28.Unit 6 Seasons(书面表达)-2025-2026学年上学期八年级英语知识点梳理与巩固（译林版2024）

2025-2026学年上学期八年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(译林版2024) Unit 6 Seasons书面表达 必备知识清单 单元写作指导 一、写作主题 本单元围绕 “季节” 话题展开，属于 “人与自然” 主题范畴中 “自然生态” 主题群。此类话题常见写作角度有谈论最喜欢的天气和季节，以及不同天气或季节对我们的影响。本次写作要求描述自己最喜欢的季节，可从季节特点、个人活动、情感体验等方面入手，展现该季节的独特魅力以及自己对它的喜爱之情。 1. 主题内涵 “Write an article about your favourite season” 主题旨在让学生运用所学英语知识，描述自己钟情的季节。通过对季节特点，如天气、景色变化的描绘，以及在该季节所开展活动和内心感受的表达，体现人与自然的紧密联系，同时培养学生对生活的观察力和对英语语言的运用能力，挖掘不同季节在文化、情感等层面的意义。 2. 审题要点 明确人称：通常使用第一人称 “I” 来叙述，以表达自己对最喜欢季节的感受和经历。 确定时态：描述季节特点、日常活动等常用一般现在时；若讲述在该季节发生过的具体事情，可能会用到一般过去时；展望在该季节未来想做的事，可用一般将来时。 涵盖要点：需明确指出最喜欢的季节是什么，详细阐述喜欢的原因，比如从天气状况、自然景色、相关活动、个人情感等方面展开，不能遗漏关键信息。 注意字数：按照题目要求控制字数，若要求不少于 90 词，应确保内容丰富、完整；若要求 100 词左右，不宜过短或过长，避免因字数问题扣分。 3. 写作核心 突出季节特色：详细描绘该季节独特的天气特征，如春天温暖多雨、夏天炎热阳光充足、秋天凉爽干燥、冬天寒冷多雪等；展现季节里特有的自然景观，像春天万物复苏、夏天绿树成荫、秋天树叶变色、冬天银装素裹等，让读者能清晰感知到这个季节的与众不同。 结合个人体验：讲述自己在该季节常参与的活动，如春天放风筝、夏天游泳、秋天登山、冬天滑雪等，分享活动中的乐趣和感受；或者阐述季节对自己情绪、生活的影响，比如秋天的宁静让人思考，冬天的寒冷使人渴望温暖的家等，使文章具有真情实感。 逻辑清晰连贯：合理安排文章结构，开头点明最喜欢的季节，中间分点阐述喜欢的原因，结尾总结对该季节的喜爱，各段落之间过渡自然，使用恰当的连接词，如 firstly, secondly, moreover, in addition, finally 等，增强文章逻辑性和连贯性。 二、写作框架 一般可采用 “总 - 分 - 总” 结构： 1.开头（总述） 开篇点明自己最喜欢的季节是什么。例如：“There are four seasons in a year, and my favourite season is spring.” 2.中间（分述） 介绍喜欢该季节的原因，从天气、自然景观、相关活动等方面展开。 描述天气：“The weather in spring is warm and comfortable. The temperature is just right, neither too hot nor too cold.” 描绘自然景观：“In spring, the trees turn green, and all kinds of beautiful flowers come out. The world becomes a colorful place.” 讲述活动：“I can fly kites with my friends in the park. Sometimes, I go on a picnic with my family in the countryside.” 3.结尾（总结） 呼应开头，再次强调自己对该季节的喜爱之情。“All in all, I really love spring. It brings me so much joy and happiness.” 三、词汇句式 （一）词汇 1.季节名称：spring（春天），summer（夏天），autumn/fall（秋天），winter（冬天） 2.天气相关 描述温度：warm（温暖的），hot（炎热的），cool（凉爽的），cold（寒冷的），mild（温和的），freezing（极冷的） 天气状况：sunny（晴朗的），cloudy（多云的），rainy（下雨的），windy（有风的），snowy（下雪的），foggy（有雾的），stormy（暴风雨的） 例句：It is usually sunny and hot in summer.（夏天通常阳光明媚且炎热。） 3.自然景观 植物：tree（树），grass（草），flower（花），leaf（树叶），branch（树枝），bush（灌木丛），seed（种子），bud（芽），crop（庄稼） 例句：In spring, the grass turns green and the flowers come out.（春天，草变绿了，花儿开放了。） 动物：butterfly（蝴蝶），bee（蜜蜂），bird（鸟），squirrel（松鼠），frog（青蛙），bear（熊），deer（鹿） 例句：We can see many butterflies flying among the flowers in summer.（夏天我们能看到许多蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。） 其他景观：sky（天空），cloud（云），river（河流），lake（湖泊），mountain（山），valley（山谷），field（田野），forest（森林） 例句：The sky is blue and clear in autumn.（秋天天空湛蓝晴朗。） 4.活动相关 户外运动：fly a kite（放风筝），go hiking（去徒步旅行），climb a mountain（爬山），ride a bike（骑自行车），play football（踢足球），go swimming（去游泳），go fishing（去钓鱼），have a picnic（野餐） 例句：I often go hiking with my parents in autumn.（秋天我经常和父母去徒步旅行。） 室内活动：read a book（读书），watch TV（看电视），play games（玩游戏），cook a meal（做饭），make handicrafts（做手工） 例句：On rainy days in winter, I like to stay at home and read a book.（冬天雨天，我喜欢待在家里读书。） 情感与感受：love（喜爱），like（喜欢），enjoy（享受），hate（讨厌），dislike（不喜欢），happy（开心的），joyful（快乐的），relaxed（放松的），excited（兴奋的），comfortable（舒适的），lonely（孤独的） 例句：I feel relaxed when I walk in the forest in spring.（春天在森林里散步时我感到很放松。） 5.节日相关（部分季节） 春天：Spring Festival（春节），Easter（复活节） 夏天：Dragon Boat Festival（端午节） 秋天：Mid - Autumn Festival（中秋节），Thanksgiving Day（感恩节，主要在北美） 冬天：Christmas（圣诞节），New Year's Day（元旦） 例句：We celebrate the Spring Festival in spring.（我们在春天庆祝春节。） （二）句式 1.描述季节的存在及个人喜好 There are four seasons in a year, and my favourite season is...（一年有四个季节，我最喜欢的季节是……） Among the four seasons, I like... best.（在四个季节中，我最喜欢……） ... is my favourite season of the year.（…… 是我一年中最喜欢的季节。） 2.描述季节的天气特点 The weather in... is...（…… 的天气是……） In..., it is usually...（在……，通常是……） It is... and... in...（在……，天气…… 且……） 例句：The weather in summer is hot and sunny.（夏天的天气炎热且阳光充足。） 3.描述自然景观变化 In..., the trees/grass/leaves...（在……，树 / 草 / 树叶……） All kinds of flowers come out in...（在……，各种各样的花开放了。） The world becomes... in...（在……，世界变得……） 例句：In autumn, the leaves on the trees turn red and yellow.（秋天，树上的叶子变成了红色和黄色。） 4.表达在该季节进行的活动 I can... in...（我可以在…… 做……） I like to... in...（我喜欢在…… 做……） It's a good time to... in...（在…… 是做…… 的好时机。） 例句：I like to go skiing in winter.（我喜欢在冬天去滑雪。） 5.阐述喜欢该季节的原因 I love... because...（我喜欢…… 因为……） The reason why I like... is that...（我喜欢…… 的原因是……） One of the reasons I like... is...（我喜欢…… 的原因之一是……） 例句：I love spring because it is a season full of hope.（我喜欢春天因为它是充满希望的季节。） 6.表达季节对个人情感的影响 ... makes me feel...（…… 让我感觉……） When it comes to..., I feel...（当谈到……，我感觉……） In..., I always have a sense of...（在……，我总是有一种…… 的感觉。） 例句：The cool breeze in autumn makes me feel relaxed.（秋天凉爽的微风让我感觉很放松。） 7.总结对季节的喜爱 All in all, I really love...（总而言之，我真的很喜欢……） In conclusion, my favourite season is... and I enjoy it very much.（总之，我最喜欢的季节是……，我非常喜欢它。） To sum up, I have a deep love for...（总之，我对…… 有着深深的喜爱。） 四、范文例析 My Favourite Season There are four seasons in a year, and my favourite season is autumn. Firstly, the weather in autumn is very pleasant. It is neither too hot nor too cold. The cool breeze makes me feel comfortable. Secondly, the scenery in autumn is extremely beautiful. The leaves on the trees turn red and yellow, just like a colorful picture. I enjoy walking on the path covered with fallen leaves. Moreover, autumn is a season of harvest. We can taste a lot of fresh fruits, such as apples, pears and grapes. All in all, I really love autumn. It brings me so much happiness and beauty. 【范文分析】 结构清晰：采用 “总 - 分 - 总” 结构。开头直接点明最喜欢的季节是秋天；中间从天气宜人、景色美丽、丰收三个方面阐述喜欢秋天的原因，使用 “firstly, secondly, moreover” 连接，层次分明；结尾总结对秋天的喜爱，呼应开头。 词汇运用恰当：运用了 pleasant（宜人的），extremely（极其），covered with（覆盖着），harvest（丰收）等词汇，准确描述秋天的特点，使文章更生动。 句式丰富：使用了 “The weather in... is...”“The leaves on the trees...”“It is neither... nor...” 等多种句式，避免句式单一，增强了文章的可读性。 五、优化策略 词汇升级：避免重复使用简单词汇，尽量使用高级或更生动形象的词汇替换。例如，用 “mild” 替换 “warm” 描述春天温度；用 “gorgeous” 替换 “beautiful” 形容秋天景色；用 “thrilled” 替换 “excited” 表达在某个季节活动时的心情。 巧用修辞：适当运用比喻、拟人、排比等修辞手法，让文章更具感染力。如描写春天花朵，可写 “All kinds of flowers come out, like colorful fairies dancing in the garden.”（各种各样的花开放了，像五颜六色的仙女在花园里跳舞。）；描述秋天树叶，“The leaves on the trees are like little hands, waving goodbye to the summer.”（树上的叶子像小手，向夏天挥手告别。） 增加细节：在描述季节活动或景色时，添加更多细节。比如写冬天滑雪，可详细描述滑雪时风在耳边呼啸的感觉、摔倒后雪的触感等；描绘秋天景色，可提及落叶踩上去的声音、果园里果实的香气等，让读者有身临其境之感。 文化融入：若季节与某些文化、节日相关，可适当介绍文化背景或节日习俗，增加文章深度。如写春天提到春节，可简要说明春节的传统活动、意义等；写秋天谈到中秋节，介绍赏月、吃月饼等习俗以及背后的文化内涵。 综合实战演练 1．同学们都读过《春》这篇散文，作者为我们描绘了五彩缤纷的早春。请用英语写一篇文章，为我们描述你眼中或心中的春天。 内容提示： (1) Why do you like spring? (2) What can you see in spring? (3) What do people usually do in spring? (4) How do you feel about spring? 要求： (1) 必须包含内容提示的要点，并作适当发挥； (2) 表达合理，句子通顺、连贯，语法正确； (3) 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Spring in my eyes Spring is my favourite season. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s what spring is like in my eyes. 2．请以“My Favourite Season”为题，写一篇短文。 你的文章需要包括以下内容： 1.你最喜欢哪个季节？ 2.这个季节的天气通常怎么样？ 3.在这个季节，你可以做什么有趣的活动？(请写出至少两项活动) 4.你为什么最喜欢这个季节？ 要求：词汇和句式运用恰当，语句通顺，意思连贯。书写规范、工整、美观，注意大小写和标点符号。至少写5句话。 My Favourite Season __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观，他向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国的气候特点，并为他的参观提供一些建议。 要点提示：(1)What’s the weather like in each season in China? (2)What’s your advice? 写作要求：(1)不少于80词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息，可作适当发挥。 Dear David, I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解你家乡的天气情况。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 提示： 1. 介绍你家乡的四季天气特点； 2. 你最喜欢的季节及原因； 3. 询问对方家乡的天气情况。 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3. 词数：70-90 词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是李华，你准备参加学校英语角举办的“家乡美”征文大赛。请您根据以下写作要点和写作要求，以“My hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。 写作要点： 1) 你的家乡在哪？ 2) 你家乡四季的天气如何？ 3) 每个季节你喜欢做什么？ 写作要求： 1) 短文须包含以上所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名； 3) 词数60左右。 My hometown _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华, 你们学校英语广播站正在组织以“My Favorite Season”为题的演讲比赛活动。请根据以下要求，写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括以下要点： 1.季节名称； 2. 天气特点和自然景象； 3. 你常做的一项活动及原因； 要求：1. 文中须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； 3. 词数100词左右。                           ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到征稿启事。请根据征稿要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Your favourite season at school Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about: ★What does the school look like during that season? ★What do you often do at school in that season? ★What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season? 注意： 1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺； 2.不少于 80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 My favourite season at school My favourite season at school is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．每个季节都有其独特的美，在不同的季节中我们感受着不同的风景，体验着不同的乐趣。相信你们城市的冬天也很美丽吧！请根据下面的要点和要求，以“Winter in my hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文。 1. 要点：1) 你所属城市的冬天天气怎么样? 2) 人们通常在冬天做什么? 3) 你认为你所属城市的冬天怎么样? 2. 要求：1) 所写内容必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2) 语句通顺，语法正确； 3) 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地点名。 Winter in my hometown Hello! Welcome to my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. My favourite season is winter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李华。你们班上的学习小组谈论各自喜欢的季节。请你代表你们小组向全班发言，告诉大家你们小组的情况。内容提示如下： Different people like different seasons best. The members in my group have their favourite seasons, too. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇关于各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。词数：80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 提示词汇：below zero (零度以下)，degree (度)。 Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Enjoy your day! 参考答案 1． Spring in my eyes Spring is my favourite season. When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among colourful flowers. In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children are busy playing games in the playground. The elderly like to go to the park for their morning exercises and evening dances. Sometimes people invite their friends to fly kites in the park when it is windy. Moreover, we can go on a school trip to a hill on sunny days.   That’s what spring is like in my eyes. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：描述你眼中或心中的春天，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明春天是自己最喜欢的季节，并解释原因，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第二步，描述人们在春天的活动，注意细节充分； 第三步，总结你对春天的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①come out 出现 ②all kinds of… 各种各样的…… ③go on a school trip 去研学，去参加学校旅行 [高分句型] ①Spring is my favourite season because it’s usually warm and sunny.（原因状语从句） ②When spring comes, everything starts to grow.（时间状语从句） 2． My Favourite Season My favourite season is autumn. The weather in autumn is usually cool and sunny. The sky is always blue, and the air is fresh. In autumn, I can go to the park to pick colourful leaves with my friends. I also like to help my parents pick apples from the orchard. I love autumn best because it is the harvest season. I can eat many delicious fruits like apples and pears. Every autumn is full of joy for me. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出你最喜欢的季节； 第二步，根据提示信息具体介绍该季节的天气，可以进行的活动，以及喜欢这个季节的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①go to the park去公园 ②pick apples摘苹果 ③be full of充满 [高分句型] I love autumn best because it is the harvest season. (because引导的原因状语从句) 3．范文： Dear David, I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. It’s very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai. I hope you can come soon. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，围绕向笔友David介绍中国气候特点及参观建议展开。 ②时态：时态为一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中中国四季气候、参观建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出气候特点与参观时机的关联。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头回应笔友询问，引出邮件内容。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从中国四季气候说明气候情况；再从参观建议给出意见。 第三步，书写结语。表达期待，结束邮件。 [亮点词汇] ①season季节 ②heavily大量地 ③pleasant宜人的 ④places of interest名胜 [高分句型] ①There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. (破折号解释说明四季，清晰开启气候介绍) ②If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. (if引导条件状语从句，给出针对性建议) ③But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. (because引导原因状语从句，说明春秋季适合参观的原因) 4． Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m glad to tell you something about the weather in my hometown. There are four seasons in my hometown. Spring is warm and the flowers come out. Summer is hot, and people like to swim in the river. Autumn is cool and the leaves turn yellow. Winter is cold and it often snows. My favorite season is spring, because everything comes to life and I can fly kites in the park. What’s the weather like in your hometown? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候对方，引出谈论天气的主题； 第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍家乡的四季天气特点，最喜欢的季节及原因； 第三步，询问对方家乡的天气情况，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①fly kites放风筝 ②look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①There are four seasons in my hometown.（there be句型） ②My favorite season is spring, because everything comes to life and I can fly kites in the park.（原因状语从句） 5． My hometown My hometown is a beautiful city in the south of China. In spring, it’s warm and sunny. I like flying kites in the park. Summer is hot, and I often go swimming in the river. Autumn brings cool days, and I enjoy taking a walk in the countryside to admire the golden leaves. Winter is mild, and I love making snowmen when it snows. I really love my hometown. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本次征文大赛题材为描述家乡的记叙文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时，用于描述家乡四季天气及个人喜好等一般事实； ③提示：考生需涵盖写作要点中家乡位置、四季天气、各季节喜好活动等内容，可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图：开篇点明家乡位置，引出对家乡的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容：按季节顺序，依次描述家乡四季天气，以及在每个季节喜欢进行的活动 。例如春天温暖晴朗，喜欢在公园放风筝；夏天炎热，常去河里游泳；秋天凉爽，享受在乡间漫步赏叶；冬天温和，下雪时爱堆雪人； ③第三步，书写结语：结尾表达对家乡的热爱。 [亮点词汇] ①in the south of在……南部 ②fly kites放风筝 ③go swimming去游泳 ④take a walk散步 ⑤make snowmen堆雪人 [高分句型] ①In spring, it’s warm and sunny. I like flying kites in the park. (使用like doing sth.句型，自然描述季节天气和喜好活动) ②Winter is mild, and I love making snowmen when it snows.(时间状语从句) 6． My Favorite Season Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share with you why spring is my favorite season. Spring brings gentle breezes and comfortable temperatures. The world wakes up with blooming flowers, budding trees, and green grass everywhere. Birds chirp merrily, adding life to the season. My favorite activity is flying kites in the park. The soft wind is perfect for lifting colorful kites high into the sky. Running with the kite string, I feel free and joyful. It’s a great way to relax and enjoy nature after a long winter. In short, spring fills my heart with hope and happiness. That’s why I love it most. Thank you! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求点出最喜欢的季节。 第二步，根据提示内容描述这个季节的天气特点，自然现象及做的一项活动和原因。 [亮点词汇] ①share with分享 ②wake up叫醒 ③in short总之 [高分句型] ①Running with the kite string, I feel free and joyful.（现在分词作状语） ②It’s a great way to relax and enjoy nature after a long winter.（it作形式主语） 7． My favourite season at school My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing. In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games. Spring, full of new life and energy, is my favourite season at school. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你在学校最爱的季节，以及学校在这样的季节下的样子； 第二步，介绍在这样的季节下你喜欢做的活动； 第三步，介绍你想要学校在这样的季节下举办的活动。 [亮点词汇] ①fresh air新鲜空气 ②relaxing放松 ③neither…nor既不……也不 [高分句型] ①I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.（as引导的原因状语从句） ②Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games.（both…and句型结构） 8． Winter in my hometown Hello! Welcome to my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. My favourite season is winter. Winter in my hometown is a season of contrast. The weather can be quite cold, with temperatures often dropping below freezing, and snowfall is very common. The landscape is often blanketed in a layer of white, creating a beautiful scene. People here enjoy various winter activities, such as ice skating on the frozen lake or skiing in the nearby mountains. Families gather indoors to share warm meals and stories around the table. I find the winter in my hometown to be enchanting. It is a time for reflection and togetherness. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段； 第二步，介绍自己城市冬天的天气； 第三步，介绍人们在冬天经常做什么； 第四步，写出自己对所在城市冬天的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①dropping below freezing降至冰点以下 ②a beautiful scene美丽的风景 ③share warm meals and stories分享温暖的饭菜和故事 [高分句型] ①The weather can be quite cold, with temperatures often dropping below freezing, and snowfall is very common. (with复合结构) ②The landscape is often blanketed in a layer of white, creating a beautiful scene. (被动语态) 9． Different people like different seasons best. The members in my group have their favourite seasons, too. Lily likes spring best. She thinks the weather is warm in spring. The trees begin to turn green and the flowers bloom when birds sing happily. She can take a trip. Tom’s favorite season is autumn because he likes the cool and dry weather. The scenery is very beautiful. Nature is full of colours and the red leaves are really attractive. He can have picnics or fly kites. As for me, I like winter best. Though it is a little cold, I like playing in the snow. Everything looks white and beautiful. I can ave a snowball fight and make a snowman with my friends. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你们小组各自喜欢的季节，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍Lily和Tom喜欢的季节的信息； 第三步，介绍自己喜欢的季节信息。 [亮点词汇] ①begin to do sth.开始做某事 ②be full of充满 ③have picnics野餐 ④as for至于 [高分句型] ①She thinks the weather is warm in spring. (宾语从句) ②Tom’s favorite season is autumn because he likes the cool and dry weather. (because引导的原因状语从句) 10． Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. The temperature in Beijing is around 5℃ below zero. So please wear warm clothes. In Shanghai, it’s cloudy all day. The temperature is around 8℃. In Hong Kong, the weather is sunny and the temperature is a bit higher, around 10℃. You can do some outdoor activities. While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving. The temperature in Chengdu is around 5℃. What about the weather in Dalian? It’s cloudy too, and it’s freezing. Its temperature is around 10℃, below zero. In Xi’an, the sun shines again after the rain. The temperature in Xi’an is around 0℃. Enjoy your day! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述天气情况； ③提示：根据表格内容及提示词汇，介绍各大城市未来24小时的天气。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出话题（已给出）； 第二步，分别介绍各地的天气情况； 第三步，结尾表达祝福（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①a bit 一点儿 ②all day 全天 [高分句型] While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving.（so引导的结果状语从句） ( 一 / 1 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年上学期八年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(译林版2024) Unit 6 Seasons书面表达 必备知识清单 单元写作指导 一、写作主题 本单元围绕 “季节” 话题展开，属于 “人与自然” 主题范畴中 “自然生态” 主题群。此类话题常见写作角度有谈论最喜欢的天气和季节，以及不同天气或季节对我们的影响。本次写作要求描述自己最喜欢的季节，可从季节特点、个人活动、情感体验等方面入手，展现该季节的独特魅力以及自己对它的喜爱之情。 1. 主题内涵 “Write an article about your favourite season” 主题旨在让学生运用所学英语知识，描述自己钟情的季节。通过对季节特点，如天气、景色变化的描绘，以及在该季节所开展活动和内心感受的表达，体现人与自然的紧密联系，同时培养学生对生活的观察力和对英语语言的运用能力，挖掘不同季节在文化、情感等层面的意义。 2. 审题要点 明确人称：通常使用第一人称 “I” 来叙述，以表达自己对最喜欢季节的感受和经历。 确定时态：描述季节特点、日常活动等常用一般现在时；若讲述在该季节发生过的具体事情，可能会用到一般过去时；展望在该季节未来想做的事，可用一般将来时。 涵盖要点：需明确指出最喜欢的季节是什么，详细阐述喜欢的原因，比如从天气状况、自然景色、相关活动、个人情感等方面展开，不能遗漏关键信息。 注意字数：按照题目要求控制字数，若要求不少于 90 词，应确保内容丰富、完整；若要求 100 词左右，不宜过短或过长，避免因字数问题扣分。 3. 写作核心 突出季节特色：详细描绘该季节独特的天气特征，如春天温暖多雨、夏天炎热阳光充足、秋天凉爽干燥、冬天寒冷多雪等；展现季节里特有的自然景观，像春天万物复苏、夏天绿树成荫、秋天树叶变色、冬天银装素裹等，让读者能清晰感知到这个季节的与众不同。 结合个人体验：讲述自己在该季节常参与的活动，如春天放风筝、夏天游泳、秋天登山、冬天滑雪等，分享活动中的乐趣和感受；或者阐述季节对自己情绪、生活的影响，比如秋天的宁静让人思考，冬天的寒冷使人渴望温暖的家等，使文章具有真情实感。 逻辑清晰连贯：合理安排文章结构，开头点明最喜欢的季节，中间分点阐述喜欢的原因，结尾总结对该季节的喜爱，各段落之间过渡自然，使用恰当的连接词，如 firstly, secondly, moreover, in addition, finally 等，增强文章逻辑性和连贯性。 二、写作框架 一般可采用 “总 - 分 - 总” 结构： 1.开头（总述） 开篇点明自己最喜欢的季节是什么。例如：“There are four seasons in a year, and my favourite season is spring.” 2.中间（分述） 介绍喜欢该季节的原因，从天气、自然景观、相关活动等方面展开。 描述天气：“The weather in spring is warm and comfortable. The temperature is just right, neither too hot nor too cold.” 描绘自然景观：“In spring, the trees turn green, and all kinds of beautiful flowers come out. The world becomes a colorful place.” 讲述活动：“I can fly kites with my friends in the park. Sometimes, I go on a picnic with my family in the countryside.” 3.结尾（总结） 呼应开头，再次强调自己对该季节的喜爱之情。“All in all, I really love spring. It brings me so much joy and happiness.” 三、词汇句式 （一）词汇 1.季节名称：spring（春天），summer（夏天），autumn/fall（秋天），winter（冬天） 2.天气相关 描述温度：warm（温暖的），hot（炎热的），cool（凉爽的），cold（寒冷的），mild（温和的），freezing（极冷的） 天气状况：sunny（晴朗的），cloudy（多云的），rainy（下雨的），windy（有风的），snowy（下雪的），foggy（有雾的），stormy（暴风雨的） 例句：It is usually sunny and hot in summer.（夏天通常阳光明媚且炎热。） 3.自然景观 植物：tree（树），grass（草），flower（花），leaf（树叶），branch（树枝），bush（灌木丛），seed（种子），bud（芽），crop（庄稼） 例句：In spring, the grass turns green and the flowers come out.（春天，草变绿了，花儿开放了。） 动物：butterfly（蝴蝶），bee（蜜蜂），bird（鸟），squirrel（松鼠），frog（青蛙），bear（熊），deer（鹿） 例句：We can see many butterflies flying among the flowers in summer.（夏天我们能看到许多蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。） 其他景观：sky（天空），cloud（云），river（河流），lake（湖泊），mountain（山），valley（山谷），field（田野），forest（森林） 例句：The sky is blue and clear in autumn.（秋天天空湛蓝晴朗。） 4.活动相关 户外运动：fly a kite（放风筝），go hiking（去徒步旅行），climb a mountain（爬山），ride a bike（骑自行车），play football（踢足球），go swimming（去游泳），go fishing（去钓鱼），have a picnic（野餐） 例句：I often go hiking with my parents in autumn.（秋天我经常和父母去徒步旅行。） 室内活动：read a book（读书），watch TV（看电视），play games（玩游戏），cook a meal（做饭），make handicrafts（做手工） 例句：On rainy days in winter, I like to stay at home and read a book.（冬天雨天，我喜欢待在家里读书。） 情感与感受：love（喜爱），like（喜欢），enjoy（享受），hate（讨厌），dislike（不喜欢），happy（开心的），joyful（快乐的），relaxed（放松的），excited（兴奋的），comfortable（舒适的），lonely（孤独的） 例句：I feel relaxed when I walk in the forest in spring.（春天在森林里散步时我感到很放松。） 5.节日相关（部分季节） 春天：Spring Festival（春节），Easter（复活节） 夏天：Dragon Boat Festival（端午节） 秋天：Mid - Autumn Festival（中秋节），Thanksgiving Day（感恩节，主要在北美） 冬天：Christmas（圣诞节），New Year's Day（元旦） 例句：We celebrate the Spring Festival in spring.（我们在春天庆祝春节。） （二）句式 1.描述季节的存在及个人喜好 There are four seasons in a year, and my favourite season is...（一年有四个季节，我最喜欢的季节是……） Among the four seasons, I like... best.（在四个季节中，我最喜欢……） ... is my favourite season of the year.（…… 是我一年中最喜欢的季节。） 2.描述季节的天气特点 The weather in... is...（…… 的天气是……） In..., it is usually...（在……，通常是……） It is... and... in...（在……，天气…… 且……） 例句：The weather in summer is hot and sunny.（夏天的天气炎热且阳光充足。） 3.描述自然景观变化 In..., the trees/grass/leaves...（在……，树 / 草 / 树叶……） All kinds of flowers come out in...（在……，各种各样的花开放了。） The world becomes... in...（在……，世界变得……） 例句：In autumn, the leaves on the trees turn red and yellow.（秋天，树上的叶子变成了红色和黄色。） 4.表达在该季节进行的活动 I can... in...（我可以在…… 做……） I like to... in...（我喜欢在…… 做……） It's a good time to... in...（在…… 是做…… 的好时机。） 例句：I like to go skiing in winter.（我喜欢在冬天去滑雪。） 5.阐述喜欢该季节的原因 I love... because...（我喜欢…… 因为……） The reason why I like... is that...（我喜欢…… 的原因是……） One of the reasons I like... is...（我喜欢…… 的原因之一是……） 例句：I love spring because it is a season full of hope.（我喜欢春天因为它是充满希望的季节。） 6.表达季节对个人情感的影响 ... makes me feel...（…… 让我感觉……） When it comes to..., I feel...（当谈到……，我感觉……） In..., I always have a sense of...（在……，我总是有一种…… 的感觉。） 例句：The cool breeze in autumn makes me feel relaxed.（秋天凉爽的微风让我感觉很放松。） 7.总结对季节的喜爱 All in all, I really love...（总而言之，我真的很喜欢……） In conclusion, my favourite season is... and I enjoy it very much.（总之，我最喜欢的季节是……，我非常喜欢它。） To sum up, I have a deep love for...（总之，我对…… 有着深深的喜爱。） 四、范文例析 My Favourite Season There are four seasons in a year, and my favourite season is autumn. Firstly, the weather in autumn is very pleasant. It is neither too hot nor too cold. The cool breeze makes me feel comfortable. Secondly, the scenery in autumn is extremely beautiful. The leaves on the trees turn red and yellow, just like a colorful picture. I enjoy walking on the path covered with fallen leaves. Moreover, autumn is a season of harvest. We can taste a lot of fresh fruits, such as apples, pears and grapes. All in all, I really love autumn. It brings me so much happiness and beauty. 【范文分析】 结构清晰：采用 “总 - 分 - 总” 结构。开头直接点明最喜欢的季节是秋天；中间从天气宜人、景色美丽、丰收三个方面阐述喜欢秋天的原因，使用 “firstly, secondly, moreover” 连接，层次分明；结尾总结对秋天的喜爱，呼应开头。 词汇运用恰当：运用了 pleasant（宜人的），extremely（极其），covered with（覆盖着），harvest（丰收）等词汇，准确描述秋天的特点，使文章更生动。 句式丰富：使用了 “The weather in... is...”“The leaves on the trees...”“It is neither... nor...” 等多种句式，避免句式单一，增强了文章的可读性。 五、优化策略 词汇升级：避免重复使用简单词汇，尽量使用高级或更生动形象的词汇替换。例如，用 “mild” 替换 “warm” 描述春天温度；用 “gorgeous” 替换 “beautiful” 形容秋天景色；用 “thrilled” 替换 “excited” 表达在某个季节活动时的心情。 巧用修辞：适当运用比喻、拟人、排比等修辞手法，让文章更具感染力。如描写春天花朵，可写 “All kinds of flowers come out, like colorful fairies dancing in the garden.”（各种各样的花开放了，像五颜六色的仙女在花园里跳舞。）；描述秋天树叶，“The leaves on the trees are like little hands, waving goodbye to the summer.”（树上的叶子像小手，向夏天挥手告别。） 增加细节：在描述季节活动或景色时，添加更多细节。比如写冬天滑雪，可详细描述滑雪时风在耳边呼啸的感觉、摔倒后雪的触感等；描绘秋天景色，可提及落叶踩上去的声音、果园里果实的香气等，让读者有身临其境之感。 文化融入：若季节与某些文化、节日相关，可适当介绍文化背景或节日习俗，增加文章深度。如写春天提到春节，可简要说明春节的传统活动、意义等；写秋天谈到中秋节，介绍赏月、吃月饼等习俗以及背后的文化内涵。 综合实战演练 1．同学们都读过《春》这篇散文，作者为我们描绘了五彩缤纷的早春。请用英语写一篇文章，为我们描述你眼中或心中的春天。 内容提示： (1) Why do you like spring? (2) What can you see in spring? (3) What do people usually do in spring? (4) How do you feel about spring? 要求： (1) 必须包含内容提示的要点，并作适当发挥； (2) 表达合理，句子通顺、连贯，语法正确； (3) 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Spring in my eyes Spring is my favourite season. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s what spring is like in my eyes. 2．请以“My Favourite Season”为题，写一篇短文。 你的文章需要包括以下内容： 1.你最喜欢哪个季节？ 2.这个季节的天气通常怎么样？ 3.在这个季节，你可以做什么有趣的活动？(请写出至少两项活动) 4.你为什么最喜欢这个季节？ 要求：词汇和句式运用恰当，语句通顺，意思连贯。书写规范、工整、美观，注意大小写和标点符号。至少写5句话。 My Favourite Season __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观，他向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国的气候特点，并为他的参观提供一些建议。 要点提示：(1)What’s the weather like in each season in China? (2)What’s your advice? 写作要求：(1)不少于80词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息，可作适当发挥。 Dear David, I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解你家乡的天气情况。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。 提示： 1. 介绍你家乡的四季天气特点； 2. 你最喜欢的季节及原因； 3. 询问对方家乡的天气情况。 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3. 词数：70-90 词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是李华，你准备参加学校英语角举办的“家乡美”征文大赛。请您根据以下写作要点和写作要求，以“My hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。 写作要点： 1) 你的家乡在哪？ 2) 你家乡四季的天气如何？ 3) 每个季节你喜欢做什么？ 写作要求： 1) 短文须包含以上所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名； 3) 词数60左右。 My hometown _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华, 你们学校英语广播站正在组织以“My Favorite Season”为题的演讲比赛活动。请根据以下要求，写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括以下要点： 1.季节名称； 2. 天气特点和自然景象； 3. 你常做的一项活动及原因； 要求：1. 文中须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； 3. 词数100词左右。                           ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到征稿启事。请根据征稿要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Your favourite season at school Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about: ★What does the school look like during that season? ★What do you often do at school in that season? ★What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season? 注意： 1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺； 2.不少于 80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 My favourite season at school My favourite season at school is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．每个季节都有其独特的美，在不同的季节中我们感受着不同的风景，体验着不同的乐趣。相信你们城市的冬天也很美丽吧！请根据下面的要点和要求，以“Winter in my hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文。 1. 要点：1) 你所属城市的冬天天气怎么样? 2) 人们通常在冬天做什么? 3) 你认为你所属城市的冬天怎么样? 2. 要求：1) 所写内容必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； 2) 语句通顺，语法正确； 3) 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地点名。 Winter in my hometown Hello! Welcome to my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. My favourite season is winter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李华。你们班上的学习小组谈论各自喜欢的季节。请你代表你们小组向全班发言，告诉大家你们小组的情况。内容提示如下： Different people like different seasons best. The members in my group have their favourite seasons, too. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇关于各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。词数：80左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 提示词汇：below zero (零度以下)，degree (度)。 Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Enjoy your day! 参考答案 1． Spring in my eyes Spring is my favourite season. When spring comes, everything starts to grow. Trees turn green and many flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among colourful flowers. In spring, people like to do all kinds of outdoor activities. Children are busy playing games in the playground. The elderly like to go to the park for their morning exercises and evening dances. Sometimes people invite their friends to fly kites in the park when it is windy. Moreover, we can go on a school trip to a hill on sunny days.   That’s what spring is like in my eyes. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：描述你眼中或心中的春天，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明春天是自己最喜欢的季节，并解释原因，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第二步，描述人们在春天的活动，注意细节充分； 第三步，总结你对春天的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①come out 出现 ②all kinds of… 各种各样的…… ③go on a school trip 去研学，去参加学校旅行 [高分句型] ①Spring is my favourite season because it’s usually warm and sunny.（原因状语从句） ②When spring comes, everything starts to grow.（时间状语从句） 2． My Favourite Season My favourite season is autumn. The weather in autumn is usually cool and sunny. The sky is always blue, and the air is fresh. In autumn, I can go to the park to pick colourful leaves with my friends. I also like to help my parents pick apples from the orchard. I love autumn best because it is the harvest season. I can eat many delicious fruits like apples and pears. Every autumn is full of joy for me. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出你最喜欢的季节； 第二步，根据提示信息具体介绍该季节的天气，可以进行的活动，以及喜欢这个季节的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①go to the park去公园 ②pick apples摘苹果 ③be full of充满 [高分句型] I love autumn best because it is the harvest season. (because引导的原因状语从句) 3．范文： Dear David, I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. It’s very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai. I hope you can come soon. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，围绕向笔友David介绍中国气候特点及参观建议展开。 ②时态：时态为一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中中国四季气候、参观建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出气候特点与参观时机的关联。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头回应笔友询问，引出邮件内容。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从中国四季气候说明气候情况；再从参观建议给出意见。 第三步，书写结语。表达期待，结束邮件。 [亮点词汇] ①season季节 ②heavily大量地 ③pleasant宜人的 ④places of interest名胜 [高分句型] ①There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. (破折号解释说明四季，清晰开启气候介绍) ②If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. (if引导条件状语从句，给出针对性建议) ③But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. (because引导原因状语从句，说明春秋季适合参观的原因) 4． Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m glad to tell you something about the weather in my hometown. There are four seasons in my hometown. Spring is warm and the flowers come out. Summer is hot, and people like to swim in the river. Autumn is cool and the leaves turn yellow. Winter is cold and it often snows. My favorite season is spring, because everything comes to life and I can fly kites in the park. What’s the weather like in your hometown? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候对方，引出谈论天气的主题； 第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍家乡的四季天气特点，最喜欢的季节及原因； 第三步，询问对方家乡的天气情况，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①fly kites放风筝 ②look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①There are four seasons in my hometown.（there be句型） ②My favorite season is spring, because everything comes to life and I can fly kites in the park.（原因状语从句） 5． My hometown My hometown is a beautiful city in the south of China. In spring, it’s warm and sunny. I like flying kites in the park. Summer is hot, and I often go swimming in the river. Autumn brings cool days, and I enjoy taking a walk in the countryside to admire the golden leaves. Winter is mild, and I love making snowmen when it snows. I really love my hometown. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本次征文大赛题材为描述家乡的记叙文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时，用于描述家乡四季天气及个人喜好等一般事实； ③提示：考生需涵盖写作要点中家乡位置、四季天气、各季节喜好活动等内容，可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图：开篇点明家乡位置，引出对家乡的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容：按季节顺序，依次描述家乡四季天气，以及在每个季节喜欢进行的活动 。例如春天温暖晴朗，喜欢在公园放风筝；夏天炎热，常去河里游泳；秋天凉爽，享受在乡间漫步赏叶；冬天温和，下雪时爱堆雪人； ③第三步，书写结语：结尾表达对家乡的热爱。 [亮点词汇] ①in the south of在……南部 ②fly kites放风筝 ③go swimming去游泳 ④take a walk散步 ⑤make snowmen堆雪人 [高分句型] ①In spring, it’s warm and sunny. I like flying kites in the park. (使用like doing sth.句型，自然描述季节天气和喜好活动) ②Winter is mild, and I love making snowmen when it snows.(时间状语从句) 6． My Favorite Season Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share with you why spring is my favorite season. Spring brings gentle breezes and comfortable temperatures. The world wakes up with blooming flowers, budding trees, and green grass everywhere. Birds chirp merrily, adding life to the season. My favorite activity is flying kites in the park. The soft wind is perfect for lifting colorful kites high into the sky. Running with the kite string, I feel free and joyful. It’s a great way to relax and enjoy nature after a long winter. In short, spring fills my heart with hope and happiness. That’s why I love it most. Thank you! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求点出最喜欢的季节。 第二步，根据提示内容描述这个季节的天气特点，自然现象及做的一项活动和原因。 [亮点词汇] ①share with分享 ②wake up叫醒 ③in short总之 [高分句型] ①Running with the kite string, I feel free and joyful.（现在分词作状语） ②It’s a great way to relax and enjoy nature after a long winter.（it作形式主语） 7． My favourite season at school My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing. In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games. Spring, full of new life and energy, is my favourite season at school. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你在学校最爱的季节，以及学校在这样的季节下的样子； 第二步，介绍在这样的季节下你喜欢做的活动； 第三步，介绍你想要学校在这样的季节下举办的活动。 [亮点词汇] ①fresh air新鲜空气 ②relaxing放松 ③neither…nor既不……也不 [高分句型] ①I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.（as引导的原因状语从句） ②Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games.（both…and句型结构） 8． Winter in my hometown Hello! Welcome to my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. My favourite season is winter. Winter in my hometown is a season of contrast. The weather can be quite cold, with temperatures often dropping below freezing, and snowfall is very common. The landscape is often blanketed in a layer of white, creating a beautiful scene. People here enjoy various winter activities, such as ice skating on the frozen lake or skiing in the nearby mountains. Families gather indoors to share warm meals and stories around the table. I find the winter in my hometown to be enchanting. It is a time for reflection and togetherness. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段； 第二步，介绍自己城市冬天的天气； 第三步，介绍人们在冬天经常做什么； 第四步，写出自己对所在城市冬天的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①dropping below freezing降至冰点以下 ②a beautiful scene美丽的风景 ③share warm meals and stories分享温暖的饭菜和故事 [高分句型] ①The weather can be quite cold, with temperatures often dropping below freezing, and snowfall is very common. (with复合结构) ②The landscape is often blanketed in a layer of white, creating a beautiful scene. (被动语态) 9． Different people like different seasons best. The members in my group have their favourite seasons, too. Lily likes spring best. She thinks the weather is warm in spring. The trees begin to turn green and the flowers bloom when birds sing happily. She can take a trip. Tom’s favorite season is autumn because he likes the cool and dry weather. The scenery is very beautiful. Nature is full of colours and the red leaves are really attractive. He can have picnics or fly kites. As for me, I like winter best. Though it is a little cold, I like playing in the snow. Everything looks white and beautiful. I can ave a snowball fight and make a snowman with my friends. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你们小组各自喜欢的季节，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍Lily和Tom喜欢的季节的信息； 第三步，介绍自己喜欢的季节信息。 [亮点词汇] ①begin to do sth.开始做某事 ②be full of充满 ③have picnics野餐 ④as for至于 [高分句型] ①She thinks the weather is warm in spring. (宾语从句) ②Tom’s favorite season is autumn because he likes the cool and dry weather. (because引导的原因状语从句) 10． Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. The temperature in Beijing is around 5℃ below zero. So please wear warm clothes. In Shanghai, it’s cloudy all day. The temperature is around 8℃. In Hong Kong, the weather is sunny and the temperature is a bit higher, around 10℃. You can do some outdoor activities. While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving. The temperature in Chengdu is around 5℃. What about the weather in Dalian? It’s cloudy too, and it’s freezing. Its temperature is around 10℃, below zero. In Xi’an, the sun shines again after the rain. The temperature in Xi’an is around 0℃. Enjoy your day! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述天气情况； ③提示：根据表格内容及提示词汇，介绍各大城市未来24小时的天气。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出话题（已给出）； 第二步，分别介绍各地的天气情况； 第三步，结尾表达祝福（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①a bit 一点儿 ②all day 全天 [高分句型] While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving.（so引导的结果状语从句） ( 一 / 1 )学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $