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基础
必练
主题01人与社会—旅游与体验
。1
(24-25九年级上·贵州贵阳六盘水市·期中)
旅行可以开阔眼界,帮助我们获得课本上学不到的知识。请根据思维导图,以李华的名义写一封邮件,对
即将来中国旅行的英国朋友Eic提几点建议。
prepare something you need during the journey
Things to Do Before Travelling
know about the customs and culture
pay attention to your safety
要求:
1.参考思维导图,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(校名、姓名和地名等):
4.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Eric,
Yours,
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主题02人与自我一生活与学习
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(24-25九年级上·贵州遵义市新蒲新·期中)
时光如梭,转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活,你是否觉得自己改变了许多?请根
据以下提示内容,以"Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,谈一谈自从上初中后,
你在哪些方面发生了变化。
What are the changes?
Some Changes in My Life
What do you think of them?
写作要求:
1.短文须包含导图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
3.作文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
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阅读是学习英语的重要途径。请你结合下面的图示信息,以“How Reading Improves My English"为题,
用英语写一篇短文,向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
improve my
make my
spoken English
writing easier
Reading
develop my
thinking ability
要求:
1.须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥:
2.80词左右,开头己给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
How Reading Improves My English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
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(24-25九年级上·贵州铜仁市印江·期中)
"文明在行动,满意在印江(Civilization in action,.satisfaction in Yinjiang)”。全县申创省级文明县城之际,
我愿尽一份绵薄之力,学校团委号召大家做到“四个文明”:
文明在口中
不大声说话,不乱吐口痰,不说脏话,不吸烟。
文明在手上
不乱扔垃圾,见到垃圾要捡起,要植树种草,不攀摘花枝,不破坏公物
不闯红灯,过马路要走斑马线,不在街上踢球,走路或骑车上学,乘公
文明在脚下
交车不插队,不践踏草坪。
文明在心中
牢记规则,遵守规则,做一名文明的中学生。
请你根据上表信息提示,以“How to Be a Civilized Student'”为题写一篇英语演讲稿,号召全体同学立刻
行动起来,共建文明城的市。
参考词汇:civilization(n)文明,say nude words说粗话,public things公物,jump the queue插队
写作要求:
1.演讲稿必须包括以上四条要点,每条至少写两点;
2.条例清晰,行文流畅,书写规范,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Civilized Student
Good morning,everyone!
There is a saying that is"civilization in action,satisfaction in Yinjiang"
Thanks for listening!
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主题03人与社会一历史、社会与文化
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(24-25九年级上·贵州长顺县·期中)
古语说“民以食为天”,在中国人日常的饮食中,筷子是非常重要的,每一顿饭都会使用筷子。假如
你是王丽,你的澳大利亚朋友Jae想了解中国的筷子,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封80词左右的邮件
向Jane介绍筷子。
内容包括:1.有3000多年的历史,代表着中国人的智慧;
2.长度:22-24厘米;
3.材料:过去使用木头、竹子、象牙和玉石,现在使用塑料、金属、木头和竹子:
4.影响:亚洲大部分地区都使用筷子,筷子是世界上最流行的进食方式之一。
参考词汇:Chinese chopsticks中国筷子,jade玉石,centimeter厘米,plastic塑料,metal金属,wisdom智慧
Dear Jane.
I am glad to hear from you again.
Yours,
Wang Li
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主题04人与社会社会服务
。6…
(24-25九年级上·贵州贵阳市期中)
假如你是育才中学的魏华,前段时间你校组织开展了主题为“热爱劳动,珍惜粮食”的
社会实践活动。请结合以下图文提示,用英语给你的笔友Bn写一封电子邮件,介绍本次活动并分享
你的收获及感悟。
When:September 27
How:take the school bus
Where:Sunshine Farm
What you have learned:
.help to carry and move rice;
How
u felt
。tired but happy
●…
写作要求
1.邮件须包含图文中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2.不能出现考生个人真实信息。
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主题04人与自然—自然生态;
环境保护
。7.
(24-25九年级上·贵州铜仁市沿河·期中)
为了鼓励更多人亲近大自然、走进大自然,贵州青少年英文网站举办了主题为“Get Closer to Nature”
的征文比赛。假如你是李明,你准备投稿参加此次比赛,内容包括:1阐述走进大自然的好处(字少两点):
2介绍一次你走进大自然的难忘经历及感受;3.呼吁同学们亲近大自然、爱护大自然。
要求:1.文章需包含所给内容信息。2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Get Closer to Nature
The advantages of it
Your experience
Call on more people to do it.
进阶
提升
主题01人与自我一生活与学习
·8…
(24-25九年级上·贵州长顺县·期中)
时光如梭,我们走进初三,想必每位同学都学有所获,都取得了一些进步。请同学们回忆一下初中生
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活,结合下面的思维导图以“My Changes”为题,简要叙述一下自己的变化。
要求:
1.应包含所有的要点,语言流畅。
2.围绕提示要点可适当增加内容,使文章内容更丰富。写一篇不少于80词的短文。
In the past:
Now:
self confident
Shy,quiet
d6spor本
Poor
outgoing and
Englsh,
active
bored
。9…
(24-25九年级上·贵州黔南州·期中)
随着中国的不断发展,世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。汉语作为我们的母语,我们更应该学好它。假如你
是李华,请你以“y Chinese Learning”为题,结合所给的思维导图,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,为同
学们学好汉语提一些建议。
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Why is it important to learn Chinese?
your learning experiences
My Chinese Learning
How do you learn Chinese?
your learning feelings
What's your advice on Chinese learning?
写作要求:
1短文内容积极向上,须包含思维导图里的所有信息,可适当拓展;
2文中不能出现真实的人名或校名。
My Chinese Learning
主题02人与社会一人际沟通
。10…
(24-25九年级上·贵州贵阳一中学等学校联考·期中)
请以Andy的名义写封信邀请Daniel来参加生日聚会,并告知怎么走。
要点如下:
1)在Daniel家附近乘地铁到出口A处出来;
2)沿着北大街往前走,在第二个红绿灯向右转;
3)然后朝银行直走,就会看到一座桥,过桥再向左转;
4)走过超市,在街道角落处就是我家,你不会错过的;
5)我将为你准备大量的食物和饮料,我正盼望着很快见到你。
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Dear Daniel.
I'm going to have a birthday party this Saturday.I hope you can come to my party.
主题03人与自我—学校,学校生活,个人感授
。11.
(24-25九年级上·贵州兴仁市三校联考·期中)
假设你是李明,来自英国的Simon是你的朋友,他最近给你发了一封电子邮件,询问你的个人情况,
请根据以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件。
内容如下:
1.你的爱好和特长:
2.你的日常生活习惯(至少两条):
3.你的主要上学方式以及原因;
4.你最喜欢的节日及喜欢的理由。
要求如下:
1.包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2.不少于70词(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
提示词:hobby爱好be good at擅长festival节日
Dear Simon,
I'm happy to receive your letter.Let me tell you something about myself.
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专题 09 书面表达
主题01 人与社会——旅游与体验
·1·
(24-25九年级上·贵州贵阳六盘水市·期中)
旅行可以开阔眼界,帮助我们获得课本上学不到的知识。请根据思维导图,以李华的名义写一封邮件,对即将来中国旅行的英国朋友 Eric提几点建议。
Things to Do Before Travelling
prepare something you need during the journey
know about the customs and culture
pay attention to your safety
要求:
1. 参考思维导图,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(校名、姓名和地名等);
4. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Eric,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
In order to have a wonderful trip, I’d like to provide you with some suggestions before travelling in China.
Firstly, you’d better prepare something you need during the journey before you set off. Secondly, as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”, you’re supposed to learn about the local customs, such as eating habits, traffic rules and greeting ways. What’s more, keep an eye on your safety. It’s best to get along well with others and be polite to ask for help. Chinese people are friendly, so there is no need to be worried.
In the end, I hope you can enjoy yourself when travelling in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作主旨;
第二步,介绍来中国旅行前要做的准备;
第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①set off 出发
②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
③such as 例如
④get along well with 与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①It’s best to get along well with others and be polite to ask for help. (it固定句型)
②I hope you can enjoy yourself when travelling in China. (宾语从句)
主题02人与自我——生活与学习
·2·
(24-25九年级上·贵州遵义市新蒲新·期中)
时光如梭,转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活,你是否觉得自己改变了许多?请根据以下提示内容,以“Some Changes in My Life” 为题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,谈一谈自从上初中后,你在哪些方面发生了变化。
Some Changes in My Life
What are the changes?
What do you think of them?
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含导图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 作文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
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【答案】例文
Some Changes in My Life
Over the past two years since I started junior high school, I have noticed quite a few changes in my life. One of the most significant changes is in my studies. The workload has increased, and I have had to become more disciplined and organized to manage my time effectively. I now spend more time studying and less time on leisure activities.
Another change is in my social life. I have made new friends and become more independent in making decisions. I also see a change in my personal interests. I’ve discovered a passion for sports and reading, which has helped me develop a more balanced personality.
Overall, I think these changes are positive and necessary for my growth. I am grateful for the experiences I’ve had and look forward to the continued transformation as I move forward in my educational journey.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考试应注意要求中的内容,充实细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,回首过去两年初中生活的变化;
第二步,从学业、社交生活、个人兴趣等角度阐述具体的变化;
第三步,反思自己的成长过程。
[亮点词汇]
①significant重大的
②disciplined遵守纪律的
③organized有组织的
④balanced平衡的
⑤look forward to期待
⑥transformation变化
[高分句型]
① Over the past two years since I started junior high school, I have noticed quite a few changes in my life. (时间状语从句)
②I’ve discovered a passion for sports and reading, which has helped me develop a more balanced personality. (非限制性定语从句)
·3·
(24-25九年级上·贵州贵阳遵义市·期中)
阅读是学习英语的重要途径。请你结合下面的图示信息,以“How Reading Improves My English”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
要求:
1. 须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
How Reading Improves My English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.
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【答案】例文
How Reading Improves My English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning. Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English.
In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏题干中“阅读如何改善我的英语”的提示信息并适当发挥,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,表明阅读在英语学习中的作用;
第二步,结合图示信息,详细介绍阅读是如何帮助自己改善英语的;
第三步,总结阅读的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在某方面起重要作用
②in a word总而言之
③what’s more另外
[高分句型]
①Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. (that引导的宾语从句)
②What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. (what引导的主语从句)
·4·
(24-25九年级上·贵州铜仁市印江·期中)
“文明在行动,满意在印江(Civilization in action, satisfaction in Yinjiang)”。全县申创省级文明县城之际,我愿尽一份绵薄之力,学校团委号召大家做到“四个文明”:
文明在口中
不大声说话,不乱吐口痰,不说脏话,不吸烟。
文明在手上
不乱扔垃圾,见到垃圾要捡起,要植树种草,不攀摘花枝,不破坏公物。
文明在脚下
不闯红灯,过马路要走斑马线,不在街上踢球,走路或骑车上学,乘公 交车不插队,不践踏草坪。
文明在心中
牢记规则,遵守规则,做一名文明的中学生。
请你根据上表信息提示,以“How to Be a Civilized Student”为题写一篇英语演讲稿,号召全体同学立刻行动起来,共建文明城的市。
参考词汇: civilization (n) 文明,say nude words 说粗话, public things 公物, jump the queue 插队
写作要求:
1. 演讲稿必须包括以上四条要点,每条至少写两点;
2. 条例清晰,行文流畅,书写规范,不少于80词;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How to Be a Civilized Student
Good morning, everyone!
There is a saying that is “civilization in action, satisfaction in Yinjiang”. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
How to Be a Civilized StudentGood morning, everyone!
There is a saying that is “civilization in action, satisfaction in Yinjiang”. In order to make our city more beautiful, we should try our best to be civilized students. How to be a civilized student? Here are four ways that I will give you.
First of all, we shouldn’t spit anywhere in public. It’s wrong to speak loudly and say rude words in public. We students mustn’t smoke anywhere. Second, we shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. When we see rubbish on the ground, it’s good to pick it up . We should plant more trees and grass to make the environment greener. Don’t pick flowers or walk on grass. We mustn’t damage the public things. What’s more, don’t forget to go on the cross walk when crossing the road. We shouldn’t jump the queue when we take buses. We had better walk or ride bikes to school. It’s dangerous to play football on the street. Last but not least, it’s necessary for us to remember the rules. Everyone should obey the rules to be a civilized student.
In a word, we should try our best to make Yinjiang be a more civilized city. If so, we will have a better life.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给的开头,引出话题;
第二步,根据表格信息提示,从“文明在口中、文明在手上、文明在脚下以及文明在心中”这四个方面介绍如何做一个文明的学生;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
②in public当众
③here and there在各处
④forget to do sth.忘记做某事
⑤in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
Here are four ways that I will give you. (that引导的定语从句)
主题03 人与社会——历史、社会与文化
·5·
(24-25九年级上·贵州长顺县·期中)
古语说 “民以食为天”,在中国人日常的饮食中,筷子是非常重要的,每一顿饭都会使用筷子。假如你是王丽,你的澳大利亚朋友Jane想了解中国的筷子,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封80词左右的邮件向Jane介绍筷子。
内容包括: 1. 有3000多年的历史,代表着中国人的智慧;
2. 长度:22-24厘米;
3. 材料: 过去使用木头、竹子、象牙和玉石,现在使用塑料、金属、木头和竹子;
4. 影响: 亚洲大部分地区都使用筷子,筷子是世界上最流行的进食方式之一。
参考词汇: Chinese chopsticks中国筷子,jade玉石,centimeter厘米,plastic塑料,metal金属,wisdom 智慧
Dear Jane,
I am glad to hear from you again. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Li
【答案】例文
Dear Jane,
I am glad to hear from you again. I know that you show a great interest in Chinese chopsticks. I will tell you something about Chinese chopsticks.
Chinese chopsticks are very important in China. Chinese use them during each meal. Chopsticks have a history of over 3,000 years in China. They are usually 22 to 24 centimeters long. In the past, people made chopsticks with wood, bamboo, ivory and jade. Now, plastic and metal are also used to make chopsticks. Chopsticks play an important role in Chinese food culture. And also, they are the symbol of wisdom of Chinese people.
Chopsticks are also popular in other places of Asia. For example, people also eat with chopsticks in Japan. Now using chopsticks has become one of the most popular ways of eating in the world.
I hope you can come to China one day and try delicious Chinese food with chopsticks!
Yours,
Wang Li
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一封邮件。
② 时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,讲述过去的事情时用“一般过去时”。
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯,逻辑清晰,无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接给出的开头,点明接下来要介绍筷子;
第二步,介绍筷子的历史,形状,材质及其他使用筷子的国家;
第三步,总结,并期待Jane来中国用筷子品尝美食。
[亮点词汇]
①show a great interest in对……表示极大的兴趣
②have a history of有……的历史
③play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色;在……中起重要作用
④the symbol of……的象征
⑤For example例如
[高分句型]
①Now using chopsticks has become one of the most popular ways of eating in the world. (动名词作主语)
②I hope you can come to China one day and try delicious Chinese food with chopsticks! (省略that的宾语从句)
主题04 人与社会——社会服务
·6·
(24-25九年级上·贵州贵阳市·期中)
假如你是育才中学的魏华,前段时间你校组织开展了主题为“热爱劳动,珍惜粮食”的
社会实践活动。请结合以下图文提示,用英语给你的笔友Ben写一封电子邮件,介绍本次活动并分享你的收获及感悟。
写作要求
1. 邮件须包含图文中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2. 不能出现考生个人真实信息。
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【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
On September 27th, we took the school bus to Sunshine Farm for a social practice activity. We learned to harvest rice there. And then we helped to carry and move rice. Finally, we learned how to store food.
Through the activity, we know that we should not waste food. At the same time, we should be thankful to others and cooperage with others. Above all, we should love our work.
Although we were tired, we were happy. If we have the chance next time, we will take part in such activities again.
Yours,
Wei Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍本次活动并分享你的收获及感悟,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍本次活动的时间、地点、交通方式和具体活动;
第二步,介绍你的收获;
第三步,介绍你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②be thankful to对……感激
③above all最重要的是
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Through the activity, we know that we should not waste food. (宾语从句)
②Although we were tired, we were happy. (让步状语从句)
③If we have the chance next time, we will take part in such activities again. (条件状语从句)
主题04 人与自然——自然生态;环境保护
·7·
(24-25九年级上·贵州铜仁市沿河·期中)
为了鼓励更多人亲近大自然、走进大自然,贵州青少年英文网站举办了主题为 “Get Closer to Nature” 的征文比赛。假如你是李明,你准备投稿参加此次比赛,内容包括:1.阐述走进大自然的好处 (字少两点);2.介绍一次你走进大自然的难忘经历及感受;3.呼吁同学们亲近大自然、爱护大自然。
要求:1.文章需包含所给内容信息。2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】One possible version:
As we know, the nature is very important to all living things, including we human beings. We can get food, fruit and medicine from the nature. Also, the nature provides us with fresh air and clean water. So we must get closer to the nature and protect it.
However, some people sometimes do bad things to our nature. Once, I took a walk in the park near my home. The rubbish was here and there. It smelled terrible. I felt sorry about it. The next day, I asked some of my good friends to clean the park. After a day’s work, the park was clean and beautiful. We felt tired but very happy.
From then on, more and more people join us to keep the park clean. More and more people realize the importance of the nature. Let’s call on more people to protect our nature. Let’s get closer to the nature together!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当增添细节,使得文章内容更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述走进大自然的好处;
第二步,介绍一次你走进大自然的难忘经历及感受;
第三步,呼吁大家亲近自然、走进自然。
[亮点词汇]
① provide sb. with sth.提供给某人某物
②call on呼吁
③get close to亲近
④from then on从那时起
[高分句型]
Let’s call on more people to protect our nature. (祈使句)
主题01人与自我——生活与学习
·8·
(24-25九年级上·贵州长顺县·期中)
时光如梭,我们走进初三,想必每位同学都学有所获,都取得了一些进步。请同学们回忆一下初中生活,结合下面的思维导图以“My Changes”为题,简要叙述一下自己的变化。
要求:
1.应包含所有的要点,语言流畅。
2.围绕提示要点可适当增加内容,使文章内容更丰富。写一篇不少于80词的短文。
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【答案】
例文
My Changes
Great changes have happened to me in the past two years.
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to be shy and quiet. But now I’m very self-confident and often do sports in my free time. Second, I used to be poor at English. But with the help of my English teacher, I’ve made great progress in English and I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing and more active than I used to be. I used to be bored and afraid of speaking in public. But now I can give a speech in front of many people. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:包含所有写作要点,适当增加内容,过去和现在要有对比以突出自己的改变。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明自己这两年发生了巨大变化;
第二步,根据要点提示,具体阐述自己的变化,注意不要遗漏。从“性格、英语成绩、运动”等几个方面突出自己的改变;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress in 在……取得巨大进步
②used to be过去常常是……的
③be afraid of doing sth.害怕做某事
[高分句型]
①But with the help of my English teacher, I’ve made great progress in English and I often get good scores on my English exams. (含有and的并列句)
·9·
(24-25九年级上·贵州黔南州·期中)
随着中国的不断发展,世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。汉语作为我们的母语,我们更应该学好它。假如你是李华,请你以“My Chinese Learning”为题,结合所给的思维导图,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,为同学们学好汉语提一些建议。
写作要求:
1.短文内容积极向上,须包含思维导图里的所有信息,可适当拓展;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名或校名。
My Chinese Learning
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【答案】例文
My Chinese Learning
With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. As native speakers, it’s our duty to learn Chinese well. It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.
Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in primary school. At first, I used to be weak in it, and I felt stressed out. My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books. From then on, reading played an important role in my life. I often went to the library which was near my home. I made much more progress in Chinese.
I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well. Also, it’s necessary to practice writing as often as we can. Only in this way can we become good Chinese learners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求以“My Chinese Learning”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍为什么学中文很重要;
第二步,介绍自己是怎么学中文的;
第三步,给出学习汉语的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more popular 越来越流行
②At first 首先
③play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
④made much more progress 取得更大进步
[高分句型]
①Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in primary school. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well.(省略that的宾语从句)
③Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner.(倒装句)
主题02人与社会——人际沟通
·10·
(24-25九年级上·贵州贵阳一中学等学校联考·期中)
请以Andy的名义写封信邀请Daniel来参加生日聚会,并告知怎么走。
要点如下:
1)在Daniel家附近乘地铁到出口A处出来;
2)沿着北大街往前走,在第二个红绿灯向右转;
3)然后朝银行直走,就会看到一座桥,过桥再向左转;
4)走过超市,在街道角落处就是我家,你不会错过的;
5)我将为你准备大量的食物和饮料,我正盼望着很快见到你。
Dear Daniel,
I’m going to have a birthday party this Saturday. I hope you can come to my party.
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【答案】例文
Dear Daniel,
I’m going to have a birthday party this Saturday. I hope you can come to my party. You can take the underground and get out at Exit A. Walk along North street, and turn right at the second traffic lights. Then walk to the bank, and you will see a bridge. Cross the bridge and turn left. Walk past the supermarket, my home is at the corner of the street. You won’t miss it. I will prepare plenty of food and drinks for you. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Andy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应主要不要遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信目的;
第二步,按照要点提示,详细介绍路线;
第三步,表示期盼见面。
[亮点词汇]
①walk along 沿着……走
②look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
Walk along North street, and turn right at the second traffic lights. (and连接的并列句)
主题03 人与自我——学校,学校生活,个人感受
·11·
(24-25九年级上·贵州兴仁市三校联考·期中)
假设你是李明,来自英国的Simon是你的朋友,他最近给你发了一封电子邮件,询问你的个人情况,请根据以下提示,给他回一封电子邮件。
内容如下:
1. 你的爱好和特长;
2. 你的日常生活习惯(至少两条);
3. 你的主要上学方式以及原因;
4. 你最喜欢的节日及喜欢的理由。
要求如下:
1. 包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2. 不少于70词(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
提示词:hobby 爱好 be good at 擅长 festival 节日
Dear Simon,
I’m happy to receive your letter. Let me tell you something about myself.
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Can you tell me more about you? I wish to get your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Simon,
I’m happy to receive your letter. Let me tell you something about myself.
I like music very much and I want to join a music club. I can play the guitar. I am also good at playing the piano. On school days, I usually get up at eight o’clock. Then I go to school at eight thirty. After school, I do my homework first and then read some books before going to bed. I often walk to school because it’s not far. My favorite holiday is New Year. It is a very important festival in Chinese culture. Everyone returns home to have a reunion dinner.
Can you tell me more about you? I wish to get your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,准备介绍自己;
第二步,具体介绍作者的爱好、生活习惯、上学方式、喜欢的节日等;
第三步,书写结语,期待对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do想要做某事
②be good at doing擅长做某事
③get up起床
[高分句型]
①I often walk to school because it’s not far. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Everyone returns home to have a reunion dinner. (不定式作目的状语)
主题04 人与自然——环境保护
·12·
(24-25九年级上·贵州铜仁市石阡·期中)
为了倡导环境保护,你校English Club将以“Going Green Starts with Small Things”为主题,组织全校英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你根据以下所给提示,用英语写一篇短文,呼吁大家节约能源,保护环境。
注意:1. 短文须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名;
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);4. 不得抄袭试卷原文。
To protect our environment
Reduce pollution
on foot, …
Save energy
use air conditioners less, …
Reuse things
plastic bags, …
参考词汇:honor n. 荣幸
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to make a speech here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Let’s act now to protect our environment!
【答案】例文
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to make a speech here. Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference to reduce pollution and waste.
First, you’d better ride a bike or walk to school, because it’s a green way which doesn’t pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. You should turn off the light when going out. Turning off the tap when you brush your teeth can save a lot of water. We should use air conditioners less. What’s more, don’t use plastic bags when you go shopping. Plastic is harmful to the environment.
Let’s act now to protect our environment!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、具体阐述写作内容,从减少污染、节约能源和再利用这三个方面介绍如何保护环境;
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference起作用;有影响
②turn off关掉
③what’s more另外
④is harmful to…对……有害
[高分句型]
First, you’d better ride a bike or walk to school, because it’s a green way which doesn’t pollute the air.(which引导的定语从句)
·13·
(23-24九年级上·贵州黔西南州兴仁市·期中)
节约资源,保护环境,争当环保小卫士,要从生活中的点点滴滴做起,如出门即关灯,不使用塑料袋,乘坐公共交通工具等,这样我们的城市才能变得越来越美丽,不是吗?请根据下面的提示词,写一篇题为“How to Be a Greener Person”的短文,词数大约90个。
提示词:turn off, take a bus, cloth bags, change bad habits。
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【答案】例文
To be a greener person, we must start with the little things in our daily lives. There are a few simple actions that we can take to contribute to it.
Firstly, we should always remember to turn off the lights before leaving a room. By doing so, we not only save on our electricity bill but also reduce our carbon footprint. Secondly, we can opt for public transportation instead of driving our own cars. Taking a bus or train can significantly reduce air pollution and traffic congestion. In addition, we should avoid using plastic bags and choose cloth bags instead. By using cloth bags, we reduce the demand for plastic and help to protect our environment.
In conclusion, becoming a greener person requires us to be mindful of our actions. Let us all strive to be environmental guardians and make our city a more beautiful place to live in.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”,在介绍环保方式的时候加入适当的连接词,使文章条理清晰,重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。强调个人环保的重要性,引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“关灯、塑料袋的使用、出行方式”三个方面介绍自己环保的措施;
第三步, 书写结语。号召读者争做环保先锋。
[亮点词汇]
① contribute to sth. 对某事产生贡献
② reduce 减少
③ protect environment 保护环境
④ require sb. to do sth. 需要某人做某事
[高分句型]
① By doing so, we not only save on our electricity bill but also reduce our carbon footprint. (使用by doing作方式状语)
② Taking a bus or train can significantly reduce air pollution and traffic congestion. (使用动名词短语作主语)
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