2026届高三英语专项复习读后续写---50 岁背包客的自我找寻之旅 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

At age fifty, I found myself on a rocky path. I lacked self-confidence. I realized that I had consistently put other people’s needs and expectations ahead of my own. I remember looking in a mirror one rainy afternoon and seeing a person who no longer recalled who she was, what she loved to do, and what she was capable of doing.

Not only did I avoid adventure, but I also held back from pursuing just about anything else I had longed for in my youth. By age fifty, I still hadn’t pursued my interest in art, playing the guitar, and singing. I hadn’t become a forest ranger, geologist, or paleontologist. Instead, I played it safe.

Then a new friend entered my life. He picked up on my soul’s unspoken desires. “How about backpacking for five days in Yosemite National Park?” he asked.

“Sure!” I said, wanting to impress him with who I wanted to be, not who I had become. And then I thought, “Backpacking? I can’t go backpacking! I’m a girl. Backpacking’s dangerous!” Because I liked this guy so much, though, I worked through my fears and trained like mad for a month so I could go backpacking with him. I had never felt so full of self-doubt, but I kept reminding myself: Isn’t this what I always wanted? Isn’t this supposed to be who I am, or who I think I am, or who I claim I am?

For an entire month, I climbed local hills with an increasing number of water bottles in my backpack until it matched in pounds what I had to carry on the trip. My heart pounded out of my chest. My legs trembled and my back ached in as many places. And then the day finally came when my friend took me out with him into the wilderness at Yosemite.

Day One’s hike proved to be the shortest walk but the biggest reality check. I couldn’t have been more relieved to drop the forty-pound backpack to the ground when we got to a clearing that would serve as our campsite for the night. When my friend reminded me we would take a two-mile satellite hike to the North Dome before dinner, I forced a smile and replied, “Clearly, I haven’t suffered enough today.”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

The rest of the trip was struggling.

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After the adventure my friend loaded my backpack in the car.

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一、文本基础信息分析

1．角色：_____________________________
2．视角：第________人称
3．时空线：from ___________ ---___________ ---___________

二、核心线索梳理

What made the narrator realize she lost herself?：______________________________________________

What desires did the narrator have in her youth but never pursue?：______________________________________________

Why did the narrator agree to go backpacking at first?：______________________________________________

How did the narrator prepare for the backpacking trip?：______________________________________________

What was Day One of the trip like for the narrator?：______________________________________________

What fears did the narrator have about backpacking initially?：______________________________________________

三、情节线与情感线

1．情节线：

叙述者 50 岁时发现自己迷失自我、压抑需求→___________________________________→____________________________________→________________________________→（续写）旅行剩余时光充满艰难→旅行结束后朋友帮 narrator 把背包放进车里

2．情感线：
I：___________ →___________ →___________ →___________（续写）→___________（续写）

四、文章大意概括（中英各一）

中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________English：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五、句式分析（标注典型句式及例句）

并列结构：________________________________________________________________

宾语从句：________________________________________________________________

定语从句：________________________________________________________________

非谓语：________________________________________________________________

感叹句：________________________________________________________________

六、主题归类

本文属于人与自我：_______________________

七、情节构造与续写

（一）第一段提示句：The rest of the trip was struggling.

衔接与内容推演

衔接 1：对 “struggling” 提问 “旅行中具体遇到了哪些困难？”→What specific difficulties did the narrator encounter during the rest of the trip?

衔接 2：对 “struggling” 提问 “面对困难，叙述者是选择放弃还是坚持？”→Did the narrator choose to give up or persist in the face of difficulties?

内容展开：①______（具体困难）→②______（内心挣扎）→③______（行动选择）