专题11 动作描写（课件） - 2026年高考英语读后续写支架式讲练精美课件

读 后 续 写 专题十一 动作描写 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 01 精选动词 contents 02 构造动作链 04 描写生动 03 编织动作面 01 精选动词 关键字 关键字 roar sigh swear/curse beg 关于说的动作 01 精选动词 关键字 关键字 1.“Help! Help!” She said . 2. “I’m sorry,” He said, afraid to be heard by others. 3. “W-w-what?”She said. 4. “Never mind. Just try your best, ”she said. 5. “Welcome back,”he said. murmured/whispered shouted/yelled/cried stammered comforted cheered Replace the underlined words 关于说的动作 01 精选动词 Exercise 关键字 关键字 cry/yell/shout/ scream/call out喊叫 exclaim惊叫 roar咆哮 murmur 嘟囔 whisper 耳语 sob 啜泣 sigh 叹息 tease / laugh at / make fun of 取笑 blame/ scold 责备 complain 抱怨 curse/swear 咒骂 beg 恳求 cheer 欢呼 promise 承诺 admit 承认 confess 坦白 comfort 安慰 大声说 小声说 带情绪的说 stammer 结结巴巴地说 answer/reply 回答说 deny 否认说 remark 评论说 explain 解释说 ask/question 疑问说 advise/suggest 建议说 order 下命令 关于说的动作 01 精选动词 I came to the restaurant on Saturday morning. As I was staring at the strange environment curiously, a woman cast an eye over me. “I’m the new waitress!” I explained immediately. To my surprise, the woman rolled her eyes on me. 关于看的动作 01 精选动词 see/watch/look/ spot / notice/find glance at glimpse cast an eye over take a quick look at peep / peek 窥视 steal a glance at偷看 spy on roll one’s eyes 翻白眼 stare at gaze at peer at fix one’s eyes on 盯着 wink眨眼 be all eyes全神贯注 look sb. in the eye glare at examine 关于看的动作 01 精选动词 关于走的动作 It turned out she was the other waitress. At this time, the owner came out from the kitchen and told me patiently what I needed to do. While I walked to take the customers’ order, the other waitress approached me, asking me to finish the washing up that she didn’t do last night. 01 精选动词 关于走的动作 approach tiptoe踮起脚尖走 hobble 跛行 stagger 摇摇晃晃地走 dash / rush inch 缓慢移动 pick oneself up walk away with heavy steps quicken one’s pace pace back and forth slip 02 构造动作链 tear(tore) up the package 撕开包装 squeeze out one strip 挤出一根 take a big bite 大咬一口 02 构造动作链 smell the hot strips 闻到味道 break into my room 闯入房间 scold me 责备我 动作链：把结果性的动作，分解成更细致的连贯性的微动作，使动作结果过程化。 02 构造动作链 She dashed forward, jumped up and hugged the boy tightly. 句式: Sb did A (, did B) and did C dash forward jump up hug ①Sb did A (, did B) and did C 02 构造动作链 took off the clothes The boys rushed to the lake, + Describe：男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏。 jump = + 冲向湖边 脱掉衣服 跳入湖中 and jumped into the water. A B C 即时训练： ①Sb did A (, did B) and did C 02 构造动作链 She dashed forward, + hug = + 冲向前 蹲下 抱住孩子 A B C knelt down her arms. and gathered her son into Describe：她抱住了孩子。 ①Sb did A (, did B) and did C 02 构造动作链 他弯下腰，轻轻地拎(lift off)起猫咪来，踱步(pace)到了火车出口。 He______________, carefully___________ the cat, and________ _to the exit of the train. bent down lifted off paced ①Sb did A (, did B) and did C 02 构造动作链 他停下马(pull up)，看了(take a look at)下敌人，便带领着军队从山谷上冲了下来。 He______________ the horse,______________ the enemy, and _____thousands of armed troops to dash from the valley pulled up took a look at led ①Sb did A (, did B) and did C 02 构造动作链 ①Sb did A (, did B) and did C I ______ my clothes hurriedly, ____ my bag and ______ to school this morning. 场景示例1： 我早上去上学。 I went to school this morning. put on took rushed 02 构造动作链 He _______ the taxi, ____ in with the suitcase and ____ the driver, “Go to the police station, please.” 场景示例2： 他坐出租车去警局。 He went to the police station by taxi. stopped got told ①Sb did A (, did B) and did C 02 构造动作链 ②主+谓, doing sth./Doing sth, 主＋谓 Practice She rushed happily into the rain, singing and dancing. She rushed happily into the rain. She sang and danced. 合并为一句 02 构造动作链 ②主+谓, doing sth./Doing sth, 主＋谓 等了三个小时, 他被告知票被卖完了。 动作1 动作2 后发生的动作---用谓语动词 主动且先发生用非谓语动词表示（having done） Having waited for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. 同一主语动作有先后关系时用——Having done sth(先), 主+谓(后) queue 02 构造动作链 ②主+谓, doing sth./Doing sth, 主＋谓 孩子感动哭了，拥抱妈妈。 孩子被感动 ＋ 孩子哭了 The child was moved by his mothers’ words. The child began to cry. ______(move)by the story, the child began to cry,______ (hug) his mother surprised. 动作与主语逻辑关系为被动时 Moved ＋ 拥抱妈妈 The child hugged his mother. 动作与主语逻辑关系为主动时 hugging 动作链： 找动作： 02 构造动作链 ②主+谓, doing sth./Doing sth, 主＋谓 The old man ____ under the sunset, _______ the newspaper and ________ to the radio. 场景示例1：老人坐在夕阳下。（想一想：这个动作后面会有哪些动作？） The old man sat under the sunset . Sentence pattern ： Sb. 谓语 A, 非谓语B-ing and 非谓语 C-ing sat reading listening 02 构造动作链 ②主+谓, doing sth./Doing sth, 主＋谓 ______________ for a long time, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.  场景示例2：他没有买到票。（想一想：这个动作前面会有哪些动作？） He didn't get a ticket . Sentence pattern ：having done 表现动作先后关系 Having queued 02 构造动作链 ②主+谓, doing sth./Doing sth, 主＋谓 _______ by the horrible story, the boy burst out crying. 场景示例3：这个男孩哭了。（想一想：这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？） The boy cried. Sentence pattern ：过去分词凸显被动 Scared 02 构造动作链 ③Done，句子主干，doing ①Encouraged by the teacher's words, Li Hua _______ his hand _____, ___________, “ I volunteer.” ②Hearing the teacher's words, Tom _________________ his hand , ___________, “ Ignore me.” 心理 肢体 语言 raised high answering hesitated to raise whispering 02 构造动作链 ③Done，句子主干，doing 她向前冲过去，跪下来，把儿子抱在怀里。 She dashed forward, knelt down and held her son into her arms. 她抱住儿子。（想一想：抱住儿子，这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？） She hugged her son. 02 构造动作链 ④句子主干，doing and doing. She rushed into the rain happily, singing and dancing. 心理 肢体 肢体 她开心地冲到雨中，又唱又跳。 02 构造动作链 ⑤Doing, 句子主干，doing. 肢体 肢体 肢体 心理 Standing on the grass, they held hands together and looked up into the sky, feeling the unique beauty of the night sky. 站在草地上，他们牵着手一起仰望星空，感受着夜空独特的美景。 02 构造动作链 ⑥With复合结构，句子主干，（doing) 肢体 肢体 面部 肢体 心理 With a bunch of flowers in her hands , she stood beside the sea and looked down at the flowers with a smile, wondering what to do next. 手里拿着一束花，她站在海边面带微笑低头看着花，不知道接下来该做什么。 02 构造动作链 ⑥With复合结构，句子主干，（doing) Observe and find out the structure: 1、She sat by the window, with a cup of coffee growing cold in the hand. 2、With all things bought ，they went to the park. 3、With much homework to finish, he has no time to play. 即时训练： 她锁上了门，离开了房间。 With the door locked, she left the room. 主动 被动 未做 ①主谓... , with+sb/sth+非谓语（doing/done/to do) ; ②With+ sb/sth+非谓语（doing/done/to do), 主谓…… with + 宾语 + 宾补表达肢体动作  1. 头部动作:  with one's head + 过去分词/现在分词/形容词  With his head lowered, ...（他低着头）    With her head resting on her hand,...（她手托着头） With his head tilted back,...（他仰着头）       With his head bent , ... (他头低着) With head held up high , ... (头高高抬起) 2. 眼睛动作: with one's eyes + 过去分词/形容词 With eyes closed, ...（闭着眼睛）             With eyes fixed on , ...（盯着...） With eyes wide open, ...（睁大眼睛）     With eyes burning with fire , ... (眼睛因愤怒而发光) With eyes shining with pleasure , ...(眼睛因快乐而闪耀) With eyes wide with horror , ...(眼睛因恐惧而睁大) With eyes filled with / full of..., ...(眼睛充满着)   With eyes sparkling/glowing/shining/glistening with..., ...(眼睛因......发光) 3. 手部动作:  with one's hands + 过去分词/现在分词 With his hands crossed, ...（他双手交叉）      With her hands trembling, ...（她双手颤抖） With hands shaking, ...（手颤抖）             With hands waving , ...（手挥动） With hands sweating , ...（手出汗）            With hands clenched , ...（手紧握） 31 4. 脚步/腿部动作: with one's legs/feet + 过去分词/现在分词 With his legs crossed, ...（他跷着腿）          With her feet tapping, ...（她脚尖轻敲着）   With knees trembling, ...（他膝盖发抖）       With legs trembling , ... (腿颤抖) With legs kicking , ...(腿踢动)                  With legs frozen , ... (腿静止) With legs rooted to the spot , ... (腿一动不动) 5. 身体姿态:  with one's body + 过去分词/形容词/介词短语  With his body bent forward, ...（他身体前倾）   With shoulders hunched, ...（弓着肩）  With her arms folded, ...（她双臂交叉） 6. 嘴巴：with one's mouth + 过去分词/形容词    With her mouth open, ...（她张大嘴巴）  7. 手指： with one's fingers + 现在分词       With fingers drumming on the table, ...(他手指敲打着桌子） 8. 脸：with face +doing With face turning pale,...（脸变苍白）With face burning hot,... （脸火辣辣的） 9. 心：with heart +doing   With heart beating/pounding fiercely, ...(心剧烈跳动)   03 编织动作面 动作面 “Don't go across the pond today, children," she said one morning, her brows frowned. She then kissed them and bade them goodbye.“It is beginning to melt. It can be dangerous.” 面部表情 语言描写 语言描写 动作描写 动作面：将动作和语言、面部表情、情绪、心理、环境、肢体动作等结合，使描述更具画面感。 Tom举手发言 Encouraged by his teacher, Tom raised his hand , saying, “I volunteer”. 句式: Done…, 主句, doing 心理 encouraged 肢体动作 raise his hand 语言 “I volunteer” Tom惊恐大叫 面部表情 肢体动作 语言 eyes widen/tears roll down tremble/run away “help” Widening his eyes in horror, Tom ran away, screaming, “help”. 句式: Doing…, 主句, doing 03 编织动作面 Tom惊恐大叫 面部表情 肢体动作 语言 eyes widen/tears roll down tremble/run away “help” His eyes widening in horror, Tom ran away, screaming, “help”. 句式: 独立主格, 主句, doing 03 编织动作面 03 编织动作面 他们又唱又跳 肢体动作 sing and dance 情绪 delighted/excited They were delighted, singing and dancing. 句式: 主句, doing… and doing… 03 编织动作面 face eyes mouth eyebrow light up/brighten 亮 flush 变红 pale 变白 raise one’s eyebrows 扬眉 frown ones eyebrows 皱眉 stare at 盯着 glare at 怒视 glance at 匆匆一瞥 wink 眨眼 widen one’s eyes 睁大眼睛 narrow one’s eyes 眯起眼睛 fill with tears 充满泪水 tears roll down 眼泪流下 grin 露齿笑 murmur低语 chuckle 咯咯地笑 面部表情 03 编织动作面 肢体动作 head lower/bend one’s head 低下头 nod one’s head 点头 shake one’s head 摇头 scratch one’s head 挠头 hand pat 轻拍 grab 抓 wave挥 wipe 擦 pull 拉 push 推 clap 鼓掌 embrace/hug 拥抱 leg walk 走 wander 漫步 run 跑 dash 猛冲 chase 追逐 flee 逃跑 kick 踢 jump 跳 tiptoe 用脚尖走 kneel down 蹲下 03 编织动作面 心理情绪 03 编织动作面 心理情绪 04 描写生动 delightedly, excitedly... angrily, anxiously... sadly, heart-brokenly,... surprisedly,... quickly, bravely.... Emotion Movement 1) Add adverbs（副词） 04 描写生动 Watch and compete anxiously tightly happily Carefully properly normally politely proudly softly warmly slowly cheerfully fast well calmly hard bravely aimlessly immediately fortunately seriously loudly quietly exactly deeply silently easily especially excitedly naturally suddenly 04 描写生动 surprise Nezha looked at his mom sadness anger fear in high spirits in 2) Add prepositional phrases（介词短语） 04 描写生动 关键字 关键字 joy/ excitement/ satisfaction terror He looks up with anger awkwardness/embarrassment with/in+emotional noun（情感名词）： 关键字 关键字 in surprise/sorrow/horror 04 描写生动 Suddenly, A moving dot(点) on the horizon was spotted. As it drew nearer, Jane saw it clearly. "The helicopter,"Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area. She waved her yellow blouse desperately to it and yelled at the helicopter with full-strength. To her great joy, this time she was spotted. Soon afterwards, the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped out. The moment Tom's eyes fell upon her, Jane threw herself into his arms. "Honey, Never will I leave you again. "Jane sobbed in tears. The reunited couple hugged each other tightly. in+n.：in terror/excitement/ shock/ sorrow/ in a low(weak/sweet) voice with+情感名词：with delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger/fear with +身体部位：with its sharp eyes/ her shaky hand/her pale lips adverbs: tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/ desperately/fiercely(fight) violently/swiftly 04 描写生动 Suddenly, A moving dot(点) on the horizon was spotted. Exhausted but hopeful, Jane jumped to her feet to catch a clear sight of it."The helicopter,"Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area, waving her yellow blouse desperately and yelling at the helicopter with excitement. This time she was spotted, which made her feel more delighted. Eyes brimming with tears, Jane jumped off the rock and rushed towards Tom like a flying arrow, hugging tightly in his arms, “please never leave me alone!" 形容词作状语 (修饰句子主语) 分词作状语（注意分词与逻辑主语的关系） 定语从句 独立主格（名词/代词 + doing/done/ to do /n./adj./adv./介词短语） 读 后 续 写 Thank You！ 高考英语读后续写支架式训练 $