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春季高考。必胜
特训S-603书面表达2026年小高考专项突破(广东专用)
梯度训练10篇
内容提要
真题速递
感受真题,体验考点体系
初阶3篇
牛刀小试,夯实核心考点
进阶4篇
聚焦重点,提升解题能力
高阶3篇
深度剖析,全面突破
学校:
姓名:
班级:
考号:
》真题速递
书面表达(共1题,满分25分)
(2023.1·广东春季高考)假定你是李华。请给外教David写一封邮件,邀请他参加在
学校操场举办的“英语之夜”活动。活动时间为下周五晚上六点到八点。
内容包括:(1)时间和地点;
(②)活动内容:演唱歌曲、朗诵诗歌和表演话剧;
(3)希望对方能参加
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数:
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear David,
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春季高考。心胜
Yours,
Li Hua
》
初阶30
Passage 1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他准备参加学
校组织的“青少年健康生活论坛”,正在收集相关资料。他很想了解你对健康生活的看法,请
你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1.健康生活的益处;2.如何保持健康生活。
注意:
1.词数不少于90;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:论坛foum
Dear Jim.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
假如你是李华,得知某英文报社要评选The Most Qualified Student'"(最美中学生),请你用英
语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下:
1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息,2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数90左右,2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入
总词数。
Dear Editor.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Pter是高一年级的学生,他进入高中后,因为平时学习很
忙不花时间去结交朋友,请给他写一封信,要点如下:
1、不赞同他的做法2、阐述友谊在生活中的意义3、给他提出具体的建议
注意:1、词数90左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Yours
Li Hua
》中阶40
Passage 1
假如你是李华,你校将举办以“Technology Changes Life'”为题的英语演讲比赛,请你根据
以下要点写一篇发言稿参赛。
要点:1.探讨科技对生活的影响(两点):
2.你对科技所持有的态度。
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注意:1.字数90左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Technology Changes Life
Good morning,everyone!
Passage 2
假定你是李华。你和外国朋友Bob约定下周一去参加晚会。昨晚你突然得了流感,发烧
咳嗽。医生建议你休息一段时间,因此不能赴约。请给Bob写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.告知不能赴约;2.说明不能赴约的原因;3.希望下次再约。
注意:l.词数90字左右;流感the flu约会make an appointment
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
假如你是班长石坤,英国学生Alex新学期即将来你班交流学习,请你写一封电子邮件告
知他相关信息,大概90词左右。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.报道须知,如携带核酸检测报告(一周之内),身份证,¥99000学费,一本语文书,
进入校园要使用汉语进行交流,要和中国学生一样参加各种考试,每天必须完成各科作
业等;
3.注意事项:穿我校的校服,留短发,保持卫生,不许说脏话等等。
4.提示词:nucleic acid test report核酸检测报告
Dear Alex,
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春季高考。心胜
Yours,
Shi Kun
Passage 4
你们班本周班会课的主题是上网交友的利与弊,假如你叫李华,请你写一段发言稿,说说
一些学生认为网上交友的诸多好处,和你对此的不同看法。
注意:1词数90左右;2.发言稿的开头与结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
My dear classmates,
Good afternoon Today's topic is making friends online.I'd like to say something about it.As
you know,thanks to the development of the Internet,more and more students are addicted to
making friends online
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That's all.Thank you.
Li Hua
》高阶30
Passage 1
假定你是李华,学校将在下周五下午:2:30在运动场举办“英语角”(English Corner)活动。
届时,英语老师和同学们将会参加。请你写信邀请外教Robert参加,并请他谈谈他的中学
时光。
内容要点:
(1)写信目的;(2)活动时间、地点及主要内容;(3)期待对方回复。
注意
1.词数90左右:2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头
和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert,
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春季高考。心胜
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
假如你是李华,你的加拿大网友M圣诞节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴
趣,希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两
个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹,2.叙述你推荐的理由;3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:词数90左右。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
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Li Hua
Passage 3
假如你是高三学生李华,你的英国笔友May在给你的邮件中提到她很喜欢排球尤其喜
欢中国女排并想了解其情况。请你给Mary回信介绍中国女排的情况。
内容包括:
1.1981-1986年获得“五连冠”;2.二十世纪90年代遭遇“滑铁卢”;3.2019年9月29日在
日本再一次获得女排世界杯冠军为中华人民共和国建国70周年献礼;4.女排精神对你的启
示。
注意:
1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
参考词汇:the Chinese Women Volleyball Team中国女子排球队
champion冠军anniversary周年纪念日
Dear Mary,
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
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特训S-603书面表达 2026年小高考专项突破(广东专用)
梯度训练10篇
内 容 提 要
真题速递
感受真题,体验考点体系
初阶3篇
牛刀小试,夯实核心考点
进阶4篇
聚焦重点,提升解题能力
高阶3篇
深度剖析,全面突破
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
书面表达(共1题,满分25分)
(2023.1・广东春季高考)假定你是李华。请给外教David写一封邮件,邀请他参加在学校操场举办的“英语之夜”活动。活动时间为下周五晚上六点到八点。
内容包括:(1)时间和地点;
(2) 活动内容:演唱歌曲、朗诵诗歌和表演话剧;
(3)希望对方能参加
注意:1. 词数 90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear David,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
It is a great privilege for me to invite you to participate in the activity of English Night. Here is some detailed information you may want to know .
The event is scheduled to be held on the playground from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday, running for two hours. We will have lots of activities you are interested in, such as singing, reading poems, and acting English Drama.
We really hope that you would accept this invitation. If you don’t have prior appointment, please come and join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
· 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他准备参加学校组织的“青少年健康生活论坛”,正在收集相关资料。他很想了解你对健康生活的看法,请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
· 1. 健康生活的益处;2. 如何保持健康生活。
注意:
1. 词数不少于90;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:论坛 forum
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going? In your email, you mentioned you wanted to participate in the “Adolescents’ Healthy Living Forum”, I’m very delighted to share my opinions with you.
I believe keeping a healthy life is beneficial to the adolescents. We are young and are growing up, so keeping a healthy life is good to build up our body. Besides, it can make us energetic and cheerful so that we can do better in all subjects learning.
When it comes to how to live a healthy life, I think we should develop a good living habit and try to keep it. Firstly, we should do more physical exercise, which will make us strong. There are many sports fit for us, such as jogging, swimming, climbing mountains and so on. Secondly, we shouldn’t eat more food rich in oil and sugar. Although some fried food or sweet drinks are tasty, we’d better stay away from them. In addition, regular schedule is necessary. Getting up early and not staying up late are helpful to us.
I hope my ideas are useful to you. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours ,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Jim写封信,给他介绍你对健康生活的看法。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 健康生活的益处;
2. 如何保持健康生活。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
participate in; be delighted to; healthy; be beneficial to; build up; energetic; so that; develop a good living habit; do more physical exercise; such as; rich in; stay away from; regular schedule; stay up late; useful; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. In your email, you mentioned you wanted to participate in the “Adolescents’ Healthy Living Forum”, I’m very delighted to share my opinions with you.
2. I believe keeping a healthy life is beneficial to the adolescents.
3. We are young and are growing up, so keeping a healthy life is good to build up our body.
4. Besides, it can make us energetic and cheerful so that we can do better in all subjects learning.
5. When it comes to how to live a healthy life, I think we should develop a good living habit and try to keep it.
6. Firstly, we should do more physical exercise, which will make us strong.
7. There are many sports fit for us, such as jogging, swimming, climbing mountains and so on.
8. Secondly, we shouldn’t eat more food rich in oil and sugar.
9. Although some fried food or sweet drinks are tasty, we’d better stay away from them.
10. In addition, regular schedule is necessary.
11. Getting up early and not staying up late are helpful to us.
12. I hope my ideas are useful to you.
13. Looking forward to your good news.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Firstly, Secondly
2.表并列补充关系:Besides, In addition
3.表转折对比关系:Although+clause(从句)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] We are young and are growing up, so keeping a healthy life is good to build up our body. (运用了动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] Firstly, we should do more physical exercise, which will make us strong. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
假如你是李华,得知某英文报社要评选“The Most Qualified Student”(最美中学生),请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下:
1.介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给编辑写封推荐信,向英语报社推荐“最美中学生”林杨。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时等其他时态。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息;
2. 说明推荐理由。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
an activity to select The Most Qualified Student; one of my best friends; study hard; behave well; diverse hobbies; painting and playing the violin; warm-hearted; be willing to help others; recommend him to you; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that you were hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student.
2. It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.
3. First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well.
4. Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies, including painting and playing the violin.
5. Last but not least, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.
6. Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表文章结构顺序:First of all, Secondly, Last but not least
2. 表并列补充关系:not only…but (also), including
3. 表因果关系:Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends, Lin Yang.(非谓语动词不定式作主语,it形式主语)
[高分句型2] First of all, he, who is among the most diligent students in our school, not only studies hard but also behaves well. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter是高一年级的学生,他进入高中后,因为平时学习很忙不花时间去结交朋友,请给他写一封信,要点如下:
1、不赞同他的做法
2、阐述友谊在生活中的意义
3、给他提出具体的建议
注意:1、词数90左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
You mentioned in your letter that you were too busy to make friends. However, I see things in a different way. In my view, friendship is a necessary part in our life.
Friendship is of great significance to everyone. First of all, friendship means not being lonely, as friends can understand you and share your sadness and happiness. Besides, friends are always the people you can rely on. Whenever you are in need of help, it is your friends who are ready to reach out a hand. I suggest that you join in extracurricular activities or join clubs that interest you. It’s a great way to meet pople and develop lasting friendships.
So why not make more friends around you? It will surely add more color and fun to your school life.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Peter写封信,对他因为太忙不去结交朋友表示不赞同,阐述友谊在生活中的意义,给他提出具体的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而:however→nevertheless
必要的:necessary→essential
另外:besides→moreover
在我看来:in my view→in my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In my view, friendship is a necessary part in our life.
拓展句:I hold the view that friendship is a necessary part in our life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You mentioned in your letter that you were too busy to make friends. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, friends are always the people you can rely on. (运用了who/that引导的限制性定语从句,省略了who/that)
Passage 1
假如你是李华,你校将举办以“Technology Changes Life”为题的英语演讲比赛,请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿参赛。
要点:1. 探讨科技对生活的影响(两点);
2. 你对科技所持有的态度。
注意:1. 字数90左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Technology Changes Life
Good morning, everyone!
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Technology Changes Life
Good morning, everyone!
I’m thrilled to be here today to discuss how technology has profoundly shaped our lives.
Technology has become an indispensable part of our daily lives. It has revolutionized communication, allowing us to stay connected with friends and family by means of video chats, emails, or social media. Moreover, technology has transformed the way we learn. We can access vast amounts of information as long as the Internet is available. Online courses have made learning more accessible and engaging.
From my perspective, while technology brings convenience and efficiency, it may also pose problems, such as a rise in unemployment, an increased risk of personal information disclosure, etc. As technology continues to advance, it is essential for us to adapt and use it wisely to ensure a positive impact on society.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办以“Technology Changes Life”为题的英语演讲比赛,要求考生按照要求写一篇发言稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled→ exalted
极大地:profoundly→ enormously
必不可少的:indispensable→ essential
允许:allow→ permit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It has revolutionized communication, allowing us to stay connected with friends and family by means of video chats, emails, or social media.
拓展句:It has revolutionized communication, which allows us to stay connected with friends and family by means of video chats, emails, or social media.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to be here today to discuss how technology has profoundly shaped our lives.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It has revolutionized communication, allowing us to stay connected with friends and family by means of video chats, emails, or social media.(运用了现在分词allowing作状语、不定式to stay作宾补)
Passage 2
假定你是李华。你和外国朋友 Bob 约定下周一去参加晚会。昨晚你突然得了流感,发烧咳嗽。医生建议你休息一段时间,因此不能赴约。请给 Bob 写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1. 告知不能赴约;2. 说明不能赴约的原因;3. 希望下次再约。
注意:1. 词数 90字左右;流感 the flu 约会 make an appointment
Dear Bob,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bob,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t attend the evening party next Monday.
I know I have promised you, but I’ve caught the flu unexpectedly. I didn’t feel well last night and later I found I had a fever and coughed badly, so my parents sent me to the hospital, where I was told I got the flu. The doctor advised me to stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
If it’s convenient for you, shall we make another appointment after I recover? Sorry again for any trouble this may cause.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国朋友 Bob写一封电子邮件,告知他自己因为得了流感而无法赴约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advise→recommend
意外地:unexpectedly→accidentally
拥挤的:crowded→jammed
引起:cause→produce
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The doctor advised me to stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
拓展句:The doctor advised that I stay in bed for a few days and avoid going to crowded places.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I didn’t feel well last night and later I found I had a fever and coughed badly, so my parents sent me to the hospital, where I was told I got the flu. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t attend the evening party next Monday. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 3
假如你是班长石坤,英国学生Alex新学期即将来你班交流学习,请你写一封电子邮件告知他相关信息,大概90词左右。内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 报道须知,如携带核酸检测报告(一周之内),身份证,¥99000学费,一本语文书,进入校园要使用汉语进行交流,要和中国学生一样参加各种考试,每天必须完成各科作业等;
3. 注意事项:穿我校的校服,留短发,保持卫生,不许说脏话等等。
4. 提示词:nucleic acid test report 核酸检测报告
Dear Alex,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Shi Kun
【答案】One possible version
Dear Alex,
I’m delighted to write to you. Welcome to our school! Thank you so much for coming to our country. Now I’m writing to tell you something about your visit to our school. First of all, when you get to our school, what you must carry is your nucleic acid test report that is within seven days. Meanwhile, you should carry your CD card, which is essential to you, and show it to the teacher who receives you at the information center. Secondly, around RMB 99000 and a Chinese book should be got ready in advance. More importantly, you will have to take part in all kinds of examinations as Chinese students do. Of course, finishing all the homework is what you have to do every day.
I hope that you will have a wonderful time in our school. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Shi Kun
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国学生Alex写一封电子邮件,告知他来你校学习需要做的相关准备及注意事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→pleased
首先:first of all→firstly
参加:take part in→participate in
各种各样的:all kinds of→various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, around RMB 99000 and a Chinese book should be got ready in advance.
拓展句:Secondly, around RMB 99000 and a Chinese book should be got ready in advance, which is important to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, when you get to our school, what you must carry is your nucleic acid test report that is within seven days.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句、what引导的主语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Meanwhile, you should carry your CD card, which is essential to you, and show it to the teacher who receives you at the information center.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 4
你们班本周班会课的主题是上网交友的利与弊,假如你叫李华,请你写一段发言稿,说说一些学生认为网上交友的诸多好处,和你对此的不同看法。
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.发言稿的开头与结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
My dear classmates,
Good afternoon!Today's topic is making friends online.I'd like to say something about it.As you know,thanks to the development of the Internet,more and more students are addicted to making friends online
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all.Thank you.
Li Hua
【答案】My dear classmates,
Good afternoon!Today's topic is making friends online.I'd like to say something about it.As you know, thanks to the development of the Internet, more and more students are addicted to making friends online.
Many students think making friends online helps them a lot because it can help them have more friends.The more friends they have, the more information they can get.By chatting online, they can express their feelings and opinions more freely.
However, in my opinion, though making friends online is helpful, there are also a lot of disadvantages.Making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, because it is not easy to know who he/she really is online.What's more, I think it wastes a lot of our precious time.
So we must be more careful while making friends online.
That's all.Thank you.
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇发言稿。文章主要就上网交友的利与弊发表自己的看法。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.说明一些学生认为网上交友的诸多好处
2.表明自己的不同看法
3.进行总结
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
Make friends;the more…,the more…;express one’s feelings and opinions;in my opinion;bring sb. sth.;a lot of;waste precious time;be careful
第三步:连词成句
1.Many students think making friends online helps them a lot because it can help them have more friends.
2.The more friends they have, the more information they can get.
3.By chatting online, they can express their feelings and opinions more freely.
4.However, in my opinion, though making friends online is helpful, there are also a lot of disadvantages.
5. Making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, because it is not easy to know who he/she really is online
6. What's more, I think it wastes a lot of our precious time.
7. So we must be more careful while making friends online.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:Many students think making friends online helps them a lot because it can help them have more friends. 中making friends online helps them a lot为省略了that的宾语从句,because引导原因状语从句。Making friends online may bring us danger and trouble, because it is not easy to know who he/she really is online中who引导宾语从句,making friends on line是动名词短语作主语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
Passage 1
假定你是李华,学校将在下周五下午:2:30在运动场举办“英语角”(English Corner)活动。届时,英语老师和同学们将会参加。请你写信邀请外教Robert参加,并请他谈谈他的中学时光。
内容要点:
(1)写信目的;
(2)活动时间、地点及主要内容;
(3)期待对方回复。
注意: 1.词数90左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robert,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robert,
I'm writing to invite you to attend an English corner. The activity will be held on the playground of our school at 2:00 p.m. next Friday.
Varieties of English activities are well prepared, including performing English plays, communicating freely with your classmates and singing famous English songs, which will surely give you a surprise. I sincerely ask you to prepare a short speech to talk about your time in the high school, which will be greatly appreciated. So please come if it is convenient to you.
I hope we are lucky enough to have you here and expect to learn more with your presence and participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,学校将在下周五下午: 2:30在运动场举办“英语角”(English Corner)活动。届时,英语老师和同学们将会参加。请你写信邀请外教Robert参加,并请他谈谈他的中学时光。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→take place
各种各样的:varieties of→multifarious
肯定:surely→definitely
参加:attend→take part in
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I'm writing to invite you to attend an English corner. The activity will be held on the playground of our school at 2:00 p.m. next Friday.
拓展句:I'm writing to invite you to attend an English corner which will be held on the playground of our school at 2:00 p.m. next Friday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Varieties of English activities are well prepared, including performing English plays, communicating freely with your classmates and singing famous English songs, which will surely give you a surprise.(运用了动名词作宾语,which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】So please come if it is convenient to you.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型3】I hope we are lucky enough to have you here and expect to learn more with your presence and participation.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
假如你是李华,你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣,希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:词数90左右。
Dear Mike,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
Look forward to your arrival.There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给加拿大网友Mike发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两个所喜欢的中国名胜古迹。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总-分-总法
要点:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Christmas;a brief introduction;places of interest;the Great Wall;one of the greatest wonders of the world;because of;a lot of;the West Lake;charming;look forward to;there be
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas.
2. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
3. The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.
4. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
5. The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.
6. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
7. Wish you a nice journey.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:and;What is more, Besides, Moreover(供参考)
3.表因果关系:Because of
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.(使用了由that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.(使用了非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型3] The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.(使用了由and连接的并列句)
Passage 3
假如你是高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Mary在给你的邮件中提到她很喜欢排球尤其喜欢中国女排并想了解其情况。请你给Mary回信介绍中国女排的情况。
内容包括:
1.1981-1986年获得“五连冠”;
2.二十世纪90年代遭遇“滑铁卢”;
3.2019年9月29日在日本再一次获得女排世界杯冠军为中华人民共和国建国70周年献礼;
4.女排精神对你的启示。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
参考词汇:the Chinese Women Volleyball Team中国女子排球队
champion冠军 anniversary周年纪念日
Dear Mary,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
How’s everything?
From your last E-mail I know you are very into volleyball and especially want to know about the Chinese Women Volleyball team. So I’m writing to share something related to it with you.
As is known to the Chinese people,the Chinese Women Volleyball team is one of the most wonderful sport teams in China. Once between 1981and 1986 they had a splendid history, winning the world champion five times on end, which made it well-known to the world. But in the 1990’s they failed again and again and never succeeded. However, no matter whatever difficulties they met with they didn’t lose heart. Thus, on September 29th they won the volleyball world cup champion a second time, which means a special gift to the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China (PRC).
From above we can know that only if we learn from failure ,believe failure is the mother of success and strive for success can we achieve our ideal dreams.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信:假如你是高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Mary在给你的邮件中提到她很喜欢排球尤其喜欢中国女排并想了解其情况。请你给Mary回信介绍中国女排的情况。内容包括:1.1981-1986年获得“五连冠”;2.二十世纪90年代遭遇“滑铁卢”;3.2019年9月29日在日本再一次获得女排世界杯冠军为中华人民共和国建国70周年献礼;4.女排精神对你的启示。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:the Chinese Women Volleyball team.(中国女子排球队);share something related to it with you(与你分享一些与它有关的事情);in the 1990’s(在九十年代);the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China (PRC)(中华人民共和国成立七十周年);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。So I’m writing to share something related to it with you.过去分词作后置定语;As is known to the Chinese people,the Chinese Women Volleyball team is one of the most wonderful sport teams in China.句中as引导的非限制性定语从句;Once between 1981and 1986 they had a splendid history, winning the world champion five times on end, which made it well-known to the world.现在分词作伴随状语,且which引导非限制性定语从句;However, no matter what difficulties they met with they didn’t lose heart.句中no matter what引导让步状语从句。
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