大练习一读后续写考后总结（助人类）课件-2025-2026学年高中英语作文复习专项

高二大练习一 读后续写考后总结（助人类） 【导语】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述作者九岁时经历家庭变故，生活陷入困境，一家人挤在拖车里，食物也不够吃。一天，作者看到有个饥饿的男人来到跟前，向作者父亲求助。 At nine years old, Amy went through more than the usual amount of excitement and change for a girl. In the past few months, her stable life had been turned upside down when her father was laid off from his job. This brought about a series of events, including her parents losing their beautiful home and forcing their family into a fifteen-foot trailer (拖车 )they had previously only used for weekend camping trips. Life in the trailer was tough, yet it was filled with warmth. Though her family possessed little, their door was never closed to those who had even less. Never will she forget the first time they squeezed onto the tiny couch (长沙发) together, which doubled as her parents ’ bed at night. One evening, as her mother was checking the last food they had, her voice trembled, “We don’t have enough food to last the week.” Hearing this, Amy was seized by a sense of sadness, like a huge stone settled in her heart. Moments later, her mother rose to prepare the modest chicken dinner. Amy wandered outside where her dad was working on their broken-down truck. Just then, a middle-aged man with dirty clothes emerged from a winding path. Coming right up to them, the man whispered in hesitation with a mix of shame and hope, “I... I am a hiker and have got lost. I’m hungry and wondering if you have any food to spare.” Amy’s heart tightened, countless thoughts racing in her mind. They barely had enough for themselves. The chicken for dinner wouldn’t even fill three plates. “ But the man seems to be in greater need of food than we do,” she thought to herself. Para1: “Of course!” The words escaped Amy before she even realized it. Para1: “Of course!” The words escaped Amy before she even realized it. Para2：Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para 1 “Of course!” The words escaped Amy before she even realized it. Para 2 Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag. 续写怎么做？ 1. 先读懂原文 2. 看续写第一段和第二段的首句来预测故事的发展 3. 运用十句五定法 根据第一段首句：Amy脱口而出答应 预测： 父亲点头同意—母亲分鸡肉—徒步者讲迷路心境—耐心倾听 —重新上路 根据第二段首句：徒步者提着大袋子回来 预测： 里面装着吃的——感谢帮助——Amy的感悟/主题升华 Para1 ：“Of course!” The words escaped Amy before she even realized it. （衔接句）She turned to her dad, who nodded without hesitation. （动作描写）With light steps, Amy went inside and told her mum. （关键情节）They invited the man to have dinner together and Amy’s mother divided the chicken into four portions instead of three, the biggest share for him. （表情+对话）The man’s face lit up with gratitude as he took a bite, “The most delicious chicken in my life.” （情景描写）As they ate together in the trailer, laughter bubbled up—stories were shared, and for a moment, the bitterness of their life was left behind. （衔接句）After dinner, her father showed the hiker the right way. He thanked them repeatedly and hit the road. 范文学习 Para 2：Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag. Inside the bag were some canned foods, fresh bread and even a small bag of candies for Amy. “I couldn’t forget your kindness,” he explained gratefully. Amy hugged him, her eyes sparkling, while her father clapped him on the back like an old friend. That evening, they feasted on a big meal, a warm atmosphere flowing in the trailer, as if hope itself knocked on their door. The hiker’s gesture not only filled their stomachs but also warmed their hearts. It was a reminder that even in the darkest times, kindness has a way of circling back when least expected. 同学们的错误表达 1. 对话太多，从头到尾用对话推动情节发展 2. 字数不够 3. 时态应用一般过去时 4. 情节要符合逻辑，要积极向上，不要写妈妈爸爸说我们自己都不够吃 5. 背了一些动作心理描写，但是要符合情节 同学们改正后的表达 01. 心理描写 03. 环境描写 02. 动作描写 04. 对话与高分 目录 9 01 心理描写 10 她很犹豫，不知道该不该把他们仅有的食物分享出去。 She hesitated, not knowing whether to share the little food they had. 2. 当看到那个男人眼中闪烁着感激时，艾米感到一阵的满足感。 When seeing gratitude gleamed in the man’s eyes, Amy felt a sense of satisfaction. 3. 尽管很担心自己会挨饿，艾米还是觉得帮助别人更重要。 Although worried about going hungry herself, Amy still thought helping others was more important. 4. 一想到能帮助别人，艾米的心里就充满了喜悦。 At the thought of being able to help others, Amy was overwhelmed with joy. 5. 父亲点头的那一刻，艾米的心里一块石头落了地（习语）。 The moment her father nodded, a weight was lifted from Amy’s heart. breathed a sigh of relief 如释重负 动作描写 艾米深吸一口气，然后坚定地走向那个男人。 Amy took a deep breath and then walked firmly toward the man. 2. 她妈妈小心翼翼地把鸡肉分成了四份。 Her mother carefully divided the chicken into four portions. 3. 艾米的爸爸拍了拍男人的肩膀，指了指正确的方向。 Amy’s father patted the man on the shoulder and pointed in the right direction. 4. 他站起来，深深地鞠了一躬表示感谢。 He stood up and bowed deeply to show his gratitude. 5. 艾米跑进屋，很快就拿着一碗米饭出来了。 Amy ran into the house and soon came out with a bowl of rice. 6. 男人的手颤抖着接过了食物。 The man’s hands trembled as he took the food. 7. 艾米把自己的那份鸡肉推到了男人面前。 Amy pushed her portion of chicken in front of the man. 8. 又累又饿，他大口地吃起了鸡肉。 Tired and hungry, he took a big mouthful of the chicken. 03 环境描写 拖车里的灯光很昏暗，却充满了温暖。 The light in the trailer was dim but full of warmth. 2. 拖车里只有一盏旧灯，却照亮了每个人的脸庞。 There was only one old lamp in the trailer, but it lit up everyone’s face. 3. 拖车里的空间很小，但大家挤在一起却很温馨。 The space in the trailer was small, but it was cozy when everyone huddled together. 4. 炉火在角落里燃烧，驱散了空气中的寒冷。 The fire burned in the corner, driving away the cold in the air. 环境描写 与其他高分句子 那个男人感激地说：“你们真是太好了，我永远不会忘记。” The man said gratefully, “You are so kind. I will never forget this.” 2. 妈妈对男人说：“别客气，多吃点。” Mom said to the man, “Make yourself at home. Eat more.” 3. 爸爸问道：“你知道怎么回到主路吗？” Dad asked, “Do you know how to get back to the main road?” 4. 男人离开时说：“谢谢你们的善良，我会回报的。” As he left, the man said, “Thank you for your kindness. I will repay you.” 5. 一股暖流涌上心头，艾米知道自己做对了。 A warm current welled up in her heart, and Amy knew she had done the right thing. 6. 尽管生活拮据，他们的门却永远为需要帮助的人敞开。 Despite their financial struggles, their door was always open to those in need. Although life is hard, 7. 男人的道谢声在寂静的夜晚回荡，格外清晰。 The man’s thanks echoed in the quiet night, surprisingly clear. 8. 食物虽然简单，却在他们之间筑起了一座信任的桥梁。 The food was simple, but it built a bridge of trust between them. 9. 爸爸的眼神里充满了赞许，仿佛在说 “你长大了”。 Dad’s eyes were full of approval, as if saying “You’ve grown up”. 11. 他的声音因感动而哽咽，一句话也说不出来。 His voice choked with emotion, unable to utter a word. 12. 那一刻，所有的困难都仿佛消失了，只剩下纯粹的温暖。 At that moment, all difficulties seemed to disappear, leaving only pure warmth. 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