内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I intentionally walked in front of an oncoming car—to avoid a pigeon. As the car came to a sudden stop just a few feet away, I panicked, realizing I almost got killed. “What’s wrong with you?” the driver yelled, cursing angrily. “Do you want to die?”
I knew what was wrong with me. I had a lifelong fear of birds. My mother claimed that, when I was an infant, I started to cry if a bird flew past my baby carriage. During my childhood, I dashed away from bird cages in pet stores. The sound of birds singing outside left me shaking. Well-meaning friends of my parents tried to break my extreme fear by taking their talkative bird from its cage and letting it fly around me. They asked me to allow the bird stay on my arm for one second, two seconds and more to get rid of my fear. However, I’d run away from the room screaming, convinced that their noisy parrot would peck out my eyes.
When I watched Alfred Hitchcock’s The Birds on television, I knew my fear was reasonable. In the plot, ordinary birds tore open roofs and violently attacked people. I always knew that birds would rise up against humanity someday.
One day, while I and my daughter were in the park, she noticed a small sparrow struggling to fly. Instead of running away, she gently picked it up and held it gently in her hands. She spoke softly to it, and after a few minutes, the bird regained its strength and flew away. She looked at me with a smile and said, “Mom, what a lovely bird!”
Somehow, my rooted fear of birds seemed to lessen a little at that moment. Her interaction with the bird gave me a sense of hope and confidence. However, I was still attached to the fantasy that birds would attack me, bite my face, claw at my eyes, and possibly kill me. I wasn’t sure if I could change.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With much embarrassment, I admitted to my daughter the fear in my heart.
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The next day, a bird sang near my window—I knew it was time to try my daughter’s advice.
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文本分析
1.角色:_____________________________
2.视角:第________人称
3.时空线:from "I" having a lifelong fear of birds---______________ ---______________ ---"I" watching daughter help a sparrow and fear lessening a little---______________
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
Why did "I" walk in front of an oncoming car?:______________________________________________
When did "I" start fearing birds according to mother?:____________________________________________
What did parents' friends do to help "I" get rid of the fear?:____________________________________________
Why did "I" think my fear was reasonable after watching The Birds?:____________________________________________
What did daughter do when she saw a struggling sparrow in the park?:____________________________________________
How did "I" feel after watching daughter interact with the sparrow?:____________________________________________
What fantasy was "I" still attached to after that?:____________________________________________
5.情节线:"I" almost get hit by a car to avoid a pigeon due to lifelong fear of birds. →___________________________________ →____________________________________ →"I" watches daughter help a sparrow and fear lessens a little but still doubts change.→(续写)"I" admits fear to daughter embarrassedly. →(续写)"I" decides to try daughter’s advice when hearing a bird sing.
6.情感线:"I":panicked (after almost being hit)→___________→___________→___________(续写)→___________(续写)
7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8. 句式:请分别写出符合要求的句式(结合文本内容)
定语从句:________________________________________________________________
非谓语:__________________________________________________________________
感叹句:__________________________________________________________________
同位语:__________________________________________________________________
完全倒装:________________________________________________________________
比喻:____________________________________________________________________
夸张:____________________________________________________________________
9. 本文属于人与自我:_______________________________________
情节构造
第一段提示句:With much embarrassment, I admitted to my daughter the fear in my heart.
衔接句 1——— 对前面的 "I wasn’t sure if I could change" 提问 “女儿听到后有什么反应?”:What was daughter's reaction when she heard that?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→______?←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 "admitted to my daughter the fear" 提问 “女儿给了‘我’什么建议?”:What advice did daughter give to "I"?
第二段提示句:The next day, a bird sang near my window—I knew it was time to try my daughter’s advice.
衔接 3——— 对 "try my daughter’s advice" 提问 “"I" 具体是怎么做的?”:What did "I" do specifically to try the advice?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→?←主题
主题:___________________________
段落构思
第一段:With much embarrassment, I admitted to my daughter the fear in my heart.→①__________________→②__________________→③__________________
英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二段:The next day, a bird sang near my window—I knew it was time to try my daughter’s advice.→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________
英文:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
文本分析
1.角色:“I”(对鸟类有终身恐惧的母亲)、“my daughter”(善良且勇敢的女儿)、“my mother”(提及 “我” 恐鸟的起因)、“parents' friends”(曾试图帮助 “我” 克服恐惧的人)、“the driver”(被 “我” 突然挡路的司机)
2.视角:第____一____人称
3.时空线:from "I" having a lifelong fear of birds---"I" almost get hit by a car to avoid a pigeon---"I" recalling past experiences of fearing birds and others' failed attempts to help---"I" watching daughter help a sparrow and fear lessening a little---"I" admitting fear to daughter and deciding to try her advice
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
Why did "I" walk in front of an oncoming car?:To avoid a pigeon.
When did "I" start fearing birds according to mother?:When "I" was an infant.
What did parents' friends do to help "I" get rid of the fear?:They took their talkative bird from its cage, let it fly around "I", and asked "I" to let the bird stay on "my" arm.
Why did "I" think my fear was reasonable after watching The Birds?:In the movie, ordinary birds tore open roofs and violently attacked people, which made "I" believe birds would rise up against humanity someday.
What did daughter do when she saw a struggling sparrow in the park?:She gently picked it up, held it softly, spoke to it gently, and let it fly away after it regained strength.
How did "I" feel after watching daughter interact with the sparrow?:"My" rooted fear seemed to lessen a little, and "I" felt a sense of hope and confidence.
What fantasy was "I" still attached to after that?:That birds would attack "me", bite "my" face, claw at "my" eyes, and possibly kill "me".
5.情节线:"I" almost get hit by a car to avoid a pigeon due to lifelong fear of birds. →"I" recalls starting to fear birds as an infant, childhood avoidance of birds, and parents' friends' failed attempts to help. →"I" watches daughter gently help a struggling sparrow, feeling fear lessen slightly but still doubting if "I" can change. →"I" watches daughter help a sparrow and fear lessens a little but still doubts change.→(续写)"I" admits fear to daughter embarrassedly. →(续写)"I" decides to try daughter’s advice when hearing a bird sing.
6.情感线:"I":panicked (after almost being hit)→ashamed (of past fear reactions)→hopeful (after watching daughter)→relieved (after admitting fear)(续写)→courageous (when trying to overcome fear)(续写)
7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:“我” 因终身恐鸟,为躲避鸽子险些被车撞到。“我” 回忆起从小就害怕鸟类,父母的朋友曾试图帮 “我” 克服恐惧却未果,看了电影《群鸟》后 “我” 更觉得恐惧合理。在公园看到女儿温柔救助一只挣扎的麻雀后,“我” 的恐惧略有缓解但仍不确定能否改变。
英文:I almost got hit by a car to avoid a pigeon because of my lifelong fear of birds. I recalled that I had feared birds since infancy, and my parents' friends tried but failed to help me overcome the fear; watching the movie The Birds made me think my fear was reasonable. After seeing my daughter gently help a struggling sparrow in the park, my fear lessened a little, but I still wasn't sure if I could change.
8. 句式:请分别写出符合要求的句式(结合文本内容)
定语从句:The driver who was yelled at me was angry because I almost caused an accident.
非谓语:Realizing I almost got killed, I panicked as the car stopped suddenly.
感叹句:How terrifying those birds in The Birds were!
同位语:My daughter, a kind-hearted little girl, gently picked up the struggling sparrow.
完全倒装:On the ground lay the sparrow that couldn't fly properly.
比喻:My fear of birds was like a heavy chain tying me down for years.
夸张:The sound of birds singing made my heart beat a thousand times a minute.
9. 本文属于人与自我:overcoming personal fear with the help of family
情节构造
第一段提示句:With much embarrassment, I admitted to my daughter the fear in my heart.
衔接句 1——— 对前面的 "I wasn’t sure if I could change" 提问 “女儿听到后有什么反应?”:What was daughter's reaction when she heard that?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→How did daughter comfort "I" and put forward advice?←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 "admitted to my daughter the fear" 提问 “女儿给了‘我’什么建议?”:What advice did daughter give to "I"?
第二段提示句:The next day, a bird sang near my window—I knew it was time to try my daughter’s advice.
衔接 3——— 对 "try my daughter’s advice" 提问 “"I" 具体是怎么做的?”:What did "I" do specifically to try the advice?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→How did "I" feel after taking action to overcome fear?←主题
主题:_The daughter's kindness and encouragement help "I" take the first step to overcome the fear of birds
段落构思
第一段:With much embarrassment, I admitted to my daughter the fear in my heart.→①She listened quietly, then hugged me softly instead of laughing.→②She said birds were just little creatures that needed care, not something to fear.→③She suggested I start by listening to bird songs calmly instead of running away.
英文:With much embarrassment, I admitted to my daughter the fear in my heart. She listened quietly, then hugged me softly instead of laughing. She said birds were just little creatures that needed care, not something to fear. She suggested I start by listening to bird songs calmly instead of running away.
第二段:The next day, a bird sang near my window—I knew it was time to try my daughter’s advice.→④I took a deep breath, closed my eyes slightly, and let the clear song enter my ears.→⑤To my surprise, I didn’t shake; instead, I found the sound a little pleasant.→⑥I smiled, realizing I had finally taken the first step to beat my fear.
英文:The next day, a bird sang near my window—I knew it was time to try my daughter’s advice. I took a deep breath, closed my eyes slightly, and let the clear song enter my ears. To my surprise, I didn’t shake; instead, I found the sound a little pleasant. I smiled, realizing I had finally taken the first step to beat my fear.
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