专题09 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用）八年级英语上学期

专题09 书面表达 1．（24-25八上·上海松江区·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The trouble I met with”.（请以“我碰到的麻烦”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） What was the trouble you met with? How did you deal with it? What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（24-25八上·上海建平中学西校·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A Special Day in My Daily Life”.（以“我日常生活中特别的一天”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于60字）： 注意：文章需要写明“事情发生在什么时候？发生了什么事情？为什么这件事情特别？” A Special Day in My Daily Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（23-24八上·上海闵行区·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（23-24八上·上海杨浦区·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have （60-100 words），请根据邮件的主题（subject）， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards, Mary 5．（24-25八上·上海位育中学·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I was in trouble that day”. （以“那天， 我遇到了麻烦”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、班名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Questions for reference（以下问题仅供参考） When did you meet with the trouble? What was the trouble about? How did you deal with the trouble? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（23-24八上·上海崇明区部分学校联考·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” （ 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） 注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（23-24八上·上海青浦区教师进修学院附属中学·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My proudest moment” （以“我最自豪的瞬间”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（23-24八上·上海松江区·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（24-25八上·上海建平南汇实验学校·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something ________ happened to me” 生活中总有一些事曾发生在你身上。或令人激动、或令人难忘、或不寻常……请以“发生在我身上的……的事”为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，叙述事情发生的经过，并谈谈你从中学到了什么？标点符号不占格。 注意文中不能出现自己的姓名、校名及有关信息。 Questions for reference （以下问题供参考） 1. What happened to you? 2. What can you learn from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（24-25八上·上海闵行区·期中）0．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假如你是李华（Li Hua），收到了来自笔友的一封邮件向你描述了他和爸爸在等待轮渡时发生的事，请阅读邮件并进行回复。 Suggested questions: 1. Describe your experience. 2. Why do you think it was special? From: paulyoung@nymail.com To: lihua@shmail.com Subject: My experience Hi, LiHua Great news! I have something interesting to share with you. Yestersday my father and I heard something when we are waiting for the ferry. A woman told my dad that three man had stolen her friend’s purse but they ran away. The woman went after them. We didn’t go on the ferry and reported it to the police. Finally, the three men were caught by the policeman. My dad helped those two women. He was great! What’s your special experience? Write and tell me about it soon. Paul From: lihua@shmail.com To: paulyoung@nymail.com Subject: My special experience Hi, Paul I also have something special to share with you。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 11．（24-25八上·上海嘉定区·期中）1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不计入字数） 假设你是Jon，请给你的笔友May写一封信，告诉她你今年一次不同寻常的经历。 （注意：1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. What happened? 2. What did you learn from this experience? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（24-25八上·上海奉贤区·期中）Write a composition in at least 60 words on the topic “A meaningful activity”. （平时生活中，你一定参加过许多有意义的活动，比如学校的运动会，义卖，社区里的清洁家园等志愿者活动，请你选择一次印象深刻的活动，以“一次有意义的活动”为题，谈谈你做了什么，有什么收获，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格） （注意：文章中不得出现任何人名，校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分） A meaningful activity ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（24-25八上·上海扬波中学·期中）你的学校即将举行秋季运动会（autumn sports meeting），你想参加下列哪一项或两项比赛：篮球赛（Basketball Match）、跳远（Long Jump）、接力赛（Relay Race）、长跑（Long-distance Race）、短跑（Sprint）、中国象棋（Chinese chess）、围棋（the Game of Go）和国际象棋（International chess）。 假设你是李华，请给德育处陈老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说说你想报名哪一或两项比赛并说明理由。 注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（24-25八上·上海黄浦区·期中）生活中我们不断在尝试与学习，除了学习书本知识，我们也会尝试学习一些新的技能，比如各类体育活动、艺术技能、生活技能等等。以 “我想学习的一项新技能”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及相关信息，否则不予评分。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. What skill do you want to learn? 2. Why do you want to learn the new skill? 3. What will you do to learn it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．（24-25八上·上海立达中学·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 成为初二年级的学生以后，你一定感觉到初二的学习生活与以前有所不同。请你给在英国的笔友Tom写一封邮件，在课业学习、社团活动和课余生活中，选择一个方面，讲讲你初二的学习生活。 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．（24-25八上·上海民办欣竹中学·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Take it easy” 你的好朋友Sandy正在准备一场关于传统文化的演讲比赛，尽管她每天练习至少半小时，但仍然无法记住整份演讲稿。此外，Sandy因为太紧张，晚上无法入睡。请你写一封信给Sandy，鼓励她，让她放轻松。信中至少给她二个建议，并给出合适理由，同时注意信件格式。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．（23-24八上·上海位育中学·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题09 书面表达 1．（24-25八上·上海松江区·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The trouble I met with”.（请以“我碰到的麻烦”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） What was the trouble you met with? How did you deal with it? What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The life has been full of challenges and difficulties. When I was a student of Grade 9, I was often busy and tired. After talking with my parents and teachers, I realized that my problem was all work and no play. Now I have my own ways of relaxation. I often play chess with my cousins in my spare time. We also play tennis together. Besides, taking a short trip on the weekend is a good pastime too. When I arrange the time properly, I can both study and relax well. No pains, no gains. No matter what difficulties we meet, don’t give up! 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”穿插。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意叙事时的前后转折。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“生活中充满挑战和困难”表明观点。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体描述“我遇到的困难”、“我如何解决的”以及“我的感悟”。 第三步，书写结语。表达“一分耕耘，一分收获。”进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①challenge挑战 ②difficulty困难 [高分句型] ①No pains, no gains.（谚语：一分耕耘，一分收获。） 2．（24-25八上·上海建平中学西校·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A Special Day in My Daily Life”.（以“我日常生活中特别的一天”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于60字）： 注意：文章需要写明“事情发生在什么时候？发生了什么事情？为什么这件事情特别？” A Special Day in My Daily Life ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 A Special Day in My Daily Life Last Saturday we Class l students went to the East Lake for the spring outing. We had a special day. On Friday the whole class went to the supermarket to buy the food and drinks. On Saturday morning we gathered at the school gate. Then we took the bus to the East Lake. The air there was fresh. Trees were standing along the road on both sides. Breeze made us feel relaxed. After enjoying the beautiful view of the lake, we began the picnic. We spread the tablecloth and shared our food. We played games and laughed a lot. The pressure of study was released and we had much fun. That’s a good day in my life. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍事情发生的时间； 第二步、介绍发生的事件； 第三步、阐述为什么认为这件事情特别并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①spring outing春游 ②gather聚集 ③on both sides两边 ④have fun玩得高兴 [高分句型] Breeze made us feel relaxed.（省略to的不定式作宾补） 3．（23-24八上·上海闵行区·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 A challenge in my life In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies. As an introvert, I found it difficult to adjust to the new environment and make new friends. However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life. I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends. I also forced myself to step out of my comfort zone and try new things. Although the process was filled with difficulties, I overcame this challenge. This experience taught me how to adapt to new environments, communicate and interact with others, and conquer fear and self-doubt. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：以“我生活中的一次挑战”为题，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，具体介绍自己生活中所经历的一次挑战； 第二步，书写自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①make friends交朋友 ②succeed in成功 ③take part in参加 ④fill with充满 ⑤adapt to适应 [高分句型] ①In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies.（表语从句） ②However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life.（宾语从句；条件状语从句） ③I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends.（非限制性定语从句） 4．（23-24八上·上海杨浦区·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have （60-100 words），请根据邮件的主题（subject）， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards, Mary 【答案】 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, I’m sorry to tell you that I will be absent from school for two weeks. My parents are out of town on business now. They won’t be back for a while. My grandmother is ill in hospital and needs someone to look after her. So I have to take two weeks off to look after my grandma. I will take the initiative to learn in the hospital. If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. I ask for your approval. Regards, Mary 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很遗憾地告诉您，我将缺课两周。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——向老师解释遇到的问题要阐述清楚。 第三步：书写结语。陈述“我请求您的批准。”的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①on business出差 ②look after照顾 ③be absent from缺席 [高分句型] ①If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. （If引导的条件状语从句） ②I’m sorry to tell you that I will absent from school for two weeks. （宾语从句） 5．（24-25八上·上海位育中学·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I was in trouble that day”. （以“那天， 我遇到了麻烦”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、班名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Questions for reference（以下问题仅供参考） When did you meet with the trouble? What was the trouble about? How did you deal with the trouble? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Everyone met with the trouble. So did I. Once I forgot to bring my key to the door. I couldn’t get into the room. I was worried because both of my parents were out on business trip. Then I had no choice but to call 110 for help. The police men came and asked for some questions. Later, a policeman noticed I was on the second floor and the window in my room was open. “I have a good idea!” he said. He ran away and borrowed a long ladder from somewhere. It was high enough for him to climb into the room. Finally, he succeeded. I was happy and expressed my thanks to him. 【详解】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题干中的提示要点介绍在生活中，遇到的意见麻烦事，可适当增加细节。写作时，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯并突出写作要点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，引起话题每个人都会在生活中遇到困难； 第二步，介绍遇到困难的时间、具体事情和处理办法。 第三步，发表看法。 ［亮点词汇］ ①forgot to do sth. 忘记要去做某事 ②run away 走开，逃跑 ③express sth. to sb. 向某人表达什么 ［高分句型］ ①It was high enough for him to climb into the room.（it的固定句型） ②I was worried because both of my parents were out on business trip. （because引导时间状语从句） 6．（23-24八上·上海崇明区部分学校联考·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” （ 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） 注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 A day in the life of my good friend Mary is my good friend. She usually gets up at 6 o’clock. At 6:30 she eats breakfast. Then she goes to school by bus at 7:00 a.m. She has classes from 8:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m. In the afternoon, she plays basketball with her friends at 3:30. She goes home at 4:30. And she does her homework at 5:15 p.m. At 6: 30, she eats dinner with her family. She usually goes to bed at 9:30 p.m. I think she is a hardworking and active girl. I realized that I should make full use of my time. I think she should do more after-school activities. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：先补充完整题目，再根据所给的问题提示介绍某人生活的一天，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出要介绍的人物，按照时间的先后顺序介绍他/她一天的生活安排； 第二步，对他/她的生活做出评价，并谈谈自己从中学到了什么，有什么建议； [亮点词汇] ①from...to...从……到…… ②play basketball打篮球 ③do her homework做作业 [高分句型] I realized that I should make full use of my time.（宾语从句） 7．（23-24八上·上海青浦区教师进修学院附属中学·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My proudest moment” （以“我最自豪的瞬间”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 My proudest moment Last month, I won the school’s English speech contest. I think it was my proudest moment of my junior high. To prepare for the contest, I chose a topic I was interested in: the importance of learning English. I spent hours organizing my ideas. I also practiced my pronunciation to make sure I could speak clearly and confidently. On the big day, I felt nervous. When it was my turn to speak, I took a deep breath and began. As I spoke, I noticed the audience nodding and smiling, which encouraged me to keep going. Finally, my hard work paid off and I felt excited when I got the first prize. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己认为最骄傲的时刻； 第二步，描述自己具体的努力过程； 第三步，最后表达当时的心情。 [亮点词汇] ①take a deep breath深呼吸 ②pay off取得回报 ③the first prize 一等奖 [高分句型] ①I also practiced my pronunciation to make sure I could speak clearly and confidently.（宾语从句） ②When it was my turn to speak, I took a deep breath and began. （when引导的时间状语从句） 8．（23-24八上·上海松江区·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 One of my great moments When I was in seventh grade, I once participated in the 1000 meter race at the school sports meet. When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running. At this moment, I saw my classmates and teachers cheering me on. I kept on running again. I chased the athletes in front little by little. Finally, I achieved a good score of second place. Through this incident, I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“精彩一刻”是何时； 第二步，具体阐述如何成功实现的“精彩一刻”； 第三步，此次经历的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参加 ②cheer sb. on为某人加油 ③keep on doing继续做某事 [高分句型] ①When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success.（that引导宾语从句） 9．（24-25八上·上海建平南汇实验学校·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Something ________ happened to me” 生活中总有一些事曾发生在你身上。或令人激动、或令人难忘、或不寻常……请以“发生在我身上的……的事”为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，叙述事情发生的经过，并谈谈你从中学到了什么？标点符号不占格。 注意文中不能出现自己的姓名、校名及有关信息。 Questions for reference （以下问题供参考） 1. What happened to you? 2. What can you learn from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Something Exciting happened to Me Last summer vacation, I took part in a speech contest. I was really nervous at first. But when I stood on the stage, I saw the encouraging smiles of my parents and teachers. I calmed down and delivered my speech smoothly. In the end, I won the second prize. From this experience, I learned that confidence is very important. When we face difficulties, we should believe in ourselves and try our best. Also, the support from others can give us great strength. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明时间是去年暑假，事件是参加演讲比赛。 第二步，具体阐述。描述比赛时的心理变化，从紧张到看到父母和老师鼓励后冷静发挥，最终获得二等奖。 第三步，书写结语。总结从这次经历中学到的东西，包括自信的重要性和他人支持的力量。 ［亮点词汇］ ①speech contest演讲比赛 ②calm down冷静下来 ③deliver a speech发表演讲 ④win the second prize获得二等奖 ⑤face difficulties面对困难 ⑥believe in oneself相信自己 ［高分句型］ But when I stood on the stage, I saw the encouraging smiles of my parents and teachers.（when引导的时间状语从句） 10．（24-25八上·上海闵行区·期中）0．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假如你是李华（Li Hua），收到了来自笔友的一封邮件向你描述了他和爸爸在等待轮渡时发生的事，请阅读邮件并进行回复。 Suggested questions: 1. Describe your experience. 2. Why do you think it was special? From: paulyoung@nymail.com To: lihua@shmail.com Subject: My experience Hi, LiHua Great news! I have something interesting to share with you. Yestersday my father and I heard something when we are waiting for the ferry. A woman told my dad that three man had stolen her friend’s purse but they ran away. The woman went after them. We didn’t go on the ferry and reported it to the police. Finally, the three men were caught by the policeman. My dad helped those two women. He was great! What’s your special experience? Write and tell me about it soon. Paul From: lihua@shmail.com To: paulyoung@nymail.com Subject: My special experience Hi, Paul I also have something special to share with you。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】 Hi, Paul I also have something special to share with you. Last month, I was at a local park when I noticed a small child crying because he was lost. I approached him and tried to calm him down. After talking to him, I found out his parents’ names and contacted the park’s security. They made an announcement, and soon his parents arrived, relieved and grateful. It was special because I realized the importance of staying calm and helping others in distress. It made me feel good to have made a difference in someone’s life. Li Hua 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题目要求，描述一次特别的经历，并说明其特别之处，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述自己在公园帮助走失小孩的经历； 第二步，说明这次经历的特别之处在于帮助他人带来的成就感。 [亮点词汇] ①approach接近 ②calm down使平静 ③the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] ①Last month, I was at a local park when I noticed a small child crying because he was lost. （when引导时间状语从句） ②It was special because I realized the importance of staying calm and helping others in distress. （because引导的原因状语从句） 11．（24-25八上·上海嘉定区·期中）1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不计入字数） 假设你是Jon，请给你的笔友May写一封信，告诉她你今年一次不同寻常的经历。 （注意：1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. What happened? 2. What did you learn from this experience? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Dear May, How are you? I want to tell you about something really cool that happened to me this year. My family and I went camping, and I got lost in the woods! It was scary, but I learned a lot. I learned to stay calm when things were tough, to be smart about using what I had, and to trust my gut feeling. The most important thing I learned is how important it is to talk to people and tell them where I’m going. It was a hard thing to go through, but it taught me a lot. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Jon 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述过去经历用“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍今年一次不同寻常的经历； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍发生了什么以及你从这次经历中学到了什么； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望尽快收到回信。 [亮点词汇] ①get lost迷路 ②stay calm保持冷静 ③gut feeling直觉 ④go through经历 [高分句型] ①The most important thing I learned is how important it is to talk to people and tell them where I’m going. （定语从句） ②It was a hard thing to go through, but it taught me a lot. （并列句） 12．（24-25八上·上海奉贤区·期中）Write a composition in at least 60 words on the topic “A meaningful activity”. （平时生活中，你一定参加过许多有意义的活动，比如学校的运动会，义卖，社区里的清洁家园等志愿者活动，请你选择一次印象深刻的活动，以“一次有意义的活动”为题，谈谈你做了什么，有什么收获，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格） （注意：文章中不得出现任何人名，校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分） A meaningful activity ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A meaningful activity I participated in a comunity clean-up event last summer. We gathered at the local park, equipped with gloves and trash bags. Our task was to pick up litter and beautify the area. It was hard work, but seeing the park transform into a cleaner, more inviting space was incredibly rewarding. This activity taught me the importance of community service and environmental responsibility. I realized that small actions can make a big difference, and I felt proud to contribute to the well-being of my community. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“去年夏天我参加了一次社区清洁活动。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述做了什么事、收获等。 第三步：书写结语。表达“我为能够为社区的福祉做出贡献而感到自豪。”的美好情愫。 [亮点词汇] ①pick up捡起 ②make a big difference有很大不同 ③contribute to对……有贡献 [高分句型] ①It was hard work, but seeing the park transform into a cleaner, more inviting space was incredibly rewarding. （比较级用法） ②I realized that small actions can make a big difference, and I felt proud to contribute to the well-being of my community. （宾语从句） 13．（24-25八上·上海扬波中学·期中）你的学校即将举行秋季运动会（autumn sports meeting），你想参加下列哪一项或两项比赛：篮球赛（Basketball Match）、跳远（Long Jump）、接力赛（Relay Race）、长跑（Long-distance Race）、短跑（Sprint）、中国象棋（Chinese chess）、围棋（the Game of Go）和国际象棋（International chess）。 假设你是李华，请给德育处陈老师写封信，结合你的兴趣和特长，说说你想报名哪一或两项比赛并说明理由。 注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Dear Mrs./Mr. Chen, I am writing to express my interest in participating in the autumn sports meeting. I would like to register for the Long Jump and the Relay Race. I have always been passionate about athletics, and I believe my skills in jumping and sprinting can contribute to a strong performance. Participating in these events will not only allow me to showcase my abilities but also to support our team. Thank you for considering my application. Sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据题干中提示信息，写信报名参加一项或两项比赛。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写信目的； 第二步，谈谈自己的兴趣及想要参加的比赛项目并说明理由； 第三步，收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in 参加 ②allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事 [高分句型] I have always been passionate about athletics, and I believe my skills in jumping and sprinting can contribute to a strong performance.（and连接表等同关系的并列句；省略that的宾语从句） 14．（24-25八上·上海黄浦区·期中）生活中我们不断在尝试与学习，除了学习书本知识，我们也会尝试学习一些新的技能，比如各类体育活动、艺术技能、生活技能等等。以 “我想学习的一项新技能”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及相关信息，否则不予评分。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. What skill do you want to learn? 2. Why do you want to learn the new skill? 3. What will you do to learn it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 A New Skill I Want to Learn The new skill I want to learn is playing the guitar. I have always been fascinated by music and believe that playing the guitar will allow me to express myself creatively. To learn this skill, I plan to take guitar lessons from a local music teacher and practice regularly at home. I will also watch online tutorials to improve my technique. I am excited about the journey of learning and hope to play my favorite songs soon. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给的参考要点完成写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，注意用词准确，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，介绍想学习的技能是什么，以及原因； 第二步，介绍要计划如何学习； 第三步，总结全文，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be fascinated by被……迷住 ②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 ③be excited about对……感到非常兴奋和热情 ④hope to do希望做某事 [高分句型] I have always been fascinated by music and believe that playing the guitar will allow me to express myself creatively. （被动语态；宾语从句） 15．（24-25八上·上海立达中学·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 成为初二年级的学生以后，你一定感觉到初二的学习生活与以前有所不同。请你给在英国的笔友Tom写一封邮件，在课业学习、社团活动和课余生活中，选择一个方面，讲讲你初二的学习生活。 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Dear Tom, I hope this email finds you well. As a Grade 8 student now, I’ve noticed some changes in my school life. The academic workload has increased significantly, with more subjects and homework. However, I find it quite challenging and exciting. Besides, I’ve joined the science club, which is a great way to explore my interests and make new friends. How about your school life in the UK? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Sam 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍初二学习生活的改变； 第二步，书写总结，表达期待回复。 [亮点词汇] ①significantly显著地 ②explore探索 ③make new friends交新朋友 [高分句型] Besides, I’ve joined the science club, which is a great way to explore my interests and make new friends.（定语从句） 16．（24-25八上·上海民办欣竹中学·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Take it easy” 你的好朋友Sandy正在准备一场关于传统文化的演讲比赛，尽管她每天练习至少半小时，但仍然无法记住整份演讲稿。此外，Sandy因为太紧张，晚上无法入睡。请你写一封信给Sandy，鼓励她，让她放轻松。信中至少给她二个建议，并给出合适理由，同时注意信件格式。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Dear Sandy, I heard you’re feeling nervous about your upcoming traditional culture speech contest. I want to encourage you to take it easy. Firstly, practice mindfulness meditation before going to bed. This can help calm your mind and improve your sleep quality. Good sleep is essential for memory consolidation, which will aid in remembering your speech content better. Secondly, try using mnemonic devices or storytelling techniques to memorize your speech. This can make the process more enjoyable and effective. Stay confident! Best regards! Yours, XXX 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己对Sandy现状的关心； 第二步，提出自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①feel nervous about对……感到紧张 ②try doing sth.尝试做某事 [高分句型] Good sleep is essential for memory consolidation, which will aid in remembering your speech content better.（which引导非限制性定语从句） 17．（23-24八上·上海位育中学·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 That day, I solved a trouble Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma’s eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn’t lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them. In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给的问题提示，讲述你解决一个麻烦的经历，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，交代事情发生的时间，地点和经过，以及是如何解决的； 第二步，讲述自己从这次经历中获得了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be occupied with sth忙于做某事 ②leave...behind把……遗留在 ③play basketball打篮球 ④not...but不是……而是…… [高分句型] ①Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. （since引导的时间状语从句） ②I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day.（so...that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句） ③And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.（定语从句） / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $