UnitFriendship主题作文写作课件2025-2026学年沪教版（2024）七年级英语上册

该初中英语课件以“以读促写”为核心，围绕“友谊”主题开展写作教学。课堂导入通过问题链（如“What’s ‘relationship’?”“What can make a close and strong friendship?”）激活学生认知，结合词汇讲解（friendship的词性、定义）和写作要点梳理（基本信息、外貌等），搭建从理解友谊内涵到掌握写作结构的学习支架。 其亮点在于采用“以读促写”模式，通过阅读材料（如弹珠交换故事）培养语言能力（提取信息转化为写作观点），范文分基础版（描述外貌性格）和高阶版（分析友谊意义）提升思维品质，词汇句型提供实用表达（如“mutual trust is of great importance”）助力学习能力。学生能系统掌握写作方法，教师可高效开展读写结合教学。

以读促写 第一单元主题作文写作 七年级上 Mishine 1 Lead-in 1 2 1. What’s “relationship”? 2. What can make a close and strong friendship? 3. Would you like to introduce your best friend to us? Questions For you 3 What’s “friendship”? Friends ship (后缀，表示关系） 4 What can make a close and strong friendship? 5 … The same hobbies support honesty trust understanding How to introduce my friend? basic information (name, age, hobby…) appearance personality stories between us Your opinion about friendship 6 Okay，let’s start to write our composition! ！ Are you kidding? 那开始写作文吧！ It’s just a joke! I’m kidding! 让我们现在看看总结下别人怎么写的！ 7 Reading 2 8 Passage A 9 Questions C D D C 10 What can you learn from it? Remember, friendship is a two-way street. Being honest with each other matters more than anything you might have. In my opinion, friendship is a two-way street. If we want to keep a close and strong friendship with your friendship, we should be honest all the time. 转化： 11 Passage 02 12 Questions B C D C A What can you learn from it? Subheadings: Meeting my best friend at school; Friendship; Our interests; My friend, my strength 讲述与朋友相见的时间； 聊彼此间的兴趣爱好 讲述友情给你带来的力量及好处 总结真正的友谊 转化： 14 Model text learning 3 15 My Best Friend (基础版) My best friend Li Yao is 12 years old. Now let me introduce her to you. Li Yao and I are in the same class. She is a tall girl. She has a round face, long hair and big bright eyes. She is very lively and always brings all of us joy and fun. She likes painting and dances well. She is good at maths, too. She can be my best friend because we like doing the same thing. We often paint and dance together. I often share my happiness with her. When one of us feels sad or blue, we tell the other one and this makes us feel better. Most importantly, she is caring and helpful. When I meet maths problems, she always teaches me patiently. With her help, my maths has improved a lot. I also become more confident and open now. I think a friend in need is a friend indeed. I understand close friends should count on each other for love, admiration, respect and support. 开门见山！ appearance personality Hobby & interest Reasons why they become good friends Opinion about friend 词汇及句型运用 1.在所有的朋友中，Tom 是我最好的朋友。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.他今年 12 岁，读初一。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 我们都很喜欢体育运动 ，共同的兴趣爱好使我们成为了好朋友。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 她的头发又长又亮，像瀑布一样一直垂到她的肩膀。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他的笑容就像太阳一样 ，总能让我振作起来。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.Tom 很喜欢在课余时间打篮球。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.Tom 热爱音乐，他觉得可以让他放松。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.他很喜欢探索新的事物。 _______________________________________________________________ 9.他身上有自信、智慧、力量和勇气等特点。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 朋友因为爱、欣赏、尊重和支持而相互依赖。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ Among all the friends, Tom is my best friend. He is 12 years old and is in Grade 1 of middle school. We both love sports, and it was this common interest that brings us together Friends count on each other for love, admiration, respect and support He has the characteristics like confidence, wisdom, strength and courage. He has preference in listening to music, which brings him relaxation. He is interested in exploring new things. He is fond of playing basketball in his free time. His smile is like sun, and can always cheers me up. Her hair is long and bright like waterfall up to her shouders Structure and key points 结构及要点 My friend 外貌 性格及爱好 词汇及句型： 1. 12-year- old 12 岁的 2. slim 苗条的 3. of medium height 中等身高 4. long straight/curly hair 长直发、卷发 5. pale 苍白的 6.dark-skinned 皮肤黝黑的 7. high-nosed 高鼻梁的 8. thick/thin-lipped 厚、薄嘴唇 词汇及句型： 的 9. brave 勇敢的 10.humorous 幽默的 11. hard-working/diligent 勤奋的 12.lovely 可爱的 13. smart/intelligent 聪明的 14.warm-hearted 有爱心的 15.easy-going 好相处的 16.patient 耐心的 17. supportive 支持的，鼓励的 18.be fond of/be keen on/ have preference in 喜欢 My friend(高阶） Nobody can get through life without friends. Friends play an important role in our lives. Mybest friend is called Mike. He is a 14-year-old boy of medium build. He is energetic and likes doing sports. The most unforgettable experience betweenus is a school sports meeting. At that time, I was racing for my class. However, I fell far behind other racers. Luckily, Mike kept running with me and cheering me up. With his encouragement, I finished that race at last. From this experience, I realize that we should always be ready to give a helping hand to get on well with friends and maintain friendships. Just as the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Besides, mutual trust is also of great importance. 19 Structure and key points 结构及要点 My friend 友谊的重要性 好友基本信息 与好友间的故事 友谊的真谛 词汇及句型： Get through 经历，渡过； Play an important role in…在…发挥重要作用 Be called 被称为 a/an 数字-year-old +n. 一个…岁的… energetic 活力充沛的 The most unforgettable experience 最难忘的经历 Fall far behind远远落后 With one’s help/encourage/company… 在…下 词汇及句型： i realize that +句子 我意识到… get on well with sb. 与…相处 be ready to do sth 准备做… give a helping hand 给与帮助之手 just as the saying goes, 正如俗话说 a friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情 mutual adj.共同的 be of great important 非常重要 20 词汇及句型运用 1. 朋友能够帮助我们渡过人生中的困难时刻。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 彼此尊敬和信任在维持友谊中发挥着重要作用。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 我最好的朋友之一叫做Alice. __________________________________________________________ 4. Alice能量充沛且擅长于跳各种舞蹈。_______________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我们之间最难忘的经历就是一起去做义工活动_______________________________________________________________________________________ 在他的帮助下，我成功地解决了这道数学题目。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 俗话说，众人拾柴火焰高。__________________________________________________________ 如果你想与朋友好好相处，时刻准备着伸出援助之手是非常重要的。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ Friends can help us get through difficult moments in our life. Mutual respect and trust play an important role in maintaining friendship. One of my best friend is called Alice. Alice is energetic and good at many kinds of dances. The most unforgettable experience between us is doing voluntary work together. With his help, I solved the math problem successfully. As the saying goes, many hands make light work. If you want to get on well with friends, it is of great importance to always be ready to give a helping hand. 21 真题写作 5 22 Dear boys or girls, I feel greatly honored to stand here to tell something about my best friend. I met Peter in primary school. And we sat next to each other. He has the same age as me.Peter is of medium height, He has short, black hair and round face. He is smart. He does well in studying.His favourite subject is maths, We became friends because we solved a difcult maths problem together. He is always quiet but warm-hearted. We often play chess after school. He can study chess all day withoutsaying a word. However, when someone has trouble studying maths, he will help them.We learn from each other. And I think we'l still be close friends in the future. 谢 谢 2025/9/6 25 $