Unit 3 写作指导写一篇关于体育比赛的短文-【志鸿优化训练】2026-2027学年高中英语必修选择性第一册 (外研版)

e英语|Unit3 Faster,,higher,stronger 续 表 项目 意义 例句 U. The instruction manual completely defeated me. 生义 Staying late at the office to U, discuss shorter working hours rather defeats the object of the exercise. 2.seize 项目 意义 例句 熟义 U. She tried to seize the knife from him. . They seized the airport in a surprise attack. 生义 v. A large quantity of drugs was seized during the raid. 之重点句式·多维剖析 S0..hat..如此…以至于… 【教材原句】I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs would burst！ 我也陷入了兴奋中，拼命欢呼，以至于我的肺都 要爆了！ ()s0.that”意为如此…以至于…”， 引导结果状语从句。其句型基本结构为： so十形容词/副词十that.. so十形容词十a(n)十可数名词单数十that.. so+many/much/few/little(少)+名词+that., (2)“such.that.”意为“如此…以至于”， 引导结果状语从句。其句型基本结构为： 'such十形容词十不可数名词+that. such十形容词十可数名词复数十that.. such十a(n)十形容词十可数名词单数十that.: 写作 写一篇关于体育比赛的短文 ©感知·文体常识 描写体育比赛类文章属于记叙文的范畴，需 58 名师点津在“so..that..”和“such.. that..”结构中，当so/such和所修饰的词放在 句首时，主句要部分倒装。 【佳句背诵】So nervous was he that he could hear his heart beating wildly..[读后续写之心 理描写] 他是如此紧张以至于能听到自己的心在狂跳。 【即学即练】单句语法填空/一句多译 DBeijing is developing fast that you can never imagine what it will be like next year. 2The dough figurine he made was beautiful that we couldn't wait to have a try ourselves ③接受这个奖的时候，我是如此激动以至于热 泪盈眶。[读后续写之情感描写] →When I took up the award； tears welled up in my eyes. When I took up the award, that tears welled up in my eyes.(用倒装句升级) ④他为这所大学做出了巨大贡献，以至于新图书 馆以他的名字命名。[话题写作之人物介绍] →He made the new library was named after him. the new library was named after him.(用倒 装句升级) 指导 要将自己所看到的场面按比赛前、比赛中和比赛 后的顺序进行写作，结尾还要写出自己的感受 文章以第一、三人称为主，常用一般过去时对过往 事件进行描述。 【篇章结构】 段落 内容 人称和时态 介绍比赛项目，举行的时 开头段 间、地点和参与人物 人称：以第一、 三人称为主 详细介绍比赛过程，即所看 主体段 时态：以一般 到、所听到的情景 过去时为主 结尾段抒发自己的感受 ®牢记·写作素材 (一)增色词汇 l.get to the final line到达终点线 2.win a gold medal获得金牌 3.break the record打破纪录 4.win the championship获得冠军 5.the most valuable player最有价值球员 6.inspire a lot of people激励着许多人 (二)精彩句型 1.I watched the final of the 4X100-meter relay at our sports meeting held on Monday. 在星期一举行的运动会上，我观看了4×100米 接力的决赛。 2.Our school had a sports meeting,which lasted for three days 我们学校举行了一场运动会，持续了三天。 3.With the morning sun casting a golden glow over the field,the school sports meeting took place as planned. 晨曦洒在田野上，学校运动会如期举行。 4.We all gathered early on the playground,waiting for the exciting moment. 我们都早早聚集在操场上，等待着激动人心的 时刻。 5.We all stood up,waved our hands and started cheering and shouting. 我们都站起来，挥舞双手，开始欢呼和尖叫。 ©示例·写作步骤 【写作要求】 上周你校举办了运动会，请你介绍一下自己 参加运动会项目的场景。内容包括： 写作指导 1.时间和地点； 2.令人难忘的场景； 3.你的收获和感悟。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 【审题谋篇】 体裁 记叙文 人称 第一、三人称为主 时态 一般过去时为主 话题 运动会场景 1.介绍运动会时间、地点（显性要点） 2.具体介绍运动会中令人难忘的场景 (显性要点) 要点 1.参加运动会同学们的感受（隐性 要点) 2.你从这次经历中获得的感悟（显性 要点) 第一段：简要介绍运动会的时间、地点； 第二段：具体介绍运动会中让你印象 框架 深刻的事情； 第三段：概括你对这次运动会的印象。 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1) n.锦标赛 (2) n.欢呼，喝彩声 v.欢呼，加油 (3) v.拥抱 (4) n.坚持不懈，不屈不挠 (5) 站起来 (6) 幸福的眼泪 59· c英语|Unit3 Faster,,higher,stronger 2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①在我们一年一度的体育比赛中，我很幸运 地跑了4×100米接力赛的第一棒。 the first leg of 4X100-metre relay at our annual sports tournament. ②站在起跑线上，等着发令枪响，我几乎能听 到自己的心跳声。 waiting for the starting gun,and I could almost ③当我把接力棒传给第二名时，我听到了疯 狂的欢呼和叫喊。 When I passed the baton to the second runner, I heard ④人群站了起来，欢呼声更加响亮了。 The crowd and their cheering became even louder. ⑤因为我们的坚持和勇敢，我们赢得了同学 们的钦佩和喝彩。 We won our classmates'admiration and cheers (2)句式升级 ⑥用分词作状语改写句②。 ⑦用倒装句改写句③。 ⑧用with的复合结构或独立主格结构改写 句④。 ⑨用强调句改写句⑤。 60 【妙笔成篇】 注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。 I针对训练1 假定你是高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim 听说你校上周举办了运动会，特发来邮件询问相 关情况。请你用英语给他回信，内容包括： 1.简要介绍此次运动会； 2.讲述运动会上感动你的瞬间。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, I am delighted to know you are interested in the sports meeting at my school. Yours, Li Huaintense 【直击高考】cooperation 【巧用举一反三】1.immediately 2.absolutely 3.widely 4.safely 重点短语 【教材设题】1.gone wild2.paid off 3.fought their way;ups and downs 【直击高考】1.paid off2.contribute significantly to personal growth 重点句式 【教材设题】so difficult and painful for me that ⊙重难探究·能力素养全提升 高频词汇·讲练互动 1.①into ②onto③a ④burst out laughing 5burst into laughter 2.①assigned②to carry③assignments Dassigned each of us a holiday task 5assigned a holiday task to each of us 3.①off②back③for④pay off 4.①from②by③was seized 4seized their schoolbags 多义词汇·自主练透 I.①B②A③C Ⅱ.1.打败失败使困惑，难住阻挠， 挫败 2.抓住，捉住夺取，控制没收，扣押 重点句式·多维剖析 ①so②so③I was so excited that;so excited was I 4such a great contribution to the university that;Such a great contribution did he make to the university that 写作指导 示例·写作步骤 【遣词造句】 1.(1)tournament (2)cheer (3)embrace 30 (4)perseverance (5)rise to one's feet (6)tears of happiness 2.①I was lucky to run②stood on the starting line;hear my own heart beating ③the wild cheering and shouting④rose to their feet 5for our perseverance and bravery 6Standing on the starting line and waiting for the starting gun,I could almost hear my own heart beating. DOnly when I passed the baton to the second runner did I hear the wild cheering and shouting. 8The crowd rose to their feet,(with) their cheering becoming even louder. 9It was for our perseverance and bravery that we won our classmates'admiration and cheers. 【妙笔成篇】 Last week,I was lucky to run the first leg of 4 X 100-metre relay at our annual sports tournament, Standing on the starting line and waiting for the starting gun,I could almost hear my own heart beating.Then the gun sounded and I ran as fast as possible.Only when I passed the baton to the second runner did I hear the wild cheering and shouting.The crowd rose to their feet,their cheering becoming even louder.Our team had won the race,and we embraced tightly with tears of happiness. It was for our perseverance and bravery that we won our classmates'admiration and cheers. 针对训练 Dear Jim, I am delighted to know you are interested in the sports meeting at my school.I am writing to share with you some relevant details about it. Lasting two days,the annual sports meeting was held on the school playground last weekend, when the weather was pleasant and mild.There was a wide range of sports events,among which track and field made up a greater part. During the sports meeting,all the athletes spared no effort to compete for the honor of their classes.Besides the competitive games,some wonderful performances were put on as well, adding happiness and excitement to the atmosphere. In addition,what touched me most was the class relay races where each participant cooperated and tried their best to dash towards the finishing line. We really had great fun during the sports meeting.Do you have the similar school sports event?Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Unit 4 Meeting the muse 激情早读·拓视野 【做练习】1.C2.略 Section A Starting out Understanding ideas Part 1 Reading comprehension 第一步速读课文理清脉络 Task 1 C Task 2 1.toys 2.folk tales 3.musical traditions 4.Western influences 5.style 6.belief 第二步 精读课文领悟细节 Task 3 Activity 1 1.C2.D 3( Activity 2 3.D4.A Activity 3 5.B6.C Task 4 1.略2.略 第三步深读课文融会提能 Task 5 1.sculptures 2.inspiration 3.passed 4.composer 5.for 6.has been using 7.winning 8.which 9.especially 10.to bring Part 2 Language points ©基础落实·必备知识全过关 重点单词 【教材设题】1.quote2.folk tales 【直击高考】composition 【巧用举一反三】l.explanation 2.organizations 3.recognition 重点短语 【教材设题】1.be recognized by2.came to life 【直击高考】l.has been passed down through the ages 2.on display 3.agree with him 重点句式 【教材设题】turning to his children's toys 【直击高考】inspired ⊙重难探究·能力素养全提升 高频词汇·讲练互动 1.①on②down③through④by 5not only did we pass our love and friendship to others 2.①for②compositions ③composer 多义词汇·自主练透 I.①B②C③A Ⅱ.引文，引语引述；引用报价举例