Unit 2 写作指导写一篇关于个人经历的短文-【志鸿优化训练】2025-2026学年高中英语必修选择性第一册 (外研版)

>英语|Unit2 Onwards and upwards he had been turned to stone.[读后续写之人物 描写] 男孩聚精会神地听着，好像他被变成了石头。 (I)asif/as though引导的表语从句和方式状语从 句中常用虚拟语气，与现在事实相反用一般过去 时，与过去事实相反用过去完成时，表示将来的可 能性不大时用“would/might/could十动词原形”。 但如果从句中所陈述的情况与事实相符或很可能 实现，也可用陈述语气 (2)asif后还常跟动词不定式短语、介词短语 【即学即练】单句语法填空/语境微写作 DThey can perform the same tasks with a wave of their hands as if they (have)an implanted chip. 2Hearing the terrible news,he felt as if the whole world (fall) 写作 写一篇关于个人经历的短文 ©感知·文体常识 描写个人经历的文章属于记叙文写作，主要 讲述给自己留下深刻印象的一次有趣、悲伤或有 意义的经历。在进行这类文章写作时，可以从事 件的时间、起因、经过、结果及个人感想等方面对 某次经历进行叙述。写作中可按时间变化、地点 转换或事件发展为线索进行记叙。 【篇章结构】 段落 内容 人称和时态 开头段 交代事件的背景 人称：以第 叙述事件的发生、经过和 人称为主 主体段 结果 时态：以一般 结尾段 发表感想，表达愿望等 过去时为主 ⊙牢记·写作素材 (一)增色词汇 1.suffer from遭受 2.lose interest in失去兴趣 。40 apart on him.[读后续写之情感描写] ③我激动得想都不敢想，把这条珍贵的项链搂 在胸口，好像小偷会偷一样。[读后续写之心 理描写] Too thrilled for a second thought,I cuddled the treasured necklace against my chest ④树林里一片漆黑。好像每丛灌木后面都有一 头凶猛的野兽。她越想越害怕。[读后续写 之场景描写] It was dark in the woods.It seemed behind every bush.The more she thought of this,the more frightened she was. 指导 3.an unforgettable experience一次难忘的经历 4.turn down拒绝 5.adapt to适应 6.keep in mind记住 7.make a difference起作用，有影响 8.benefit from从.中受益；受益于 (二)精彩句型 1.Last Sunday,when my parents went out shop- ping,a good idea occurred to me:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? 上周日，我父母出去购物时，我突然想到一个主 意：为什么不彻底打扫一下房间呢？ 2.Last Sunday,witnessed an exciting party where everyone was dressed to the nines and the atmosphere was electric. 上周日，我们见证了一场激动人心的聚会，每个 人都打扮得漂漂亮亮，气氛一片热烈。 3.There are many wonderful experiences I am proud of in my life,of which one impresses me most. 在我的生活中有很多精彩的经历，其中一个最 让我印象深刻。 4.I put all the books,newspapers and other things in place,then wiped the dust off all the furniture,and at last swept the floors. 我把所有的书、报纸和其他东西都有条理地放 好，然后把家具上的灰尘都擦掉了，最后擦了 地板。 5.Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I determined to create a watercolor painting of the pond in the park,I determined to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by vibrant flowers and solemn trees. 受到奇妙风景的启发，我决定画一幅公园池塘 水彩画，画的亮点是一个宁静的湖泊，湖泊周围 是生机勃勃的花朵和庄严的树木。 6.Through this activity,we know the importance of teamwork and communication in achieving common goals. 通过这次活动，我们了解了团队合作和沟通在 实现共同目标方面的重要性。 7.What really counts is the enjoyment the match itself brought us and the awareness of team- work it promoted in us. 重要的是比赛本身带来的享受和团队意识的 提高。 ©示例·写作步骤 【写作要求】 假定你是李华，曾经在一所特殊教育学校做 过助教，请根据以下要点用英语写一篇关于你的 助教经历的短文。 1.一位失聪女孩Jane在你的帮助下重拾生 活信心； 2.当时你遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍； 3.你是如何克服困难的，并学到了什么。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 写作指导 【审题谋篇】 体裁 记叙文 人称 第一人称为主 时态 般过去时为主 话题 介绍一次助教经历 l.帮助失聪女孩Jane(显性要点) 2.沟通交流障碍（显性要点） 1.遇到困难时你的心情（隐性要点） 要点 2.失聪女孩Jane如何获得信心（隐性 要点) 3.你从这次经历中获得的感悟（显性 要点) 第一段：概述助教经历 框架 第二段：遇到的困难及解决办法 第三段：收获和感想 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1) adi.令人愉快的 (2) adj.心烦意乱的，烦恼的 (3) adj.难堪的，尴尬的 (4) adu.然而，不过 (5) n.友谊，友好交往 (6) v.锲而不舍，坚持 不懈 2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①总之，帮助Jane重拾生活信心是一次愉快 的经历。 On the whole,helping Jane restore her confi- dence in life is ②我面对的最大困难是沟通障碍。 41· e英语|Unit2 Onwards and upwards was the communication barrier. ③我尽一切努力与她建立友谊及相互信任。 companionship and mutual trust with her. ④信心和决心确实有助于我们的成功。 Confidence and determination can really ⑤重要的是坚持不懈。 It is important (2)句式升级 ⑥用形式主语t改写句①。 On the whole, to help Jane restore her confidence in life. ⑦用强调句改写句②。 was the biggest difficulty I faced. ⑧用名词性从句把句④和句⑤合并成一个 句子。 is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that is to persevere. 【妙笔成篇】 注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。 42 1针对训练1 假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办主题为 “An Unforgettable Sports Meet”的征文比赛，请 你写一篇英语短文参赛，内容包括： 1.你的经历； 2.你的感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 An Unforgettable Sports Meet重点句式·多维剖析 l.①did②were sold③Only in this way can we Only by studying hard will you 5Only with everyone doing his part can we make 2.①had②had fallen③as if a thief would steal it as if there had been a fierce beast 写作指导 示例·写作步骤 【遣词造句】 1.(1)delightful (2)upset (3)embarrassed (4)nevertheless (5)companionship (6)persevere 2.①a delightful experience②The biggest difficulty I faced 3made every effort to establish ④contribute to our success⑤to persevere ⑥it is a delightful experience⑦It was the communication barrier that 8 What I got from this experience;what matters most 【妙笔成篇】 I used to be a teaching assistant in a special education school.On the whole,it is a delightful experience to help Jane restore her confidence in life. The first time we met,she was always upset,making me embarrassed.Meanwhile,it was the communication barrier that was the biggest difficulty I faced.Nevertheless,I made it.First,I advised her to gather courage to confront the difficulties.Furthermore,I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her. Fortunately,what I got from this experience is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that what matters most is to persevere. 30 针对训练 An Unforgettable Sports Meet The annual sports meet at our school just ended up with great success last week,which deeply impressed me. As a sports lover,I participated actively in it.Having signed up for the relay race,I spared no effort to prepare myself for the race.When the day finally arrived,I stood on the start line with confidence.In the process,I did make a breakthrough and ran far ahead.I was about to reach the finish line when suddenly a runner fell and got injured.Without any hesitation,I stopped to give him a hand.Consequently,I was the last to arrive at the finish line. Unexpectedly,I won the warmest applause at the scene. Through the sports meet,not only did I experience the sports spirit,but also I did the right deed,helping people in need. Unit 3 Faster,higher,stronger 激情早读·拓视野 【做练习】 1.①T②T③F 2.C 3.Doing a group ride with the local triathletes. Section A Starting out Understanding ideas Part 1 Reading comprehension 第一步速读课文理清脉络 Task 1 The passage is mainly about how Stephen Curry became a famous sports star from a nobody by personal good qualities like self- belief,hard work,perseverance,etc. Task 2 1.sharpened skills 2.Davidson College