专题08 书面表达（期中真题汇编，辽宁专用）九年级英语上学期

专题08 书面表达 主题01 人与社会——交流 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市铁西区·期中 书面表达 1．假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Mary下周六要来你家做客一天。请用英语给Mary写一封电子邮件，内容包括： （1）表示欢迎； （2）活动安排（至少两条）； （3）表达期待。 注意： （1）词数为80—100；开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to know that you will come to my home next Saturday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui Passage 2 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市沈北新区·期中 2．假设你是李辉，十一月中旬你的英国笔友 Justin要作为交换生来中国学习生活，他写信向你倾诉关于语言方面的忧虑。请你给他写一封关于如何学好汉语的建议信。 内容包括：  1、写信原因；2、具体建议；3、表达期待。 要求：1、词数80~100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数： 2、以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、作文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。 Dear Justin, Thank you for your trust and I really understand you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui Passage 3 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市第七中学·期中 3．假如你是李华，你们学校英语校刊举办“Great Changes around Me”为主题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇文章进行投稿，内容包括： (1)过去什么样； (2)现在什么样； (3)你的感受。 注意： (1)字数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 人与社会——教育 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市浑南区·期中 4．习主席在谈到青少年体质时说，要文明其精神，野蛮其体魄。中考体考旨在促进学生体育锻炼，提高身体素质，建立健康意识，培养健全人格。作为初三学生，你已经经历了两年多的体育锻炼。现在学校校报英语栏目向大家发起征文，内容是在体育锻炼中的拼搏故事。请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文投稿。 要点：(1)体育锻炼的意义；(2)体育锻炼的过程；(3)关于体育锻炼的感悟。 注意：(1)词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称 Exercise is something common but important. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市光明初级中学·期中 6．我校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1，267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。 listening and speaking 42%: —watching English movies, going to the English corner, listening to English radio programme… reading and writing 29%: —reading English novels and magazines, keeping English diaries… the hands-on project 22%: —making English videos, making English posters… others 7%: —doing English exercises , reciting new words and phrases… 假如你是我校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用三段话写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 简要说明图表内容； 2. 从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，并结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。 注意： (1) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2) 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 参考词汇：arouse interest激发兴趣  enrich experience丰富经历  promote competence 提升能力 Students’ Favourite Kinds of English Homework A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题03 人与社会——文化 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省丹东市东港市·期中 5．假如你是李辉。最近，你校英语俱乐部正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语文章，为本次活动投稿。 要点如下： (1) 你最喜欢的传统节日的名称、时间等； (2) 该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式 (食物、活动等)； (3) 你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。 注意： (1) 词数为80左右； (2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 My Favorite Chinese Festival ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题04 人与社会——问题 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市第四十三中学·期中 7．假设你是李辉。你的好朋友Mike最近由于沉迷手机游戏导致学习成绩下滑、缺乏锻炼导致身体素质下降，而且跟父母闹矛盾产生了厌学的情绪， 刚刚给你写了一封求助信，请你给他写一封回信给他一些好的建议帮助他解决问题。 要点如下： 1. 感谢他的信任； 2. 给他解决问题的建议（至少三条）； 3. 表达祝愿与期盼。 注意： 1. 词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, I got your letter just now.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui Passage 2 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市苏家屯区五校·期中 8．作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。 提示： 1、表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常…… 2、建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少四条缓解考试压力的具体建议。 要求： 1、观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥； 2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3、词数：80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 How to Deal with the Exam Stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市大东区·期中 9．同学们正处在紧张的学习阶段, 为了身心健康, 如何合理安排时间、适度放松尤为重要。请你以”Study hard and play hard”为题写一篇短文, 参加学校的英语周活动。 内容要点如下： (1) 说明娱乐与学习并重的理由; (2) 你是如何安排课余时间的; (3) 你对初中阶段生活的期许。 注意： (1) 词数 80—100, 开头和结尾已写好, 不计入总词数; (2) 可以适当增加细节, 使行文连贯。 Study hard and play hard Study hard and play hard is an old proverb (谚语) , but it still makes sense. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题05 人与社会——感恩 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市南昌初级中学·期中 10．亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。 内容包括： 1.你对这位老师的印象； 2.你感谢他（她）的原因； 3.你对他（她）的祝福。 注意： 1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当举例或拓展； 3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。 It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题08 书面表达 主题01 人与社会——交流 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市铁西区·期中 书面表达 1．假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Mary下周六要来你家做客一天。请用英语给Mary写一封电子邮件，内容包括： （1）表示欢迎； （2）活动安排（至少两条）； （3）表达期待。 注意： （1）词数为80—100；开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to know that you will come to my home next Saturday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】One possible version: Dear Mary, I’m glad to know that you will come to my home next Saturday. Welcome to my home for a day of fun and cultural exchange! I plan to give you a quick tour of my home, showing you around the garden and the living room where we can relax. Then we’ll make dumplings together with my family. Dumplings are the most popular food in China. After lunch, I will introduce you to Chinese painting to help you learn more about Chinese culture. You can try to paint some pictures yourself. In the evening, we will enjoy the night view of the river near my home. There are also many kinds of snacks along the river. What do you think of my plan? I’m looking forward to your coming. We will have a great time! Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示欢迎； 第二步，具体阐述下周六的活动安排； 第三步，最后表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ① show sb around带领某人参观 ② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③ look forward to期待 [高分句型] I plan to give you a quick tour of my home, showing you around the garden and the living room where we can relax.（现在分词作状语，定语从句） Passage 2 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市沈北新区·期中 2．假设你是李辉，十一月中旬你的英国笔友 Justin要作为交换生来中国学习生活，他写信向你倾诉关于语言方面的忧虑。请你给他写一封关于如何学好汉语的建议信。 内容包括：  1、写信原因；2、具体建议；3、表达期待。 要求：1、词数80~100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数： 2、以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、作文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。 Dear Justin, Thank you for your trust and I really understand you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文： Dear Justin, Thank you for your trust and I really understand you. It’s normal for you to feel worried. However, your problem is common among us language learners. Here are some suggestions for you. First, the best way to learn a language is to use it. You should try to speak with your friends or teachers in Chinese at school. Second, you can learn more about Chinese culture, which will help you to understand the language better. Third, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. It’s important to build up your confidence. The more you practice, the fewer mistakes you will make. I’m looking forward to seeing you in China. I believe you will enjoy your stay here. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写信原因； 第二步，给出具体的建议； 第三步，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①make mistakes犯错误 ②confidence自信 ③be afraid of害怕 ④build up建立 [高分句型] Second,you can learn more about Chinese culture, which will help you to understand the language better.（which引导的定语从句） Passage 3 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市第七中学·期中 3．假如你是李华，你们学校英语校刊举办“Great Changes around Me”为主题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇文章进行投稿，内容包括： (1)过去什么样； (2)现在什么样； (3)你的感受。 注意： (1)字数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The area where I live used to be quite underdeveloped. There were only a few small shops and the roads were narrow. Public transportation was inconvenient, making it difficult to travel. However, things have changed dramatically. Now, there are modern shopping malls, wide and smooth roads, and an efficient public transportation system. The environment has also improved with more green spaces and parks. I feel very lucky to witness these changes. They have made life more convenient and enjoyable, and I am proud of the progress my community has made. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍过去过去是什么样子； 第二步，介绍现在是什么样子； 第三步，最后表达你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① used to be曾经是 ② public transportation公共交通 ③ be proud of为……自豪 [高分句型] The area where I live used to be quite underdeveloped. （定语从句） 主题02 人与社会——教育 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市浑南区·期中 4．习主席在谈到青少年体质时说，要文明其精神，野蛮其体魄。中考体考旨在促进学生体育锻炼，提高身体素质，建立健康意识，培养健全人格。作为初三学生，你已经经历了两年多的体育锻炼。现在学校校报英语栏目向大家发起征文，内容是在体育锻炼中的拼搏故事。请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文投稿。 要点：(1)体育锻炼的意义；(2)体育锻炼的过程；(3)关于体育锻炼的感悟。 注意：(1)词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称 Exercise is something common but important. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Exercise is something common but important. Not only can exercise build up our body but also it can help us form a good living habit. Besides, it is a good way to relax ourselves in our free time. As a middle school student, I achieved a satisfactory result in the physical education test for more than two years’ exercise. In order to make full of time, I chose to get up early and then went to school. In the cold winter, I have ever wanted to give up and stay in bed. But I finally persuaded myself to insist on running every morning. Now I feel proud of myself. Just as a saying goes “Rome was not built in a day”, your hard-working will be rewarded one day. If you keep exercise, you’ll have a strong body. I hope everyone can get away from illness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍体育锻炼的意义以及你在体育锻炼中的拼搏故事，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍体育锻炼的意义； 第二步，介绍体育锻炼的过程； 第三步，介绍关于体育锻炼的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①in our free time在我们的空闲时间 ②give up放弃 ③insist on坚持 ④get away from远离 [高分句型] ①Not only can exercise build up our body but also it can help us form a good living habit. (倒装句) ②If you keep exercise, you’ll have a strong body. (条件状语从句) Passage 2 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市光明初级中学·期中 6．我校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1，267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。 listening and speaking 42%: —watching English movies, going to the English corner, listening to English radio programme… reading and writing 29%: —reading English novels and magazines, keeping English diaries… the hands-on project 22%: —making English videos, making English posters… others 7%: —doing English exercises , reciting new words and phrases… 假如你是我校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用三段话写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 简要说明图表内容； 2. 从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，并结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。 注意： (1) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2) 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 参考词汇：arouse interest激发兴趣  enrich experience丰富经历  promote competence 提升能力 Students’ Favourite Kinds of English Homework A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Students’ Favourite Kinds of English Homework A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. 42% of the students like listening and speaking best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing. The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22%, and 7% choose other kinds of homework. As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learned with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ago, we were asked to make an English poster about the Dragon Boat Festival. Then I collected lots of information on the festival. Finally, not only did I finish the task perfectly, but also got a deeper understanding of our colorful culture. In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my experience in learning. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍统计结果； 第二步，根据题干中思维导图等要点，选出自己最喜欢的作业类型，并结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处； 第三步，点评这种作业带给自己的收获，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of很多 ②in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learned with real life in an interesting way.（原因状语从句） ②In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my experience in learning.（定语从句） 主题03 人与社会——文化 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省丹东市东港市·期中 5．假如你是李辉。最近，你校英语俱乐部正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语文章，为本次活动投稿。 要点如下： (1) 你最喜欢的传统节日的名称、时间等； (2) 该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式 (食物、活动等)； (3) 你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。 注意： (1) 词数为80左右； (2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 My Favorite Chinese Festival ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Chinese Festival  As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.   It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival show and stay up late, because we hope to have a new start in the next year.   The Spring Festival can make us feel love and happiness and know the importance of home and family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作内容要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，介绍突出重点，合理作答。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明观点。借“中国有许多传统佳节”引出重点介绍内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从饮食、活动多个方面充分介绍春节特点； 第三步，书写结语。升华主题，春节不仅让我们感受到爱和幸福，还让我们感受到家和家人的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①traditional festivals传统节日 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③stay up late熬夜 [高分句型] ①It is a time for family members to get together. (it句型) ②We also watch the Spring Festival show and stay up late, because we hope to have a new start in the next year. (because引导的原因状语从句) 主题04 人与社会——问题 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市第四十三中学·期中 7．假设你是李辉。你的好朋友Mike最近由于沉迷手机游戏导致学习成绩下滑、缺乏锻炼导致身体素质下降，而且跟父母闹矛盾产生了厌学的情绪， 刚刚给你写了一封求助信，请你给他写一封回信给他一些好的建议帮助他解决问题。 要点如下： 1. 感谢他的信任； 2. 给他解决问题的建议（至少三条）； 3. 表达祝愿与期盼。 注意： 1. 词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, I got your letter just now.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I got your letter just now. Thank you for trusting me with your problems. I’m really sorry to hear that you’re facing such difficulties. Here are some suggestions that might help you. First, try to limit your screen time and set specific goals for your study. This will help you focus better and improve your grades. Second, take regular breaks to take part in physical activities like running or playing a sport you enjoy. This will help improve your physical health. Third, communicate with your parents. Try to understand their perspective and express your feelings calmly. I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Looking forward to hearing about your progress soon.   Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时； ③提示：文章围绕Mike的问题展开，分别提出了解决学习成绩、身体健康和与父母关系问题的建议，并给予祝愿和期盼。   [写作步骤]   第一步：感谢信任，并表示对情况的理解与关心；   第二步：具体提供三条建议； 第三步：表达希望建议有用以及对他情况好转的期盼。   [亮点词汇]   ①limit your screen time控制屏幕时间   ②take part in physical activities参加体育活动   ③resolve misunderstandings消除误解 [高分句型]   ①First, try to limit your screen time and set specific goals for your study. （祈使句） ②I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.（宾语从句） Passage 2 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市苏家屯区五校·期中 8．作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。 提示： 1、表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常…… 2、建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少四条缓解考试压力的具体建议。 要求： 1、观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥； 2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3、词数：80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 How to Deal with the Exam Stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Deal with the Exam Stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us are so worried about exams that it’s hard to fall asleep before them. When we pay much attention to the exam, the test results won’t be good. Parents and teachers will blame them, they will also lose confidence. If we have proper stress, we can work harder, but if we have too much pressure, it may have a bad effect on our study. We should learn to release pressure. First of all, we should review carefully and make full preparation before the exam. Second, we shouldn’t stay up late to review for the exam. Third, after reviewing for a period of time, we should also relax ourselves appropriately. In addition, if we do well in the exam, we will give ourselves appropriate rewards. So I hope everyone can deal with the exam stress properly and get good grades. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出考试压力的表现，提出自己的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，多用情态动词should提出建议，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 Passage 3 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市大东区·期中 9．同学们正处在紧张的学习阶段, 为了身心健康, 如何合理安排时间、适度放松尤为重要。请你以”Study hard and play hard”为题写一篇短文, 参加学校的英语周活动。 内容要点如下： (1) 说明娱乐与学习并重的理由; (2) 你是如何安排课余时间的; (3) 你对初中阶段生活的期许。 注意： (1) 词数 80—100, 开头和结尾已写好, 不计入总词数; (2) 可以适当增加细节, 使行文连贯。 Study hard and play hard Study hard and play hard is an old proverb (谚语) , but it still makes sense. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Study hard and play hard Study hard and play hard is an old proverb, but it still makes sense. It is important for our physical and mental health to arrange our time properly and relax moderately. Firstly, it is essential to strike a balance between study and entertainment. Too much focus on studying can lead to mental exhaustion, while too much fun can be detrimental to academic performance. To achieve this balance, I will spend some time on sports or hobbies such as playing basketball or reading after finishing my homework and studying. In junior high school, I look forward to making more friends and exploring new fields of knowledge. I hope to participate in various activities organized by the school to enrich my school life. In conclusion, we can make our lives more fulfilling and enjoyable. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作内容和要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示所给出的三条内容要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】。 第一步，引出主题。合理安排时间，适度放松，对我们的身心健康非常重要。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。写出娱乐与学习并重的理由，如何安排课余时间，以及对初中阶段生活的期许。 第三步，书写结语。表示通过以上的安排可以使我们的生活更加充实和愉快。 【亮点词汇】①make sense有道理 ②physical and mental health 身心健康 ③look forward to期待 ④various activities各种活动 【高分句型】①It is important for our physical and mental health to arrange our time properly and relax moderately.（“it is＋adj＋for sb to do sth”句型） ②To achieve this balance, I will spend some time on sports or hobbies such as playing basketball or reading after finishing my homework and studying. （spend time on sth在某事上花费时间） ③I look forward to making more friends and exploring new fields of knowledge.（look forward to doing sth期待做某事） 主题05 人与社会——感恩 Passage 1 24-25九年级上·辽宁省沈阳市南昌初级中学·期中 10．亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。 内容包括： 1.你对这位老师的印象； 2.你感谢他（她）的原因； 3.你对他（她）的祝福。 注意： 1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当举例或拓展； 3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。 It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 16 / 16 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $