Unit 6 读写课第二课时课件 2025-2026学年外研版（2024）八年级英语上册

U6 Words and expressions iron n. 铁 fashion n. 时尚 slim adj. 苗条的，修长的 bleed v. 流血，出血 uncomfortable adj. 不舒服的 jeans n. 牛仔裤 encouraging adj. 令人鼓舞的，振奋人心的 herself pron. 她自己 university n. 大学 honour n. 荣幸，光荣 wound n. 伤痛，伤害 heroine adj. 女英雄 快速齐读三英一汉 Words review Review Retelling: The disaster When? Where? Who? What? Recovery How? Niu Yu, her family and friends… Now What? Niu Yu listens to… She carried… and showed… 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 The 21st English Writing Competition Topic(话题): A heart-warming story Requirement(要求): At least 80 words. 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 How to write about a heart-warming story? Reading for writing 单击此处编辑母版文本样式 第二级 第三级 第四级 第五级 学习理解 1.以牛钰的真实经历为语篇范例，通过分层阅读语篇，能够梳理语篇的结构、内容； 应用实践 3.根据相关要求，能够从结构、内容和语言方面润色和评价自己及他人的习作并进行展示。 2.借助范例的结构和语言特点，在相关提示下，能够仿写一篇感人的故事； 应用实践 Learning objectives 大声齐读 Task 1:Read for structure The structure(结构) of the passage is Tip: Pay attention to the first and last paragraph. 1. During the 2021 Shanghai Fashion Week, a young, slim and confident woman with an iron leg drew everyone's attention, Her name was Niu Yu, She lost her right leg in the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake. She was only 11 years old then. 2. Niu Yu used to be in the school sports team. She loved running. But the disaster broke her dream, She had to live with an artifcial leg. It wasn't comfortable, and her leg often bled. People's curious eyes made her even more uncomfortable. She always tried to hide her leg under jeans or dresses. 3. With the support of her family and friends, Niu Yu slowly came out from the shadows. In 2018,right before her 21st birthday, she decided to stop hiding her leg. To her surprise, she received lots of encouraging words. She also finished a half marathon in about 4 hours. She completed the hard 10-year journey of finding herself again. 4. Now Niu Yu shares her story on social media. She listens to disaster survivors and encourages them to look forward. In 2023,she carried the torch at the FISU World University Games. “It is a great honour for me," she said, "But it is also a good chance to show people the power of being brave." 5. A disaster can bring wounds and pain. But we should always face them with courage. As the writer Nora Ephron once said: “Above all, be the heroine of your life, not the victim." 快速默读 Time order Space order 1. During the 2021 Shanghai Fashion Week, a young, slim and confident woman with an iron leg drew everyone's attention, Her name was Niu Yu, She lost her right leg in the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake. She was only 11 years old then. 2. Niu Yu used to be in the school sports team. She loved running. But the disaster broke her dream, She had to live with an artifcial leg. It wasn't comfortable, and her leg often bled. People's curious eyes made her even more uncomfortable. She always tried to hide her leg under jeans or dresses. 3. With the support of her family and friends, Niu Yu slowly came out from the shadows. In 2018,right before her 21st birthday, she decided to stop hiding her leg. To her surprise, she received lots of encouraging words. She also finished a half marathon in about 4 hours. She completed the hard 10-year journey of finding herself again. 4. Now Niu Yu shares her story on social media. She listens to disaster survivors and encourages them to look forward. In 2023,she carried the torch at the FISU World University Games. “It is a great honour for me," she said, "But it is also a good chance to show people the power of being brave.“ 5. A disaster can bring wounds and pain. But we should always face them with courage. As the writer Nora Ephron once said: “Above all, be the heroine of your life, not the victim." Now Recovery The disaster Iron Girl The disaster During the 2021 Shanghai Fashion Week, a young, slim and confident woman with an iron leg drew everyone's attention. Her name was Niu Yu, She lost her right leg in the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake. She was only 11 years old then. Task 2:Read for content Who What ,when, where Recovery 2. Niu Yu used to be in the school sports team. She loved running. But the disaster broke her dream. She had to live with an artifcial leg. It wasn't comfortable, and her leg often bled. People's curious eyes made her even more uncomfortable. She always tried to hide her leg under jeans or dresses. 3. With the support of her family and friends, Niu Yu slowly came out from the shadows. In 2018,right before her 21st birthday, she decided to stop hiding her leg. To her surprise, she received lots of encouraging words. She also finished a half marathon in about 4 hours. She completed the hard 10-year journey of finding herself again. Problem Support Change How? 4. Now Niu Yu shares her story on social media. She listens to disaster survivors and encourages them to look forward. In 2023,she carried the torch at the FISU World University Games. “It is a great honour for me," she said, "But it is also a good chance to show people the power of being brave.” 5. A disaster can bring wounds and pain. But we should always face them with courage. As the writer Nora Ephron once said: “Above all, be the heroine of your life, not the victim." Now simple past tense and simple present tense (一般过去时和一般现在时) 1. During the 2021 Shanghai Fashion Week, a young, slim and confident woman with an iron leg drew everyone‘s attention. Her name was Niu Yu. She lost her right leg in the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake. She was only 11 years old then. 2. Niu Yu used to be in the school sports team. She loved running. But the disaster broke her dream. She had to live with an artifcial leg. It wasn't comfortable, and her leg often bled. People's curious eyes made her even more uncomfortable. She always tried to hide her leg under jeans or dresses. 3. With the support of her family and friends, Niu Yu slowly came out from the shadows. In 2018,right before her 21st birthday, she decided to stop hiding her leg. To her surprise, she received lots of encouraging words. She also finished a half marathon in about 4 hours. She completed the hard 10-year journey of finding herself again. 4. Now Niu Yu shares her story on social media. She listens to disaster survivors and encourages them to look forward. In 2023,she carried the torch at the FISU World University Games. “It is a great honour for me," she said, "But it is also a good chance to show people the power of being brave." 5. A disaster can bring wounds and pain. But we should always face them with courage. As the writer Nora Ephron once said: “Above all, be the heroine of your life, not the victim." Look at these sentences and read aloud. 1. She lost her right leg in the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake. 2. Niu Yu used to be in the school sports team 3. She had to live with an artifcial leg. It wasn't comfortable, and her leg often bled. 4. With the support of her family and friends, Niu Yu slowly came out from the shadows. 5. To her surprise, she received lots of encouraging words. 6. Now Niu Yu shares her story on social media. 7. A disaster can bring wounds and pain. But we should always face them with courage. 齐读三遍 背诵内化 Are there any useful expressions or sentences that you can use in your writing? Please underline them. The disaster —… lost … in …earthquake, etc. Recovery — With the support of her family and friends, … Now — A disaster can bring wounds and pain. But we should always face them with courage. Summary A heart-warming story What happened? How did he/she come out from the shadows of the disaster? How is his/her life now and what can you learn? Topic: A heart-warming story Requirement(要求) At least 80 words Task 3:Writing 审 认真审题 A 列 列提纲 B 扩 扩展句子 C 连 使用连接词 D 查 全面检查 E 抄 字迹工整 F Tips 大声齐读 高莹，女，因在2008年汶川地震中展现坚强乐观形象被称为“微笑女孩”。地震发生时，她作为一名初三学生被埋废墟下20小时，双腿严重截肢。获救时以微笑回应伤痛，画面经摄影师记录传播后成为抗震救灾的精神象征。高莹选择了自己面对生活的方式，安上义肢，挑战走川藏线，爱上绘画和游戏。也是在玩游戏的过程中，她认识了最终和她走进婚姻的丈夫。 张静，北京怀柔洪水现场北京绿舟救援队唯一的女成员。曾经多次到怀柔骑行，洪水中和队友艰难徒步穿越12公里险路搜寻受85名受困村民并成功完成转移任务。 “能在工作之余做志愿服务，尽自己微薄之力帮助需要帮助的人，很开心。” Choose one to write（15 mins） Tips: 微笑女孩(smiling girl);精神象征(spiritual symbol);义肢(artificial limb/legs);川藏线(Sichuan-Tibet highway) 洪水(flood); 骑行(cycling);受困的(trapped);转移任务(the task of transferring);微薄之力(negligible contribution);志愿服务(voluntary service) 16 Evaluate(评价) the writing with the assessment sheet(评价表). Task 5: Evaluate 要求 分值 建议 结构 结构完整(5-6)             结构较完整(3-4) 结构欠完整(1-2) 内容 内容充实(5-6)         内容较充实(3-4) 基本要点写出(1-2) 语言 语句流畅，使用较为丰富的词汇表达,语法、词汇拼写错误极少(5-6)     语句较通顺，有少量语法、词汇拼写错误(3-4) 有较多语法、词汇拼写错误(1-2) 书写 书写规范（2） 书写欠规范（1） 总分______ Show Time Tang原创英语课件 19 Homework Polish(润色) your writing and write the second draft. (For all) Write another story by yourself. (Optional) Thanks $