Hengyang,
the most beautiful place;
spend time with friends and families;
take photos and enjoy flowers;
...
Wanda Plaza (广场)
the most popular plaza in Hengyang;
the biggest shopping center;
the best movie theater;
different kinds of special food;
...
要求:
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右, 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和班级。
Hengyang is a beautiful city. As a student from Hengyang, I want to introduce three good places to you.
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【答案】例文
Hengyang is a beautiful city. As a student from Hengyang, I want to introduce three good places to you.
Firstly, Mount Heng is the highest and most famous mountain in Hengyang. It is believed to bring people good luck. You can also enjoy the stunning sunrise there. Secondly, Dongzhou Island is the largest island and the most beautiful place in Hengyang. It’s perfect for spending time with friends and families, taking photos, and enjoying flowers. Lastly, for a modern experience, visit Wanda Plaza. It’s the most popular plaza in Hengyang, featuring the biggest shopping center, the best movie theater, and various kinds of special food.
I believe these places are worth visiting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出写作目的,即介绍衡阳的三个好地方;
第二步,具体描述这三个地方:衡山、东洲岛和万达广场,从自然景观到现代设施各个方面进行推介;
第三步,表达推荐的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①stunning 惊人的
②worth visiting 值得参观
[高分句型]
①Firstly, Mount Heng is the highest and most famous mountain in Hengyang.(形容词最高级)
②I believe these places are worth visiting.(宾语从句)
主题04 人与自我——人际交往
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省衡阳实验中学·期中)
学校举办英语演讲比赛,主题是介绍自己最好的朋友。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇演讲稿介绍你的好朋友Jeff。
内容要点:
1.个子比你高,比你更外向。他总是给你讲有意思的故事。
2.喜欢运动,每周锻炼四次。放学后,你们还一起打篮球。
3.喜欢听音乐,看动作片,还喜欢看新闻,因为……
4.上周末,你们去Town Cinema看了电影,你觉得这家影院是最好的一家影院,因为它有最舒适的座位和最好的音效。
要求:
1.内容必须包含以上信息,并可根据需要适当添加;
2.书写规范,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
3.词数80词左右,所给开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my best friend Jeff to you.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my best friend Jeff to you.
Jeff is a 15-year-old boy from Shandong. He is kind and friendly. He is taller and much more outgoing than me. He always tells me funny stories and makes me laugh. I like him because he likes to do the same things as me. We are both interested in doing sports, which is good for our health. We often exercise four times every week and play basketball together after school. We both enjoy listening to music and watching action movies, because they can make us relaxed. Sometimes Jeff likes watching news. He wants to know what’s going on around the world and he hopes to be a reporter when he grows up.
Last weekend, we watched an action movie in Town Cinema. It was so wonderful. I think Town Cinema is the best movie theater. It has the most comfortable seats and the best sound. I hope to go there next time!
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:这是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,“喜欢看新闻”的原因需要补充;“上周去看电影”部分要用一般过去时,但是介绍电影院的情况用一般现在时。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍演讲的主题是我的好朋友Jeff(已给出);
第二步,具体介绍Jeff的性格和爱好;
第三步,介绍上周去看电影以及Town Cinema的情况。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② much more outgoing 外向得多
③ the most comfortable seats 最舒适的座位
④ make us relaxed 使我们放松
[高分句型]
He wants to know what’s going on around the world and he hopes to be a reporter when he grows up.(宾语从句、时间状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市雅礼教育集团·期中)
假如你是Jane,请给你的朋友Vera写信介绍自己从美国来长沙后的生活。
内容包括:
(1)你游览过的地方;
(2)结交的新朋友(至少写三点你和朋友的异同);
(3)你的择友观。
要求:
(1)短文必须包括以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Vera,
I miss you very much. I have been in Changsha for one year. Let me tell you something about my life there._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jane
【答案】例文
Dear Vera,
I miss you very much. I have been in Changsha for one year. Let me tell you something about my life there.
I have visited many beautiful places like Yuelu Mountain and Orange Island. The scenery is amazing! I have also made some new friends. My friend Li is very kind and helpful, just like you. We both love reading, but she prefers history books while I enjoy novels. Unlike me, she is very good at cooking. My view on friendship is that a true friend should be honest, supportive, and share common interests.
I believe that having friends with different backgrounds can enrich my life. I hope you can visit me soon, so I can show you around.
Yours,
Jane
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般现在完时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你游览过的地方;
第二步,介绍结交的新朋友,并描述和朋友的异同点;
第三步,最后给出你的择友观。
[亮点词汇]
① love doing sth爱做某事
② be good at擅长
③ show sb around带某人参观
[高分句型]
I believe that having friends with different backgrounds can enrich my life. (宾语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市湘阴县城南区·期中)
假如Mike是你最好的朋友,请以“My best friend”为题,从以下五个方面向大家介绍他:
1.是一个帅气的男孩,在班上他个子最高,性格最外向;
2.每天起得最早,喜欢做运动,每周锻炼三四次,身体很健康;
3.喜欢吃蔬菜和水果,有一个好的饮食习惯;
4.在班上学习最努力,最喜欢英语学科,平时爱看英语书,认为英语比数学有趣;
5.不能忍受访谈节目,认为它们很无聊。
要求:可适当发挥,但必须包含所给信息,80词左右。
My best friend
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【答案】例文:
My best friend
Mike is my best friend. Let me tell you something about him.
He is a handsome boy. He is the tallest in his class. He is more outgoing than any other students.
Every day he gets up early. He likes playing sports. He exercises three or four times a week, so he is in good health. He has a healthy eating habit. He likes vegetables and fruits and seldom drinks coffee. He studies very hard at school. He likes English best. He likes reading English books. He thinks English is more interesting than maths. He can not stand talk shows. He thinks they are boring.
That is my best friend. Do you want to make friends with him?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文要点已给出,以“My best friend”为题,从题干中五个方面介绍朋友Mike,采用第三人称将介绍,注意因果关系的合理运用和句子衔接的自然流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文的主题;
第二步,介绍Mike的外貌和性格;
第三步,介绍他的爱好,饮食习惯,喜欢的科目和电视节目等;
第四步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①gets up early早起
②in good health身体健康
③a healthy eating habit健康的饮食习惯
④make friends with sb和某人交朋友
[高分句型]
①He is more outgoing than any other students.(比较级句型)
②He thinks English is more interesting than maths.(宾语从句)
主题01 人与社会——经历记录
Passage 1
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市临湘市·期中)
5.2023年中秋节、国庆节国内旅游大复苏,累计出游8026亿人次。请以“My trip to ______”为题,根据以下要求与提示,用英语写一篇短文,记叙你的一次中秋国庆之旅。
提示:1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do there?
3. How did you feel about the trip?
要求:1. 请在题目空格处填入你的旅行地点,如:Beijing, Changsha或Qingdao等;
2. 表达通顺,书写规范,可适当发挥;
3. 不少于80词;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
My trip to Qingdao
I had a two-day trip to Qingdao with my friends during the holiday. We had a wonderful time there.
We went to Qingdao by bus. When we got there in the afternoon, we couldn’t wait to go to the beach near our hotel. The weather was nice. Everything was as beautiful as I imagined. We walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand, the gentle wind and the blue sea. In the evening, we had a big seafood dinner. It was really delicious.
The next morning, we went to Laoshan Mountain. It is not very high, but there is an old and interesting tale about it. So it receives a lot of visitors every year.
I enjoyed this trip so much that I didn’t want to go back home.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要是一般过去时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意要补全标题,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明假期去了哪里;
第二步,阐述去那里做了什么;
第三步,谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①had a wonderful time度过了一段美好的时光
②by bus乘公共汽车
③receive a lot of visitors接待很多游客
[高分句型]
①When we got there in the afternoon, we couldn’t wait to go to the beach near our hotel.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I enjoyed this trip so much that I didn’t want to go back home.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省邵阳市隆回县·期中)
假如你校英文报Travel专栏正面向全校学生征稿,恰好你们班上周五组织了一次红色研学旅行。请你根据以下表格提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你的旅行经历并投稿。
时间
上周五
天气
晴
交通方式
公共汽车
参加人员
全班学生
目的地
隆回县向家村 (Xiangjia Village, Longhui County)
活动
参观向家村村史馆 (the Xiangjia Village History Museum)、在村民家做饭、观看电影、唱红歌(red songs)……
你的感想
……
要求:1.包含提示中的所有要点,语言表达准确,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右;
3.不得使用真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Last Friday, our class took a trip to Xiangjia Village, Longhui County in Shaoyang. The weather was sunny. We arrived there at 9 a.m. by bus. Then we visited the Xiangjia Village History Museum. We learned about the history and culture of Xiangjia Village, and also experienced the farming culture. At noon, we cooked lunch by ourselves in a villager’s house. In the afternoon, we watched a wonderful movie. After that, we sang red songs together.
The trip was wonderful. I decided to study hard and do something useful for our country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,讲是一篇材料作文。
②时态:主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头点明上周五班级去邵阳隆回县向家村旅行。
第二步,具体描述本次旅行的具体过程和在旅行中参与的活动。
第三步,书写结语。表达这次旅行很精彩,自己决定努力学习,为国家做有用的事。
[亮点词汇]
①take a trip旅行
②arrive there到达那里
③by bus乘公交车
④visit the museum参观博物馆
⑤learn about了解
⑥experience the culture体验文化
[高分句型]
I decided to study hard and do something useful for our country.(并列句)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省长沙市长郡教育集团联考·期中)
十月份杭州亚运会如火如荼地进行。假如你是李明,国庆假你去了杭州观看亚运会并游览了杭州。请根据表格中所提供的信息写一篇短文,记录自己的杭州之行。
要点提示:
Time
October 1st~3rd
Place
Hangzhou
Weather
Sunny and cool
People
My friend and I
Transportation
Plane
Things we did
1. watch games;
2. visit the West Lake and take quite a few photos;
3. eat delicious food such as Dongpo meat;
4. buy some special things such as ...
5. ...
Feelings
...
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
My friend and I went to Hangzhou by plane during National Day. We stayed there from October 1st to October 3rd. Luckily, the weather was sunny and cool. When arriving there we were attracted by the beauties of Hangzhou. It is believed that Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China. The Hangzhou Asian Games is very wonderful. Watching games made us excited. We visited the West Lake and took quite a few photos. As we all know, food in Hangzhou is very delicious such as Dongpo meat. We also bought some special things such as Xihu Longjing tea which ranks among the top ten famous teas in China. Hangzhou is such a fun place. I could not but admit that it was a most pleasant trip.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文的时态是一般过去时为主;
③提示:注意要点衔接自然,自己的感受要补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍十一期间杭州的时间,方式,天气等;
第二步,详细介绍在杭州做的事;
第三步,总述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①Luckily幸运地
②It is believed that人们都相信
[高分句型]
①Watching games made us excited. (动名词作主语) ②We also bought some special things such as Xihu Longjing tea which ranks among the top ten famous teas in China.(定语从句)
主题02 人与社会——现实建议
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·湖南省岳阳市湘阴县·期中)
假如你是Jerry,你的朋友Jack和父母在沟通方面存在问题,请你用英语写一封信给Jack,给予他一些建议。内容包括:
1. 讲述你与父母的一次沟通经历(包括时间、地点、事件、结果);
2. 对如何与父母沟通提出至少2点建议;
要求:不少于80词
Dear Jack,
I know that you have trouble communicating with your parents. And I had the same experience.
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Yours,
Jerry
【答案】参考范文
Dear Jack,
I know that you have trouble communicating with your parents. And I had the same experience.
Last Saturday, I wanted to hang out with my friends, but my parents didn’t allow me to go. I sat down and communicated with them to tell them my feelings. Finally, they agreed.
Here is some advice for you to communicate better with your parents. Firstly, it’s good to calm down and think of a good way to communicate with them, for example face to face communication. Writing a letter or a note is also a good idea. Secondly, we’d better tell our parents our feelings and reasons, so they can understand us.
I hope you can have a good communication with your parents and get along well with them.
Yours,
Jerry
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封书信;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示要点给对方提出一些建议,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,并介绍你与父母的一次沟通经历;
第二步,详细介绍对如何与父母沟通提出的建议;
第三步,书写结语,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①hang out with sb.和某人闲逛
②communicate with sb.和某人交流
③get along well with sb.和某人相处得好
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s good to calm down and think of a good way to communicate with them. (动词不定式作主语以及动词不定式作定语)
②Secondly, we’d better tell our parents our feelings and reasons, so they can understand us. (so连接的并列句)
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省怀化市新晃侗族自治县·期中)
假如你是李华。请你根据下面表格中提示的信息,给你的英国朋友Jim 写一封信告诉她你对不同的电视节目的看法。
Programs
Attitudes
Reasons
soap operas
can’t stand
boring
game shows
love
exciting and enjoyable
news
don’t mind
educational
要求:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2. 包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:80 词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
There are many programs on TV.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Jim,
There are many programs on TV. I have different attitudes towards different programs. Let me tell you my ideas about them now. I love game shows because they are exciting and enjoyable. When I am unhappy, they always make me feel relaxed. I don’t mind news because they are educational. They can tell me what is happening around the world. I can learn something useful from them. As for the soap operas, I can’t stand them because they are boring and meaningless. Sometimes, the things in it aren’t real at all.
What program do you like? Why? Could you please tell me?
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图是告诉她你对不同的电视节目的看法;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“肥皂剧、游戏节目以及新闻”等方面阐述。
第三步,书写结语,询问对方喜欢的电视节目。
[亮点词汇]
①around the world全世界
②meaningless无意义的
③sometimes有时
[高分句型]
①There are many programs on TV. (There be句型)
②s for the soap operas, I can’t stand them because they are boring and meaningless. (because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市弘毅新华中学·期中)
为了加深中英两国的文化理解和交流,第一中学组织了一次中英学生对比的调查活动。请你据以下调查结果,适当将内容补充完整,写一篇调查结果的报告。
中国学生
英国学生
性格
更外向
更严肃
校园生活
学习更努力,作业更多
更擅长交朋友,喜欢参加各种聚会
饮食习惯
……
兴趣爱好
……
要求:
1. 要点齐全,可适当增加自己的看法;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名;
3. 80词左右,报告的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:take part in 参与
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to talk about the differences between Chinese students and English students._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to talk about the differences between Chinese students and English students.
In China, students are more outgoing. They study harder and have much more homework to do. In England, students are more serious and quieter. But they are better at sports and they like taking part in all kinds of parties. What’s more, Chinese students like eating more vegetables and fruit. English students like to have more meat.
As for hobbies, 30% of Chinese students like reading books. They watch TV four or five times a week. 70% of them go online on the weekend. However, 60% of English students play soccer every day. 40% of them like drawing. Most of the English students go to the cinema once a week.
Though they are different, they can talk about and share something they like.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,从性格,校园生活,饮食习惯,兴趣爱好等方面介绍中国学生和英国学生的差异。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②as for 至于
③once a week 一周一次
[高分句型]
①Though they are different, they can talk about and share something they like.(Though引导的让步状语从句)
主题03 人与自我——旅游
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市明德教育集团·期中)
14.假如你是李华,在Amazing Travelling论坛上认识了美国中学生Kevin。上周末他来信询问你国庆期间去了哪里,并计划元旦来长沙旅游,想让你推荐几个景点。请你根据以下要点,给Kevin回信。
城市
观光地
活动
感受
三亚
海边
吃到了海鲜(seafood),……
非常开心
长沙
橘子洲(Orange Island)
最受欢迎的地方之一
拍照,……
……
五一广场(Wuyi Square)
最大的广场
看电影,……
注意:
1.80词左右;开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实人名和学校。
Dear Kevin,
I’m glad to hear from you. I went to Sanya with my parents during the National Day holiday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Kevin,
I’m glad to hear from you. I went to Sanya with my parents during the National Day holiday. I enjoyed the beautiful beaches and delicious seafood there, which made me very happy. For your trip to Changsha, I recommend visiting Orange Island, one of the most popular places where you can take great photos and know something about Chinese history. Another popular place is Wuyi Square, the largest square in the city, where you can watch movies and enjoy the local delicious food. You will meet Warm-hearted Chinese people. I hope you have a wonderful time in Changsha!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是信件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示内容书写,可适当发挥,注意语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己国庆游玩景点和感受;
第二步,为对方推荐景点;
第三步,希望对方玩得愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from sb收到某人来信
②recommend doing sth推荐做某事
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
①I enjoyed the beautiful beaches and delicious seafood there, which made me very happy. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Another popular place is Wuyi Square, the largest square in the city, where you can watch movies and enjoy the local delicious food. (where引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省花垣县华鑫学校·期中)
研学旅行 (study trip) 是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动,深受学生的喜爱。为了丰富学校课程,今年11月1日至2日,华鑫学校开展了研学旅行。为此,请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,80词左右,介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。内容包括:
1. 学习蜡染手工制作,体验生活;
2. 观察大熊猫,亲近自然;
3. 参观博物馆,了解历史文化;
4. 观看有意义的电影,感受国家变化。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4. 参考词汇:meaningful adj. 有意义的;nature n. 自然;history n. 历史;culture n. 文化;batik skill 蜡染技术;changes of our nation 国家变化;experience life 体验生活
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school also held a study trip last week. Here are my experiences.
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【答案】例文:
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Our school also held a study trip last week. Here are my experiences. Firstly, we learnt batik skill by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and I learnt more knowledge by watching pandas. Then, we visited the museum to understand Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the changes of our nation.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we should have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏信息,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。介绍研学旅行是一种在校外进行的受学生欢迎的学校教育;(开头已给出)
第二步,具体阐述内容。具体介绍学校研学活动的内容;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己对这次研学活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①by hand用手工
②get close to接近
③in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we learnt batik skill by hand to experience life.(动词不定式表示目的)
②Secondly, we got close to nature and I learnt more knowledge by watching pandas.(动名词短语作介词的宾语)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省岳阳市岳阳县·期中)
My Last Weekend
上周末,你度过了很有意义的两天,以下是活动内容,请根据以下提示,介绍你的上个周末。
时间
活动
周六
1. 上午去敬老院看望老人:帮他们打扫房间;和他们聊天;听他们讲故事……
2. 下午志愿清扫街道和城市公园:打扫并倒垃圾;张贴标语;分发通知……
周日
1. 上午做家务:打扫客厅、房间;洗碗;倒垃圾……
2. 下午做作业;准备考试……
感受
繁忙但很快乐;应该帮助别人;帮助爸妈分担家务
要求:词数不少于80个,内容完整,可适当发挥。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Last Weekend
Last weekend, I had two meaningful days. On Saturday morning, I visited the elderly in a nursing home. I helped them clean their rooms, chatted with them, and listened to their stories. In the afternoon, I volunteered to clean the streets and city park by sweeping and taking out the trash, putting up posters, and distributing notices. On Sunday morning, I did housework by cleaning the living room and my room, washing dishes, and taking out the trash. In the afternoon, I did my homework and prepared for exams. Although I was busy, I felt very happy. I realized the importance of helping others and sharing housework with my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍周六、周日的活动;
第二步,介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①chatted with和……聊天
②volunteered to自愿去
③prepared for为……准备
[高分句型]
①Although I was busy, I felt very happy.(让步状语从句)
②I realized the importance of helping others and sharing housework with my parents. (并列结构)
主题04 人与自我——健康生活
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·湖南省长沙市湖南师大附中集团思沁·期中)
在 “双减” 政策背景下,同学们的周末不再是在课外班中度过,而是有了更多的空闲时间去参加课外活动,丰富课余生活,拉近亲子关系。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇文章介绍你的周末活动及你对周末活动的看法。
活动
频率
地点及选择的理由
最爱类型
看电影
一个月两次
万达电影院,屏幕最大……
最喜欢纪录片(documentaries), 因为……
做运动
……
……
……
要求:
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校及班级名称;
(2) 注意书写工整、语句通顺、句意连贯;
(3) 80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more free time to do something I like on weekends. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more free time to do something I like on weekends.
First of all, doing exercise is my favorite activity because it is not only healthy for the body but also for the mind. Both my friend Bob and I love running. Therefore we get together at the park three times a week to run along the river. Besides, watching films is a great way to relax and learn something new. My family and I go to the cinema about twice a week. Usually our first choice is Wanda Cinema because it has the biggest screen. We watch documentaries most of the time because I think they’re more educational than other kinds.
In my opinion, it’s important and necessary for us students to take part in more after-class activities which can enrich our life and bring the family closer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据已给出的开头,点明双减活动主题;
第二步,具体阐述双减活动以来,我的课余时间的安排更加丰富,例如平时锻炼身体、周末看电影等活动,以及对活动的感受;
第三步,书写结语,号召同学们多参加课外活动,拉近亲子关系,丰富课余生活。
[亮点词汇]
①Thanks to幸亏,由于
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③get together团聚
④In my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①First of all, doing exercise is my favorite activity because it is not only healthy for the body but also for the mind.(原因状语从句)
②In my opinion, it’s important and necessary for us students to take part in more after-class activities which can enrich our life and bring the family closer.(定语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24八年级上·湖南省郴州市第五中学·期中)
中学生的行为习惯直接影响着他们的健康成长,下周英语课上,老师让同学们介绍个人的行为习惯。请根据下表提示,准备一篇英语发言稿,介绍你的习惯,并谈谈你的感受。
好习惯
坏习惯
感受
1.早睡早起;
2.坚持锻炼;
3.每天阅读;
……
1.看电视或玩游戏时间太长;
2.常吃垃圾食品;
……
好习惯使我健康,帮我学习得更好
要求:
1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
2.词数:80左右 (短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
I’m glad to be here to talk about my habits. Everyone has good and bad habits. So do I. I get up early and never stay up late. I like sports, so I often do exercise. In class, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes. After class, I’ll finish my homework in time and do lots of reading every day. However, I often watch TV or play games for too long. I seldom help my parents with housework and I often eat junk food. Good habits are good for my whole life. I think I should develop good habits instead of bad ones.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是发言稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴能在这里谈论我的习惯。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——好习惯、坏习惯和感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“谢谢你的聆听”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②take notes做笔记
③be good for对……有益
[高分句型]
①I seldom help my parents with housework and I often eat junk food. (and表并列)
②I think I should develop good habits instead of bad ones. (宾语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24八年级上·湖南省邵阳市洞口县·期中)
假设你叫Jenny,请你很据下面提供的有关参考信息,写一篇80词左右的英文报道,介绍一下你的朋友Maria的日常活动情况。
要点:
1. 外貌性格:Maria跟我个子一样高,但是她比我聪明外向,她学习更努力;……
2. 生活习惯:她很健康,每天坚持锻炼;一周吃4—5次蔬菜;从不吃垃圾食品;
3. 兴趣爱好和一些经历:喜欢旅游,爬山。去年夏天,Maria去了一个农场;她看到了多动物,喂养了小鸡,摘了一些苹果,她玩得很开心。
My name is Jenny. I have a good friend, Maria.
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【答案】例文
My name is Jenny. I have a good friend, Maria. Maria is as tall as I am. But she is smarter and more outgoing than me. She studies harder. She always helps people in need. She is very healthy and exercises every day. She eats vegetables 4 or 5 times a week and she never eats junk food. She thinks it is harmful to health. She likes traveling, climbing mountains and so on.
Last summer, Maria went to a farm. She saw many animals, fed the chickens and picked some apples. She had a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,描述朋友Maria的个人信息和日常活动,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍Maria的外貌性格和生活习惯;
第二步,具体阐述Maria的兴趣爱好和一些经历。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb in need帮助有需要的人
②be harmful to对……有害
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
She thinks it is harmful to health.(宾语从句)
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