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Ms. Clara’s grocery store is a small, sunlit space with wooden floors and shelves. There’s a handwritten sign by the register: “Trust runs this store — pay later if you need to.” I started helping her after school last month, and soon learned that sign wasn’t just words.
One rainy evening, a woman burst in, her raincoat dripping (滴水) onto the floor. She grabbed a bag of rice and a carton of eggs, and then patted her pockets with a panicked look. “I left my wallet at home,” she said, voice tight. “Luna — my name’s Luna. I live on Green Street, two blocks over. I’ll be back tomorrow, I promise. My mom’s waiting for dinner.” Ms. Clara wrapped the eggs carefully. “Go on, dear. The rain won’t wait.” As Luna hurried out, I noticed her black umbrella — its handle wrapped in blue tape — standing against the pickle jar (坛子). I called out, but she was already gone.
The next day, the umbrella still stood by the jar, its fabric drying into wrinkled waves. Luna didn’t show. Another such day passed. My chest felt heavy. I kept looking at the door, then at the umbrella. “Maybe she forgot?” I said. Ms. Clara just wiped the counter and said, “Everyone gets busy. Let’s give her time.” But I found myself checking the umbrella more, wondering if it was just a trick — leave something cheap to earn trust, and then disappear.
On the third day, the umbrella had become a silent topic. “Ms. Clara, that umbrella’s probably all we’ll get,” I said. I should’ve made her leave her phone number. “What if she never comes?” I asked Ms. Clara, who was arranging oranges. She looked up, her eyes soft. “Then we’ll know. But if she does? We’ll know she’s worth trusting. That umbrella’s not a trick — it’s a reminder. Some people’s words are heavier than any wallet.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A few days later, when I almost forgot that, Luna turned up.
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Ms. Clara turned with the umbrella and hung it beside the door as a trust reminder.
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文本分析
1. 角色:_____________________________
2.视角:第________人称
3.时空线:from "I" starting to help at Ms. Clara’s grocery store---______________ ---______________ ---"I" worrying about Luna not returning---______________
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
What's written on the sign by the register of Ms. Clara’s store?:
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Why did Luna look panicked when she was in the store?:
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What did Ms. Clara do when Luna said she left her wallet at home?:
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What did Luna leave in the store?:____________________________________________
How did "I" feel when Luna didn’t show up the next day?:
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What did "I" think Luna’s leaving the umbrella might be?:
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What did Ms. Clara think the umbrella was?:
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5.情节线:"I" help at Ms. Clara’s grocery store which has a "trust" sign. →___________________________________ →____________________________________ →"I" doubt Luna while Ms. Clara chooses to trust.→(续写)Luna turns up a few days later. →(续写)Ms. Clara hangs the umbrella as a trust reminder.
6.情感线:"I":curious (about the sign)→___________→___________→___________(续写)→___________(续写)
7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8. 句式:请分别写出符合要求的句式(结合文本内容)
定语从句:________________________________________________________________
非谓语:__________________________________________________________________
感叹句:__________________________________________________________________
同位语:__________________________________________________________________
完全倒装:________________________________________________________________
比喻:____________________________________________________________________
夸张:____________________________________________________________________
9. 本文属于人与他人:_______________________________________
情节构造
第一段提示句:A few days later, when I almost forgot that, Luna turned up.
衔接句 1——— 对前面的 "I worried about Luna not returning" 提问 “Luna 出现时的状态如何?”:What was Luna's state when she turned up?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→______?←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 "Luna turned up" 提问 “Luna 回来做了什么事?”:What did Luna do when she came back?
第二段提示句:Ms. Clara turned with the umbrella and hung it beside the door as a trust reminder.
衔接 3——— 对 "hung it beside the door as a trust reminder" 提问 “"I" 看到这一幕后有什么感悟?”:What insight did "I" gain after seeing this?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→?←主题
主题:___________________________
段落构思
第一段:A few days later, when I almost forgot that, Luna turned up.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________
英文:
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第二段:Ms. Clara turned with the umbrella and hung it beside the door as a trust reminder.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________
英文:
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参考答案
1.角色:Ms. Clara(杂货店店主)、“I”(放学后在杂货店帮忙的人)、Luna(在杂货店忘带钱包赊账的顾客)
2.视角:第____一____人称
3.时空线:from "I" starting to help at Ms. Clara’s grocery store---Luna rushing into the store to buy rice and eggs without her wallet---Luna leaving her umbrella and failing to return for days---"I" worrying about Luna not returning---Luna turning up a few days later
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
What's written on the sign by the register of Ms. Clara’s store?:“Trust runs this store — pay later if you need to.”
Why did Luna look panicked when she was in the store?:She left her wallet at home and needed to buy food for her mom's dinner.
What did Ms. Clara do when Luna said she left her wallet at home?:She wrapped the eggs carefully and let Luna take the things first.
What did Luna leave in the store?:Her black umbrella with a blue tape-wrapped handle.
How did "I" feel when Luna didn’t show up the next day?:"I" felt heavy-hearted and started to doubt Luna.
What did "I" think Luna’s leaving the umbrella might be?:A trick to earn trust and then disappear.
What did Ms. Clara think the umbrella was?:A reminder that some people’s words are heavier than any wallet.
5.情节线:"I" help at Ms. Clara’s grocery store which has a "trust" sign. →Luna bursts into the store to buy rice and eggs but forgets her wallet, so Ms. Clara lets her take the goods and Luna leaves her umbrella behind. →Luna doesn’t return for days, making "I" doubt her while Ms. Clara insists on trusting her. →"I" doubt Luna while Ms. Clara chooses to trust.→(续写)Luna turns up a few days later. →(续写)Ms. Clara hangs the umbrella as a trust reminder.
6.情感线:"I":curious (about the sign)→concerned (about Luna’s situation)→doubtful (about Luna’s promise)→surprised (at Luna’s return)(续写)→moved (by the power of trust)(续写)
7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:“我” 放学后在 Clara 女士的杂货店帮忙,店里有一块写着 “信任经营 —— 如需可赊账” 的牌子。一天雨天,Luna 忘带钱包却要给妈妈买晚餐食材,Clara 女士同意她先拿走东西,Luna 留下了雨伞但连续几天未归,“我” 对此产生怀疑,而 Clara 女士始终选择相信 Luna。
英文:I help at Ms. Clara's grocery store after school, where there's a sign that says "Trust runs this store — pay later if you need to." One rainy day, Luna forgot her wallet but needed to buy food for her mom's dinner; Ms. Clara let her take the items, and Luna left her umbrella behind but didn't return for days. I doubted Luna, but Ms. Clara insisted on trusting her.
8. 句式:请分别写出符合要求的句式(结合文本内容)
定语从句:Ms. Clara’s grocery store is a small, sunlit space which has wooden floors and shelves.
非谓语:There’s a handwritten sign by the register: “Trust runs this store — pay later if you need to.”
感叹句:What a meaningful sign it is for the store!
同位语:Luna — my name’s Luna — live on Green Street, two blocks over.
完全倒装:By the pickle jar stood Luna’s black umbrella with a blue tape-wrapped handle.
比喻:Some people’s words are as heavy as a rock.
夸张:I checked the umbrella a hundred times that day, wondering if Luna would come back.
9. 本文属于人与他人:the warmth and power of trust between people
情节构造
第一段提示句:A few days later, when I almost forgot that, Luna turned up.
衔接句 1——— 对前面的 "I worried about Luna not returning" 提问 “Luna 出现时的状态如何?”:What was Luna's state when she turned up?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→What did Luna explain about her delay?←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 "Luna turned up" 提问 “Luna 回来做了什么事?”:What did Luna do when she came back?
第二段提示句:Ms. Clara turned with the umbrella and hung it beside the door as a trust reminder.
衔接 3——— 对 "hung it beside the door as a trust reminder" 提问 “"I" 看到这一幕后有什么感悟?”:What insight did "I" gain after seeing this?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→How did this incident change "I"'s understanding of trust?←主题
主题:_The incident makes "I" understand the true meaning of trust advocated by Ms. Clara
段落构思
第一段:A few days later, when I almost forgot that, Luna turned up.→①She was out of breath, holding an envelope tightly in her hand.→②She explained that her mom was ill and she had to take care of her these days, apologizing for the delay.→③Then she handed the money for the rice and eggs to Ms. Clara, repeatedly thanking her for trusting her.
英文:A few days later, when I almost forgot that, Luna turned up. She was out of breath, holding an envelope tightly in her hand. She explained that her mom was ill and she had to take care of her these days, apologizing for the delay. Then she handed the money for the rice and eggs to Ms. Clara, repeatedly thanking her for trusting her.
第二段:Ms. Clara turned with the umbrella and hung it beside the door as a trust reminder.→④I watched the umbrella swaying gently in the wind, feeling ashamed of my previous doubt.→⑤Ms. Clara smiled at me, and I finally understood the true meaning of the sign in the store.→⑥From then on, I also learned to give others more trust, just like Ms. Clara.
英文:Ms. Clara turned with the umbrella and hung it beside the door as a trust reminder. I watched the umbrella swaying gently in the wind, feeling ashamed of my previous doubt. Ms. Clara smiled at me, and I finally understood the true meaning of the sign in the store. From then on, I also learned to give others more trust, just like Ms. Clara.
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