专题09 书面表达（期中真题汇编，上海专用）高一英语上学期

专题09 书面表达 一、推荐信 1．(24-25高一上·上海同济大学第二附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Luke发来一封邮件，请你给他回一封邮件。 Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? I’m planning a trip to China this winter. Can you recommend a city worth visiting to me? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Luke 你的邮件应包括以下内容： 1.推荐一个城市： 2.说明推荐理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Luke, Having learned that you set out to pay a visit to China, I’m writing to extend my sincere welcome to you and offer you some recommendations of the places for your reference. What tops my recommendations is Beijing, where you can visit the Summer Palace and climb the Great Wall. Beijing, the capital of China, is home to a number of cultural relics, among which the Forbidden City enjoys the highest popularity. The scenery here is so beautiful and the climate is so pleasant that it attracts a constant stream of travelers from all over the world. Furthermore, Hutong is definitely worth a visit, where you can feast on various kinds of local snacks and experience the lifestyle of local people. I will be more than delighted if you find my recommendation helpful. Wish you an unforgettable time. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生推荐一个值得参观的城市给外国朋友Luke游玩。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：extend→express 此外：furthermore→moreover 吸引：attract→appeal 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：What tops my recommendations is Beijing, where you can visit the Summer Palace and climb the Great Wall. 拓展句：What tops my recommendations is Beijing because you can visit the Summer Palace and climb the Great Wall there. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Having learned that you set out to pay a visit to China, I’m writing to extend my sincere welcome to you and offer you some recommendations of the places for your reference. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】What tops my recommendations is Beijing, where you can visit the Summer Palace and climb the Great Wall. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) 二、建议信 Passage 1 (24-25高一上·上海松浦中学·期中)2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是顾文，你的表弟王伦被一所高中录取了，你写一封信祝贺他。信的内容需包括： 1. 对表弟进入高中表示祝贺； 2. 介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同； 3. 对如何成功地过好高中生活提出自己的建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Wang Lun, Thrilled at the news of your admission into a senior high school, I can’t wait to write to congratulate you and share some tips for a smooth and meaningful high school life. You should know that the life in a senior high school is apparently different from that in a middle school, and you might be at a loss without recognizing it. The top three differences are faster pace, heavier workload and greater demand for overall abilities. You reap what you sow. Learn to be smart, efficient as well as all-round, and you are sure to make your senior high school life full and motivating. Furthermore, I am convinced that the qualities you develop during your senior high school, which may include self-discipline, responsibility, and perseverance, are the crucial ingredients to tap your potential in the future. Warm regards, Gu Wen 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给表弟王伦写信，祝贺他被一所高中录取，为他介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同，并给他提供如何成功地过好高中生活的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 对……感到兴奋：be thrilled at→be excited at, be exhilarated at 有意义的：meaningful→significant, purposeful 明显地：apparently→evidently, obviously, clearly 意识到：recognize→realize, discern, notice 全面的：overall→comprehensive, all-round 此外：furthermore→in addition, additionally, moreover 包括：include→incorporate, involve 关键的：crucial→essential, significant, vital 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thrilled at the news of your admission into a senior high school, I can’t wait to write to congratulate you and share some tips for a smooth and meaningful high school life. 拓展句：Thrilled at the news that you were admitted into a senior high school, I can’t wait to write to congratulate you and share some tips for a smooth and meaningful high school life. 【点睛】[高分句型1] You should know that the life in a senior high school is apparently different from that in a middle school, and you might be at a loss without recognizing it. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] You reap what you sow. (运用了英文俗语) [高分句型3] Furthermore, I am convinced that the qualities you develop during your senior high school, which may include self-discipline, responsibility, and perseverance, are the crucial ingredients to tap your potential in the future. (运用了that引导宾语从句、省略关系代词的限制性定语从句和关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 (24-25高一上·上海向明中学·期中)3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李明。十月以来，为提升学生体质健康水平，你们学校组织全校学生在早锻炼后，男生做30个俯卧撑（push-ups），女生做3分钟平板支撑（planks）。但有同学反映运动强度过大，身体不适。现学校委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。 要求： 1. 提出问题； 2. 提出改进的建议和理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Student Union, I am writing to provide some feedback on the morning exercise routine that has been implemented in our school since October. There have been some concerns regarding the intensity of exercise. Many students have reported feeling physically uncomfortable. This strenuous routine may be too demanding for some students, especially those who are not accustomed to such intense exercise. In light of these concerns, I would like to propose some suggestions. Firstly, the school can vary the types to cater to different fitness levels. This could include alternatives to push-ups and planks such as jogging, stretching, or other less intense sports. Secondly, students can be allowed to choose their preferred sports within a given range. These modifications would not only address the physical discomfort experienced by some students but also promote a more inclusive and enjoyable exercise routine for all. I hope these suggestions will be considered. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生给学生会写封邮件，反馈对学校组织的早锻炼的意见，需说明目前存在的问题，提出改进的建议，并提供支撑建议的理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 实施：implement→carry out 适应：be accustomed to→get used to, adapt to 鉴于：in light of→considering, in view of 选择：choose→pick, opt for 解决：address→tackle 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：There have been some concerns regarding the intensity of exercise. 拓展句：When it comes to the intensity of exercise, there have been some concerns. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to provide some feedback on the morning exercise routine that has been implemented in our school since October. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This strenuous routine may be too demanding for some students, especially those who are not accustomed to such intense exercise. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句) 三、介绍信 4．(24-25高一上·上海第二中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生李华，刚刚步入高中生活两个月，请写一封信给你的初中班主任Ms Yang，谈谈你对高中校园生活的看法。你的信必须包括如下内容： 1. 你的高中校园生活是怎样的； 2. 校园生活中有哪些是你喜欢的，并陈述原因； 3. 你会以怎样的态度来适应校园生活。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Ms. Yang, I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. It’s been a little over two months since I started my high school journey at Ming qi High School, and I wanted to share with you my thoughts on this new chapter of my life. The high school campus is a vibrant place with a diverse range of activities and a bustling atmosphere. The academic workload is much heavier than that in middle school, with more advanced courses and a greater emphasis on independent learning. One aspect of high school life that I particularly enjoy is the variety of extracurricular activities available. I have joined the school’s debate club, which not only hones my public speaking skills but also allows me to meet peers with similar interests. To adapt to this new environment, I am adopting a proactive approach. I will manage my time strictly and effectively and make sure to balance my academic and personal interests. Warm regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于刚刚步入高中生活两个月这一情况，写一封信给你的初中班主任Ms Yang，谈谈你对高中校园生活的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 充满活力的：vibrant→ dynamic 各种各样的：variety of → all kinds of 强调：emphasis→ stress 显著地：significantly→ prominently 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I will manage my time strictly and effectively and make sure to balance my academic and personal interests. 拓展句：I will manage my time strictly and effectively so that I can make sure to balance my academic and personal interests. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I have joined the school’s debate club, which not only hones my public speaking skills but also allows me to meet peers with similar interests.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】To adapt to this new environment, I am adopting a proactive approach.（动词不定式作目的状语。） 四、投稿征文 Passage 1 5．(24-25高一上·上海外国语大学附属外国语学校松江云间中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你校正在进行“行走中国”主题的英语征文大赛，现请你给学生会投稿，参加征文比赛，结合你的旅游经历谈谈你如何理解旅行的意义。 你的作文需包括： 1.你的一段“行走中国”旅行经历： 2.你对旅行意义的理解。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Personal Journey Through China As a freshman of Mingqi High School, I am very excited to take part in the English essay contest with the theme of “Traveling Around China”.      Last summer, I embarked on a journey to the ancient city of Xi’an, which is a place rich in history and culture. Walking past the Terracotta Warriors, I was struck by their intricate details and the sheer size of the statues, each of which stood guard over the tomb of China’s first emperor for more than two millennia.      For me, the meaning of travel is not just about the scenery you see or the places you visit. Rather, it is a journey of self-discovery and personal growth. Travel allows us to step out of our comfort zones, embrace new experiences, and learn about different cultures and traditions. It fosters empathy and understanding and helps us appreciate human interconnectedness. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“行走中国”为主题，写一篇文章，给校学生会投稿，结合自己的旅游经历谈谈如何理解旅行的意义。 【详解】1.词汇积累 兴奋的：excited →thrilled 意义：meaning→significance 培养：foster→cultivate 参加：take part in→participate in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As a freshman of Mingqi High School, I am very excited to take part in the English essay contest with the theme of “Traveling Around China”. 拓展句：As a freshman of Mingqi High School, I am very excited to take part in the English essay contest, the theme of which is “Traveling Around China”. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Last summer, I embarked on a journey to the ancient city of Xi’an, which is a place rich in history and culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Walking past the Terracotta Warriors, I was struck by their intricate details and the sheer size of the statues, each of which stood guard over the tomb of China’s first emperor for more than two millennia. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 2 (24-25高一上·上海风华中学·期中)6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 最近上海的某些餐馆和面包房采取了一项新的举措：在微信小程序上以盲盒的形式降价销售当天卖剩的食物，购买者能在小程序上看到商家信息、价格和取货时间。英语报“YOUR VOICE”专栏欢迎读者来信，就这一做法展开讨论。假定你是高三学生李华，请给专栏编辑写信，表达看法，说明理由。 (食物盲盒: mystery boxes of randomly packed leftover foods ) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editor, Recently, the “bread blind box” has quietly become popular. You can buy bread at 50％ discount of the original price or even lower, which is accompanied by the freshness and excitement of opening a blind box and has attracted many diners. It is true that the emergence of the “bread blind box” not only helps the store to solve the waste and loss caused by the failure to sell the products in time, but also enables consumers to buy good and cheap food. However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, violating the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste. We hope to strengthen market supervision to ensure quality and safety and the consumers’ rights. Yours truly, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报“YOUR VOICE”专栏写一封信，就最近上海的某些餐馆和面包房采取了一项新的举措：在微信小程序上以盲盒的形式降价销售当天卖剩的食物现象表达看法，说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 吸引：attract →draw 出现：emergence →appearance 引起：caused by →resulting from 违背：violate →go against 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, violating the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste. 拓展句：However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, which violates the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste. 【点睛】【高分句型1】You can buy bread at 50％ discount of the original price or even lower, which is accompanied by the freshness and excitement of opening a blind box and has attracted many diners.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】However, some merchants put expired bread into blind boxes for sale, violating the original intention of selling “bread blind box” to avoid food waste. (使用了现在分词充当结果状语) 五、告知信 7．(24-25高一上·上海海事大学附属北蔡高级中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，进入高中以来，你不仅仅收获了知识，还参加了很多校园活动。请写一封信给你的朋友王明谈谈你印象最为深刻的校园活动并写明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wang Ming,   Since entering high school, I’ve not only gained knowledge but also participated in various campus activities. Among them, the most impressive one was the school sports meet.   During the event, I joined the relay race with my classmates. We trained hard together, encouraging each other. When we finally won the first prize, the joy and sense of achievement were beyond words. This activity strengthened our team spirit and friendship.   In a word, the sports meet left a deep impression on me. It was a precious memory in my high school life.   Yours,   Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给朋友王明写信，分享进入高中后印象最为深刻的校园活动并阐述理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参加：participate in → take part in 印象深刻的：impressive → memorable 团队精神：team spirit → teamwork spirit 回忆：memory → recollection 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Since entering high school, I’ve not only gained knowledge but also participated in various campus activities. 拓展句：Since entering high school, not only have I gained knowledge but also I participated in various campus activities. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We trained hard together, encouraging each other. (运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】When we finally won the first prize, the joy and sense of achievement were beyond words.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 六、开放性写作 Passage 1 8．(24-25高一上·上海洋泾中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. “Life is not easy for any of us. We must work, and above all we must believe in ourselves. We must believe that each one of us is able to do something well, and that,  when we discover what this something is, we must work until we succeed.” —Madame Curie 读了居里夫人的这段话，你有何感想？请结合生活中的具体事例对你的观点加以说明。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】From what Madame Curie said, it is evident that not only must we work to do something well, but we must also believe ourselves. As we all know, the more diligent you are, the sooner you will succeed. For example, Thomas Edison had a large number of inventions. There is no doubt that he was more hardworking than others. It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work for twenty hours every day. So it must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work. What’s more, it is the confidence that adds a brilliant touch to the growth of yourselves. We have every reason to believe that confidence plays an important part in success and benefits us a lot in our life. So much emphasis should be put on building up confidence to help us to be successful. In summary, only by hard work and believing in yourselves can you do something that is worth doing well. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生根据居里夫人的话，结合生活中的具体事例发表观点和感想。 【详解】1.词汇积累 勤奋的：hardworking→diligent 记住：remember→keep in mind 重要：importance→emphasis 增强：improve→building up 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For example, Thomas Edison had a large number of inventions. 拓展句：For example, Thomas Edison had a large number of inventions so that he could succeed. 【点睛】[高分句型1]From what Madame Curie said, it is evident that not only must we work to do something well, but we must also believe ourselves.(what引导的宾语从句；not only引导的倒装句) [高分句型2]In summary, only by hard work and believing in yourselves can you do something that is worth doing well.(运用了部分倒装) Passage 2 9．(24-25高三·上海实验学校·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions. 越来越多的城市居民养宠物, 宠物给人带来欢乐,但是经常会有扰民或伤人的事件发生。有人提议禁止城市居民养宠物。 请谈谈你的看法。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Pets can bring us a lot of happiness. Nowadays more and more people keep pets.Many dog owners regularly take their dogs out for a walk to refresh themselves.While pets bring happiness to people, their negative effects should not be ignored, such as urinating in public, annoying noises at night, biting passers-by and scratching vehicles.In my opinion, in order to avoid unnecessary trouble, it is better to ban the keeping of pets, but if you do, you must issue a pet management policy and legal provisions, which is also for the benefit of all citizens. 【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，越来越多的城市居民养宠物, 宠物给人带来欢乐,但是经常会有扰民或伤人的事件发生。有人提议禁止城市居民养宠物。 请谈谈你的看法。时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：bring us a lot of happiness（带给我们许多幸福）；take their dogs out for a walk（带他们的狗出去散步）；negative effects（负面影响）；avoid unnecessary trouble（避免不必要的麻烦）；等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。While pets bring happiness to people, their negative effects should not be ignored, such as urinating in public, annoying noises at night, biting passers-by and scratching vehicles.句中while引导时间状语从句，且使用含情态动词的被动语态；in order to avoid unnecessary trouble,动词不定式作目的状语；but if you do, you must issue a pet management policy and legal provisions, which is also for the benefit of all citizens.句中使用if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。 七、概要写作 Passage 1 10．(24-25高一上·上海第二中学·期中)Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Tired of walling in end loss lines to pay for what you have bought? Angry at wasting time in traffic jams only to find no parking spaces when you eventually arrive at the store? If this is you, then online shopping is the answer to your dreams of trouble-free shopping. However, online shopping brings its own challenges. Here are a few things to remember when browsing various websites. The claim made by online sites is that shopping online is a safe way to make purchases. The evidence challenges this. In any case, you only have to be the victim of fraud (诈骗) once to experience all the problems that come with this form of stealing. Another problem is the appearance of Items in reality is often quite different from what you see on your computer screen. This might not be a problem if you are buying washing up powder but could be a major disappointment when that beautiful blue dress you ordered turns up in green. Some even argue that online shopping indirectly causes global warning. Yes, your car can stay parked but how are online goods delivered? Often by some large vans pouring out carbon monoxide and adding to our already desperate traffic problems. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Online shopping can free you of the trouble you meet when buying things in store. However, it has challenges. Firstly, you should bear in mind that you must use sites which deserve trusting. Secondly, you shouldn’t believe all the descriptions because they may be untrue. Lastly, you should know although the delivery may be late, it may cause global warming. 【导语】本文是一篇议论文，主要讲述了网购的优势及需要注意的几个问题。 【详解】1 要点摘录 ①However, online shopping brings its own challenges. ②The claim made by online sites is that shopping online is a safe way to make purchases. The evidence challenges this. ③Another problem is the appearance of Items in reality is often quite different from what you see on your computer screen.   ④Some even argue that online shopping indirectly causes global warning.   2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。 3.遣词造句 First of all, you should remember that you must use trustworthy websites. Secondly, you should not believe all the descriptions, because they may not be true. Finally, you should know that while delivery may be late, this could contribute to global warming. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Online shopping can free you of the trouble you meet when buying things in store.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句以及从句的省略用法） [高分句型2] Firstly, you should bear in mind that you must use sites which deserve trusting.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的定语从句） Passage 2 11．(24-25高一上·上海安亭高级中学·期中)Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Why do some animals die out? In the past two hundred years people have caused many kinds of animals to die out to become extinct. People keep building houses and factories in fields and woods. As they spread over the land, they destroy animal’s homes. If the animals can’t find a place to live, they die out. Sixteen kinds of Hawaiian birds have become extinct for this reason. Other animals, such as the Florida Key deer, may soon die out because they are losing their homes. Hunters have caused some animals to become extinct, too. In the last century, hunters killed all the passenger pigeons in North America and most of the buffalos. Today they are fast killing off hawks and wolves. Pollution is killing many animals today, too. As rivers become polluted, fishes are poisoned. Birds that eat the poisoned fish can’t lay strong, healthy eggs. New birds aren’t born. So far, no animals have become extinct because of pollution. But some, such as the bald eagle and the brown pelican, have become rare and may die out. Scientists think that some animals become extinct because of changes in climate. The places where they live become hotter or cooler, drier or wetter. The food that they eat cannot grow there any more. If the animals can’t learn to eat something else, they die. Dinosaurs may have died out for this reason. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In the past 200 years people have caused many animals to became extinct. They destroyed animals’ homes or killed them as hunters. Today, they kill hawks and wolves and pollute rivers, making some animals become rare. Besides, the changes in climate may lead to some animals becoming extinct by removing the food they eat. (54 words) 【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章解释了一些动物灭绝的原因。 【详解】1. 要点摘录 ①In the past two hundred years, people have caused many kinds of animals to die out. ② People keep building houses and factories in fields and woods. As they spread over the land, they destroy animals’ homes. ③Hunters have caused some animals to become extinct, too. ④Pollution is killing many animals today, too. As rivers become polluted, fish are poisoned. Many die. Birds that eat the poisoned fish can't lay strong, healthy eggs. New birds aren’t born. ⑤Scientists think that some animals become extinct because of changes in climate. The places where they live become hotter or cooler. drier or wetter. The food that they eat cannot grow there anymore. 2. 缜密构思 将第一个要点和第三个要点进行同义改写，将第二个要点进行改写，将第四个和第五个要点进行重组改写。 3. 遣词造句 【点睛】【高分句型1】Today, they kill hawks and wolves and pollute rivers, making some animals become rare. (运用了现在分词作状语，运用了不带to的不定式作宾补) 【高分句型2】Besides, the changes in climate may lead to some animals becoming extinct by removing the food they eat. (运用了动名词作宾语) Passage 3 12．(24-25高一上·上海中学·期中)Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. It is a common sight on campus or in the streets: a young person rides by on an electric scooter, traveling quickly and proudly. But Beijing’s traffic authorities have said that starting on Sept.5, people who are caught riding electric scooters on public roads or bicycle lanes will be fined 10 yuan. They will also be given a warning not to use the vehicles on public roads again. The announcement was made after traffic police in Shanghai started a campaign to get electric scooters off public roads, with police officers stopping riders because the scooters could cause traffic problems. The Beijing Consumer Association said it had tested more than 20 electric scooters of different brands recently and found that most had substandard brakes. It added that 16 of the tested scooters could go faster than the maximum 20 km per hour set for electric bikes. According to the traffic police, people who ride electric scooters at certain speeds can easily bump into the vehicles in the vehicle lane and hurt people who walk in the bicycle lanes. But seeing the benefits that electric scooters have brought to young people, experts are worried that the ban may take effect slowly. Electric scooters are a great answer to the ‘last mile problem’ of getting from a public transport station to one’s home. They’re light enough to throw over your shoulder. They’re easy to ride just about anywhere and don’t need a lot of physical effort. The scooter can travel 25 km on one charge. It’s convenient and easy to control. They are also good for environment. Unlike cars and buses, electric scooters produce no carbon dioxide, need no fuel and make almost no noise. For many young people, they use them to copy cool celebrities they have seen in videos. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】People riding an electric scooter on public roads will be fined from Sept. 5th . Because of the substandard brakes and fast speed, electric scooters are considered potentially dangerous for riders and walking people. Considering its advantage of being convenient, portable environment-friendly and fashionable, experts predicted the ban would take effect slowly. 【分析】这是一篇议论文。根据刚制定的规则电动车因为安全问题不能在北京的道路上行驶，但由于在某些方面电动车有一定优势，所以可能不会那么快从道路上消失。 【详解】本篇要求考生写一篇总结，通过阅读文章我们可以从三个方面进行总结：1.根据法规电动车自9月5日起不能在北京道路上行驶；2.禁止电动车上路行驶的主要原因：刹车不达标，超速，威胁司机和行人；3. 由于电动车有一定优势，可能短时间内不会立即从路上消失。综上，故本文可总结为：People riding an electric scooter on public roads will be fined from Sept. 5th . Because of the substandard brakes and fast speed, electric scooters are considered potentially dangerous for riders and walking people. Considering its advantage of being convenient, portable environment-friendly and fashionable, experts predicted the ban would take effect slowly. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题09 书面表达 一、推荐信 1．(24-25高一上·上海同济大学第二附属中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Luke发来一封邮件，请你给他回一封邮件。 Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? I’m planning a trip to China this winter. Can you recommend a city worth visiting to me? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Luke 你的邮件应包括以下内容： 1.推荐一个城市： 2.说明推荐理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、建议信 Passage 1 (24-25高一上·上海松浦中学·期中)2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是顾文，你的表弟王伦被一所高中录取了，你写一封信祝贺他。信的内容需包括： 1. 对表弟进入高中表示祝贺； 2. 介绍高中生活和初中生活的异同； 3. 对如何成功地过好高中生活提出自己的建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (24-25高一上·上海向明中学·期中)3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生李明。十月以来，为提升学生体质健康水平，你们学校组织全校学生在早锻炼后，男生做30个俯卧撑（push-ups），女生做3分钟平板支撑（planks）。但有同学反映运动强度过大，身体不适。现学校委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。 要求： 1. 提出问题； 2. 提出改进的建议和理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、介绍信 4．(24-25高一上·上海第二中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的学生李华，刚刚步入高中生活两个月，请写一封信给你的初中班主任Ms Yang，谈谈你对高中校园生活的看法。你的信必须包括如下内容： 1. 你的高中校园生活是怎样的； 2. 校园生活中有哪些是你喜欢的，并陈述原因； 3. 你会以怎样的态度来适应校园生活。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、投稿征文 Passage 1 5．(24-25高一上·上海外国语大学附属外国语学校松江云间中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in about 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学高一学生李华，你校正在进行“行走中国”主题的英语征文大赛，现请你给学生会投稿，参加征文比赛，结合你的旅游经历谈谈你如何理解旅行的意义。 你的作文需包括： 1.你的一段“行走中国”旅行经历： 2.你对旅行意义的理解。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (24-25高一上·上海风华中学·期中)6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 最近上海的某些餐馆和面包房采取了一项新的举措：在微信小程序上以盲盒的形式降价销售当天卖剩的食物，购买者能在小程序上看到商家信息、价格和取货时间。英语报“YOUR VOICE”专栏欢迎读者来信，就这一做法展开讨论。假定你是高三学生李华，请给专栏编辑写信，表达看法，说明理由。 (食物盲盒: mystery boxes of randomly packed leftover foods ) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 五、告知信 7．(24-25高一上·上海海事大学附属北蔡高级中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，进入高中以来，你不仅仅收获了知识，还参加了很多校园活动。请写一封信给你的朋友王明谈谈你印象最为深刻的校园活动并写明理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 六、开放性写作 Passage 1 8．(24-25高一上·上海洋泾中学·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. “Life is not easy for any of us. We must work, and above all we must believe in ourselves. We must believe that each one of us is able to do something well, and that,  when we discover what this something is, we must work until we succeed.” —Madame Curie 读了居里夫人的这段话，你有何感想？请结合生活中的具体事例对你的观点加以说明。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 9．(24-25高三·上海实验学校·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions. 越来越多的城市居民养宠物, 宠物给人带来欢乐,但是经常会有扰民或伤人的事件发生。有人提议禁止城市居民养宠物。 请谈谈你的看法。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、概要写作 Passage 1 10．(24-25高一上·上海第二中学·期中)Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Tired of walling in end loss lines to pay for what you have bought? Angry at wasting time in traffic jams only to find no parking spaces when you eventually arrive at the store? If this is you, then online shopping is the answer to your dreams of trouble-free shopping. However, online shopping brings its own challenges. Here are a few things to remember when browsing various websites. The claim made by online sites is that shopping online is a safe way to make purchases. The evidence challenges this. In any case, you only have to be the victim of fraud (诈骗) once to experience all the problems that come with this form of stealing. Another problem is the appearance of Items in reality is often quite different from what you see on your computer screen. This might not be a problem if you are buying washing up powder but could be a major disappointment when that beautiful blue dress you ordered turns up in green. Some even argue that online shopping indirectly causes global warning. Yes, your car can stay parked but how are online goods delivered? Often by some large vans pouring out carbon monoxide and adding to our already desperate traffic problems. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 11．(24-25高一上·上海安亭高级中学·期中)Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Why do some animals die out? In the past two hundred years people have caused many kinds of animals to die out to become extinct. People keep building houses and factories in fields and woods. As they spread over the land, they destroy animal’s homes. If the animals can’t find a place to live, they die out. Sixteen kinds of Hawaiian birds have become extinct for this reason. Other animals, such as the Florida Key deer, may soon die out because they are losing their homes. Hunters have caused some animals to become extinct, too. In the last century, hunters killed all the passenger pigeons in North America and most of the buffalos. Today they are fast killing off hawks and wolves. Pollution is killing many animals today, too. As rivers become polluted, fishes are poisoned. Birds that eat the poisoned fish can’t lay strong, healthy eggs. New birds aren’t born. So far, no animals have become extinct because of pollution. But some, such as the bald eagle and the brown pelican, have become rare and may die out. Scientists think that some animals become extinct because of changes in climate. The places where they live become hotter or cooler, drier or wetter. The food that they eat cannot grow there any more. If the animals can’t learn to eat something else, they die. Dinosaurs may have died out for this reason. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 12．(24-25高一上·上海中学·期中)Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. It is a common sight on campus or in the streets: a young person rides by on an electric scooter, traveling quickly and proudly. But Beijing’s traffic authorities have said that starting on Sept.5, people who are caught riding electric scooters on public roads or bicycle lanes will be fined 10 yuan. They will also be given a warning not to use the vehicles on public roads again. The announcement was made after traffic police in Shanghai started a campaign to get electric scooters off public roads, with police officers stopping riders because the scooters could cause traffic problems. The Beijing Consumer Association said it had tested more than 20 electric scooters of different brands recently and found that most had substandard brakes. It added that 16 of the tested scooters could go faster than the maximum 20 km per hour set for electric bikes. According to the traffic police, people who ride electric scooters at certain speeds can easily bump into the vehicles in the vehicle lane and hurt people who walk in the bicycle lanes. But seeing the benefits that electric scooters have brought to young people, experts are worried that the ban may take effect slowly. Electric scooters are a great answer to the ‘last mile problem’ of getting from a public transport station to one’s home. They’re light enough to throw over your shoulder. They’re easy to ride just about anywhere and don’t need a lot of physical effort. The scooter can travel 25 km on one charge. It’s convenient and easy to control. They are also good for environment. Unlike cars and buses, electric scooters produce no carbon dioxide, need no fuel and make almost no noise. For many young people, they use them to copy cool celebrities they have seen in videos. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $