蓉城名校联盟2025-2026学年高三上学期入学考试-英语读后续写 导学案-2026届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

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蓉城名校联盟9月入学考英语读后续写解析(学生版) 步骤一:读 when (time) where (setting) who (characters) what (conflict) emotional change theme 步骤二:思(列提纲) Clues-Plots 续写首段首句→____________________________________________________ 续写第二段首句→____________________________________________________ 前文还有哪些线索? __________________________________→___________________________________________ __________________________________→___________________________________________ __________________________________→___________________________________________ __________________________________→___________________________________________ 还有什么必要的情节? ________________________________________________________________________________ 提纲可以列为: Para 1: 1. 2. 3. 4. Para 2: 1. 2. 3. 4. 步骤三:写 关键词: brainstormed ideas; pocket money; secretly registered a dance performance; picked out a light blue dress; perfectly match; pull out the dress; stammered; broke into thunderous applause; 微场景 1. 表演裙的描写(颜色、款式) 2. Alice打开裙子的反应(情绪描写:感动) 3. 观众观看舞蹈的反应(动作描写) 参考范文 Anna and Estelle decided to do something to help. They walked away from the classroom, brainstorming ways to make Alice's dream come true. "We can use the pocket money we've saved,(解决“买不起礼服”的矛盾点)”Estelle said. Anna nodded vigorously, “And we can learn the dancewith her, so that she won't be alone on the stage.” (从“帮助买礼服”到“陪伴练舞”,升华友情主题)After school, they secretly registered a dance performance and headed to the dance supply store.They carefully picked out a light blue dress they thought it would match Alice perfectly and bought two identical dresses for themselves. The next day, Alice was surprised when Anna and Estelle came to her with a big bag. "What's this?"she asked, eyeing the bags curiously.(增强画面感). Anna smiled and pulled out the blue dress. “Foryou," she said softly. Alice's eyes widened in surprise. "But... I can't accept this," she stammered,tears starting to form(情感描写).“We're performing together,(由“帮助”到“并肩”,抹去 Alice的心理负担)" Estelle said, grinning. "Thank you," Alice hugged her friends tightly. From that day on, they practiced every afternoon, their laughter filling the gym. When the New Year's Eve party arrived (呼应开头“新年舞会”),they danced beautifully on stage, their dresses shining under the lights. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 第二节(满分25分) 67. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Alice was absolutely crazy about dancing. As long as she was free at home, she would turn on the TV, and follow the dance tutorials step by step. Over time, she had learned a great deal from those TV programs, mastering various dance moves that made her look like a professional dancer. When the school put up a notice announcing the upcoming New Year’s Eve party, which included a dance performance section, a strong desire welled up in Alice’s chest. She imagined herself dancing to her favorite music on the bright stage, and receiving cheers from the audience. But the beautiful vision quickly faded when she thought about her family. The image of her sick father lying in bed, and her mother working day and night to earn money to support the family popped into her mind. She was quite sure her family couldn’t afford the expensive performing dress. With a heavy sigh, she made up her mind to give up the chance. One afternoon, Alice found a quiet corner in the classroom to call her mom. She took out her old, worn-out phone, her fingers hovering over the dial button for a moment before pressing it. When her mom’s voice came through the phone, Alice’s eyes immediately became wet. “Mom, I... I won’t join the dance show at the New Year’s Eve party,” she said, trying her best to make her voice sound calm. “It’s not necessary. The dress needed for the performance is too costly…” She bit her lower lip to hold back the tears, not wanting her mom to worry. Little did Alice know that her best friends, Anna and Estelle, had walked past the classroom and heard her words. They stopped in their tracks, looking at each other with heavy hearts. Anna’s eyes were filled with sympathy, and Estelle gently bit her lip, feeling sorry for Alice. They knew how much Alice loved dancing, and it pained them to hear her give up her dream like that. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 Anna and Estelle decided to do something to help. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 The next day, Alice was surprised when Anna and Estelle came to her with a big bag. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $ 蓉城名校联盟9月入学考英语读后续写解析(学生版) 步骤一:读 when (time) before the New Year where (setting) at school who (characters) Alice; Anna; Estelle; mom; dad what (conflict) She wanted to dance on the party, but her family couldn’t afford the expensive performing dress. emotional change desired-disappointed/sad-hopeful theme Friendship pave the way for dream 步骤二:思(推情节、列提纲) Clues(线索)-Plots(情节) 续写首段首句→How to help realize Alice’s dream? 续写第二段首句→What was it? How did Alice react to it? 前文还有哪些线索? (P1) Alice was absolutely crazy about dancing. →_She would stick to her dream. (P2)… a strong desire welled up in Alice’s chest…her family couldn’t afford the expensive performing dress. →Her friends helped her buy the performing dress. (P4) They knew how much Alice loved dancing, and it pained them to hear her give up her dream like that.→Her friends would help her solve all the problems. 还有什么必要的情节? ________________________________________________________________________________ 于是提纲可以列为: Para 1: 1. Anna和Estelle讨论怎么凑钱(注意: 资金来源要合理, 例如做家务,自制裙子……) 2. 挑选和购买表演裙(可以添加裙子的颜色、款式等细节描写) 3. 悄悄为Alice 报名 4. 陪伴Alice跳舞 Para 2: 1.大包里有Alice想要的表演裙 2.Alice的反应(感动、犹豫、不决) 3.朋友们说服了Alice接下礼服 4.(故事结局)Alice参加了新年晚会的舞蹈表演并且收获了观众的掌声 5. Alice的感悟(主题升华:友谊成就梦想) 步骤三:写 关键词: brainstormed ideas; pocket money; secretly registered a dance performance; picked out a light blue dress; perfectly match; pull out the dress; stammered; broke into thunderous applause; 微场景 1. 表演裙的描写(颜色、款式) They carefully picked out a light blue dress they thought it would match Alice perfectly. 2. Alice打开裙子的反应(情绪描写:感动) Alice's eyes widened in surprise. "But... I can't accept this," she stammered, tears starting to form. (情感描写) 3. 观众观看舞蹈的反应(动作描写) The audience broke into thunderous applause, whistling or cheering. 参考范文 Anna and Estelle decided to do something to help. They walked away from the classroom, brainstorming ways to make Alice's dream come true. "We can use the pocket money we've saved,(解决“买不起礼服”的矛盾点)”Estelle said. Anna nodded vigorously, “And we can learn the dancewith her, so that she won't be alone on the stage.” (从“帮助买礼服”到“陪伴练舞”,升华友情主题)After school, they secretly registered a dance performance and headed to the dance supply store. They carefully picked out a light blue dress they thought it would match Alice perfectly and bought two identical dresses for themselves. The next day, Alice was surprised when Anna and Estelle came to her with a big bag. "What's this?"she asked, eyeing the bags curiously.(增强画面感). Anna smiled and pulled out the blue dress. “Foryou," she said softly. Alice's eyes widened in surprise. "But... I can't accept this," she stammered,tears starting to form(情感描写).“We're performing together,(由“帮助”到“并肩”,抹去 Alice的心理负担)" Estelle said, grinning. "Thank you," Alice hugged her friends tightly. From that day on, they practiced every afternoon, their laughter filling the gym. When the New Year's Eve party arrived (呼应开头“新年舞会”),they danced beautifully on stage, their dresses shining under the lights. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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