高考全国卷之读后续写微技能--动物和人物动作神态描写 课件-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写微技能 动物篇 复习回顾—writing How to write An example “Sorry sir,” the boy replied, “I forgot all about it.” Paragraph 1: Hearing what Mike said, the teacher frowned and glared at Mike, eyes blazing with anger. A deadly silence took hold of the whole class. With so many eyes fixed on him, Mike felt that his heart was beating increasingly quickly as if it were leaping into his throat. He was too terrified to raise his head, wondering whether he should tell the truth to the teacher. Cohesion and coherence 分词做状语 Exaggeration 夸张 Personification 拟人 2 Post reading—writing How to write Theme: Positive Plot: Reasonable Language style: Consistent Plot line + Emotion line Five foundation skills Showing phrases Active words Point of view Rhetorical device Five senses 3 Showing phrases Internal sensations: What a character is feeling inside. Physical signals：What other people can see. Mental responses： What a character is thinking. Rhetorical device Simile/ metaphor 明喻/暗喻 Personification 拟人 Contrast 对比 Exaggeration 夸张 Active words Vivid action description Vivid adv./adj. description + + Point of view Main Character Minor Character 4       How to make the dog in your writing vivid and eye-catching? a pair of large watery eyes 一双水汪汪的大眼睛 a nose like a small black gem 一个黑宝石般的鼻子 two big round eyes 两只圆溜溜的大眼睛 lean their heads together头靠在一起 wag the tail 摇尾巴 bite the corner of the coat咬住衣角 smell/ sniff 嗅 bark 吠 lick 舔 put the ears up把耳朵竖起来ears flat耷拉着耳朵 little puppy/puppies little creature little dog 小狗 The dog curled into a wet lump and lay depressingly on the ground. 那只狗蜷成一团，无精打采地躺在地上。 The puppy lay listlessly on the ground, with the same spiritless expression on his face. The dog got upset, crawling up around its master’s cloth as if to seek for comfort and warmth. 狗很难过，爬到主人的衣物周围，好像在寻找安慰和温暖。 Upon his master’s arrival, the dog leapt to his feet, snorted happily and bounded forward. 主人一到，这只狗就跳起来，高兴地哼了一声，向前跳跃着。 Hearing his master’s footsteps, the dog rushed out of the house excitingly, his tail wagging and ears putting up. The dog clung to his feet and looked at him with bright eyes. （cling 抓住，黏住）狗紧贴着他的脚，用明亮的眼睛看着他。 darted to his embrace扑到他的怀抱里 The dog has golden/brown fur which feels very comfortable, like touching the soft cotton. 小狗有着金黄色/棕色的毛，摸着十分舒服，像是摸着柔软的棉花一样。 The little dog ran around the garden with a ball in its mouth Little puppies were playing growling and biting each other’s faces and legs. 小狗正在玩耍，咆哮，撕咬对方的脸和腿。 They raise their whole bodies on their hind legs and hold each other tightly with the paws 他们用后腿支起全身，用爪子紧紧抓住彼此 The two little creatures were running about in the garden. rub their necks and backs with their paws用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部 fall on its back摔得四脚朝天 keep scratching you with his front paws 用前爪不停挠你 leap to its feet跳起来 rest the nose in its paws 把鼻子搁在爪子里 keep its fore legs doubled up保持前腿弯曲 At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog watched him, ears up, head slightly cocked. 看到一个陌生人向房子走来，那只狗竖起耳朵，微微抬起头，注视着他。 He stretched, shook himself and circled several times before dropping to the ground. 它伸了伸懒腰，抖了抖身子，绕了几圈才掉到地上。 Seeing the meat in the master’s hand, the little dog wagged its tail and watched with hopeful eyes. 看到主人手里的肉，小狗摇着尾巴，充满希望地看着。 She kept sniffing, her sharp nose seeking the smell of her master. 她不停地闻，她灵敏的鼻子在搜寻着主人的气息。 Kelly gazed up at him, wagging her tail. 凯莉抬头看着他，边摇着尾巴。 The dog wandered off to rest her noses in her paws. 狗走开了，把鼻子搁在爪子里。 It lowered its head with caution, its eyes shining with curiosity.它小心地低下头，眼睛里闪烁着好奇的光芒。 Example: The dog was very happy We brought our daughter home in a car seat, and both dogs sniffed (嗅) and licked her, tails wagging. I had to pull Zack away from her because he wouldn’t stop licking her. Zack loved my daughter extremely, and he somehow knew whenever it was time to go upstairs, and he would wait at the bottom of the stairs for her, and then follow her up to bed. 表达微技能之动作神态：人物喜乐篇 The Micro-skills Training in writing 词的积累： 名词：excitement, joy, pleasure 动词：cheer, yell 形容词：happy, glad, pleased, cheerful, delighted, overjoyed, merry, 副词：jollily, enjoyably, cheerfully, joyfully II.词块和句的积累： 1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. (shine-shone-shone发光) 2. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. (一闪而过) 3. My face was shining with indescribably wild joy. 4. She wore a shining smile on her face.（wear-wore-worn带着） 5. Her smile lit up the whole room.(light-lit/lighted-lit/lighted点亮） 6. Her flushed face was shining with excitement. 7. A ripple of excitement ran through them. （run-ran-run穿过) 8. Laughter lingered around the room.（游荡） 9. I was wild with joy/delight. 10. I was pleased beyond description. 11. A wild gaiety took hold of her.（gaiety快乐） 11. Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她那双钻石般闪亮的眼睛，嘴唇上始终挂着微笑。 12. She shed tears of joy. （shed-shed-shed –shedding流泪） 13. Tears of happiness flow down her face. (flow-flowed-flowed流淌） 14. Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds. （sparkle闪耀) 15. Her eyes shone/beamed/twinkled/danced with pleasure/delight/joy/sweetness. 16. Amusement gleamed in his eyes. （gleam闪耀） 17. Joy welled up inside her. （well up 涌出） 18. I was floating on air. 19. Because of that smile, our hearts jump and dance for joy, sweet from the heart filled to the body. （fill 充满，填满） 20. Her heart swells with happiness/joy. （well with充满，填满） Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. Have a try ：Use the above sentences to describe the following pictures. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. Her face was shining with indescribably wild joy. She wore a shining smile on her face. Amusement gleamed in her eyes. Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds. She was wild with joy/delight. Her eyes shone/beamed/twinkled/danced with pleasure. A ripple of excitement ran through them. Their flushed faces were shining with excitement. Laughter lingered around the room. They were floating on air. A ripple of excitement ran through them. Joy welled up inside them. Have a try 牛刀小试：句子翻译与句型转换（升级句型） 1.外婆把车停在路边，急忙走向Bobby的前门，整个人兴奋地颤抖 ①Grandma parked down the street, rushed to Bobby’s front door____________________________________________. (运用连动句句型扩充句子内容) . ② Grandma parked down the street and rushed to Bobby’s front door, _______________________________. (运用非谓语动词丰富文章句型) 2. 我从未见过如此可爱的小动物，欣喜若狂地追了上去。 ① _____________________________________________________ I was wild with joy and followed its track. (运用such … that … 句型) ②_________________________________________________, I was wild with joy and followed its track. (运用倒装句) and her whole body trembled with excitement trembling with excitement I had never seen such a lovely creature in my life that Never had I seen such a lovely creature in my life 4. Paula的脸通红，声音也兴奋地颤抖起来。 ①Paula’s face turned red_________________________________________. (运用with + n. + doing结构) ② Paula’s face turned red, ________________________________________. (运用独立主格结构) 5. Norah非常开心，几乎就要跳起来了，眼泪含满了眼眶。 ① Norah was _________________________________and tears filled her eyes. (运用so…that…句型) ② ______________________________________________ with tears filling her eyes.(运用so放在句首的倒装句) with her voice quivering with excitement her voice quivering with excitement happy that she almost jumped up So happy was Norah that she almost jumped up 4. Paula的脸通红，声音也兴奋地颤抖起来。 ①Paula’s face turned red_________________________________________. (运用with + n. + doing结构) ② Paula’s face turned red, ________________________________________. (运用独立主格结构) 5. Norah非常开心，几乎就要跳起来了，眼泪含满了眼眶。 ① Norah was _________________________________and tears filled her eyes. (运用so…that…句型) ② ______________________________________________ with tears filling her eyes.(运用so放在句首的倒装句) 6. 听到他们对圣诞老人说谢谢，她的眼中闪烁着一丝快乐的光芒。 ① ______________________________________________, her eyes were sparkling like diamonds. (运用非谓语动词) ②______________________________________________________ a ripple of excitement gleamed in her eyes. (运用强调句型) with her voice quivering with excitement her voice quivering with excitement happy that she almost jumped up So happy was Norah that she almost jumped up On hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Clause It was hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Clause that 7. 当他们看到爸妈，如释重负，眼里含着泪光。 ①__________________________________________________, they felt relieved with spark in their eyes. (运用时间状语从句)(When they spotted/caught sight of their parents) ② __________________________________________________, they felt relieved with spark in their eyes. (运用“一……就”句型) 8. Jennifer睁大昏昏欲睡的双眼，她脸上挂着的微笑使整个房间变得明亮. ①Jennifer’s sleepy eyes opened wide and her face __________________________________________. (运用定语从句) When they spotted/caught sight of their parents The moment/instant they spotted/caught sight of their parents wore a smile that brightened up the whole room 9. 他的眼泪落了下来，他奔向妈妈温暖的怀抱，对她说谢谢。 ①________________________________, he ran to mum’s warm hug, and said gently, “Mum, thank you.” (运用with + n. + doing结构) ② _____________________________, he ran to mum’s warm hug，and said gently, “Mum, thank you.” (运用独立主格结构) 10.他不敢相信，睁大了眼睛。看到这个惊喜，他不知道说什么来表达他的喜悦。 ①It was __________________________he made his eyes wider. (运用so…that…结构) ② ________________________, he couldn’t speak anything to express his happy feeling. (运用非谓语动词) With tears dropping from his eyes Tears dropping from his eyes so unbelievable that Looking at this surprise 理清故事线，确定故事走向，创造画面感 Point of view(main/minor characters) Cohesion and coherence Internal sensations Physical signals Mental responses Active words: v./adj./adv. Rhetorical device Advanced sentence patterns Positive/ reasonable/consistent Evaluation tips: 24 Thank you! $