（公开课）读后续写Different ways of Speaking

读后续写微技能 ——多种多样的“说” The police walked along the street when he saw a man standing in the doorway of a store, with an unlit cigar. He walked up to the man. “It's all right, officer,” he said, reassuringly. “I'm just waiting for a friend, Jimmy Wells. We were like two brothers. It's an appointment made twenty years ago. Sounds a little funny to you, doesn't it? Twenty years ago tonight, we agreed that we would meet here again no matter what happened. Next morning, I left for the West to make fortune, and Jimmy stayed in the New York.” The waiting man pulled out a handsome watch, the lids(表盖) of it set with small diamonds. “Three minutes to ten,” he announced. “It was exactly ten o'clock when we parted here at the restaurant door.” “Did pretty well out West, didn't you?” asked the policeman. “You bet!(确实) I hope Jimmy has done half as well. He was a kind of plodder(慢性子), though, good fellow as he was. I've had to compete with some of the sharpest wits going to get my fortune. A man gets in a groove(一成不变) in New here by that time. So long, officer(再见，警官).” “Good-night, sir,” said the policeman, passing on along his beat(巡逻区域), trying doors as he went. There was now a fine, cold rain falling, and the wind had risen into a steady blow. The few passengers hurried dismally(闷闷不乐地) and silently along with coat collars turned high and pocketed hands. And in the doorway of the store, the man, who had come a thousand miles to fill an appointment with the friend of his youth, smoked his cigar and waited, with uncertainty, About twenty minutes he waited, and then a tall man in a long overcoat, with collar turned up to his ears, hurried across from the opposite side of the street. He went directly to the waiting man. “Is that you, Bob?” he asked, doubtfully. “Is that you, Jimmy Wells?” cried the man in the door with excitement. “Bless my heart!” exclaimed the new anrival, grasping both the other's hands with his own. “It's Bob, sure as “It's all right, officer,” he said, reassuringly. “Three minutes to ten,” he announced. “Did pretty well out West, didn't you?” asked the policeman. “Good-night, sir,” said the policeman, passing on along his beat “Is that you, Bob?” he asked, doubtfully. “Is that you, Jimmy Wells?” cried the man in the door with excitement. “Bless my heart!” exclaimed the new arrival, grasping both the other's hands with his own. fate(千真万确). I was certain I'd find you here if you were still alive. Well, well, well! --twenty years is a long time! How has the West treated you, old man?" “It has given me everything I asked it for. You've changed lots, Jimmy. I never thought you were tall by two or three inches." “Oh, I grew a bit after I was twenty. Come on, Bob; we'll go to a place I know and have a good long talk about old times." The two men walked up the street, arm in arm. The man from the West was beginning to outline the history of his career --how he started from scratch(白手起家) and eventually made his fortune. At the corner stood a drugstore, brilliant with electric lights. Each of them turned to stare at the other's face. The man from the West stopped suddenly and released his arm. “As I suspected, you're not Jimmy Wells,” he said, impatiently with anger. “Twenty years is a long time, but not long enough to change the shape of a man's nose.” “It sometimes changes a good man into a bad one,” said the tall man, taking charge of the situation. “You've been under arrest for ten minutes, ‘Silky’ Bob. Chicago police thought you might have dropped over our way(顺便来访) and called us. They want to have a chat with you. Before we go to the station, here's a note for you. It's from Patrolman Wells." The man from the West unfolded the paper. The note was rather short. “Bob: I was at the appointed place on time. When you struck the match to light your cigar I saw it was the face of the criminal wanted in Chicago. Anyhow I couldn't arrest you myself, so I got a plain-clothes man to do the job. JIMMY." (Adapted from 0. Henry's short story of the same title) The man from the West was beginning to outline the history of his career--how he started from scratch(白手起家) and eventually made his fortune. he said, impatiently with anger. said the tall man, taking charge of the situation. Think How to express "say" more vividly? 1.“Three minutes to ten,” he announced. 2. "Is that you, Bob?" he asked, doubtfully. "Is that you, Jimmy Wells?" cried the man in the door with excitement. 3. "Bless my heart!" exclaimed the new arrival, grasping both the other's hands with his own. 1. Different verbs depict the scenes more vividly. 2. Readers get to know the speaker's feelings and emotions. . What are the benefits of the following expressions? Find the expressions that describe ways of saying in the story. Rules 4. "It's all right, officer," he said, reassuringly. 5. "Is that you, Bob?" he asked, doubtfully. Verbs + adv. Use adv to better show speaker's feelings and emotions. . Find the expressions that describe ways of saying in the story. Rules 6. "Good-night, sir," said the policeman, passing on along his beat, trying doors as he went. 7. "Bless my heart!" exclaimed the new arrival, grasping both the other's hands with his own. 8. “It sometimes changes a good man into a bad one,” said the tall man, taking charge of the situation. Verbs + 伴随状语（v-ing/v-ed） To depict the actions more vividly. Find the expressions that describe ways of saying in the story. Rules 9. “Is that you, Jimmy Wells?” cried the man in the door with excitement. 10. "As I suspected, you’re not Jimmy Wells," he said, impatiently with anger. Verbs + Prep phrases Attention: 1. in +a/an+adj+voice/ tone; 2.in/with+表示感情的名词 Find the expressions that describe ways of saying in the story. Rules 11. The two men walked up the street, arm in arm. The man from the West was beginning to outline the history of his career--how he started from scratch(白手起家) and eventually made his fortune. Indirect speech(间接引语) Attention: 注意时态的转换。 Summary Ways of saying Different verbs Verbs + adv. Verbs + 伴随状语 Verbs + Prep. phrases Indirect speech Game play 补充说_______ 回复道_______ 承认道_______ 尖叫道_________ 通知________ 安慰________ 低/耳语________ more verbs about saying 重复道________ 解释道________ 同意地说_______ 大声地吼道________ 承诺________ 道歉________ 低语/嘟囔_______ 问道_________ 叹气地说_______ 大笑地说_______ 聊天_______ 宣布__________ 陈述_______ 辩论______ add reply/respond admit/ acknowledge scream inform comfort whisper repeat explain agree roar/yell promise apologize murmur/whisper ask/inquire sigh laugh announce state debate chat Competition Tip 2 Verbs + adv. 1) said __________激动地说 2) said ________ 轻柔地说 3) said _________ 冷静地说 4) answered ________害羞地说 5) _______________________________ 冷冷地回答 excitedly softly calmly shyly answered /replied/responded coldly Competition Tip 3 Verbs + 伴随状语 1) said Newland, __________________ . 微笑着 2) She begged him,______________________ . 紧紧握着他的手 3) “No!” she shouted, _________________________ . 怒视着他 smiling holding his hands tighly glaring at him Competition Tip 4 Verbs + prep. phrases 1) he said______________________ 用一种坚定地语气说 2) He said __________ 他慌慌张张地说 3) she said______________________ 紧张地说 4) said the stranger_________________ 冷笑着说 in a firm tone in a hurry with nervousness with a cold smile Translation(用不同表示“说”的方法翻译句子) 1. “我真为你骄傲,"父亲高兴地说。 2.她轻声说道，她会告诉汤姆一切。 3.她生气地尖叫：“我讨厌你！” 4.“我等你，” Tom 微笑着看着她说. “I’m proud of you,” father said happily. She said in a low voice that she would tell Tom everything. She screamed with anger, “I hate you!” “I will wait for you,” Tom smiled, looking at her. 警惕易丢分的“说” 1. “Hey，how are you?” “I’m fine, how are you?” “How is the weather?” “Terrific! Nice day for a walk isn't it?” 2.“That's hilarious（欢闹的，滑稽的）,” Henry chuckled（轻笑）. 3. “I told you already,” I said, glaring. 过多使用对话，没有情节推进 逻辑混乱，搭配不合理 重复使用“说”，不精炼 改为：“I told you already,” I glared at him. 真题感悟(2025新高考I卷读后续写第二段)   With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. Heart pounding, I knocked on his door. When he opened it, his eyes cold, he crossed his arms defensively. "I'm sorry," I _________________ (真诚的道歉), "I should have seen how much Toby meant to you." Then I held out the box of biscuits, my throat tight with emotion. For a tense moment, he studied me and __________________(如释重负地说), “Come in.” As soon as I stepped through the door, I saw Toby wagging its tail at me as if sensing the shift. As we sat down with the biscuits, my brother's eyebrows gradually relaxed and I felt the tension melt away, replaced by the warmth of reconciliation. That afternoon, we ___________________________________________(聊了很多,也谈到了以前美好的时光). This small step towards reconciliation made me realize that family bonds were too precious to break over misunderstandings. apologized sincerely sighed with a relief chatted a lot, and talked about the old good days Continuation writing Bob was a criminal, and Jimmy was the policeman. Jimmy turned up as they agreed twenty years earlier, but he decided to fulfill his duty and have Bob arrested. Read the note and find out what the surprise ending was. Read for ending Supposing the story did not end here, what would happen next? Please write it down according to the two sentences.(within 150 words) “Silky” Bob shook his head in disbelief.____________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ A few minutes later, Jimmy appeared.______________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ Thank you! $