Unit 4单元主题作文指导及高分范文-2025-2026学年人教版（2012）九年级全一册英语

人教新目标九年级英语Unit 4单元主题 作文指导及高分范文 书面表达（一） 从小学到初中毕业，同学们都发生了很大的改变，请写一篇文章谈谈你自己的改变。 作文指导： 1.审题 主题.介绍自己的变化 人称.第一人称 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时 2.列框架 学习上的变化 I used to have..; but now I... I used to be. However,... . Everything is different now. I 生活上的变化 What's more, I used to… Now I have... 我的感受 I am looking forward to having more positive changes... I also hope that··· 3.连篇章： 介绍自己变化时可使用句式“I used to be/do……” “ I didn't use to…”,并使用“what's more, additionally, more importantly”等过渡词或者衔接词来连接. 4.高分范文 Since I entered Grade Nine, my study and life have changed a lot. I'd like to share with you some of my changes. When it comes to my study, one of the biggest changes is that I used to spend an hour or so doing my homework,but now it takes me two to three hours every day. Additionally,we have tests almost every week, which makes me feel stresed out. As for my life,I used to have enough time for my hobbies as well as sleep. Now I seldom have free time because I not only exercise early in the morning in order to get better P. E.grades but also go to bed later to review what I' ve learned during the day. As far as I' m concerned, all these changes make me a better person. Only when I try my best to get used to them can I make greater progress. 5.写作注意事项： 1.段落：三段(总分总)，每段开头空 4个字母. 2.书写：不涂划，每词之间空一个字母，向右倾斜. 3.内容：审题和列提纲时整理好要点，适当补充短语和拓展句式. 4.正确使用连词使文章连贯通顺 5.句式灵活多变，使用宾语、定语.状语从句等. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 书面表达（二） 假如你是李华,离开家乡多年,上个月你重返家乡,发现你的家乡已经发生了翻天覆地的变化。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇文章来描述家乡的变化。 解题思路: 1.审题主题:介绍家乡的变化 人称:第一,三人称 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时 2.列提纲 The changes in my hometown 出行方式: We used to go out by… Luckily,we can take… to any places. 环境变化: It used to be… and we can see…… everywhere. Now it becomes more... 我的感受:I am proud of………I hope it… 3.连篇章: 使用过渡问使文章连贯通顺 4.高分范文: How time flies! It has been five years since I left my hometown. Last month,I returned to my hometown and was very surprised to find that it was completely different from the small village that it used to be. For one thing, it used to be so poor that we had to go out either on foot or by bike. Luckily, the rapid development of science and technology makes it possible for us to take a subway or drive a car, which brings much convenience to us. For another, it used to be very dirty and I could see rubbish here and there. Now,the environment around us is not only clean but also tidy because more and more people attach great importance to protecting the environment. All in all, great changes have taken place in my hometown and I am proud of it. Only when everyone takes action to make it a beautiful place will it become better and better. Let's pull together to make it. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $