专题14 外貌描写（课件） - 2026年高考英语读后续写支架式讲练精美课件

读 后 续 写 专题十四 外貌描写 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 01 描写方法 contents 02 词汇高级 04 语料积累 03 句型高级 01 描写方法 例：Threads of silver ran through his beard and the hair at his temples. 缕缕银丝已爬上了他的胡须和鬓发。 1. 可写人物给人的总体印象，也可以抓住人物重要的外貌特征或者性格特点进行描述 01 描写方法 例：His eyes are deep-set because he has worked till midnight for a long time. 他的眼睛深陷，因为他近段时间经常工作到深夜。 2.可以具体描述人物的五官、着装，甚至可以配上动作描述 01 描写方法 例：Alice is 20 years old. Her hair is jet-blacked and straight. She often smiles brightly and she always has a twinkle in her eyes. Because of her kindness, we all like her very much. 爱丽丝 20 岁了。她有一头乌黑的直发。她时常灿烂地微笑，她的眼睛里总是闪烁着光芒。由于她的善良，我们都很喜欢她。 3. 在描写人物片段时，可写你对人物印象最深的一两点，再加上一两句人物评价 The first day I met Bryce Loski, I flipped(怦然心动的). Honestly, one look at him and I became a lunatic(疯狂的人). It‘s his eyes. Something in his eyes. They’re blue, and framed in(框进) the blackness of his lashes(睫毛), they’re dazzling(耀眼的). Absolutely breathtaking. I also remember that Bryce was wearing polo shirt, which I thought was really cute. Really nice. -----from Flipped 《怦然心动》 To show, not to tell eyes wearing details 02 词汇高级 Harry is a smart boy with a pair of round glasses. Mulan is a beautiful and famous woman in the history. Compared with other basketball players, Jordan is special in his looks. intelligent his appearance charming/attractive teenager/adolescent celebrated figure Tip 1: Use new words 02 词汇高级  Jordan has black skin and a bald head(光头). 复合形容词：形容词 — 身体部位+ed Mulan is a beauty with long hair. Mulan has a pair of determined eyes. Harry is a cute boy with a round face. Jordan is black-skinned and bald-headed. Mulan is a long-haired beauty. Mulan is determined-eyed. Harry is a cute and round-faced boy. Tip 2: Use Word-building 02 词汇高级 Tip 3:Use specific words clothes Mulan is wearing a piece of red clothing in a battle. Jordan wears Bull clothes which have the number 23 on them. Harry is dressed in big black clothes. a piece of red___________; close-fitting(紧身的)_____________; tailored(定制的) basketball _______（背心）/shirt long and loose robe(长袍); black cloak(披风)/coat; grey________; a__________ garment army uniform vest sweater tie 02 词汇高级 Tip 4:Use phrases Jordan is a tall and strong basketball player. Mulan was over 20 when she joined the army. is tall in________(高度) is of strong ________(体格) was_____________(在某人二十几岁时) height build in her twenties 以下为小说片段描写，一位年轻的妻子等待海员丈夫的归来，请你利用合理想象补充文章内容。 Mary, ____________________(三十几岁的家庭主妇), was looking forward to her husband. She was____________(圆脸) and has a __________（苗条身材).She was in her ____________(磨损的灰色大衣) and wore a ________(围巾). She rushed out of the door and her face lit up with a ___________(灿烂笑容). The ship was approaching. She was pleased beyond description and her tears ___________(滚下) her face. Exercise 1 a housewife in her thirties round-faced slim figure worn brown coat scarf broad smile rolled down 03 句型高级 ①Harry had a thin face, knobbly knees(膝盖瘦得凸起),black hair, and bright green eyes.②He wore round glasses held together with a lot of Scotch tape(透明胶带)because all the times Dudley had punched(用拳头打) him on the nose.③The only thing Harry liked about his own appearance was a very thin scar on his forehead which was shaped like a bolt of lightning(闪电状的). --------from Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone 《哈利波特与魔法石》 交替使用长短句，调节叙事节奏 ①短-②长-③长 学生习作：①Harry is a little boy with brown curly hair. ②A scar on his forehead is hidden by his short hair. ③He wears a pair of glasses, a grey sweater and a black coat. ④A red tie makes him more handsome. ①短-②短-③短-④短 03 句型高级 原因状语从句 He wore round glasses held together with a lot of Scotch tape because all the times Dudley had punched him on the nose. Tip 1:Add background information The only thing Harry liked about his own appearance was a very thin scar on his forehead that was shaped like a bolt of lightning. Tip 2: Use rhetorical devices(修辞手法) 比喻 He wore round glasses held together with a lot of Scotch tape …The only thing Harry liked … was a very thin scar …that was shaped like a bolt of lightning. 非谓语动词作定语 定语从句 Tip 3: Use grammar techniques 04 语料积累 play music after leaving school TIPS: Pay attention to the words and the action in the play. a music lover “Yes, but I’m not interested in law..” honest “I want to focus on my band and have a career in music.” passionate (nervously approaching the table) sensitive Words Words Action 04 语料积累 want his son to be a lawyer a respectable lawyer stubborn Stop day dreaming! (ignoring Grandfather’s words) straight Words Words Action impatient 04 语料积累 Height and build(身高和体型) thin,slim heavy,fat fit, well-built 04 语料积累 Height and build(身高和体型) well-built plump 丰满的 圆润的 thin skinny lean(消瘦的) fat stout(矮胖的) slim slender(纤细的) 04 语料积累 Height and build(身高和体型) a graceful figure 优美的身段 a shapely figure 匀称的体形 a skinny figure 瘦削的身材 a slim figure 苗条的身材 average build 中等身材 a well-built man 身材魁梧的人 a well-developed figure 发育良好的身体 as skinny as a skeleton 骨瘦如柴 04 语料积累 Height and build(身高和体型) 1. 他不仅高而且强壮。 2. 我的爸爸是位又高又帅的中年人。 3. 她那亭亭玉立的身影，给我留下了深刻的印象。 4. 他的母亲望着他那瘦弱的身影消失在街道上。 5. 她骨瘦如柴。 He is not only tall but also strong. My father is a tall and handsome middle-aged man. Her slim and graceful figure left me a deep impression. His mother watched his thin figure disappear into the street. She is as skinny as a skeleton. 04 语料积累 Face (容貌) round oval long square 04 语料积累 Face (容貌) big round eyes small eyes oval eyes wearing glasses short-sighted 近视的 04 语料积累 Face (容貌) straight nose hooked nose (鹰钩鼻) long nose small nose turned-up nose (朝天鼻) 04 语料积累 Face (容貌) big mouth small mouth full/thick lips curved lips thin lips 04 语料积累 Face (容貌) light/white/fair skin(白皮肤) tanned/yellow skin（黄皮肤） black/dark skin（黑皮肤） cheek(脸颊) square jaw（宽下巴）freckle（雀斑） 04 语料积累 Face (容貌) curly/wavy hair 卷发 a high forehead 高额头 a pointed chin 尖下巴 a flat nose 扁平的鼻子 watery/swollen eyes 水汪汪的/肿胀的眼睛 even teeth 整齐的牙齿 bushy/thin eyebrows 浓眉/细眉 thin/thick lips 薄/厚嘴唇 a thin/long/square face 瘦脸/长脸/方脸 a pair of sharp eyes 一双敏锐的眼睛 04 语料积累 Face (容貌) 1. 他圆脸，高额头。 2. 当他笑的时候，我们可以看到他整齐的牙齿。 3. 她哭得两眼又红又肿。 4. 她有一双敏锐的眼睛。 5. 在她布满皱纹的脸庞下，仍有一颗爱美的心。 He has a round face with a high forehead. When he laughs, we can see his even teeth. Her eyes were red and swollen from crying. She has a pair of sharp eyes. There is still a heart of loving beauty under her wrinkled face. 04 语料积累 Clothes (衣着) neat 仪容整洁的 tailored 定制的 loose 宽松的 tight-fitting 紧身的 smart 衣着讲究的 well-dressed 衣着讲究的 poorly-dressed 衣着寒酸的 ragged/in rags 衣衫褴褛的 04 语料积累 Clothes (衣着) 1. 最年长的那个人系着白色的领带。 2. 他把棕色外套搭在肩上。 3. 她的鞋很旧并且打着补丁。 4. 孩子们穿着破衣烂衫。 5. 他通常衣着讲究。 The eldest is wearing a white tie. He threw his brown coat over his shoulder. Her shoes are very old and patched. The children were dressed in rags. He’s usually well-dressed. 读 后 续 写 Thank You！ 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 Lavf58.51.100 $