读后续写微技能——多种多样的“说（公开课导学案）

读后续写微技能 ——多种多样的“说” Step1:lead-in Read the passage and find different ways of saying in the passage as many as possible. The police walked along the street when he saw a man standing in the doorway of a store, with an unlit cigar. He walked up to the man. “It's all right, officer,” he said, reassuringly. “I'm just waiting for a friend, Jimmy Wells. We were like two brothers. It's an appointment made twenty years ago. Sounds a little funny to you, doesn't it? Twenty years ago tonight, we agreed that we would meet here again no matter what happened. Next morning, I left for the West to make fortune, and Jimmy stayed in the New York.” The waiting man pulled out a handsome watch, the lids(表盖) of it set with small diamonds. “Three minutes to ten,” he announced. “It was exactly ten o'clock when we parted here at the restaurant door.” “Did pretty well out West, didn't you?” asked the policeman. “You bet!(确实) I hope Jimmy has done half as well. He was a kind of plodder(慢性子), though, good fellow as he was. I've had to compete with some of the sharpest wits going to get my fortune. A man gets in a groove(一成不变) in New here by that time. So long, officer(再见，警官).” “Good-night, sir,” said the policeman, passing on along his beat(巡逻区域), trying doors as he went. There was now a fine, cold rain falling, and the wind had risen into a steady blow. The few passengers hurried dismally(闷闷不乐地) and silently along with coat collars turned high and pocketed hands. And in the doorway of the store, the man, who had come a thousand miles to fill an appointment with the friend of his youth, smoked his cigar and waited, with uncertainty, About twenty minutes he waited, and then a tall man in a long overcoat, with collar turned up to his ears, hurried across from the opposite side of the street. He went directly to the waiting man. “Is that you, Bob?” he asked, doubtfully. “Is that you, Jimmy Wells?” cried the man in the door with excitement. “Bless my heart!” exclaimed the new arrival, grasping both the other's hands with his own. “It's Bob, sure as fate(千真万确). I was certain I'd find you here if you were still alive. Well, well, well! --twenty years is a long time! How has the West treated you, old man?" “It has given me everything I asked it for. You've changed lots, Jimmy. I never thought you were tall by two or three inches." “Oh, I grew a bit after I was twenty. Come on, Bob; we'll go to a place I know and have a good long talk about old times." The two men walked up the street, arm in arm. The man from the West was beginning to outline the history of his career --how he started from scratch(白手起家) and eventually made his fortune. At the corner stood a drugstore, brilliant with electric lights. Each of them turned to stare at the other's face. The man from the West stopped suddenly and released his arm. “As I suspected, you're not Jimmy Wells,” he said, impatiently with anger. “Twenty years is a long time, but not long enough to change the shape of a man's nose.” “It sometimes changes a good man into a bad one,” said the tall man, taking charge of the situation. “You've been under arrest for ten minutes, ‘Silky’ Bob. Chicago police thought you might have dropped over our way(顺便来访) and called us. They want to have a chat with you. Before we go to the station, here's a note for you. It's from Patrolman Wells." The man from the West unfolded the paper. The note was rather short. “Bob: I was at the appointed place on time. When you struck the match to light your cigar I saw it was the face of the criminal wanted in Chicago. Anyhow I couldn't arrest you myself, so I got a plain-clothes man to do the job. JIMMY." (Adapted from 0. Henry's short story of the same title) Step2:Explore the rules about how to express "say" more vividly. (1) 1.“Three minutes to ten,” he announced. 2. "Is that you, Bob?" he asked, doubtfully. "Is that you, Jimmy Wells?" cried the man in the door with excitement. 3. "Bless my heart!" exclaimed the new arrival, grasping both the other's hands with his own. (2) 4. "It's all right, officer," he said, reassuringly. 5. "Is that you, Bob?" he asked, doubtfully. (3) 6. "Good-night, sir," said the policeman, passing on along his beat, trying doors as he went. 7. "Bless my heart!" exclaimed the new arrival, grasping both the other's hands with his own. 8. “It sometimes changes a good man into a bad one,” said the tall man, taking charge of the situation. (4) 9. “Is that you, Jimmy Wells?” cried the man in the door with excitement. 10. "As I suspected, you’re not Jimmy Wells," he said, impatiently with anger. (5) 11. The two men walked up the street, arm in arm. The man from the West was beginning to outline the history of his career--how he started from scratch(白手起家) and eventually made his fortune. Summary:__________________________________________ Step3:Tasks (1) More verbs about saying (2) Verbs + adv. (3) Verbs + 伴随状语(v-ing/ v-ed) (4) Verbs + prep. phrases Step4: Translation(用不同表示“说”的方法翻译句子) 1. “我真为你骄傲,"父亲高兴地说。 2. 她轻声说道，她会告诉汤姆一切。 3. 她生气地尖叫：“我讨厌你！” 4. “我等你，” Tom 微笑着看着她说. Step5:警惕易丢分的“说” 1. “Hey，how are you?” “I’m fine, how are you?” “How is the weather?” “Terrific! Nice day for a walk isn't it?” 2.“That's hilarious（欢闹的，滑稽的）,” Henry chuckled（轻笑）. 3. “I told you already,” I said, glaring. Step6:真题感悟（2025新高考I卷读后续写第二段） With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. Heart pounding, I knocked on his door. When he opened it, his eyes cold, he crossed his arms defensively. "I'm sorry," I _________________ (真诚的道歉), "I should have seen how much Toby meant to you." Then I held out the box of biscuits, my throat tight with emotion. For a tense moment, he studied me and __________________(如释重负地说), “Come in.” As soon as I stepped through the door, I saw Toby wagging its tail at me as if sensing the shift. As we sat down with the biscuits, my brother's eyebrows gradually relaxed and I felt the tension melt away, replaced by the warmth of reconciliation. That afternoon, we ___________________________________________(聊了很多,也谈到了以前美好的时光). This small step towards reconciliation made me realize that family bonds were too precious to break over misunderstandings. Step7：Continuation writing (Homework) The man from the West unfolded the paper. The note was rather short. “Bob: I was at the appointed place on time. When you struck the match to light your cigar I saw it was the face of the criminal wanted in Chicago. Anyhow I couldn't arrest you myself, so I got a plain-clothes man to do the job. JIMMY." Supposing the story did not end here, what would happen next? Please write it down according to the two sentences.(within 150 words) Para1: “Silky” Bob shook his head in disbelief._________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Para2: A few minutes later, Jimmy appeared.___________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $