Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背 Unit 2 Great minds单元话题：著名人物 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 1．在当今社会，许多学生都有自己的偶像。你的偶像（idol）是谁呢？请以 “My Idol” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的偶像。​ 要点如下：​ 1. 简单介绍偶像的身份（如：歌手、演员、运动员等）；​ 2. 描述偶像的外貌、性格特点；​ 3. 阐述你喜欢他/她的原因；​ 4. 你从偶像身上学到了什么。​ 要求：​ 1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；​ 2. 词数：80~100 词；​ 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．钱学森是中国“两弹一星”元勋，为中国航天科技的发展做出了巨大贡献。请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍钱学森。 姓名 钱学森 生卒日期 1911年12月11日—2009年10月31日 出生地 中国上海 教育背景 1934年毕业于上海交通大学，后赴美留学，获博士学位 主要成就 1. 参与美国早期火箭研究，1955年回到中国 2. 领导研制中国第一颗人造卫星“东方红一号”，推动导弹和空间探索领域的发展 3. 中国航天事业的奠基人，被誉为“中国航天之父” 要求： 1. 文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 词数100左右。 参考词汇：aerospace science and technology航天科技 father of China’s aerospace中国航天之父 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．      榜样的力量是无穷的。《论语》中提到“见贤思齐”“择善而从”，这告诉我们要向有才德的人学习，以他们为榜样，学习他们身上的优点。假如英语课上老师要求每个学生谈谈自己的榜样，请你根据所给提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你的榜样。 要点提示： 1．Who is your role model? Why do you regard him / her as (看做) your role model? 2．What experiences did he/ she have? 3．What can you learn from him/ her? 写作要求： （1）要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确； （3）书写工整；不出现真实姓名及地点：80词左右。 My role model ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My role model    My role model is Helen Keller. I admire her greatly because she overcame huge difficulties.     Helen Keller became blind and deaf when she was very young. It was almost impossible for her to learn or communicate. However, with the help of her teacher, she worked incredibly hard. She learned to read, write, and even speak. Later, she graduated from college and became a famous writer and speaker.     From Helen Keller, I learn the importance of never giving up. 4．梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南于无声世界，坚持自己的梦想，用奋斗发声。请你根据以下表格，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍江梦南的故事。 内容须包括以下所有要点： Name Jiang Mengnan Year of birth 1992 Experience 1. deaf (聋的) when she was little; 2. learn to read lips; 3. study hard; dream to study medicine; 4. become a Doctor of pharmacy ... Your feelings ... ... 参考词汇：聋的deaf； 读唇语read lips； 药学博士Doctor of pharmacy；意志力will A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate (命运). ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你校英语社团将举办以The Hero in My Heart为题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示内容用英语写一篇短文简要介绍你心目中的英雄——航天员邓清明，然后参加该征文活动。提示内容： (1) 1966年出生于江西，虽家庭贫困，但学习勤奋刻苦； (2) 1998年，成为我国14名首批航天员之一； (3) 尽管多年来一直作为备份航天员，但认真对待每一次训练； (4) 经过24年10个月，终于实现了他的太空梦； (5) 我认为…… 参考词汇：备份航天员backup astronaut 要求：(1)语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；(2)包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； (3)100词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Hero in My Heart Of the many space heroes in our country’s history, Deng Qingming leaves a deep impression on me. He is the hero in my heart. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。每个人心中都有自己的英雄。假如报社正在举行“我心中的英雄”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 主要内容包括： 1. What does a hero mean in your opinion? 2. Who is a hero in your heart? 3. What can you learn from him or her? 要求： 1.词数100词左右； 2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3.文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．下周你校将举办运动会，为配合运动会的开展，校英文报开辟专栏并举办题为“A sports star in my eyes”的征文活动。你想到了在2024年《开学第一课》中的奥运冠军潘展乐大哥哥。他以“小潘老师”的身份为全国中小学生带来的那堂特别的“游泳课”至今让你记忆犹新。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。 Main achievements ·won the gold medal in the men’s 100-meter freestyle at the 2024 Paris Olympics ·set a world record His effort train hard; swim as far as 15,000 meters every day; … Encouragement for you … 要求： 1.短文需包括图表中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.80—120词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 4.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 A sports star in my eyes When I think of a true sports star, the first person who comes to mind is Pan Zhanle. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．请根据下面的提示，以“Mark Twain”为题，写一篇英文短文。 内容提示：（1）美国著名的作家，写了许多著名的小说； （2）1835年出生于佛罗里达的乡村，4岁时全家搬到城镇，12岁时父亲去世； （3）从童年就开始工作，做过不同的工作。他最著名的小说之一是《汤姆·索亚历险记》； （4）他的写作才能并不是从小就有的，而是来自他个人的经历。 要求：（1）语法正确、逻辑合理； （2）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）可根据提示内容适当发挥。 Mark Twain Mark Twain was an American writer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I enjoy his works very much. 重难语篇提升练 9．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 10．当代生活的发展与进步离不开科学家的付出与奉献。假如你们的校报正在征稿，主题为“伟大的科学家”，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文进行投稿，介绍著名科学家居里夫人，并谈谈你对她的评价。 人物 Madame Curie 职业 科学家 简历 1867 年11月7日出生于波兰。 她自小对学习表现出浓厚的兴趣，并且刻苦勤奋，以优异成绩从中学毕业。 因当时波兰的女性不允许上大学，居里夫人想方设法去巴黎求学深造。 虽然生活艰苦，但她一直坚持进行科学研究。 主要成就 发现了放射性元素镭； 获得了两次诺贝尔奖。 你的评价 …… 参考词汇：Poland波兰，graduate from从……毕业，the radioactive element radium放射性元素镭，Nobel Prize诺贝尔奖 要求： 1. 80 词左右（给出部分不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 There are lots of great people in history. Today I want to introduce ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背 Unit 2 Great minds单元话题：著名人物 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 1．在当今社会，许多学生都有自己的偶像。你的偶像（idol）是谁呢？请以 “My Idol” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的偶像。​ 要点如下：​ 1. 简单介绍偶像的身份（如：歌手、演员、运动员等）；​ 2. 描述偶像的外貌、性格特点；​ 3. 阐述你喜欢他/她的原因；​ 4. 你从偶像身上学到了什么。​ 要求：​ 1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；​ 2. 词数：80~100 词；​ 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Idol My idol is Li Na, a great Chinese tennis player. She is tall with short hair and always looks energetic. She is brave and never gives up, even when facing difficulties. I like her because she worked hard to achieve her dreams. She won many international matches and made China proud in tennis. From her, I learn that success comes from hard work and persistence. I will try my best to overcome challenges in my life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。​ ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述偶像的身份、外貌、性格等常态特征；当提及偶像过去的成就或经历时，可使用一般过去时。​ ③提示：需紧扣四个要点，语言简洁明了，避免冗余信息；注意人称一致，以第三人称为主介绍偶像；严格控制词数在80~100词之间，不出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍偶像身份：用一句话点明偶像是谁以及其职业； 第二步，描述外貌与性格：简要描述偶像的外貌特征，如身高、发型等，再说明其性格特点；​ 第三步，阐述喜欢的原因：结合偶像的成就或行为说明喜欢他的原因； 第四步，说明从偶像身上学到的东西：总结自己从偶像身上获得的启示。 [亮点词汇] ①energetic精力充沛的​ ②give up放弃​ ③achieve实现 [高分句型] ①I like her because she worked hard to achieve her dreams.（原因状语从句）​ ②From her, I learn that success comes from hard work and persistence.（宾语从句）​ 2．钱学森是中国“两弹一星”元勋，为中国航天科技的发展做出了巨大贡献。请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍钱学森。 姓名 钱学森 生卒日期 1911年12月11日—2009年10月31日 出生地 中国上海 教育背景 1934年毕业于上海交通大学，后赴美留学，获博士学位 主要成就 1. 参与美国早期火箭研究，1955年回到中国 2. 领导研制中国第一颗人造卫星“东方红一号”，推动导弹和空间探索领域的发展 3. 中国航天事业的奠基人，被誉为“中国航天之父” 要求： 1. 文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2. 词数100左右。 参考词汇：aerospace science and technology航天科技 father of China’s aerospace中国航天之父 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Qian Xuesen was one of China’s greatest scientists. Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education. After getting his PhD, he became an important rocket scientist in the USA. In 1955, Qian returned to China. He devoted himself to the development of China’s aerospace science and technology. Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1. His work laid the foundation for China’s achievements in missiles and space exploration. Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”. His spirit continues to inspire China’s young generations today. He passed away in 2009, but his contributions will never be forgotten. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍中国伟大科学家钱学森的生平事迹、贡献及影响； ②时态：以一般过去时为主，描述钱学森的出生、求学、回国、工作及逝世等生平事件；使用一般现在时强调其地位、精神的延续性和贡献的不朽性； ③提示：文章围绕钱学森展开，包含其基本生平、回国后的贡献、历史地位及精神影响，内容完整，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明钱学森是中国最伟大的科学家之一，简述早期经历； 第二步，讲述其为中国导弹和太空探索成就奠定基础，突出核心贡献； 第三步，总结其“中国航天之父”的地位，说明其精神对当代中国青年的激励作用，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①further education深造 ②devote oneself to致力于 ③aerospace航天 ④lay the foundation for 为……奠定基础 ⑤pass away逝世 ⑥contributions贡献 [高分句型] ①Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education.（过去分词“Born”作状语） ②He devoted himself to the development of China’s aerospace science and technology.（“devote oneself to” 短语，体现其对航天事业的专注和奉献） ③Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1.（“Under his leadership”介词短语作状语） ④Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”.（“be known as”结构，明确其历史地位） 3．      榜样的力量是无穷的。《论语》中提到“见贤思齐”“择善而从”，这告诉我们要向有才德的人学习，以他们为榜样，学习他们身上的优点。假如英语课上老师要求每个学生谈谈自己的榜样，请你根据所给提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你的榜样。 要点提示： 1．Who is your role model? Why do you regard him / her as (看做) your role model? 2．What experiences did he/ she have? 3．What can you learn from him/ her? 写作要求： （1）要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确； （3）书写工整；不出现真实姓名及地点：80词左右。 My role model ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My role model    My role model is Helen Keller. I admire her greatly because she overcame huge difficulties.     Helen Keller became blind and deaf when she was very young. It was almost impossible for her to learn or communicate. However, with the help of her teacher, she worked incredibly hard. She learned to read, write, and even speak. Later, she graduated from college and became a famous writer and speaker.     From Helen Keller, I learn the importance of never giving up. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的榜样是谁以及为什么视其为榜样； 第二步，介绍自己的榜样的主要经历； 第三步，介绍自己从榜样身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下 ②graduate from毕业于 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] Helen Keller became blind and deaf when she was very young.(when引导时间状语从句) 4．梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南于无声世界，坚持自己的梦想，用奋斗发声。请你根据以下表格，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍江梦南的故事。 内容须包括以下所有要点： Name Jiang Mengnan Year of birth 1992 Experience 1. deaf (聋的) when she was little; 2. learn to read lips; 3. study hard; dream to study medicine; 4. become a Doctor of pharmacy ... Your feelings ... ... 参考词汇：聋的deaf； 读唇语read lips； 药学博士Doctor of pharmacy；意志力will A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate (命运). ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate (命运). Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of difficulties, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people, so she learned to read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy. I admire Jiang Mengnan very much. Her strong will made her become successful. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude. Now I study harder and focus on the process. In our life, every step is so important that we must keep fighting against the fate. This is Jiang Mengnan, the hero in my heart! I want to be the person like her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历； 第二步，介绍自己的感受及做法； 第三步，总结全文，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of充满 ②realize one’s dream实现梦想 ③Thanks to感谢，多亏了 ④fight against the fate与命运抗争 [高分句型] ①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导时间状语从句） ②In our life, every step is so important that we must keep fighting against the fate.（so...that...引导结果状语从句） 5．假如你校英语社团将举办以The Hero in My Heart为题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示内容用英语写一篇短文简要介绍你心目中的英雄——航天员邓清明，然后参加该征文活动。提示内容： (1) 1966年出生于江西，虽家庭贫困，但学习勤奋刻苦； (2) 1998年，成为我国14名首批航天员之一； (3) 尽管多年来一直作为备份航天员，但认真对待每一次训练； (4) 经过24年10个月，终于实现了他的太空梦； (5) 我认为…… 参考词汇：备份航天员backup astronaut 要求：(1)语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；(2)包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； (3)100词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 The Hero in My Heart Of the many space heroes in our country’s history, Deng Qingming leaves a deep impression on me. He is the hero in my heart. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Hero in My Heart Of the many space heroes in our country’s history, Deng Qingming leaves a deep impression on me. He is the hero in my heart. Deng Qingming was born in Jiangxi in 1966. His family was poor, but he studied hard at school. In 1998, Deng became one of the first group of 14 astronauts for the space programme in our country. Although he served as a backup astronaut for many years, he took every training session seriously and never missed any one of them. After waiting for 24 years and 10 months, Deng finally made his space dream come true and went into space on the Shenzhou-15 spaceship. I think Deng Qingming is a great man. I have learned from him that I should never give up when things don’t go my way. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文使用“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍航天员邓清明的相关个人信息”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍自己心中的英雄是航天员邓清明； 第二步，根据提示内容，介绍航天员邓清明的个人信息，经历等情况； 第三步，从他身上自己学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①come true成真 ②give up放弃 [高分句型] ①Although he served as a backup astronaut for many years, he took every training session seriously and never missed any one of them.（让步状语从句） ②I think Deng Qingming is a great man.（宾语从句） 6．一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。每个人心中都有自己的英雄。假如报社正在举行“我心中的英雄”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 主要内容包括： 1. What does a hero mean in your opinion? 2. Who is a hero in your heart? 3. What can you learn from him or her? 要求： 1.词数100词左右； 2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3.文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Everyone has a hero in his or her heart, so do I. I think a hero must be a good example for others. The hero in my heart is called Zhong Nanshan. He is a doctor from Guangdong. The reason I like him is that he, as well as his team, saved a lot of patients during the pandemic. He is not only brave in the face of the virus but also very professional. After taking his advice, thousands of people were saved. Maybe I cannot be a doctor like him, but I will try my best to contribute to human society. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“主要内容”要求的关键信息，写短文介绍自己心中的英雄。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍在自己看来英雄意味着什么； 第二步，介绍自己心中的英雄； 第三步，介绍自己从这个英雄身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… ②in the face of 面对 ③thousands of 数以千计的 [高分句型] ①I think a hero must be a good example for others.（省略that的宾语从句） ②Maybe I cannot be a doctor like him, but I will try my best to contribute to human society.（but连接并列句） 7．下周你校将举办运动会，为配合运动会的开展，校英文报开辟专栏并举办题为“A sports star in my eyes”的征文活动。你想到了在2024年《开学第一课》中的奥运冠军潘展乐大哥哥。他以“小潘老师”的身份为全国中小学生带来的那堂特别的“游泳课”至今让你记忆犹新。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。 Main achievements ·won the gold medal in the men’s 100-meter freestyle at the 2024 Paris Olympics ·set a world record His effort train hard; swim as far as 15,000 meters every day; … Encouragement for you … 要求： 1.短文需包括图表中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.80—120词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 4.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 A sports star in my eyes When I think of a true sports star, the first person who comes to mind is Pan Zhanle. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A sports star in my eyes    When I think of a true sports star, the first person who comes to mind is Pan Zhanle. Not only did he win the gold medal in the men’s 100-meter freestyle at the 2024 Paris Olympics, but he also set a world record, which amazed the whole world.     Behind his success lies unimaginable effort. He trained so hard that he swam as far as 15,000 meters every day, even when facing injuries or exhaustion. What impressed me most was his role as “Little Teacher Pan” in The First Lesson of School 2024. Through his humorous yet inspiring swimming lessons, he taught us that perseverance is the key to overcoming challenges.     Pan’s story encourages me to never give up. Whenever I feel tired while studying, I remind myself of his daily 15,000 meters. His spirit lights up my path, proving that hard work truly makes dreams come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，明确“眼中的体育明星”具体人物； 第二步，介绍体育明星潘展乐成功背后的付出与闪光点； 第三步，阐述体育明星对自身的影响与启示。 [亮点词汇] ①set a world record 打破世界纪录    ②unimaginable effort 难以想象的努力    ③light up one’s path 照亮某人的道路    [高分句型] ①Not only did he win the gold medal in the men’s 100-meter freestyle at the 2024 Paris Olympics, but he also set a world record, which amazed the whole world. （not only...but also...连接并列分句，which引导非限制性定语从句）    ②He trained so hard that he swam as far as 15,000 meters every day, even when facing injuries or exhaustion. （so...that...引导结果状语从句） 8．请根据下面的提示，以“Mark Twain”为题，写一篇英文短文。 内容提示：（1）美国著名的作家，写了许多著名的小说； （2）1835年出生于佛罗里达的乡村，4岁时全家搬到城镇，12岁时父亲去世； （3）从童年就开始工作，做过不同的工作。他最著名的小说之一是《汤姆·索亚历险记》； （4）他的写作才能并不是从小就有的，而是来自他个人的经历。 要求：（1）语法正确、逻辑合理； （2）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）可根据提示内容适当发挥。 Mark Twain Mark Twain was an American writer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I enjoy his works very much. 【答案】One possible version Mark Twain Mark Twain was an American writer. He wrote many famous novels. Mark Twain was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the town with his family when he was four years old. At the age of 12, his father died. He began working from his childhood and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels. He didn’t show his talent for writing from an early age. His writing ability came from his personal experiences. I enjoy his works very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：题目所给提示切勿遗漏，可适当进行内容拓展，使短文内容更加丰富。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍马克·吐温的出生地、出生时间； 第二步，介绍马克·吐温的生命事迹； 第三步，介绍马克·吐温的作品和写作才能。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②move to搬到 ③begin doing sth开始做某事 [高分句型] ①He moved to the town with his family when he was four years old.（when引导时间状语从句） ②The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels.（“one of +形容词最高级+名词复数”句型） 重难语篇提升练 9．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang Province in 1957. At the age of 17, she moved to Yunnan with her sister, and became a teacher at the age of 26. After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school. In 2008, she founded Huaping Girls’ High School. Since then, she has helped about 2,000 girls from mountain areas to enter college. I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文章开头已给出； 第二步，介绍张桂梅的出生信息、职业生涯和成就； 第三步，最后表达表达出对她的敬佩。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of在……岁时 ②pass away过世 ③dedicated to致力于 [高分句型] ①After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school.（时间状语从句；定语从句） ②I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives.（宾语从句） 10．当代生活的发展与进步离不开科学家的付出与奉献。假如你们的校报正在征稿，主题为“伟大的科学家”，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文进行投稿，介绍著名科学家居里夫人，并谈谈你对她的评价。 人物 Madame Curie 职业 科学家 简历 1867 年11月7日出生于波兰。 她自小对学习表现出浓厚的兴趣，并且刻苦勤奋，以优异成绩从中学毕业。 因当时波兰的女性不允许上大学，居里夫人想方设法去巴黎求学深造。 虽然生活艰苦，但她一直坚持进行科学研究。 主要成就 发现了放射性元素镭； 获得了两次诺贝尔奖。 你的评价 …… 参考词汇：Poland波兰，graduate from从……毕业，the radioactive element radium放射性元素镭，Nobel Prize诺贝尔奖 要求： 1. 80 词左右（给出部分不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 There are lots of great people in history. Today I want to introduce ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     There are lots of great people in history. Today I want to introduce Madame Curie. Born into a teacher’s family on November 7, 1867, in Poland, Madame Curie is one of the greatest physicists.       When she was young, she became interested in physics. At that time women were not admitted into universities in Poland, so she was determined to go to university in Paris. During which time she led a very poor life. However, she worked very hard and succeeded in graduating from high school with honors.      Madame Curie devoted all her life to her research. She was not only the founder of the Radium Institute, but also the discoverer of two kinds of radioactive elements-polonium and radium. She was regarded as the mother of Ra. In 1903, she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize in Physics. She received the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911. So she became the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.       Madame Curie sets a good example for us, so all the people show great respect for her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍居里夫人的职业和简历； 第二步，介绍居里夫人的主要成就； 第三步，写出自己对居里夫人的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the+最高级 最……之一 ②succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事 ③be regarded as 被誉为 [高分句型] ①When she was young, she became interested in physics. (时间状语从句) ②In 1903, she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize in Physics. (被动语态) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $