特训 S602 书面表达-【百题斩-小高考英语】2026年春季高考题型梯度特训满分冲刺 真题+练习（广东省专用）

春季高考。必胜 特训S-602书面表达2026年小高考专项突破（广东专用） 梯度训练10篇 内容提要 真题速递 感受真题，体验考点体系 初阶3篇 牛刀小试，夯实核心考点 进阶4篇 聚焦重点，提升解题能力 高阶3篇 深度剖析，全面突破 学校： 姓名： 班级： 考号： 》真题速递 书面表达（共1题，满分25分) (2024.1·广东春季高考)假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Peter计划寒假来中国旅游， 期间将在你所居住的城市游玩一天，希望你能给他当导游。请用英文给Peter写一封电子邮 件。 内容包括：(1)表示欢迎： (2)介绍游玩安排：品尝美食、参观博物馆、参加朋友聚会等； (3)期待他的到来。 注意：1.词数90左右； 2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数； 3.可以适当增加细节，并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, 1/13 乐思英语 春季高考。心胜 Yours, Li Hua 》 初阶30 Passage 1 下周你校开放日将迎来英国Sunshine School的访问团，你校来自Sunshine School的交换生Peter负责招募志愿者，他在发布的海报中号召具备下列条件的 可以写信给他： 1.身体健康，友好待人； 2.有空参与筹备； 3.有爱好特长，善于沟通，能用英语交流： 4.熟悉我校历史文化。 假如你是李华，对志愿者活动颇感兴趣，请根据自身条件给Peter写一封自荐信。 要求： 1.根据提示内容，可适当增加细节； 2文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数90左右。 Dear Peter, 2/13 乐思英语 春季高考。必胜 I'm sure we can be friends.I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小 学生举办用英语讲好中国故事的爱国主义主展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参 加此次活动。请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Miss Li写一 封自荐信。 1.个人信息 姓名、班级、性格等； ()读了很多关于中国历史的书，非常了解中国的历史和文化； 2.个人优势 (2)知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们，例如. 3.活动意义 (1)培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；(2)自拟一点； 3/13 乐思英语 春季高考。心胜 4.总结 自己发挥12点。 要求： 1.词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯： 3.短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Miss Li, I'm excited to hear that our school will hold the activity "Telling Chinese stories in English'.I really want to take part in it. Yours, LiHua Passage 3 为缓解学习压力，你的好友Frank沉迷于电脑游戏，每晚玩游戏到很晚， 4/13 乐思英语 春季高考。心胜 上课无心听讲，学习直线下降，你看在眼里，急在心里，作为好朋友，请你给 Frank写一封信，动之以情，晓之以理，劝他正确处理学习压力和娱乐的关系。 要点提示如下： (I)简要表达你对Frank现状的担忧： (2)结合Frank的情况重点阐述玩游戏的利弊； (3)给出1-2条缓解压力的合理化建议。 写作要求： 90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实姓名或校名； 行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear Frank, As your good friend, 5/13 乐思英语 春季高考。心胜 Hope everything will be better with you. Yours, XXX 》中阶40 Passage 1 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eic来信和你讨论如何自我保护。请你写一 封回信，内容包括： 1.交友慎重2.遇险报警3.安全饮食 4.其他 注意： 1.词数：90左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, I'm glad to discuss the topic of self-protection with you. 6/13 乐思英语 春季高考。必胜 Yours Li Hua Passage 2 假设你是李华，今年是甲辰龙年，你的笔友Rck对中国的龙文化很感兴趣。 请你根据提示内容给Ri©k回信，介绍中国龙文化的相关信息并谈谈你自己的龙 年期望。词数90词左右。 Chinese Dragon 2品 Culture ⑨ Meaning Importance Activities in Loong New Year Hope ood luck,wisdon ancient times,nowadays dragon dance,... 注意事项： ●必须包含思维导图的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数： ●意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； ●文中不得出现真实的校名和人名： Dear Rick, Hearing that you are interested in Chinese dragon culture,I am glad to tell you something about it. 7/13 乐思英语 春季高考。心胜 Yours, LiHua Passage 3 你校将举办中国文化体验日”(Chinese Culture Experience Day)并邀请外 教及交换生参加。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据下面内容写一封邀请信。 NoteOur school is going to hold a"Chinese Culture Experience Day". Place:at the school hall Date:8 May Activities:paper-cutting;traditional Chinese games,... Purpose:… Hope everyone come and experience! 要求： (1)信件应涵盖所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (2)词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear teachers and friends, We're glad to invite you to our Chinese Culture Experience Day 8/13 乐思英语 春季高考。心胜 Best wishes, LiHua Passage 4 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mk对中国传统故事中的人物形象很感兴趣， 写信向你请教。请你用英语给他写一封回信，具体要求如下： 1.推荐一位你最喜欢的中国传统故事人物（如孙悟空、花木兰、哪吒、诸葛 亮等)；2.介绍该人物的主要事迹或特点；3.阐述你喜欢这个人物的原因。 注意： 1.词数：90左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头已给出， 不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I was so glad to receive your letter and to hear about your interest in characters from Chinese traditional stories. 9/13 乐思英语 春季高考。心胜 Yours, Li Hua 》 高阶30 Passage 1 假定你是新枫杨外国语学校的李华，周六下午你去美籍教师David的宿舍邀请他参加次日 的郊游，但他不在。请给他写一个留言条。 要点： ①.邀他同游电影小镇： ②.你的郊游安排：观看表演+野餐+娱乐活动。 注意：1.词数90词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, 10/13 乐思英语春季高考·必胜 特训S-602书面表达 2026年小高考专项突破（广东专用） 梯度训练10篇 内 容 提 要 真题速递 感受真题，体验考点体系 初阶3篇 牛刀小试，夯实核心考点 进阶4篇 聚焦重点，提升解题能力 高阶3篇 深度剖析，全面突破 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 书面表达（共1题，满分25分） （2024.1・广东春季高考）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Peter计划寒假来中国旅游，期间将在你所居住的城市游玩一天，希望你能给他当导游。请用英文给Peter 写一封电子邮件。 内容包括：（1）表示欢迎： （2）介绍游玩安排：品尝美食、参观博物馆、参加朋友聚会等； （3）期待他的到来。 注意: 1 .词数90左右； 2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数； 3.可以适当增加细节，并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter， I am very glad to hear that you'll come to China to have a tour on winter vacation. Being your guide is fortunate. Welcome to our city and hope that you can have a good day and enjoy yourself. First let's introduce our arrangement. Our city is a beautiful city which lies in the east of Shandong province. We'll pay a visit to our city's museum in the morning and in the afternoon we plan to have our lunch in the famous restaurant called Big Hotel. There is plenty of delicious food in the restaurant. In the evening, we'll have a party with my friends at my home. Looking forward to your coming! Yours， Li Hua Passage 1 下周你校开放日将迎来英国Sunshine School的访问团，你校来自Sunshine School的交换生Peter负责招募志愿者，他在发布的海报中号召具备下列条件的可以写信给他： 1.身体健康，友好待人； 2.有空参与筹备； 3.有爱好特长，善于沟通，能用英语交流； 4.熟悉我校历史文化。 假如你是李华，对志愿者活动颇感兴趣，请根据自身条件给Peter写一封自荐信。要求： 1.根据提示内容，可适当增加细节； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数90左右。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure we can be friends. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old boy from Class 1, Grade 9. I’d like to become a volunteer in this activity. Now let me introduce myself. First, I enjoy doing sports. That is why I’m healthy and energetic. Also, I have a lot of friends because I’m friendly to others. Then, I’m organized enough to manage my time well. Therefore, I have extra time to prepare the activity with you. Next, as a member of our School Students’ Union, I am good at communicating with others. I have successfully organized several school activities about our school culture, which makes me familiar with the history and culture of our school. Besides, I do well in all my lessons, especially English, so I can communicate with people in English fluently. I’m sure we can be friends. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何信息提示，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题。说明自己想要成为志愿者； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身体素质、性格、特长”等方面介绍自己； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of 很多，大量 ②communicate with sb. 和某人交流 ③do well in 在某方面做得好 [高分句型] ①That is why I’m healthy and energetic. (why引导的表语从句) ②Also, I have a lot of friends because I’m friendly to others. (because引导的原因状语从句) ③I have successfully organized several school activities about our school culture, which makes me familiar with the history and culture of our school. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办用“英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动。请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Miss Li写一封自荐信。 1.个人信息 姓名、班级、性格等； 2.个人优势 (1)读了很多关于中国历史的书，非常了解中国的历史和文化； (2)知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们，例如……； 3.活动意义 (1)培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；(2)自拟一点； 4.总结 自己发挥1~2点。 要求： 1. 词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； 3. 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear Miss Li, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua 【答案】例文 Dear Miss Li, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years old. I’m in Class 9, Grade 1. I am outgoing and helpful. I have read a lot of books about Chinese history and know Chinese history and culture very well. I also know many historical stories and am good at telling them in English, such as Hou Yi Shoots the Suns, Yu Gong Moves a Mountain and so on. My spoken English is very good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Through this activity, I can cultivate my interest in learning English and improve my oral expression ability. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about Chinese history and culture! I am so proud of it. Only in this way can I make it! I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇自荐信，属于书信作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，引出写自荐信的背景和目的； 第二步，依次从个人信息、个人优势和个人对该活动的感想这三方面进行自荐，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，表达希望能够获得参加此次活动的机会并期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at doing sth擅长做某事 ②communicate with和……交流 ③cultivate one’s interest in learning English培养某人学习英语的兴趣 [高分句型] ①As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about Chinese history and culture!（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语） ②Only in this way can I make it!（倒装句） ③I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.（that引导的宾语从句） Passage 3 为缓解学习压力，你的好友Frank 沉迷于电脑游戏，每晚玩游戏到很晚，上课无心听讲，学习直线下降，你看在眼里，急在心里，作为好朋友，请你给Frank写一封信，动之以情，晓之以理，劝他正确处理学习压力和娱乐的关系。 要点提示如下： (1) 简要表达你对Frank现状的担忧； (2) 结合Frank的情况重点阐述玩游戏的利弊； (3) 给出1-2条缓解压力的合理化建议。 写作要求： 90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实姓名或校名；行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear Frank, As your good friend, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope everything will be better with you. Yours, xxx 【答案】Dear Frank, As your good friend, I’m really worried about you. Playing computer games too much has many disadvantages. It makes you sleep late and you have no energy to listen to the teacher in class, which leads to your poor grades. You don’t have enough time to review and do your homework. Moreover, it can also have a negative impact on your eyesight and physical health. But on the other hand, playing games can relax you for a short time. However, it should be controlled. To deal with the study pressure, you can do some sports like running or playing basketball. These activities can not only help you relieve stress but also keep you fit. Or you can listen to music to calm down. Maybe you can also talk to your parents or teachers about your troubles. Hope you can balance study and entertainment well. Hope everything will be better with you. Yours, xxx 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封建议信。 ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中涉及的对现状的担忧、利弊分析及合理化建议等方面的表述，适当添加连接词，使行文连贯、通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，指出担忧并概述过度玩游戏的弊端； 第二步，提供减压及提升学习状态的积极建议； 第三步，表达期望与祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①have many disadvantages有许多缺点 ②lead to导致 ③negative impact负面影响 ④relieve stress缓解压力 ⑤keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] ①Playing computer games too much has made you sleep late and lose focus in class. (动名词短语作主语) ②It makes you sleep late and you have no energy to listen to the teacher in class, which leads to your poor grades.(and连接并列句；which引导非限制性定语从句) ③To deal with the study pressure, you can do some sports like running or playing basketball. ( 动词不定式作目的状语) Passage 1 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric来信和你讨论如何自我保护。请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 交友慎重 2. 遇险报警 3. 安全饮食 4. 其他 注意： 1. 词数：90左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, I’m glad to discuss the topic of self-protection with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Eric, I’m glad to discuss the topic of self-protection with you. Here are some tips. First, choose friends carefully. A true friend supports you, while a bad one might get you into trouble. So, observe people’s behaviors and values before getting close. Second, call the police right away if you’re in danger. Their help can make a huge difference. Remember the emergency number in your area. Third, eat safely. Avoid junk food and ensure the food is fresh and well-cooked. Check food labels for ingredients and expiration dates. Also, when using public facilities, follow the rules to prevent accidents. And never give out personal information to strangers online. Self-protection helps us stay safe. Do you have any other ideas? Write to me soon! Yours Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：话题已给出，需要考生围绕所给出的话题，适当增加细节，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明文章主题，写信与Eric交流如何自我保护的话题； 第二步，具体讲述自我保护的几点建议。 第三步，结尾再次回应主题，期盼回信。 [亮点词汇] ①get sb into trouble使某人陷入困难 ②make a difference带来不同 [高分句型] ①I’m glad to discuss the topic of self-protection with you.（I’m glad to…写信常见句型） ②A true friend supports you, while a bad one might get you into trouble.（while引导的并列从句） Passage 2 假设你是李华，今年是甲辰龙年，你的笔友Rick对中国的龙文化很感兴趣。请你根据提示内容给Rick回信，介绍中国龙文化的相关信息并谈谈你自己的龙年期望。词数90词左右。 注意事项： ●必须包含思维导图的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； ●意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； ●文中不得出现真实的校名和人名； Dear Rick, Hearing that you are interested in Chinese dragon culture, I am glad to tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Rick, Hearing that you are interested in Chinese dragon culture, I am glad to tell you something about it. The Chinese dragon stands for wisdom and good luck in Chinese culture. In ancient times, it was believed to control water and weather. Today, the dragon remains a central figure in festivals like the Lunar New Year. For example, dragon dances are symbols of hope and prosperity for the future. Besides, old people and children like to wear Chinese clothes with dragon patterns in Loong New Year. I hope I will be healthy and happy in the Year of the Dragon, full of hope and inner strength. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意围绕思维导图所给结构和内容进行写作，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍龙的含义和重要性； 第二步，介绍龙年的活动； 第三步，介绍自己的龙年期望。 [亮点词汇] ①stand for代表 ②symbols of象征 ③inner strength内在力量 [高分句型] I hope I will be healthy and happy in the Year of the Dragon, full of hope and inner strength.（宾语从句） Passage 3 你校将举办“中国文化体验日”（Chinese Culture Experience Day）并邀请外教及交换生参加。假如你是学生会主席李华，请根据下面内容用英语写一封邀请信。 NoteOur school is going to hold a “Chinese Culture Experience Day”. Place: at the school hall Date: 8 May Activities: paper-cutting; traditional Chinese games, … Purpose: … Hope everyone come and experience! 要求： （1）信件应涵盖所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Dear teachers and friends, We’re glad to invite you to our Chinese Culture Experience Day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear teachers and students, We’re glad to invite you to our Chinese Culture Experience Day. It will be held on May 8th at the school hall. During the event, you will have the chance to try paper-cutting, an art form with a long history. What’s more, you will experience some interesting traditional Chinese games, such as Chinese chess. There will also be other shows like Chinese music and kung fu. The purpose of this event is to increase our understanding of traditional Chinese culture. Also, it offers you a wonderful chance to explore the charm of Chinese traditions. We sincerely hope you can join us for this exciting event! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意把活动的目的、时间、地点等表达清楚。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，发出邀请； 第二步，阐述具体的活动安排，例如时间、目的、地点等； 第三步，书写结语，期待接受邀请。 [亮点词汇] ①have the chance to do sth有机会做某事 ②What’s more而且 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①There will also be other shows like Chinese music and kung fu.（there be句型） ②We sincerely hope you can join us for this exciting event!（宾语从句） Passage 4 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike对中国传统故事中的人物形象很感兴趣，写信向你请教。请你用英语给他写一封回信，具体要求如下： 1.推荐一位你最喜欢的中国传统故事人物 (如孙悟空、花木兰、哪吒、诸葛亮等)； 2.介绍该人物的主要事迹或特点； 3.阐述你喜欢这个人物的原因。 注意： 1.词数：90左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, I was so glad to receive your letter and to hear about your interest in characters from Chinese traditional stories. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I was so glad to receive your letter and to hear about your interest in characters from Chinese traditional stories. I’d like to recommend to you my favorite character from a traditional Chinese story. I hope you’ll like him too. My favorite character is Sun Wukong, the Monkey King. It is from a book named Journey to the West. He has a magic stick that can become big or small. He also has magical powers, such as turning himself into 72 shapes. Most importantly, he is very brave and always protects his master, Tang Seng. I admire Sun Wukong because he is smart and brave. He always tries his best to overcome any challenge. His spirit really inspires me. His stories are exciting, and I think you will enjoy them too! Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇书信； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：向美国朋友Mike推荐一位最喜欢的中国传统故事人物，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明很开心能够向对方推荐自己最喜欢的中国传统故事人物，引出下文； 第二步，介绍最喜欢的人物孙悟空的主要事迹和特点，注意细节充分，三观正确； 第三步，阐述喜欢这个人物的原因，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第四步，表达期待对方回信。 [亮点词汇] ①recommend…to… 向……推荐…… ②such as 比如…… ③turning…into… 把……变成…… [高分句型] ①He has a magic stick that can become big or small.（定语从句） ②I admire Sun Wukong because he is smart and brave.（原因状语从句） Passage 1 假定你是新枫杨外国语学校的李华，周六下午你去美籍教师David的宿舍邀请他参加次日的郊游，但他不在。请给他写一个留言条。 要点： ①. 邀他同游电影小镇； ②. 你的郊游安排：观看表演+野餐+娱乐活动。 注意：1. 词数90词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear David, I came to visit you, but you were away/out. I hope to invite you to pay a visit to the Film Town with us on Sunday. We shall gather at our school gate and then start at 8:00 in the morning, and it will take us 20 minutes to get there. First we can watch some performances, such as catching the spy, etc. Then we can have a short party over there, when we can sing songs, play games, and even have a meal there. If you have any amazing ideas for the activity, please let me know.   (98w) Yours， Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美籍教师David写一个留言条，邀请他参加周日的郊游。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参观：visit→ pay a visit to 花费：cost→ take 野餐：have a picnic→ have a meal 好主意：nice idea→ amazing idea 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I came to visit you, but you were away/out. I hope to invite you to pay a visit to the Film Town with us on Sunday. 拓展句：I came to visit you, but you were away/out. The purpose is that I hope to invite you to pay a visit to the Film Town with us on Sunday. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I came to visit you, but you were away/out. （运用了由but连接的并列句） [高分句型2] Then we can have a short party over there, when we can sing songs, play games, and even have a meal there. （运用了由when引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型3]  If you have any amazing ideas for the activity, please let me know. （运用了由if引导的状语从句） Passage 2 假如你是李华。你的美国笔友Adam自从升入高中以来，因为学习压力大，没有时间运动，因此写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1.表示理解； 2.给出建议； 3.表达希望。 注意： 词数90词左右。 Dear Adam, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【答案】Dear LI Ming， I am sorry to hear that you have studied so hard since you entered the senior high school that you have had no time for exercise. I think it is harmful to your health. I would like to give some advice. At first, you’d better make a study and exercise plan and follow the schedule to exercise and study. Exercise is as important as your study. Besides, make full use of PE class and break time between classes to do some movements. After exercise you can study better. In all, I hope these suggestions are helpful. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Adam写一封回信，帮助他解决学习压力大，没有时间运动的问题。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般将来时等。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 表示理解； 2. 给出建议； 3. 表达希望。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） study so hard; have no time for exercise; be harmful to; some advice; make a study and exercise plan; make full use of PE class; break time; do some movements; be helpful 第三步：连词成句 1. I am sorry to hear that you have studied so hard since you entered the senior high school that you have had no time for exercise. 2. I think it is harmful to your health. 3. I would like to give some advice. 4. At first, you’d better make a study and exercise plan and follow the schedule to exercise and study. 5. Exercise is as important as your study. 6. Besides, make full use of PE class and break time between classes to do some movements. 7. After exercise you can study better. 8. In all, I hope these suggestions are helpful. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：At first, In all 2.表并列补充关系：Besides, 3. 表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考) 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you have studied so hard since you entered the senior high school that you have had no time for exercise.（so…that句型，that引导结果状语从句） [高分句型2] In all, I hope these suggestions are helpful.（省略连接词that的宾语从句） Passage 3 假如你叫王华，你和表哥张越约好今年暑假一起去云南丽江旅游。现在请你根据下面的要点提示给他写封电子邮件，告知旅游安排。 1．7月15日和他一起坐飞机到昆明，再去丽江； 2．参观当地著名风景名胜，购物，品尝风味小吃； 3．昼夜温差较大，带足保暖防寒衣物。 注意：1.要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．词数90左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Zhang Yue， As is scheduled，we are to visit Lijiang in Yunnan Province this coming summer holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope we'll have a good time there. Yours faithfully， Wang Hua 【答案】Dear Zhang Yue， As is scheduled，we are to visit Lijiang in Yunnan Province this coming summer holiday.Now I'll tell you my arrangement for the trip. On July 15th, we'll fly to Kunming, from where we'll go to Lijiang by bus. Upon our arrival, we'll visit the famous tourist attractions there, which enjoy high popularity among tourists. There are many legends attached to the places, and the beautiful scenery there will prove a feast for us.Meanwhile, we can buy some local products as souvenirs and have a taste of local food as well as its culture. As there's a big difference in temperature in the day and during the night, it's recommended that you take some warm clothes. Hope we'll have a good time there. Yours faithfully， Wang Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据下面的要点提示给张越写封电子邮件，告知旅游安排。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：写作内容要包括以下要点： 1．7月15日和他一起坐飞机到昆明，再去丽江； 2．参观当地著名风景名胜，购物，品尝风味小吃； 3．昼夜温差较大，带足保暖防寒衣物。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） enjoy high popularity ; attached to; have a taste of; as well as 第三步：连词成句 1.Now I'll tell you my arrangement for the trip. 2.On July 15th, we'll fly to Kunming, from where we'll go to Lijiang by bus. 3.Upon our arrival, we'll visit the famous tourist attractions there, which enjoy high popularity among tourists. 4.There are many legends attached to the places, and the beautiful scenery there will prove a feast for us. 5.Meanwhile, we can buy some local products as souvenirs and have a taste of local food as well as its culture. 6.As there's a big difference in temperature in the day and during the night, it's recommended that you take some warm clothes. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Upon our arrival, we'll visit the famous tourist attractions there, which enjoy high popularity among tourists. 这句话运用了which引导的定语从句；文章也使用了一些固定词组，如enjoy high popularity ; attached to; have a taste of; as well as等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 21 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $