Unit 6 写作指导 如何写概要写作-【志鸿优化训练】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册 (外研版)

多义词汇·自主练透 树枝分支；分行：分店分开；分岔 重点句式·多维剖析 ①more beautiful than②never be too careful 3no one more suitable than you 4never read a more interesting 写作指导 示例·写作步骤 【遣词造句】 1.(1)provide...with...(2)unknown (3)disastrous (4)economy (5)due to/because of 2.①provide us with honey②help pollinate crops 3 at an alarming rate for unknown reasons;be disastrous to 4while others think it is due to transport 5Bees not only provide us with honey, but also help pollinate crops. 6They are disappearing at an alarming rate for unknown reasons,which will be disastrous 分层作 Unit 1 分层跟踪检测（一）Starting out& Understanding ideas I.1.senior 2.explore 3.breathe 4.pressure 5.calm 6.organisation II.1.curiosity 2.traditional 3.impressive 4.eagerness 5.collection 6.challenging 7.description 8.in 9.confident llI.1.Hearing of the story 2.With butterflies in his stomach 3.too tired to speak 4.was fixing;when 5.with tears in 370 to us and the economy. 【妙笔成篇】 Bees not only provide us with honey,but also help pollinate crops.However,they are disappearing at an alarming rate for unknown reasons,which will be disastrous to us and the economy.Some people think it is due to pesticides,while others think it is due to transport. 针对训练 Environmentally friendly structures are called green buildings.They can reduce energy and water use by a considerable percentage, thus lessening pollution and avoiding destroying forests as well.For example,the green building Solaire has substantially reduced its energy and water use partly by applying solar power and reusing water.Although not all people like a green building yet,it is expected to be popular in the near future. 业册 her eyes N.Activity 1 1.stuck/caught in;so frightened that 2.With butterflies in my stomach 3.so curious;such an awkward situation 4.At the sight of 5.breathe deeply;keep calm;go all out to 6.tried various ways 7.in particular Activity 2 With my head stuck/caught in the huge pumpkin,I was so frightened that I began to cry.If I hadn't been so curious,I wouldn't bee英语|Unit6 At one with nature So we'd like to invite you to join us and we do believe that there is for this competition. 写作 如何写概要写作 ®感知·文体常识 概要写作要求考生在正确理解文章的基础 上，在不改变原文中心思想的前提下，用简明、精 练的语句高度概括文章的主要内容和观点。概要 写作将主要考虑以下内容： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； (3)上下文的连贯性； (4)各要点表达的独立性。 ©牢记·写作素材 (一)增色词汇 1.顺序 firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally首先，第二，第三，最 后；to begin with,then,furthermore,finally首 先，然后，再次，最后；to start with,next,in addition, finally首先，再次，另外，最后 2.并列 as well as也；not only..but(also)..不仅… 还…；including./included包括 3.对比 on the one hand..on the other hand..一方 面…另一方面…；for one thing...for another...一方面…另一方面…；on the contrary与此相反；nevertheless然而 4.递进 even甚至；besides除…外（还）；what's more还 有；moreover而且；furthermore此外；in addition 另外；worse still-=what's worse=to make matters worse更糟糕的是 。138 4It is the most interesting novel I've ever read in my life. →>I have novel in my life. 指 导 5.例证 as a matter of fact/,in fact事实上；for example/for instance例如 6.强调 especially特别；indeed确实；at least至少；at most最多；not at all根本不；or rather更确切地 说；particularly特别地 7.因果 thanks to多亏；as a result结果；because of/,asa result of/on account of/due to因为；owing to多 亏；for this reason由于这个原因 8.总结 in short总之；generally speaking一般来说；briefly/ in brief简言之；to sum up=to summarize=in summary/to conclude,总之 (二)精彩句型 常用开头语 1.议论文 The passage/author argues that...本文/作者主 张… The passage/author highlights the importance of..本文/作者强调了…的重要性。 The passage/author discusses the impact of... 文/作者讨论了…的影响。 The passage/author compares..,with.,本文/ 作者比较了…与… 2.说明文 According to the passage,we can know.,.根据文 章我们可知… This passage/article is mainly about..,.这篇文章 主要是关于… In the passage,the writer/author mainly tells us..在这篇文章中作者主要告诉我们… A new study found..一个新的研究发现， The purpose of the report is to show..这一报告 的目的是表明… 3.记叙文 The passage/story is mainly about..本文/这个 故事主要是关于… The author tells us a story about..作者告诉我 们一个关于…的故事。 The passage is a story about...本文是一个关 于…的故事。 ®示例·写作步骤 【写作要求】 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右 的内容概要。 Where are the bees? Bees are essential to the production of food we eat.Bees make honey,but they also pollinate large areas of crops,such as strawberries,apples and onions.About a third of the food we eat is a result of pollination of the bees.Unfortunately,bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate. In 2006,bee keepers started reporting about something called Colony Collapse Disaster (CCD). The main sign of CCD is the loss of adult honey bees from a hive.In October of 2006,some beekeepers reported that they had lost between 30 and 90 percent of their hives. There were many theories for the disappearance of the bees.But the most convincing one has to do with pesticides and lifestyles of bees today. Nowadays,beekeepers get most of their income not from producing honey but from renting bees to pollinate plants.This means that the life of the typical bee now consists of travelling all around the country to pollinate crops as the seasons change.That means a lot of traveling on trucks, which is very stressful to bees.It is not unusual for up to 30%of the hive to die during transport 写作指导 due to stress.In addition,bees that spend most of their time being locked up on trucks are not exposed to what they usually live on.Instead, they live on a sweet liquid from corn,usually polluted with pesticides. The exact reason for the disappearance of bees is not sure,but losing bees is very costly to the economy.The bee pollination services are worth over $8 billion a year.With no bees,polli- nation will have to be done by hand,which would have effects on the quality of food and increase food price.We hear a lot about big environmental disasters almost every day.But one of the biggest disasters may just be the loss of that tiny flying insect. 【审题谋篇】 体裁 说明文 人称 第三人称 时态 般现在时 话题 蜜蜂的消失 要点1：蜜蜂很重要，却在消失 要点2：蜜蜂出现这种状况的情形 框架 要点3：蜜蜂消失的原因 要点4：蜜蜂消失的影响 【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1)提供… (2)未知的 (3)灾难性的 (4)经济 (5)由于 2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①蜜蜂能为我们提供蜂蜜。 139. e英语|Unit6 At one with nature Bees can ②蜜蜂也帮助作物授粉。 Bees can also ③由于未知原因，它们正在以惊人的速度消 失，这将给我们和经济带来灾难。 They are disappearing and it will us and the economy. ④一些人认为这是杀虫剂的原因，而另一些 人则归因于运输。 Some people think it is due to pesticides, (2)句式升级 ⑤用not only..but also升级句①和句② ⑥用定语从句升级句③ 【妙笔成篇】 1针对训练 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右 的内容概要。 These days a green building means more than just the color of the paint.Green buildings can also refer to environmentally friendly houses, factories and offices. Green building means "reducing the impact 140 of the building on the land",Taryn Holowka of the U.S.Green Building Council in Washington, D.C.said.According to Holowka,building accounts for 65 percent of total U.S.electricity use. But green buildings can reduce energy and water use.Also,the buildings are often located near public transportation such as buses and subways,so that people can drive their cars less. That could be good for the environment,because cars use lots of gas and give off pollution.Green buildings are often built on developed land,so that the buildings don't destroy forests. Marty Dettling is the project manager for a building that puts these ideas into action.The Solaire has been called the country's first green high-rise building.According to Dettling,"We've reduced our energy use by one-third and our water by50 percent..” The Solaire cuts energy in part by using solar power."On the face of the building we have solar panels which change the sun's energy into electricity,"Dettling explained.The Solaire also has lights that automatically turn off when people leave the room.In addition,the building has lots of windows,allowing people to use the sun for light during the day.The Solaire cuts water by reusing it. Not everyone is eager to move into a green building,however.Some people think that things like solar panels cost more money than more traditional energy sources.Anyhow,Holowka said,“It's going to be big.”