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课 名: 让TA“高兴”起来
——读后续写人物描写微技能
学 科: 英语
年 级: 高一
教材版本: 2019年外研版
让TA“高兴”起来
——读后续写人物描写微技能
View and say
grinning from ear to ear
Do you know how to describe one’s joy in situations below?
eyes sparkling with delight
going wild with great joy
giving jumps in the air
tears of joy welling up in eyes
the air filled with laughter
How to describe one’s joy?
2 aspects
4 key words
1 sentence pattern
jump
tremble
smile
eyes
Action description
动作描写
Expression description
神态描写
inanimate subject
无灵主语
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Learn and understand
jump
jump/run/dance in happiness 欢快地跳跃/奔跑/起舞
give a jump in the air 蹦蹦跶跶
tremble
hands trembling with delight 因喜悦而双手颤抖
a trembling voice full of joy 颤抖的声音中饱含欣喜
Action description
Apply and practice
小试牛刀
又高兴又激动,我蹦蹦跶跶地进了宠物店。
Delighted and thrilled, I gave jumps in the air and skipped into the pet shop.
听到这个好消息,他跳了起来,在院子里快乐地奔跑着。
Hearing the good news, he jumped up and ran in happiness around the yard.
当刘老师打开盒子的时候,她的双手因欣喜而颤抖起来。
Miss Liu’s hands were trembling with delight as she opened the box.
“天啊!我总算找到了你!” 她用颤抖的声音高兴地叫道。
“Gosh! I finally found you!” she cried with a trembling voice full of joy.
Try completing the sentences below.
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Learn and understand
smile
eyes
a broad smile spreading across one’s face 脸上绽开灿烂的笑容
one’s face lighting up with a bright smile 脸上露出灿烂的微笑
tears of joy welling up in one’s eyes 喜极而泣
one’s eyes sparkling with happiness 高兴得双眸闪闪发光
Expression description
Apply and practice
小试牛刀
女孩开心地点点头,脸上绽开灿烂的笑容。
The girl nodded cheerfully, with a broad smile spreading across her face.
汤姆站在大门边,脸上露出灿烂的笑容。
Tom stood by the gate, his face lighting up with a bright smile.
一家人喜极而泣,紧紧地拥抱在一起。
Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the families hugged tightly together.
迈克迫不及待地打开礼物盒,高兴得双眸闪闪发光。
Mike couldn’t wait to open the gift box, eyes sparkling with happiness.
Try completing the sentences below.
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___________________________________
__________________________________________
_____________________________
How to make the language vivid?
1 sentence pattern:
inanimate subject 无灵主语
Inanimate subject: helpful for vividness
妈妈开心极了。我的心中也涌起喜悦。
A wild pleasure took hold of mom, and a wave of delight also welled up in me.
查理听到这个令人满意的结果后,一种喜悦之情涌上心头。
After Charlie learned this satisfactory result, a sense of joy flooded over him.
a wild
a wave of
a sense of
joy
delight
pleasure
happiness
seize
overcome
flood over
come over
sweep over
well up in
take hold of
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sb.
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Transfer and create
请按照提示用一句话续写,描写奶奶看到苹果时的高兴之情。
Bob ran to his grandmother joyfully and offered her all the sweet apples.
When she saw the apples, _________________________________________
her hands were trembling with delight. (双手因欣喜而颤抖)
tears of happiness welled up in her eyes. (高兴到热泪盈眶)
her eyes were sparkling with great joy. (双眸闪烁着喜悦的光芒)
a strong wave of happiness swept over her. (无灵主语:极度开心)
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Summary
How to describe one’s joy?
jump
jump/run/dance in happiness
give a jump in the air
tremble
hands trembling with delight
a trembling voice full of joy
Action
Expression
smile
a broad smile spreads across the face
one’s face lights up with a big smile
eyes
tears of joy well up in one’s eyes
eyes sparkle with happiness
2 aspects
4 key words
1 sentence pattern:
Inanimate subject
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