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专题09 书面表达
主题01 应用文——书信
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
假如你是Green School的学生李华,学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个,给校长Ms Mendozer写一封80词左右的信,说明选择该方案的理由,介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:poster海报
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan ________ is a better choice.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
校英语俱乐部想在周末组织一次校外实践——龙湾文化体育一日游学。假如你是俱乐部的成员李华,请你阅读俱乐部负责人Smith老师的通知,根据表格内容用英语给他写一封回信提出你的活动计划或建议。
Dear students,
I am glad to tell you that our club will have a study tour in Siqian Street and Olympic Centre. The following is part of my plan. I still need your suggestions. How can we get there? What else can we do? What should we take with us? Please help me to make the plan better.
Write to tell me your plans and advice about this study tour.
Place
Olympic Centre (奥体中心)
Siqian (寺前) Street
Times
In the morning
In the afternoon
Distance (距离)
500 metres from school
3 kilometres from school
Way to get there
…
…
Possible activities
do some sports
learn …
…
visit culture museums (文化馆)
enjoy local (当地的)…
…
Other advice
take cameras, ….
Smith
要求:1. 文中不能出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
2. 词数:90词左右,文章首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am looking forward to this study trip! Here is my plan about it.
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I hope my advice will help!
Yours,
Li Hua
主题02 应用文——日记
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
假设你是李华,国庆长假你和家人去北京游玩,请你根据下列表格所提供的信息,写一篇日记。
要求:(1)70词左右;(2)日记中不出现你的真实信息;(3)表格中的省略号部分须补充信息。
Date
Wednesday, October 2nd
Weather
Sunny and cool
Activities
Visit a Beijing hutong, buy something special, …
Food
Beijing duck
Feelings
…
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主题03 应用文——电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)本学期你们学校新开设了很多体育俱乐部,假如你是交换生David,请给负责的李老师写一封电子邮件,表明你想加入的一个体育俱乐部,并结合自己的经历和特长说明理由,同时提出自己加入该俱乐部后的期望。
要点
参考词汇
Which club would you like to join?
…
Why would you like to join the club?
(1. talk about your sporting experience)
(2. talk about your advantages)
join in different competitions
be talented in
…
What do you want to get from the club?
friendship, joy….
要求:1.短文必须包括表中所有要点,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数100词左右;
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
Dear Mr. Li,
I am David from Class Two, Grade Eight. This term, I would like to choose ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
David
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江台州·期中)
假设你叫李俊,你的美国笔友David想要在中国结交更多的笔友。你通过电子邮件,把你的同学王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表:
年 龄
14
外 貌
方脸,大眼睛,短发,高个子;
个 性
诚实,幽默,替朋友保守秘密,从不说他人坏话;
爱 好
痴迷于DIY,经常在周末自己动手制作东西;
理 想
当一名校长 (headmaster),让学生有更多的时间玩耍;
寒假计划
……(补充不少于两点。)
要求:1. 注意文章条理,语句通顺;
2. 词数80-100词,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.)___________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jun
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
假如你是Li Ping,收到来自英国笔友Tina 的一封信,请根据信的内容给她回信。
Dear Li Ping,
How are you doing these days? I hope everything is going well. Thank you for your last letter. I am glad to hear that you made a new friend, Sarah, at school. Could you please tell me more about her? Is she the same as you or different?
You said that you like doing sports with Sarah. What kind of sports do you enjoy playing together? How often do you play them?
I really hope that I can go to China soon.
Yours,
Tina
注意:
(1)内容涵盖要点,可适当发挥,全文连贯通顺。
(2)词数80左右。
(3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Tina,
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Yours,
Li Ping
主题04 应用文——演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江金华·期中)
你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道,并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动,以此呼吁大家从小事做起,保护动物,人人有责。假如你参加此次活动,请根据要点提示完成演讲稿。
要点提示:
situation
only 3, 000 blue whales, die . . .
reasons (≥3) kill
enough food, safe places . . .
steps(≥3) stop. . .
make . . . …
Word bank: pollute v. 污染,rubbish n. 垃圾,environment n. 环境
注意:词数100左右
Dear my friends,
As we all know,
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主题05 应用文——建议信
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保证,但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间,垃圾食品威胁着我们的健康。请根据下面提示,以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。提示:
How to Keep Healthy
1.Exercise
2.Have a healthy diet
3.Spend less time online
4.Have enough sleep
5.…
要求:
1.需包含表格中所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.
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主题06 记叙文
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江绍兴·期中)
如今,健康积极的生活方式逐渐深入人心,你奶奶的生活方式也发生了很大变化。请以“My dear grandma”为题,写一篇短文,说一说奶奶的变化。
A few months ago
Now
soap operas every day;
shopping online;
hardly ever exercise;
...
do square dancing, easy to learn;
drink milk ; eat vegetables and fruit;
like comedies and talk shows; because...
...
unhealthy, ...
healthier; ...
注意:
(1) 短文必须包括表中的所有内容,可适当增加细节;
(2) 省略号至少补充一条内容;
(3) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;
(4) 词数:80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:wealth (财富); lifestyle (生活方式);square dancing (广场舞)
Health is more important than wealth. Now, more and more people care about their health, and my grandma has also changed a lot.
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We all wish our dear grandma lives a healthy and long life.
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江宁波·期中)随着杭州亚运会和巴黎奥运会的相继结束,中国代表团的拼搏精神对青少年产生了不小的影响,“沙宝”、“Queen Wen”、“小胖”等成了“万人宠”的体育明星。假如你也是这些粉丝之一,请你根据下表信息,任选其中一位,以”My favorite sports star”为题写一篇短文,并结合你自己,谈谈你喜欢他/她的理由及如何改变 (change)自己。
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,书写规范。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
3. 字数90左右 (开头已给出,不计入总数)。
4. 至少用三次以上作比较的表达方式。
Name
Sun Yingsha
Fan Zhendong
Zheng Qinwen
Nickname
Shabao
Xiaopan
Queen Wen
Sports
Pingpong
Pingpong
Tennis
Appearance
Round face
A little serious
Tall
Personalities
Outgoing
Calm (沉稳)
Confident (自信)
Talented, hard-working, strict with oneself
Living habits
Do things slowly to reduce pressure (减少压力); practice for more than 10 hours a day
Do things by himself; keep running and playing six days a week
Never have junk food or drinks; get up at 4:30 a.m. every day
My favorite sports star
Nowadays, many teenagers have their favorite sports stars. My favorite star is
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主题07 应用文——电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江宁波·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike给你写了一封信,请阅读以下信件,写一封80词左右的回信。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going?
I went hiking with my friends last weekend. It was really interesting. Here are some photos I sent to you. And I know you just had the National Day (国庆节). How was your holiday? Where did you go and what did you do? By the way, what do you think is the best part in a holiday and why? Can you tell me?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Mike
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江金华·期中)
假设你是 Li Hua, 你的美国朋友Betty 计划下个月来中国旅游,请根据来信, 回复她的邮件。
Hi, Li Hua,
How are you? It has been a long time since we sent emails last time. I’ll come to China next month with my family. I also want to visit your hometown. Would you like to introduce it to me? I’d like to know the best way of travelling in China. Also I’d like to know about your hometown, the weather, the famous places and so on. I can’t wait to start my trip. I’m looking forward to your email.
Yours,
Betty
注意:
1. 文中不出现真实校名、地名、人名;
2. 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯, 短文首句已给出, 不计入总词数;
3. 词数80左右。
Hi, Betty,
I’m really excited that you are coming to China next month!______________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·浙江舟山·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友Alice下个月将来你们学校参加交换生项目。请根据图表中列举的信息,写一封电子邮件,向她介绍你们学校的基本情况。
注意:
(1)文中需包含图表中所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息:
(3)词数80左右; 首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to our school on an exchange program. Now let me tell you something about my school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
主题08 应用文——介绍信
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)假如你是Green School的学生李华,学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个,给校长Ms Mendozer写一封80词左右的信,说明选择该方案的理由,介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:poster海报
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan ______ is a better choice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
主题09 说明文——调查结果
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江宁波·期中)
我们对学生最喜欢的电视节目做了一项问卷调查(survey),请根据图表中的内容,陈述调查结果,并说说你最喜欢的电视节目及原因。
要求:1、不得出现真是的校名、人名;2、必须包含图表中的所有内容,并适当进行拓展;3、字数:100次左右(首句不计入字数)。
percentage
TV shows
reasons
60%
talk shows and talent shows
interesting; good way to relax…
20%
game shows
enjoyable; learn a lot
15%
sports shows
Exciting; …
5%
news
educational; …
I
…
We did a survey about “My Favorite TV Shows” last week. Here are the results.______________________
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主题10 记叙文
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
学校英语俱乐部组织全体学生参加英语作文竞赛,请以“My Friends and I”为主题写一篇80词左右的英语作文参赛,内容需包含以下要点并适当发挥。
1. What is your idea about friendship?
2. What do you usually do with your friends in your free time?
3. How do you and your friends keep healthy?
My Friends and I
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Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
假设你是李华,上周五你参加了你们学校英语角 (the English Corner) 举行的阅读分享活动。活动要求每位参与者写一个活动总结。请根据以下信息,写一写你的参与情况和收获。
注意: (1)文章需包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数100词左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Friday, I took part in an exciting reading sharing activity at the English Corner.___________________
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Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
生命在于运动。从小到大,你一定有喜欢或坚持的某项运动并从中获益。学校英语社团,正在向大家征集投稿,请以“I 1earned to be ________ through running/swimming/…”为题,选择一项运动,讲述你的运动经历并谈谈你的收获,写一篇80词左右的短文。
注意:
(1) 请将题目补充完整;
(2) 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息。
I learned to be ________ through _________
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Passage 4
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
随着“双减”政策的实施,你的课余生活变得更加丰富。请根据以下表格中的信息,写一篇文章介绍你自己以及你的课余生活。
Personality(性格)
......
Favorite after-school activities
reading, watching TV, watching movies, doing sports
Favorite place to have fun
......
要求:1.请从最喜爱的课后活动中任选两个活动进行介绍;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
3.词数80-100左右。
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专题09 书面表达
主题01 应用文——书信
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
假如你是Green School的学生李华,学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个,给校长Ms Mendozer写一封80词左右的信,说明选择该方案的理由,介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:poster海报
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan ________ is a better choice.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan A is a better choice. We are always busy with schoolwork, why don’t we choose to get close to nature?
We can visit the city park. It’s a good chance to know more about plants in the park. We can also make some posters and put up them around the park so that more people will get to know about nature. Before leaving the park, we must pick up the litter.
The trip will make us relaxed. At the same time, it will certainly help us know more about nature and protecting nature.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,信中需要包含选择某个方案的理由、介绍该方案的活动内容,并提出一项新增的活动。考生应确保包含所有要点,同时使文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,直接表达选择某个方案作为本学期学校郊游活动的理由;
第二步,详细介绍所选方案的活动内容,可以包括参观地点、活动安排等,并说明这些活动对学生的益处;
第三步,提出一项新增的活动,并解释其意义;
第四步,表达期待校长的回复,礼貌地结束信件。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to亲近;接近
②know more about了解更多关于……
③put up张贴
④pick up捡起;收拾
[高分句型]
①We are always busy with schoolwork, why don’t we choose to get close to nature? (why don’t...表示建议,语气委婉)
②Before leaving the park, we must pick up the litter. (before引导时间状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
校英语俱乐部想在周末组织一次校外实践——龙湾文化体育一日游学。假如你是俱乐部的成员李华,请你阅读俱乐部负责人Smith老师的通知,根据表格内容用英语给他写一封回信提出你的活动计划或建议。
Dear students,
I am glad to tell you that our club will have a study tour in Siqian Street and Olympic Centre. The following is part of my plan. I still need your suggestions. How can we get there? What else can we do? What should we take with us? Please help me to make the plan better.
Write to tell me your plans and advice about this study tour.
Place
Olympic Centre (奥体中心)
Siqian (寺前) Street
Times
In the morning
In the afternoon
Distance (距离)
500 metres from school
3 kilometres from school
Way to get there
…
…
Possible activities
do some sports
learn …
…
visit culture museums (文化馆)
enjoy local (当地的)…
…
Other advice
take cameras, ….
Smith
要求:1. 文中不能出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
2. 词数:90词左右,文章首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am looking forward to this study trip! Here is my plan about it.
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I hope my advice will help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am looking forward to this study trip! Here is my plan about it.
In the morning, we can walk to the Olympic Centre, which is only 500 meters from our school. We can start with some sports activities to get everyone energized. After that, we can learn about the history and significance of the Olympic Games.
In the afternoon, we will visit Siqian Street, which is 3 kilometers from our school. We can take a bus or organize a walking group for those who want to enjoy the journey. There, we can visit cultural museums to learn about local history and art. We should also try some local food to fully experience the culture.
I suggest we take cameras to capture memorable moments. Also, we might want to bring water bottles and wear comfortable clothes suitable for both sports and walking.
I hope my advice will help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一封回信。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:根据表格要点给出活动计划或建议。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,给出上午去奥体中心的安排,包括交通方式和活动;
第二步,给出下午去寺前街的安排,包括交通方式和活动;
第三步,给出一些建议,包括带相机、水杯等。
[亮点词汇]
①walk to走路去……
②start with从……开始
③enjoy the journey享受旅途
④try some local food尝试当地的一些食物
⑤fully experience the culture充分体验文化
[高分句型]
①In the morning, we can walk to the Olympic Centre, which is only 500 meters from our school. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②I suggest we take cameras to capture memorable moments. (省略that的宾语从句)
主题02 应用文——日记
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
假设你是李华,国庆长假你和家人去北京游玩,请你根据下列表格所提供的信息,写一篇日记。
要求:(1)70词左右;(2)日记中不出现你的真实信息;(3)表格中的省略号部分须补充信息。
Date
Wednesday, October 2nd
Weather
Sunny and cool
Activities
Visit a Beijing hutong, buy something special, …
Food
Beijing duck
Feelings
…
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【答案】例文
Wednesday, October 2nd
Today was a sunny and cool day. It was good to look around Beijing. My family and I went to see the old small streets called Hutongs. We walked and saw there are a lot of old buildings. We bought some nice things, like pretty fans and little wooden toys, for our friends and relatives.
For lunch, we ate the famous Beijing duck. It was really delicious. The duck had a crispy outside and soft inside, with thin bread, green onions, and sweet sauce. We all liked it a lot.
I learned a lot about the history of Beijing and I am interested in the old culture and stories of Beijing. What an enjoyable day we had! I’m looking forward to what we’ll do tomorrow!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为日记;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“描写天气”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“活动、食物、感受”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。表达“对明天行程的期待”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①look around四处看看
②the history of……的历史
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
What an enjoyable day we had!(What引导的感叹句)
主题03 应用文——电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)本学期你们学校新开设了很多体育俱乐部,假如你是交换生David,请给负责的李老师写一封电子邮件,表明你想加入的一个体育俱乐部,并结合自己的经历和特长说明理由,同时提出自己加入该俱乐部后的期望。
要点
参考词汇
Which club would you like to join?
…
Why would you like to join the club?
(1. talk about your sporting experience)
(2. talk about your advantages)
join in different competitions
be talented in
…
What do you want to get from the club?
friendship, joy….
要求:1.短文必须包括表中所有要点,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数100词左右;
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
Dear Mr. Li,
I am David from Class Two, Grade Eight. This term, I would like to choose ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
David
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I am David from Class Two, Grade Eight. This term, I would like to choose the basketball club.
Basketball has been an inseparable part of my life for years. I have actively joined in different competitions and achieved good results. My skills of ball control and accurate shooting have been improved through lots of practice. Not only does playing basketball keep me physically healthy, but also it develops my teamwork spirit and leadership skills.
I sincerely hope that after joining the club, I can acquire more skills from experienced coaches. Moreover, I am eager to build true friendship with my teammates and work together to bring glory to our school.
Thank you for your attention.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours
David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”,但在描述个人经历和期望时可能会用到“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括想加入的体育俱乐部、加入的原因(个人体育经历和特长)、以及加入后的期望。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。首先介绍自己是哪个班级的David,然后直接说明写邮件的目的是想加入某个体育俱乐部;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。首先明确想加入的俱乐部,接着从“个人体育经历”和“自己的特长”两个方面说明想加入该俱乐部的原因,可以适当描述过去参加的相关活动或比赛,以及自己在该领域展现出的才能;
第三步,书写结语。表达加入该俱乐部后的期望,如希望获得友谊、快乐,或进一步提升自己的技能等,并期待得到老师的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①inseparable part of不可分割的一部分
②actively joined in积极参加
③achieve good results取得好成绩
④teamwork spirit团队精神
⑤leadership skills领导能力
[高分句型]
①Basketball has been an inseparable part of my life for years. (现在完成时,强调动作从过去持续到现在)
②Not only does playing basketball keep me physically healthy, but also it develops my teamwork spirit and leadership skills. (not only...but also...句型,强调两者都重要)
③I sincerely hope that after joining the club, I can acquire more skills from experienced coaches. (宾语从句,表达对未来希望的具体内容)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江台州·期中)
假设你叫李俊,你的美国笔友David想要在中国结交更多的笔友。你通过电子邮件,把你的同学王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表:
年 龄
14
外 貌
方脸,大眼睛,短发,高个子;
个 性
诚实,幽默,替朋友保守秘密,从不说他人坏话;
爱 好
痴迷于DIY,经常在周末自己动手制作东西;
理 想
当一名校长 (headmaster),让学生有更多的时间玩耍;
寒假计划
……(补充不少于两点。)
要求:1. 注意文章条理,语句通顺;
2. 词数80-100词,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.)___________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jun
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
He is a boy of 14. He is tall with a square face, big eyes and short hair. Everyone likes his humor and honesty. He gets along well with his friends because he always keeps secrets for them. Besides, he never says anything bad about others. Because he doesn’t think it is right to do so. Guess what his hobby is? He is crazy about DIY, he often spends most of the time on weekends in hand making or mending something by himself. He thinks it’s very cool. Although he is young, he has a dream of being a headmaster, he plans to make some changes of school rules for students. For example, he will let students have more time to play instead of studying. With the Sping Festival coming, he will plan to pay a visit to Beijing with his two classmates and go back to his hometown to visit his grandparents.
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③要点:写作时应从外形、性格、兴趣爱好等方面来介绍,注意不要遗漏信息,语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问好。给对方介绍新朋友;
第二步,从这位新朋友的年龄、外形、性格、兴趣爱好和梦想等方面来介绍这位新朋友;
第三步,书写结语。介绍后询问对方的看法,并期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with sb.与……友好相处
②be crazy about sth.对……痴迷
③spend some time in doing sth. 花……时间做某事
[高分句型]
①He gets along well with his friends because he always keeps secrets for them. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Although he is young, he has a dream of being a headmaster, he plans to make some changes of school rules for students. (although引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
假如你是Li Ping,收到来自英国笔友Tina 的一封信,请根据信的内容给她回信。
Dear Li Ping,
How are you doing these days? I hope everything is going well. Thank you for your last letter. I am glad to hear that you made a new friend, Sarah, at school. Could you please tell me more about her? Is she the same as you or different?
You said that you like doing sports with Sarah. What kind of sports do you enjoy playing together? How often do you play them?
I really hope that I can go to China soon.
Yours,
Tina
注意:
(1)内容涵盖要点,可适当发挥,全文连贯通顺。
(2)词数80左右。
(3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Tina,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Tina,
How are you doing? Thanks for your letter and it was great to hear from you!
You asked me about my new friend, Sarah. She’s really outstanding! Though we’re not exactly the same, that’s what makes it fun. She’s pretty outgoing and friendly, and she always knows how to make me laugh. We both love playing basketball, but Sarah is really good at it. She can shoot hoops better than me, but that’s okay because it’s still fun to play with her.
We like doing sports together a lot. After school, we often go to the park to play basketball or go for a run. We do it almost every day, and it’s a great way to relax and have fun.
I can’t wait to see you in China.
Yours.
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,一封信件。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:根据信件中的要点进行写作,考生应注意要点齐全,详略得当。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。用“你问我关于我朋友Sarah”引出下文。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从性格、和她的异同之处以及运动三个方面描述朋友。
第三步,书写结语。表达想要见到对方,进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②play basketball打篮球
[高分句型]
①She can shoot hoops better than me, but that’s okay because it’s still fun to play with her.(原因状语从句)
主题04 应用文——演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江金华·期中)
你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道,并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动,以此呼吁大家从小事做起,保护动物,人人有责。假如你参加此次活动,请根据要点提示完成演讲稿。
要点提示:
situation
only 3, 000 blue whales, die . . .
reasons (≥3) kill
enough food, safe places . . .
steps(≥3) stop. . .
make . . . …
Word bank: pollute v. 污染,rubbish n. 垃圾,environment n. 环境
注意:词数100左右
Dear my friends,
As we all know,
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【答案】例文
Dear my friends,
As we all know, blue whales live in the deep sea and are the largest animals in the world. They feed on small fishes in the sea. Sadly, they are in danger now. There may be only 3, 000 blue whales left. They are dying out.
There are some reasons. People are taking away their homes, so blue whales have fewer safe places to live. People kill them for different use. People also kill other sea animals so they don’t have enough food. In order to protect blue whales in the wild, we should make plans. Firstly, we shouldn’t throw litter into the sea. Secondly, we should stop people from killing them. We can do this by not buying whale products first. At last, we can think of as many other ways as possible to protect sea animals.
I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头,介绍蓝鲸的现状;
第二步、介绍蓝鲸受到危险的原因;
第三步、介绍保护蓝鲸的措施并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on…以……为食
②die out灭绝
③take away夺走
④in order to为了
⑤stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人干某事
[高分句型]
①I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them! (that引导宾语从句)
主题05 应用文——建议信
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保证,但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间,垃圾食品威胁着我们的健康。请根据下面提示,以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。提示:
How to Keep Healthy
1.Exercise
2.Have a healthy diet
3.Spend less time online
4.Have enough sleep
5.…
要求:
1.需包含表格中所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.
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【答案】例文
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here are some suggestions.
First, it’s a good idea to take exercise at least one hour a day, such as running or walking. Second, we should have a healthy diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we’d better not spend too much time going online. It is bad for our study and eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up too late because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy as often as possible. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.
In a word, we should develop a good habit of keeping healthy. If we can do so, I believe we can keep healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要求已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,注意大小写,适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述保持健康的建议;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁养成保持健康的好习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式
②at least至少
③stay up熬夜
④develop a good habit养成好习惯
[高分句型]
①Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up too late because enough sleep is good for our health.(原因状语从句)
②If we can do so, I believe we can keep healthy.(条件状语从句)
主题06 记叙文
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江绍兴·期中)
如今,健康积极的生活方式逐渐深入人心,你奶奶的生活方式也发生了很大变化。请以“My dear grandma”为题,写一篇短文,说一说奶奶的变化。
A few months ago
Now
soap operas every day;
shopping online;
hardly ever exercise;
...
do square dancing, easy to learn;
drink milk ; eat vegetables and fruit;
like comedies and talk shows; because...
...
unhealthy, ...
healthier; ...
注意:
(1) 短文必须包括表中的所有内容,可适当增加细节;
(2) 省略号至少补充一条内容;
(3) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;
(4) 词数:80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:wealth (财富); lifestyle (生活方式);square dancing (广场舞)
Health is more important than wealth. Now, more and more people care about their health, and my grandma has also changed a lot.
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We all wish our dear grandma lives a healthy and long life.
【答案】例文
Health is more important than wealth. Now, more and more people care about their health, and my grandma has also changed a lot.
Months ago, my grandma loved watching soap operas and TV shopping and had the worst health in our family because of the least exercise. Now grandma is fond of doing square dancing every day which is pretty easy to learn. She also drinks milk once or twice a day and watches comedies and talent shows instead of soap operas in order to live a more positive and meaningful life. Grandma has been healthier and has more friends and laughter since she totally changed.
We all wish our dear grandma lives a healthy and long life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,描述过去要用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍奶奶数月前的情况;
第二步,重点介绍奶奶现在的变化;
第三步,总结生活方式上的变化,由不健康变为健康。
[亮点词汇]
①because of由于
②be fond of喜欢
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①Now grandma is fond of doing square dancing every day which is pretty easy to learn. (定语从句)
②Grandma has been healthier and has more friends and laughter since she totally changed. (时间状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江宁波·期中)随着杭州亚运会和巴黎奥运会的相继结束,中国代表团的拼搏精神对青少年产生了不小的影响,“沙宝”、“Queen Wen”、“小胖”等成了“万人宠”的体育明星。假如你也是这些粉丝之一,请你根据下表信息,任选其中一位,以”My favorite sports star”为题写一篇短文,并结合你自己,谈谈你喜欢他/她的理由及如何改变 (change)自己。
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,书写规范。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
3. 字数90左右 (开头已给出,不计入总数)。
4. 至少用三次以上作比较的表达方式。
Name
Sun Yingsha
Fan Zhendong
Zheng Qinwen
Nickname
Shabao
Xiaopan
Queen Wen
Sports
Pingpong
Pingpong
Tennis
Appearance
Round face
A little serious
Tall
Personalities
Outgoing
Calm (沉稳)
Confident (自信)
Talented, hard-working, strict with oneself
Living habits
Do things slowly to reduce pressure (减少压力); practice for more than 10 hours a day
Do things by himself; keep running and playing six days a week
Never have junk food or drinks; get up at 4:30 a.m. every day
My favorite sports star
Nowadays, many teenagers have their favorite sports stars. My favorite star is
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【答案】例文
My favorite sports star
Nowadays, many teenagers have their favorite sports stars. My favorite star is Zheng Qinwen. She plays tennis so well that her fans call her “Queen Wen” for her fantastic performance.
Zheng Qinwen is a 21-year-old tall girl. She has very good living habits, like getting up at 4:30 a.m. every day and never eating junk food or drinks. She is not only talented, but also hard-working. She is strict with herself. That’s why I like her.
As for me, my living habits are not as good as Queen Wen’s. I get up much later and often eat junk food. So I would like to change myself now. I will do more sports and eat less junk food or drinks to have a healthier life. I also plan to work harder to get better grades in school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要向介绍最喜欢的体育明星,包括姓名、昵称、运动;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍体育明星的外貌、性格及生活习惯;
第三步,谈谈喜欢体育明星的理由及如何改变自己。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with对……要求严格
②not as good as不如……一样好
[高分句型]
①She plays tennis so well that her fans call her “Queen Wen” for her fantastic performance. (结果状语从句)
②I will do more sports and eat less junk food or drinks to have a healthier life. (动词不定式表目的)
主题07 应用文——电子邮件
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江宁波·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike给你写了一封信,请阅读以下信件,写一封80词左右的回信。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going?
I went hiking with my friends last weekend. It was really interesting. Here are some photos I sent to you. And I know you just had the National Day (国庆节). How was your holiday? Where did you go and what did you do? By the way, what do you think is the best part in a holiday and why? Can you tell me?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Mike
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. It’ great for me.
I had a happy and wonderful holiday. I went to the Thai Mountain with my family on Oct. 1st. It was National Day, and there were so many people on the mountain. In the morning, we climbed to the top of the mountain. Although it was tiring, we saw the fantastic views from the top. We took quite a lot of beautiful photos there. After that, we had some delicious food. I think traveling is the best part in a holiday, because I can always learn something new when I go out!
The photos are beautiful. What do you do in your free time? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封信;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已隐含在Mike的信中,包括回复Mike的提问(国庆假期经历、假期中最棒的部分及原因),并可以适当添加细节,同时需保持回复的连贯性和逻辑性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图及回应Mike的关心。首先感谢Mike的来信,并简要提及自己国庆假期的总体感受;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。回复Mike关于国庆假期的提问,可以简述自己假期的活动地点(如威海)及所做的事情(如参观、游玩等);阐述个人对于假期中最棒的部分的看法,并给出原因。
第三步,书写结语。表达对Mike分享自己生活经历的感谢,并期待他的回信,同时可以适当表达对Mike下次来中国的邀请或希望他能了解更多中国文化。
[亮点词汇]
①have a happy and wonderful holiday度过了一个快乐而美妙的假期
②climb to the top of the mountain爬到山顶
③see the fantastic views看到壮丽的景色
④in one’s free time在某人的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①Although it was tiring, we saw the fantastic views from the top.(although引导的让步状语从句)
②I think traveling is the best part in a holiday, because I can always learn something new when I go out!(because引导的原因状语从句,同时使用了“think+宾语从句”的结构)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江金华·期中)
假设你是 Li Hua, 你的美国朋友Betty 计划下个月来中国旅游,请根据来信, 回复她的邮件。
Hi, Li Hua,
How are you? It has been a long time since we sent emails last time. I’ll come to China next month with my family. I also want to visit your hometown. Would you like to introduce it to me? I’d like to know the best way of travelling in China. Also I’d like to know about your hometown, the weather, the famous places and so on. I can’t wait to start my trip. I’m looking forward to your email.
Yours,
Betty
注意:
1. 文中不出现真实校名、地名、人名;
2. 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯, 短文首句已给出, 不计入总词数;
3. 词数80左右。
Hi, Betty,
I’m really excited that you are coming to China next month!______________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Hi Betty,
I’m really excited that you are coming to China next month! Here are some things about my hometown.
It’s a beautiful city with rich culture and delicious food. The weather is usually pleasant for sightseeing and outdoor activities. For transportation, the subway is very convenient. Besides, there are also some highlights you shouldn’t miss, like parks and museums. In addition, you can taste special food at the night markets. I’ll show you around my favorite spots when you come.
If there’s anything else you want to know, please let me know. I’m looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文是给美国朋友Betty回复一封邮件,并介绍自己的家乡,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐明写作目的:介绍自己的家乡。
第二步,具体介绍自己的家乡。
第三步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①outdoor activity户外活动
②in addition此外,而且
③show sb around带某人逛逛
[高分句型]
①It’s a beautiful city with rich culture and delicious food. (介词短语做后置定语)
②If there’s anything else you want to know, please let me know. (if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·浙江舟山·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友Alice下个月将来你们学校参加交换生项目。请根据图表中列举的信息,写一封电子邮件,向她介绍你们学校的基本情况。
注意:
(1)文中需包含图表中所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息:
(3)词数80左右; 首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to our school on an exchange program. Now let me tell you something about my school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to our school on an exchange program. Now let me tell you something about my school.
My school is the best one in the city. It has many buildings, such as the library, the dining hall and some teaching buildings. Also, it has the best teachers and the most talented students. The most important thing is that we have fun after-school activities. Every day after school, the playground is full of boys and girls. Some play basketball, others walk around and talk happily. The library is also the students’ favorite place, too. A lot of students spend free time reading there. One more thing, our school has many different subjects. They’re useful and educational.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏内容,可以适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示自己对她要来参加交换生项目感到很开心;
第二步,介绍学校概况,包括学校设施、老师和学生;
第三步,介绍学校的课外活动和课程设置。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to乐意做某事
②such as例如
③is full of充满
④spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Also, it has the best teachers and the most talented students. (形容词最高级)
②The most important thing is that we have fun after-school activities.(表语从句)
主题08 应用文——介绍信
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)假如你是Green School的学生李华,学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个,给校长Ms Mendozer写一封80词左右的信,说明选择该方案的理由,介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:poster海报
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan ______ is a better choice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Ms Mendozer,
I think it’s great to have a school trip every term. For this term’s school trip, I think Plan A is a better choice.
Learning more about plants in the park can greatly enhance our understanding of environmental protection. By putting up posters around the park, we raise awareness among the public about the importance of protecting nature. Moreover, we could organize a cleanup activity in the park, which not only beautifies the environment but also teaches us the importance of teamwork and responsibility.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍选择的方案以及理由;
第二步,介绍活动内容。
[亮点词汇]
①enhance提高
②putting up张贴
③raise awareness提高意识
[高分句型]
①Learning more about plants in the park can greatly enhance our understanding of environmental protection.(动名词作主语)
②Moreover, we could organize a cleanup activity in the park, which not only beautifies the environment but also teaches us the importance of teamwork and responsibility.(定语从句)
主题09 说明文——调查结果
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江宁波·期中)
我们对学生最喜欢的电视节目做了一项问卷调查(survey),请根据图表中的内容,陈述调查结果,并说说你最喜欢的电视节目及原因。
要求:1、不得出现真是的校名、人名;2、必须包含图表中的所有内容,并适当进行拓展;3、字数:100次左右(首句不计入字数)。
percentage
TV shows
reasons
60%
talk shows and talent shows
interesting; good way to relax…
20%
game shows
enjoyable; learn a lot
15%
sports shows
Exciting; …
5%
news
educational; …
I
…
We did a survey about “My Favorite TV Shows” last week. Here are the results.______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
We did a survey about “My Favorite TV Shows” last week. Here are the results.
60% of the students like talk shows and talent shows because they think they are interesting and relaxing. 20% of the students love game shows. They think they can always make them enjoyable and they can learn a lot from the game shows. 15% of the students like sports shows. They say sports shows are very exciting. Only 5% of the students love news. They think they are educational and they can know more about the world through the news.
As for me, I like news best because I want o know what’s going on around the world. And I can learn a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据提示介绍调查的结果;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的电视节目及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj使某人怎样
②around the world全世界
③a lot很多
[高分句型]
①60% of the students like talk shows and talent shows because they think they are interesting and relaxing. (省略that的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
②As for me, I like news best because I want o know what’s going on around the world. (because引导原因状语从句)
主题10 记叙文
Passage 1
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
学校英语俱乐部组织全体学生参加英语作文竞赛,请以“My Friends and I”为主题写一篇80词左右的英语作文参赛,内容需包含以下要点并适当发挥。
1. What is your idea about friendship?
2. What do you usually do with your friends in your free time?
3. How do you and your friends keep healthy?
My Friends and I
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Friends and I
In my opinion, friendship is like a lamp in our life, which illuminates the way for us to move forward. When we meet difficulties, we help and encourage each other. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. My friends and I eat healthy food to keep fit. We hardly ever eat junk food. We also do some other sports to keep healthy, such as running, walking, climbing and so on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:提示问题已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己对友谊的理解;
第二步,介绍自己是如何与朋友度过空闲时间的;
第三步,介绍自己和朋友是如何保持健康的。
[亮点词汇]
① move forward前进
② keep fit保持健康
③ and so on等等
[高分句型]
① In my opinion, friendship is like a lamp in our life, which illuminates the way for us to move forward.(which引导的非限定性定语从句)
② When we meet difficulties, we help and encourage each other.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③ If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
假设你是李华,上周五你参加了你们学校英语角 (the English Corner) 举行的阅读分享活动。活动要求每位参与者写一个活动总结。请根据以下信息,写一写你的参与情况和收获。
注意: (1)文章需包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数100词左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Friday, I took part in an exciting reading sharing activity at the English Corner.___________________
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【答案】例文
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示内容书写,可适当发挥,注意语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍分享的故事;
第二步,介绍从活动中获得的感受;
第三步,期待下一次活动的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②focus on关注
③look forward to期待
④participate in参与
[高分句型]
①During the event, I shared a novel that I recently read. (that引导的定语从句)
②This experience not only allowed me to practice my English speaking skills but also gave me the opportunity to learn from others. (运用not only...but also句型)
Passage 3
(24-25八年级上·浙江温州·期中)
生命在于运动。从小到大,你一定有喜欢或坚持的某项运动并从中获益。学校英语社团,正在向大家征集投稿,请以“I 1earned to be ________ through running/swimming/…”为题,选择一项运动,讲述你的运动经历并谈谈你的收获,写一篇80词左右的短文。
注意:
(1) 请将题目补充完整;
(2) 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息。
I learned to be ________ through _________
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【答案】例文
I learned to be tough through running
Marathon is a long-distance running race. I joined in one last year. It taught me a lot.
I woke up early that day, feeling both excited and nervous. As I lined up at the starting point, I looked around. There were lots of runners. We began to run after the sound of the starting gun. At first, I ran quickly and excitedly, feeling the rhythm of my breath. However, as the time went by, I got tired and my muscles ached. Could I really finish this race? When I saw the runners around me and the crowd who cheered on us, I just kept on running and told myself I had to cross that finish line. At last, I made it.
Crossing the finish line was a moment that I’ll never forget. Through the Marathon, I know no matter what we do, be tough and never give up, we’ll succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态主要为一般过去时;
③ 提示:写作时注意先补充题目,根据题目主题按要求展开写作,注意增加细节描写,添加适当逻辑词,使文章更连贯,逻辑更分明。。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题;
第二步,详细叙述事件的经过和结果;
第三步,书写结语,表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wake up醒来
②at first起初
③cheer on加油
④at last最后
[高分句型]
①When I saw the runners around me and the crowd who cheered on us, I just kept on running and told myself I had to cross that finish line. (时间状语从句+宾语从句)
②Crossing the finish line was a moment that I’ll never forget. (定语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25八年级上·浙江杭州·期中)
随着“双减”政策的实施,你的课余生活变得更加丰富。请根据以下表格中的信息,写一篇文章介绍你自己以及你的课余生活。
Personality(性格)
......
Favorite after-school activities
reading, watching TV, watching movies, doing sports
Favorite place to have fun
......
要求:1.请从最喜爱的课后活动中任选两个活动进行介绍;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
3.词数80-100左右。
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【答案】例文
My Colorful After-school Life I’m a cheerful and outgoing eighth-grade student. Thanks to the “double reduction” policy, I now have more free time to enjoy my hobbies.
I love reading books in my free time. It’s like taking a trip to different worlds. Science fiction stories are my favorite because they let me imagine amazing futures. Besides reading, I also enjoy playing basketball. Every weekend, I play basketball with my friends in the park. It’s not only great exercise but also a fun way to relax and build teamwork.
My favorite place to have fun is the city library. It’s quiet and full of interesting books. I can spend hours there reading and learning new things. My after-school life is wonderful, and I feel very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作围绕性格、最喜欢的课后活动(选取阅读和运动两项)、最喜欢的娱乐地点展开,注意要点齐全,适当补充细节,突出课余生活丰富多彩。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接介绍自己的性格和身份,引出“双减”政策带来的课余时间变化。
第二步,分别阐述最喜欢的两项课后活动,并说明原因和具体活动情况,接着介绍最喜欢的娱乐地点及在那里的活动。
第三步,总结自己的课余生活很棒且自己感到快乐,结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①thanks to 多亏,由于
②in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
③not only...but also... 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①Science fiction stories are my favorite because they let me imagine amazing futures. (because引导原因状语从句)
② My after-school life is wonderful, and I feel very happy.(and连接并列成分)
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