Unit 4 The Earth 书面表达专练-2025-2026学年沪教版（2024）英语七年级上册满分冲刺专练

2025-2026学年沪教版(2024)英语七年级上册满分冲刺专练 Unit4 The Earth书面表达专练 1.地球是人类、动物、植物共同的家园，但随着各类污染越来越严重，地球正面临许多环境问题。 学校校刊school lif记正在征集以Let's protect the Earth”为题的文章。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于 70词的短文。不得出现真实人名、学校名。 提示： 1.重要性：地球是一个美丽的行星，有..；是动植物、人类的家园。 2.主要问题：说出地球面临的污染问题和危害。 3.措施：从日常生活中的小事做起，停止污染，保护地球。（至少列举两项措施） Let's protect the Earth 2.假如你是李华，你校准备举行一次以Protect the Earth'为题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下表格 的内容，写一篇英语演讲稿参加此次比赛，演讲稿需要包含以下提示的内容： Protect the Earth 必要性 是我们的家园，提供空气、食物和水 1.滥伐树木 问题 2...（补充一个问题) 倡议 提出两个倡议 注意： 1.词数要求：70词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数） 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear boys and girls,good morning!I'm very glad to stand here to give you a speech about protecting the Earth. 3.世界爱护环境协会举办了“保护我们的地球母亲主题活动，假如你是主办方负责人，请你根据 以下内容提示写一篇文章，呼吁人们行动起来保护地球。词数不少于70词（文章开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数)。 我们只有一个地球，它是我们的家。它过去是，但是 地球概况 现在.… 1.工厂排放有毒气体和水..（后果） 污染原因 2.人们乱扔垃圾..（后果） 3.人们过量捕杀动物..（后果） 保护措施 ..(最少3条建议) 提示词汇：有害气体harmful gases 排放discharge There is only one Earth.It is our home. Let's take action together to protect our home. 4.你校英文报准备举行以Save Water”为题的英语征文比赛。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示 写一篇短文投稿，呼吁同学们节约用水。 Save Water Why do we need to What can we do to save What do you think of save water? water? saving water? -the importance of water -ways situation(情形)of waste different uses of water 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数70词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）： 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In the world,many people live a hard life because they don't have enough water. 5.人类只有一个地球，地球是我们共同的家园。目前我市拟开展以Our Only Home-一the Earth”为题的 征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于70词的短文。 提示：1.重要性：只有一个地球，地球是植物、动物和人类共同的家园； 2.主要问题：污染越来越严重，危害了人们的生活和健康； 3.措施：从日常生活中的小事做起，停止污染，保护地球。（至少列举三项措施） 6.本单元的话题是The Earth”,对应课标中的人与自然”这一主题语境，涉及“自然生态、环境 保护”主题群。写作方面要求写一篇如何保护地球的小短文。要求正确的运用there be句型描述地球上 存在的环境污染问题以及提出解决问题的方案。写作要点包括： 一、为什么要保护地球。（地球是我们美丽的家园..） 二、我们面临的问题。 三、解决方案。 7.假定你是李辉，是学校环保社团的一员。最近你看到一些环境污染的相关报道后，决定写一篇 英文倡议信，号召大家一起保护地球。 要点 1.污染问题； 2.保护措施； 3.表达倡议。 要求： 1.词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, As we know,the Earth is our home and it is facing many problems now. Yours, Li Hui 8.地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代的主题。目前，我市英语学会准备 面向全市学生开展以Save Our Earth”为主题的英文演讲征文活动。假如你是李华，现请你根据以下三个 方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。 要点：(1)重要性：只有一个地球 (2)主要问题：污染、灾难、疾病 (3)措施：停止污染、保护环境 参考词：disaster n.灾难 注意：可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua.I'm glad to be here.I think it's our duty to save our Earth. 9.现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边 的小事做起。请你用英语写一篇倡议书，投稿给你校的英文校报。内容包括： 必要性 地球是我家，必须保护地球 1.离开房间不关灯 不良现象 2.把垃圾扔进河里（补充1点不良现象） 1.节约用水、用电 建议 2.你的1一2条建议 参考词汇：电(electricity) 注意：词数70左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good morning,everyone.I am glad to share my ideas about protecting the environment in our daily lives 10.[2024辽宁阜新调研]所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊将要 举行以One Earth,One Home'”为题的英语作文竞赛。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。 One Earth. One Home What problems are wild animals facing? Why do we need to protect wild animals? What can we do to protect them as students? 注意： (1)词数90左右，应包括所有要点； (2)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 One Earth,One Home 2025-2026学年沪教版（2024）英语七年级上册满分冲刺专练 Unit 4 The Earth 书面表达专练 1．地球是人类、动物、植物共同的家园，但随着各类污染越来越严重，地球正面临许多环境问题。学校校刊 school life 正在征集以“Let’s protect the Earth”为题的文章。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于70词的短文。不得出现真实人名、学校名。 提示： 1. 重要性：地球是一个美丽的行星，有……；是动植物、人类的家园。 2. 主要问题：说出地球面临的污染问题和危害。 3. 措施：从日常生活中的小事做起，停止污染，保护地球。（至少列举两项措施） Let’s protect the Earth _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你校准备举行一次以“Protect the Earth”为题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下表格的内容，写一篇英语演讲稿参加此次比赛，演讲稿需要包含以下提示的内容： Protect the Earth 必要性 是我们的家园，提供空气、食物和水 问题 1. 滥伐树木 2.……（补充一个问题） 倡议 提出两个倡议 注意： 1. 词数要求：70词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数） 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear boys and girls, good morning! I’m very glad to stand here to give you a speech about protecting the Earth. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．世界爱护环境协会举办了“保护我们的地球母亲”主题活动，假如你是主办方负责人，请你根据以下内容提示写一篇文章，呼吁人们行动起来保护地球。词数不少于70词 (文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 地球概况 我们只有一个地球，它是我们的家。它过去是……，但是现在…… 污染原因 1.工厂排放有毒气体和水……(后果) 2.人们乱扔垃圾……(后果) 3.人们过量捕杀动物……(后果) 保护措施 ……(最少3条建议) 提示词汇：有害气体 harmful gases 排放 discharge There is only one Earth. It is our home. ____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s take action together to protect our home. 4．你校英文报准备举行以 “Save Water” 为题的英语征文比赛。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，呼吁同学们节约用水。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数70词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In the world, many people live a hard life because they don’t have enough water. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．人类只有一个地球，地球是我们共同的家园。目前我市拟开展以“Our Only Home—the Earth”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于70 词的短文。 提示：1. 重要性：只有一个地球，地球是植物、动物和人类共同的家园； 2. 主要问题：污染越来越严重，危害了人们的生活和健康； 3. 措施：从日常生活中的小事做起，停止污染，保护地球。（至少列举三项措施） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．本单元的话题是“The Earth”，对应课标中的“人与自然 ”这一主题语境，涉及“自然生态、环境保护”主题群。写作方面要求写一篇“如何保护地球”的小短文。要求正确的运用there be句型描述地球上存在的环境污染问题以及提出解决问题的方案。写作要点包括： 一、为什么要保护地球。（地球是我们美丽的家园……） 二、我们面临的问题。 三、解决方案。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假定你是李辉，是学校环保社团的一员。最近你看到一些环境污染的相关报道后，决定写一篇英文倡议信，号召大家一起保护地球。 要点： 1．污染问题； 2．保护措施； 3．表达倡议。 要求： 1．词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, As we know, the Earth is our home and it is facing many problems now. __________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 8．地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代的主题。目前，我市英语学会准备面向全市学生开展以“Save Our Earth”为主题的英文演讲征文活动。假如你是李华，现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。 要点：（1）重要性：只有一个地球 （2）主要问题：污染、灾难、疾病 （3）措施：停止污染、保护环境 参考词：disaster n. 灾难 注意：可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to be here. I think it’s our duty to save our Earth. _____________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起。请你用英语写一篇倡议书，投稿给你校的英文校报。内容包括： 必要性 地球是我家，必须保护地球 不良现象 1. 离开房间不关灯 2. 把垃圾扔进河里(补充1点不良现象) 建议 1. 节约用水、用电 2. 你的1—2条建议 　　参考词汇：电(electricity) 注意：词数70左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Good morning, everyone. I am glad to share my ideas about protecting the environment in our daily lives. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．［2024辽宁阜新调研］所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。学校英语校刊将要举行以“One Earth, One Home”为题的英语作文竞赛。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。 What problems are wild animals facing? Why do we need to protect wild animals? What can we do to protect them as students? 注意： （1）词数90左右，应包括所有要点； （2）文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 One Earth, One Home _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 1．例文 Let’s protect the Earth The Earth is a beautiful planet. There are many blue seas and high mountains and beautiful clouds flowing in the sky. The Earth is home to all animals and plants. However, the Earth is facing a lot of problems. People are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. The sea is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Some people are cutting down trees. There are fewer and fewer trees in the world, which causes many natural disasters. Factories and family burn things to make energy. It pollutes the air and makes many people get ill. We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it. Let’s take action. First, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish. We should put it into the dustbin. Second, we must plant more trees. Trees can make the air clean and the world beautiful. Third, we should take the bus or underground more to go to school or go to work. All in all, if we don’t want anything bad happen to our only home, it’s important for us to protect the Earth. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。根据提示，点明地球的重要性。 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示，说出地球面临的污染问题和危害，以及我们可以采取的措施。 第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家一起保护地球。 [亮点词汇] ① for example 比如 ② cut down 砍倒 ③ natural disasters 自然灾害 ④ take action 采取措施 ⑤ all in all 总之 [高分句型] ① There are fewer and fewer trees in the world, which causes many natural disasters. (which引导定语从句) ② All in all, if we don’t want anything bad happen to our only home, it’s important for us to protect the Earth. (if引导条件状语从句) 2．例文 Dear boys and girls, good morning! I’m very glad to stand here to give you a speech about protecting the Earth. The earth is our home and provides us with air, food, and water. It is necessary for us to protect her. However, there are some bad behaviors. People always cut down trees recklessly. What’s more, people often leave the rooms without turning off lights and throw away the bottles with water in them and so on. It’s time to protect our earth now. First, we should protect the forest and save water and electricity. For example, remember to turn off the taps or light when we don’t use them. Second, if we have to throw rubbish, please put it in the dustbin. What’s more, we should use less plastic bags. In a word, it’s our duty to protect our home. Let’s make the earth more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接上文，点题，引出对后文的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述保护地球的必要性以及问题和保护地球的倡议； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①necessary必要的 ②recklessly不顾一切地 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] ①It is necessary for us to protect her.（it固定句式） ②For example, remember to turn off the taps or light when we don’t use them.（when引导的时间状语从句） 3．例文： There is only one Earth. It is our home. It used to be healthy, but now it’s sick. Pollution is more and more serious. The factories discharge harmful gases and water. As a result, the rivers are polluted, and so is the air. People throw rubbish everywhere, so the environment is badly polluted. People overkill animals. Some animals went extinct and the balance of nature is damaged. As we all know, we have only one Earth. Low-carbon lifestyle is not only more comfortable for people but also safer for the environment. I hope we can do something to focus on environmental issues. When we go shopping, we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags, and we must save water and electricity in daily life. We can reuse our textbooks, too. Let’s take action together to protect our home. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“保护地球”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地球概况、污染原因、保护措施”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①as a result因此 ②as we all know众所周知 ③take action to do采取行动 [高分句型] ①When we go shopping, we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags.（when引导的时间状语从句） 4．例文： In the world, many people live a hard life because they don’t have enough water. Water is important to people. People can’t live without water. But many people waste water. Some don’t turn off the taps after washing hands, and some take a shower for a long time. As far as we know, it is important to save water. There are some useful ways to do it, such as turning off the taps after using them. After we wash the vegetables, we can use the water to clean the toilets. When it rains, we can collect the rain and use it to clean the floor. I think everyone should save water to protect the environment. Let’s start from small things. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出节约用水的主题； 第二步，具体阐述当前水资源的情况和该如何做到节约用水； 第三步，从小事做起，节约用水。 [亮点词汇] ①in the world 在世界中 ②turn off 关闭 ③as far as we know 据我们所知 ④such as 例如 [高分句型] ①In the world, many people live a hard life because they don’t have enough water. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②When it rains, we can collect the rain and use it to clean the floor. (when引导的时间状语从句) 5．例文 Our Only Home—the Earth The Earth is a beautiful planet. There are many blue seas and high mountains and beautiful clouds flowing in the sky. There are four seasons, they bring us a colorful and beautiful world. More importantly, it provides us everything we need. Without the Earth, everything can’t live. This beautiful planet is our only home. However, we are harming the Earth in many ways. For example, people put rubbish into rivers and seas. The sea is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Some people cut down trees, there are fewer and fewer trees in the world, which causes many natural disasters. Factories and family burn things to make energy. It pollutes the air and makes many people get ill. We only have one Earth, so we have to protect it, let’s take action. First, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish and put it into the dustbin. Second, We must plant more trees. Trees can make the air clean and the world beautiful. Third, We should take the bus or underground more to go to school or go to work. Fourth, We must stop people burning things to make energy and use clean energy. In a word, it’s important for us to protect the Earth for our future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据提示信息说明地球对我们的重要性，现在存在的各种环境问题以及如何保护地球，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明地球的重要性，没有地球就没有人类； 第二步，列举地球面临的许多环境问题； 第三步，提出一些保护地球的建议和措施。 [亮点词汇] ①dirtier and dirtier越来越脏 ②cut down砍伐 ③fewer and fewer越来越少 [高分句型] ①There are many blue seas and high mountains and beautiful clouds flowing in the sky. (there be句型) ②Some people cut down trees, there are fewer and fewer trees in the world, which causes many natural disasters. (which引导的定语从句) 6．例文 The Earth, the only mother of human beings, is facing serous environmental problems. It is important for us to protect the Earth, for it is our beautiful home. There are different kinds of pollution, such as water pollution and energy shortages. Although the Earth has been hurt seriously, there are still many things we can do to protect our home. First of all, it is important to improve the environmental awareness so that people won’t throw rubbish into rivers and factories will try to reduce waste gas and water. Besides, we must learn to save our energy such as using clean energy and collecting recyclable materials. What’s more, the government should make some laws to punish those who destroy our environment. Let’s do something to make our home a better world from now on! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示描述地球上存在的环境污染问题以及提出解决问题的方案，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍为什么要保护地球； 第二步，描述地球上存在的环境污染问题； 第三步，介绍解决方案； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of各种各样的 ②first of all首先 ③throw...into...把……扔进…… [高分句型] ①Although the Earth has been hurt seriously, there are still many things we can do to protect our home. (although引导的让步状语从句) ②What’s more, the government should make some laws to punish those who destroy our environment. (who引导的定语从句) 7．例文 Dear friends, As we know, the Earth is our home and it is facing many problems now. There are many different kinds of pollution, such as water pollution and plastic pollution. We can’t live better if the environment on the Earth becomes worse. So it’s everyone’s duty to protect the planet. We can protect the Earth by doing small things, like turning off the taps after using water, not throwing away rubbish everywhere, switching off the lights when leaving the room and walking to school instead of taking a car. Let’s take action to protect the Earth—our only home from now on. Protecting the Earth is protecting ourselves. I hope everybody can do something to make a difference. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“污染问题，保护措施以及表达我的倡议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“众所周知，地球是我们的家园，它现在面临着许多问题。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“现如今存在的污染问题和提出保护措施”来倡议保护地球； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望每个人都能有所作为。” [亮点词汇] ① different kinds of不同种类的 ② turn off关掉 [高分句型] ① We can’t live better if the environment on the Earth becomes worse.（if引导的条件状语从句） ② Let’s take action to protect the Earth—our only home from now on.（let引导的祈使句肯定形式） 8．例文 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. I’m glad to be here. I think it’s our duty to save our Earth. We all live on Earth. The Earth is our home. We have only one Earth. We must take care of it. If we pollute it, it will be angry. There are three main problems on our Earth—pollution, disasters and illnesses. It is important for us to stop polluting our Earth and protect our environment. For example, we can plant more trees and flowers to make our environment clean and tidy. If everyone starts to do a small thing, our Earth will be more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写篇以“Save Our Earth”为主题的英文演讲征文活动。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，具体阐述地球现在面临的主要问题，以及保护地球的措施； 第三步，呼吁大家保护地球。 [亮点词汇] ①take care of照顾 ②For example例如 ③start to do开始做某事 [高分句型] ①If we pollute it, it will be angry.（“if”引导的条件状语从句） ②It is important for us to stop polluting our Earth and protect our environment.（“It”固定句型） 9．例文 Good morning, everyone. I am glad to share my ideas about protecting the environment in our daily lives. The Earth is our home and we have to protect her. Today environmental pollution has become a serious problem. Some people don’t turn off the light when they leave the room. There are also some people putting the rubbish into the river. Besides, factories burn things to make energy. This pollutes the air. In order to protect the Earth, we must do something. First, we have to save water and electricity. Second, we should plant more trees to make the air clean. Third, we can go out by bus or bike. Finally, we shouldn’t use plastic bags. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据表格提示内容进行写作，注意不要忘记补充1点不良的现象及自己的建议，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍保护环境的必要性； 第二步，介绍存在的一些不良现象； 第三步，提出保护环境的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①turn off关掉 ②in order to为了 ③make energy制造能量 [高分句型] Some people don’t turn off the light when they leave the room. (when引导时间状语从句) 10．例文 One Earth, One Home The Earth is home to humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. People often cut down trees and forests for money. What’s worse, people kill animals for their fur or bones. It’s time for us to save the Earth and the wild animals. If we take action to protect the Earth and wild animals, our Earth will become comfortable and wild animals can live happily. First, we shouldn’t buy fur coats any more. Second, we should make more people understand the importance of protecting the Earth and loving wild animals. Let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us humans and animals as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中人与动物共享地球家园的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“学校英语校刊将要举行以‘One Earth, One Home’为题的英语作文竞赛。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇作文。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“野生动物的现状、保护野生动物的建议、呼吁共同行动等”几个方面重点介绍人与动物共享地球家园的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“让我们一起行动起来，为我们人类和动物创造一个更美丽的家园”的呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍倒 ②what’s worse更糟糕的是 ③take action采取形式 ④let sb do sth让某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It’s time for us to save the Earth and the wild animals. (“It’s time for sb to do sth”句型) ②If we take action to protect the Earth and wild animals, our Earth will become comfortable and wild animals can live happily. (if引导的条件状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $